Hi, M4M from your queue!
Beginning (til 01:07:586 (1))
It's not very consistent; spacing is the same for 1/4 and 1/2 but at 00:08:771 but changed at 00:27:719 even though the rhythm is relatively the same.
You should make the spacing consistent through the opening part, imo so that it isn't the same as 1/2 flows, it was quite confusing when I first played it.
00:24:955 (1,2,3) - I feel this needs more beats. Perhaps add some 1/2 singles instead of long sliders.
I think there's work to do with the beat placements, for example patterns like 00:14:692 (7,8) - could be like this
(or just curve it slightly so it looks nicer)
Rest
01:13:902 (1,2) - Here the first slider is fast and the second slow, you could do something like this
for imo more engaging and natural pattern because your cursor is already moving fast because of the first slider.
01:20:218 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same here etc, there's plenty of places you can apply this.
There's almost no slider to slider jumps on the harder jump parts (ex. 04:06:400 (1)) and most sliders
are very close to eachother, consider adding some slider to slider jumps to some parts.
01:59:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - there is not much spacing difference with the
2 tick sliders and the 3 tick sliders. 02:01:665 (6,7) - here there's big space between and here 02:02:454 (8,1) - almost
no space at all even though they are equally close on timeline. 02:02:849 (1,2) - has one tick inbetween
but is still very close to the first slider. I really suggest you differentiate these sliders with proper spacing for easier
readability.
03:14:295 (2,3,4,1,2) - ^
This is completely subjective, but I think the slider aesthetics are severely lacking, the placement seems pretty random at times.
Example: 03:02:848 (1,2,3) - looks pretty shoddy in my eyes. My suggestion is to do something like this:
Note that the objects are about the same distance apart and imo looks better. Note that plenty of places where you can apply this kind of theme.
02:33:638 (3,4,1) - ^
But yeah, those were the things that caught my eye. Hopefully you'll get it ranked since it's definitely more interesting than the TV sizes and vocaloid maps you see everyday.
Sorry if the text is messy or hard to understand
, I haven't modded anything in years. Don't hesitate to ask me if there was something unclear.