Eri Sasaki - Last Diary · forum

Mir

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Mir 2017-01-11T17:32:50+00:00

Hi, from queue.~

[

General]

Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version?
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

[]

[

Farewell]

00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat.
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo.
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them.
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.

So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.

[

Celsius' Hard]

00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance.
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section.
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped.
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple?
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket.
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png

[

Shogun's Normal]

I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.

00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you.
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider?
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket?
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) -
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want.

Lefia's diff is fine.

Good luck.~

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-11T23:26:33+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ General]
Audio file is 128kbps. Don't you have a higher 192kbps version? i dont know what this is . ill ask people for help with this one
On all diffs you can end the spinner at 01:31:807 (1) - on the white tick before it (still silenced) since it sounds slightly better imo.

[]

[ Farewell]
00:00:876 (1,2,3) - Visual spacing looks slightly off here. If you want to fix it move 3 up a bit. Also, the blanket with 1,2 is off: http://i.imgur.com/4foFt0D.png
00:05:348 (6) - So your new combos don't really make sense to me. I'd appreciate an explanation (which in itself me asking for an explanation kinda proves the point lol) of what they're following because atm it seems inconsistent. Check them all and maybe make a clearer theme that makes more sense to the player right off the bat. some nc's are there to introduce new music like 00:11:869 (1,1,1) - (transition in to faster music), while other nc's were my fault. mostly it was to introduce to new music or to emphasis specific places
00:12:242 (1,1) - I think stacking these would be better emphasis because the music is really sudden for these notes. That way you can force sudden movement. Also, your current placement could cause unfair misses due to how close 00:11:869 (1,1) - are. Yes, they're NC but it's not enough imo. hmm, i see what you mean. ill do change, but aesthetically speaking, this make it ugly imo. lets see what other modders (if i get others) see about this
00:18:205 (1) - This slider ends on SUCH a strong note it hurts. I think you should make it a 1/2 slider + circle or something, but please make 00:18:577 - clickable somehow. Same with 01:28:267 (1).
00:39:633 (1,3) - Stack.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - I kinda get it, but 00:45:969 (3,5) - get no emphasis because everything is stacked. Up to you though if you want to move them. following vocals here, 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) is same sound throughout
00:58:826 (1,2,3) - There's no triple in the song here, it's unnecessary to emphasize vocals too, just spacing is enough.
01:04:230 (3,4) - I don't really see a reason to stack these - nothing in the song to emphasize that stands out, and this just feels weird to play especially considering this whole jump section is flowy.hmm, the stack is here b/c of music. listen closely and you hear it. its also there to show the 'ending' of these jumps
01:16:341 (5,1) - Stack the 5 on the head of 1 at least so this doesn't look so weird. It plays kinda awkward too, the slight movement for this strong note kills emphasis.
01:20:254 (2,3,1) - Visual spacing. Stack 01:20:441 (3,1) - or something because this can be misread.if i were to put 3 on 1, it would create 2 things that i want to avoid. abnormal spacing, and it would mess the look of triangle. as for "it can be misread", i feel thats a good thing as this section of jumps are really diffrent than the other jump sections in this map
So generally I notice your click emphasis is lacking in places like I explained above, and you use a LOT of reverse sliders that just feel really repetitive and force too many flow changes when there isn't a need for one. Your emphasis also could use work.
Good luck.~

no reply = fixed

thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-12T14:10:45+00:00

-Latias- wrote:
hi Celsius

Celsius
00:44:851 (3) - unsnapped i think it's ok the vocal sound is on 1/6

Mir wrote:
[ Celsius' Hard]
00:02:366 (1,2) - If you intend to map the piano I don't really understand why 00:02:925 - is being skipped. You could add a circle here. It at least makes sense at 00:05:907 - because the piano gets drowned out by the rest of the ambiance. i think it sound not really noticeable at 100% speed like the one at the reverse slider
00:14:851 (2,3) - You skip the triple here but map it at 00:13:174 (2,3,4) - and pretty much everywhere else in this section. rhythm pattern here is like rhythm with triplet -> rhythm with no triplet -> rhythm with triplet to make sure the intensity is fair for hard diff imo
00:30:689 (1,2) - This is a pretty gutsy point, but I think is worth mentioning. I think this is poor rhythm choice. The piano is being skipped on the red at 00:31:248 - and the vocal starts here too. 00:31:435 - Isn't a particularly weak note either. Try this instead maybe?: http://i.imgur.com/7yaCZbX.png rhythm kinda feel weird there for me i don't want to focus on vocal or piano much here since the first thing that come from this rhythm is the sound of instrument on white tick so i want player to only focus on that suddenly switch to vocal halfway like that would just make thing pretty awkward there for me because vocal also start on the offbeat which sound pretty unnatural
00:34:975 - Intentionally skipping this vocal? The rest of this phrase was mapped so I don't see why it's skipped. yea , it's like a way to transition to the next rhythm which sound different , i think it better to let the player have time to prepare for the next rhythm that sound different
00:44:851 (3) - Shorten to blue tick? Why is it on a purple? vocal sound is 1/6
01:21:372 (1,3) - Possible blanket. ok
01:24:354 (1) - If this is following the vocal it should start on 01:24:167. 01:24:354 - Doesn't have a sound on it anyways either. Try http://i.imgur.com/rGSoCXo.png not following vocal , the sound on white tick is kinda a fade in sound so i think i map it like that

Good luck.~

thanks for the mods

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-12T18:49:53+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ Shogun's Normal]
I'm gonna be suggesting a lot of rhythm changes. You don't have to follow them exactly, but at least try them and see how you like them.
00:17:087 (2) - NC here I think, since it's much stronger than 00:16:714 (1). Same for cases like 00:23:049 (2) - but in the end, it's up to you. Fixed
00:24:726 (1,2) - Skips the vocal on the reds 00:25:658 - 00:26:031 - and since 00:26:217 (3,4,5) - is the same combo and follows vocals better this transition feels weird. I recommend maybe: http://i.imgur.com/gNmv5gu.png I don't too much want to map on the vocal.
00:31:248 - Skipped again? Try a circle here. Same at 00:33:484 - try making 00:33:298 (6) - a slider? ^
00:38:515 (5) - The strong held beat starts on this slider end and 00:39:074 (7) - skips the really noticeable drum. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/4ManxDo.png but those are some beats that are being poorly represented imo. It doesn't matter, I leave that like that.
00:40:565 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm also is kinda poor imo. You skip the long held note at 00:40:938 (4) - and the drum right in the middle of it. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/dsKt2go.png Fixed
00:52:677 (3,4) - Fix blanket? Fixed
00:57:894 (2,3) - This pause is a bit awkward especially when there's a sound at 00:58:267 - and the held vocal starts on 2's end. But it's fine this is not a very strong beat.
01:01:435 (4) - Skips the vocal at 01:01:621 - and the strongest sound is on this slider end. Try this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/noUwoUd.png Same deal as later in the kiai at 01:13:360 (4) - No thanks
01:19:509 (4) - Make this a slider maybe to catch that vocal? Still keep it stacked if you want. Fixed

Good luck.~

Thanks for modding!~

asadaf

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Graffin

131 posts

Joined June 2014

Graffin 2017-01-12T20:23:56+00:00

NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
00:01:994 (4,1) -
00:03:484 (1,2) -
00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) -
00:28:267 (3,4) -
00:30:503 (4,5) -
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these
nothing wrong, good diff

normal and easy are fine
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-12T23:40:33+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Farewell
all of these are blankets you should correct
00:01:994 (4,1) - its a fine blanket here
00:03:484 (1,2) -
00:18:577 (2,3) -
00:20:627 (4,1) -
00:25:844 (2,3) - this wasnt suppose to be blanket as it was suppose to be the same as 00:24:726 (4)
00:28:267 (3,4) - if i were to blanket these two together, it would make that entire section ugly
00:30:503 (4,5) - it is blanketed ?
and maaany more, work on your blankets throughout the rest of this map pls

00:31:807 (2,3,4) - this triple seems weird imo, like overmapped i disagree. there is a sound there for a triple
01:16:154 (4,5) - this also feels kinda overmapped since there's not actually any dominant sounds on that 5 its there to show end of jumps,along with the distance
01:31:807 (1) - end this spinner on the previous white elite beat want to be consistent with other diffs
if i had to point out every single blanket error here it would take ages, apart from that your rhythm placement is good, work on your aesthetics
decent mapset overall, gl on rank

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

aetwuns

138 posts

Joined July 2016

aetwuns 2017-01-13T04:50:28+00:00

Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis

Good luck with ranking

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-13T13:42:06+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Enjoy my really nit-picky mod

Shogun's Normal
00:11:869 (3,4,5) - space these further apart for emphasis Fixed

01:19:323 (3,4,1,2) - I would structure this section like this No thanks, it's sound good already

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for modding!

agf

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-13T23:48:33+00:00

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Farewell

00:32:273 (3) - Note doesn't sound right here since modders said a lot of this note, removed !

00:37:584 (1,2) - move these up and two up and to the right a few grid spaces so the distance between these 00:37:025 (2,1,2,1) are all equal like so hmm, i think spacing here is good, as there is clear indication of a new "section" or part of music

01:12:149 - i would add another note here to make it a stack, again for emphasis it would sound weird if this was the only triple of the map, plus i dont think it fits well here

Good luck with ranking

Thanks for the mod !

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-01-14T23:00:54+00:00

metadata q~!

Red - Currently incorrect

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Artist: 佐々木恵梨
Romanised Artist: Eri Sasaki
Title: Last Diary
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add "Recalling" to tags

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midori_wah

426 posts

Joined April 2015

midori_wah 2017-01-16T18:22:17+00:00

Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider.
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity.
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle.

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional.
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.)

[Shogun's Normal]
All good to go (according to an underleveled mapper).

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai.

Okay another done, more to go.

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-17T00:35:13+00:00

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Farewell]
00:34:230 (1,2,3) - The spacing here should be smaller compared to 00:33:112 (1,2,3) since it has a softer sound than the first set.
00:35:161 (1,2,3,1) - The spacing here is okay, but the part is the piano could have a smaller spacing, since the sound is still soft.
00:35:720 (1,2) - Increase the spacing for emphasis.
00:37:584 (1,2,1) - Spacing should be the same.
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of 5 on a stack, make it 3 on a stack and try to put the last two in as a jump connecting to the jump before the slider. 00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) all has the same sound
01:00:316 (1,2) - Flow is broken.
01:00:689 (2,3) - The flow is weird here and this makes it uncomfortable for the player to hit and move through the second slider.
01:03:671 (3,1) - The spacing emphasis is wrong since the sound really doesn't change in intensity. not meant to emphasis, just jumps. if i were to change the shape, it would make it harder to read
01:24:261 (1,1) - Maybe you should just make this one whole spinner, since undermapping this could make it easier instead of having to hit the circle. there a sound at 01:25:472 though
Okay another done, more to go.

no reply = fixed
thanks for the mod !

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-17T13:17:58+00:00

Graffin wrote:
NM from my queue

Celsius's hard
00:01:621 (3) - lower this a bit and put it around the previous 2 uh ok
00:38:702 (2,3) - blanket these looks fine tbh for me
nothing wrong, good diff

Smolboi wrote:
Hi from modreqs

Celsius' Hard

01:23:981 (4,1) - Replace the short slider with a single note and move the long slider two ticks back onto the red tick, also maybe make the long slider slower than usual for emphasis no i prefer my current rhythm since it express the feel of the vocal and fade in of the instrument on 01:24:354 (1) - better

Good luck with ranking

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Celsius's Hard]
00:02:925 - There's an unmapped sound here, unless this is intentional. this is intentional to fully emphasis the strong piano 00:03:112 (2) - at 100% speed
01:31:621 (6) - Maybe NC this. indicating the end of the song. (Just a suggestion.) i don't think it necessary to do that , it's the end of song now so nothing after that imo

Okay another done, more to go.

Thanks

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2017-01-19T13:07:48+00:00

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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer here
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer

shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read

lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c

gl

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-01-19T20:41:10+00:00

Lasse wrote:
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shogun
00:24:820 - up until here you tend to alternate 1 measure and 2 measure nc usage which seems a bit weird and then anlso add some single note combos. think consistent 2 measure would be nice Fixed
00:42:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - one of the most dense rhythms clicking/holding slider wise in the whole map in such a calm part? would be nice if you could reduce this a bit. maybe http://i.imgur.com/IVUTSfT.jpg ? // 00:54:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - too Fixed
00:50:068 (4,5) - could ovelap less to be easier to read Fixed

gl

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-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-20T01:12:53+00:00

Lasse wrote:
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all diffs besides highest don't have custom combo colors set

farewell
for future maps you should really try to utilize more of the playfield. you tend to got back towards the center of the screen all the time so if feels bit "compressed"
(also press ctrl-a and you will see how much of the grid you never used)
00:01:435 (2,3) - you do this quite often, having these sliders that totally break your movement, can work if you want to emphasize something special, but most of the time if doesn't. implies movement like http://i.imgur.com/yT6AdvJ.jpg and also (subjective) doesn't look very nice. when something like http://i.imgur.com/cUfm3xI.jpg would be a possible alternative // similar spots would be 00:07:584 (3) - for example
00:01:994 (4) - this has 2 distinct sounds, where the second stands out quite a bit, so it is noticeably different from 00:01:621 (3) - but you map both the same way. two circles would work really well here I think, just like you did on 00:04:975 (4,5) -
00:03:484 (1,2) - idk why the nc is there? consistency wise and following the hight pitched sounds, having it on 2 would make more sense as that is way stronger/starting new measure // if you change this, also 00:08:329 (5) -
00:05:907 (1) - musically this belongs with the sounds from before and the single note combo seems weird, I'd just not nc this
00:05:534 - you map these sounds all the time, so suddenly skipping it seems really strange
00:09:261 (3) - mapping this as a slider really kills the building up string sounds. could either map 00:08:888 (1,2) - as a slider instead or make all circles and go with some increasing spacing pattern
00:10:192 (5,6) - I don't think the stack works well here cause the second sound is much stronger but you give it no emphasis. 00:10:751 (1,2) - seems alright cause the sounds are pretty similar, though I think with how much they stand out, jumps would work better // 00:24:167 (2,3) - similar here and on a few other spots
00:11:776 (8,1,1) - - not quite sure how others see this,. but I think if you use patterns like this, decreasing stack leniency so they perfectly overlap but 1/2 stay normal helps reading this a bit (stack leniency 5) // 00:17:087 (1,1,2,1) -
00:13:360 (3) - would rather stack this with 2 so 00:13:546 (1) - gets more emphasis, which fits the song better
00:18:577 (2) - having such a strong sound distance snapped in this patterns seems really underemphasized :c also rhythm after it is kinda unfitting. how about trying something like http://i.imgur.com/r7kNVIG.jpg ?
00:27:708 - 00:28:826 - such strong vocals on a repeat? would be great if you managed to make them clickable
00:35:161 (1,2,3) - whistles on these would be great with how much they stand out
00:36:279 (2,3,1) - straight line (no snapping) and even spaving really puts way too low emphasis on 00:36:652 (1) - which transitions into a new part
00:38:143 - more important sounds mapped to reverse, this one is really weird cause the thing you made clickable is also weaker than the reverse
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - interesting idea actually
00:47:273 (4,5) - would ctrlg this rhythm cause emphasis on 00:47:459 - is more important
00:49:882 (1,2) - think normal is a bit too loud on those, try drum? or even soft+whistle cause it seems to be following vocals (you didn't map others that don't have vocal)
00:59:385 (1) - even if it follow vocal, it seems a bit too undermapped for how music builds up here. maybe try something like http://i.imgur.com/I1WG7Jw.jpg ?
well, your chorus is basivally mapped the same sv/spacing/rhythm wise as the 00:36:652 - part (much calmer) which doesn't really make sense. think higher sv and base spacing would fit better. also would make things like01:02:739 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - feels less sudden/more fitting
01:03:671 (3) - why is this even a jump? there's barely any sound on it
01:04:136 - having this not ignored would also be nicer herei don't see a place where it could be not ignored
01:04:789 (6) - interesting way to make a wave lol I see you need a very specific curve here to get it properly stacked, but why not do something like http://i.imgur.com/XbI9ZtQ.jpg instead then?
01:08:143 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - groups of 3 is a bit weird when the music emphasizes 01:08:143 (1,2) - 01:08:515 - 01:08:888 - 01:09:074 - => http://i.imgur.com/sG2r9ii.jpg would be nicer
01:09:447 - more cases of weird slider ephasis on reverses // 01:18:391 -
01:10:751 (3,1,2) - why this kind of spacing? 3-1 is so tiny then 2 is a huge jump despite string on both being pretty same? something like http://i.imgur.com/DXQ4GFI.jpg ?
01:12:242 (1) - what is that last node doing there? makes the wave really strange when you could just http://i.imgur.com/YmGJxl5.jpg (also stack with weird emphasis again here lol)
01:13:733 (2) - well I guess you just like these waves so whatever lol
01:15:410 - new pattern+combo should be here as that is way more emphasizes in the song than the next not
also 01:15:969 (3,4,5) - is really weird spacing wise. more spacing on 5 seems alright with the music, but such a difference just seems too much

most of these things are just examples and repeat way more often through the whole map
main issues to work on:
- clicking rhythm (like these slider reverses that are stronger than head)
- proper usage of stacks (sometimes you have them on weak sound, sometimes on strong)
- making the patterning of the map actually match what is going on in the music

gl

no reply = fixed
thanks for the big mod !

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2017-01-22T05:04:09+00:00

dark_assassin16 wrote:
Super Late Mod Here

[Lefia's Easy]
01:00:316 (3) - This should be NC'd since this is the start of the kiai. fixed

Okay another done, more to go.

Lasse wrote:
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lefia
1/2 sliders don't seem really fitting for how easy this difficulty is overall. it will be played mostly by people with no experience with the game at all :c will try to reduce it

Thanks for the mod~

Update

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Iceskulls

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Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-01-22T14:54:25+00:00

Lasse wrote:
celsius
00:44:851 (3) - yeah 1/6 works kinda with the vocal, but it's the only one in the whole map and there is some drum on the 1/4 it seems, so I think that would be nicer yea

gl

thanks

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Hishiro Chizuru

Hishiro Chizuru 2017-01-24T00:48:10+00:00

Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt.

Farewell

00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) -
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well)
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it)
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)

Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-24T01:24:22+00:00

[ amb1d3x ] wrote:
Saw on #modreq

First time modding (literally first mod) so you can take my word with a grain of salt. its okie, we all have to start from somewhere

Farewell
00:01:621 (3,4) - could use better flow the flow diffrence is to differentiaite 00:01:994 (4,5) from 00:01:621 (3) . since it has some new music
00:09:261 (2,3) - this space difference seems more appropriate here: 00:09:447 (3,4) - as the music shifts there 00:09:261 (2,3) is starting up in to a faster part of song
00:15:037 (5) - Just an aesthetics thing, the slider could be rotated clockwise a bit to look better flowing from 00:14:664 (4) - changed a bit
00:59:944 (3,1) - similar distance jumps at different speed feels weird, maybe place 01:00:316 (1) - much closer or on top of 00:59:944 (3) - (but then you'll have to change the succeeding patterns as well) 00:59:385 (1,2,3) the jumps here are to represent starting in to kiai time, and the distance from 01:00:316 (1) seems fine
00:39:261 (2,1) - Feels unexpected, as there is a longer wait but follows the same pattern as it was before distance represents 'new' part of music
00:51:931 (3,4) - blanket looks off (this actually happens in many places, however I could be losing it) not suppose to blanket here, as i'm just connecting the slider to the next part of the song
01:16:714 (1) - moving this on top of 01:16:341 (5) - makes it much easier to read (for me)way to big of a jump

Really nice maps and song, I couldn't really find problems in the other difficulties (I suck at low stars). Good luck on getting this ranked!

thanks !

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-01-27T09:33:38+00:00

hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?
really messy diff imo...

gl

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-01-28T01:44:20+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
hi

farewell
your comboing is really weird in this diff dude.. i have no clue of your reasoning here.i suck at nc's
00:01:621 (3,4) - you don't think that the spacing here is way too far for such a low beat, compared to 00:02:366 (1,2) - that you use the proper spacing.
00:03:484 (5) - consider a ctrl+g to make the transition easier
00:06:279 (8) - x:336 y:34 to make better emphasis to this high piano beat
00:14:292 (3) - pls stop using ds for such high volume sound, try and space it a bit
00:14:664 (4,5) - u don't want to map the missing beat between those 2 ? you can just add circle on top of 00:15:037 (5) -
00:17:087 (1,1) - remove ncs
00:18:950 (3,4,5) - sharp angle with large spacing for no reason dude00:18:950 (3,4) , i always map this part of the music like this, so i see no reason to not map that here. ill decrease spacing for 5 and 4, which also awnsers the mod below
00:19:509 (1) - and now short spacing for the downbeat..
00:20:254 (3) - same as above space this further
00:23:049 (1,1) - rremove ncs
00:27:335 (5) - stack
00:37:584 (1,1) - remove ncs
k i'll stop the nc comboing 'cause it's so weird in the whole map...
00:42:428 (1) - finish on slider reverse gives no emphasis ...
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - what are you even trying to follow here, and gameplay wise it doesn't play well that stack..the entire part of the music there is the same thing, so thats why its stacked like that
01:04:789 (6) - hey hey that shape can be polished pls, use only 2 enchors
01:14:292 (3) - missing hitsounds
01:16:714 (1) - stack?
01:31:621 (3) - more spacing?i think spacing is fine here since its the really quite end part of the song
really messy diff imo... im sorry

gl

thanks for the mod !

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-02-02T09:58:49+00:00

m4m

Easy :
- combo color?
- AR 3 is best for easy diff
- 00:03:857 (1) - move to 164,224 for at least make a symmetrical with 00:02:366 (2) - ? if u agree then fix spacing for rest
- 00:18:577 - finish
- 00:16:341 - whistle for piano
- 00:21:000 (4) - i think a circular flow will work better for smoother flow here try move to 428,176?
- 00:43:546 (2) - drum sampleset because there is drum sound
- 00:55:472 (2) - i prefer to remove this, its kinda weird to map here when the vocal is weak
- 00:59:757 (2) - i know you follow music but in easy diff you dont have to follow anything so i think you better remove this for give a little break for newbie
- 01:02:180 (3,1) - also the score from (3)'s tail doesnt cover for (1)'s tail but i still not recommended stack them in short time like this
- 01:08:143 (3,4) - having 3/2 gap for them might make newbie confuse especially (4) is circle (when they have to click it) so try this instead http://puu.sh/tKQbz/3305637564.jpg
- 01:26:776 (1) - easy diff needs 1 full measure for recovery after spinner so you have to remove this
- 01:27:894 - whistle for strong piano and guitar snare
- 01:30:689 (4,5) - 1/2 gap isnt allowed

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle?
- 00:03:484 - ^
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x?
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree.

Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-02-03T00:07:46+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m
Insane :
- 00:01:994 (4,5) - ctrl+g it so you can have a jump for catch 00:02:366 (1) -
- 00:03:484 (5,1) - fix the blanket i guess
- 00:06:466 (5) - rather than a 1/2 slider imo you can add 4 circles of 1/4 start from 00:06:466 - for stream instead
- 00:09:447 (2) - 243,132 instead for make jump in strong music 00:09:633 -
- 00:15:037 (5) - why spacing 1,09x here?
- 00:17:087 (1,2) - is stacked then 00:17:832 (1,1) - stack them as well for consistency?i dont want to stack since 00:18:205 (1) starts a new part of music, so thats why its not stack
- 00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - try use consistent spacing :C
- 00:21:559 (2) - same as above, move to 336,48
- 00:35:161 (1) - how about move to 496,112 for make same pattern with 00:35:534 (3,1) -
- 00:38:143 (7,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 00:41:310 (6) - nc for consistency
- 00:48:205 (2) - how about ctrl+g for make jump in next slider? emphasis the cymbal
- 01:06:093 (3) - same as above
- 00:57:335 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:06:466 (4,1) - swap nc for consistency
- 01:11:497 (1) - remove nc for consistency
- 01:16:528 - its weird to skip this drum pls keep map
- 01:17:087 (2) - same as 00:48:205 (2) -
- 01:22:304 (5) - nc for consistency
- 01:27:149 (2) - move to 288,224 for smoother flow
- 01:31:435 (2) - nazi move to 336,176 for better triangle shape

the map is still can improve more more and more. dont give up ><

good luck~

no reply=fixed
thanks for the mod !:D

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-03T00:30:05+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Normal :
- combo color?
- 00:02:180 - has strong sound so why not map it? using 1/2 slider starts from 00:01:994 -
- 00:04:975 (3) - move to 256,40. circular flow feels better
- 00:08:888 (2,3) - try follow 1 music only like u follow drum with 00:08:888 - 1/1 slider 00:09:447 - ? since i think drum is higher sound here and more clear to hear
- 00:10:379 - whistle for piano
- 00:12:615 (5) - finish / whistle for strong sound
- 00:15:782 (6,1) - swap nc
- 00:18:577 (3) - same with 00:12:615 (5) -
- 00:21:745 (6,1) - same as 00:15:782 (6,1) -
- 00:27:335 (6) - 00:28:826 (3) - 00:33:671 - any reason why finish here?
- 00:46:900 - finish for cymbal
- well the diff from rhythms and design is ok but the hitsound needs more work on it. you have to hitsound the drum as well because you follow it like 01:03:857 - 01:05:348 - etc

good luck~

All fixed! Thanks for modding~

Hereee

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-02-05T13:26:06+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Hard :
- 00:02:180 (4) - whistle? yea
- 00:03:484 - ^ same
- 00:18:577 (1) - just curious why no jump in this cymbal when you do all jumps when they have cymbal fixed
- 00:59:757 (1) - personally i think this slider is too fast because it changes 2x faster. try reduce a bit the sv change like use 1,0x? mmm ok i decreased a bit
- 01:02:366 (2) - personally i think the flow can be better here with rotate -15 degree. i agree

good luck~

all fixed

thanks xinely

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Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2017-02-08T16:32:28+00:00

Xinely wrote:
m4m

Easy :
- combo color?
- AR 3 is best for easy diff i'm trying to avoid overlap, but fixed
- 00:03:857 (1) - move to 164,224 for at least make a symmetrical with 00:02:366 (2) - ? if u agree then fix spacing for rest nope, i want to make it stack
- 00:18:577 - finish fixed
- 00:16:341 - whistle for piano fixed
- 00:21:000 (4) - i think a circular flow will work better for smoother flow here try move to 428,176? nice advice, thanks!
- 00:43:546 (2) - drum sampleset because there is drum sound fixed
- 00:55:472 (2) - i prefer to remove this, its kinda weird to map here when the vocal is weak keep it
- 00:59:757 (2) - i know you follow music but in easy diff you dont have to follow anything so i think you better remove this for give a little break for newbie okay, will remove it
- 01:02:180 (3,1) - also the score from (3)'s tail doesnt cover for (1)'s tail but i still not recommended stack them in short time like this fixed
- 01:08:143 (3,4) - having 3/2 gap for them might make newbie confuse especially (4) is circle (when they have to click it) so try this instead http://puu.sh/tKQbz/3305637564.jpg fixed
- 01:26:776 (1) - easy diff needs 1 full measure for recovery after spinner so you have to remove this fixed
- 01:27:894 - whistle for strong piano and guitar snare fixed
- 01:30:689 (4,5) - 1/2 gap isnt allowed fixed

Thanks for the mod!

update

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A r M i N

1,298 posts

Joined October 2014

A r M i N 2017-02-11T20:59:53+00:00

From my queue

[Farewell]

00:00:876 (1,2) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMhI/ec546000bf.jpg
00:03:857 (1) - ^
00:06:745 (8,1) - Spacing waaay too big
00:06:466 (5) - http://puu.sh/tYMpz/52412e1332.jpg like this
00:07:956 (4) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMss/0676f1c536.jpg
00:08:888 (6) - better flow http://puu.sh/tYMvx/0e12f906b9.jpg
00:10:751 (1,2) - CTRL+G
00:18:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns could be made much more interesting
00:35:347 (1) - remove NC
00:44:664 (1) - ^
00:43:546 (1) - ^
00:42:615 (6) - NC
00:51:559 (2) - NC
00:51:372 (1) - remove nc
01:03:298 (1,2) - swap NC
01:01:807 (5) - place NC
ETC you know always place NC on big white tick

[Hard]

01:06:838 (2) - that flow is.. meh

[Easy]

00:18:577 (1) - Blanket fix pls
00:26:217 (2) - ^
00:30:689 (1) - ^
00:38:143 (3) - ^
etc.. check your blankets pls

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-02-11T22:43:56+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
From my queue

[Farewell]
00:00:876 (1,2) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMhI/ec546000bf.jpg
00:03:857 (1) - ^
00:06:745 (8,1) - Spacing waaay too big
00:06:466 (5) - http://puu.sh/tYMpz/52412e1332.jpg like this
00:07:956 (4) - fix blanket http://puu.sh/tYMss/0676f1c536.jpg
00:08:888 (6) - better flow http://puu.sh/tYMvx/0e12f906b9.jpg
00:10:751 (1,2) - CTRL+G
00:18:205 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Patterns could be made much more interestinghmm, since theres not much new sounds here ill keep it like this. if another mod complains something about this ill change
00:35:347 (1) - remove NC
00:44:664 (1) - ^
00:43:546 (1) - ^
00:42:615 (6) - NC it is for me
00:51:559 (2) - NC
00:51:372 (1) - remove nc
01:03:298 (1,2) - swap NC
01:01:807 (5) - place NC
ETC you know always place NC on big white tick

no reply=fixed
thanks for the mod !:D

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2017-02-16T13:59:00+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
[Hard]

01:06:838 (2) - that flow is.. meh what do you mean ? i fixed the slider curve btw lol

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Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-02-17T12:40:31+00:00

Q

[Farewell]
00:03:484 (5,1) - too big DS, 00:03:484 (5) - ctrl G
00:06:466 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should use kickslider like 00:03:484 (5) - for consistency, this part is not too loud.
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - looks weird Hitsound, why you added in 00:11:683 - ?00:11:497 - ?
00:14:664 (4,1) - weird pattern.
00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - weird flow,
00:45:969 (3,5) - I know you want to emphasize hee, Then you can make jump.
01:03:298 (3,1,1) - looks hard to read.
01:06:466 (1,2,3,4) - Check DS
01:17:459 (3,1,2,1) - strange flow

GL

-Latias-

589 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

-Latias- 2017-02-17T23:56:14+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Farewell]
00:03:484 (5,1) - too big DS, 00:03:484 (5) - ctrl G
00:06:466 (5,6,7,8) - I think you should use kickslider like 00:03:484 (5) - for consistency, this part is not too loud. the stream is there to help get in to a part of the music which is more intense
00:11:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - looks weird Hitsound, why you added in 00:11:683 - ?00:11:497 - ?i dont understand ;w;
00:14:664 (4,1) - weird pattern.
00:18:950 (3,4,5,1) - weird flow,
00:45:969 (3,5) - I know you want to emphasize hee, Then you can make jump. want to focus on vocal for entire of this part
01:03:298 (3,1,1) - looks hard to read.i think the space from 01:03:577 to 01:03:764 is good enough to be able to read. also triangles
01:06:466 (1,2,3,4) - Check DS dont want to use ds for this part
01:17:459 (3,1,2,1) - strange flow i emphasis points like 01:17:832 (1,2) a lot in the map. so i figured to make them stand out by having that kind of flow

GL

no reply= fixed
thanks for the mod !

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-19T04:09:35+00:00

hey

easy
00:06:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nih pattern hanya main disitu-situ doang,walaupun rankable tapi agak aneh aja sih ~
00:56:776 (1) - flownya agak aneh imo jika kau pakai slider ini,knp nggk curve slider aja?
00:57:335 (1,3) - finish di slidertailnya (ada cymbal)
00:59:757 - suara drum keras tapi dikosongin lel (jadi aneh dengernya)
01:23:795 - gimana kalau 1/1 slider disini terus di 01:24:354 - baru spinner? biar agak masuk ke vocal

normal
00:38:143 (4,5) - too dense for non kiai time part imo
00:40:565 (3,4) - maybe 1/2 reverse slider instead? for make it easier
01:06:838 (1) - unnecessary finish
01:21:186 (1,2) - swap nc
01:28:267 (6) - i think whistle would emphatize the song better than finish
01:36:372 - why not make the green line on the red tick for make it neat?

gl!

Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-02-19T15:33:39+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hey

normal
00:38:143 (4,5) - too dense for non kiai time part imo It's clickable so it's fine, no? :p
00:40:565 (3,4) - maybe 1/2 reverse slider instead? for make it easier
01:06:838 (1) - unnecessary finish
01:21:186 (1,2) - swap nc
01:28:267 (6) - i think whistle would emphatize the song better than finish
01:36:372 - why not make the green line on the red tick for make it neat?

gl!

No reply= Fixed~
Thanks for modding!~

hi

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Izzywing

osu! Alumni

2,248 posts

Joined March 2016

Izzywing 2017-02-21T07:47:34+00:00

Already modded this lol, take a star (when I get one z-z)

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2017-02-22T09:38:28+00:00

A r M i N wrote:
From my queue

[Easy]

00:18:577 (1) - Blanket fix pls
00:26:217 (2) - ^
00:30:689 (1) - ^
00:38:143 (3) - ^
etc.. check your blankets pls

Okay rechecked

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hey

easy
00:06:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nih pattern hanya main disitu-situ doang,walaupun rankable tapi agak aneh aja sih ~ kalo aku suka aja lihatnya... tunggu saran lain aja
00:56:776 (1) - flownya agak aneh imo jika kau pakai slider ini,knp nggk curve slider aja? curve ya... fixed
00:57:335 (1,3) - finish di slidertailnya (ada cymbal) kayaknya nggak cocok deh...
00:59:757 - suara drum keras tapi dikosongin lel (jadi aneh dengernya) njer jadi bingung jadinya... mod kmrn nyuruh hapus, ahh bingung
01:23:795 - gimana kalau 1/1 slider disini terus di 01:24:354 - baru spinner? biar agak masuk ke vocal yah, aku ngikutin pianonya sih

gl!

Thanks for the mod!

update

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-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2017-02-22T16:22:34+00:00

[General]

Turn off Widescreen support on all diffs

[Farewell]

00:01:994 (4) - This jumps is not quite necessary as there's nothing special on this note, and it kinda hurts the flow from 00:01:621 (3) -
00:03:298 (4) - imo this overlap can be avoidable, although it's not kinda visible during gameplay, it appears strangely when 00:02:366 (1) - fades out
00:08:329 (5) - NC
00:09:447 (2) - stack with 00:08:888 (6) - slider end? The overlap is not quite neat
00:09:261 (1,3) - Swap NC
00:10:751 (1) - Remove NC
00:11:124 (1) - ^
00:11:310 (3) - NC
00:12:242 (1) - imo i think it can be unstacked and put elsewhere so 00:11:869 (1,1,1) - can be emphasized better
00:13:546 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:037 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:16:714 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The way of emphasizing 00:17:087 (1,1) - is fine, but you dampened the clap on 00:16:900 (2,3) - by stacking those notes, rendering an overemphasis on those finish which is quite weird, if you want to emphasize those finish without strangely weakening those claps, unstack 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -, while making 00:17:087 (1) - and 00:17:832 (1) - a larger jump will fit more, also, remove NC on 00:16:714 (1) -
00:18:205 (1) - I think that you can replace them with 2 notes, like in 00:17:459 (2,3) - , make sure the first note was stacked to 00:17:832 (1) - so it won't create readability issues regarding to 1/1 gap
00:18:205 (1,2) - Swap NC
00:19:509 (1,3) - Swap NC..... Usually NC were placed on SV changes and big white ticks (downbeat) and if you get the idea then i'lls stop here
00:22:677 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same problem here, regarding to the stacks
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmmm there's so many different sounds here why stack them all
00:54:354 (1) - Forcing to have a reverse slider while resetting the flow plays awkwardly, also, the reverse arrow is mapping to a finish so you might need to make it clickable, a rhythm like this will help better
:::
01:00:689 (2) - Again, the reverse arrow is mapping a stronger sound so it's better to have it clickable
01:02:180 (2) - ^
01:03:298 (3,1,1) - Although 01:03:484 (1) - does give emphasis, but it hurts the readability because it have 1/2 gap on 01:03:298 (3,1) - and 1/1 on 01:03:484 (1,1) - while using the same distance, to make it more readable, stacking 01:03:484 (1,1) - might help better, also, The NC spam on 01:03:857 (1) - is not quite necessary imo
01:12:056 (5,1) - Unstack for better emphasis on 01:12:242 (1) -
01:18:205 (1) - Reverse arrow.... I guess you get the idea so i won't repeat here
01:23:981 (2) - Not properly stacked
01:26:776 (1) - make the distance larger or stack with the previous note, for readability
01:28:267 (1) - ^
Overall, this map is quite far away from being qualified tbh, mainly due to those reasons
First, The distance is strangely small and inconsistent, especially on 00:12:615 - to 00:24:726 - , the distance on this part is too small for a stronger part in insane, it have almost the same distance as the quiet parts like 00:24:726 - 01:25:844 - , Which makes it kinda plain and did not fit the song well, also, there's few pattern which have a larger DS while there's nothing special on the song, such as 00:18:950 (3,4,5) - 00:33:112 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:230 (1,2,3) -.
Secondly, some of the object placement and rhythms gives the map lack of emphasis, i do mentioned some on the mod itself about those reverse arrow covering finish etc.... There's much more place to mention such as 00:15:782 (1) - 00:21:745 (3) - 00:36:652 (1) - , Which have finish/stronger sounds, but they're only given no or tiny emphasis as there's no flow reset or jump here, this might make the map pretty plain and boring

Okay now i know this is quite harsh so i'm gonna stop here

Good luck~

-Latias-

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-Latias- 2017-02-22T17:51:18+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:

[General]
Turn off Widescreen support on all diffs

[Farewell]
00:01:994 (4) - This jumps is not quite necessary as there's nothing special on this note, and it kinda hurts the flow from 00:01:621 (3) - 00:01:994 (4,5) - are transitioning in to new sounds and 00:02:366 (1) is the new sound which explains distrance from 00:02:180 (5)
00:03:298 (4) - imo this overlap can be avoidable, although it's not kinda visible during gameplay, it appears strangely when 00:02:366 (1) - fades out the overlap is good imo, since it creates the jumps the music supply's and makes it look good
00:08:329 (5) - NC want to emphasize 00:09:261 (1) and 00:08:329 (5) isnt really a new sound in 00:06:838 (1,2,3,4).
00:09:447 (2) - stack with 00:08:888 (6) - slider end? The overlap is not quite neat
00:09:261 (1,3) - Swap NC new sound starts at 00:09:261 (1)
00:10:751 (1) - Remove NC 00:10:751 (1) - transitions in to a new part of music
00:11:124 (1) - ^ start of stream. its a new part of music
00:11:310 (3) - NC why ? stream or new sound starts at 00:11:124 (1)
00:12:242 (1) - imo i think it can be unstacked and put elsewhere so 00:11:869 (1,1,1) - can be emphasized better imo i like what i have now since it already emphasises the 00:11:869 (1,1,1) by having the player not move at all. i also think that moving the points would make the map look worse
00:13:546 (1) - Remove NC 00:13:546 (1) is a new part of the music or goes in to a new part of the music
00:15:037 (5,1) - Swap NC want to emphasize this point more 00:15:782 (1) - since its going in to new music
00:16:714 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The way of emphasizing 00:17:087 (1,1) - is fine, but you dampened the clap on 00:16:900 (2,3) - by stacking those notes, rendering an overemphasis on those finish which is quite weird, if you want to emphasize those finish without strangely weakening those claps, unstack 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -, while making 00:17:087 (1) - and 00:17:832 (1) - a larger jump will fit more, also, remove NC on 00:16:714 (1) - i completely disagree with you on this point. the stacks are there since 00:16:714 (1,2) are basically the same sounds and so is 00:17:459 (2,3). the finishes are there b/c of the emphasis i put on them on points like 00:17:087 (1) - , 00:17:832 (1) . they are different from 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -. so you would want to emphasize those points . the removal of nc is also unnecessary since it goes in to a completely different part of music
00:18:205 (1) - I think that you can replace them with 2 notes, like in 00:17:459 (2,3) - , make sure the first note was stacked to 00:17:832 (1) - so it won't create readability issues regarding to 1/1 gap there is no real sound on 00:18:391 - to justify the extra circle you suggested. i think making 00:18:205 - clickable already is good enough
00:18:205 (1,2) - Swap NC nope, new part of music starts on 00:18:205 (1)
00:19:509 (1,3) - Swap NC..... Usually NC were placed on SV changes and big white ticks (downbeat) and if you get the idea then i'lls stop here the swap of nc isnt needed since 00:19:509 (1) - is the new downbeat and 00:20:254 (3) - is the same part of 00:19:509 (1)
00:22:677 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same problem here, regarding to the stackssame awnser as before
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmmm there's so many different sounds here why stack them all focus on vocals
00:54:354 (1) - Forcing to have a reverse slider while resetting the flow plays awkwardly, also, the reverse arrow is mapping to a finish so you might need to make it clickable, a rhythm like this will help better
:::

01:00:689 (2) - Again, the reverse arrow is mapping a stronger sound so it's better to have it clickable
01:02:180 (2) - ^
01:03:298 (3,1,1) - Although 01:03:484 (1) - does give emphasis, but it hurts the readability because it have 1/2 gap on 01:03:298 (3,1) - and 1/1 on 01:03:484 (1,1) - while using the same distance, to make it more readable, stacking 01:03:484 (1,1) - might help better, also, The NC spam on 01:03:857 (1) - is not quite necessary imo did something like that
01:12:056 (5,1) - Unstack for better emphasis on 01:12:242 (1) -
01:18:205 (1) - Reverse arrow.... I guess you get the idea so i won't repeat here
01:23:981 (2) - Not properly stacked
01:26:776 (1) - make the distance larger or stack with the previous note, for readability music is really low here. i dont want to increase the spacing more than what it is right now. i also dont want to stack since its not the same note
01:28:267 (1) - ^ ^
Overall, this map is quite far away from being qualified tbh, mainly due to those reasons
First, The distance is strangely small and inconsistent, especially on 00:12:615 - to 00:24:726 - , the distance on this part is too small for a stronger part in insane, it have almost the same distance as the quiet parts like 00:24:726 - 01:25:844 - , Which makes it kinda plain and did not fit the song wellthe parts that you did mention are fairly repetitive and not much can be mapped differently to better suite it. i did emphasis some points to show diffrence in the song. i feel you didn't quite listen to the music for this part as theres not much that can be done here. idk im noob mapper :^) , also, there's few pattern which have a larger DS while there's nothing special on the song, such as 00:18:950 (3,4,5) - 00:33:112 (1,2,3) - and 00:34:230 (1,2,3) -. 00:18:950 (3,4,5) - i always map 3 and 4 the same throughout the entire map which explains the distance, 5's distance is smaller as its not the same music as 00:18:950 (3,4).00:33:112 (1,2,3) and 00:34:230 (1,2,3) have the same reasoning as there is a spike in the music which creates those jumps.
Secondly, some of the object placement and rhythms gives the map lack of emphasis, i do mentioned some on the mod itself about those reverse arrow covering finish etc.... There's much more place to mention such as 00:15:782 (1) - 00:21:745 (3) - 00:36:652 (1) - , Which have finish/stronger sounds, but they're only given no or tiny emphasis as there's no flow reset or jump here, this might make the map pretty plain and boringi agree with most of the points stated here but 00:36:652 (1) - as i want it to be in a straight line with 00:36:279 (3,4) with same distance which it satisfy's. but to compensate i did increase the spacing to hit 00:37:025 (2)

Okay now i know this is quite harsh so i'm gonna stop here please be more harsh xd

Good luck~

no reply= fixed
thanks for the mod !

-Atri-

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-Atri- 2017-02-23T11:28:15+00:00

-Latias- wrote:
00:16:714 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The way of emphasizing 00:17:087 (1,1) - is fine, but you dampened the clap on 00:16:900 (2,3) - by stacking those notes, rendering an overemphasis on those finish which is quite weird, if you want to emphasize those finish without strangely weakening those claps, unstack 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -, while making 00:17:087 (1) - and 00:17:832 (1) - a larger jump will fit more, also, remove NC on 00:16:714 (1) - i completely disagree with you on this point. the stacks are there since 00:16:714 (1,2) are basically the same sounds and so is 00:17:459 (2,3). the finishes are there b/c of the emphasis i put on them on points like 00:17:087 (1) - , 00:17:832 (1) . they are different from 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -. so you would want to emphasize those points . the removal of nc is also unnecessary since it goes in to a completely different part of music About the NC, i am fine on that, but the violin changes is quite noticeable that doesn't fit with the stacks then, as 00:16:900 (2) - and 00:17:646 (3) - have different pitch then 00:16:714 (1) - and 00:17:459 (2) - , which makes it's not quite the "same sound" for me here
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmmm there's so many different sounds here why stack them all focus on vocals Focusing on vocal is fine, but in this case, which the singer have a long hold, it's better to give more varieties on other rhythm, otherwise it will be boring to play imo
01:26:776 (1) - make the distance larger or stack with the previous note, for readability music is really low here. i dont want to increase the spacing more than what it is right now. i also dont want to stack since its not the same note While the first explanation regarding on increasing distance it acceptable,however, the second explanation is fine in detail, but not in playablity, as this map is for players in about rank #50000 , they don't have enough skills is read the differences on rhythm, as the ds is similar though almost entire part, player will get used to the 1/2 distance and didn't know the 1/1 rhythm is coming, this is what i meant by "damaging the readability"
01:28:267 (1) - ^ ^ ^

I think this kind of explanation is understandable

-Latias-

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-Latias- 2017-03-01T23:33:31+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
-Latias- wrote:
00:16:714 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - The way of emphasizing 00:17:087 (1,1) - is fine, but you dampened the clap on 00:16:900 (2,3) - by stacking those notes, rendering an overemphasis on those finish which is quite weird, if you want to emphasize those finish without strangely weakening those claps, unstack 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -, while making 00:17:087 (1) - and 00:17:832 (1) - a larger jump will fit more, also, remove NC on 00:16:714 (1) - i completely disagree with you on this point. the stacks are there since 00:16:714 (1,2) are basically the same sounds and so is 00:17:459 (2,3). the finishes are there b/c of the emphasis i put on them on points like 00:17:087 (1) - , 00:17:832 (1) . they are different from 00:16:714 (1,2) - and 00:17:459 (2,3) -. so you would want to emphasize those points . the removal of nc is also unnecessary since it goes in to a completely different part of music About the NC, i am fine on that, but the violin changes is quite noticeable that doesn't fit with the stacks then, as 00:16:900 (2) - and 00:17:646 (3) - have different pitch then 00:16:714 (1) - and 00:17:459 (2) - , which makes it's not quite the "same sound" for me here the explanation still doesnt convince me to make change, sorry !
00:45:596 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmmmm there's so many different sounds here why stack them all focus on vocals Focusing on vocal is fine, but in this case, which the singer have a long hold, it's better to give more varieties on other rhythm, otherwise it will be boring to play imo if the singer has a long hold, which is prominent sound, why not stack them as the sound is repeating a lot?
01:26:776 (1) - make the distance larger or stack with the previous note, for readability music is really low here. i dont want to increase the spacing more than what it is right now. i also dont want to stack since its not the same note While the first explanation regarding on increasing distance it acceptable,however, the second explanation is fine in detail, but not in playablity, as this map is for players in about rank #50000 , they don't have enough skills is read the differences on rhythm, as the ds is similar though almost entire part, player will get used to the 1/2 distance and didn't know the 1/1 rhythm is coming, this is what i meant by "damaging the readability" stacking wouldn't work here since there is no real sound that repeats a lot. regarding the player rank, I've had people play the map around that rank (60k) they could read that section fine
01:28:267 (1) - ^ ^ ^same explantion as above
I think this kind of explanation is understandable

sorry for late reply ~

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