Hello there, I'm here for qualify check (LOL look at the time, I've been late for 2 months, I'm sorry)
Overall, everything are pretty good to go now, I will just point some of my opinion just in case
[MAXIMUM]
00:13:753 (13753|1,14079|1) - for this, I know you're follow vocal on here, but it's kinda weird to combine it with these cymbals sound 00:13:916 (13916|2,13916|0,13916|3,14242|3,14242|2,14242|0) -
00:23:698 (23698|1) - it should be on 3rd for 00:17:992 (17992|2,18155|2,18318|3,18318|1,18481|2) -
00:24:024 (24024|1) - it's better to remove the note on here, the they drum feeling would be easier to catch and recognize it
00:36:497 (36497|0,36660|0,36823|0) - this is just weird, it's fine but it's kinda weird to combine drum and the chiptune sound at the bg, i would recomended to remove the 1/4 and make the drum pattern more diversity
00:38:372 - remove a note on here for the conflict on 00:27:937 -
00:46:524 - you missed a note for drum here
00:38:372 (38372|1,63236|2,63725|0) - I think no sound here
01:05:274 (65274|3,65274|0,65356|2,65356|1,65437|3,65437|0) - hmm, these are drum, but not 01:05:519 (65519|2,65519|1) - , what do you think?
01:05:764 (65764|2,65927|1,66090|2,66253|3,66416|2,66579|1) - this is kinda eh ... I like the main sound and present by this:
http://puu.sh/v0agd/8cc339fe44.jpg 01:26:796 (86796|2,87122|2) - same as before
01:18:155 (78155|0,78155|3,78155|2) - suddenly 3 notes here for drum is kinda weird
01:21:090 - try to fill a short hold for vocal here instead for cymbal for conflict on 01:18:644 -
01:34:948 - hmmm, 1/6 to me
01:37:149 (97149|1) - sound like should be on 1/8 01:37:190 -
01:38:535 - on here, snap on 01:38:576 - 01:38:637 - 1/16 in my opinion
01:57:530 (117530|2) - random drum?
01:57:937 (117937|1) - same reason before
[leqek's EXHAUST]
00:41:144 - Should be jack like 00:40:818 (40818|1,40981|1) - this for consistent.
00:50:111 - Has a guitar sound, you can add a note in here like you did on 00:53:372 - here
01:35:030 - Why didn't you try to use 1/4 here? not using 1/4 is not intend I think because you also did on 01:33:562 (93562|1) - here
[Rem's ADVANCED]
00:21:253 - There's no meaning to be double.
(00:17:340 - ~ 00:18:318 -) (00:22:557 - 00:23:861 - ) They are definitely same part but different note usage? Is there any meaning of it?
00:55:329 (55329|0,55492|0) - A jack must be 00:55:166 - 00:55:329 - this spot. 00:49:948 (49948|3,50111|3) - Reference.
[NOVICE]
00:36:253 - You should better to try a stair pattern here, really fit with this part
01:13:753 - Must be double like you did double on all of drums
IRC2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: I'm here boi
2017-03-12 15:00 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is away: Kinda afk
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: there is something i want to ask
2017-03-12 15:01 Fresh Chicken: I just used 1/4 snapping for guitar but this is kinda faint snapping so hmm
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: Need to ask to someone who can judge this like u
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: i will mod maximum diff
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: which part
2017-03-12 15:02 Kuo Kyoka: np me the map again please
2017-03-12 15:02 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1168656 VALLEYSTONE feat. Shizaki Yuki - HEAVENLY SMILE [MAXIMUM]]
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: 00:47:340 - Here
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: Just this one, nothing others lol
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: you know rasis is gay right?
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will redl
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: sure I know
2017-03-12 15:03 Fresh Chicken: with Grace
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: grace gay
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: nostalgia
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: that heavenly map next to this map
2017-03-12 15:03 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/847857 Yooh - Seraphim]
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: oh shit I forgot that lol
2017-03-12 15:04 Fresh Chicken: Yeah I should revive that too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:340 - on here
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: what you need to know too
2017-03-12 15:04 Kuo Kyoka: you mean ghost notes?
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: 1/4 snap is fine or not, just want to know. Current QAT is avaliable to use arbitrary snapping but well, this part could be ghost note so I need your opinions
2017-03-12 15:05 Fresh Chicken: yap, just not sure
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: just pull, qat dont know anyway
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: jk
2017-03-12 15:05 Kuo Kyoka: wait
2017-03-12 15:06 Fresh Chicken: LOL
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:47:910 - on here have sound
2017-03-12 15:06 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:073 - 00:48:236 - dont have imo
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: mp3 is kinda hard to recognizes them well
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: Yeah but that is intended because a guitar sound finishes there and I mainly focused on guitar, not vocal, and revoved!
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: yap
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: No album
2017-03-12 15:07 Fresh Chicken: ;_;
2017-03-12 15:07 Kuo Kyoka: i heard the harp sounds from there, i mean like ocean sounds
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: but kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: well yeah, but soon sdvx album
2017-03-12 15:08 Fresh Chicken: hmm yap
2017-03-12 15:08 Kuo Kyoka: which remind me why there is no sdvx III album but have II album
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:49:704 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Fresh Chicken: yaa hehe
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:725 - no
2017-03-12 15:09 Kuo Kyoka: anyway, i deleted all notes to check mp3 easier so maybe i will make mistake here
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:48:889 - no
2017-03-12 15:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:193 -
2017-03-12 15:10 Fresh Chicken: deleted all
2017-03-12 15:11 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:356 - kinda no, you can notice the sound on here is delayed, on 1/8 i guess
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:519 - how about this?
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: hmm but I'd like to keep on here, cuz 1/8 is too awkward and arbitrary snapping is useable now
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:008 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Fresh Chicken: 00:50:519 - here is removed
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:334 -
2017-03-12 15:12 Kuo Kyoka: 00:51:660 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:52:639 - 00:52:802 - 00:53:128 -
2017-03-12 15:13 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:291 -
2017-03-12 15:14 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:617 - kinda hard to notice
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: -Alright removed all
2017-03-12 15:14 Fresh Chicken: hmm
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:53:943 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:595 -
2017-03-12 15:15 Kuo Kyoka: 00:54:921 -
2017-03-12 15:16 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:247 - 00:55:410 - 00:55:736 -
2017-03-12 15:17 Kuo Kyoka: 00:55:818 (55818|0,55899|1,55981|3,56062|2,56144|0,56144|3,56225|1,56307|0,56307|2,56307|3,56389|1,56470|2,56552|0,56633|1,56715|2) - the rest on here, i can hear 1/2 only! but not sure about myself too but 00:56:878 (56878|2,56959|3,57041|2,57122|3,57122|0,57204|1,57285|3,57285|2,57367|1,57448|0,57448|3,57530|2,57611|0,57611|1,57693|2) - 1/4 does exists
2017-03-12 15:18 Fresh Chicken: alright all remoived
2017-03-12 15:19 Kuo Kyoka: any more part you're unsure?
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: nah it's all
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: Thanks you so much
2017-03-12 15:19 Fresh Chicken: <3
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: ok i will be back for the mod later on
2017-03-12 15:20 Kuo Kyoka: np
Overall it's a nice map
Also guitar snaps is killng me
Call me back soon