RyoKazuka wrote:

can you try fixing the metadata provided by phaZ and CrystilonZ first?

IamKwaN wrote:

alright

Unicode Title: カラフル。(Anime ver.) or カラフル。（AnimeVer.）
Romanised Title: Colorful. (Anime ver.) or Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
Unicode Artist: 沢井美空
Romanised Artist: Miku Sawai
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた

References:
http://www.saenai.tv/music/
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/mikus ... /SRCL-8676
http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111194.jpg
http://www.mikuweb.com/
http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111116.jpg

good luck then!

HighTec wrote:

sory for being dumb and forgetting to put ur map on my checklist ):
ok here goes nothing

ez
00:32:337 (1) - would love to see this having another rythm as the song does make quite some change here and maybe a different rythm would be cool to emphasise thatI followed vocal, So I'll keep it.
01:00:964 (2) - im actually kinda thinking u can leave this out eventho the music is busy. the timing gap could also kinda emphasise the buildup so that the kiai would maybe have more of an impact becus rn it feels like nothing special ):Idk, I can't find any other good patterns

nm
i am rly scared about the ar on this diff, it feels way too high for the note density and difficulty this is currently. i'd advise to tune it down to maybe like 5,5 so it is a bit more linear with the rest of the mapset

advised to change unless intentionalstack error
00:31:945 (6) - would imo be more cool to have it a bit more rounded with the slider to it feels alittle more natural

yea

hd
00:08:219 (2) - 1/8?No. It looks overmapping
01:03:709 (1,2) - just make em straight, having them tilted by like almost nothing feels rly stupid lolzchanged other way
01:14:297 (5) - pls give this note its 4 ticks back,,, the song wants it tooNo
01:27:239 (1) - rip art like on the other diffs

is
again this AR man, ar9 is wayyy too high for the note density and actually makes the map more uncomfortable and worse readable, try something like 8,5 or 8,7! trust me, this plays better in the end not thinking about DT on this okI'm not DT user lol
consider upping the OD too since thats p low rn
00:06:846 (8,9) - meh u made the first stream a full stream so for consistency in the section why not make this fully circles too!No.
00:08:219 (4,5,6) - again 1/8?No
00:52:729 (1,2) - why is this mapped differently than before? i mean like the melody here was constantly the same so why change it up hereBecause I thought this part has changing rhythm
01:00:964 (1,1) - would swap SVs since that is what the song is asking for. i get the concept of "higher SV consistently is cooler and better to play" but sometimes ignoring general concepts can be fun too

cool set, couldnt find much
okbye

phaZ wrote:

[General]

1. 00:01:748 - 00:02:533 - 00:04:101 - 00:04:886 - 00:05:670 - dont understand why there are whistles here that are on nothing particular. at the same time you leave out whistles at 00:21:356 - 00:21:748 - 00:22:141 - on that synth which you actually already have hitsounded previously at 00:03:317 - 00:03:709 - ... -
2. 00:35:474 (1) - drum-finish 00:41:748 (1) - soft-finish. intentional o: ?
3. 01:01:748 - how about normal-finish here, gives pretty good wooosh-sound imo
4. 01:02:925 - (01:03:121 -) 01:04:494 - (01:04:690 - ) drum whistels here 01:15:474 - (01:15:670 - ) 01:17:043 - (01:17:239 - ) soft whistles here? you sure?
5. 01:06:062 - hitnormal should be on 01:06:454 -
6. 01:06:062 - also misses a whistle on sliderhead if compared with 01:18:611 -
7. 01:20:964 (1) - whistle on sliderhead?

1. Combo color 세팅을 추천합니다. 힛사같은 것도 그렇고 기본으로 주어지는 설정을 좋아하시는 것 같은데, 적어도 저는 현재 사용되는 BG와 기본 Combo color은 "전혀" 어울리지 않는다고 생각합니다.
2. Hitsounding에 대해서, soft hitnormal과 sampleset Normal만 사용해서 히트사운드를 넣으신 것 같은데 솔직히 이전에도 이런 방법으로 넣은 히트사운드를 꽤 많이 봤습니다. 그런데, 저는 이 방식을 전혀 이해할 수가 없습니다. 이런 식으로 넣었을 때 문제는 정말로 "기본 스킨을 사용해서 플레이 할 때"만 작용이 된다는 점인데, 까놓고 말해서 기본 스킨으로 플레이하는 사람 잘 없습니다. 커스텀 스킨으로 soft-hit// 등 파일을 넣어서 플레이 하는데 샘플셋 Normal-hitnormal로 클랩을 대체해도 되는가 저는 심히 의문입니다. 요지는 히트사운딩을 기본 히트사운드로 하시는 것 자체는 좋습니다만, 기본 스킨의 Normal-hitnormal을 구해서 soft-hitclap으로 이름을 변경해 넣고 clap으로써 사용하시는걸 추천드립니다.
   
   밑의 히트사운딩 모드에는 샘플셋으로 표현했습니다만 hitclap 구해서 넣으실 생각이시면 바꿔서 이해하시면 됩니다.

1. 00:53:905 - Sampleset Normal

• 
  NC가 굉장히 딱딱하게 나눠져있네요. 조금 더 유연하게 활용해보시면 좋을 거라고 생각합니다. 가령, 00:02:533 (1) - 00:05:670 (1) - 여기서 안끊어주니 너무 길어지고, 00:08:611 (1) - 00:09:984 (2) - 이런 곳은 NC를 사용하기에 일관성 면에서는 옳지 않을지 몰라도 강조를 위해서 충분히 사용 가능한 스팟인 것 같구요. 00:11:945 (1) - 원하신다면 조금 더 잘게 나눠도 문제가 없을 거라고 봅니다.

1. 00:44:396 - 여기는 Normal 샘플셋보다는 Drum-hitwhistle이 더 나을 것 같네요. 통통 소리에 가까운 히트사운드기 때문에

1. 00:24:494 (1) - 그닥 필요없는 피니쉬
2. 01:02:925 - 드럼 애디션,,,? 오토로 써도 될거라고 생각됩니다
3. 01:04:494 - ^
4. 01:06:062 - 샘플셋 노말은 여기가 아니라 01:06:454 - 여기에 있었어야 했던 듯
5. 01:22:141 - 샘플노말

phaZ wrote:

[General]

1. 00:01:748 - 00:02:533 - 00:04:101 - 00:04:886 - 00:05:670 - dont understand why there are whistles here that are on nothing particular. at the same time you leave out whistles at 00:21:356 - 00:21:748 - 00:22:141 - on that synth which you actually already have hitsounded previously at 00:03:317 - 00:03:709 - ... -
2. 00:35:474 (1) - drum-finish 00:41:748 (1) - soft-finish. intentional o: ?
3. 01:01:748 - how about normal-finish here, gives pretty good wooosh-sound imo
4. 01:02:925 - (01:03:121 -) 01:04:494 - (01:04:690 - ) drum whistels here 01:15:474 - (01:15:670 - ) 01:17:043 - (01:17:239 - ) soft whistles here? you sure?
5. 01:06:062 - hitnormal should be on 01:06:454 -
6. 01:06:062 - also misses a whistle on sliderhead if compared with 01:18:611 -
7. 01:20:964 (1) - whistle on sliderhead?

asdfasdas

Beomsan wrote:

from KMA #request
*Unrankable (or noticable)issues *Highly Recommended *Suggestions

[General]

1. Combo color 세팅을 추천합니다. 힛사같은 것도 그렇고 기본으로 주어지는 설정을 좋아하시는 것 같은데, 적어도 저는 현재 사용되는 BG와 기본 Combo color은 "전혀" 어울리지 않는다고 생각합니다.사실 추가 하고 싶은데 어떤 색을 해야 할지 잘 모르겠어서....어떤 색 넣을 지 생각 해볼게여
2. Hitsounding에 대해서, soft hitnormal과 sampleset Normal만 사용해서 히트사운드를 넣으신 것 같은데 솔직히 이전에도 이런 방법으로 넣은 히트사운드를 꽤 많이 봤습니다. 그런데, 저는 이 방식을 전혀 이해할 수가 없습니다. 이런 식으로 넣었을 때 문제는 정말로 "기본 스킨을 사용해서 플레이 할 때"만 작용이 된다는 점인데, 까놓고 말해서 기본 스킨으로 플레이하는 사람 잘 없습니다. 커스텀 스킨으로 soft-hit// 등 파일을 넣어서 플레이 하는데 샘플셋 Normal-hitnormal로 클랩을 대체해도 되는가 저는 심히 의문입니다. 요지는 히트사운딩을 기본 히트사운드로 하시는 것 자체는 좋습니다만, 기본 스킨의 Normal-hitnormal을 구해서 soft-hitclap으로 이름을 변경해 넣고 clap으로써 사용하시는걸 추천드립니다.저는 웬만해서는 기본 힛사로만 채우고 싶어요. 기본으로 채울 수 없는 경우에는 커스텀을 쓰려고 생각합니다.
   
   밑의 히트사운딩 모드에는 샘플셋으로 표현했습니다만 hitclap 구해서 넣으실 생각이시면 바꿔서 이해하시면 됩니다.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:905 - Sampleset Normal

[Normal]

• 
  NC가 굉장히 딱딱하게 나눠져있네요. 조금 더 유연하게 활용해보시면 좋을 거라고 생각합니다. 가령, 00:02:533 (1) - 00:05:670 (1) - 여기서 안끊어주니 너무 길어지고, 00:08:611 (1) - 00:09:984 (2) - 이런 곳은 NC를 사용하기에 일관성 면에서는 옳지 않을지 몰라도 강조를 위해서 충분히 사용 가능한 스팟인 것 같구요. 00:11:945 (1) - 원하신다면 조금 더 잘게 나눠도 문제가 없을 거라고 봅니다.제가 이지 노말은 뭔가 원칙적으로 매핑을 하고 싶어요.

1. 00:44:396 - 여기는 Normal 샘플셋보다는 Drum-hitwhistle이 더 나을 것 같네요. 통통 소리에 가까운 히트사운드기 때문에추가했지만 일단 제 귀로는 차이점을 잘 모르겠어요.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:494 (1) - 그닥 필요없는 피니쉬
2. 01:02:925 - 드럼 애디션,,,? 오토로 써도 될거라고 생각됩니다
3. 01:04:494 - ^
4. 01:06:062 - 샘플셋 노말은 여기가 아니라 01:06:454 - 여기에 있었어야 했던 듯
5. 01:22:141 - 샘플노말인센에서 힛사 복사하니깐 다 고쳐졌네여

하고싶은 말이 힛사뿐이네요, gl

Neoskylove wrote:

Beomsan wrote:

Hitsounding에 대해서, soft hitnormal과 sampleset Normal만 사용해서 히트사운드를 넣으신 것 같은데 솔직히 이전에도 이런 방법으로 넣은 히트사운드를 꽤 많이 봤습니다. 그런데, 저는 이 방식을 전혀 이해할 수가 없습니다. 이런 식으로 넣었을 때 문제는 정말로 "기본 스킨을 사용해서 플레이 할 때"만 작용이 된다는 점인데, 까놓고 말해서 기본 스킨으로 플레이하는 사람 잘 없습니다. 커스텀 스킨으로 soft-hit// 등 파일을 넣어서 플레이 하는데 샘플셋 Normal-hitnormal로 클랩을 대체해도 되는가 저는 심히 의문입니다. 요지는 히트사운딩을 기본 히트사운드로 하시는 것 자체는 좋습니다만, 기본 스킨의 Normal-hitnormal을 구해서 soft-hitclap으로 이름을 변경해 넣고 clap으로써 사용하시는걸 추천드립니다.저는 웬만해서는 기본 힛사로만 채우고 싶어요. 기본으로 채울 수 없는 경우에는 커스텀을 쓰려고 생각합니다.

Beomsan wrote:

의미 전달이 잘 안된 것 같아 다시 말씀드립니다. 기본 히트사운드를 선호하고 사용하시는건 좋습니다. 하지만 실제 플레이를 하는 유저는 1. 기본스킨을 사용하는 유저가 체감상 드물다(정확한 수치를 알 수 없기 때문에 체감상) 2. 히트사운드를 무시하지 않고 플레이 하더라도 커스텀 스킨에는 커스텀 히트사운드가 들어가기 때문에 커스텀으로 설정되지 않은 히트사운드는 사용중인 스킨의 히트사운드(Normal-hitnormal)로 바뀌어 들리게 된다. 이 두개를 모아서 생각해보면 clap 사운드를 대체하기 위해서 쓴 샘플셋 노말이 "어떤 소리로 플레이어에게 들려질지 알 수 없다는 이야기"입니다. 에디터에서만 잘 작용한다면 그걸로 과연 끝일까요?

그래서 기본 히트사운드(Normal-hitnormal)을 구해서 soft-hitclap으로 이름을 바꿔서 사용하면 결론적으론 기본 히트사운드를 사용하고자 하는 그 의도를 깨는 것도 아닐테니 어떻겠냐 라는 제안이었습니다만, 답변하신 것은 제 의견에 대한 답변으로 보기엔 이상하지 않나 라는 생각이 들어서 다시 설명합니다.

이건 여담입니다만, 경험상 플레이 위주로 제작된 스킨은 hitnormal과 hitwhistle에 같은, 또는 그별이 잘 되지 않을 정도로 비슷한 사운드를 사용하고 clap에만 확연히 구별되는 다른 사운드를 사용하는 것과 같은 유행같은 것도 느꼈었기 때문에 저는 이게 충분히 큰 이슈로 와닿을 수 있다고 생각합니다.

Doyak wrote:

결론부터 말하자면, 아직 랭크될 준비가 되지 않았다고 보기에 굵직굵직한 것만 이야기할게요....네?

[General]
* 왜 맵들의 끝이 01:28:611 - 가 아닌지 의아하네요. 애당초 01:27:239 (1) - 라는 노트 자체가, 악기들이 사라지고 보컬들만 남은 곳을 하나로 표현해 주는 역할인데, 보컬이 끝나는 지점이 아니라 다운비트를 끝점으로 삼으셨냐는 이야기입니다. 거기가 딱히 보컬이 완전히 사라지는 지점인 것도 아니고요.개인적으로는 다운비트에 두고 싶네요. 제가 슬라이더가 아닌 스피너를 넣었다면 다운비트에서 끝냈을 테니깐요
* 힛사가 많이 부실합니다. 맵의 80%가 2,4박에 노말-히트노말만 들어가는 상황인데 과연 이 노래가 제공하는 소리가 그렇게 단순한지 한 번 생각해보세요. 인세인 기준으로, 00:08:611 (1,2) - 이 정도의 소리가 아무 추가 힛사 없이 표현이 된 점이나, 00:10:376 - 와 같이 피니시가 들어가야 할 곳이 다 빠졌고, 00:03:317 (3,4) - 00:06:454 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:21:356 (1,3) - 이렇게 색다른 소리를 표현하면서도 힛사 패턴에 아무런 변동이 없다는 점은, 과연 노트를 찍을 때와 힛사를 찍을 때 같은 패턴을 생각하고 찍으신 건지 의아하게 만듭니다. 00:59:395 (3,4,5,6) - 등에도 힛사를 넣다가 잊어먹은 듯이 남겨져있고요. 기본 힛사를 고집하실 거라면 소프트 휘슬이라도 적극 활용해보시기 바랍니다.소프트휘슬 쓰는거 너무 어려워요. 1,3박에 뭘 추가하기도 어렵고....일단 약간 추가한게 있기는 합니다
* 볼륨 또한 전반적으로 너무 낮습니다. 특히나 기본 힛사가 soft-hitnormal 인 경우는 더욱 신경을 써줘야 됩니다.

[Insane]
* 이 정도 브픔에, 큰 점프나 연타도 그렇게 많지 않은 맵에, AR이 9씩이나 들어갈 필요는 없을 듯하네요. 8.5면 충분할 듯하고, OD는 왜 6밖에 안 되는지요? 앞으로 조만간 도입될 난이도별 가이드라인을 미리 소개해 드리자면, 인세인은 OD7 이상입니다.
* 00:08:219 (4,5,6) - 1/6입니다.1/4로 해도 크게 상관 없을것 같습니다.
* 00:21:356 (1,3) - 3번은 모르겠지만, 적어도 1번에서는 1/4보다 빠른 소리는 들리지 않네요. 플레이성을 고려해서라도 그냥 1/4로 맞추는 게 나으리라 봅니다.3연타
* 00:22:337 (1,2) - 1에서 가운데 명확한 드럼 소리를 무시하고 뚫은 것에 비해 2에서는 다시 그 1/4 드럼 소리를 살리려고 노트를 넣어서 초점이 어디에 있는건지 애매합니다.
* 00:29:199 (1) - 슬라 끝이 노말 샘플셋이어야 하는데, 슬라 몸통을 노말 샘플셋으로 쓰셨군요. 하위 난이도에선 따로 지적하지 않겠습니다.
* 01:04:395 - 개인적으로 이 드럼 소리는 이 부분의 사소한 묘미라고 생각하는데, 무시된 게 많이 아쉬울 뿐더러, 키아이에 들어서 너무 박자 밀도가 하드처럼 낮아져버리게 만들었습니다. 3/4 슬라 + 서클을 고려해보세요.
* 01:07:239 (2,3,4,5,6) - 01:19:788 (2,3,4,5,6) - 빨간 틱들에 거리를 좁혀서 넣으려고 한 노력은 보이는데, 그럴거면 애당초 1/2 슬라를 쓰는 게 훨씬 낫지 않았을지요? 애당초 보컬 위주로 따라가고 있는 상황에서, 길게 늘어지는 소리를 이렇게 뚝뚝 끊어서 서클로 쓸 이유도 안 보이고요.키아이에 서클 거의 없어서 억지로 집어넣은 거.... 생각해볼게여

하위 난이도들은 대체로 괜찮습니다. 사소하게 다듬을 게 여럿 보이기는 한데, 일단 큰 문제는 거의 없고요. 아직 배치/흐름의 논리성이 떨어져보이는 게 아쉽기는 한데, 예전보단 많이 좋아졌습니다.

그런데 지금의 힛사 상태로는 아직 랭에 보낼 수 없다고 봅니다. 전체적으로 너무 단순/부실하고, 노트로 표현된 것과는 거리가 멀게 박혀있고, 여기저기 자잘한 실수들도 보이는데 스스로 힛사를 너무 가볍게 보고 무신경하셨던 게 아닌지 생각해보시기 바랍니다. 기회를 한 번 더 드리겠는데, 다시 불렀을 때 힛사가 합격점이면 제대로 리체크를 하는 것으로 할게요.

1. 00:52:729 (3) - I understand that you're following the instrument here, but I think the vocal is much more prominent here, and that you should map to the vocals since they form an important transition to the next section. As such, I recommend using 1/1 spaced circles at this part instead of the long repeat slider.
2. 01:23:513 (4) - Maybe consider changing to two circles. It will have more impact on the strong beat at 01:23:709

1. 00:19:788 (1) - Just my opinion, but I think reversing this would flow better.

1. 00:24:494 (1,2,3) - Flow here is a bit awkward. How about making (1) have more of an upward motion?
2. 00:36:062 (2,3) - Jump here would be nice for accent on (3). Same suggestion from 00:42:337 (2,3)

Little wrote:

Hi, sorry for the looooong loooooooooong delay.

[Normal]

1. 00:52:729 (3) - I understand that you're following the instrument here, but I think the vocal is much more prominent here, and that you should map to the vocals since they form an important transition to the next section. As such, I recommend using 1/1 spaced circles at this part instead of the long repeat slider.I think now pattern is okay.
2. 01:23:513 (4) - Maybe consider changing to two circles. It will have more impact on the strong beat at 01:23:709

[Hard]

1. 00:19:788 (1) - Just my opinion, but I think reversing this would flow better.already

[Insane]

1. 00:24:494 (1,2,3) - Flow here is a bit awkward. How about making (1) have more of an upward motion?
2. 00:36:062 (2,3) - Jump here would be nice for accent on (3). Same suggestion from 00:42:337 (2,3)

The mapset is already very good, so I don't have much to say.

1. No video?
2. Optional tags: Sodate-kata Saekano: How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend
3. I have my doubts on the romanized title. I'm pretty sure it should be Colorful.(AnimeVer.) If you go to the source page (http://www.mikuweb.com/artist/mikusawai ... /SRCL-8676), you can get カラフル。（AnimeVer.）, which is correct. However, that dot is not the same dot in most keyboards. That is not actually a space, it's part of the dot itself. Try and remove it, there's no space. (More info https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halfwidth ... idth_forms)
   
   edit: wafu explained it better lol p/4255991

1. Looks clean overall, but I'd like to mention that I find AR4 a bit high for such a low BPM song and considering how low the density is.

1. 00:17:239 (2,3) - Just a minor thing, but stuff like this flows just much better by moving it down a little...
2. 00:21:356 (4,5,6,7) - Found this rhythm really unintuitive for an easier difficulty. The sliders are clickable on the least important sounds here, while the rest is offbeat. An easy fix would be taking (4,5,6) and CTRL+G'ing them rhythm-wise.
3. 00:49:592 (3) - 00:52:729 (3) - Not sure how I feel about these though... it's not like the Normal has to be super low in density, because you do have an Easy. They skip over quite some sounds too, especially the second one where vocals also kick in, whereas the first one is still acceptable. (you don't have these in Easy either?)

1. 00:20:964 (3,4,1,2,3) - Having two stacks right after each other with each different snapping respectively doesn't seem too player-friendly, especially at this level. Would change that 1/2 stack into a slider, also for consistency with the rest of the section.
2. 00:46:258 (6,1) - Putting a stack on downbeats really takes away the emphasis here, would rather stack (1,2).
3. 01:21:945 (2) - Optional, but I don't recall offbeat rhythms being used often/at all. Consider making the clap clickable.

1. 00:03:121 (3,4,5,6) - Would either shorten the distance here, or increase the distance at 01:09:984 (1,2) - 01:24:101 (1,2) - . These are following the same sounds and one is even in KIAI.
2. 01:04:395 (4) - 01:20:768 (5,6) - Normal sampleset?
3. 01:12:729 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - Didn't really play too comfortable, as the sound on 01:13:023 - is skipped, while (2) is overmapped. Would reconsider the rhythm here.
4. 01:13:317 (3,4) - // optional \\ When I use a kickslider I want to continue movement, so having a stacked triplet right afterwards felt awkward to me. Having ongoing moment feels more natural after a kickslider (like 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - ), at least to me.
5. Perhaps more a tip for future maps, I personally find that having the jumps on the snares like 01:21:748 (3,4,5,1) - express the song much better than stacks like 01:02:925 (5,6,7) - that force the player to stop on stronger sounds.

appleeaterx wrote:

M4M!

[General]

1. No video? Maybe I will add?
2. Optional tags: Sodate-kata Saekano: How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend
3. I have my doubts on the romanized title. I'm pretty sure it should be Colorful.(AnimeVer.) If you go to the source page (http://www.mikuweb.com/artist/mikusawai ... /SRCL-8676), you can get カラフル。（AnimeVer.）, which is correct. However, that dot is not the same dot in most keyboards. That is not actually a space, it's part of the dot itself. Try and remove it, there's no space. (More info https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Halfwidth ... idth_forms)
   
   edit: wafu explained it better lol p/4255991

[Easy]

1. Looks clean overall, but I'd like to mention that I find AR4 a bit high for such a low BPM song and considering how low the density is.

[Normal]

1. 00:17:239 (2,3) - Just a minor thing, but stuff like this flows just much better by moving it down a little...looks fine for me.
2. 00:21:356 (4,5,6,7) - Found this rhythm really unintuitive for an easier difficulty. The sliders are clickable on the least important sounds here, while the rest is offbeat. An easy fix would be taking (4,5,6) and CTRL+G'ing them rhythm-wise.
3. 00:49:592 (3) - 00:52:729 (3) - Not sure how I feel about these though... it's not like the Normal has to be super low in density, because you do have an Easy. They skip over quite some sounds too, especially the second one where vocals also kick in, whereas the first one is still acceptable. (you don't have these in Easy either?)I think this looks okay now..

[Hard]

1. 00:20:964 (3,4,1,2,3) - Having two stacks right after each other with each different snapping respectively doesn't seem too player-friendly, especially at this level. Would change that 1/2 stack into a slider, also for consistency with the rest of the section.It doesn't matter imo
2. 00:46:258 (6,1) - Putting a stack on downbeats really takes away the emphasis here, would rather stack (1,2).Avoided all stack.
3. 01:21:945 (2) - Optional, but I don't recall offbeat rhythms being used often/at all. Consider making the clap clickable.consider it.

[Insane]

1. 00:03:121 (3,4,5,6) - Would either shorten the distance here, or increase the distance at 01:09:984 (1,2) - 01:24:101 (1,2) - . These are following the same sounds and one is even in KIAI.Just for avoiding overlaps.
2. 01:04:395 (4) - 01:20:768 (5,6) - Normal sampleset?
3. 01:12:729 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - Didn't really play too comfortable, as the sound on 01:13:023 - is skipped, while (2) is overmapped. Would reconsider the rhythm here. Changed other way
4. 01:13:317 (3,4) - // optional \\ When I use a kickslider I want to continue movement, so having a stacked triplet right afterwards felt awkward to me. Having ongoing moment feels more natural after a kickslider (like 00:34:101 (2,3,4) - ), at least to me. Think about it.
5. Perhaps more a tip for future maps, I personally find that having the jumps on the snares like 01:21:748 (3,4,5,1) - express the song much better than stacks like 01:02:925 (5,6,7) - that force the player to stop on stronger sounds.

Should be good to go soon, good luck!

IamKwaN wrote:

alright

Unicode Title: カラフル。(Anime ver.) or カラフル。（AnimeVer.）
Romanised Title: Colorful. (Anime ver.) or Colorful. (AnimeVer.)
Unicode Artist: 沢井美空
Romanised Artist: Miku Sawai
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた

References:
http://www.saenai.tv/music/
http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/artist/mikus ... /SRCL-8676
http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111194.jpg
http://www.mikuweb.com/
http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111116.jpg

good luck then!

Sonnyc wrote:

01:27:239 - 전체적으로 여기 힛사 너무 작은듯 하네요.

mp3 바꾸실 수 있으신가요? 초반 드럼이 너무 시끄러운듯 합니다.
인게임에서 말씀드린대로 힛사 작업 하시고, 그외에는 없을듯

1. 00:08:219 (4,5) - actually it's very annoying to play so i suggest you to use a 1/6 kickslider only and delete the circle
2. 00:27:436 (7,1,2) - not a good flow to me, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/tGSpU/1f100250f9.jpg
3. 00:35:278 (11) - this circle should be different with the triples, suggestion http://puu.sh/tGSyr/d74f7cb75f.jpg
4. 00:36:062 (2,3) - should be a jump here, http://puu.sh/tGSFg/b5f3ee854d.jpg
5. 00:42:337 (2,3) - ^
6. 01:26:454 (3,4,1) - add hitsounds on the slider heads?

1. 00:09:984 (2) - NC like insane diff
2. 00:18:219 (1) - ctrl+j for better looking with 00:17:239 (2) -

1. 00:48:611 (2) - ctrl+j?
2. 00:58:219 (3) - curved too much orz, make it more smooth like http://puu.sh/tGTc3/e01c96e4de.jpg
3. 01:23:513 (4,5) - it's kinda hard to read, maybe

Karen wrote:

m4m

Insane

1. 00:08:219 (4,5) - actually it's very annoying to play so i suggest you to use a 1/6 kickslider only and delete the circle00:08:415 (5) - I want to make this note clickable.
2. 00:27:436 (7,1,2) - not a good flow to me, maybe try something like http://puu.sh/tGSpU/1f100250f9.jpg
3. 00:35:278 (11) - this circle should be different with the triples, suggestion http://puu.sh/tGSyr/d74f7cb75f.jpgNo, I don't like this,
4. 00:36:062 (2,3) - should be a jump here, http://puu.sh/tGSFg/b5f3ee854d.jpgI didn't made jump at 00:36:062 (2,3) - 00:38:611 (1,2,3) - 00:42:337 (2,3) - 00:45:474 (2,3) -
5. 00:42:337 (2,3) - ^^
6. 01:26:454 (3,4,1) - add hitsounds on the slider heads?

Hard

1. 00:09:984 (2) - NC like insane diff
2. 00:18:219 (1) - ctrl+j for better looking with 00:17:239 (2) - Flow could be bad.

Normal

1. 00:48:611 (2) - ctrl+j?I like this one,
2. 00:58:219 (3) - curved too much orz, make it more smooth like http://puu.sh/tGTc3/e01c96e4de.jpg
3. 01:23:513 (4,5) - it's kinda hard to read, maybe

set is fine, won't be hard to rank, good luck.

Sonnyc wrote:

인센 언스냅이랑 하드 00:33:513 (3) - 간격 1.2x로.

Sonnyc wrote:

Nominated.

Nozhomi wrote:

Poping for hitsounds issues.

The hitsounding is really poor on some sections and don't provide enough feedback, I'll take first example on Easy diff because it's for me the one who suffer most of it.
From 00:10:376 - to 00:35:474 - you use almost only clap, who is quite poor and don't provide the best feedback here. It could be much better to use whistle on bic white tics to emphasis vocal here, and seems you had this idea in mind because you putted a whistle at 00:33:905 - without any apparent reason. Same apply from 00:52:729 - to 00:59:395 - .

2nd concern is on the section at 00:35:474 - you use some drum finish like 00:37:043 - . It's k ofc, but using them on the calmer part of the song when you could have used it on kiai seems quite strange tbh. They work much better on a more intense part of the song than this one. I have no idea why you only used it here.

Last concern is 01:27:239 (1) - . There is no reason to put volume lower on slider head when the beat is composed with vocal and piano here, and don't put volume at 5% at the end when vocal is still enough loud, making them inaudible. It's not a fade out note. 40% for the head and 30% for the end is much better.
And ofc that for all diffs.

In addition :

All diffs :

1. 00:52:729 - Missing Normal hitsound
2. 01:22:337 - If you want to let this whistle, put one at 01:09:003 - / 01:12:141 - / 01:23:121 -

Easy :

1. 01:06:846 - / 01:19:396 - Missing whistle.
2. 01:26:846 (2,3) - Little spacing issue.

Normal :

1. 01:23:513 (4,1) - Little spacing issue

Hard :

1. 00:08:219 (2) - Could this reverse have a more logic positioning and be parallel to 00:08:611 (1) - like this https://puu.sh/tLxVB/185dc5f595.png ? Like this you just want to click the arrow instead of the sliders head.
2. 00:21:945 (4) - Change it for 1 reverse only. You just did a 1/4 reverse with 1 arrow at 00:16:258 (4) - and now a 2 arrows without any reaction time to read it, that's just a Hard diff so remove one reverse from this slider.
3. 01:08:023 (4,5,6,1) - The stacking makes spacing too close here https://puu.sh/tLywS/172b22d7eb.png .
4. 01:12:925 (1) - I know you did that for the pattern, but there's no sound to emphasise this jump here.

Insane :

1. 00:08:415 (5,1) - I would swap NC here to make 00:08:415 (5) - more visible.I think looks not so good for me

Feel free to contact Sonnyc or any BN to rebub after fixing these issues.
Mukyu~

Nozhomi wrote:

Okay we did some more improvements with hitsounds. That's much better now.

Have it again~

SPOILER

22:00 Nozhomi: 00:08:219 (2) - you didn't wanted to do them parallel in hard right ? XD
22:02 Neoskylove: http://puu.sh/tMvby/b91595b1e1.jpg
22:02 Neoskylove: Can I fix like that?
22:02 Nozhomi: that's too far
22:03 Nozhomi: could you enable the note stack option on Editing menu ?
22:03 Nozhomi: no not editing menu
22:03 Nozhomi: Display menu
22:03 Nozhomi: XD
22:03 Nozhomi: the 3rd one
22:03 Nozhomi: wa
22:04 Neoskylove: 00:08:219 (2,1) - I didn't intended parallel
22:04 Nozhomi: because 01:08:023 (4) - if you move it at 408:124 it will be like this https://puu.sh/tMvix/8c901df71d.png
22:04 Nozhomi: 00:08:219 (2,1) - k that's fine it's much better like this anyway ^^
22:05 Neoskylove: btw,00:48:219 (2,3) - ?
22:05 Neoskylove: Just add whistles?
22:06 Nozhomi: yeah
22:06 Nozhomi: do it on all diff (if possible ofc)
22:06 Neoskylove: shat part?
22:07 Neoskylove: 00:48:219 (2,3) - in here?
22:07 Neoskylove: what part*
22:07 Nozhomi: just whistle 00:48:219 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2) - on Insane and do same for other diffs
22:08 Neoskylove: oakt
22:08 Neoskylove: okay
22:10 Neoskylove: fixed
22:11 Nozhomi: if you fixed all I said here it should be much better
22:11 Nozhomi: go update and let's see if you didn't forget anything ^^
22:11 Neoskylove: update
22:11 Neoskylove: d
22:12 Nozhomi: 00:06:846 (5) - is it intended you put Normal and Soft Whistle in same beat ?
22:13 Neoskylove: 2,4beats= Normal
22:13 Neoskylove: And this part looks special sounds
22:14 Nozhomi: kk
22:14 Neoskylove: 00:03:709 (4) -
22:14 Neoskylove: too
22:14 Nozhomi: 00:20:572 - Still no whistle on Easy XD
22:14 Nozhomi: 00:26:062 (1,2) - same
22:15 Nozhomi: 00:53:513 - same
22:16 Neoskylove: oakt
22:16 Neoskylove: okay
22:17 Neoskylove: fixed
22:17 Neoskylove: updatead
22:17 Nozhomi: Easy is clean
22:17 Neoskylove: Okay
22:17 Neoskylove: Thanks
22:18 Nozhomi: let's see other diffs ^^
22:19 Neoskylove: k lol
22:20 Nozhomi: Normal is clean
22:21 Neoskylove: okay
22:23 Neoskylove: Hard is?
22:24 Nozhomi: k
22:24 Neoskylove: thx
22:27 Nozhomi: AR9 > all
22:27 Nozhomi: XD
22:28 Nozhomi: okay hitsounds are much much MUCH better now
22:29 Neoskylove: Doyak said 9could be too high
22:29 Neoskylove: That's why I selected 8.5ar
22:30 Nozhomi: don't worry that's just me rattle about AR
22:30 Nozhomi:
22:30 Neoskylove: Then can I fix?
22:31 Nozhomi: fix ?
22:31 Neoskylove: fixed
22:32 Nozhomi: yep it's done nothing to touch again
22:32 Neoskylove: Okay

JinGwang wrote:

already ranked congrats owob

Xinely wrote:

random bubbled map check lol

General :
- meta is ok http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111116.jpg http://media.vgm.io/albums/74/49447/494 ... 111194.jpg (posting here because im lazy to save it)

Easy :
- maybe AR 3,5 for more friendly to newbie
- 00:21:356 (3) - add finish for cymbal?
- 00:57:435 - ^no cymbal in there
- 00:32:337 (1,2) - maybe change rhythm like http://puu.sh/tP6Uy/7e083f741d.jpg for map cymbal at 00:33:709 - as well?It looks not so good for me.
- 00:59:788 - use drum sampleset only since the drum is same with 01:00:180 - ?
- 01:00:572 - sounds better with whistle tbh because its only a bell sound
- 01:22:729 - add whistle too because vocal is strong?
- hitsound work for all diffs xD

Normal :
- 00:06:846 (6) - 0.95x spacing can be fixed here
- 00:17:239 (2) - ^
- 01:23:513 (4,1) - make curve on (4) looks same with (1) for neater design?

Hard :
- increase OD like 5,5 or 6 for better spread with insane
- 01:02:729 (2) - just my taste maybe 80,192 for make circular flow instead for continuing from 01:03:513 (4) -
- 01:10:572 (2,4) - nazi, better stack? because current stack isnt perfect and can be noticed in gameplay
- 01:16:454 - remove whistle for consistency with 01:03:905 - ? if yes then do for insane diff too

Insane :
- 00:06:846 (7) - a bit dumb tho but nc for spacing change here (from 0,7x to 0,5x)?It doesn't matter with reading.
- 00:47:631 (7) - imo it doesnt make sense when drums are strong in here (they are louder than 00:47:435 (5,6) - ) but mapped with 1/4 slider repeat. so try use 2 of 1/4 sliders instead?00:47:239 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:47:631 (7) - sound looks different and 00:47:631 (7) - sound looked low.
- 01:09:984 (1,2) - imo 1/4 sliders repeat dont fit because those weak snare sound exist in everywhere. better make 4 circles or 1/2 sliders I felt their sounds wes stronger than others, anyway fixed/

feel free to poke me back

Xinely wrote:

01:00:572 - for the hitsound, no reply yet (for all diffs)? Just adding symbal could be good

01:16:454 - insane, remove the whistle for consistency with hard diff

also hitsound which you fixed in easy diff, pls fix for other diffs (i already told you lol) for consistency