Itasha_S13 wrote:

after all I just wanna say ehh.. this map has changed, a LOT, I played it often, and after the last update, it has changed a lot, and I still like a lot XD but yeah there are some things could be improved

• Melody
  
  00:05:043 (1) - make this slider faster than 00:05:366 (2) - that would emphasize the music better and make it more.. interesting, ofc, this is just a little suggestion. it's on to you to change it or not Sure i made it a little faster
  
  00:06:011 (5,6,7) - I feel like.. these kickslider should be changed into a stream, 00:06:011 (5,6,7) - these 2 goes well with the music, but the rest.. doesn't imo Ok changed
  
  00:06:495 - should add a green point here and make all the slider from now on slightly faster Sure
  
  00:06:495 (1,2) - make them blanket? 00:07:302 (2,3) - spacing between these it's a little bit too short, so why not ctrl+g on 00:07:463 (3) - and 00:07:785 (1) - and if you agreee, ctrl+g on this too 00:08:269 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8204858 Good idea!
  
  
  00:14:076 (8) - maybe delete this and make the end of the stream into a slider? there's almost no audible sound/beat there OK
  
  00:16:656 (6,1) - too much spacing here imo, and then, 00:17:624 (2,3) - too less spacing there, when 00:17:785 (3) - has a strong sound (stronger than.. 00:16:818 (1) - ) I would recommend something like stacking the end of 00:16:818 (1) - with 00:16:495 (5) - and moving 00:17:624 (2) - to stack with 00:16:656 (6) - and then moving the next slider to the end of 00:16:818 (1) - or maybe something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8204906 either way works better imo, but at the end, it's on to you to change it or not :p I like that
  
  00:27:947 (2,3) - maybe add more spacing here? maybe ctrl+g on 00:28:108 (3) - (because 00:28:108 (3) - has strong beat on it) Yes
  
  00:39:076 (2,3) - more spacing SPACED
  
  00:44:237 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - add more spacing. maybe stacking 00:44:237 (2) - with end of 00:42:947 (2) - and moving 00:44:721 (5,7,2) - to stack 00:44:721 (5) - with end of 00:43:753 (1) - or you find a better way to add more spacing (well not reallly a necessary change but I feel like song here deserves more spacing) Yay spacing! more pp lol
  
  00:48:431 (2) - nc because sv change Ok changed
  
  00:49:398 (5) - maybe make this slider faster ? well... 1x sv on kiai section it's too slow, because why would a slider on kiai time be as fast as slider of other slower sections, like 00:24:560 - etc.. kiai it's the most powerful part of the song so it should have more spacing than the rest and ofc, faster sliders too Yes I agree!
  
  00:51:334 (4,1,2) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8204995 fixed
  
  00:52:302 (3) - make this into 2 circles instead? the emphasize vocals! Ok changed
  
  00:52:785 (1) - should be 1/1 I'm keeping this part.
  
  00:59:721 (1) - make this FASTURRRR (and make all slider faster from here, for example, if you set sv in the beginning of the kiai to 1.2x, add new green point on here to 1.3x song here becomes even more powerful! I agree, that slider does need to be faster! But I don't agree on setting the sv to 1.3x afterwards because it's a little bit too much imo. Also it would make 00:59:721 (1) feel very emphasized because then the sv after this slider would feel too similar. I think 1.2x should be good enough.
  
  01:01:011 (2,3,4) - not really fan of these, they play well but smh, they don't really follow the music properly fixed
  
  01:01:656 (4,1) - more spacing, here vocals goes super EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE DDD but spacing goes like uuuhh haha I don't even know how to explain it in english but.. you know what I mean, right? fam? Ya ik what you mean haha, I think I might have accidentally fixed this when applying changes to the previous mod.
  
  01:02:302 (3,4,5) - ^ but in this case, change this 01:02:624 (4) - into circles OK
  
  01:05:205 (4) - ctrl+g? and make it equal to 01:04:560 (1) - OK
  
  01:11:495 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - these jumps should have a slightly more spacing, but.. if you feel they're okay and won't change, at least should add more spacing on the last 3 01:12:947 (1,2,1) - Increased spacing by scaling objects to 1.075x
  
  01:14:479 (5,6) - move this up a little and make blanket w/ 01:14:721 (7,2) - I did this a little different, I didn't want to mess up the following pattern so instead I just moved 01:14:479 (5,6) - to the end of 01:14:076 (4) -
  
  01:20:043 (1,2) - same here again, make 01:20:366 (2) - a lot faster than 01:20:043 (1) - Yup
  
  01:23:269 (4) - change into circlez? xD
  
  01:27:302 (3) - triplet? :thinking: Yeee i didnt hear that lol
  
  01:28:914 (8) - make it faster, but not faster than 01:20:366 (2) - | like.. use 1.4x on 01:20:366 (2) - and 1.25x on 01:28:914 (8) - w/e it's on to you :p Ya that's changed
  
  01:29:479 (1) - really hate this, becuase it start on a blue tick... suddenly... should change it into a triplet @ 01:29:398 - that would play 1 billion times better
  Ohhh good idea, I was trying to figure out how to make that better lol thanks!
  
  01:32:302 (3,4) - make them equal like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205172 Did this part a little differently
  
  01:55:366 (3) - ctrl g Sure
  
  01:55:850 (4,5,6) - hmm this plays well but, it doesn't really follow the music, why not just add a double at the end of the slider 01:55:366 (3) - and then something liek https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205204 (ohh.. and if you do ctrl+g on that slider, there's a lot of ways to re arrange that part so dw xd) Took your advice, changed things a little differently
  
  01:59:398 (3,4,5,6,1) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/820521 It just shows a blank screen
  
  02:02:140 (3,4,5) - shouldn't this triplet be placed at 02:01:818 (1,2) - ? Ahh yea oops lol
  
  02:02:839 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205245 to > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205249 Tried my best to copy it lol
  
  02:05:527 - remember to change sv on kiai times :< Ya I know now lol
  
  02:14:882 (5) - this could look better overall if you rotate it bout' 25° and then make 02:15:205 (6) - equal Changed
  
  oh 02:14:560 (1,2,3,4) - this stream, and 00:58:431 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't have kiai on it imo Yea ur right
  
  02:16:495 (3,1) - spacing tooooooo short :< ok I hope this works lol
  
  02:18:753 (3) - why not stream :< Triplet instead
  
  02:19:721 (2,3) - spacing too short 2 Fixed
  
  02:23:753 (2,3,4,5) - dont really like how this flow and sliderend + 02:23:753 (2,3) - are tooo close. maybe move 02:23:753 (2) - to 194/162 just in the middle of that slider :thinking: Ooooh I like that idea
  
  02:24:882 (1,2,3) - should add more spacing. not too much tho Fixed
  
  02:26:979 (1,2) - add triplet? this would make all jumps to play better I like this part as it is
  
  02:28:430 (1,2,3,4) - this jumps should NOT follow the same flow as 02:27:947 (4,5,6) - because vocals.. music changes, so the map should change I actually really like this jump pattern, I'm not really willing to change it; also I used nc to to let players know that music changes.
  
  02:30:527 (4,5,6) - I really love how this plays, so perfect rotate 02:30:850 (6) - -26° ~ to make it equal to 02:30:527 (4) - with 02:30:689 (5) - Haha thank you! And yea fixed
  
  02:31:011 (1) - stack it's head with 02:30:205 (3) - end 02:31:011 (1) - This slider is continuing the flow of 02:30:527 (4,5,6) - so i think this slider is fine as it is.
  
  02:43:914 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - try a stream? would follow the music 1 billion times better :thinkingsettlethinking: yea dont want to overmap lol
  
  02:46:334 - should change sv too, faster :c 02:50:205 (1) - should be even faster, and 02:50:850 (1) - EVEN faster (maybe Im too nazi here, using just one sv on this section would be better, but not 1x, too slow, you don't really feel the music while playing THIS part (and kiai parts) with 1x yea I agree
  
  02:56:818 (6) - make it faster too, yeah, I loved how you mapped this part 02:57:463 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - it's just perfect lol, but I still think that a faster sv will be ohh even better, and a little bit more spacing overall Thanks! It took me a while to think of that lol. Ok i increased the sv a little bit and changed the shape of the slider.
  
  
  02:59:721 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - too short spacing, spacing here should be more like 01:12:302 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Sure
  
  03:05:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - this part it's really confusing, because you expect a.. pause or a longer gap from 03:05:688 (6) - but there's this circle 03:05:849 (1) - that follows... nothing. and this stream should start on 03:06:495 (1) - so.. just delete this 03:05:849 (1) - add NC on 03:06:011 (1) - and start the stream on 03:06:495 (1) - Remapped this part with your mod in mind
  
  03:07:140 (1,2) - should make this into a slider, so the next jumps plays better and you get that trumpet sound emphazised I dont think the trumpet sound needs to be as emphasized here because its only for a short moment, plus I feel that having the jump will allow to player to start getting into the back and forth motion for the upcoming patterns.
  
  03:12:302 (7,8) - ^Same as above
  
  03:10:850 (2,2) - both should be changed into a slider, jumps are fun and plays well but sliders would follow music better Not really sure how to fit sliders here, I dont think it really matters. Its also hard to continue flow while keeping aesthetics at the same time as well so im going to leave it as it is.
  
  maybe add more spacing between 03:13:430 (2,1) - and then more spacing on 03:13:591 (1,2,1,2) - afterwards Sure
  
  03:14:236 (1,1,2) - a stream will be better Star rating went down but yea music has stream here so...
  
  03:14:882 (1,2,3,4,1) - and quite MORE spacing here. singer/vocals are on its climax but the spacing it's suddenly.. shorter Fixed
  
  03:16:736 (2) - delet OK
  
  03:19:882 (4,1) - more spacing ? and more spacing on 03:20:850 (2,3,4,1) - . from here 03:17:463 - you should increase the spacing consecutively. song is like.. increasing but map keeps the same :/ I'm liking this intense feeling im getting
  
  03:22:140 (2,3,4) - why not a stream? or ... maybe kickslider would be better here Ya kickslider would better considering your previous mod about spacing and your next mod about stacking 03:22:624 (1,2) -
  
  03:22:624 (1,2) - stack these instead of 03:22:785 (2,3) - because 03:22:946 (3) - has that strong sound which should be separated from 03:22:785 (2) - Sure
  
  03:23:269 (2,3) - NC should be on these
  
  03:23:914 (3,1) - stack these and add the NC on the 3 Replying to this mod and the previous mod, I decided to remap this part. I made the jumps in an octagonal pattern and added an NC everytime i heard a strong sound,
  
  03:27:141 (2,1,2) - maybe add a stream here? would make it plays better overall. yup
  
  03:25:205 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - too much jumps, and even if I love them because I FC them for much PP sometimes it doesn't feel like they're following the music properly, 03:26:334 (2) - we have this trumpet sound here which would play better with a slider on it and a stream sound on 03:27:141 (2,1,2) - so the jumps are kinda misleading the rythm. if you add the stream or not, at least stack 03:27:463 (2,3) - (would be better if you add it tho) Yea ok changed!
  
  and for this section, the pairs I will mention here are the pair of circles that should be stacked according to the drums
  03:22:624 (1,2) - 03:23:269 (2,3) - 03:23:914 (3,1) - 03:24:560 (1,2) - 03:25:366 (2,3) - 03:25:850 (2,3) - 03:27:463 (2,3) -
  (and remember it's on you to stack them or not, I just want to say it because I think stacking these would follow the music better ) hmm yea.... I'm gonna stay with what i changed earlier, but if you think thats still wrong let me know.
  
  03:27:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - btw add more spacing here, jumps are too short and these should be the largest jumps in the whole map OK i will make sure they are the largest xD
  
  03:33:431 (1,2) - delete OK
  
  03:36:011 (2) - slider should start at the white tick http://prntscr.com/fd6ed1 follow rythm better (sorry for using lightshot just once x) its ok haha fixed
  
  03:41:656 (3,1) - should add more spacing here OK
  
  03:43:108 (1) - should change this into circles, will follow music better and you don't skip that important downbeat 03:43:269 - OK
  
  03:45:043 (3) - move to 208/255 (line up with 03:45:527 (4,5) - Remapped this part
  
  03:46:334 (2,3,4,5) - love these jumps theyre so perfectly done god Im so gay lmao haha Haha no really thank you so much!
  
  03:47:463 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ should add MOOOOTTOOO spacing on them MOOOOOOTTOOO MOOOOOOTTOOO
  
  03:49:560 (6) - maybe add a double at the end of this slider and a single circle on 03:50:205 - that slider 03:50:043 (1) - .. soo undermapped lmao hah plase ;w; Ok, revamped this section
  
  03:51:334 - remember to make sv on kiai faster, and MORE faster here YEEEAhHHHHHHHHH please ;w; YEEEAhHHHHHHHHH
  
  03:51:818 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - come on man, I can't feel the song with this shurt spucing Hope you can feel it now
  
  03:53:592 (1) - this into 2 circles ? nah
  
  03:55:366 (1) - move up Remapped this part
  
  04:01:334 (1,2,3) - stream? nah
  
  04:01:979 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - again here, add MOOOORE spacing. song its powerful!! jumps are NOT! correction. THIS is the most powerful part in the song, which should have the hardest jumps I might have overdone this part lol.... but I like it
  
  04:05:043 (1,2,3,4) - more spacing here too plase Oh yeahhhhh
  
  04:09:882 (5) - make this a kickslider and add circle on 04:10:043 - Good idea
  
  04:11:012 (1,2) - Im not really fan of this, you can keep them, but imo you should add a stream here (stacked stream maybe?) Ok, I kinda did both by having kicksliders + short stack streams
  
  04:15:124 (5) - delete this? 2 stacked circles would be better imo I think that it is fine as it is because there are already triples at 04:12:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - so it's easier to just stay consistent; also I don't want the player to be confused with 2 sudden stacked circles instead of 3.
  
  04:22:624 (2) - delet this OK
  
  04:28:592 (2,3,4) - kicksliders owo? or.. maybe something like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205739 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8205760 Good idea!
  
  04:29:721 - little reminder of sv change OK
  
  04:39:398 (2,1,2) - stream? or kicksliders :thinking: jumps goes well but.. music isnt for jumps here :< Fixed
  
  nazi stuff:
  
  blankets: If left blank then it probably got remapped and not there anymore
  00:11:495 (6,1) -
  00:31:818 (4,1) - Fixed
  00:36:011 (3,2) - Fixed
  00:37:140 (4,6) -
  00:47:355 (4,1) - Its fine here i think
  01:43:270 (1,4) - check blankets on 01:43:753 (2) -
  01:50:850 (6,2) - Fixed
  01:58:108 (3,1) - Fixed
  02:06:011 (2,1) - Fixed
  02:15:850 (1,1) -
  02:36:173 (1,2) - Fixed
  02:37:140 (3,1) - Fixed
  02:46:334 (1,2) - Its fine here i think
  02:47:624 (1) - with end of 02:46:334 (1) -
  02:48:431 (3,1) - Fixed
  02:50:205 (1,2) -
  02:50:850 (1,2) - Fixed
  03:18:269 (2,1) - Fixed
  03:38:753 (5,1) - Fixed
  04:09:721 (3,1) -
  04:17:302 (2,1) - Its fine here i think
  04:31:979 (4,1) - Its fine here i think
  04:32:785 (2,3) - Fixed
  
  *Note: I probably fixed a lot of these blankets while i was applying your mods and just happened to add the quality of life changes myself.
  
  stacks:
  00:31:979 (5,4) - Fixed
  00:51:334 (4,4) - Fixed
  01:44:721 (1,1) - Fixed
  01:59:560 (5,1) - Fixed

Hope you find this mod as helpful as long it is and GL I really appreciate it thanks a lot!
pd. add some combo colours Will do.
btw eh.. with the current drain time youll need more diffs? yes you need them Yea I'm gonna ask for some.