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ExNeko

_Stan wrote:

coming :3

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4K NM
  1. 00:26:762 - Meybe double-hit here is not good 00:26:971 (26971|3) - | try this?
  2. 00:27:075 - miss a note?
    不、这里如果加了note就会影响前面小jack的效果
  3. 00:36:554 (36554|3) - If you wanna catch this then you might miss a note here 00:36:658 -
  4. 00:52:491 - miss a note
  5. 00:53:741 - ^
    ^
4K HD
  1. 00:43:325 - add a note here?
  2. 00:46:658 - add a note here? cuz this beat is same heavy with 00:46:554 -
7K EZ
  1. 00:20:096 (20096|2) - move to col [1], to reflect the beat more nice like 00:33:429 -
  2. 00:20:512 (20512|0) - if you do that, move this to col [2] to avoid double-hit
  3. 00:33:429 - to 00:40:304 - , col [1] is so empty, so move this 00:34:887 (34887|1) - and 00:38:429 (38429|1) - to col [1]
  4. 00:46:762 (46762|6) - move this to col [5] to reflect the heavy beat and if you do that, move this to 00:46:971 (46971|4) - col [6]
  5. 00:53:429 (53429|5,53637|5) - move this to col [5]
  6. 00:56:762 (56762|1) - move to col [1], cuz 00:56:762 (56762|1) - to 00:56:762 (56762|1) - col [1] is so empty
7K HD
  1. 00:29:783 (29783|5,29887|4,29887|6) - this kind of pattern is not so comfortable to hit, try to move 00:29:887 (29887|6) - to col [2], and then 00:30:096 (30096|1) - to col [7] avoid double-hits
7K Apocalypse
  1. 00:59:887 - make them to jack will more hard if you like

great map~ :) :) good luck~
这个摸明显充实多了嘛 :) 感谢dalao



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Topic Starter
ExNeko
Deleted "7K Apocalypse"




wania




Updated!
Kuro Izaya
昨天太困了所以去睡觉了
4K=1|2|3|4 7K=1|2|3|4|5|6|7
7K EZ
  1. 因为星级低所以也找不到什么好改的地方。只是觉得类似于00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|0)这种的叠键可以改一下,还有结尾的1/4拍00:59:991 (59991|6)可以考虑去掉毕竟会坑到新手
4K EZ
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - 如果抓的是那个“嘟”音的话这个还是删掉吧
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - 这里没钢琴可以删了
  3. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - 同上
  4. 00:16:554 (16554|2) - 同上
  5. 00:19:887 (19887|0) - 嗯。同上……
  6. 00:36:554 (36554|3) - 00:39:887 (39887|2) - 00:43:221 (43221|3) - 00:46:554 (46554|3) - 全都同上……
    我应该是毛病最多的人
7K NM
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|3) - 同4K EZ里第一个原因。
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|4) - 00:13:012 (13012|6) - 00:16:554 (16554|6) - 00:36:554 (36554|6) - 00:43:221 (43221|4) - 删掉这些感觉会比较合适,和7K EZ里一样的原因。
4K NM
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - 呃。这里真的没有“嘟”声啊。
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|0) - 00:16:554 (16554|3) - 00:43:221 (43221|3) - 嗯……还是删掉比较合适,理由和之前的一样。。
7K HD&4K HD
  1. 个人觉得因为是HD所以抓多个音没什么问题,所以也没有需要改的地方吧
六个难度听下来被德丽莎给洗脑了(
嗯……最后祝你,提前射精身体健康(绝对不是因为没啥东西写了
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Kuro Izaya wrote:

昨天太困了所以去睡觉了
4K=1|2|3|4 7K=1|2|3|4|5|6|7
7K EZ
  1. 因为星级低所以也找不到什么好改的地方。只是觉得类似于00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|0)这种的叠键可以改一下,还有结尾的1/4拍00:59:991 (59991|6)可以考虑去掉毕竟会坑到新手

4K EZ
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - 如果抓的是那个“嘟”音的话这个还是删掉吧
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - 这里没钢琴可以删了
  3. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - 同上
  4. 00:16:554 (16554|2) - 同上
  5. 00:19:887 (19887|0) - 嗯。同上……
  6. 00:36:554 (36554|3) - 00:39:887 (39887|2) - 00:43:221 (43221|3) - 00:46:554 (46554|3) - 全都同上……
    我应该是毛病最多的人
7K NM
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|3) - 同4K EZ里第一个原因。
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|4) - 00:13:012 (13012|6) - 00:16:554 (16554|6) - 00:36:554 (36554|6) - 00:43:221 (43221|4) - 删掉这些感觉会比较合适,和7K EZ里一样的原因。
4K NM
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - 呃。这里真的没有“嘟”声啊。
  2. 00:09:887 (9887|0) - 00:16:554 (16554|3) - 00:43:221 (43221|3) - 嗯……还是删掉比较合适,理由和之前的一样。。
7K HD&4K HD
  1. 个人觉得因为是HD所以抓多个音没什么问题,所以也没有需要改的地方吧
六个难度听下来被德丽莎给洗脑了(
嗯……最后祝你,提前射精身体健康(绝对不是因为没啥东西写了
感谢mod :D







Updated!
AchsanLovers
hi
nm req from my queue

here we go ~

Column : 1 > 7

[General]

- your current bg now is not rankable, if you want to ranked this, your bg must have resolution 1366x768 , 1920x1080 , 1024x768.
- uncheck your widescreen support.
- your video format should .avi for osu can read your video.
- others look fine i guess.
- 00:15:096 - wtf :v

[7K Easy]

srsly it first time i mod 7K ;_;

00:04:262 (4262|5) - move to col 3 ?

00:05:929 - maybe make like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6898198

00:20:721 - add note ? i hear something in here.

00:27:596 - 00:28:429 - well, jack in easy diff, it's hard for newbie.

00:30:929 - in here too.

00:38:012 (38012|6) - move to col 2 ?

00:53:429 - 00:54:262 - 00:55:096 - 00:57:596 - 00:58:429 - 00:58:846 - you know.

[4K Easy]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - no sound in here lol.

00:31:137 (31137|0) - in here too.

00:37:804 (37804|2) - move to col 1 ?

00:59:991 (59991|3) - delete pls.

[7K Normal]

00:03:221 (3221|3) - no sound.

[4K Normal]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - no sound.

00:56:762 - wait, 1 note is enough.

00:58:429 - in here too.

[7K Hard]

00:03:221 (3221|6) - no sound.

00:26:971 (26971|4,26971|3) - change to [3,7] ?

00:26:971 (26971|6) - no sound in here lol.

[4K Hard]

00:03:221 - no sound.

00:05:512 - if you make 3 note in here, you must make 3 note in 00:06:137 - 00:06:346 - too.

ok i stop, tired to hear this song :v

good luck
Topic Starter
ExNeko
quote="AchsanLovers"
hi
nm req from my queue

here we go ~

Column : 1 > 7

[General]

- your current bg now is not rankable, if you want to ranked this, your bg must have resolution 1366x768 , 1920x1080 , 1024x768.
- uncheck your widescreen support.
- your video format should .avi for osu can read your video.
- others look fine i guess.
- 00:15:096 - wtf :v



[7K Easy]

srsly it first time i mod 7K ;_;

00:04:262 (4262|5) - move to col 3 ?

00:05:929 - maybe make like this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6898198

00:20:721 - add note ? i hear something in here. NO

00:27:596 - 00:28:429 - well, jack in easy diff, it's hard for newbie.

00:30:929 - in here too.

00:38:012 (38012|6) - move to col 2 ?

00:53:429 - 00:54:262 - 00:55:096 - 00:57:596 - 00:58:429 - 00:58:846 - you know.

[4K Easy]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - no sound in here lol.

00:31:137 (31137|0) - in here too.

00:37:804 (37804|2) - move to col 1 ?

00:59:991 (59991|3) - delete pls.

[7K Normal]

00:03:221 (3221|3) - no sound.

[4K Normal]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - no sound.

00:56:762 - wait, 1 note is enough.

00:58:429 - in here too.

[7K Hard]

00:03:221 (3221|6) - no sound.

00:26:971 (26971|4,26971|3) - change to [3,7] ?

00:26:971 (26971|6) - no sound in here lol.

[4K Hard]

00:03:221 - no sound.

00:05:512 - if you make 3 note in here, you must make 3 note in 00:06:137 - 00:06:346 - too.

ok i stop, tired to hear this song :v

good luck[/quote]

Thank you very much :) This mod gives me a good feeling






Updated!
Etsu
Hi~

Mania M4M from your queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. Disable "widescreen support" in diff EZ 7k and diff NM 4k for mania.
[4K EZ]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - delete? I think it is better to follow that rhythm piano that ends in 00:03:012 (3012|3) - is better fo this diff
  2. 00:03:012 (3012|3) - If you applied the above then move column 2
  3. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - delete? no sound piano... also to leave a little rest since there are too many notes for this diff imo
  4. 00:13:221 (13221|0) - ^
  5. 00:16:554 (16554|2) - ^
  6. 00:08:012 (8012|2) - move column 3 I felt a little empty in that column for that section
  7. 00:19:887 (19887|0) - delete... It is difficult to capture this note 00:20:096 (20096|3,20096|1) - 1/1 give him some time to squeeze those two notes for beginners imo
  8. 00:21:971 (21971|1) - move column 0?
  9. 00:34:471 (34471|2,34887|1) - delete.. I feel that it is not necessary for this diff imo
  10. 00:39:887 (39887|2) - delete?
  11. 00:43:221 (43221|3) - ^
  12. 00:50:096 (50096|2) - move column 3
  13. 00:59:887 - is hard this notes 1/4 00:59:991 (59991|2) - and if you move it to 01:00:096 - ?
[4K NM]
  1. 00:06:554 - make note 1/4? I hear clear the drums
  2. 00:55:304 (55304|0) - move column 2?
  3. 00:58:533 (58533|2) - delete? I think it is not so important but it is better to leave the space (very crossed notes) 00:58:012 (58012|0,58116|1,58221|2,58325|1,58429|0,58429|3,58533|2,58637|1,58846|0,58950|1,59054|2) - imo
Damaree
Okeeey here's my mod you've requested.

NO KUDOS if my mod doesnt help

4K Hard
00:06:346 (6346|1,6346|0,6346|3,6554|0,6554|2) - this 2 parts are soo confusing, they have same sound but 00:06:346 (6346|1,6346|0,6346|3) - triple and 00:06:554 (6554|0,6554|2) - is double.
00:18:221 - make double?
00:22:387 - to all red lines, consider to add notes? clearly has a sound. Or do you have a purpose of leaving them?
00:31:762 (31762|2) - move to col4 and 00:31:866 (31866|3) - to col3

Ok just a bit of recommendation: might be better to change 1 note into an LN up to the red line to all white lines in the intro. It does feels better that ways(for me I think.)

This maps is sooo hard to mod, and also the ways you map it. . . So I only give a short, and cant mod normal diffs.
Well, that's all. Hope it helps even though im not soo confident. PS: this song seems reaaaly legit and I hear this in some map and I really see it. and here I finally found it.
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Etsu wrote:

Hi~

Mania M4M from your queue

Columns: 0|1|2|3


[General]
  1. Disable "widescreen support" in diff EZ 7k and diff NM 4k for mania.
[4K EZ]
  1. 00:03:221 (3221|1) - delete? I think it is better to follow that rhythm piano that ends in 00:03:012 (3012|3) - is better fo this diff
  2. 00:03:012 (3012|3) - If you applied the above then move column 2
  3. 00:09:887 (9887|1) - delete? no sound piano... also to leave a little rest since there are too many notes for this diff imo
  4. 00:13:221 (13221|0) - ^
  5. 00:16:554 (16554|2) - ^
  6. 00:08:012 (8012|2) - move column 3 I felt a little empty in that column for that section
  7. 00:19:887 (19887|0) - delete... It is difficult to capture this note 00:20:096 (20096|3,20096|1) - 1/1 give him some time to squeeze those two notes for beginners imo
  8. 00:21:971 (21971|1) - move column 0?
  9. 00:34:471 (34471|2,34887|1) - delete.. I feel that it is not necessary for this diff imo
  10. 00:39:887 (39887|2) - delete?
  11. 00:43:221 (43221|3) - ^
  12. 00:50:096 (50096|2) - move column 3
  13. 00:59:887 - is hard this notes 1/4 00:59:991 (59991|2) - and if you move it to 01:00:096 - ?
[4K NM]
  1. 00:06:554 - make note 1/4? I hear clear the drums
  2. 00:55:304 (55304|0) - move column 2?
  3. 00:58:533 (58533|2) - delete? I think it is not so important but it is better to leave the space (very crossed notes) 00:58:012 (58012|0,58116|1,58221|2,58325|1,58429|0,58429|3,58533|2,58637|1,58846|0,58950|1,59054|2) - imo
Thank you for mod、Although I do not agree with some of your recommendations、Some note of the location change is well presented :)
Topic Starter
ExNeko

JooF12 wrote:

Okeeey here's my mod you've requested.

NO KUDOS if my mod doesnt help

4K Hard
00:06:346 (6346|1,6346|0,6346|3,6554|0,6554|2) - this 2 parts are soo confusing, they have same sound but 00:06:346 (6346|1,6346|0,6346|3) - triple and 00:06:554 (6554|0,6554|2) - is double.
00:18:221 - make double?
00:22:387 - to all red lines, consider to add notes? clearly has a sound. Or do you have a purpose of leaving them?
00:31:762 (31762|2) - move to col4 and 00:31:866 (31866|3) - to col3

Ok just a bit of recommendation: might be better to change 1 note into an LN up to the red line to all white lines in the intro. It does feels better that ways(for me I think.)

This maps is sooo hard to mod, and also the ways you map it. . . So I only give a short, and cant mod normal diffs.
Well, that's all. Hope it helps even though im not soo confident. PS: this song seems reaaaly legit and I hear this in some map and I really see it. and here I finally found it.

ummm……These MAD are made with a bgm (linear slope plus)
Thank you for mod :)








Updated!
Critical_Star
meow

General
HP/OD suggestion
EZ > NM > HD
7 > 7.5 > 8
7 > 7.5> 8
think will be more balance for each diff

7K EZ
00:01:971 (1971|0,2179|2,2387|4,2596|6) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t9z06/ae0b3f6fdd.png ? and 00:02:596 - 00:03:012 - add W
00:06:762 (6762|2) - u can split the hitsound to another note here
00:21:554 (21554|3) - how about move to 3?
00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|6,28429|5,28637|1) - if u like, u can make them into same column here just like u did in 4K EZ, i think it fit better to the sound
00:34:471 (34471|3) - move to 3 seems better
00:40:721 (40721|3,40929|2) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t9zjv/935d431077.png ?
00:45:721 (45721|3) - move to 3?
00:54:262 (54262|1,54471|4,55096|4,55304|0) - like before u can make them into same column here
00:55:929 (55929|1) - move to 1 to make a mirror pattern from 00:56:137 (56137|4,56346|6) -
00:57:596 (57596|5,57804|3,58012|1) - CTRL+H? then 00:58:429 (58429|5) - move to 5 seems much balance here


4K EZ
00:06:762 (6762|2) - like in 7K EZ , u can split the hitsound here to other note
00:46:971 (46971|3) - move to 2 and 00:47:179 (47179|2) - move to 4 for balance



7K NM
00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - u can add another note here for 1/4 sound, in 4K NM u did this too, just to make them consistent
00:18:637 (18637|3) - move this to 4 seems much comfortable to hit
00:22:387 (22387|0) - delete this note since u only catch the main sync here like 00:20:721 -
00:31:866 (31866|5) - how about remove this note? i think this is the same as 00:28:429 (28429|4,28637|4) -
00:36:658 - there is 1/4 sound there too, u can add it
00:44:783 - like before
00:46:554 (46554|2,46658|1) - could consider to rearrange like > http://puu.sh/t9zP3/e5a747f48b.png , seems easier to hit
00:51:762 (51762|1,51866|2,51971|3,52179|2,52283|1,52387|0) - how about http://puu.sh/t9zR5/285c9ddbc8.png ?
00:58:012 (58012|1,58116|3,58221|2,58325|4,58429|3,58533|2,58637|1) - seems a little hard to play this, i suggest http://puu.sh/t9zVc/bb6d4cf550.png and 00:58:533 - probably u should remove this note since there is no sound.
00:59:262 (59262|2,59366|1,59471|0,59575|5,59679|6,59679|3,59887|4,59887|1,59991|5,59991|0) - i suggest http://puu.sh/t9zXN/3a0fc47fcf.png


4K NM
00:31:866 (31866|1) - ghost note
00:52:179 - make it single note here since u did not catch these sound with double for this part
00:56:762 - should be double here according to your pattern layering
00:58:533 (58533|2) - ghost note
00:59:887 (59887|2,59991|3) - i guess both of these can be double, it won't be really hard to play for NM diff

7K HD
00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - 00:18:116 - 1/4 sound here, i think is better to make it consistent with your 4K HD here
00:31:554 - should be double here too since u layer all the red tick here with double
00:31:866 (31866|6,31866|5) - ghost note
00:34:783 - 00:36:658 - 00:38:116 - 00:41:450 - 00:44:783 - like before
00:58:533 (58533|1,58533|5) - ghost note

4K HD
00:22:387 (22387|2) - delete this if u are following the main sync here, actually it is fine too but i prefer to make it consistent with 7K HD. so either add at 7K HD or delete this

pattern play fine here, maybe there is some missing sound u can add :)
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Critical_Star wrote:

meow
General
HP/OD suggestion
EZ > NM > HD
7 > 7.5 > 8
7 > 7.5> 8
think will be more balance for each diff

7K EZ
00:01:971 (1971|0,2179|2,2387|4,2596|6) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t9z06/ae0b3f6fdd.png ? and 00:02:596 - 00:03:012 - add W
00:06:762 (6762|2) - u can split the hitsound to another note here
00:21:554 (21554|3) - how about move to 3?
00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|6,28429|5,28637|1) - if u like, u can make them into same column here just like u did in 4K EZ, i think it fit better to the sound
00:34:471 (34471|3) - move to 3 seems better
00:40:721 (40721|3,40929|2) - maybe > http://puu.sh/t9zjv/935d431077.png ?
00:45:721 (45721|3) - move to 3?
00:54:262 (54262|1,54471|4,55096|4,55304|0) - like before u can make them into same column here
00:55:929 (55929|1) - move to 1 to make a mirror pattern from 00:56:137 (56137|4,56346|6) -
00:57:596 (57596|5,57804|3,58012|1) - CTRL+H? then 00:58:429 (58429|5) - move to 5 seems much balance here


4K EZ
00:06:762 (6762|2) - like in 7K EZ , u can split the hitsound here to other note
00:46:971 (46971|3) - move to 2 and 00:47:179 (47179|2) - move to 4 for balance



7K NM
00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - u can add another note here for 1/4 sound, in 4K NM u did this too, just to make them consistent
00:18:637 (18637|3) - move this to 4 seems much comfortable to hit
00:22:387 (22387|0) - delete this note since u only catch the main sync here like 00:20:721 -
00:31:866 (31866|5) - how about remove this note? i think this is the same as 00:28:429 (28429|4,28637|4) -
00:36:658 - there is 1/4 sound there too, u can add it
00:44:783 - like before
00:46:554 (46554|2,46658|1) - could consider to rearrange like > http://puu.sh/t9zP3/e5a747f48b.png , seems easier to hit
00:51:762 (51762|1,51866|2,51971|3,52179|2,52283|1,52387|0) - how about http://puu.sh/t9zR5/285c9ddbc8.png ?
00:58:012 (58012|1,58116|3,58221|2,58325|4,58429|3,58533|2,58637|1) - seems a little hard to play this, i suggest http://puu.sh/t9zVc/bb6d4cf550.png and 00:58:533 - probably u should remove this note since there is no sound.
00:59:262 (59262|2,59366|1,59471|0,59575|5,59679|6,59679|3,59887|4,59887|1,59991|5,59991|0) - i suggest http://puu.sh/t9zXN/3a0fc47fcf.png


4K NM
00:31:866 (31866|1) - ghost note
00:52:179 - make it single note here since u did not catch these sound with double for this part
00:56:762 - should be double here according to your pattern layering
00:58:533 (58533|2) - ghost note
00:59:887 (59887|2,59991|3) - i guess both of these can be double, it won't be really hard to play for NM diff

7K HD
00:08:116 - 00:11:450 - 00:14:783 - 00:18:116 - 1/4 sound here, i think is better to make it consistent with your 4K HD here
00:31:554 - should be double here too since u layer all the red tick here with double
00:31:866 (31866|6,31866|5) - ghost note
00:34:783 - 00:36:658 - 00:38:116 - 00:41:450 - 00:44:783 - like before
00:58:533 (58533|1,58533|5) - ghost note

4K HD
00:22:387 (22387|2) - delete this if u are following the main sync here, actually it is fine too but i prefer to make it consistent with 7K HD. so either add at 7K HD or delete this I added a note on 7K HD

pattern play fine here, maybe there is some missing sound u can add :)

thank you very much for your help ;)






Updated!
Critical_Star
cute song ;)
Rivals_7
i'll just keep my words simple now.
1|2|3|4

[Hitsound All diff]
View -> Show sample name

W=Whistle C=Clap F=Finish

00:00:512 - 00:01:346 - 00:02:179 - 00:03:846 - and etc that similar. its apparently a clap so should this be C instead?

00:07:179 - 00:08:846 - and etc. change to C

There's many place that should be C but you place it W. maybe its just me but its kinda inconsistent with the actual noise that exist in the song. check that again
[4K HD]

00:03:221 (3221|3) - no lead melody. delete. its a same thing as - 00:02:804 -

00:03:012 (3012|2,3012|1) - move left. low pitch

00:23:950 (23950|2) - move to red line above? (1/4 snap)

00:27:804 (27804|1) - move 4. high pitch

[4K NM]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - delete. no lead melody.

00:03:012 (3012|3) - move to 3. different pitch with the note below

00:27:075 - add note on 1 for melody flow

[4K EZ]

00:07:179 (7179|1,7387|0) - 4|2 for balance

00:59:679 (59679|0) - 4. same reason ^

will do 7K later
Topic Starter
ExNeko
;)
I am looking forward
ZZHBOY
咕咕
Topic Starter
ExNeko

ZZHBOY wrote:

咕咕
要是他咕了你可不能咕啊 :o
Rivals_7
Sorry for the late but apparently I had to pop the bubble due to metadata title still really ambigued.

[General]


It shows "Theresa Apocalypse teriteri circulation" apparently. But well as far as I know the Romanised title are not allowed to be filled with the Literal Translation of the title itself. Unless its official. but as far as i know, there is no official translation anywhere.
As if i use Google Translate, it shows "De Li Sha teriteri Xunhuan" as a romanisation. I recommend to seek some people to confirm the metadata before we move on.

if you can provide the link other than the link you provided in description, please let me know

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K EZ]

00:01:346 (1346|5,1554|3,1762|1,1971|4,2179|2,2387|6,2596|4,3012|5) - this is getting pretty unbalanced on the right hand although being an EZ diff. the suggestion will be as follows:


00:26:971 (26971|1) - move this to col 1 and move - 00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|0) - to 2 will pretty much cover the aesthetical aspect. mirroring - 00:28:221 (28221|4,28429|5,28637|5) -

00:29:471 (29471|5) - move to 7 will do flow more better. mirroring on what you did at - 00:29:054 (29054|0,29262|2) -

00:48:012 (48012|4) - maybe its better on 3 so it get more emphasis to flow from the - 00:47:804 (47804|6) -

00:55:096 (55096|4,55304|4) - move to 6 and move - 00:55:512 (55512|5) - to 5 will cover some aesthetical aspect as well. mirroring - 00:54:262 (54262|1,54471|1) - as well

[7K NM]

00:26:971 (26971|6) - i dont think its the same pitch as - 00:26:762 (26762|6) - so recommended to move it to other. but before that, you had a missing a note for a lead noise at - 00:27:075. the suggestion, starting from - 00:26:762 (26762|6,26762|0) - will be as follows

or rather you can ctrl+h that ^ pattern so its more relatable to pitch but you should also rearrange the pattern above

00:32:075 - 00:32:075 - 00:55:408 - missing a note for a lead noise again
sounds kinda intended anyways so its just a suggestion

[7K HD]

looks already good to me

[Hitsound (based on 4K HD)]

Applies to all diff!

The part that should be C / changed to C because its a snare noise

00:07:179 (7179|3,8012|3) - 00:09:679 (9679|0) - 00:10:512 (10512|1) - 00:11:346 (11346|3) - 00:12:179 (12179|3) - 00:13:221 (13221|1,13325|2) - 00:13:846 (13846|3) - 00:14:679 (14679|2) - 00:15:512 (15512|3) - 00:16:346 (16346|3) - etc

the part that should be W / changed to W because its a kick

00:09:054 (9054|3) - 00:08:429 (8429|0) - 00:10:096 (10096|3) - 00:11:137 (11137|2) - 00:11:762 (11762|1) - 00:12:387 (12387|0) - 00:13:429 (13429|0) - 00:14:471 (14471|0) - 00:15:096 (15096|3) - 00:15:721 (15721|1) - 00:16:762 (16762|3) - etc

well i'll stop for now. I'm sure you get the idea when you applying this

if you have everything settled and done, you may ask Critical_star to rebubble
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

i'll just keep my words simple now.
1|2|3|4

[Hitsound All diff]
View -> Show sample name

W=Whistle C=Clap F=Finish

00:00:512 - 00:01:346 - 00:02:179 - 00:03:846 - and etc that similar. its apparently a clap so should this be C instead?

00:07:179 - 00:08:846 - and etc. change to C

There's many place that should be C but you place it W. maybe its just me but its kinda inconsistent with the actual noise that exist in the song. check that again
[4K HD]

00:03:221 (3221|3) - no lead melody. delete. its a same thing as - 00:02:804 -

00:03:012 (3012|2,3012|1) - move left. low pitch

00:23:950 (23950|2) - move to red line above? (1/4 snap) no

00:27:804 (27804|1) - move 4. high pitch

[4K NM]

00:03:221 (3221|1) - delete. no lead melody.

00:03:012 (3012|3) - move to 3. different pitch with the note below

00:27:075 - add note on 1 for melody flow

[4K EZ]

00:07:179 (7179|1,7387|0) - 4|2 for balance

00:59:679 (59679|0) - 4. same reason ^

will do 7K later

Rivals_7 wrote:

Sorry for the late but apparently I had to pop the bubble due to metadata title still really ambigued.
[General]


It shows "Theresa Apocalypse teriteri circulation" apparently. But well as far as I know the Romanised title are not allowed to be filled with the Literal Translation of the title itself. Unless its official. but as far as i know, there is no official translation anywhere.
As if i use Google Translate, it shows "De Li Sha teriteri Xunhuan" as a romanisation. I recommend to seek some people to confirm the metadata before we move on.

if you can provide the link other than the link you provided in description, please let me know

As far as I know, the official only this one video address .

So the title of the problem

"Theresa" is the official translation of the "德丽莎"

Then the title will become

"Theresa de teriteri Xunhuan"

I think this is very confusing ,Half English and half Pinyin ,It makes people read very convoluted

So I keep the title of the decision, or have other people
(BN) think that this translation can be ranked, then I change

1|2|3|4|5|6|7

[7K EZ]

00:01:346 (1346|5,1554|3,1762|1,1971|4,2179|2,2387|6,2596|4,3012|5) - this is getting pretty unbalanced on the right hand although being an EZ diff. the suggestion will be as follows:


00:26:971 (26971|1) - move this to col 1 and move - 00:27:596 (27596|0,27804|0) - to 2 will pretty much cover the aesthetical aspect. mirroring - 00:28:221 (28221|4,28429|5,28637|5) -

00:29:471 (29471|5) - move to 7 will do flow more better. mirroring on what you did at - 00:29:054 (29054|0,29262|2) -

00:48:012 (48012|4) - maybe its better on 3 so it get more emphasis to flow from the - 00:47:804 (47804|6) -

00:55:096 (55096|4,55304|4) - move to 6 and move - 00:55:512 (55512|5) - to 5 will cover some aesthetical aspect as well. mirroring - 00:54:262 (54262|1,54471|1) - as well

[7K NM]

00:26:971 (26971|6) - i dont think its the same pitch as - 00:26:762 (26762|6) - so recommended to move it to other. but before that, you had a missing a note for a lead noise at - 00:27:075. the suggestion, starting from - 00:26:762 (26762|6,26762|0) - will be as follows

or rather you can ctrl+h that ^ pattern so its more relatable to pitch but you should also rearrange the pattern above

00:32:075 - 00:32:075 - 00:55:408 - missing a note for a lead noise again
sounds kinda intended anyways so its just a suggestion

[7K HD]

looks already good to me

[Hitsound (based on 4K HD)]

Applies to all diff!

The part that should be C / changed to C because its a snare noise

00:07:179 (7179|3,8012|3) - 00:09:679 (9679|0) - 00:10:512 (10512|1) - 00:11:346 (11346|3) - 00:12:179 (12179|3) - 00:13:221 (13221|1,13325|2) - 00:13:846 (13846|3) - 00:14:679 (14679|2) - 00:15:512 (15512|3) - 00:16:346 (16346|3) -

the part that should be W / changed to W because its a kick

00:09:054 (9054|3) - 00:08:429 (8429|0) - 00:10:096 (10096|3) - 00:11:137 (11137|2) - 00:11:762 (11762|1) - 00:12:387 (12387|0) - 00:13:429 (13429|0) - 00:14:471 (14471|0) - 00:15:096 (15096|3) - 00:15:721 (15721|1) - 00:16:762 (16762|3) -

well i'll stop for now. I'm sure you get the idea when you applying this

if you have everything settled and done, you may ask Critical_star to rebubble
No Reply=Fix

really thank you



Updated!
Rivals_7

ExNeko wrote:

As far as I know, the official only this one video address .

So the title of the problem

"Theresa" is the official translation of the "德丽莎"

Then the title will become

"Theresa de teriteri Xunhuan"

I think this is very confusing ,Half English and half Pinyin ,It makes people read very convoluted

So I keep the title of the decision, or have other people
(BN) think that this translation can be ranked, then I change
If there's no other official link, then i guess we could go with that.

I assume the video wasnt an official work, right? I assume its a fanmade or some sort like Touhou or Vocaloid works that usually appear on niconicodouga site.
You could keep the "Theresa" tho, since its a Character name. but you should definitely change the "Circulation" to "Xunhuan" since the translation doesnt come from the creator that uploaded this video in blibli there. its most likely come from youtube people. so its not officially come from the creeator

I personally think the romanisation title "Theresa de teriteri xunhuan" is kinda ok for this matter
But If you still unsure, contact one of people that you deem can help you with the metadata. I recommend one of these guys t/457651 in the metadata section. (make sure they also could speak or read chinese for easier communication)

havent recheck for the Hitsound yet since i'm kinda busy today
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

If there's no other official link, then i guess we could go with that.

I assume the video wasnt an official work, right? I assume its a fanmade or some sort like Touhou or Vocaloid works that usually appear on niconicodouga site.

In fact, it is indeed the official work……

You could keep the "Theresa" tho, since its a Character name. but you should definitely change the "Circulation" to "Xunhuan" since the translation doesnt come from the creator that uploaded this video in blibli there. its most likely come from youtube people. so its not officially come from the creeator

I personally think the romanisation title "Theresa de teriteri xunhuan" is kinda ok for this matter
But If you still unsure, contact one of people that you deem can help you with the metadata. I recommend one of these guys t/457651 in the metadata section. (make sure they also could speak or read chinese for easier communication)

havent recheck for the Hitsound yet since i'm kinda busy today
Well, I compromise :o

Hitsound made a little change, although not all in accordance with what you say to do



Updated!
HXJ_Crafter
咕咕咕
Rivals_7
recheck HS. Based on 4K HD again. and applied to all diff

This time stamp should be W Hitsound
00:07:804 - 00:08:429 (8429|0) - 00:09:054 (9054|2) - 00:10:096 (10096|3) - 00:11:137 (11137|2) - 00:11:762 (11762|1) - 00:15:096 (15096|3) - 00:14:471 (14471|0) - 00:15:721 (15721|2) - 00:16:762 (16762|3) - 00:17:804 (17804|1) - 00:18:429 (18429|3) - 00:19:054 (19054|1) - 00:19:887 (19887|2) - 00:20:304 (20304|0) - 00:21:137 (21137|0,21554|0) - 00:21:971 (21971|0) - 00:23:221 (23221|3) - 00:23:637 (23637|3) - 00:24:471 (24471|2) - 00:25:096 (25096|3) - 00:24:887 (24887|2) - 00:25:304 (25304|2) - 00:25:721 (25721|2,26137|2) - 00:27:387 (27387|2) - 00:28:221 (28221|2,28429|2) - 00:29:054 (29054|1,29471|2) - 00:29:887 (29887|1,30096|3,30304|2) - 00:30:721 (30721|3) - 00:31:762 (31762|3,31971|1) - 00:32:387 (32387|1) - 00:34:471 (34471|3) - 00:35:096 (35096|3) - 00:35:721 (35721|0) - 00:36:762 (36762|3) - 00:37:804 (37804|1) - 00:38:429 (38429|1) - 00:39:054 (39054|2) - 00:41:137 (41137|3) - 00:42:387 (42387|0) - 00:43:429 (43429|0) - 00:44:471 (44471|0) - 00:45:096 (45096|3) - 00:45:721 (45721|1) - 00:46:971 (46971|0) - 00:47:804 (47804|2) - 00:48:221 (48221|1,48429|3) - 00:48:637 (48637|1) - 00:49:471 (49471|0,49887|1) - 00:50:096 (50096|2,50304|1) - 00:51:137 (51137|2,51554|1,51762|3) - 00:51:971 (51971|2,52387|1) - 00:54:054 (54054|2) - 00:54:887 (54887|2,55096|0) - 00:55:721 (55721|2,56137|1) - 00:56:554 (56554|1,56762|0) - 00:56:971 (56971|1,57387|0) - 00:58:429 (58429|2,58637|2) - 00:59:054 (59054|0) -

This timestamp should be C Hitsound
00:26:554 (26554|1) - 00:26:658 (26658|3) - 00:32:804 (32804|1) - 00:33:221 (33221|2,33325|1) - 00:46:554 (46554|1,46658|0) - 00:53:221 (53221|1,53325|3) - 00:59:471 (59471|2,59887|1,59991|0) -

welp
btw you can PM me or CS for rebub after you done with these
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

recheck HS. Based on 4K HD again. and applied to all diff

This time stamp should be W Hitsound
00:07:804 - 00:08:429 (8429|0) - 00:09:054 (9054|2) - 00:10:096 (10096|3) - 00:11:137 (11137|2) - 00:11:762 (11762|1) - 00:15:096 (15096|3) - 00:14:471 (14471|0) - 00:15:721 (15721|2) - 00:16:762 (16762|3) - 00:17:804 (17804|1) - 00:18:429 (18429|3) - 00:19:054 (19054|1) - 00:19:887 (19887|2) - 00:20:304 (20304|0) - 00:21:137 (21137|0,21554|0) - 00:21:971 (21971|0) - 00:23:221 (23221|3) - 00:23:637 (23637|3) - 00:24:471 (24471|2) - 00:25:096 (25096|3) - 00:24:887 (24887|2) - 00:25:304 (25304|2) - 00:25:721 (25721|2,26137|2) - 00:27:387 (27387|2) - 00:28:221 (28221|2,28429|2) - 00:29:054 (29054|1,29471|2) - 00:29:887 (29887|1,30096|3,30304|2) - 00:30:721 (30721|3) - 00:31:762 (31762|3,31971|1) - 00:32:387 (32387|1) - 00:34:471 (34471|3) - 00:35:096 (35096|3) - 00:35:721 (35721|0) - 00:36:762 (36762|3) - 00:37:804 (37804|1) - 00:38:429 (38429|1) - 00:39:054 (39054|2) - 00:41:137 (41137|3) - 00:42:387 (42387|0) - 00:43:429 (43429|0) - 00:44:471 (44471|0) - 00:45:096 (45096|3) - 00:45:721 (45721|1) - 00:46:971 (46971|0) - 00:47:804 (47804|2) - 00:48:221 (48221|1,48429|3) - 00:48:637 (48637|1) - 00:49:471 (49471|0,49887|1) - 00:50:096 (50096|2,50304|1) - 00:51:137 (51137|2,51554|1,51762|3) - 00:51:971 (51971|2,52387|1) - 00:54:054 (54054|2) - 00:54:887 (54887|2,55096|0) - 00:55:721 (55721|2,56137|1) - 00:56:554 (56554|1,56762|0) - 00:56:971 (56971|1,57387|0) - 00:58:429 (58429|2,58637|2) - 00:59:054 (59054|0) -

This timestamp should be C Hitsound
00:26:554 (26554|1) - 00:26:658 (26658|3) - 00:32:804 (32804|1) - 00:33:221 (33221|2,33325|1) - 00:46:554 (46554|1,46658|0) - 00:53:221 (53221|1,53325|3) - 00:59:471 (59471|2,59887|1,59991|0) -

welp
btw you can PM me or CS for rebub after you done with these
complete!

Updated!
Rivals_7
wtf so Fast. Now seems fine i guess

Rebubble. you can ask qualify to CS after 24 Hours after my bub (BN rule btw)
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

wtf so Fast. Now seems fine i guess

Rebubble. you can ask qualify to CS after 24 Hours after my bub (BN rule btw)
:)
Critical_Star
'w'
Kayano
这标题可能有点问题

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Songs with Chinese titles must be romanised in this method: each character must be romanised into a single, capitalised, separated word. The official romanization should be used if provided. Loan words should be expressed using romanisation from the original language. Refer to Thread: Romanisation of Chinese for more information.
按照RC的说法和以往中文图的meta写法,标题应该写作“Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan”

Tags可以加个bilibili douga,Source可能要移到tags里?听QAT的吧。
Rivals_7
Oh damn I forget that was exist. rip
My deepest apologies, Call me back if you need.

PS: Xun Huan wasnt one sentence?
Kayano

Rivals_7 wrote:

Oh damn I forget that was exist. rip
My deepest apologies, Call me back if you need.

PS: Xun Huan wasnt one sentence?
one word in fact, means "circulation" or "loop". So the title means "Theresa's teriteri circulation".
IamKwaN
As mentioned by Kayano, Romanised Title has to be Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan.

As for the Artist, I have mentioned in my pm. You have to provide proof for it. Has the gaming production company replied you? Please give us screenshot if it does.

If you decided not to wait for the response, please use either the Bilibili account username (文学少女灵依 / Wen Xue Shao Nv Ling Yi) or the gaming company name (miHoYo, mentioned by the customer service that the MAD is made by them) as the Artist. Either one works, it's up to you.

Lastly, 崩坏学园2 should remain in the Source field, as it is a mobile game. Move also everything relevant to the Tags (e.g. Tamura Yukari, 田村ゆかり).
Topic Starter
ExNeko

IamKwaN wrote:

As mentioned by Kayano, Romanised Title has to be Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan.

As for the Artist, I have mentioned in my pm. You have to provide proof for it. Has the gaming production company replied you? Please give us screenshot if it does.

If you decided not to wait for the response, please use either the Bilibili account username (文学少女灵依 / Wen Xue Shao Nv Ling Yi) or the gaming company name (miHoYo, mentioned by the customer service that the MAD is made by them) as the Artist. Either one works, it's up to you.

Lastly, 崩坏学园2 should remain in the Source field, as it is a mobile game. Move also everything relevant to the Tags (e.g. Tamura Yukari, 田村ゆかり).
complete



Artist: miHoYo
Title: Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan
Source: 崩坏学园2
Tags: Linear Slope Plus Houkai Gakuen 德丽莎 阿波卡利斯 Theresa Apocalypse 田村ゆかり Tamura Yukari bilibili douga


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Rivals_7
something botherig me once more lol kill me

again based on 4K HD: - 00:21:762 (21762|2) - 00:22:804 (22804|0) - 00:23:429 (23429|1) - 00:41:762 (41762|1) - W

Do you still want to wait for the artist confirmation from the gaming company like kwan has mentioned there? if you already got, please screenshot it
IamKwaN
I have confirmed it, the metadata is correct to go now. Planned to requalify directly tonight but seems you guys have some game-play issues.

Better leave this set to BNs who are proficient to nominate then, good luck!
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

something botherig me once more lol kill me

again based on 4K HD: - 00:21:762 (21762|2) - 00:22:804 (22804|0) - 00:23:429 (23429|1) - 00:41:762 (41762|1) - W

Do you still want to wait for the artist confirmation from the gaming company like kwan has mentioned there? if you already got, please screenshot it
complete



Updated!
Topic Starter
ExNeko
According to the official given metadata



Unicode Title: 德丽莎的teriteri循环
Romanised Title: Theresa's teriteri Circulation
Unicode Artist: Ji Zhou


Updated!
Rivals_7
wait why are you changing it back to Theresa's teriteri Circulation again? It should have stayed as before. Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan.
as I said, there's no official Translation anywhere. the screenshot above is just a confirmation for the artist right?

i can directly rebubble after this
Topic Starter
ExNeko

Rivals_7 wrote:

wait why are you changing it back to Theresa's teriteri Circulation again? It should have stayed as before. Theresa De teriteri Xun Huan.
as I said, there's no official Translation anywhere. the screenshot above is just a confirmation for the artist right?

i can directly rebubble after this
This screenshot also includes the official to me before the translation is given recognition, you can find anyone who understands Chinese to explain to you
Rivals_7
oh okey. got confirmation via PM (can someone teach me Chinese :< )

rebub. Pls wait 24h before requalify
Critical_Star
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