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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年11月22日 at 19:44:11

Artist: Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
Title: Everyday World
Source: やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags: yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed
BPM: 154
Filesize: 6886kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lie (4.01 stars, 298 notes)
Download: Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao) - Everyday World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#60

Cup - by tasuke912
Sc4's Salad - by Sc4v4ng3r
Collab Platter - by Ascendance & tasuke912
Lie - by tasuke912


Collab Part
  • Collab Platter
  1. 00:00:560 - tasuke912
  2. 00:28:611 - Ascendance
  3. 00:41:079 - tasuke912
  4. 00:56:663 - Ascendance
  5. 01:09:131 - tasuke912
CLSW
:idea: :idea: good
Sc4v4ng3r
Salad's done :

Salad
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55811
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
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[Metadata]
Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃(CV.早見沙織)&由比ヶ浜結衣(CV.東山奈央)
Creator:tasuke912
Version:Sc4's Salad
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

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Don't forget to put my name into the tags.
Xinnoh
he forgot to put you in the tags :/

edit: holy crap can this get qualified already
Sc4v4ng3r

Sinnoh wrote:

he forgot to put you in the tags :/
Well the tag is there in the beatmap listing, I wonder why the forum post isn't getting updated :c
Topic Starter
tasuke912
I guess forum post can't be updated by submission if artist or title includes "&" or something, because when I submitted this and another mapset, forum post wasn't generated, and it generated after I removed "&" from artist. I'm going to update it manually when mapset is done.

EDIT: Added Cup Difficulty!
MMBan
Requested.
No issues with mapsets like unused hitsounds or snapping than unfinished collab
(What a long artist name..)
Cup
00:34:066 (5) - Weird flow/distance. Move to x264
00:40:300 (5) - Weird flow. Move to x164

Those two changes doesn't affect SR

GD Salad

Can't mod this one sadly because i have honestly no idea what to change here. Flow is ok and like only two places where is anti flow.
Like three spots where you can miss with Flashlight. No issues for me there.

Platter
Remind me later while its finished

Special diff
Places where Hdash may fit and (Possible missing notes)
00:19:261 (1) - Light but not very harsh to prevent unwanted droplet drop. Not need to change (Suggestion)
00:26:079 (3) - To fit with sound on 00:25:495 (Suggestion. Ctrl H slider 3 and move to x76. Move circle 2 to x476)
00:53:449 - That sound is too quiet to hear. And makes hdash a bit too harsh to overrun
00:54:326 (2) - x280 to keep same distance (somewhat) like on previous 00:53:741 -
01:15:657 (1) - On this slider remove middle square(Very middle one x117 y 114).
Xinnoh
General
  1. Change Cup AR/OD to 6, Currently is 5, 7, 8, 9
  2. Could add the "My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected” to the tags
  3. Should add "Oregairu" and “Snafu” to the tags
Cup
  1. 00:03:676 (1,2) - Missing Hitwhistles + Would flow better with both ctrl-h
  2. 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4) - Some people don't like zig-zags in cup
  3. 00:09:131 (2) - Ctrl-g + add a little more angle. Flows a little better
  4. 00:09:910 (1) - Important sound, add a little more spacing, but not too much
  5. 00:29:391 (2) - Hitwhistle
  6. 00:24:715 (2) - Spacing is too small
  7. 01:20:235 (1,2) - Increase spacing a little
Salad
  1. 01:20:819 (2,3,4,5) - “Stream” is a bit too close to the previous slider
  2. 01:26:858 (2) - You could emphasise the ending parts by putting this slider on top of the previous like you did at 01:25:300 (2) -
Good salad
Platter
For Tasuke
First point also applies to Rain
  1. 00:02:118 (1) - This is a good pattern, but what exactly does it represent in the music? In this instance it maps the high part well, but at 00:04:456 (3) - the same pattern is used to map a significantly less interesting piano part. I would suggest moving the order around a bit so that the same patterns are used on the same patterns of the music, since that arc really fits the high piano well.
  2. 00:26:079 (2) - Would add just a little more distance to map the vocal better, not much needed
  3. 00:41:079 (1) - More slider movement would map the vocal better
  4. 00:48:871 (1) - There aren’t any hyperdashes for other similar sounds in this area, remove or add more
For Descendance
Add hyperdashes to the other section you mapped. You’ve got none while tasuke has one on all the large piano chords. This is platter not salad lol
Rain
  1. 00:06:696 (5) - Put this at around x210-220, gives better flow
  2. 00:14:001 (4) - Don't increase distances during back and forth jumps, since they're unexpectedly hard. Keep it at x188
  3. 00:16:144 (1) - Sliders after a spinner need to start where the last bananas are, which is on the far left.
  4. 00:19:261 (1) - This should really be a hyperdash to match the vocals
  5. 00:41:663 (2) - This is a bit close, but not by much, x280 should work
  6. 01:15:365 (1) - Change this slider so that it's more c-shaped
Sc4v4ng3r

Sinnoh wrote:

Salad
  1. 01:20:819 (2,3,4,5) - “Stream” is a bit too close to the previous slider Lol I didn't notice this was a cymbal, not a snare ;-; Increased distance for this 'stream' to be a dash, and rearranged the following patterns.
  2. 01:26:858 (2) - You could emphasise the ending parts by putting this slider on top of the previous like you did at 01:25:300 (2) - While I do like the idea of variety, doing that will make a triple anti-flow movement((1) to (2) to (3), because (3) has no space for a dash at the left side of the playfield), which I do want to avoid making as it is pretty hard for players at this level.
Good salad Ayy thanks
Thanks for the mod!
Update
osu file format v14

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Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃(CV.早見沙織)&由比ヶ浜結衣(CV.東山奈央)
Creator:tasuke912
Version:Sc4's Salad
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Ascendance Sc4v4ng3r yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed
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Topic Starter
tasuke912

MMBan wrote:

SPOILER
Requested.
No issues with mapsets like unused hitsounds or snapping than unfinished collab
(What a long artist name..)
Cup
00:34:066 (5) - Weird flow/distance. Move to x264 why
00:40:300 (5) - Weird flow. Move to x164

Those two changes doesn't affect SR

Special diff
Places where Hdash may fit and (Possible missing notes)
00:19:261 (1) - Light but not very harsh to prevent unwanted droplet drop. Not need to change (Suggestion)
00:26:079 (3) - To fit with sound on 00:25:495 (Suggestion. Ctrl H slider 3 and move to x76. Move circle 2 to x476) tbh I dodn't think it's better, no change
00:53:449 - That sound is too quiet to hear. And makes hdash a bit too harsh to overrun it is not quite
00:54:326 (2) - x280 to keep same distance (somewhat) like on previous 00:53:741 -I don't think need to. Made easier though
01:15:657 (1) - On this slider remove middle square(Very middle one x117 y 114). fixed

Sinnoh wrote:

SPOILER
General
  1. Change Cup AR/OD to 6, Currently is 5, 7, 8, 9 fixed.
  2. Could add the "My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong, As I Expected” to the tags fixed.
  3. Should add "Oregairu" and “Snafu” to the tags fixed.
Cup
  1. 00:03:676 (1,2) - Missing Hitwhistles + Would flow better with both ctrl-h fixed.
  2. 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4) - Some people don't like zig-zags in cup I like it tho
  3. 00:09:131 (2) - Ctrl-g + add a little more angle. Flows a little better fixed
  4. 00:09:910 (1) - Important sound, add a little more spacing, but not too much k
  5. 00:29:391 (2) - Hitwhistle k
  6. 00:24:715 (2) - Spacing is too small fixed
  7. 01:20:235 (1,2) - Increase spacing a little fixed

Platter
For Tasuke
First point also applies to Rain
  1. 00:02:118 (1) - This is a good pattern, but what exactly does it represent in the music? In this instance it maps the high part well, but at 00:04:456 (3) - the same pattern is used to map a significantly less interesting piano part. I would suggest moving the order around a bit so that the same patterns are used on the same patterns of the music, since that arc really fits the high piano well. I understood you said, but I think it doesn't matter because I used such way sometimes and most people didn't mind it.
  2. 00:26:079 (2) - Would add just a little more distance to map the vocal better, not much needed okay
  3. 00:41:079 (1) - More slider movement would map the vocal betterdone
  4. 00:48:871 (1) - There aren’t any hyperdashes for other similar sounds in this area, remove or add more hmm
For Descendance
Add hyperdashes to the other section you mapped. You’ve got none while tasuke has one on all the large piano chords. This is platter not salad lol
Rain
  1. 00:06:696 (5) - Put this at around x210-220, gives better flow I didn'f feel so I keep for now
  2. 00:14:001 (4) - Don't increase distances during back and forth jumps, since they're unexpectedly hard. Keep it at x188 I don't prefer same distance, so made easier instead
  3. 00:16:144 (1) - Sliders after a spinner need to start where the last bananas are, which is on the far left. shortened the spinner
  4. 00:19:261 (1) - This should really be a hyperdash to match the vocals I'd keep now
  5. 00:41:663 (2) - This is a bit close, but not by much, x280 should work k
  6. 01:15:365 (1) - Change this slider so that it's more c-shaped

Thank you for mods!
Ascendance
@sinnoh

I guess it's just a matter of style. I prefer the stronger dashes here instead of making hypers in the calm section. Thanks anyways!
Benita
Requested by tasuke :3

Cup
  1. 00:00:560 - In the start you keep a consistent NC on every 4th fruit then later in the map on every ~8th fruit. Maybe delete some NC's in the start cause I personally think it looks weird with notes flying off the plate this often
  2. 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be a bit hard, maybe make this pattern like 00:02:118 (1,2,3,4) - instead
  3. 00:14:196 (6,1) - You could add a bit more distance here as you did 00:13:611 (3,4) - this is a pretty strong note, you could also try to make these 1/2's a bit more curved as they might be a bit harsh for Cup players
  4. 00:21:988 (4,1) - Maybe add a bit more distance here, at least have 1,00X as you have on similar beats example; 00:18:871 (4,1) -
  5. 00:28:222 (2) - You could delete repeat and add a single note instead cause it's a pretty strong beat
  6. 00:30:170 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  7. 00:40:689 (6,1) - Add a little distance
  8. 00:52:378 (4,1) - Might be a bit too antiflowy, maybe try putting the notes somewhat like this
  9. 00:54:326 (1) - No need for NC here
  10. 00:55:884 (2,1) - 00:59:780 (1,2) - 01:13:028 (2,3) - these distances are a bit long compared to other distances
Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:19:261 (1,1,1) - You got a lot of patterns to the left here, not really that big of a problem but I personally don't like it xd
  2. 00:39:326 (3,1) - This distance might be a bit long compared to other distances
  3. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4) - I think maybe having two 1/1 sliders with works better
  4. 01:08:547 - 01:08:936 - There are 1/2 beats here I think you should map considering you mapped them here 00:54:131 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:17:702 (2,3,4,5,1) -
Collab Platter
  • Ascendance:
  1. 00:36:209 (1) - 00:39:326 (1) - Maybe make these equal to 00:29:780 (4,1) - 00:32:897 (3,1) - ? Feels weird to ignore the beat on white tick when you've mapped it previously
  2. 01:04:066 - I'd add a note here
  3. 01:06:014 (1) - Maybe try adding a bit curve to this as it's painful to hit the droplets with the boost from the hyperdash
  4. 01:07:572 (1,2,3) - eh your whole kiai has a lot of movement so this is kind of a flow breaker. At least try to add some movement here
  • tasuke:
  1. 00:12:248 (1,2) - You shouldn't mix antiflow with hyperdash in Platter, try ctrl+g on 00:12:248 (1) - and move 00:12:832 (2) - further apart to keep the hyper
  2. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Maybe put these a bit further apart, feels boring with all on the same grid
  3. 00:48:482 (3,1) - Having a hyper here seems weird when 00:47:118 (6,1) - is just a normal dash
  4. 01:22:378 (1) - No need for NC
  5. 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4) - This is a lot of jumps and a lot more dense compared to how Ascendance mapped these beats 01:01:339 (1,2) -
  6. 01:16:339 (4) - Try moving this to x400, feels weird with just a straight line
Rain
  1. 00:01:339 (3,4,1) - These distances are a bit long imo, try to keep the distance at around 1,40x - 1,60x for consistency
  2. 00:06:404 (4,5) - This is a flowstopper imo, I'd move (5) to around x224
  3. 00:09:813 (7,1) - You could add hyper here
  4. 00:12:832 (4,1) - Hyper on a red tick feels weird
  5. 00:14:001 (4,5,6) - I think you only need hyper between (5) and (6) to emphasize the strong beat in (6) better
  6. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Feels weird not even having a jump here when you've had hypers on beats like this example; 00:23:547 (4,1) - 00:22:183 (7,1) -
  7. 00:24:715 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why is this just back n forth? It works well 00:27:053 (1,2,3,4) - because of the piano but I don't think it works here cause there is no music to support it
  8. 00:29:196 (2,3) - Again, jumps on red tick feels weird when the vocal is on slider end 00:29:391 - and slider repeat 00:29:780 -
  9. 00:31:534 (4) - 00:34:650 (7) - I'd delete repeat and add a note on the white tick cause the beat is very strong like you've done 00:37:767 (4,1) -
  10. 00:48:773 (5,1) - Hyper here would be fitting
  11. 00:51:988 (7,1) - Swap NC
  12. 00:54:131 (1) - No need for NC here
GL on this :D
Topic Starter
tasuke912

Benny- wrote:

SPOILER
Requested by tasuke :3

Cup
  1. 00:00:560 - In the start you keep a consistent NC on every 4th fruit then later in the map on every ~8th fruit. Maybe delete some NC's in the start cause I personally think it looks weird with notes flying off the plate this often Fixed.
  2. 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4,1) - might be a bit hard, maybe make this pattern like 00:02:118 (1,2,3,4) - instead tbh i don't think it's hard, but gonna consider again
  3. 00:14:196 (6,1) - You could add a bit more distance here as you did 00:13:611 (3,4) - this is a pretty strong note, you could also try to make these 1/2's a bit more curved as they might be a bit harsh for Cup players okay.
  4. 00:21:988 (4,1) - Maybe add a bit more distance here, at least have 1,00X as you have on similar beats example; 00:18:871 (4,1) - fixed.
  5. 00:28:222 (2) - You could delete repeat and add a single note instead cause it's a pretty strong beat keep
  6. 00:30:170 (3,4,5,6) - same as 00:05:235 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  7. 00:40:689 (6,1) - Add a little distance fixed.
  8. 00:52:378 (4,1) - Might be a bit too antiflowy, maybe try putting the notes somewhat like this keep for now
  9. 00:54:326 (1) - No need for NC here
  10. 00:55:884 (2,1) - 00:59:780 (1,2) - 01:13:028 (2,3) - these distances are a bit long compared to other distances I think they are still okay
Collab Platter
  • tasuke:
  1. 00:12:248 (1,2) - You shouldn't mix antiflow with hyperdash in Platter, try ctrl+g on 00:12:248 (1) - and move 00:12:832 (2) - further apart to keep the hyper Is it antiflow? I'm not sure
  2. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Maybe put these a bit further apart, feels boring with all on the same grid Fixed.
  3. 00:48:482 (3,1) - Having a hyper here seems weird when 00:47:118 (6,1) - is just a normal dash
  4. 01:22:378 (1) - No need for NC fixed.
  5. 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4) - This is a lot of jumps and a lot more dense compared to how Ascendance mapped these beats 01:01:339 (1,2) - it should be considered later
  6. 01:16:339 (4) - Try moving this to x400, feels weird with just a straight line okay.
Rain
  1. 00:01:339 (3,4,1) - These distances are a bit long imo, try to keep the distance at around 1,40x - 1,60x for consistency 1.8x instead.
  2. 00:06:404 (4,5) - This is a flowstopper imo, I'd move (5) to around x224 hmm, keep for now
  3. 00:09:813 (7,1) - You could add hyper here it's not bad idea, but I'm worried if it's hard.
  4. 00:12:832 (4,1) - Hyper on a red tick feels weird ehh, i don't
  5. 00:14:001 (4,5,6) - I think you only need hyper between (5) and (6) to emphasize the strong beat in (6) better
  6. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Feels weird not even having a jump here when you've had hypers on beats like this example; 00:23:547 (4,1) - 00:22:183 (7,1) -
  7. 00:24:715 (5,6,7,8,1) - Why is this just back n forth? It works well 00:27:053 (1,2,3,4) - because of the piano but I don't think it works here cause there is no music to support it changed.
  8. 00:29:196 (2,3) - Again, jumps on red tick feels weird when the vocal is on slider end 00:29:391 - and slider repeat 00:29:780 -
  9. 00:31:534 (4) - 00:34:650 (7) - I'd delete repeat and add a note on the white tick cause the beat is very strong like you've done 00:37:767 (4,1) -
  10. 00:48:773 (5,1) - Hyper here would be fitting
  11. 00:51:988 (7,1) - Swap NC okay
  12. 00:54:131 (1) - No need for NC here okay
GL on this :D
Thanks a lot, I'm going to continue when I have time
Xinely
touyama nao hayami saori are love
Sc4v4ng3r

Benny- wrote:

Requested by tasuke :3

Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:19:261 (1,1,1) - You got a lot of patterns to the left here, not really that big of a problem but I personally don't like it xd Yeaaa it just happened to be that the notes were kinda clustered around in the right side before a dash so this happened xD I don't see a problem in this though, so I'll just keep it.
  2. 00:39:326 (3,1) - This distance might be a bit long compared to other distances Yep, fixed with 00:36:404 (1) - as well.
  3. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4) - I think maybe having two 1/1 sliders with works better That skips over the cymbal on the upbeats, which is what I don't want.
  4. 01:08:547 - 01:08:936 - There are 1/2 beats here I think you should map considering you mapped them here 00:54:131 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:17:702 (2,3,4,5,1) - Those build-up snares are in different synth with this - instead this should be related to 00:55:884 (2,3) - these. As I'm following the vocals for those I don't intend on adding more notes.
Thanks for the mod!

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-Nya-
Hi, NM from my queue.

General:
  1. Not really such a big issue, but just thought I’ll point it out. The BG’s size is quite big. Changing the image to jpg might lower the size a bit. This is just to ensure the folder takes up as little space as possible.
  2. The preview point is snapped to a 1/16. Not an issue but just checking if it’s intentional or not.
  3. From 00:00:560 – to 00:09:813 – the hitsounds can’t be heard that clearly. I suggest raising the volume just a bit so the hitsounds supporting the piano can be heard especially.

Lie:
  1. 00:03:676 (1) –The distance of this object can be increased a bit more imo since the beat on the head of the slider is quite strong and the distance don’t really emphasize that. Perhaps somewhere here: X:112
  2. 00:05:624 (2,3) –Hmm, the hyperdash here don’t really make sense to me since the music’s intensity is still the same and you didn’t place any hyperdashes here: 00:02:118 (1,2) – so the hyperdash here 00:05:624 (2,3) – looks out of place.
  3. 00:19:261 (1) –While playing I expected the spacing of this object to be bigger since the beat on the head is quite strong. So making the spacing similar to 00:18:482 (3,4,5,6) – don’t make much sense since the beat on 00:19:261 (1) – is different. So perhaps try placing that slider somewhere here: X:452
  4. 00:23:157 (3,4) –The flow from (3) to (4) was a bit uncomfortable for me. It’s because I expected 00:23:547 (4) – to be placed on the left side of 00:23:157 (3) – Consider placing 00:23:547 (4) – somewhere here: X:192 and just moving the tail of the slider a bit to the right to improve the flow.
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4) –I don’t really understand why you placed a hyperdash here. There is no strong beat on the head of 00:31:534 (4) – so I don’t really see a need to emphasize it. Emphasizing this strong beat would be a good idea though. Same goes for this beat: 00:31:728 – Making one of these or even both a single fruit or the head of a slider would be a good idea so that they can be emphasized.
  6. 00:32:897 (4) –Increase the distance of this fruit a bit because the current spacing is a bit too low imo. Perhaps somewhere here: X:252.
  7. 00:34:261 (6,7) –Same as 00:30:949 (3,4) –
  8. 00:36:404 (1) –There’s a stronger beat on the head of this slider so rather not make the distance similar to the previous circles. Perhaps place the slider somewhere here: X:392
  9. 00:39:910 (2,3) –Placing a hyperdash here would be nice since the beat on 00:40:300 (3) – is quite strong.
  10. 00:51:988 (7) –I think the new combo must be here since the strong beat is on this slider’s head. So add NC here and remove NC here: 00:52:378 (1) –
  11. 00:54:131 (1) –The new combo here don’t make much sense imo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns and there’s no strong beat on 00:54:131 (1) – to support it.
  12. 01:08:547 (6) –To be consistent with 00:55:884 (1) – I think it would be a good idea to place a new combo here.
  13. 01:21:598 (1) –Same as previous instances: Increase the distance of this object a bit for more emphasis. Somewhere here: X:4.

Collab Platter:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs.
  2. 00:05:235 (1) –I suggest spacing this object out a bit more because of the strong beat on the head of the slider. Emphasizing the beat more would be a good idea. Perhaps somewhere here: X:160
  3. 00:06:988 (2,3) –Perhaps make these two sliders’ shapes similar. While playing it’ll look consistent and cohesive. Something like this:
  4. 00:12:248 (1) –Make the spacing of this object just a bit bigger so it’s more similar to the spacing of the previous similar patterns. Somewhere here: X:56 would be nice.
  5. 00:26:663 (3,1) –I suggest placing a hyperdash here to support this hyperdash: 00:25:105 (4,1) – and also because the beat on 00:27:053 (1) – is distinct and can be emphasized more.
  6. 00:30:949 (3,4) –Same as 00:06:988 (2,3) – Would play nice if the shapes were similar. So something like this:
  7. 00:34:456 –Hmm, this beat is so strong and it would be better to have it as a fruit for more emphasis. Having this beat as a tick just isn’t enough imo. So I suggest a pattern like this:
  8. 00:39:521 -^, plus these two objects: 00:38:741 (2,1) – are quite close to each other. Space 00:39:326 (1) – out a bit more. Somewhere here: X:248
  9. 00:40:300 (1) –This new combo is unnecessary imo and looks inconsistent with previous NC’ing patterns. Consider removing the NC here.
  10. 00:47:118 (6,1) –A hyperdash here would fit in perfectly and will also support this hyperdash: 00:48:482 (3,1) – I know it’ll be difficult to incorporate it since previous patterns will probably have to be moved around to make it work so it’s up to you.
  11. 00:50:040 (3) –Increase the distance of this object a bit. It’s quite close to 00:49:455 (2) – and because of the strong beat on the head of the slider, it will be nice to emphasize that more. So perhaps place 00:50:040 (3) – somewhere here: X:96
  12. 01:00:365 –I think you should rather place an object here. Seems out of place to leave this empty. Sort of breaks flow.
  13. 01:04:066 -^, this beat is rather loud.
  14. 01:21:209 (3) –Increase the spacing of this object just a teeny bit. Right now it’s very close to 01:20:819 (2) – Somewhere here would be nice: X:396
  15. 01:22:378 (1) –I suggest rather removing this new combo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns.
  16. 01:22:962 (4,5) –Rather remove this hyperdash. The reason is because the vocals on the head of the slider actually quiets down and don’t become stronger so emphasis isn’t really a good thing here.

Sc4's Salad:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs.
  2. 00:05:040 (4,1,2,3,4) –Rather make the pattern/rhythm here similar to 00:01:923 (1,2) – and 00:08:157 (4,5) – because right now it looks inconsistent with these two and also I like the simplistic patterns better. These patterns: 00:05:040 (4,1,2,3,4) – don’t follow the piano that well for a Salad diff imo.
  3. 00:08:157 (4) –For consistency with 00:01:923 (1) – you have to add a new combo here: 00:08:157 (4) –
  4. 01:07:572 (1,2) –Perhaps turn these two objects into a slider. The reason for this is to prevent 5 consecutive fruits because it looks a bit inconsistent with the other similar patterns.

Cup:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and also inconsistent with the hardest diff.
  2. 00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5) –This combo is quite long for a Cup and exceeds 8 objects. My suggestion would be to add new combo here: 00:27:053 (4) – otherwise the plate might stack up too much.
  3. 00:47:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 00:48:871 (4) –
  4. 01:02:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 01:04:456 (4) –
  5. 00:56:663 (1,2,3) -^, this one only exceeds 8 objects by one so it’s probably fine.
  6. 01:09:131 (1,2,3) -^
  7. 01:15:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  8. 01:18:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  9. 00:17:702 (3,4,5,6) –It would be nice if you can place the other similar patterns like this as well, just to make them more interesting. Right now the placement of these: 00:20:819 (3,4,5,6) – and 00:33:287 (3,4,5,6) – etc is quite boring.

This is a pretty nice set. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good luck with ranking this~
Sc4v4ng3r
Fixed all from Nya's mod, except the last suggestion as making a slider still makes a 5-fruit pattern. I believe slider would add unnecessary difficulty to the map as you also need to catch the droplets(albeit the fact that it is still easy in this case, but still). Thanks for the mod!

@tasuke - This code contains both fixes from benny's and nya's mod so don't worry if this is a separate fix lol
Update
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Time-
You make really good ctb map :O
Topic Starter
tasuke912

-Nya- wrote:

SPOILER
Hi, NM from my queue.

General:
  1. Not really such a big issue, but just thought I’ll point it out. The BG’s size is quite big. Changing the image to jpg might lower the size a bit. This is just to ensure the folder takes up as little space as possible.
  2. The preview point is snapped to a 1/16. Not an issue but just checking if it’s intentional or not.
  3. From 00:00:560 – to 00:09:813 – the hitsounds can’t be heard that clearly. I suggest raising the volume just a bit so the hitsounds supporting the piano can be heard especially.

Lie:
  1. 00:03:676 (1) –The distance of this object can be increased a bit more imo since the beat on the head of the slider is quite strong and the distance don’t really emphasize that. Perhaps somewhere here: X:112
  2. 00:05:624 (2,3) –Hmm, the hyperdash here don’t really make sense to me since the music’s intensity is still the same and you didn’t place any hyperdashes here: 00:02:118 (1,2) – so the hyperdash here 00:05:624 (2,3) – looks out of place.
  3. 00:19:261 (1) –While playing I expected the spacing of this object to be bigger since the beat on the head is quite strong. So making the spacing similar to 00:18:482 (3,4,5,6) – don’t make much sense since the beat on 00:19:261 (1) – is different. So perhaps try placing that slider somewhere here: X:452
  4. 00:23:157 (3,4) –The flow from (3) to (4) was a bit uncomfortable for me. It’s because I expected 00:23:547 (4) – to be placed on the left side of 00:23:157 (3) – Consider placing 00:23:547 (4) – somewhere here: X:192 and just moving the tail of the slider a bit to the right to improve the flow.
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4) –I don’t really understand why you placed a hyperdash here. There is no strong beat on the head of 00:31:534 (4) – so I don’t really see a need to emphasize it. Emphasizing this strong beat would be a good idea though. Same goes for this beat: 00:31:728 – Making one of these or even both a single fruit or the head of a slider would be a good idea so that they can be emphasized.
  6. 00:32:897 (4) –Increase the distance of this fruit a bit because the current spacing is a bit too low imo. Perhaps somewhere here: X:252.
  7. 00:34:261 (6,7) –Same as 00:30:949 (3,4) –
  8. 00:36:404 (1) –There’s a stronger beat on the head of this slider so rather not make the distance similar to the previous circles. Perhaps place the slider somewhere here: X:392
  9. 00:39:910 (2,3) –Placing a hyperdash here would be nice since the beat on 00:40:300 (3) – is quite strong.
  10. 00:51:988 (7) –I think the new combo must be here since the strong beat is on this slider’s head. So add NC here and remove NC here: 00:52:378 (1) –
  11. 00:54:131 (1) –The new combo here don’t make much sense imo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns and there’s no strong beat on 00:54:131 (1) – to support it.
  12. 01:08:547 (6) –To be consistent with 00:55:884 (1) – I think it would be a good idea to place a new combo here.
  13. 01:21:598 (1) –Same as previous instances: Increase the distance of this object a bit for more emphasis. Somewhere here: X:4.

Collab Platter:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and inconsistent with other diffs. I'd keep neat curve pattern
  2. 00:05:235 (1) –I suggest spacing this object out a bit more because of the strong beat on the head of the slider. Emphasizing the beat more would be a good idea. Perhaps somewhere here: X:160
  3. 00:06:988 (2,3) –Perhaps make these two sliders’ shapes similar. While playing it’ll look consistent and cohesive. Something like this:
  4. 00:12:248 (1) –Make the spacing of this object just a bit bigger so it’s more similar to the spacing of the previous similar patterns. Somewhere here: X:56 would be nice. fixed
  5. 00:26:663 (3,1) –I suggest placing a hyperdash here to support this hyperdash: 00:25:105 (4,1) – and also because the beat on 00:27:053 (1) – is distinct and can be emphasized more. fixed
  6. 00:47:118 (6,1) –A hyperdash here would fit in perfectly and will also support this hyperdash: 00:48:482 (3,1) – I know it’ll be difficult to incorporate it since previous patterns will probably have to be moved around to make it work so it’s up to you. i have no idea
  7. 00:50:040 (3) –Increase the distance of this object a bit. It’s quite close to 00:49:455 (2) – and because of the strong beat on the head of the slider, it will be nice to emphasize that more. So perhaps place 00:50:040 (3) – somewhere here: X:96
  8. 01:21:209 (3) –Increase the spacing of this object just a teeny bit. Right now it’s very close to 01:20:819 (2) – Somewhere here would be nice: X:396
  9. 01:22:378 (1) –I suggest rather removing this new combo. It looks inconsistent with the previous patterns. made more distance
  10. 01:22:962 (4,5) –Rather remove this hyperdash. The reason is because the vocals on the head of the slider actually quiets down and don’t become stronger so emphasis isn’t really a good thing here. hmm, okay

Cup:
  1. Uncheck widescreen support. No SB and also inconsistent with the hardest diff.
  2. 00:25:495 (1,2,3,4,5) –This combo is quite long for a Cup and exceeds 8 objects. My suggestion would be to add new combo here: 00:27:053 (4) – otherwise the plate might stack up too much. Fixed.
  3. 00:47:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 00:48:871 (4) – Fixed.
  4. 01:02:897 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^, you can add new combo here: 01:04:456 (4) – Fixed.
  5. 00:56:663 (1,2,3) -^, this one only exceeds 8 objects by one so it’s probably fine.
  6. 01:09:131 (1,2,3) -^
  7. 01:15:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  8. 01:18:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -^
  9. 00:17:702 (3,4,5,6) –It would be nice if you can place the other similar patterns like this as well, just to make them more interesting. Right now the placement of these: 00:20:819 (3,4,5,6) – and 00:33:287 (3,4,5,6) – etc is quite boring. other mother said it's hard for cup, so i'm hesitating to do it now

This is a pretty nice set. If you have any questions regarding my mod, feel free to poke me in-game. Good luck with ranking this~
Thanks a lot. :)
autofanboy
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CLSW
[Collab Platter]
00:09:813 (7) - How about to remove this and add HDash on 00:09:715 (6) - ? just like this00:21:209 (2) - x:304 seems better for the connection of flow with the movement on 00:21:598 (3,4) - .

00:40:689 (2) - It's really a minor thing but how about to ctrl + h and replace on the current place? It looks better for its aesthetic

Does this diff even need mods

[Lie]
00:39:910 (2,3) - This has a long distance than usual and pretty sudden, how about to consider add HDash or decrease the distance some more?
00:50:332 (6) - make a bit more distance is good for playability and aesthetic, try to replace on x : 240
00:53:449 (5) - same reason as above, x : 268
00:59:683 (5) - ^, x : 320
01:12:150 (7) - This time it shall be good to more stacked, x : 448?

Does this diff even need mods (2)

:idea:
Topic Starter
tasuke912

CLSW wrote:

[Collab Platter]
00:09:813 (7) - How about to remove this and add HDash on 00:09:715 (6) - ? just like this Cool. Applied!
00:21:209 (2) - x:304 seems better for the connection of flow with the movement on 00:21:598 (3,4) - . Fixed
Does this diff even need mods

[Lie]
00:39:910 (2,3) - This has a long distance than usual and pretty sudden, how about to consider add HDash or decrease the distance some more? fixed.
00:50:332 (6) - make a bit more distance is good for playability and aesthetic, try to replace on x : 240 i feel it's far. used 1.2x snap instead
00:53:449 (5) - same reason as above, x : 268 ^
00:59:683 (5) - ^, x : 320^
01:12:150 (7) - This time it shall be good to more stacked, x : 448? okay

Does this diff even need mods (2)

:idea:
Thanks CLSW-san!
Sc4v4ng3r
Small update on my hitsounds as they sounded damn weird lol

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osu file format v14

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Ascendance
Hi guys! Sorry for not really replying to mods. Since my half was a bit old, I went through all of your suggestions and adjusted distances as needed. I fixed some small hitsounding things as well (mostly on sliderticks)

Thanks!

osu file format v14

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Title:Everyday World
TitleUnicode:エブリデイワールド
Artist:Yukinoshita Yukino (CV.Hayami Saori) & Yuigahama Yui (CV.Touyama Nao)
ArtistUnicode:雪ノ下雪乃(CV.早見沙織)&由比ヶ浜結衣(CV.東山奈央)
Creator:tasuke912
Version:Collab Platter
Source:やはり俺の青春ラブコメはまちがっている。続
Tags:Ascendance Sc4v4ng3r yahari ore no seishun love comedy wa machigatteiru. zoku ed My Youth Romantic Comedy Is Wrong As I Expected Oregairu SNAFU
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Benita
Recheck as requested

Cup
  1. 00:09:131 (4,1) - Why is distance lower here when 1 is a really strong beat but has the lowest distance in the whole intro
  2. 00:28:222 (2) - I would make this two single notes to better emphasise the downbeat
  3. 00:54:910 (7,1) - You can put a little distance here like you did 00:14:196 (6,1) -
  4. 00:47:702 (2) - 00:49:260 (2) - I think you can remove the repeat on these, I feel it emphasises the drums better and there is almost no audible beat on 00:49:650 - so i feel it works a lot better this way
  5. 00:57:832 (2) - 01:10:300 (2) - same as before about downbeats, should be a single note or something with a little bit more distance on the downbeat instead of a boring repeat...
Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't think these types of dashes fit in a Salad at least when it's that many in a row, pretty strong direction change between the notes right after a dash so maybe try using c shaped sliders instead so the movement after the dashes follow the direction of the dash. Also the 3 note standstill on 00:12:832 (1,2) - feels kind of boring as a build up so maybe consider moving stuff around a bit
  2. 00:27:832 (3) - 00:30:170 (1,3) - I think a few whistles are missing here
  3. 00:28:611 - I think for this section you're using 2.00-2.05 as dash distance but I think it's a tiny bit too low because it can easily be catched without using dash so maybe increase it to like 2.15-2.20, then it's still lower than kiai dashes
  4. 00:36:404 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here? Doesn't look good nor does it make sense to have bigger distance between 1,2
  5. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - a maybe lowe the distance here a bit as most will dash back and forth between all objects which is quite hard, same here 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4,1) -
  6. 01:05:040 (2,3,1) - Not really a fan of this antiflow, especially when the dashes are getting this long, it's almost 0.10x longer than all other dashes
  7. 01:07:767 (2,3) - quite long dash so consider reducing a bit
  8. 01:24:521 (2,1) - 01:25:884 (3,1) - 01:26:858 (2,3) - same as above, all very long dashes compared to the others and the song is easing out so consider reducing these
Collab Platter
  1. 00:06:598 (4,5,1) - I can't really hear any distinct sound on 5 and considering 1 is a pretty strong beat, I'd like to see a hyper here but since 1/4 hypers is unrankable and as I said, the beat on 5 is really low, I'd just delete 5 and have a hyper from 4 to 1.
  2. 00:12:832 (2,1) - 2 would fit really good as a 1/1 slider
  3. 00:16:144 - 00:28:611 - I think all hypers in this section fit way better as dash, remember that platters are supposed to be an introduction to hypers and placing them in almost the calmest section of the map feels weird to me. I can agree to this hyper though 00:28:417 (8,1) - cause it's a new section in the music
  4. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Basically the same as first point, I'd delete 4 and make a hyper from 3 to 1 cause it's a pretty strong beat and works good as a build up to the kiai
  5. 00:51:598 (4,1) - same here, would be really cool with a hyper building up to the kiai
  6. 00:56:274 (3,4,1) - Here again is where the 1/4 rule is stupid... maybe try deleting 4 and adding one repeat to 3 and from there have a hyper from 3 to 1 to emphasise the kiai start
  7. 00:56:663 (1,2,3,4,1) - all these notes can be watched without even touching dash so maybe try moving 4 to x168
  8. 01:07:183 (3,1,2,3) - idk if this is supposed to be a hyper but it's very long if it's supposed to be a dash, also would be nice with some movement on 1,2,3
  9. 01:18:287 (4,5,1) - ah same as before, delete 5 and at least make a dash to 1, it's very strong beat
  10. 01:22:767 (4,5,6,7) - I'd remove hyper between 4 and 5 as 5 isn't a strong beat at all and I can't actually hear any sound on 6 so please remove.. then you can also have a dash to 7 for vocals
Lie
  1. 00:03:482 (6,1) - 00:05:040 (6,1) - Would be nice with either a longer dash or maybe even a hyper between these notes and then remove the hyper on 00:05:624 (2,3) - as it's not really fitting as the first hyper in the map
  2. 00:12:832 (4) - I think this would sound really good as a 1/1 slider and a single note afterwards to hold the melody before the drum builds up, doing so also removes a very awkward hyper between 00:12:832 (4,1) -
  3. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Considering the strong vocals, this should at least be a dash.
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3) - I think this also could look really good with a hyper
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4,1) - This is really really weird, the stronger beats are on slider ends and the hyper going to a weak beat flows really weird considering you've held a consistent hyper to downbeats previously. So basically, remove hyper between 3 and 4, remove one repeat on 4 and add a hyper to 00:31:728 - for consistency. And same goes here 00:34:261 (6,7) -
  6. 00:40:300 (3) - try ctrl+g on this and move 4 a bit to the right, i feel the beat on 3 is pretty strong and leaving it without a dash even seems pretty dull
  7. 00:45:365 (3,1) - why is this a hyper when 00:42:248 (3,1) - 00:43:806 (4,1) - isn't even dashes?
  8. 00:47:897 (2,3,4) - eh the beat is pretty strong on the slider end of 3, try adding one repeat to 2 and make 3 a single note or whatever with a hyper from 2, strong notes don't belong on slider ends ):
  9. 00:48:774 (5,1) - also, hyper here for consistency
  10. 00:51:793 (6,1) - Very strong beat, even has a finisher so maybe try a hyper here as well?
  11. 01:09:715 (2,3) - beat on 3 isn't strong enough for a 1/4 hyper imo, especially when the exact same sounds previously didn't even have a dash 00:57:248 (2,3,4) -
  12. 01:21:404 (5,1) - Hyper for finisher?
Hope you find this helpful! I would still like a few more mods before doing anything with this set though, but good luck!
Sc4v4ng3r

Benny- wrote:

Sc4's Salad
  1. 00:09:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I don't think these types of dashes fit in a Salad at least when it's that many in a row, pretty strong direction change between the notes right after a dash so maybe try using c shaped sliders instead so the movement after the dashes follow the direction of the dash. Also the 3 note standstill on 00:12:832 (1,2) - feels kind of boring as a build up so maybe consider moving stuff around a bit Removed some of the excessive dashes and re-did some slider shapes. Blame my old mapping style :c Also re-did the standstill into something better
  2. 00:27:832 (3) - 00:30:170 (1,3) - I think a few whistles are missing here Whoops added them
  3. 00:28:611 - I think for this section you're using 2.00-2.05 as dash distance but I think it's a tiny bit too low because it can easily be catched without using dash so maybe increase it to like 2.15-2.20, then it's still lower than kiai dashes Well yea, some of them are way too close to each other, but mostly it's fine - a salad player would be convinced the distance is a dash because of how far it looks relative to the other notes. Increased those distances that required them.
  4. 00:36:404 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing equal here? Doesn't look good nor does it make sense to have bigger distance between 1,2 #blameoldmappingstyle
  5. 01:01:339 (1,2,3,4,1) - a maybe lowe the distance here a bit as most will dash back and forth between all objects which is quite hard, same here 01:13:806 (1,2,3,4,1) - Yea sure
  6. 01:05:040 (2,3,1) - Not really a fan of this antiflow, especially when the dashes are getting this long, it's almost 0.10x longer than all other dashes To be honest, now that I think about it, I feel that the distance is more clearer than the other dashes. I now care more about how clear the dash is rather than the linearity of the dash(I thought the opposite in my past mapping style) so I don't really think the distance requires any fixing. However I did re-do the pattern a lil bit so that there's lesser anti-flow, this should make the dash a little bit more natural to follow.
  7. 01:07:767 (2,3) - quite long dash so consider reducing a bit Tbh I'm not sure if I really fixed this or not because I moved this note while I was re-patterning from the above, but I think it is xD
  8. 01:24:521 (2,1) - 01:25:884 (3,1) - 01:26:858 (2,3) - same as above, all very long dashes compared to the others and the song is easing out so consider reducing these Instead of 'easing out', I think because the song is ending, I want to give a last 'bang' of some sort. And the musical section here isn't really weak relative to the other parts of the song(well, other than the chorus), so I believe it is well justified to give stronger dashes to these. Besides, as I also explained above, I feel that the current distances are more clear for the players to know that they are dashes xD
Also did some refining on the difficulty on my own, dashes that looked a little bit too close were increased in distance, and distance increments were reduced slightly to avoid any misconceptions.
Thanks for the mod!

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232,128,30949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,104,31339,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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328,88,32897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,88,33092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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120,248,34456,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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416,224,35430,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,160,36209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,216,36988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,37183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,168,37572,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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176,120,38741,2,0,L|328:96,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,96,39326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,39521,6,0,P|256:176|160:224,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,208,41858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,176,42248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,216,42443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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64,224,43027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,225,45560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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408,316,51014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,24,53157,1,2,0:3:0:0:
156,32,53352,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,32,53547,6,0,L|496:56,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,136,54131,1,2,0:3:0:0:
480,220,54326,1,2,0:3:0:0:
416,272,54521,1,2,0:3:0:0:
332,272,54715,1,2,0:3:0:0:
252,248,54910,1,2,0:3:0:0:
64,168,55105,6,0,P|24:216|72:280,1,140,12|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
224,240,55884,1,2,0:3:0:0:
58,275,56274,1,2,0:3:0:0:
376,288,56663,6,0,P|432:264|456:184,1,140,14|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
384,152,57248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,57443,2,0,L|464:56,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,16,58222,6,0,B|170:23|170:23|240:16,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,8,58806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,0,59001,2,0,P|456:24|408:64,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
128,96,59780,6,0,B|48:64|48:64|8:16,2,140,10|2|2,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,60754,2,0,L|288:152,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
488,128,61339,5,10,0:0:0:0:
220,240,61728,1,12,0:0:0:0:
384,216,62118,1,10,0:0:0:0:
116,184,62508,1,12,0:0:0:0:
320,136,62897,6,0,L|464:120,1,140,14|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
376,216,63482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,63676,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,208,64066,1,2,0:3:0:0:
244,324,64456,6,0,P|284:300|396:268,1,140,10|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
456,264,65040,2,0,L|368:248,1,70
208,212,65624,2,0,L|120:196,1,70,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,66014,6,0,P|404:120|428:192,2,140,10|2|2,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,66988,2,0,L|152:108,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
384,200,67572,5,2,0:3:0:0:
304,228,67767,1,2,0:3:0:0:
120,180,67962,1,12,0:0:0:0:
280,260,68352,1,10,0:0:0:0:
112,256,68741,1,2,0:3:0:0:
416,228,69131,6,0,P|456:204|392:148,1,140,14|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,144,69715,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,80,69910,2,0,L|268:56,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
72,80,70689,5,10,0:0:0:0:
240,112,71079,2,0,L|160:120,1,70,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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408,248,73222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,216,73417,1,2,0:3:0:0:
112,152,73806,5,10,0:0:0:0:
384,88,74196,1,12,0:0:0:0:
216,76,74585,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,16,74975,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,144,75365,6,0,L|112:176,1,140,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,4,76728,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,56,76923,6,0,L|16:88,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,128,77702,1,2,0:3:0:0:
328,160,77897,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,240,78092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,312,78287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,296,78482,6,0,P|72:288|40:184,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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468,224,79845,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,168,80040,6,0,L|504:120,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,72,80819,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,96,81014,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,176,81209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,248,81404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,264,82183,1,2,0:3:0:0:
184,328,82378,1,2,0:3:0:0:
256,288,82572,1,2,0:3:0:0:
344,288,82767,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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136,296,84521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,288,86274,6,0,L|104:264,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
tasuke912

Benny- wrote:

SPOILER
Recheck as requested

Cup
  1. 00:09:131 (4,1) - Why is distance lower here when 1 is a really strong beat but has the lowest distance in the whole intro fixed.
  2. 00:28:222 (2) - I would make this two single notes to better emphasise the downbeat
  3. 00:54:910 (7,1) - You can put a little distance here like you did 00:14:196 (6,1) - fixed.
  4. 00:47:702 (2) - 00:49:260 (2) - I think you can remove the repeat on these, I feel it emphasises the drums better and there is almost no audible beat on 00:49:650 - so i feel it works a lot better this way
  5. 00:57:832 (2) - 01:10:300 (2) - same as before about downbeats, should be a single note or something with a little bit more distance on the downbeat instead of a boring repeat...
    No change in 1/2 repeated sliders. In my opinion, it is not necessary to make big distance for downbeats or strong sound if normal distance has good visual, or makes good flow. Also, in this case, repeat notes are easier to follow and good for beginners.

Collab Platter
  1. 00:06:598 (4,5,1) - I can't really hear any distinct sound on 5 and considering 1 is a pretty strong beat, I'd like to see a hyper here but since 1/4 hypers is unrankable and as I said, the beat on 5 is really low, I'd just delete 5 and have a hyper from 4 to 1. There is actually 1/4 sound though, changed to 1/2 notes in order to emphasize the sound.
  2. 00:12:832 (2,1) - 2 would fit really good as a 1/1 slider i like 1/2 here but 1/1 is good as well. hmm, changed
  3. 00:16:144 - 00:28:611 - I think all hypers in this section fit way better as dash, remember that platters are supposed to be an introduction to hypers and placing them in almost the calmest section of the map feels weird to me. I can agree to this hyper though 00:28:417 (8,1) - cause it's a new section in the music This part isn't calm, and usage of hd is still okay for platter in my opinion. Some ranked maps of platter has more HDash. Removed only two HDs 00:27:053 (1,5) -
  4. 00:50:040 (3,4,1) - Basically the same as first point, I'd delete 4 and make a hyper from 3 to 1 cause it's a pretty strong beat and works good as a build up to the kiai 1/4 drum sound is strong enough to be followed.
  5. 00:51:598 (4,1) - same here, would be really cool with a hyper building up to the kiai since 2 has HD, 1 doesn't need HD. also i prefer emphasizing the vocal
  6. 00:56:274 (3,4,1) - Here again is where the 1/4 rule is stupid... maybe try deleting 4 and adding one repeat to 3 and from there have a hyper from 3 to 1 to emphasise the kiai start fxed
  7. 00:56:663 (1,2,3,4,1) - all these notes can be watched without even touching dash so maybe try moving 4 to x168
  8. 01:22:767 (4,5,6,7) - I'd remove hyper between 4 and 5 as 5 isn't a strong beat at all and I can't actually hear any sound on 6 so please remove.. then you can also have a dash to 7 for vocals changed the pattern
Lie
  1. 00:03:482 (6,1) - 00:05:040 (6,1) - Would be nice with either a longer dash or maybe even a hyper between these notes and then remove the hyper on 00:05:624 (2,3) - as it's not really fitting as the first hyper in the map Almost the same reason as Cup. I prefer no dash because it makes better flow and visual. it's my mapping style
  2. 00:12:832 (4) - I think this would sound really good as a 1/1 slider and a single note afterwards to hold the melody before the drum builds up, doing so also removes a very awkward hyper between 00:12:832 (4,1) - Fixed like platter
  3. 00:19:066 (6,1) - Considering the strong vocals, this should at least be a dash. no change ^
  4. 00:25:884 (2,3) - I think this also could look really good with a hyper Normal Dash works good enough imo
  5. 00:30:949 (3,4,1) - This is really really weird, the stronger beats are on slider ends and the hyper going to a weak beat flows really weird considering you've held a consistent hyper to downbeats previously. So basically, remove hyper between 3 and 4, remove one repeat on 4 and add a hyper to 00:31:728 - for consistency. And same goes here 00:34:261 (6,7) - making hd on notes before strong sounds is more popular, but making hd on strong sound is also good way to emphasize sound in my opinion. not weird to me
  6. 00:40:300 (3) - try ctrl+g on this and move 4 a bit to the right, i feel the beat on 3 is pretty strong and leaving it without a dash even seems pretty dull now it has a dash
  7. 00:45:365 (3,1) - why is this a hyper when 00:42:248 (3,1) - 00:43:806 (4,1) - isn't even dashes? kicked
  8. 00:47:897 (2,3,4) - eh the beat is pretty strong on the slider end of 3, try adding one repeat to 2 and make 3 a single note or whatever with a hyper from 2, strong notes don't belong on slider ends ): changed patterns there
  9. 00:48:774 (5,1) - also, hyper here for consistency there is it now.
  10. 00:51:793 (6,1) - Very strong beat, even has a finisher so maybe try a hyper here as well? I rather emphasize the vocals.
  11. 01:09:715 (2,3) - beat on 3 isn't strong enough for a 1/4 hyper imo, especially when the exact same sounds previously didn't even have a dash 00:57:248 (2,3,4) -
    it is strong enough. Also making different patterns from similar parts/position is common way of emphasizing music, or avoiding being boring.
  12. 01:21:404 (5,1) - Hyper for finisher? no change.
Hope you find this helpful! I would still like a few more mods before doing anything with this set though, but good luck!
Thanks for the mod, I will continue later again!

Edit: updated
KamizonoShinobu
I am concerned about the artist... isn't the CV be Toyama Nao? (From Nardo's ranked mapset https://osu.ppy.sh/s/559266)
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