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Avenged Sevenfold - Blinded In Chains [Taiko]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 18 de junio de 2017 at 4:58:44

Artist: Avenged Sevenfold
Title: Blinded In Chains
Tags: Heavy Metal Hard Rock A7X City of Evil Need for Speed Most Wanted NFSMW
BPM: 192
Filesize: 6470kb
Play Time: 06:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chaos (5,4 stars, 2769 notes)
Download: Avenged Sevenfold - Blinded In Chains
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Why does this arise?

This is one of the songs I liked best when I played Need For Speed: Most Wanted. Especially the races were very epic listening to this. I was a big fan of the band.
Enjoy~
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Changelog
  1. Uploaded beatmap - 23/11/16
  2. Added BG - 24/11/16
  3. Applied Essey6's Mod - 11/12/16
  4. Applied Raphalge's Mod - 14/12/16
  5. Applied Ulqui's Mod - 22/12/16
  6. Applied JessiChan's Mod - 23/12/16
  7. Applied [ R ]'s Mod - 25/12/16
  8. Applied DDM's Mod - 27/12/16
  9. Applied Runa's Mod - 05/01/17
  10. Applied Smallwu's Mod - 16/01/17
  11. Changed BG - 19/01/17
  12. Applied Q____X's Mod - 19/01/17
  13. Applied Nyan's Mod - 22/01/17
  14. Applied Surono's Mod - 14/02/17
  15. Applied frukoyurdakul's mod - 25/03/17
  16. Applied Surono's re-mod - 04/05/17
  17. #1 Surono's Bubble - 08/05/17
  18. Applied frukoyurdakul's re-mod - 12/05/17
  19. Applied Raiden's mod (Bubble popped ) - 16/05/17
  20. Applied Bonsai's timing points - 16/05/17
  21. #1 Raiden's Bubble - 18/05/17
  22. #2 Surono's Bubble - 18/05/17
  23. Rules changed. Approval Surono's - 03/06/17
  24. Desqualify IamKwaN's (Metadata things) and requalify -> - 05/06/17
  25. Desqualify pishifat's (Timing things, request by me)
  26. Surono's Bubble - 17/06/17
  27. Approval Raiden's - 19/06/20
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Essey6
MERRY CHRISTMAS!

or Hanukkah... whatever you celebrate :)
I saw you post this song in the #modreqs chat, and I decided "why not?"
Avenged Sevenfold in a good band, anyways ;)
I didn't mod the end past the BPM change because I ran out of time, but I did skim through it and there may be a few mistakes. Just a heads up :D
Also, if you're up for it, we could maybe do an M4M? If that's possible, I'd like this map modded. Thanks!
Anyways, here you go!
(this took me 3 hours haha)

SPOILER
00:00:981 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) – Change to KDDKDDK, because it’s the same as 00:00:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –
00:07:127 (57) – Change to Kat, because it’s the same sound as the surrounding Kats.
00:07:960 (65) – Change to Don, because 00:07:544 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) – is the same pattern as 00:00:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –
00:09:419 (79,80,81,82,83,84) – Change to KKKKDD
00:11:684 (96) – Delete. I do not here a sound.
00:15:434 (127) - ^^
00:17:309 (143) - ^^
00:22:075 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) – Replace all this and keep using the D K DDK pattern like before. It’s the same.
01:28:012 (145,146) – Switch, because the Don is higher pitched than the Kat.
01:37:075 (197) – Why is this a Kat? It’s the same as 01:34:419 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) – so I think it should be a Don.
01:43:872 (248) – Delete. I do not here a sound.
01:46:997 (276) – ^^
01:48:872 (292) – ^^
01:49:497 (298) - ^^
02:28:872 (630) – Change to Kat.
02:46:997 (779) – Delete. I do not here a sound.
02:51:398 (816) – Change to Don.
02:58:481 (26) – I think this’d sound better as a Kat.
03:00:148 (38,40,41) – Change to Don. They’re no special sound.
03:01:294 (47) – Change to Kat, because there’s a higher pitched sound.
03:01:919 (51) – ^^
03:02:544 (55) - ^^
03:02:856 (58) – Change to Don.
03:07:856 (94,95) - ^^
03:08:481 (98,99,101,102) - ^^
03:09:523 (106) – ^^
03:10:981 (116,117) - ^^
03:12:648 (128,129) - ^^
03:13:273 – Add a Don.
03:13:377 (135) - ^^
03:13:481 (136) – Change to Kat.
03:14:731 (148,149,150) – Change to Kat, because the 3 Kat’s before are the same.
03:22:309 (180) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:22:856 (182) – Change to Kat.
03:23:481 – Add a Kat.
03:24:653 (196,197) – Switch.
03:27:622 (220) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:30:669 (246) – Change to Kat.
03:31:919 (256) - ^^
03:34:419 (275,276,277,278) – Change to Kat, because the next 4 Kat’s are the same.
03:37:465 (303) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:38:012 (306,307) – Move these over 1 tick, then change the first one to a Don.
03:39:340 (318) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:39:809 – Add a Don.
03:41:528 (335) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:42:934 – Add a Don.
03:43:794 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) – Change to DKKKKKDDDDKKDDDDK, like at 02:28:794 –
03:46:997 (384) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:47:622 (389) - ^^
03:48:090 – Add a Don.
03:50:121 (408) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:51:215 (415) - ^^
03:51:997 (420) – ^^
03:52:622 (425) - ^^
03:53:090 (429) - ^^
03:53:872 (435) - ^^
03:54:340 (438) - ^^
03:54:965 – Add a Don
03:55:122 (444,446) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:56:215 (453) - ^^
03:56:840 (458,460) - ^^
03:57:465 – Add a Don
03:57:934 (467) – Change to Don.
03:58:559 (475) - ^^
03:58:872 (479,480,483) - ^^
03:59:809 (491) - ^^
04:00:903 (500) – Delete. I hear no sound.
04:01:215 (503,505) - ^^
04:01:840 (507) - ^^
04:02:465 – Add a Don.
04:02:622 (512) – Delete. I hear no sound.
04:03:090 (516) - ^^
04:03:872 (522) - ^^
04:04:340 (526) - ^^
04:05:122 (533) - ^^
04:06:215 (541) - ^^
04:06:840 (546,548) - ^^
04:07:465 – Add a Don.
04:07:622 (553) - Delete. I hear no sound.
04:08:247 (558,562,567,573) - ^^
04:09:965 – Add a Don.
04:10:590 (577,582,587) - Delete. I hear no sound.
04:12:153 (590,592) - ^^
04:13:715 - Add a Don.
04:14:028 (606) - Delete. I hear no sound.
04:14:340 - Add a Don.
04:20:747 (642,646,650,651,654,658) - Change to Don.
04:22:465 - Add a Don.
04:22:856 (666) - Change to Kat.
04:23:325 (669,670) - ^^
04:24:419 (675,676) - ^^
04:27:387 (690) - Change to Don.
04:27:700 (692) - Change to Kat.
04:28:169 (695,697) - ^^
04:28:637 (698) - Change to Don.
04:28:794 - Add a Kat.
04:29:732 (705,706) – Switch.
04:32:231 (721,722) - Change to Kat.
04:33:090 (729,730,731) – Delete. I hear no sound.
04:33:715 (735,736,738) - ^^
04:35:278 (757,759,761,763,765,767,769,771,773,775,779,783,785) - ^^
04:35:825 (760,762,764) - Change to Don.
04:38:090 (771,772,773) - Delete. I hear no sound.
04:38:715 (777,778,780) - ^^
04:39:653 (784,786) - ^^
04:41:606 (796,797) – Switch.
04:41:919 (798,799) - ^^
04:45:122 (819,827) - Change to Kat.
04:46:372 (835,837) - ^^
04:46:606 (838,839) – Change to Don.
04:46:919 (842,844) - ^^
04:47:309 (847,848,849) - Change to Kat.
04:48:012 – Add a Don.
04:48:169 - ^^
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

poots_mcgoots wrote:

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

or Hanukkah... whatever you celebrate :) Christmas! :D
I saw you post this song in the #modreqs chat, and I decided "why not?"
Avenged Sevenfold in a good band, anyways ;)
I didn't mod the end past the BPM change because I ran out of time, but I did skim through it and there may be a few mistakes. Just a heads up :D Oh well, no matter hahaha. You've helped me!
Also, if you're up for it, we could maybe do an M4M? If that's possible, I'd like this map modded. Thanks!
Anyways, here you go!
(this took me 3 hours haha) Probably tomorrow I make M4M

SPOILER
00:00:981 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) – Change to KDDKDDK, because it’s the same as 00:00:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Changed
00:07:127 (57) – Change to Kat, because it’s the same sound as the surrounding Kats. Ok, i like it
00:07:960 (65) – Change to Don, because 00:07:544 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67) – is the same pattern as 00:00:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Well, fixed
00:09:419 (79,80,81,82,83,84) – Change to KKKKDD Ok
00:11:684 (96) – Delete. I do not here a sound. Deleted
00:15:434 (127) - ^^ ^
00:17:309 (143) - ^^ I follow the guitar
00:22:075 (185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203) – Replace all this and keep using the D K DDK pattern like before. It’s the same. I try to vary. I've made some changes here
01:28:012 (145,146) – Switch, because the Don is higher pitched than the Kat. Fixed
01:37:075 (197) – Why is this a Kat? It’s the same as 01:34:419 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189) – so I think it should be a Don. The guitar
01:43:872 (248) – Delete. I do not here a sound. I hear a battery here, but it's at a very low volume
01:46:997 (276) – ^^ I follow the guitar
01:48:872 (292) – ^^ Same that 01:43:872 (248)
01:49:497 (298) - ^^ Same that 01:46:997 (276)
02:28:872 (630) – Change to Kat. Ok
02:46:997 (779) – Delete. I do not here a sound. There's more intensity here with the guitar
02:51:398 (816) – Change to Don. Ok
02:58:481 (26) – I think this’d sound better as a Kat. Ok
03:00:148 (38,40,41) – Change to Don. They’re no special sound. Ok
03:01:294 (47) – Change to Kat, because there’s a higher pitched sound. Ok
03:01:919 (51) – ^^ ^
03:02:544 (55) - ^^ Ok
03:02:856 (58) – Change to Don. Changed
03:07:856 (94,95) - ^^ Ok
03:08:481 (98,99,101,102) - ^^ Ok
03:09:523 (106) – ^^ ^
03:10:981 (116,117) - ^^ ^
03:12:648 (128,129) - ^^ ^
03:13:273 – Add a Don. Ok
03:13:377 (135) - ^^ ^
03:13:481 (136) – Change to Kat. Ok
03:14:731 (148,149,150) – Change to Kat, because the 3 Kat’s before are the same. Changed
03:22:309 (180) – Delete. I hear no sound. Deleted
03:22:856 (182) – Change to Kat. It's Don for me
03:23:481 – Add a Kat. I don't hear a sound
03:24:653 (196,197) – Switch. Changed
03:27:622 (220) – Delete. I hear no sound. Deleted
03:30:669 (246) – Change to Kat. Ok
03:31:919 (256) - ^^ ^
03:34:419 (275,276,277,278) – Change to Kat, because the next 4 Kat’s are the same. Changed
03:37:465 (303) – Delete. I hear no sound. I follow the guitar
03:38:012 (306,307) – Move these over 1 tick, then change the first one to a Don. I think it's okay as it is
03:39:340 (318) – Delete. I hear no sound. Deleted
03:39:809 – Add a Don. Added
03:41:528 (335) – Delete. I hear no sound. It's the same as the first part
03:42:934 – Add a Don. Added
03:43:794 (352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) – Change to DKKKKKDDDDKKDDDDK, like at 02:28:794 – I used a similar pattern
03:46:997 (384) – Delete. I hear no sound. Deleted
03:47:622 (389) - ^^ ^
03:48:090 – Add a Don. Added
03:50:121 (408) – Delete. I hear no sound.
03:51:215 (415) - ^^
03:51:997 (420) – ^^
03:52:622 (425) - ^^
03:53:090 (429) - ^^
03:53:872 (435) - ^^
03:54:340 (438) - ^^ ^ I try varity, I don't want to always repeat d k d k ddk ddk. I'll modify it later
03:54:965 – Add a Don Ok
03:55:122 (444,446) – Delete. I hear no sound. Vocal
03:56:215 (453) - ^^ ^ I'll see later
03:56:840 (458,460) - ^^ ^
03:57:465 – Add a Don Added
03:57:934 (467) – Change to Don.
03:58:559 (475) - ^^
03:58:872 (479,480,483) - ^^
03:59:809 (491) - ^^ kdddkdddk is boring
04:00:903 (500) – Delete. I hear no sound. Deleted
04:01:215 (503,505) - ^^ The same that 03:54:340 (438)
04:01:840 (507) - ^^ ^
04:02:465 – Add a Don. Added
04:02:622 (512) – Delete. I hear no sound.
04:03:090 (516) - ^^
04:03:872 (522) - ^^
04:04:340 (526) - ^^
04:05:122 (533) - ^^
04:06:215 (541) - ^^
04:06:840 (546,548) - ^^ ^ The same that 03:54:340 (438)
04:07:465 – Add a Don. Added
04:07:622 (553) - Delete. I hear no sound. I'll see later
04:08:247 (558,562,567,573) - ^^
04:09:965 – Add a Don.
04:10:590 (577,582,587) - Delete. I hear no sound.
04:12:153 (590,592) - ^^ I'll see later
04:13:715 - Add a Don. Added
04:14:028 (606) - Delete. I hear no sound. I'll see later
04:14:340 - Add a Don. Added
04:20:747 (642,646,650,651,654,658) - Change to Don. kdddkdddk is boring
04:22:465 - Add a Don. The kiai please
04:22:856 (666) - Change to Kat. Changed
04:23:325 (669,670) - ^^ It's don for me
04:24:419 (675,676) - ^^ Ok
04:27:387 (690) - Change to Don. Changed
04:27:700 (692) - Change to Kat. Ok
04:28:169 (695,697) - ^^ ^
04:28:637 (698) - Change to Don. ^
04:28:794 - Add a Kat. I don't like this
04:29:732 (705,706) – Switch. Ok
04:32:231 (721,722) - Change to Kat. Changed only 722
04:33:090 (729,730,731) – Delete. I hear no sound. It's the same as the first part
04:33:715 (735,736,738) - ^^ ^
04:35:278 (757,759,761,763,765,767,769,771,773,775,779,783,785) - ^^ ^
04:35:825 (760,762,764) - Change to Don. ^
04:38:090 (771,772,773) - Delete. I hear no sound. ^
04:38:715 (777,778,780) - ^^ ^
04:39:653 (784,786) - ^^ Deleted
04:41:606 (796,797) – Switch. I don't like this
04:41:919 (798,799) - ^^ ^
04:45:122 (819,827) - Change to Kat. Changed
04:46:372 (835,837) - ^^ It's fine
04:46:606 (838,839) – Change to Don. Ok
04:46:919 (842,844) - ^^ It's fine
04:47:309 (847,848,849) - Change to Kat. It's don
04:48:012 – Add a Don. I'll see later
04:48:169 - ^^ ^
Thank you very much for mod. It took me 2 hours to apply the changes lol. Sorry if I miss one suggestion :o
I'll mod probably tomorrow since I do not have much time now
Beatmap update~
Raphalge
  • 00:47:231 (135) - k? sharp guitar sound here

    02:12:544 (509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537) - SEXY STREAM

    02:28:794 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645) - this stream looks a bit akward, maybe change it to something like this? , it's easier but looks much better imo

    03:43:794 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - if you accept the above do the same or something similar for this one

    I don't really agree with your use of finishers in parts like this 01:15:044 (55) - I think they could very easily be replaced with normal mapping.

    Is 01:15:044 (55) - to 01:15:044 (55) - really intense enough to have kiai enabled? Seems a bit unnecessary imo
Other than the stuff I pointed out it's a very fun map! Reminds me a lot of stuff like Jehova's YaHVeH :D


edit: holy fuck this post looks ugly im so sorry
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Raphalge wrote:

  • 00:47:231 (135) - k? sharp guitar sound here Ok

    02:12:544 (509,510,511,512,513,514,515,516,517,518,519,520,521,522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537) - SEXY STREAM :D

    02:28:794 (629,630,631,632,633,634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642,643,644,645) - this stream looks a bit akward, maybe change it to something like this? , it's easier but looks much better imo This 02:28:872 (630) - is k, so i don't take your suggestion, but I replace with a lot easy pattern

    03:43:794 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364) - if you accept the above do the same or something similar for this one I used the same pattern ^

    I don't really agree with your use of finishers in parts like this 01:15:044 (55) - I think they could very easily be replaced with normal mapping. My mapping style, I do not think normal mapping is fine here. In addition, only 1 beat is heard

    Is 01:15:044 (55) - to 01:15:044 (55) - really intense enough to have kiai enabled? Seems a bit unnecessary imo Yes, because it is the chorus of the song and what stands out most
Other than the stuff I pointed out it's a very fun map! Reminds me a lot of stuff like Jehova's YaHVeH :D I have been told that my cartography style is something old lol


edit: holy fuck this post looks ugly im so sorry No matter, thanks :D
Thanks for your mod!
Beatmap updated~
Ulqui
Hola! Excelente mapa!

M4M

Chaos
00:39:340 (37) - esa nota se siente mejor como d

02:14:106 (526) - pienso que ese k está demás en ese stream...

En los kiai, las big notes son buenas, pero a mi parecer (sólo a mi parecer, no se qué piensen los demás) es muy exagerado
01:10:200 (29) -
01:10:512 (31) -
prueba borrando esas notas, no se si te guste pero creo que le da un toque más... elegante(?

01:38:794 - 01:40:044 - en esta parte puedo sentir algunos platillos locos, dudo que los estés siguiendo pero el ritmo que genera en 1/3 es bastante relevante como para ignorarlo, aunque es una sugerencia.

Si no te importa el sr: 00:42:465 (74,75) - ctrl+g y 00:42:622 (76) - d

01:07:387 (5) - k(?

esos streams terminan mejor en d, por las propiedades de la batería:
01:19:965 (87,88) - ctrl + g
02:19:965 (573,574) - ctrl + g

en esas partes el kdkdk no me convence, si te parece crear un patrón juguetón sabroso e-e:
01:41:919 (231,232,233,234,235) - kkkdk
01:44:419 (253,254,255,256,257) - kdkkk

02:52:544 - 02:54:887 - eso mappeado hubiese sido genial ;n;

03:15:044 (151) - eso podría ser D, pero sería raro con todo un stream de 1/3 :C

03:46:762 (371,372,373,374) - esto debería ser ddkkd
03:47:387 (376,377,378,379,380) - y esto ddk d
suena mejor en todas las partes parecidas:
04:01:762 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510) -
04:04:340 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530) -

03:39:653 - podrías agregar un k, se juega bonito c:

El mapa está muy bueno, me gusta tu manera de mappear, espero que lo rankeen :D
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Ulqui wrote:

Hola! Excelente mapa! Gracias :D

M4M

Chaos
00:39:340 (37) - esa nota se siente mejor como d Cambiado.

02:14:106 (526) - pienso que ese k está demás en ese stream... Ahí se escucha la batería, ademas que la voz sigue lo mismo. Lo dejaré como está.

En los kiai, las big notes son buenas, pero a mi parecer (sólo a mi parecer, no se qué piensen los demás) es muy exagerado
01:10:200 (29) -
01:10:512 (31) -
prueba borrando esas notas, no se si te guste pero creo que le da un toque más... elegante(? Es buena la idea, pero trato de seguir la bateria y el tono de la guitarra ahí. De igual manera lo pensaré.

01:38:794 - 01:40:044 - en esta parte puedo sentir algunos platillos locos, dudo que los estés siguiendo pero el ritmo que genera en 1/3 es bastante relevante como para ignorarlo, aunque es una sugerencia. Lo estuve pensado, ya que en la versión STD (por Kishiro, best map) usa 1/3 en esa parte, y yo trato de seguir algunas versiones STD bien mapeados. Pero igual no sé... lo pensaré también.

Si no te importa el sr: 00:42:465 (74,75) - ctrl+g y 00:42:622 (76) - d Buena revisión, arreglado.

01:07:387 (5) - k(? Si cambio esto, tendré que cambiar los que suenen parecido para que quede consistente. Creo que no lo haré.

esos streams terminan mejor en d, por las propiedades de la batería:
01:19:965 (87,88) - ctrl + g
02:19:965 (573,574) - ctrl + g Es verdad! Arreglado.

en esas partes el kdkdk no me convence, si te parece crear un patrón juguetón sabroso e-e:
01:41:919 (231,232,233,234,235) - kkkdk
01:44:419 (253,254,255,256,257) - kdkkk A mi no me convence de lo que me has sugerido xD. Esos patrones no son de mi agreado. Pero pensaré en algo para no repetir siempre lo mismo.

02:52:544 - 02:54:887 - eso mappeado hubiese sido genial ;n; El 1/6 de ahí me cagó :c

03:15:044 (151) - eso podría ser D, pero sería raro con todo un stream de 1/3 :C Pienso igual, se escucha raro. Pero ahí se escucha un finisher, lo pensaré.

03:46:762 (371,372,373,374) - esto debería ser ddkkd
03:47:387 (376,377,378,379,380) - y esto ddk d
suena mejor en todas las partes parecidas:
04:01:762 (501,502,503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510) -
04:04:340 (522,523,524,525,526,527,528,529,530) - Aplicado.

03:39:653 - podrías agregar un k, se juega bonito c: No me gusta como queda :/

El mapa está muy bueno, me gusta tu manera de mappear, espero que lo rankeen :D Gracias, eso espero c:
Muchas gracias por el mod :)
Beatmap updated
JessiChan
Buenas, aca petición de M4M o/

Intentaré hacerlo lo mejor que pueda, está muy bien mapeado. ;u;

Chaos


  1. 00:19:965 (169,170) - Podrías hacer aca Ctrl + g si quieres.
  2. 00:40:122 (44,45) - Lo mismo, ctrl + g creo que sonaría mucho mejor.
  3. Mm... Creo que, en toda esta sección: 01:10:044 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - O donde tienes esas notas grandes, podrías hacer lo siguiente (sólo pruébalo, si no te gusta cómo se oye, lo dejas como está): 01:10:200 (29,30,31) - En esta parte quitar los Finishers y colocar tripletes si gustas y 01:10:825 (33,34) - Quitar los finishers a estos dos. Y repetirías lo mismo en los demás. Puedes usar el sonido fuerte de estos solo para enfatizar la parte más pesada de la voz. Es sólo opinión personal, obviamente no tienes que aplicarlo obligatoriamente. :3
  4. 02:52:544 - ¡Oye! En todo este pedazo puedes poner unas notas hermosas jajaja. Sólo digo ya que como taiko es un modo de sólo percusión, esta parte se podría aprovechar mucho. Podrías colocarle algún SV donde sea más lento si quieres hacerlo notar diferente, no se.
  5. 03:29:262 (223) - Podrías poner una k aca.
  6. 03:32:700 (248,249) - ctrl + g aca.
  7. 04:40:200 (791,792,793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800,801,802,803,804,805,806) - Toda esta sección... Creo que son demasiados Finishers, no lo sé. Podrías poner uno si y uno no.
Lindo map, realmente me costó modearlo. ¡Suerte!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

JessiChan wrote:

Buenas, aca petición de M4M o/

Intentaré hacerlo lo mejor que pueda, está muy bien mapeado. ;u; No te preocupes, me pasa mucho cuando modero mapas bien mapeados xD

Chaos


  1. 00:19:965 (169,170) - Podrías hacer aca Ctrl + g si quieres. Esto 00:20:044 (170) - de por si es d, no lo cambiaré. Trato de seguir la batería
  2. 00:40:122 (44,45) - Lo mismo, ctrl + g creo que sonaría mucho mejor. Agregué k aquí 00:40:122 (44) - . 00:40:200 (45) - esto es un k de por si (batería)
  3. Mm... Creo que, en toda esta sección: 01:10:044 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - O donde tienes esas notas grandes, podrías hacer lo siguiente (sólo pruébalo, si no te gusta cómo se oye, lo dejas como está): 01:10:200 (29,30,31) - En esta parte quitar los Finishers y colocar tripletes si gustas y 01:10:825 (33,34) - Quitar los finishers a estos dos. Y repetirías lo mismo en los demás. Puedes usar el sonido fuerte de estos solo para enfatizar la parte más pesada de la voz. Es sólo opinión personal, obviamente no tienes que aplicarlo obligatoriamente. :3 Me gustó tu idea, pero no puedo hacerlo sonar bien, iré probando y quizás acepte esto
  4. 02:52:544 - ¡Oye! En todo este pedazo puedes poner unas notas hermosas jajaja. Sólo digo ya que como taiko es un modo de sólo percusión, esta parte se podría aprovechar mucho. Podrías colocarle algún SV donde sea más lento si quieres hacerlo notar diferente, no se. Realmente quería que mapear esto, pero en esos patrones 1/3 en el medio hay un 1/6 y como que lo hace demasiado inconsistente. Veré que puedo hacer
  5. 03:29:262 (223) - Podrías poner una k aca. Ok
  6. 03:32:700 (248,249) - ctrl + g aca. No me gusta como suena
  7. 04:40:200 (791,792,793,794,795,796,797,798,799,800,801,802,803,804,805,806) - Toda esta sección... Creo que son demasiados Finishers, no lo sé. Podrías poner uno si y uno no. Removí algunos finisher en el final para que quede parecido a esto 02:19:419 -
Lindo map, realmente me costó modearlo. ¡Suerte! Gracias :D
Gracias por tu mod!
Beatmap updated~
[R]
yo

[Chaos]
00:12:231 - can be kdkdk, comparing 00:14:731 - has different pitch guitar
00:15:981 - same ^
00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - remove finisher ? drum sound more strong in 00:37:544 -
02:29:106 - with 02:29:184 - invert, stream sems too hard
02:49:497 - change kat ?
03:03:481 - maybe change kddkddk, make same with 03:00:981 - to fit the flow

while you follow the drum 03:16:919 - change don, if guitar 03:17:231 - make kdkdk
03:44:106 - with 03:44:184 - invert ?
03:59:575 - change kat ?
05:14:407 - change don
05:20:807 - ^

well maybe just that
good luck
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

[R] wrote:

yo o/

[Chaos]
00:12:231 - can be kdkdk, comparing 00:14:731 - has different pitch guitar Nice, changed
00:15:981 - same ^ I think it's hear same that 00:14:731 (121,122,123,124,125) -
00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - remove finisher ? drum sound more strong in 00:37:544 - I replaced with kat, so I think is better
02:29:106 - with 02:29:184 - invert, stream sems too hard I think maybe change this part, is some hard
02:49:497 - change kat ? Sure!
03:03:481 - maybe change kddkddk, make same with 03:00:981 - to fit the flow I don't like as hear

while you follow the drum 03:16:919 - change don, if guitar 03:17:231 - make kdkdk I follow the battery. However, here 03:16:919 (155) - don't hear a battery, but it does not look very good without anything there, so I'll leave it as it is.
03:44:106 - with 03:44:184 - invert ? The same that 02:29:106 -
03:59:575 - change kat ? I don't like this as hear
05:14:407 - change don I think I remap this part
05:20:807 - ^ ^

well maybe just that
good luck
Thanks for mod :D
Beatmap updated~
ddm
From your queue (m4m)
chaos
Hi gaston \( ᐕ )/

00:19:262 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170) - ddkdkdkkkdk - 00:19:262 (166,167,168,170) has high pitch
ㄴ00:20:200 (171) - d

00:38:794 ~ 00:39:731 - I think this part needs some 1/6 (drum sounds)

00:40:122 (44) - d

01:00:669 - add k (cymbal sound)
01:03:169 - ^ (with vocal sound)
01:05:669 - ^ (with vocal sound)
01:08:169 - ^ ? (with vocal sound)

01:39:575 (215,216,217) - move to 01:39:419 and add d at 01:39:653
ㄴ01:39:731 ~ 01:39:939 - kdk (1/3, guitar and drum sounds)

01:49:965 - add d
01:51:059 (320) - d

02:14:887 (543) - k (high pitch)

05:03:740 (33,34) - d ?

05:06:807 - add k

05:16:607 ~ 05:17:007 - How about kdkdk ?

05:20:307 - add k
Epic map with Epic song
gl \( ᐕ )/
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

DDM wrote:

From your queue (m4m)
chaos
Hi gaston \( ᐕ )/ o/

00:19:262 (160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170) - ddkdkdkkkdk - 00:19:262 (166,167,168,170) has high pitch I don't like the sound
ㄴ00:20:200 (171) - d This is kat, I follow the battery

00:38:794 ~ 00:39:731 - I think this part needs some 1/6 (drum sounds) All is 1/6. But I don't want to make it very difficult So i not accept this

00:40:122 (44) - d I accept this in the previous mod, I'll think if remove this

01:00:669 - add k (cymbal sound)
01:03:169 - ^ (with vocal sound)
01:05:669 - ^ (with vocal sound)
01:08:169 - ^ ? (with vocal sound) I follow the battery only

01:39:575 (215,216,217) - move to 01:39:419 and add d at 01:39:653
ㄴ01:39:731 ~ 01:39:939 - kdk (1/3, guitar and drum sounds) I think that this is fine. But soon maybe I remap this part

01:49:965 - add d Added
01:51:059 (320) - d Changed

02:14:887 (543) - k (high pitch) This is don (battery)

05:03:740 (33,34) - d ? 05:03:807 (34) - changed only

05:06:807 - add k I follow the battery only

05:16:607 ~ 05:17:007 - How about kdkdk ? Changed

05:20:307 - add k This is kat, but i add don because it sound better
Epic map with Epic song Thanks :)
gl \( ᐕ )/
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Runa
Hi~

[cHAOs]
00:01:086 (9) -,02:51:085 (817) - k
00:29:497 (251) - k
00:51:919 (180) - , 00:52:387 (183) - k
00:59:419 - ~ 00:59:887 - follow pretty big 1/3 sounds?
01:19:809 (89) - k
01:23:794 (119) - ,01:24:419 (124) - k?
02:02:075 (448,449,450) - ctrl g
02:09:419 (490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498) - kkddkkkkd (drum pitch)
02:29:028 (636) - k
02:52:752 (829) - ,02:53:064 (832) - why not k?
04:27:544 (684,685) - ctrl g
05:15:407 (100,101) - dkd sounds?


somtimes i felt the music is unfollowed (just my thought)
but streams are cool xD
Good luck~
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Runa wrote:

Hi~

[cHAOs]
00:01:086 (9) -,02:51:085 (817) - k Fixed
00:29:497 (251) - k Ok
00:51:919 (180) - , 00:52:387 (183) - k Fixed
00:59:419 - ~ 00:59:887 - follow pretty big 1/3 sounds? Mmm, ok, accepted
01:19:809 (89) - k Ok
01:23:794 (119) - ,01:24:419 (124) - k? Fixed only 01:23:794 (119) -. 1:24:419 (124) -This is the same sound that 01:22:700 (111) -
02:02:075 (448,449,450) - ctrl g This 02:02:231 (450) - is kat, so I don't accept this
02:09:419 (490,491,492,493,494,495,496,497,498) - kkddkkkkd (drum pitch) Fixed lol, I don't noticed
02:29:028 (636) - k Ok
02:52:752 (829) - ,02:53:064 (832) - why not k? Well, fixed
04:27:544 (684,685) - ctrl g Ok
05:15:407 (100,101) - dkd sounds? Fixed


somtimes i felt the music is unfollowed (just my thought) I'll see some parts
but streams are cool xD Thanks :D
Good luck~
Thanks for mod :D
Beatmap updated~
Smallwu
Hi, I forgot that I accepted your request :3
Anyway. sorry for late
[Chaos]
00:30:200 - 00:34:887 - Add green line(s) to let volume down|I think you don't need to use 80% volume to highlight a part that only has low pitch guitar. Drum part also uses 80%, I think you can let this part some changes.

00:38:794 - 00:39:731 - Weird, but I can't fix anything. Try to change it :3 ?

01:11:450 (37) - d It just a normal drum, not like 01:10:669 (33,34,35,36) and d is easier to read than D

01:13:637 (50) - ^ ^

01:16:606 (67) - ^ ^

01:17:075 (71,72,73) - D k D To keep consistency like 01:12:075 (42,43,44)

01:18:637 (79) - d Reason same as above

01:28:950 - Move the green line to 01:28:794 ? Just suggest because annoying bar line

02:01:450 (447) - d Reason same as above

02:03:637 (460) - ^ ^

02:06:606 (477) - ^ ^

02:07:075 (481,482,483) - D k D To keep consistency like 02:02:075 (452,453,454)

02:08:637 (489) - d Reason same as above :3

02:18:325 (574,575) - Ctrl+G I like that Because KDKDKDKDKDKD is hard to hit (;´Д`)

02:53:169 - 02:54:731 - IT'S TOO ANTI-HUMAN!! At least please change them to kat That will be easier a little :?

04:23:950 (663) - d Reason same as above

04:26:137 (676) - ^ ^

04:29:106 (693) - ^ ^

04:29:575 (697,698,699) - D k D to keep consistency like 04:24:575 (668,669,670)

04:31:137 (705) - d Reason same as above

04:40:825 (794,795) - Ctrl+G I like Because KDKDKDKDKDKD is hard to hit =O=

05:49:507 (275,276) - Ctrl+G Because 05:49:407 sounds same as 05:49:507 . And 05:49:407 is kat, so 05:49:507 use kat, too.

05:52:707 (298,299) - ^ ^

05:55:607 (318,319,320,321,322) - kkkkd? Because it's the last Seven-Hits, I think you don't need to use the pattern like above

=====
That's all, GL with Rank!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, I forgot that I accepted your request :3
Anyway. sorry for late
[Chaos]
00:30:200 - 00:34:887 - Add green line(s) to let volume down|I think you don't need to use 80% volume to highlight a part that only has low pitch guitar. Drum part also uses 80%, I think you can let this part some changes. Added sv with 40% volume

00:38:794 - 00:39:731 - Weird, but I can't fix anything. Try to change it :3 ? Something changed

01:11:450 (37) - d It just a normal drum, not like 01:10:669 (33,34,35,36) and d is easier to read than D Fixed

01:13:637 (50) - ^ ^ Here is the guitar pitch

01:16:606 (67) - ^ ^ Fixed

01:17:075 (71,72,73) - D k D To keep consistency like 01:12:075 (42,43,44) I think that is not very prominent

01:18:637 (79) - d Reason same as above Same reason

01:28:950 - Move the green line to 01:28:794 ? Just suggest because annoying bar line Ok

02:01:450 (447) - d Reason same as above Ok

02:03:637 (460) - ^ ^ Guitar pitch

02:06:606 (477) - ^ ^ Ok

02:07:075 (481,482,483) - D k D To keep consistency like 02:02:075 (452,453,454) The same that 01:17:075 (71,72,73) -

02:08:637 (489) - d Reason same as above :3 Guitar pitch

02:18:325 (574,575) - Ctrl+G I like that Because KDKDKDKDKDKD is hard to hit (;´Д`) Nice, changed

02:53:169 - 02:54:731 - IT'S TOO ANTI-HUMAN!! At least please change them to kat That will be easier a little :? I'll consider replace this for a spiner maybe

04:23:950 (663) - d Reason same as above Ok

04:26:137 (676) - ^ ^ Guitar pitch

04:29:106 (693) - ^ ^ Ok

04:29:575 (697,698,699) - D k D to keep consistency like 04:24:575 (668,669,670) The same that before

04:31:137 (705) - d Reason same as above Guitar pitch

04:40:825 (794,795) - Ctrl+G I like Because KDKDKDKDKDKD is hard to hit =O= Fixed

05:49:507 (275,276) - Ctrl+G Because 05:49:407 sounds same as 05:49:507 . And 05:49:407 is kat, so 05:49:507 use kat, too.

05:52:707 (298,299) - ^ ^

05:55:607 (318,319,320,321,322) - kkkkd? Because it's the last Seven-Hits, I think you don't need to use the pattern like above I changed with ddkdkdd

=====
That's all, GL with Rank!
Thanks for mod Smallwu! :D
Beatmap updated~
Q____X
Hola ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ este es mi pobre mod xD


[Chaos]

  • Solo doy estas sugerencias por que en si todo el mapa esta bien xD
    1. 00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - en mi opinion quedaria mejor un k d k d la razon es que para mi lo que son la nota 17 y 19 tienen un sonido un poco mas bajo que las otras dos, cambiandolas quedaria bien
    2. 00:38:794 (30) - y 00:38:872 - el inicio de ese stream es algo raro, propodria cambiar 00:38:794 (30) - a k y agregar un d en 00:38:872 -
    3. 00:43:247 (82,83,84,85,86,87) - - queda mejor asi no?
    4. 00:51:919 (178) - d
    5. 00:56:919 (204) - ^
    6. 01:36:919 (202) - ^

      Buena suerte con el rank
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Q____X wrote:

Hola ʕ/ ·ᴥ·ʔ/ este es mi pobre mod xD


[Chaos]

  • Solo doy estas sugerencias por que en si todo el mapa esta bien xD Ya dije que no importa, gracias :DD
    1. 00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - en mi opinion quedaria mejor un k d k d la razon es que para mi lo que son la nota 17 y 19 tienen un sonido un poco mas bajo que las otras dos, cambiandolas quedaria bien Lo cambié a d k d k para que en 19 no quede d D
    2. 00:38:794 (30) - y 00:38:872 - el inicio de ese stream es algo raro, propodria cambiar 00:38:794 (30) - a k y agregar un d en 00:38:872 - Es raro la bateria acá, es una mezcla de 1/6 y 1/8. No tengo idea de como hacerlo, así que por ahora aplico tu sugerencia
    3. 00:43:247 (82,83,84,85,86,87) - - queda mejor asi no? Mucho mejor
    4. 00:51:919 (178) - d
    5. 00:56:919 (204) - ^
    6. 01:36:919 (202) - ^ Sigo el tono de la guitarra ahí también

      Buena suerte con el rank
Gracias por tu mod y estrella!
Beatmap updated~
Nyan
[Chaos]


05:04:140 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - (suggestion)

->

05:11:207 (73) - don
05:12:307 - add a don
05:13:307 - add a don
05:15:707 - add a don
05:17:607 (115) - don
05:18:707 - add a don
05:19:707 - add a don
05:21:907 - add a don

06:12:207 (1) - this can be removed

192bpm part is dramatic
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Nyan wrote:

[Chaos]


05:04:140 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - (suggestion) I don't like this

->

05:11:207 (73) - don Ok
05:12:307 - add a don Added
05:13:307 - add a don No, consistence with 05:48:407 (266,267,268,269) -
05:15:707 - add a don Added
05:17:607 (115) - don Ok
05:18:707 - add a don Added
05:19:707 - add a don No
05:21:907 - add a don Added

06:12:207 (1) - this can be removed Mmmm, maybe. I'll see later

192bpm part is dramatic
Thanks for mod and star! :D
Beatmap updated~
Surono
hello

>General
* can you decrease HP by 1? since the duration of map is long
* "Tags: Rock Heavy Metal Hard Rock A7X City of Evil Need for Speed Most Wanted NFSMW" delete that underline words from tags, there is 2

>Chaos
* 00:11:059 - 00:11:684 - 00:15:434 - 00:16:684 - I think these spot are potential adding don to follow the guitar, 00:17:309 (74,75) - and you can change these as kat as high guitar. too much ddk, can you consindering variation pattern?
* 00:21:215 - same above with reason, add don and you already did 00:22:465 - 00:23:715 - but with kat to follow high guitar, right?
* 00:27:231 (159) - you can kat this to follow guitar, 00:27:231 (159,160,161) - kdk suit the guitar imo
* 00:28:559 - kat this to follow guitar? seems dkk pattern are rarely in this map
* 00:39:184 - I hear snare in here, I think it would hurt to play bcus its simple longstream and at begining of map *if get miss, just retry*
* 00:41:450 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - if you want change this stream to kkdkkdkkddk to suit the guitar flow, imo this more accurate than repetitive colors
* 00:43:325 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - kdkkdkd and 00:43:169 - change kat, the reason same above
* 00:45:512 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - can you do something with these? because they repetitive and not suit guitar at all
* 00:47:075 - change to don? seems kat in here are too much be used and too over with emphasize
* 00:48:950 - don? you need stop emphasize guitar from here (00:48:169 (147,148,149,151,152,153) - 3 kat for high guitar, but 00:48:794 (155,156) - here just need 2 kat because guitar are going to down
* 01:01:294 (235,236,237,238,239) - I dont hear any sounds are supposed to be kkkdk, seems over.. kdddk is enough to emphasize with vocal
* 01:08:950 - you can change this to kat, I hear some sounds are fit as kkkdk pattern
* 01:20:434 - 01:21:684 - like my previous suggestion if you applied and 01:22:309 - here you can add don for guitar flow *rarely to see kdd*
* 01:25:434 - 01:26:684 - and 01:27:309 - same above with reason
* 01:41:294 (232,233,234,235,236) - like before 01:01:294 (235,236,237,238,239) - kdddk
* 01:44:887 - you can emphasize this hithat with kat
* 02:12:934 - kat this for consistency like 02:12:544 (517,518) - you did here for similar sounds
* 02:14:340 (540,544) - no these... 02:14:184 - kat, 02:14:340 (540) - don and 02:14:653 (544,546) - ctrl g for hand balance alternating and suit the guitar nor the vocal
* 02:24:262 (605,610) - kat these to emphasize the cymbal?
* 02:29:106 (634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642) - kdkkddkkd because 02:29:106 - this snare and 02:29:262 (636,637,640,641) - these tom drum
* 02:31:450 (657,658,659) - I think this 3plet its 02:31:762 - from here like you did before and 02:32:153 - delete this. then 02:30:434 - 02:31:684 - 02:32:309 - add don in these spot if you applied my previous suggestion
* from 02:35:044 - here until 02:48:481 - you can do something if you agree with my previous suggestion structure pattern *for kdddk / kdd pattern*
* 03:24:106 - I think from here can be dkddk kdk if you interesting to follow guitar
* 03:27:387 - kat to follow guitar? too much don in here
* 03:36:215 - don, you did 03:37:465 - like this but with kat
* 03:43:559 - same like 00:28:559 -here if you applied before
* 03:43:794 - emphasize this cymbal with kat? I think its strong as kat
* 03:47:622 - add don? seems guitar flow and vocal is suit here
* 04:02:622 - same above
* 04:05:434 - kat, reason same above
* 04:14:419 (607,608,609,610,611,612,613) - I think kkddkkd suit with wild drum
* 04:18:325 - kat to follow guitar
* 04:36:684 (761,763) - ctrl g for hand balance

this good because properly mapped based drum, but too much repetitive pattern. if you more interesting to follow guitar, you can make this map more fun to play and have more variation. you should not have to follow snare drum mostly (especially in making longstream colors), that makes you creativity limited.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

hello

>General
* can you decrease HP by 1? since the duration of map is long Well
* "Tags: Rock Heavy Metal Hard Rock A7X City of Evil Need for Speed Most Wanted NFSMW" delete that underline words from tags, there is 2 Removed

>Chaos
* 00:11:059 - 00:11:684 - 00:15:434 - 00:16:684 - I think these spot are potential adding don to follow the guitar, 00:17:309 (74,75) - and you can change these as kat as high guitar. too much ddk, can you consindering variation pattern? Ok, applied
* 00:21:215 - same above with reason, add don and you already did 00:22:465 - 00:23:715 - but with kat to follow high guitar, right? Added don
* 00:27:231 (159) - you can kat this to follow guitar, 00:27:231 (159,160,161) - kdk suit the guitar imo Ok, is better
* 00:28:559 - kat this to follow guitar? seems dkk pattern are rarely in this map Changed
* 00:39:184 - I hear snare in here, I think it would hurt to play bcus its simple longstream and at begining of map *if get miss, just retry* I changed with a simple pattern
* 00:41:450 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71) - if you want change this stream to kkdkkdkkddk to suit the guitar flow, imo this more accurate than repetitive colors Applied this.
* 00:43:325 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - kdkkdkd and 00:43:169 - change kat, the reason same above Applied, but I put ctrl + g here 00:43:715 (90,91) - for follow the guitar (kat)
* 00:45:512 (113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123) - can you do something with these? because they repetitive and not suit guitar at all I did something
* 00:47:075 - change to don? seems kat in here are too much be used and too over with emphasize Changed to don
* 00:48:950 - don? you need stop emphasize guitar from here (00:48:169 (147,148,149,151,152,153) - 3 kat for high guitar, but 00:48:794 (155,156) - here just need 2 kat because guitar are going to down Ok, applied
* 01:01:294 (235,236,237,238,239) - I dont hear any sounds are supposed to be kkkdk, seems over.. kdddk is enough to emphasize with vocal Changed to kdddk
* 01:08:950 - you can change this to kat, I hear some sounds are fit as kkkdk pattern Changed
* 01:20:434 - 01:21:684 - like my previous suggestion if you applied and 01:22:309 - here you can add don for guitar flow *rarely to see kdd* Applied
* 01:25:434 - 01:26:684 - and 01:27:309 - same above with reason Ok
* 01:41:294 (232,233,234,235,236) - like before 01:01:294 (235,236,237,238,239) - kdddk Ok
* 01:44:887 - you can emphasize this hithat with kat I don't like the sound :/
* 02:12:934 - kat this for consistency like 02:12:544 (517,518) - you did here for similar sounds Ok
* 02:14:340 (540,544) - no these... 02:14:184 - kat, 02:14:340 (540) - don and 02:14:653 (544,546) - ctrl g for hand balance alternating and suit the guitar nor the vocal I tried follow the vocal and the drum, but I went wrong. Fixed
* 02:24:262 (605,610) - kat these to emphasize the cymbal? I don't like the sound
* 02:29:106 (634,635,636,637,638,639,640,641,642) - kdkkddkkd because 02:29:106 - this snare and 02:29:262 (636,637,640,641) - these tom drum I don't like this suggestion, I change the pattern and (02:29:106 (640,641) - these to kat)
* 02:31:450 (657,658,659) - I think this 3plet its 02:31:762 - from here like you did before and 02:32:153 - delete this. then 02:30:434 - 02:31:684 - 02:32:309 - add don in these spot if you applied my previous suggestion Applied
* from 02:35:044 - here until 02:48:481 - you can do something if you agree with my previous suggestion structure pattern *for kdddk / kdd pattern* Okay, I applied something similar for variation
* 03:24:106 - I think from here can be dkddk kdk if you interesting to follow guitar I added don here 03:24:653 -
* 03:27:387 - kat to follow guitar? too much don in here Ok
* 03:36:215 - don, you did 03:37:465 - like this but with kat Added don
* 03:43:559 - same like 00:28:559 -here if you applied before Ok
* 03:43:794 - emphasize this cymbal with kat? I think its strong as kat I don't like the sound
* 03:47:622 - add don? seems guitar flow and vocal is suit here Added
* 04:02:622 - same above Ok
* 04:05:434 - kat, reason same above Added here 04:05:122 (534) -
* 04:14:419 (607,608,609,610,611,612,613) - I think kkddkkd suit with wild drum Changed
* 04:18:325 - kat to follow guitar Ok
* 04:36:684 (761,763) - ctrl g for hand balance Ok

this good because properly mapped based drum, but too much repetitive pattern. if you more interesting to follow guitar, you can make this map more fun to play and have more variation. you should not have to follow snare drum mostly (especially in making longstream colors), that makes you creativity limited. I'll keep that in mind, thank you

Good Luck!
Thanks for mod and shoot star!
Beatmap updated~
frukoyurdakul
Okay I love this band and this song so I needed to check this map out. And I believe it can be improved further.

[Chaos]

00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - Why not k k k k? There are no differences between guitar, drums and bass on these notes.

00:39:653 (41) - How about deleting this note and 00:38:794 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - turn them to kkddddkkdddd and 00:39:731 (42) - making this one finisher? I bet it'll sound a lot better this way.

00:41:450 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Considering the other parts of the stream this section does not flow good I think. You can edit it as kkkdkkkk for example.
It will follow the guitar better that way.

00:49:809 (168,169,170) - Since there are no sounds on the music, I suggest deleting them. And, 00:49:653 (166) - delete this one, 00:49:731 (167) - add finisher and 00:49:497 (164,165) - ctrl + g to follow the drums better.

01:09:419 (22,23,24,25,26) - The rest of these kinds of patterns have drum sounds on it but in this one it doesn't have these kinds of sounds. So I think you should delete 01:09:497 (23,25) - those two and 01:09:575 (24) - change this to a don.

01:10:825 (34,35) - Finishers are too much I think. And you can change these ones to kat since there are snare sounds on them. Because I can see that you didn't follow the vocals so following the drums is the right option. If you accept this, you need to apply them to other sections too.

01:15:669 (62,63,64,65) - Remove finishers only since there are no crash cymbal sounds.

01:21:294 (103) - ^

01:49:419 (309,310,311,312,313) - You can change this one to k ddk, it will follow the drums properly.

02:12:544 - This stream is too long for this section. There are literally no 1/4 notes and yet you mapped that part as a stream. It sounds nice, but it doesn't fit the rest of the map because that part is overmapped and others aren't. If you accept this, don't forget to change it in the other parts too.

02:17:544 (568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579) - Usage of the finishers like this is too much I think. There are no sounds that supporting them, so remove finishers except the first one. If you accept this, don't forget to change it in the other parts too.

02:22:544 (600) - Add finisher, there is a crash cymbal sound.

02:53:273 (844,845,847,848,850,851) - You need to add 1 more note between these notes. It feels so undermapped that way, skipping a sound like that where are only drums is not good for this map thinking about the rest of it.

04:14:419 (606,607,608,609,610,611,612) - The drum sounds are 1/6 on this pattern, not 1/4.

04:18:325 (618) - This note breaks consistency, turn this into don.

05:03:607 (31,32,33) - kkd? The drums are going like that.

05:14:707 (98) - Move this one to 05:15:107 - here to support the kick sound on that spot.

05:24:007 - Calm part kiai? I don't support that but it's your personal preference.

05:46:707 (256) - Move this one to 05:47:107 - here. If you think guitar will not fit, then add another note on 05:46:707 (256) - this spot. It also for 05:14:707 this spot too.

05:51:307 - Add don here to support the kick sound.

05:52:307 (295,296) - Ctrl + g to support the snare sound on 295.

05:55:507 (318,319) - ^

05:56:207 (324,325,326,327,328) - How about adding 2 notes on this pattern? It will fit the drums.

05:57:107 (330) - k because of the snare.

Good luck on the ranking way!
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Okay I love this band and this song so I needed to check this map out. And I believe it can be improved further.

[Chaos]

00:36:919 (16,17,18,19) - Why not k k k k? There are no differences between guitar, drums and bass on these notes. Ok

00:39:653 (41) - How about deleting this note and 00:38:794 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - turn them to kkddddkkdddd and 00:39:731 (42) - making this one finisher? I bet it'll sound a lot better this way. Sound good

00:41:450 (61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - Considering the other parts of the stream this section does not flow good I think. You can edit it as kkkdkkkk for example.
It will follow the guitar better that way. Ok

00:49:809 (168,169,170) - Since there are no sounds on the music, I suggest deleting them. And, 00:49:653 (166) - delete this one, 00:49:731 (167) - add finisher and 00:49:497 (164,165) - ctrl + g to follow the drums better. I follow the guitar, keep

01:09:419 (22,23,24,25,26) - The rest of these kinds of patterns have drum sounds on it but in this one it doesn't have these kinds of sounds. So I think you should delete 01:09:497 (23,25) - those two and 01:09:575 (24) - change this to a don. I keep for inconsistency

01:10:825 (34,35) - Finishers are too much I think. And you can change these ones to kat since there are snare sounds on them. Because I can see that you didn't follow the vocals so following the drums is the right option. If you accept this, you need to apply them to other sections too. I follow the vocal here, keep

01:15:669 (62,63,64,65) - Remove finishers only since there are no crash cymbal sounds. Consistence with 01:10:669 (33,34,35,36) -

01:21:294 (103) - ^ Guitar tone

01:49:419 (309,310,311,312,313) - You can change this one to k ddk, it will follow the drums properly. Ok

02:12:544 - This stream is too long for this section. There are literally no 1/4 notes and yet you mapped that part as a stream. It sounds nice, but it doesn't fit the rest of the map because that part is overmapped and others aren't. If you accept this, don't forget to change it in the other parts too. Keep because I like it and it isn't very noticeable

02:17:544 (568,569,570,571,572,573,574,575,576,577,578,579) - Usage of the finishers like this is too much I think. There are no sounds that supporting them, so remove finishers except the first one. If you accept this, don't forget to change it in the other parts too. Same as above ^ Also I follow the guitar tone here

02:22:544 (600) - Add finisher, there is a crash cymbal sound. Isn't very noticeable

02:53:273 (844,845,847,848,850,851) - You need to add 1 more note between these notes. It feels so undermapped that way, skipping a sound like that where are only drums is not good for this map thinking about the rest of it. 1/6 here? So hard to 5.4* imo, keep

04:14:419 (606,607,608,609,610,611,612) - The drum sounds are 1/6 on this pattern, not 1/4. All over the map I didn't add any 1/6 (except in changing bpm), so this is inconsistent

04:18:325 (618) - This note breaks consistency, turn this into don. Guitar tone

05:03:607 (31,32,33) - kkd? The drums are going like that. I don't like the sound it, keep

05:14:707 (98) - Move this one to 05:15:107 - here to support the kick sound on that spot. I added don

05:24:007 - Calm part kiai? I don't support that but it's your personal preference. My preference

05:46:707 (256) - Move this one to 05:47:107 - here. If you think guitar will not fit, then add another note on 05:46:707 (256) - this spot. It also for 05:14:707 this spot too. Applied

05:51:307 - Add don here to support the kick sound. Added

05:52:307 (295,296) - Ctrl + g to support the snare sound on 295. I follow the guitar here only

05:55:507 (318,319) - ^ ^

05:56:207 (324,325,326,327,328) - How about adding 2 notes on this pattern? It will fit the drums. Added

05:57:107 (330) - k because of the snare. Ok

Good luck on the ranking way!
Thanks for mod!
Beatmap updated~
Surono
* 00:28:715 - add kat since you follow the guitar 00:28:481 (174,175,176) -
* 02:41:684 - kat here, so in this part your 5plet applied as kdddk kkddk, then 02:45:356 - from here you applied kkddk kdddk, fair with variety right?
* 03:17:387 - kat to emphasize more the guitar than drum
* 03:23:950 - add pattern dkd 1/4 here to follow guitar sounds
* 04:18:325 - this before was kat right or I forget to update/you reject it? lol kat it again for guitar
* 04:21:137 - kat to follow guitar more
* 05:03:473 (29,30,31,32,33) - the drum it sounds like kkkkd, not kkddk. the current pattern would be good if the sounds are random or even not clearly to hear which high or not the sounds are.
* 05:52:307 (298,299) - ctrl g and 05:52:707 - kat this
* 06:11:707 - kat seems good with alteration of guitar and for variety. you already had many ddddk in this part
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

* 00:28:715 - add kat since you follow the guitar 00:28:481 (174,175,176) - It feels a bit rare but the sound is good, added
* 02:41:684 - kat here, so in this part your 5plet applied as kdddk kkddk, then 02:45:356 - from here you applied kkddk kdddk, fair with variety right? Suree! changed
* 03:17:387 - kat to emphasize more the guitar than drum Changed, nice
* 03:23:950 - add pattern dkd 1/4 here to follow guitar sounds I added 5plet to follow the guitar
* 04:18:325 - this before was kat right or I forget to update/you reject it? lol kat it again for guitar Lol? When I changed it? ikd. Anyways changed again to kat :roll:
* 04:21:137 - kat to follow guitar more Oke
* 05:03:473 (29,30,31,32,33) - the drum it sounds like kkkkd, not kkddk. the current pattern would be good if the sounds are random or even not clearly to hear which high or not the sounds are. You are right, changed
* 05:52:307 (298,299) - ctrl g and 05:52:707 - kat this Applied
* 06:11:707 - kat seems good with alteration of guitar and for variety. you already had many ddddk in this part Ok
LOL? Are you a BN? Congrats!!
Sorry if yesterday I don't replied your pm.
I can't update the beatmap because this ended in the graveyard. So I can't revive because I have 6 maps in pending lol.

Thanks for mod!
I'll update when I have a suppr or rank my maps (or wait 1 month :o )
Surono
thanks ayy, yep and dont hurry... dont speedrank pls lul. wait me for a week if you want me nominate this map.. yeah np wait for 1 month thats good :"D because i did silly mistakes as BN before.... I need to becareful and try to understand how this system works for more. your map good tho <3

can you reduce all SVs to normal? ( reduce every SVs to -10 and add x0.90 in begining.. every normal SVs is slow part right? change to x0.90 ok)

hope 1 of your maps get ranked/graveyard so I can push forward this, good luck.
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

thanks ayy, yep and dont hurry... dont speedrank pls lul. wait me for a week if you want me nominate this map.. yeah np wait for 1 month thats good :"D because i did silly mistakes as BN before.... I need to becareful and try to understand how this system works for more. your map good tho <3

can you reduce all SVs to normal? ( reduce every SVs to -10 and add x0.90 in begining.. every normal SVs is slow part right? change to x0.90 ok)

hope 1 of your maps get ranked/graveyard so I can push forward this, good luck.
It isn't speedrank, I searched a BN since long time :o
Yeah, I considered reduce the svs, modified!

Now I'll see if I get a supp to update the map.
Surono
good, seems some of your maps will graveyard but instead you buy suptag? X"D

I will check this map again on wednesday.
Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

good, seems some of your maps will graveyard but instead you buy suptag? X"D

I will check this map again on wednesday.
Well, I felt that I had to do it xD
Besides that I wanted to upload another map and have osu direct xD
Take your time, I'm not in a hurry
Surono
A7X Bubbled, Good Luck.

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Topic Starter
gaston_2199

Surono wrote:

A7X Bubbled, Good Luck.

#1
A7X ftw
Thanks! ❤

EDIT: I need fix some things like the sv changes
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