00:00:891 (891|1,1041|1,1191|0,1191|3,1191|2) - tought this was a significant melody change...
00:01:341 (1341|1) - dunno abt this one here tho... hear any sound?
00:02:541 (2541|3) - ^
00:03:291 (3291|2,3441|2,3591|1,3591|3) - another melody change... dont put on the same lane
00:09:741 (9741|0,9891|2,10041|1,10191|0) - dunno why i think these sounds more likely to be LNs...
00:17:541 - missing?
00:33:741 (33741|1,33741|0) - remove 1
00:34:391 (34391|0,34491|0) - dunno abt this pattern tho... try to fix it somehow
00:38:541 (38541|3,38691|3,38841|3,38991|3,39141|3,39291|3,39441|3,39591|3) - mind abt this? (actually nvm if u follow the sound tho)
01:12:891 (72891|1,73041|1,73191|3,73191|0) - melody differences...
01:52:191 (112191|2) - kick sound... 2 note...
after i mentioned that kick sound tho... mind checking those white line at kiai for the kick sound... u probably want to do something with it...

00:34:491 move note 1 to 2 / it's kinda hard to hit the jack and the 1/2 jack afterwards on 2 fits the music better

00:39:241 move note 1 to 2

00:39:291 move note 2 to 1

I don't really find anything to mod here good job

00:34:341 (34341|1,34391|0,34441|3,34491|2,34491|0,39141|3,39191|2,39241|0,39291|1,39291|3) - i think it's appropriate to change 1243 +12 or 4312 + 34

01:34:791 (94791|0,94791|2,95016|3,95016|1,95241|2,95241|3) - > 01:34:791 (94791|0,94791|2,95016|3,95016|1,95241|2,95241|3,95991|0,95991|2,96141|1,96216|3,96366|2,96441|1,96591|0,96591|2) just my opinion lol but it's better when i heard keysound detail.

00:01:941 (1941|3,1991|2,2041|1,2091|0) - hmmmmmmmm........ short slider instead of delay (also rest of same parts)
00:01:941 (1941|3,1991|2,2041|1,2091|0,57816|1,57891|2,58041|0,58191|1,58191|2,58416|3,58491|0,62916|1,62991|0,63216|2,63291|1,63291|3) - why that two parts are different
in conclusion, 4 delay parts are inappopriate at normal diff. must be easier i think lol

2017-01-04 11:27 puxtu: oi :v
2017-01-04 11:27 FelipeLink: hi :V
2017-01-04 11:27 puxtu: :V
2017-01-04 11:28 FelipeLink: how are you?
2017-01-04 11:28 puxtu: im fine thanks!
2017-01-04 11:28 puxtu: how about you?
2017-01-04 11:28 FelipeLink: i guess i'm fine
2017-01-04 11:29 FelipeLink: some problems here and there
2017-01-04 11:29 FelipeLink: but its fine
2017-01-04 11:29 puxtu: hope everything is ok x)
2017-01-04 11:29 FelipeLink: thanks
2017-01-04 11:29 FelipeLink: =p
2017-01-04 11:30 puxtu: anyway
2017-01-04 11:30 puxtu: can you check my map :v
2017-01-04 11:30 FelipeLink: sure
2017-01-04 11:30 puxtu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/553791
2017-01-04 11:30 puxtu: hehe
2017-01-04 11:30 FelipeLink: nice music choice
2017-01-04 11:30 FelipeLink: lets see
2017-01-04 11:31 puxtu: haha yea
2017-01-04 11:31 FelipeLink: yes
2017-01-04 11:31 FelipeLink: THIS
2017-01-04 11:31 FelipeLink: BG
2017-01-04 11:31 FelipeLink: YES
2017-01-04 11:31 puxtu: you like it? XD
2017-01-04 11:33 FelipeLink: Of course
2017-01-04 11:33 FelipeLink: its hatsune miku my loved waifu <3
2017-01-04 11:34 puxtu: miku is love
2017-01-04 11:34 FelipeLink: hm
2017-01-04 11:34 FelipeLink: the hitsound is good
2017-01-04 11:34 puxtu: haha thanks
2017-01-04 11:34 FelipeLink: ok les go
2017-01-04 11:34 FelipeLink: first
2017-01-04 11:35 puxtu: actually hitsounds still wip xd
2017-01-04 11:35 FelipeLink: 00:01:041 (1041|1) - move to 3 or 4, i dont think its the same sound
2017-01-04 11:35 puxtu: done
2017-01-04 11:36 FelipeLink: 00:02:691 (2691|1,2991|0) - those 2 are the same sound, you can put in the same column, or just leave this way, your choice
2017-01-04 11:36 FelipeLink: 00:03:291 (3291|2) - move to 2
2017-01-04 11:37 FelipeLink: 00:05:691 (5691|2) - move to 2 or 00:05:841 (5841|2) - this to 2
2017-01-04 11:38 FelipeLink: 00:06:891 (6891|0) - move to 2
2017-01-04 11:38 FelipeLink: 00:07:191 (7191|2) - move to 4
2017-01-04 11:38 FelipeLink: 00:07:791 (7791|1) - move to 1
2017-01-04 11:39 puxtu: arite
2017-01-04 11:39 puxtu: moved
2017-01-04 11:39 FelipeLink: right
2017-01-04 11:42 FelipeLink: 00:07:791 (7791|0,49791|2,50991|1,52191|2,53391|2,55791|1,56991|1,58191|0) -
2017-01-04 11:42 FelipeLink: no
2017-01-04 11:42 FelipeLink: wait
2017-01-04 11:42 FelipeLink: wrong time
2017-01-04 11:43 puxtu: o-okay
2017-01-04 11:44 FelipeLink: 00:49:791 - / 00:50:991 - / 00:52:191 - / 00:53:391 - / 00:54:591 - / 00:55:791 - / 00:56:991 - / 00:58:191 - / 00:59:691 - / 01:00:291 - / 01:00:891 - / 01:02:691 - / 01:03:291 -
2017-01-04 11:44 FelipeLink: those times
2017-01-04 11:44 FelipeLink: you could add a note and make a triple chord(hand)
2017-01-04 11:44 FelipeLink: just a suggestion
2017-01-04 11:44 puxtu: oh okay
2017-01-04 11:44 puxtu: sure
2017-01-04 11:45 FelipeLink: 01:13:041 (73041|1) - move to 3
2017-01-04 11:45 FelipeLink: 01:17:541 (77541|3,77841|2) - same sound for this 2 notes, you can put in the same column or just leave this way, up to you, just pointing
2017-01-04 11:46 puxtu: done
2017-01-04 11:48 FelipeLink: 01:56:391 - until 02:01:191 - every 1/1 you can do a triple chord(hand) but its your choice
2017-01-04 11:48 FelipeLink: thats it

[Insane]
00:08:991 - add one bisa sih ini
00:19:941 (19941|1,20091|2) - move it to 4th column make it emphasize the percussion further. 00:19:941 (19941|0,20091|0) - kalo gini doang sama kyk melody2 sebelumnya. jd menurut gw kurang ditekankan lagi *
01:24:216 - 01:24:816 - add note? biar sm kyk ini 01:23:616 -
01:26:391 - if this triple, then why this 00:09:591 - double?
00:19:941 (19941|0,19941|1,20091|0,20091|2) - same with *
01:36:741 (96741|2,96741|3,96891|2,96891|3) - you did good here
02:04:041 (124041|3,124191|3,124341|3,124491|3,124641|3,124791|3,124941|3,125091|3) - rearrange

[Hard]
00:34:941 (34941|2,35091|1,35091|3,35241|2,35391|3,35391|1) - these aren't repetitive sound. you may rearrange
01:47:391 - add note for each white tick like this? kyk insane gitu

[Normal]
00:57:591 - remove one note? you didn't put any double here 00:52:791 - same segment tho
01:43:641 (103641|3,103791|2,103941|1,104091|3,104241|2,104391|1) - rearrange?
01:57:591 (117591|3,117891|3,118191|3,118491|3) - rearrange
01:59:391 (119391|3,119691|3,119991|3,120291|3) - a
02:02:391 (122391|2,122541|1,122691|2,122841|1,122991|0,123141|1,123291|2,123441|1,123591|0) - right hand bias imo. rearrange
02:05:541 (125541|1,125691|2) - it'll better if you put it on same column

[Easy]
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00:13:791 ~ 00:14:091 - http://puu.sh/tbh9v/157775475b.png there seem to be too many rolls, maybe some variation could be better
00:23:541 ~ 00:23:691 - http://puu.sh/tbhd8/6bbc7aa100.png ^

00:38:391 ~ 00:39:591 - http://puu.sh/tbhhr/720fe029f3.png i think the initial mapping you did felt more fun

00:51:291 (51291|0) - change to long note, end at 00:51:366 the transition from the dense part to this dubstep makes this single note seemed "empty"... how about a short LN instead? {1}

00:53:016 (53016|3) - move note (1), and
00:53:091 (53091|2) - move note (4) it'd bring out that beat more {2}

00:56:091 (56091|2) - change to long note, end at 00:56:166 ^same reason as above {1}

00:57:591 (57591|1) - http://puu.sh/tbhfn/e733510463.png ^same reason as above {2}

00:59:616 (59616|3) - move note (2), and
00:59:691 (59691|1) - delete note comparing this part with 00:54:816~00:54:891, I don't think the triple is necessary
01:06:816 (66816|1) - move note (1), and
01:06:853 (66853|0) - move note (2), and
01:06:966 (66966|1) - move note (1) just a possible pattern to consider...it'll break the roll, but will emphasize the double on 01:06:891. it looks less cluttered too

00:29:091 (29091|1) - move note (3) it seemed rather easy to just do R-R-L-L-R{3}

00:57:816 (57816|3,57816|1) - move notes (1 & 3), and
00:57:891 (57891|2) - move note (2) emphasizes the beat

01:57:216 (117216|3) - move note (3) it looked out of place

02:04:941 (124941|1) - move note (3), and
02:05:241 (125241|2) - move note (2) ^same reason as above {3}

2017-01-05 21:57 puxtu: ohai parachor
2017-01-05 21:58 puxtu: you free?
2017-01-05 21:58 Parachor: mostly, what's up?
2017-01-05 21:59 puxtu: nice
2017-01-05 21:59 puxtu: can you check my map
2017-01-05 21:59 puxtu: just a quick check
2017-01-05 21:59 puxtu: x)
2017-01-05 21:59 Parachor: send it over
2017-01-05 22:00 puxtu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/553791
2017-01-05 22:00 puxtu: aye
2017-01-05 22:00 Parachor: okay give me 5 minutes or so just to finish something
2017-01-05 22:00 puxtu: xd
2017-01-05 22:01 puxtu: sure
2017-01-05 22:15 Parachor: okay phew
2017-01-05 22:15 Parachor: I can try it now
2017-01-05 22:15 puxtu: woo
2017-01-05 22:15 Parachor: It can be my warmup lol
2017-01-05 22:16 puxtu: xd
2017-01-05 22:18 puxtu: nice
2017-01-05 22:19 Parachor: From here 00:05:991 (5991|1) - I thought it would be cool to have some kind of anchor to accentuate the faster kick rhythm
2017-01-05 22:19 Parachor: in column 1 or 2
2017-01-05 22:19 Parachor: you can change it to a different column at this point if you wanted to (if you did this) 00:07:191 (7191|1) -
2017-01-05 22:20 Parachor: 00:38:541 (38541|3,38691|3,38841|3,38991|3) - this anchor was cool but then it kinda stops early
2017-01-05 22:21 puxtu: hm
2017-01-05 22:21 Parachor: Missing some notes between these two 00:43:941 (43941|1,44091|3) -
2017-01-05 22:21 puxtu: 00:05:991 (5991|1) - screenshot your suggestion maybe x)
2017-01-05 22:22 Parachor: maybe something similar to this? https://puu.sh/tbU4s/5852e09ad0.png
2017-01-05 22:23 Parachor: Where there's an anchor in column 1 and then it switches to 4 halfway
2017-01-05 22:23 puxtu: i see
2017-01-05 22:23 puxtu: ya i got your point
2017-01-05 22:23 Parachor: just something I thought might be worth considering
2017-01-05 22:24 puxtu: im really sux at patterning so yea x)
2017-01-05 22:24 Parachor: lol, I'm just looking for things to make it seem more... patterny? More column placement work instead of focusing on the layering
2017-01-05 22:24 Parachor: If that makes sense
2017-01-05 22:25 Parachor: 00:41:991 - you used jacks before this point but then stop using them immediately after this point. Would be cool to keep the jacks going.
2017-01-05 22:25 Parachor: Can I even call them jacks at this speed? Ah well, you know what I mean haha
2017-01-05 22:26 puxtu: yes you can xd
2017-01-05 22:26 Parachor: Somehow making these notes all in the same column might be cool, like what you did before. 00:48:141 (48141|3,48291|3,48441|0,48591|0,48741|3,48891|0,49041|0) -
2017-01-05 22:27 puxtu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6979567 like this?
2017-01-05 22:27 Parachor: hm
2017-01-05 22:29 Parachor: maybe even https://puu.sh/tbUh1/7413d5c174.png ?
2017-01-05 22:30 puxtu: nice broken stair you got there
2017-01-05 22:30 Parachor: haha, however you want to place that
2017-01-05 22:30 Parachor: 23 24 34, it all seems to work
2017-01-05 22:30 Parachor: I'd recommend to do the same kinda thing here 00:38:541 - for consistency
2017-01-05 22:31 Parachor: however you feel like splitting it
2017-01-05 22:31 Parachor: like a 3 note anchor and then a 4 note anchor like my screenshot, or however you feel like it
2017-01-05 22:31 Parachor: But yeah, I feel like you could do some cool things with those two patterns with anchors, however you end up doing it
2017-01-05 22:32 puxtu: haha yeah
2017-01-05 22:32 puxtu: yeah
2017-01-05 22:32 Parachor: here's a suggestion about the missing notes I found earlier https://puu.sh/tbUou/49b18c8a49.png
2017-01-05 22:33 Parachor: at 00:43:491 -
2017-01-05 22:33 Parachor: Actually what are these two notes following anyway? https://puu.sh/tbUqd/997059e151.png
2017-01-05 22:34 Parachor: oh I hear it now, the flute
2017-01-05 22:34 Parachor: oh whatever instrument
2017-01-05 22:34 Parachor: or*
2017-01-05 22:34 puxtu: the flute
2017-01-05 22:34 puxtu: ya
2017-01-05 22:35 Parachor: I think you'll still probably need a note at 00:43:641 - then maybe. To keep following the original instrument as well.
2017-01-05 22:35 Parachor: That will cause a polyrhythm though, so up to you I'd say.
2017-01-05 22:35 Parachor: This is what I did https://puu.sh/tbUu7/182a9c4f54.png
2017-01-05 22:36 puxtu: hm
2017-01-05 22:36 puxtu: let's just keep it that way xd
2017-01-05 22:37 Parachor: Did you add the two missing notes after 00:43:941 - ?
2017-01-05 22:38 puxtu: i did
2017-01-05 22:38 Parachor: Cool~
2017-01-05 22:38 Parachor: That's all I could find
2017-01-05 22:39 puxtu: really? XD
2017-01-05 22:39 puxtu: XD
2017-01-05 22:39 Parachor: Well for a quick look
2017-01-05 22:40 puxtu: ya
2017-01-05 22:40 puxtu: xd
2017-01-05 22:41 puxtu: thanks x)
2017-01-05 22:45 puxtu: you know what to do right?
2017-01-05 22:45 puxtu: x))
2017-01-05 22:45 puxtu: about the logs
2017-01-05 22:45 puxtu: x0
2017-01-05 22:46 Parachor: Oh you want me to?
2017-01-05 22:46 Parachor: Wasn't much a mod
2017-01-05 22:46 puxtu: yeyeyeys pls

00:19:791 (19791|0) - move note (1), and
00:19:941 (19941|1) - move note (2) seems too sudden to have a difficult pattern, might as well copy/swap with 01:36:591

00:29:091 (29091|2) - move note (4), and
00:29:241 (29241|1) - move note (1) since it is still near the beginning of the song, how about making it easier with a trill?

00:34:341 - add note (3) just in case it's too plain?
00:38:991 (38991|1) - move note (1), and
00:39:141 - add note (2) ^

00:53:016 (53016|1) - move note (3) i think it won't be too difficult for Easy players. it's the cool part of the song anyway
00:57:816 (57816|2) - move note (2) ^

01:23:391 - add note (3) seems empty even though there's a lot of sound for this build-up {1}
01:24:591 - add note (2) ^

01:47:091 (107091|1) - change note timing (01:47:016), and
01:47:391 (107391|2) - change note timing (01:47:241) having a non-stop single note stream doesn't feel fun when the song's about to end it's a new kiai time anyway
*same for 01:48:291 & 01:48:591, 01:49:491 & 01:49:791, 01:50:691 & 01:50:991
** if you're doing the above, you could also consider: 01:51:066 - add note (4)

02:01:791 - add note (2) same reason as above {1}
02:02:991 - add note (3) ^

00:15:891 (15891|2) - move note (4) felt a little hard to play

01:16:341 ~ 01:16:491 - move notes 3-4-2-1 to 4-3-1-2 ^