Hirokazu Ando, Tadashi Ikegami, Shogo Sakai, Takuto Kitsuta

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-12-08T05:34:29+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, February 27, 2017 at 3:25:31 PM

Artist: Hirokazu Ando, Tadashi Ikegami, Shogo Sakai, Takuto Kitsuta
Title: Target o Kowase!
Source: 大乱闘スマッシュブラザーズDX
Tags: PolkaMocha ColdTooth Break the Targets! Ready? Go! Nintendo Gamecube Game Cube Super Smash Bros. Brothers Melee HAL Mario
BPM: 143.95
Filesize: 1625kb
Play Time: 00:48
Difficulties Available:

Click the Circles! (5.06 stars, 230 notes)
ColdTooth's Easy (1.27 stars, 50 notes)
Hard (2.58 stars, 106 notes)
Light Insane (3.1 stars, 156 notes)
Normal (1.74 stars, 78 notes)
Polka's Expert (4.42 stars, 242 notes)
Polka's Insane (3.9 stars, 217 notes)

Download: Hirokazu Ando, Tadashi Ikegami, Shogo Sakai, Takuto Kitsuta - Target o Kowase!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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dedicated to PPMD

Brawl Version

Thanks to ColdTooth and PolkaMocha for their GDs!

Metadata checked by Kwan

KwaN - Last Thursday at 12:04 AM
ye i couldn't find any too
seems the original title is named as ターゲットをこわせ！
while artist i guess you have to use all four composers' names from the game(edited)
"本作品はサウンドトラックが発売されておらずゲーム内でも編曲者がどの曲を担当したか明記されていない。 "
so ye, it doesn't state which song is composed by who
i just quote artists from https://youtu.be/UANFKsYXCe8?t=26s(edited)
Unicode Title: ターゲットをこわせ！
Romanised Title: Target o Kowase!
Unicode Artist: 安藤浩和、池上正、酒井省吾、橘田拓人
Romanised Artist: Hirokazu Ando, Tadashi Ikegami, Shogo Sakai, Takuto Kitsuta
Source: 大乱闘スマッシュブラザーズDX

https://youtu.be/T4l_5BTuSmw?t=33s
https://youtu.be/UANFKsYXCe8?t=26s
https://www.nintendo.co.jp/ngc/galj/

Title's source is unofficial from https://www21.atwiki.jp/gamemusicbest10 ... /1087.html

Last edited by Izzywing 2017-04-29T00:03:23+00:00, edited 44 times in total.

ColdTooth

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ColdTooth 2016-12-09T04:46:57+00:00

Hey there, Easy is done. I added hitsounds but you are free to remove them.

Hope it's good.

Aurele

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Aurele 2016-12-09T23:12:04+00:00

Checked ColdTooth's difficulty and it's flawless. Tried to give two minor suggestions, but he rejected

Here's a star.

Hollow Delta

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Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-12-23T23:21:10+00:00

From #modreqs

General
Not all diffs have the same preview point. Might wanna fix that.

Click the Circles!
00:04:318 (4) - Compared to your previous patterns, they all had circular motion. The only reason I see to why this is different is to act as a transition to the 1/4 patterns, but that doesn't change the fact this is still a similar part to the song. ctrl+g
00:06:923 (1) - Turn this into a cornered-slider to show the transition? http://puu.sh/sZb6X/32d27a5f46.jpg
00:09:841 (7) - Considering how the player is coming in from the bottom, shouldn't the clickable part of the slider also be at the bottom?
00:13:697 (2) - This looks weird to me, because the tail isn't perfectly under 1, which ruins the challenge of the readability.
00:13:176 (8,9) - I read these as all 1/4 patterns. Could an NC be placed on 9 to show the difference between 1/2 and 1/4?
00:21:165 (1,2) - I think these look nicer straightened out.
00:24:221 (1,2) - These don't have the sharpness as 00:23:596 (1,2,1,2) - I suggest horizontally flipping this, and same for 00:24:534 (1,2) -
00:28:181 (1) - I think it's more consistent with the pattern to custom-stack this on 2 to create an anti-jump.
00:42:352 (3) - You placed that middle dot there, but there's no curve. Curve it?

Advanced & Normal & Hard
00:41:936 - Useless line?

Easy
00:41:102 (4) - I don't think ending this slider on a strong note compliments the song very well. I suggest shortening it to the white tick behind it, and placing a hit circle, or delete the upcoming hit circle and place a 1/2 slider.

beaw

632 posts

Joined July 2015

beaw 2016-12-24T02:38:53+00:00

hey btw rip bc double mod sry but hobbes isn't online dunno what to do okay bye
dat CS tho

[ColdTooth's Easy]
00:00:255 (1,2) - Blanket these?
00:04:423 (2,3) - Move (3) to the left a bit to follow (2)'s direction/angle

00:41:102 (4) - It would be nice to make this beat clickable.
Since it's an Easy, I would recommend simplifying your slider shapes. I understand you have room to make cool art, but still...

[Advanced]
00:18:594 (1) - idk but I think you should make the first curve (from first node to third node) curve outward instead of inward

it would fit better with the flow
The ending goes counter-clockwise for a while but I know a lot of mappers don't give a shoot. Also if you had DS on, check AiMod otherwise nvm

[Hard]
00:01:297 (5,1,2) - Move the (1,2) pattern up so it flows better with (5)'s direction. To be honest you're fine I'm just really picky about these things

[Polka's Another]
00:29:014 (3,4) - These are the only sliders that do the thing where their outlines touch awkwardly. I suggest doing something like this ;w;
00:35:058 (12,2) - nvm I lied these do it too. Move (12) down or to the left a bit more to avoid this

00:45:062 (8,1) - Make this jump hella big bc last jump lmao
I didn't know you mapped anything more than Easies and Normals

also man space out your doubles a bit more please

[Click the Circles!]
00:00:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the only "set" of siders with the weird overlap at (4). You don't have to fix it just thought I should point it out ;w;
00:08:695 (2,3) - This blanket's a tad bit off

Loosen (2)'s curve
00:19:949 (7,8) - Scoot (7) to the left to match (8)'s angle please ;w;
00:28:389 (2) - I don't think it'd hurt to NC this to help show the timing difference between them. I KNOOOOOW It's an extra but ;w;

okay bye

polka

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Joined March 2014

polka 2016-12-24T02:58:10+00:00

Stingy wrote:
[Polka's Another]
00:29:014 (3,4) - These are the only sliders that do the thing where their outlines touch awkwardly. I suggest doing something like this ;w; Overlapping like that is purposeful and part of my style. No change.
00:35:058 (12,2) - nvm I lied these do it too. Move (12) down or to the left a bit more to avoid this ^
00:45:062 (8,1) - Make this jump hella big bc last jump lmao lmao no ty
I didn't know you mapped anything more than Easies and Normals also man space out your doubles a bit more please I TOLD YOU I DID. Also no because thatll be hard to read.

okay bye

No changes ou o

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-12-24T05:08:06+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs
Easy
00:41:102 (4) - I don't think ending this slider on a strong note compliments the song very well. I suggest shortening it to the white tick behind it, and placing a hit circle, or delete the upcoming hit circle and place a 1/2 slider.

Applied, but adjusted the ending slightly.

Stingy wrote:
[ColdTooth's Easy]
00:00:255 (1,2) - Blanket these? Never thought about that. I mean, they look blanketed already, but if I were to do so perfectly, the shapes of both sliders would be off, and I don't want to ruin it.
00:04:423 (2,3) - Move (3) to the left a bit to follow (2)'s direction/angle Fixed
00:41:102 (4) - It would be nice to make this beat clickable. see post above
Since it's an Easy, I would recommend simplifying your slider shapes. I understand you have room to make cool art, but still...

To be fair, this isn't extreme slider art. I think it looks fine the way it is, I use a lot of slider art in my own maps personally. And besides, isn't it boring to see a straight line or just a simple curve on literally ever slider? Now, when you say simplifying, this is "simplified", and I only say that because of the hitbox of the slidercircle. It's pretty big, and if I were to simplify it to a simple curve like done at 00:23:596 (3) - , it is basically the same hitbox, just shapes make it add art.

I feel like writing more for no reason whatsoever. Honestly, you don't HAVE to keep your cursor on the slider, there is enough room around the slider, so you can drag your cursor in a perfect, straight horizontal line on 00:00:255 (1) - , and 00:10:258 (1) - is basically the same as a curve slider.

diff

ColdTooth

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ColdTooth 2016-12-24T05:42:47+00:00

doublepost because mod

[General]

Why does Polka's Another have custom kiai times but no other diff does?

[Normal]

00:18:594 (1) - Straight line would probably flow much better to parallel 00:16:927 (1) - 's line

00:35:892 (2) - make this look a little prettier

[Advanced]

00:44:437 (3) - x160 y224

[Hard]

00:31:828 (8) - No sound here from what I can make out of

[Polka's Another]

00:02:651 (5,8) - Blanket

00:06:923 (1,3) - Blanket

00:10:987 (4) - Stack on 00:10:258 (1) - 's sliderbegin

00:20:261 (1) - Not entirely sure what the hell is going on w/ the music but I seem to hit this much later than any other difficulty. I feel like it should start on an 1/8th tick ahead, but I feel like that might break the difficulty in terms. Maybe a slider repeat here to end on 00:20:574 - ? I'unno. I just... feel like the music here hates people lol

Needs more polishing imo, but otherwise decent diff, fun to play

[Click the Circles!]

to the beat!

Y'know, for a map that has circles on the sliderends alot, wouldn't it be cool to see them actually stacked on the sliderends?

00:21:165 (1,2) - make parallel

Fun map, fun song, fun game : )

Aistre

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined September 2014

Aistre 2016-12-24T17:07:11+00:00

Awesome game, awesome song and awesome map!

Good luck <3

Izzywing

osu! Alumni

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Topic Starter

Izzywing 2016-12-25T06:04:50+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs

General
Not all diffs have the same preview point. Might wanna fix that.

Click the Circles!
00:04:318 (4) - Compared to your previous patterns, they all had circular motion. The only reason I see to why this is different is to act as a transition to the 1/4 patterns, but that doesn't change the fact this is still a similar part to the song. ctrl+g Done
00:06:923 (1) - Turn this into a cornered-slider to show the transition? http://puu.sh/sZb6X/32d27a5f46.jpg Neat idea but I prefer the blanket
00:09:841 (7) - Considering how the player is coming in from the bottom, shouldn't the clickable part of the slider also be at the bottom? Usually yes but I want the jump due to the clap
00:13:697 (2) - This looks weird to me, because the tail isn't perfectly under 1, which ruins the challenge of the readability. Fixed
00:13:176 (8,9) - I read these as all 1/4 patterns. Could an NC be placed on 9 to show the difference between 1/2 and 1/4? Hm, I don't think the player would usually misread this because it would be a pretty big jump for 1/4
00:21:165 (1,2) - I think these look nicer straightened out. Fix
00:24:221 (1,2) - These don't have the sharpness as 00:23:596 (1,2,1,2) - I suggest horizontally flipping this, and same for 00:24:534 (1,2) - Ill consider this
00:28:181 (1) - I think it's more consistent with the pattern to custom-stack this on 2 to create an anti-jump. Disagree, I think that's unfair in terms of reading
00:42:352 (3) - You placed that middle dot there, but there's no curve. Curve it?Removed the dot

Advanced & Normal & Hard
00:41:936 - Useless line? doesnt really matter i guess

Thanks Bubblun!

Stingy wrote:
hey btw rip bc double mod sry but hobbes isn't online dunno what to do okay bye
dat CS tho

[Advanced]
00:18:594 (1) - idk but I think you should make the first curve (from first node to third node) curve outward instead of inward it would fit better with the flow
The ending goes counter-clockwise for a while but I know a lot of mappers don't give a shoot. Also if you had DS on, check AiMod otherwise nvm

Fixed

[Hard]
00:01:297 (5,1,2) - Move the (1,2) pattern up so it flows better with (5)'s direction. To be honest you're fine I'm just really picky about these things would look really ugly tho

[Click the Circles!]
00:00:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the only "set" of siders with the weird overlap at (4). You don't have to fix it just thought I should point it out ;w; should be ok :p
00:08:695 (2,3) - This blanket's a tad bit off Loosen (2)'s curve fixy
00:19:949 (7,8) - Scoot (7) to the left to match (8)'s angle please ;w; Fixy
00:28:389 (2) - I don't think it'd hurt to NC this to help show the timing difference between them. I KNOOOOOW It's an extra but ;w; 00:27:972 (2,1,2) - are all like the same distance from each other so it should be readable i think

okay bye

tytyty

ColdTooth wrote:
doublepost because mod

[General]

Why does Polka's Another have custom kiai times but no other diff does? Kiai is up to the individual mapper

[Normal]

00:18:594 (1) - Straight line would probably flow much better to parallel 00:16:927 (1) - 's line fix

00:35:892 (2) - make this look a little prettier hows that

[Advanced]

00:44:437 (3) - x160 y224 fix

[Hard]

00:31:828 (8) - No sound here from what I can make out of I hear it, its part of the main melody

[Click the Circles!]

to the beat!

Y'know, for a map that has circles on the sliderends alot, wouldn't it be cool to see them actually stacked on the sliderends?

00:21:165 (1,2) - make parallel fix

Fun map, fun song, fun game : )

tyty

Kami-senpai

608 posts

Joined January 2015

Kami-senpai 2016-12-26T09:56:53+00:00

Here's a mod (from my queue. Don't think I'm some sort of benevolent god or anything

)

I think all your diffs need kiai times. Unless new RC doesn't require kiai times, I suggest putting it from 00:21:929 (1) - here to 00:35:267 (1) - here

Hard

00:08:591 (1,2) - This double might be a bit hard and unpredictable for Hard diff(?)
00:19:845 (5) - There's a whistle hitsound on the sliderslide portion of the slider, you may or may not have intended that

I'm not too good at modding hard

sowwy

Polka's Another

00:12:967 (5,6,7,8,9) - The angle of the jump with the stream seems a bit too sharp for good flow. Maybe make a little smoother by moving the stream more to the left
00:16:927 (1,2) - Make the distance between these comparable to 00:13:592 (1,2) - these
00:40:268 (1,2,3) - Pull this a bit to the left so it doesn't overlap too much with the stream. Kinda like 00:41:310 (9) - this one

Click the Circles!

00:28:181 (1,2) - Maybe space these out even more because the way the distances are progressing, this looks like it should be 1/4 instead of 1/2

I haven't seen this good of a challenge map in a while

good job!

Good luckieeee

Kryptogram

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Joined December 2010

Kryptogram 2016-12-27T19:02:22+00:00

From Kryptograms Modding Queue

General

Fine

ColdTooth's Easy

00:10:258 (1) - Move the red thick of the slider tox:436 y:72, just for a better symmetry
00:21:929 (1) - Add a finish at the begin, it sounds good whit the instrumental
00:26:930 (3) - I think it sounds better if you remove the whistle in the whole slider, sounds awkward to me
00:28:598 (1) - Why don't you put this note in x:412 y:196 to me it feels better whit the previous slider
00:38:184 (3) - Remove the finish here, if you listen to the sung, the drums start at 00:38:601 (1)

This diff its really clean, good job

Normal

Nothing to say about this, clean mapping and hitsounds!

Advanced

00:04:839 (4) - This slider should end in 00:05:048 (x), sounds much better whit the instrumental
00:16:093 (3) - What about placing this slider somewhere else, like something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910233 i don't like how it overlaps whit
00:14:843 (4)
00:30:890 (2) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:31:099 (x)
00:33:183 (4,5) - You could try to make something more linear like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910263 i don't like how it flows
00:37:559 (2) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:37:768 (x)
00:39:852 (4) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:40:060 (x)

Hard

00:06:819 (7) - This note sounds a little bit forced, i mean there is no beat strong enough to put a note there
00:41:831 (7) - Same as above

Guess nothing else to say, imo there's alot of streams in this difficult, but its your choice

Polka's Another

00:06:090 (7) - NC here maybe, just because there are many notes
00:21:199 (7) - Same here ^
00:41:102 (8) - Same here ^
00:34:433 (7) - Same here ^

Click the circle's

00:16:510 (7) - Move this note to x:429 y:172, just to overlap it whit 00:14:634 (5)

Sorry but i can't mod expert's very well

Sorry for the poor mod, but i couldn't find mistakes in the mapset, just some suggestions from my part, Good luck!

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-12-28T01:28:25+00:00

Kryptogram wrote:
From Kryptograms Modding Queue

ColdTooth's Easy

00:10:258 (1) - Move the red thick of the slider tox:436 y:72, just for a better symmetry Nice catch
00:21:929 (1) - Add a finish at the begin, it sounds good whit the instrumental Sure
00:26:930 (3) - I think it sounds better if you remove the whistle in the whole slider, sounds awkward to me Eh, I have no other way to make it sound good, but I guess no hitsound here is good enough.
00:28:598 (1) - Why don't you put this note in x:412 y:196 to me it feels better whit the previous slider Nah, I do like the idea, but I feel like it'll flow better from the slider endpoint instead
00:38:184 (3) - Remove the finish here, if you listen to the sung, the drums start at 00:38:601 (1) No change as it flows in w/ the drums from the beginning of the song

This diff its really clean, good job

diff

Also Hobbes, double check if there's anything wrong, I may have accidentally forgot to update before checking this.

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2016-12-28T07:08:46+00:00

No kudosu k

Just went through metadata a little on discord with you, still someone to confirm the artist
Source: 大乱闘スマッシュブラザーズDX
Title:ターゲットをこわせ！
Could use Kwan or something to confirm romanised versions, I don't trust romaji converters
Add the English versions of the current stuff to the tags.
For now, just put the English titles in the romanised part until it's fixed properly.

Artist seems difficult because on the second source below, there's nothing listed in the second column, what do

Sources are random, but they all say the exact same thing
http://www.geocities.jp/mazelte/musicn/smabrodx.htm
https://www21.atwiki.jp/gamemusicbest10 ... /1087.html
http://www.wikihouse.com/suma/index.php ... 9%A5%C8(DX)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-sMqF6l ... d2VzSMSbPo

Weber

1,254 posts

Joined May 2015

Weber 2016-12-28T15:17:18+00:00

randum mod at 1am

ColdTooth's Easy

00:41:936 (5) - NC starts here

Wondering why 00:13:592 (1,2,3,4) - is way less dense than 00:16:927 (1,2,3,4) - despite it being the exact same music, I would make the first (1,2,3,4) a little more dense to make it more consistent.

00:28:598 (1,2,3,4) - ^

00:35:267 (1) - Blanket around (4) could be improved (turn off grid snap if you have it on)

Click The Circles

Now, 00:06:507 (1,2,3,4) - is a fairly tricky pattern to pull off which is fine on it's own, however playability issues arise when you consider the momentum needed to hit 00:06:402 (4,1) - then switch into a much faster momentum for 00:06:507 (1,2,3,4,1) - which is really quite extreme for the small amount of space as well as the potential readability issues this entire pattern has. I would consider moving 00:06:402 (4) - further away from (1).

00:41:415 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^

00:13:488 (10,1,2) - Again, super difficult momentum issues, I would consider removing the (10) note in order to make it a little easier while still keeping with the music.

00:28:389 (2,3,1,2) - ^

00:21:165 (1) - Unsnapped note

00:21:303 (2) - Having this note go back towards the cursor's direction on top of having to hit (3,4,5) is, again, fairly extreme. I would try Ctrl-G'ing it as a solution to this to give players an easier time with flow.

00:24:534 (1,2,1) - This pattern in particular ends up being much harder than the (1,2) patterns before it as you have to hit the (1) slider straight after which is a fair distance away and considering (2) goes back towards the player. Consider breaking away from the pattern and having the sliderhead stack underneath (1) to make it a little less difficult. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6916798

gl

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-12-28T19:49:48+00:00

Weber wrote:
ColdTooth's Easy

00:41:936 (5) - NC starts here jesus im that bad at fixing my previous mistakes thanks for pointing that out lmao

Wondering why 00:13:592 (1,2,3,4) - is way less dense than 00:16:927 (1,2,3,4) - despite it being the exact same music, I would make the first (1,2,3,4) a little more dense to make it more consistent. I just didn't feel like putting every beat as a clickable note, this is how I make my easy difficulties anyways, I give them small breaks in between.

00:28:598 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

00:35:267 (1) - Blanket around (4) could be improved (turn off grid snap if you have it on) I think I made it look better lol

diff again

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined April 2012

Noffy 2016-12-30T06:50:54+00:00

Hi! M4M from my queue o/
I'm a bit later than I said I would be, sorry about that ;;.
Mod in return however much you think is fair since my set is signifcantly longer in drain time owo;

[General]
~~Name every diff Easy! Normal! Advanced! Hard! to match with the title name and the final diff plz thx~~
(the above is half a joke but I think it'd be neat)

00:25:263 - Random hitsounding idea: Adding a normal whistle to this bar, because there's an actual whistle in the song here (albeit fairly quiet)

[ColdTooth's Easy]

00:08:591 (3) - Possibly move this to the left a bit, (x:412) so that it is more vertically symmetrical with the end of 00:06:923 (1) - ?
00:11:925 (3) - I think it could be better for this slider to have only one red anchor instead of 2, since the rhythm it's following isn't much different from 00:12:759 (4) - .
00:13:592 (1) - Consider adding a finish here, as the guitar strum is just as forceful as it was at 00:06:923 -
00:21:929 (1) - Maybe move up a bit so that 00:21:929 (1,2,3) - can be a single wave fwoosh instead of the currently slightly not.
00:30:265 (3) - Perhaps adjust this slider a bit to head straight into 00:31:515 (4) - aye

Nice clean diff :3

[Normal]
I think the intro could benefit from having the rhythms of 00:00:255 (1,2,3) - and 00:01:922 (1,2) - switched.
This is primarily because I feel like 00:01:505 - is a weaker note than 00:03:172 - is, especially when former is compared to the piano note 00:01:713 - right after it being a bit stronger, so it feels awkward to click at 00:01:505 but not 00:01:713 - .
The same goes for: 00:13:592 (1,2,3,1,2) - , 00:28:598 (1,2,3,1,2) - , 00:35:267 (1,2,3,1,2) -
Give that a try and see what you think

But since that's just an idea I'll mod the rest of the diff under the assumption you don't make that change (woo)

00:01:922 (1) - Possibly curve this more to match better with the angle for 00:00:255 (1) - .
00:06:923 (1,2,3) - This angle feels rather small compared to the majority of patterns in this difficulty. Maybe move 00:06:090 (2,3) - to the right some and arrange like so to open it up a bit more.
00:09:424 (2) - Maybe rotate this like -14 degrees so that 00:08:591 (1,2) - can be symmetrical around this line (science)
00:17:552 (2) - Maybe reconsider the rhythm in this area, this is really weird to click to when there isn't really a sound here but at the blue tick afterwords ;; ( 00:17:656 ) and it's also different from how most of the similar patterns were mapped, making it additionally harder to follow.
00:26:097 (3) - Is that middle anchor supposed to be curving this slider?? cause it appears to be straight.. ?
00:41:936 (1,2,3) - Why isn't the rhythm here like, say, 00:06:923 (1,2,3) - ? They have the same high pitched bopping going on. The rhythm you have here is ignoring the sound at 00:42:769 - which you had mapped in the previous similar parts of the song.

[Advanced]
Generally, I found this difficulty's rhythms to be far more fitting to the song itself than the ones in Normal, despite not being too-much-more intense. Is very nice >:3

00:15:260 (1) - Move the tail end to the left a bit, since currently 00:15:885 (2,3) - make a straighter line then 00:15:260 (1,2) - does.
00:16:093 (3) - For even straighter lines maybe move the end of 3 down here too. yay
00:10:258 (1,2,3,4) - I think a rhythm like you did here: 00:06:923 (1,2,3,4) - with the 1/1 slider right at the start could be potentially more fitting.
00:11:925 (1) - The flow right here was pretty weird to p- no, wait, forget that, this goes offscreen in 4:3! potential non-offscreen positioning idea
00:18:594 (1) - Maybe remove the first white anchor point so that the start can be straight like it was for 00:11:925 (1,3) - these two.
00:41:936 (1) - Consider moving this to the right some so that it makes a nice smiley face with 00:41:727 (5,2) - . (but also so that it looks more even and flows into 2 better)

[Hard]
This diff has quite a lot of style! I like it a lot!

00:02:964 (5) - I'd consider spacing this one as well, since it starts the same group of three piano notes that 00:03:172 (6,7) - are a part of. The same goes for when this pattern repeats.
00:18:594 (1) - This reverse slider is fairly misleading to read, as it repeats twice instead of once without an obvious differnece in the music like how there were heavier drums at 00:05:673 (4) - or the weirder piano that was at 00:21:929 (1) - to account for the difference. Maybe have this repeat just once instead.
00:23:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For this bar, consider a rhythm like this instead so that you'd be clicking on the high piano notes instead of ending sliders on them: Either that or make it similar to how you did 00:26:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - .

[Polka's Another]
Hi Polka~

00:22:658 (7) - In my opinion, this note isn't as strong as 00:22:033 (2) - and I think removing it could help emphasize the difference between 00:21:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:22:554 (6,7,8,9,10) - .
00:26:514 (6) - 00:26:722 (7) - consider applying ctrl+g to each of these invidually, I think it'd make for some quite nice flow. whee (in the image it looks a little chaotic but I hope it gets my point across that this would potentially be really nice) the way it currently is, for comparison. No loopity-loops here ;.;

[Click the Circles!]
Dang this is a lot harder than SR would make you think.. wowza.

00:28:598 (1,2) - not stacked perfectly vrrr
00:30:265 (1,2) - vrr
00:36:934 (1,2) - vrr

Overall a super cool mapset!!! Best of luck with this good luck and have a nice day

!

ColdTooth

1,100 posts

Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2016-12-31T00:21:47+00:00

Man I swear, as soon as I fix my diff, someone else touches it lmao

Noffy wrote:
[ColdTooth's Easy]
00:08:591 (3) - Possibly move this to the left a bit, (x:412) so that it is more vertically symmetrical with the end of 00:06:923 (1) - ? Nah
00:11:925 (3) - I think it could be better for this slider to have only one red anchor instead of 2, since the rhythm it's following isn't much different from 00:12:759 (4) - . there
00:13:592 (1) - Consider adding a finish here, as the guitar strum is just as forceful as it was at 00:06:923 - ok
00:21:929 (1) - Maybe move up a bit so that 00:21:929 (1,2,3) - can be a single wave fwoosh instead of the currently slightly not. No change
00:30:265 (3) - Perhaps adjust this slider a bit to head straight into 00:31:515 (4) - aye ok
Nice clean diff :3

Thanks, also here's the diff again ---> boop

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2016-12-31T03:22:02+00:00

ColdTooth wrote:
doublepost because mod

[General]

Why does Polka's Another have custom kiai times but no other diff does? Its okay to have inconsistent kiais.

[Polka's Another]

00:02:651 (5,8) - Blanket It is.

00:06:923 (1,3) - Blanket ^

00:10:987 (4) - Stack on 00:10:258 (1) - 's sliderbegin k

00:20:261 (1) - Not entirely sure what the hell is going on w/ the music but I seem to hit this much later than any other difficulty. I feel like it should start on an 1/8th tick ahead, but I feel like that might break the difficulty in terms. Maybe a slider repeat here to end on 00:20:574 - ? I'unno. I just... feel like the music here hates people lol So whats ur suggestion Im confused qq

Needs more polishing imo, but otherwise decent diff, fun to play ur mom needs more polishing.

Kami-senpai wrote:
Polka's Another
00:12:967 (5,6,7,8,9) - The angle of the jump with the stream seems a bit too sharp for good flow. Maybe make a little smoother by moving the stream more to the left moved slightly.
00:16:927 (1,2) - Make the distance between these comparable to 00:13:592 (1,2) - these done
00:40:268 (1,2,3) - Pull this a bit to the left so it doesn't overlap too much with the stream. Kinda like 00:41:310 (9) - this one I like the overlap.

Kryptogram wrote:
Polka's Another

00:06:090 (7) - NC here maybe, just because there are many notes Ruins NC consistency.
00:21:199 (7) - Same here ^ ^
00:41:102 (8) - Same here ^ ^
00:34:433 (7) - Same here ^ ^

Noffy wrote:
[Polka's Another]
Hi Polka~ HI NOFFY

00:22:658 (7) - In my opinion, this note isn't as strong as 00:22:033 (2) - and I think removing it could help emphasize the difference between 00:21:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 00:22:554 (6,7,8,9,10) - . Note is still audible and I think it should be included.
00:26:514 (6) - 00:26:722 (7) - consider applying ctrl+g to each of these invidually, I think it'd make for some quite nice flow. whee (in the image it looks a little chaotic but I hope it gets my point across that this would potentially be really nice) the way it currently is, for comparison. No loopity-loops here ;.; Changed.

Thanks everyone.

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484,108,35267,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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492,284,35683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,360,35892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,368,36517,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,216,36725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,256,37350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,252,37559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,308,38184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,320,39226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-01-01T00:18:07+00:00

Kami-senpai wrote:
Here's a mod (from my queue. Don't think I'm some sort of benevolent god or anything )

I think all your diffs need kiai times. Unless new RC doesn't require kiai times, I suggest putting it from 00:21:929 (1) - here to 00:35:267 (1) - here RC doesn't require kiai times and I don't really feel any in this map. It's up to the individual mappers.
Hard
00:08:591 (1,2) - This double might be a bit hard and unpredictable for Hard diff(?) I'd hope not. There are doubles everywhere.
00:19:845 (5) - There's a whistle hitsound on the sliderslide portion of the slider, you may or may not have intended that Good catch, fixed

I'm not too good at modding hard sowwy

Click the Circles!
00:28:181 (1,2) - Maybe space these out even more because the way the distances are progressing, this looks like it should be 1/4 instead of 1/2 Okay, I adjusted it

I haven't seen this good of a challenge map in a while good job!

Good luckieeee

Thank you

Kryptogram wrote:
From Kryptograms Modding Queue

Advanced

00:04:839 (4) - This slider should end in 00:05:048 (x), sounds much better whit the instrumental Might change this, but I'm following the added instrument that appears at 00:04:839 -
00:16:093 (3) - What about placing this slider somewhere else, like something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910233 i don't like how it overlaps whit
00:14:843 (4) Fixed
00:30:890 (2) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:31:099 (x) blue tick has a notable piano sound tho
00:33:183 (4,5) - You could try to make something more linear like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6910263 i don't like how it flows I think it's okay, not seeing a problem personally
00:37:559 (2) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:37:768 (x) blue tick piano sound
00:39:852 (4) - Sounds better if you end the slider here 00:40:060 (x) Like before this one is extended due to the instrument

Hard

00:06:819 (7) - This note sounds a little bit forced, i mean there is no beat strong enough to put a note there Might change this. I think the triplet emphasis 1 well.
00:41:831 (7) - Same as above Same here. I might change as I said.

Guess nothing else to say, imo there's alot of streams in this difficult, but its your choice

Click the circle's

00:16:510 (7) - Move this note to x:429 y:172, just to overlap it whit 00:14:634 (5) This messes up the triangle but I moved the entire triangle so its ok xd

Sorry but i can't mod expert's very well

Sorry for the poor mod, but i couldn't find mistakes in the mapset, just some suggestions from my part, Good luck!

Thanks for your mod!

Weber wrote:
randum mod at 1am

Click The Circles

Now, 00:06:507 (1,2,3,4) - is a fairly tricky pattern to pull off which is fine on it's own, however playability issues arise when you consider the momentum needed to hit 00:06:402 (4,1) - then switch into a much faster momentum for 00:06:507 (1,2,3,4,1) - which is really quite extreme for the small amount of space as well as the potential readability issues this entire pattern has. I would consider moving 00:06:402 (4) - further away from (1).

00:41:415 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^

Adjusted the rhthm by shortening 3 into a 1/2 slider and adding a 1/2 slider right after. Plays MUCH better while still being hard. Thanks for pointing this out!

00:13:488 (10,1,2) - Again, super difficult momentum issues, I would consider removing the (10) note in order to make it a little easier while still keeping with the music.

00:28:389 (2,3,1,2) - ^ These I acknowledge as challenging and intentional. The previous just came off as frustrating but I think these are okay.

00:21:165 (1) - Unsnapped note

00:21:303 (2) - Having this note go back towards the cursor's direction on top of having to hit (3,4,5) is, again, fairly extreme. I would try Ctrl-G'ing it as a solution to this to give players an easier time with flow. Rhythym was shit so I redid the whole thing

00:24:534 (1,2,1) - This pattern in particular ends up being much harder than the (1,2) patterns before it as you have to hit the (1) slider straight after which is a fair distance away and considering (2) goes back towards the player. Consider breaking away from the pattern and having the sliderhead stack underneath (1) to make it a little less difficult. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6916798 I'll consider this.

gl

thanks for your mod

Noffy wrote:
Hi! M4M from my queue o/
I'm a bit later than I said I would be, sorry about that ;;.
Mod in return however much you think is fair since my set is signifcantly longer in drain time owo;

[General]
~~Name every diff Easy! Normal! Advanced! Hard! to match with the title name and the final diff plz thx~~
(the above is half a joke but I think it'd be neat) Metadata changing so it wont be relevant anymore
00:25:263 - Random hitsounding idea: Adding a normal whistle to this bar, because there's an actual whistle in the song here (albeit fairly quiet) It's so quiet, not sure it's worth doing
[Normal]
I think the intro could benefit from having the rhythms of 00:00:255 (1,2,3) - and 00:01:922 (1,2) - switched.
This is primarily because I feel like 00:01:505 - is a weaker note than 00:03:172 - is, especially when former is compared to the piano note 00:01:713 - right after it being a bit stronger, so it feels awkward to click at 00:01:505 but not 00:01:713 - .
The same goes for: 00:13:592 (1,2,3,1,2) - , 00:28:598 (1,2,3,1,2) - , 00:35:267 (1,2,3,1,2) -
Give that a try and see what you think

My rhythm choice is on purpose, to explain listen closely for the deep sounds at 00:00:255 - and 00:00:880 and 00:01:505 (3) - ; I use these as the basis for the rhythm on this measure. On the next measure, listen for the sounds on the blue ticks the reverse slider is mapped to; those sounds are the basis for the rhythm on that measure. Those deep sounds occur everywhere I use these two sets of rhythms in a row.

But since that's just an idea I'll mod the rest of the diff under the assumption you don't make that change (woo)
00:01:922 (1) - Possibly curve this more to match better with the angle for 00:00:255 (1) - . Okay
00:06:923 (1,2,3) - This angle feels rather small compared to the majority of patterns in this difficulty. Maybe move 00:06:090 (2,3) - to the right some and arrange like so to open it up a bit more. What you said is true but I'm not sure it's a problem. I'll consider.
00:09:424 (2) - Maybe rotate this like -14 degrees so that 00:08:591 (1,2) - can be symmetrical around this line (science) Sure!
00:17:552 (2) - Maybe reconsider the rhythm in this area, this is really weird to click to when there isn't really a sound here but at the blue tick afterwords ;; ( 00:17:656 ) and it's also different from how most of the similar patterns were mapped, making it additionally harder to follow. There's a clear sound on 00:17:552 - though
00:26:097 (3) - Is that middle anchor supposed to be curving this slider?? cause it appears to be straight.. ? Fixed
00:41:936 (1,2,3) - Why isn't the rhythm here like, say, 00:06:923 (1,2,3) - ? They have the same high pitched bopping going on. The rhythm you have here is ignoring the sound at 00:42:769 - which you had mapped in the previous similar parts of the song. Fixed

[Advanced]
Generally, I found this difficulty's rhythms to be far more fitting to the song itself than the ones in Normal, despite not being too-much-more intense. Is very nice >:3

00:15:260 (1) - Move the tail end to the left a bit, since currently 00:15:885 (2,3) - make a straighter line then 00:15:260 (1,2) - does. A fix from an earlier mod makes this obsolete
00:10:258 (1,2,3,4) - I think a rhythm like you did here: 00:06:923 (1,2,3,4) - with the 1/1 slider right at the start could be potentially more fitting. Maybe, but I like how 00:10:258 (1) - maps the main melody
00:11:925 (1) - The flow right here was pretty weird to p- no, wait, forget that, this goes offscreen in 4:3! potential non-offscreen positioning idea
00:18:594 (1) - Maybe remove the first white anchor point so that the start can be straight like it was for 00:11:925 (1,3) - these two. Sure
00:41:936 (1) - Consider moving this to the right some so that it makes a nice smiley face with 00:41:727 (5,2) - . (but also so that it looks more even and flows into 2 better) Okay!
[Hard]
This diff has quite a lot of style! I like it a lot!

00:02:964 (5) - I'd consider spacing this one as well, since it starts the same group of three piano notes that 00:03:172 (6,7) - are a part of. The same goes for when this pattern repeats. Disagree with this. while it does start that pattenr, it's still part of the previous pattern as well. Stacking it like this makes it a part of both if that makes sense.
00:18:594 (1) - This reverse slider is fairly misleading to read, as it repeats twice instead of once without an obvious differnece in the music like how there were heavier drums at 00:05:673 (4) - or the weirder piano that was at 00:21:929 (1) - to account for the difference. Maybe have this repeat just once instead. Fixed
00:23:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - For this bar, consider a rhythm like this instead so that you'd be clicking on the high piano notes instead of ending sliders on them: Either that or make it similar to how you did 00:26:930 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . This might be something to think about. I prefer the active rhythm I have now as I think it matches the music better but I can see your point.
[Click the Circles!]
Dang this is a lot harder than SR would make you think.. wowza. Yeah lol

00:28:598 (1,2) - not stacked perfectly vrrr
00:30:265 (1,2) - vrr
00:36:934 (1,2) - vrr
Fixed all

Overall a super cool mapset!!! Best of luck with this good luck and have a nice day !

Thank you so much!

Updating the metadata too btw. Thanks to Kwan for checking.

Hollow Delta

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Hollow Delta 2017-01-02T21:18:27+00:00

About the metadata, could you put 'Various Artists' and put all of them in the tags?

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-01-02T21:28:03+00:00

Bubblun wrote:
About the metadata, could you put 'Various Artists' and put all of them in the tags?

Good question, that would be a lot cleaner. I'll ask.

EDIT - apparently you can only do that if it exceeds the character limit, which it does not in this case.

Last edited by Izzywing 2017-01-03T03:10:34+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-BlueSun-

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-BlueSun- 2017-01-02T21:40:02+00:00

ColdTooth's Easy

00:29:431 (2) - remove this and add a slider from here 00:29:014 - 00:29:848 - it flows better with the music.
my modding is bad sry

Normal

to me it seem very unclear with what rythm you are trying to follow here. for example, 00:00:255 - here you aren't following the main rythmn (which is fine) but then here 00:06:923 - you are following the main rythmn which can throw players off, you should just stick to one rythmn.

Advanced

00:21:929 (1,2,3) - make this into like a triangle shape or something because it looks quite boring.
00:23:596 (1,2,3,4) - is this really necessary? this doens't flow well at all, just make them into this

Hard

00:26:930 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here but it's probably more acceptable for a hard diff, its up to you if you wanna change it or not.
00:34:433 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - making this into a stream probably wont hurt.

Polka's Insane

couldn't find anything here.

GL

riffy

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riffy 2017-01-03T07:34:51+00:00

This post is sponsored by Tesco. Not really, tho.

[General]

Polka's Insane has no preview point set. Please set one as it is required by the RC and sounds quite unnatural wthout it.
Disable the countdown which doesn't really work anyway?
Harder difficulties could benefit from Slider Tick Rate 4, give it a try on the Insane and I+ difficulties.

[ColdTooth's Easy]

00:14:426 (2) - there are stronger beats 1/1 before and 1/1 ahead. Why not map them? the most generic and simple example
Note: 00:29:431 (2) - same here. Also, (2) feels as if it should be snapped 1/2 earlier and replacing it with the pattern suggested would solve the problem.

Nice one.

[Normal]

00:01:505 (3) - let's use a 1/2 slider here instead? The beat on the red tick is pretty strong and I would insist on having it mapped in some way.
00:35:267 - try to lower your rhythm density here to be more consistent with Easy and to emphasize the volume decrease?

Neat.

[Advanced]

00:02:547 (2,3) - since 1/4 snaps are just being introduced I would recommend to use regular spacing for them. It will still look pretty and give a more accurate idea of what 1/4 is and how to hit it.
Note: obviously, this will aply to all of the 1/4 snapped patterns.

Apart from that spacing thing there is nothing I could disagree with or imorove. I like it.

[Hard]

00:20:574 (1) - try to use 1/2 snapped circles instead of the slider? This would give some extra emphasis to the drum stuff and make the part stand out, which is a nice thing, in my opinion.

That is too streamy to my standards but it works with the spread. Perhaps I would name it a Hyper, but this could be just me.

[Polka's Insane]

00:20:574 (4) - something similar with the previous difficulty. Two circles instead of a slider would work a lot better in terms of empasising stuff. Give it a try and see if you like it.

Streamy and pretty well-made.

[Polka's Another]

00:04:839 (7,8,1) - shouldn't the jump be on (1) or at least both on (8) and (1). One is a downbeat with a pretty strong beat on it, it definitely needs something to stress it.
Note: 00:38:184 (7,8,1) - same. 00:39:852 (7,8) - same here. You vcould just Ctrl+G these two, I think.
00:16:510 (9) - just for readability and a better-looking pttern I would place (9) in the centre of this square. example
Note: 00:19:845 (9) - 00:31:307 (8,9) - same.
00:21:199 (7,8,9,10) - since these are weake than the previous stream I would nerf the spacing here. And perhaps add a new combo to separate them from 00:20:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:28:702 (2,3) - minor - you could improve the blanket here, if you intended to have one here.

Good one. I think the jumps were a bit tricky at times and we can re-arrange them so that some of them could work better with the music, but apart from that it's a nice difficulty.

[To the Beat!]

00:20:574 (4) - probably a new combo here would increase readability. No big deal, but it seems to work slightly better when you have one placed.

Interesting usage of stacks.

Whoa, that was impressive!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Best of luck!

Sakurauchi Riko

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Sakurauchi Riko 2017-01-03T16:50:13+00:00

Hello, my end of the M4M
since you mentioned in your queue that Polka's insane should be focused i just do that too (you said that in the round after me xD)

polka's insane

00:01:297 (6,7) - the DS is very low here but 00:01:713 (7) - is such a strong sound which should get emphasized somehow. furthermore the DS at 00:01:713 (7,1) - is very high but 00:01:922 (1) - hasnt got any special sound to deserve to be emphasized
00:03:589 - the 1/1 beat begins here and except for 00:04:423 - you constantly map it. id make this aswell being noticed somehow
00:13:801 - it feels really weird if you skip these sounds because they are the most noticeable ones... same tihng for the other sounds at the red ticks but idk if you wanna change it. it just feels really awkward
00:26:097 (5,6,7,8,9) - this flow is really unpleasant. id reverse the streamshape so it gets also blanket'd and flows way better
00:36:309 (6,7,1) - same thing here as my first note: 00:36:725 (7) - should have more DS before it and a bit less after it because this sound should be emphasized and therefore be different/seperated. currently you just treat this sound as a normal quite sound like all the others (especially if you compare it to 00:36:934 (1) - which is barely hearable)

highest diff

00:13:697 (2) - maybe reverse the shape here so it flows better, adjust the next slidershape too if you change
00:23:596 (1,2) - and so on...: that is pretty hard to read and the overlap of the circle with the sliderhead doesnt look really nice imo. If you make the circle farther away from the sliderhead and let it overlap with the slidertail it would look better http://puu.sh/t9QxR/c6347f603a.jpg
00:32:036 (2,3) - fix the stack
00:35:058 (4,1,2) - this is really unpleasant flow because you move at bottom left but the next object is rather top right.. maybe make it flow to left top before 00:35:371 (2) - .
00:38:184 - i kinda disagree that this strong sound is covered by a reverse slider, should be clickable imo
00:39:852 - especially this

interesting map, i like it

I hope that is enough since you said i can mod only 2 diffs. i dont really like the song tho:( but the maps are interesting and fun to play
Good luck in ranking process:)

HappyRocket88

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HappyRocket88 2017-01-04T01:52:04+00:00

Ohayo~ Modding only Polka's Insane as agreed in the contract. o3o

Polka's Insane

Really nice difficulty! \w/ Some minor suggestions. >w<

Current tags are inconsistent. /w\ Would you ming telling Hobbes2 to do this for you? =o
Since your diffs are the only ones which have kiai, I'd like to know the reason behind why you set them. /u\ They're not bad but since it's kiai time, i think it would be cool if you could increase the volume of both kiai to give that emphasis you were trying to aim here. o3o/
[]
00:02:860 (5,6) - Questionable jump. Why is it here? o: I guess this sound 00:03:172 - is important but you didn't add it here 00:05:048 (8) - which would've been cool if you did so. >w< Otherwise, please consider managing the same DS to be coherent among the similar patterns you aimed to create here. o:
00:05:465 (3,4) - OMG! The distance between these is rather high. /u\ If we compared with the other 1/4 spacing, they do not come up with something as far as this patter does. ;w; What about if we reduced them slightly in order to fix this? o: I think it would hurt no one if we placed this pattern 00:05:256 (1,2,3) - around 221|61 to make the distance more balanced. >w<
00:11:925 (1) - My will would never lead to destroy symmetry or patterns related to it, but I'm quite curious why you decided to land a 1/2 instead of a triplet like the previous patterns. It is not bad but I think it would be better if you could be consistent in this section before the build-up of the new stanza, just as well as you've done at every new measure. o:
00:21:199 (6) - NC maybe? Could work since it would allow players to distinguish the stream section part from the previous one as well as you set it here 00:06:090 (1) -
00:38:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The low spacing of this segment is intended? It doesn't look bad but I do believe they would look nicer if you could use the same distance as the previous segment.
00:41:310 (2) - Just a suggestion but what about adding ctrl + g here to emphasize the next slider? /u\
00:45:374 (1) - I don't want to sound picky but ends on a very weird spot. It doesn't make much difference but at spinning it would be greater if you could add some volume control to adjust the volume of it. I think it would match pretty well since the fading out effect of the song could fit here as well. >w< Please, try it! o3o

Best of success with the map! Have a star! (ノ･ω･)ノ

Izzywing

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Topic Starter

Izzywing 2017-01-04T23:56:28+00:00

NOTE TO POLKA ND COLDTOOTH - Please redownload because I fixed countdown and tags

-BlueSun- wrote:
Normal
to me it seem very unclear with what rythm you are trying to follow here. for example, 00:00:255 - here you aren't following the main rythmn (which is fine) but then here 00:06:923 - you are following the main rythmn which can throw players off, you should just stick to one rythmn. My rhythm selection in normals tries to follow the song is best i can without being too complicated

Advanced
00:21:929 (1,2,3) - make this into like a triangle shape or something because it looks quite boring. Slightly adjusted
00:23:596 (1,2,3,4) - is this really necessary? this doens't flow well at all, just make them into this its ok

Hard
00:26:930 (1,2,3,4) - same thing here but it's probably more acceptable for a hard diff, its up to you if you wanna change it or not.
00:34:433 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - making this into a stream probably wont hurt. Didn't want any true streams in this diff

Polka's Insane
couldn't find anything here.

GL

thanks

Bakari wrote:
This post is sponsored by Tesco. Not really, tho.

[General]
Polka's Insane has no preview point set. Please set one as it is required by the RC and sounds quite unnatural wthout it. Fixed
Disable the countdown which doesn't really work anyway? Done
Harder difficulties could benefit from Slider Tick Rate 4, give it a try on the Insane and I+ difficulties. Not a fan, personally. Feels kinda overmappy on a few ticks.
[Normal]
00:01:505 (3) - let's use a 1/2 slider here instead? The beat on the red tick is pretty strong and I would insist on having it mapped in some way. I'll consider this but I'm actually following the deep piano sounds on the background in which there's no sound on the red tick 00:00:255 (1,2,3,1,2) -
00:35:267 - try to lower your rhythm density here to be more consistent with Easy and to emphasize the volume decrease? I want the rhythm to be identical to the start of the song here. I think it generally is less dense than the chorus in general.

Neat.
[Advanced]
00:02:547 (2,3) - since 1/4 snaps are just being introduced I would recommend to use regular spacing for them. It will still look pretty and give a more accurate idea of what 1/4 is and how to hit it.
Note: obviously, this will aply to all of the 1/4 snapped patterns. Took some tinkering, but implemented.

Apart from that spacing thing there is nothing I could disagree with or imorove. I like it.
[Hard]
00:20:574 (1) - try to use 1/2 snapped circles instead of the slider? This would give some extra emphasis to the drum stuff and make the part stand out, which is a nice thing, in my opinion. Eh, I think using a quadruplet in a hard is too challenging. Making it a slider adds a lot of leniency. I get your point though.

That is too streamy to my standards but it works with the spread. Perhaps I would name it a Hyper, but this could be just me. It's a streamy song so I think it fits. The advanced introduces 1/4 in a healthy way, and there's not really anything beyond triplets and the quadruplet pattern.
[To the Beat!]
00:20:574 (4) - probably a new combo here would increase readability. No big deal, but it seems to work slightly better when you have one placed. Great idea.

Interesting usage of stacks.
Whoa, that was impressive!

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Best of luck!

Thank you Bakari!

00:13:697 (2) - maybe reverse the shape here so it flows better, adjust the next slidershape too if you change Not sure if you mean to ctrl+g or flip it; I can consider flipping it but I wouldn't ctrl+g it.
00:23:596 (1,2) - and so on...: that is pretty hard to read and the overlap of the circle with the sliderhead doesnt look really nice imo. If you make the circle farther away from the sliderhead and let it overlap with the slidertail it would look better http://puu.sh/t9QxR/c6347f603a.jpg Cool idea, implemented, Used a .5 DS then ctrlGd the sliders
00:32:036 (2,3) - fix the stack Done
00:35:058 (4,1,2) - this is really unpleasant flow because you move at bottom left but the next object is rather top right.. maybe make it flow to left top before I'll consider, but I probably won't change this. I think it's fine.
00:35:371 (2) - .
00:38:184 - i kinda disagree that this strong sound is covered by a reverse slider, should be clickable imo [/color]
00:39:852 - especially this I'll leave the rhythm symmetrical to the opening

interesting map, i like it

thank you

NOTE TO POLKA ND COLDTOOTH - Please redownload because I fixed countdown and tags

ColdTooth

1,100 posts

Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2017-01-05T01:31:59+00:00

-BlueSun- wrote:
ColdTooth's Easy
00:29:431 (2) - remove this and add a slider from here 00:29:014 - 00:29:848 - it flows better with the music.
my modding is bad sry

Bakari wrote:
This post is sponsored by Tesco. Not really, tho.

[ColdTooth's Easy]
00:14:426 (2) - there are stronger beats 1/1 before and 1/1 ahead. Why not map them? the most generic and simple example
Note: 00:29:431 (2) - same here. Also, (2) feels as if it should be snapped 1/2 earlier and replacing it with the pattern suggested would solve the problem.

Both fixed, and slightly adjusted notes after 00:29:431 (2) - . I took your generic and simple example cause I thought it worked the best IMO. Lemme know if it doesn't work out that well

Nice one.
Thank you.

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Best of luck!

I re dled the map, Hobbes, but do please double check incase something screwed up ok i fixed it

polka

1,125 posts

Joined March 2014

polka 2017-01-08T05:58:14+00:00

Bakari wrote:
This post is sponsored by Tesco. Not really, tho.

[Polka's Insane]
00:20:574 (4) - something similar with the previous difficulty. Two circles instead of a slider would work a lot better in terms of empasising stuff. Give it a try and see if you like it. ok

Streamy and pretty well-made.
[Polka's Another]
00:04:839 (7,8,1) - shouldn't the jump be on (1) or at least both on (8) and (1). One is a downbeat with a pretty strong beat on it, it definitely needs something to stress it. I don't think so. the jumps were to emphasize piano. and the drums just dont hit as hard enough to call for a jump for me.
Note: 00:38:184 (7,8,1) - same. 00:39:852 (7,8) - same here. You vcould just Ctrl+G these two, I think. Again, I just want to emphasize piano. The drums really aren't as intense in comparison.
00:16:510 (9) - just for readability and a better-looking pttern I would place (9) in the centre of this square. exampleI like the way it makes 00:16:510 (9,10,1) -. Plus, it would take way too much remapping to even be worth it imo
Note: 00:19:845 (9) - 00:31:307 (8,9) - same. I really just dont see why this is necessary, it's consistent and these overlaps are something that really compliments my style. So Im going to keep this.
00:21:199 (7,8,9,10) - since these are weake than the previous stream I would nerf the spacing here. And perhaps add a new combo to separate them from 00:20:261 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - okay
00:28:702 (2,3) - minor - you could improve the blanket here, if you intended to have one here. blanket improved.

Good one. I think the jumps were a bit tricky at times and we can re-arrange them so that some of them could work better with the music, but apart from that it's a nice difficulty.

Thank you.

polka's insane

00:01:297 (6,7) - the DS is very low here but 00:01:713 (7) - is such a strong sound which should get emphasized somehow. furthermore the DS at 00:01:713 (7,1) - is very high but 00:01:922 (1) - hasnt got any special sound to deserve to be emphasized

I really don't understand what you're saying. I put a jump for the new part in music.
00:03:589 - the 1/1 beat begins here and except for 00:04:423 - you constantly map it. id make this aswell being noticed somehow

Mapping piano here.
00:13:801 - it feels really weird if you skip these sounds because they are the most noticeable ones... same tihng for the other sounds at the red ticks but idk if you wanna change it. it just feels really awkward

I disagree. Those sounds are not important at all compared to the piano.
00:26:097 (5,6,7,8,9) - this flow is really unpleasant. id reverse the streamshape so it gets also blanket'd and flows way better

I cant reverse it because it would go off screen and overlapping it doesnt match my style or look nice.
00:36:309 (6,7,1) - same thing here as my first note: 00:36:725 (7) - should have more DS before it and a bit less after it because this sound should be emphasized and therefore be different/seperated. currently you just treat this sound as a normal quite sound like all the others (especially if you compare it to 00:36:934 (1) - which is barely hearable)

It is totally audible because Ive mapped it the entire time. Same reasoning for spacing as before.

Thanks.

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Ohayo~ Modding only Polka's Insane as agreed in the contract. o3o

Polka's Insane
Really nice difficulty! \w/ Some minor suggestions. >w<
Current tags are inconsistent. /w\ Would you ming telling Hobbes2 to do this for you? =o I think he did idk
Since your diffs are the only ones which have kiai, I'd like to know the reason behind why you set them. /u\ They're not bad but since it's kiai time, i think it would be cool if you could increase the volume of both kiai to give that emphasis you were trying to aim here. o3o/ The big burst into the intensity of the music deserves kiai. However, the intense part lasts so long, I cut it to be a burst, otherwise the whole map would be kiai.
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00:02:860 (5,6) - Questionable jump. Why is it here? o: I guess this sound 00:03:172 - is important but you didn't add it here 00:05:048 (8) - which would've been cool if you did so. >w< Otherwise, please consider managing the same DS to be coherent among the similar patterns you aimed to create here. o: fixed.
00:05:465 (3,4) - OMG! The distance between these is rather high. /u\ If we compared with the other 1/4 spacing, they do not come up with something as far as this patter does. ;w; What about if we reduced them slightly in order to fix this? o: I think it would hurt no one if we placed this pattern 00:05:256 (1,2,3) - around 221|61 to make the distance more balanced. >w< When fixing ur first suggestion, it also fixed this one. ouo;
00:11:925 (1) - My will would never lead to destroy symmetry or patterns related to it, but I'm quite curious why you decided to land a 1/2 instead of a triplet like the previous patterns. It is not bad but I think it would be better if you could be consistent in this section before the build-up of the new stanza, just as well as you've done at every new measure. o: I just didn't hear a triplet as strongly, so no thanks.
00:21:199 (6) - NC maybe? Could work since it would allow players to distinguish the stream section part from the previous one as well as you set it here 00:06:090 (1) - ok
00:38:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The low spacing of this segment is intended? It doesn't look bad but I do believe they would look nicer if you could use the same distance as the previous segment. increased spacing
00:41:310 (2) - Just a suggestion but what about adding ctrl + g here to emphasize the next slider? /u\ ok
00:45:374 (1) - I don't want to sound picky but ends on a very weird spot. It doesn't make much difference but at spinning it would be greater if you could add some volume control to adjust the volume of it. I think it would match pretty well since the fading out effect of the song could fit here as well. >w< Please, try it! o3o okay 8D
Best of success with the map! Have a star! (ノ･ω･)ノ

Thank uuu

insane

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TitleUnicode:ターゲットをこわせ！
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ArtistUnicode:安藤浩和、池上正、酒井省吾、橘田拓人
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Izzywing

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Topic Starter

Izzywing 2017-01-08T06:07:50+00:00

updated, thanks

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2017-01-10T02:45:13+00:00

Easy :
- OD 2,5 hp 2 pls
- 00:05:256 (3) - why N sampleset here? the sliderslide voice is so noisy. change with click the head tail and repeat and use sampleset Normal instead
- 00:11:508 (2) - minor tho but you can move to 264,32 is better consistent spacing
- 00:20:261 (1) - move to 4,284 to keep use 1,0x spacing?
- 00:35:267 - volume 35% i think. 50% is too loud
- 00:48:605 - 5%

Normal :
- can use od 3,8 or 4
- 00:00:880 (2) - not sure what you're following here. the piano sound is at 00:00:984 -
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3,1,2) - ok for this try follow piano since idk what you're following D:
- 00:15:885 (2) - same with above but if you follow piano here then 00:16:719 - should be mapped as well
- 00:30:890 (2) - i cant understand what you're following here too. 1/1 slider for 00:31:099 - is better for drum
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3,1,2) - same here, try follow the piano in more obvious sounds since still hard to notice what you're following here
- 00:48:605 - 5%

Advanced :
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3) - same like normal. try follow piano properly
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:24:846 (5) - wtf a jump? advanced diff is ok but still no jump or just a mini jump for it
- 00:48:605 - 5%
Easy :
- OD 2,5 hp 2 pls
- 00:05:256 (3) - why N sampleset here? the sliderslide voice is so noisy. change with click the head tail and repeat and use sampleset Normal instead
- 00:11:508 (2) - minor tho but you can move to 264,32 is better consistent spacing
- 00:20:261 (1) - move to 4,284 to keep use 1,0x spacing?
- 00:35:267 - volume 35% i think. 50% is too loud
- 00:48:605 - 5%

Normal :
- can use od 3,8 or 4
- 00:00:880 (2) - not sure what you're following here. the piano sound is at 00:00:984 -
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3,1,2) - ok for this try follow piano since idk what you're following D:
- 00:15:885 (2) - same with above but if you follow piano here then 00:16:719 - should be mapped as well
- 00:30:890 (2) - i cant understand what you're following here too. 1/1 slider for 00:31:099 - is better for drum
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3,1,2) - same here, try follow the piano in more obvious sounds since still hard to notice what you're following here
- 00:48:605 - 5%

Advanced :
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3) - same like normal. try follow piano properly
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:24:846 (5) - wtf a jump? advanced diff is ok but still no jump or just a mini jump for it
- 00:48:605 - 5%

Hard :
- HP 1,8 wtf dont make meme use 5 instead :C
- 00:08:591 (1,2) - i think 1/2 is better than this because the melody sounds at 1/2 instead of 1/4
- 00:11:092 (5) - remove whistle on tail for consistency with 00:11:508 (6) - 's tail
- 00:13:592 (1,2) - same as 00:08:591 (1,2) -
- i think the spread to this diff a bit bad because your hard diff contains full of 1/4 even 1/4 streams like 00:20:261 (1,2,3,1) - when ur advanced diff 1/4 are not much

Insane :
- OD 7,5

Another :
- 00:06:715 (12) - more like 1/4 rather than 1/8

Click :
- OD 8,5

Good luck ~

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-01-12T17:53:44+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Normal :
- can use od 3,8 or 4 I prefer if OD is one minus AR
- 00:00:880 (2) - not sure what you're following here. the piano sound is at 00:00:984 - Listen closely on the red tick, you can hear a low pitched piano sound; I think it is more simple to the player if I follow this as the rhythm is more intuitive for the player. I don't really want to have active blue ticks in a normal so I followed these low pitched piano sounds instead of the main high pitched one.
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3,1,2) - ok for this try follow piano since idk what you're following D: Similarly, 00:02:547 - and 00:02:860 - both have that low pitched sound as well which is why this is a 3/4 reverse slider.
- 00:15:885 (2) - same with above but if you follow piano here then 00:16:719 - should be mapped as well Adjusted the rhythm
- 00:30:890 (2) - i cant understand what you're following here too. 1/1 slider for 00:31:099 - is better for drum But there's no drum on 00:31:307 - o_o
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3,1,2) - same here, try follow the piano in more obvious sounds since still hard to notice what you're following here Same as before I'm following the deep piano noise
- 00:48:605 - 5% Reduced volume to 15 since there's technically a sound there

I understand that it's kinda hard to follow what I'm mapping to sometimes but I chose a very simplified rhythm so that the player wouldn't be confused by weird gaps (like 3/4) between objects.

Advanced :
- 00:00:255 (1,2,3) - same like normal. try follow piano properly
- 00:35:267 (1,2,3) - ^ Same for normal here. Simplified rhythm since the piano falls on weird ticks. dont want much active 1/4 in advanced iff
- 00:24:846 (5) - wtf a jump? advanced diff is ok but still no jump or just a mini jump for it Whoops, redid the pattern so theres no jump
- 00:48:605 - 5% Okay!

Hard :
- HP 1,8 wtf dont make meme use 5 instead :C I wasn't memeing this was a mistake lol
- 00:08:591 (1,2) - i think 1/2 is better than this because the melody sounds at 1/2 instead of 1/4 ok
- 00:11:092 (5) - remove whistle on tail for consistency with 00:11:508 (6) - 's tail break the hitsound pattern though
- 00:13:592 (1,2) - same as 00:08:591 (1,2) - maybe not for this one since the other melody is introduced
- i think the spread to this diff a bit bad because your hard diff contains full of 1/4 even 1/4 streams like 00:20:261 (1,2,3,1) - when ur advanced diff 1/4 are not much I think its fine. The advanced does have 1/4 in it and this is a pretty streamy song in general. At most this diff really has tripltes, the quadruplet happens at the climax.

Click :
- OD 8,5 Ok

Good luck ~

thanks for the mod!

I know the rhythms are pretty undermapped (something something pishi's filtering video) for the normal and advanced where it doesnt follow the piano blue ticks but its hard to do that while maintaining good playability.

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2017-01-12T20:28:59+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Easy :
- OD 2,5 hp 2 pls Fine
- 00:05:256 (3) - why N sampleset here? the sliderslide voice is so noisy. change with click the head tail and repeat and use sampleset Normal instead Reduced volume to 40%
- 00:11:508 (2) - minor tho but you can move to 264,32 is better consistent spacing Nice catch, readjusted the slider after that.
- 00:20:261 (1) - move to 4,284 to keep use 1,0x spacing? Not needed IMO, I wanted to have a tiny break here. That, and there's a huge 4/1 gap from the two and you only see 00:21:929 (1) - about 1 a beat after 00:20:261 (1) - , so I decided to lessen the spacing here.
- 00:35:267 - volume 35% i think. 50% is too loud Agreed.
- 00:48:605 - 5% Changed to 15%, same reasoning from Hobbes

Good luck ~

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polka

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Joined March 2014

polka 2017-01-21T18:27:08+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Insane :
- OD 7,5 OD 8 LMAO oops. Fixed

Another :
- 00:06:715 (12) - more like 1/4 rather than 1/8 fixed.

Good luck ~

insane

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Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2017-01-24T18:38:32+00:00

from my stack queue

stacks that are off in top diff (counting in the pixel ones)
00:00:255 (1,2) -
00:00:671 (3,4,5) -
00:01:922 (1,2) -
00:08:591 (1,2) -
00:14:009 (3,6) -
00:15:677 (3,6) -
00:22:241 (4,2) -
00:30:369 (2,5) -
00:43:603 (1,2,4) -

some stacks might have to be readjusted since you use them so heavily
good luck!

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-01-25T04:41:02+00:00

i always upvote mario

nm from my queue (99th kd gahhhh)'

To the beat

• 00:05:569 (1,2) - it flows better if this gore from right to left rather than the way you have it, but it makes sense with either way (you might want to adjust 00:05:881 (1,2,3) - if this is changed :p )

• 00:13:697 (2,3,4,5) - Personally am not a big fan of this overlap. I would make it look neater by making it more consistent with 00:10:154 (8,1) - and 00:07:653 (4,5) -

• 00:17:031 (2,3) - 00:18:698 (2,3) - ctrl+g for the rhythm? would feel better if this slider followed the piano

• 00:28:181 (1,2) - I kept reading as a 1/4 because of the gradual spacing change leading up to this (although it might just be me). Maybe you could move the nc at 00:28:598 (1) - to 00:28:389 (2) - or put a new one there?

• 00:37:663 (4) - Make this curve wider? it just doesn't feel like this aesthetic fits in nicely being surrounded by the sliders at 00:35:683 (3,4,5) - 00:38:705 (2,3) - etc.

Polka Another

• 00:09:633 (5,6,7,1) - Just a small aesthetic thing, but make these overlaps consistent in how much they cover the other circle? (if you want to check for this, strl+g 00:09:841 (6,7) - and check the ds)

• 00:10:258 (1,4) - ~~this triggers me~~

• 00:18:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You can space this more if you want to. It's less spaced than 00:15:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not really necessary but just putting it out there

• 00:31:515 (9,2) - if you want to blanket, this looks like a good setup for one

• 00:40:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It looks like you ran out of room here with this overlap :p Maybe turn 00:40:268 (1,2,3) - 90 degrees or move it to make it look neater?

• 00:48:605 - silence this

These were mostly just suggestions so good job

Polka Insane

• AR 8.5 would feel better on this

• 00:42:352 (2,6) - twitches

• 00:28:598 - didnt you put a kiai burst here in your other difficulty?

• 00:08:591 (1,2,3,4) 00:43:603 (1,2,3,4) - In my opinion, it looks a litte nicer if the follow points are tangential to the curve of the next slider when you're flowing directly into them. If you don't want to make this like that though it's not a problem

Again nice job

Hard

• 00:04:631 (5) - Curve this maybe like the rest of the combo?

• 00:19:011 (2,3,4) - 00:22:346 (2,3,4) - 00:23:596 (1,2,3) - 00:25:680 (2,3,4) - These 4 sections have the map essentially have the same rhythm, but aren't consistent aesthetically. Some are fully overlap, some partially, and some only a little. I would probably make these consistent.

• 00:31:932 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels pretty dull imo, its only a 1/1 rhythm just with kicksliders. There's not much emphasis on the slidertail (I promote the fact that you're using different patterns though.)

• 00:39:643 (5) - Again, curve this like the rest of the combo?

Advanced

• 00:00:255 (1,2) - 00:01:922 (1,2) - These 4 sliders are hard to follow, because the rhythm int he intro is kinda misleading. In an advanced, I think you can start these sliders on the blue ticks

• 00:07:757 (3,4) - Make these 2 the same slider with ctrlc+v, then rotate?

• 00:20:261 (1) - Sure, a spinner can fit here, but for an advanced I think you can also map these strong notes at 00:20:261 - through 00:20:991 -

good job

Normal

• 00:16:927 (1,2,3) - This rhythm breaks your pattern of 3 beats of hitobjects + 1 beat break ( 00:10:258 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ) I would move 00:17:969 (3) - back half of a beat

That's all

Coldtooth Easy

• 00:20:261 (1) - Make these wiggles on the slider more even?

• 00:20:261 (1) - map this as a long slider? You have some notes to represent it

• 00:36:517 - circle here?

• 00:40:268 - make clickable?

• 00:42:769 (3,4,5) - I think ctrl+g for this would make a better rhythm. 00:43:603 - feels like it should be clicked because its at a big white tick

Cool set, good luck with rank

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