Soraru x Mafumafu - Zen Zen Zense · forum

Chibi Maruko

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-20T13:54:20+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, March 22, 2017 at 11:11:55 AM

Artist: Soraru x Mafumafu
Title: Zen Zen Zense
Source: 君の名は。
Tags: taki mitsuha your name movie cover RADWIMPS cut ver Noffy Ayyri
BPM: 190
Filesize: 4611kb
Play Time: 01:34
Difficulties Available:

Ayyffy's Normal (2.46 stars, 215 notes)
Easy (1.66 stars, 142 notes)
Extra (5.28 stars, 415 notes)
Hard (3.3 stars, 275 notes)
Insane (4.75 stars, 365 notes)

Download: Soraru x Mafumafu - Zen Zen Zense
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy: me (Remap)
Ayyffy's Normal: Noffy and Ayyri
Hard: me
Insane: me
Extra: me

Thanks for these people!

Modders:
YukiZura-
FuruSatori
Juiceys
1iluxaxa20
PyroBear
Nemesis
WildCry
Pachiru
cute boy
Yahuri
Yoshino--
_Hatsune Miku
Noffy
_kotachi_
nextplay
Linada
Pituophis
AzureDoctor
bezbashn
Neanmoins
Remus
-Sakurasaki
Ohwow
Neoskylove
Sotarks
Osu Tatakae Ouendan
<a rel='nofollow' href='https://osu.ppy.sh/u/7424789'>Senshi</a>
-NanoRIPE-
6th
SnowNiNo_
KrastovLap
Kami-senpai
TequilaWolf
FruityEnLoops
Shifu Touka
Rad-
UndeadCapulet
gottagof4ast

Metadata
Venix
Namki

Thanks for nextplay bcs gave an awesome background!

Last edited by Chibi Maruko 2017-03-22T03:12:24+00:00, edited 39 times in total.

YukiZura-

762 posts

Joined October 2015

YukiZura- 2016-12-22T04:29:39+00:00

from mod queue -- bye bye 2016 ^^
another zen zen zen xD

Extra

00:01:342 (1,2) - first thing i saw blanket xD ... fix the blanket ^^
00:12:394 - to the same slider as this one 00:12:078 - an arrage it like this ^^ ..

example

00:21:552 (1,2) - blanket this?
00:38:605 (5,7) - this
01:12:078 (1,2) - and this ^^
01:28:342 - wanna try putting this a little bit higher

example

01:31:657 - why dont make this slider the same as this one 01:31:973 -

Easy

00:22:815 (3,4) - blanket :3
01:04:499 (1,2) - blanket can be better
01:27:868 - do like this intead? i think the flow is better ^^

example

01:34:105 - wanna try put another spinner here

i think that all .. nice map
btw since ur a msia player and i just see only 2 diff xD can i make a gd on insane diff

im not good with making easy normal and hard for some reason lol

rock time

264 posts

Joined January 2015

rock time 2016-12-22T04:41:32+00:00

hey m4m

Extra

looks like you need some custom combo colours!
00:01:342 (1,2) blanket here?
00:06:394 (1,2) same here?
00:21:552 (1,2) ^
00:23:920 (5,6) maybe increase space between these to match 3 and 4?
00:24:710 (3,1) pls the small overlap fix
00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) stream looks weird to me idk fix isnt really necessary, also its spacing isnt the same as other streams in this section
00:46:184 (6,7) feels awkward, ctrl+g 6 and 7 so they are facing down
00:52:815 (5,3) i know they are far apart time wise, but distance wise they are close and look weird, maybe move over one of them a little
00:55:657 (1,2) increase spacing, this anti jump doesnt work here
01:01:657 (4,5) the spacing here could be slightly bigger since the other types of this pattern are, like 01:03:868 (3,4)
01:14:526 (1,1) why NC spam here?
01:29:289 (6,7,8) feels awkward, fix not necessary but think about redoing it incase u decide its awkward

srry for short mod! (dont give kudosu if u dont think its long enough to deserve!)

great map, hope to see it ranked soon

good luck mr ~~monstrata~~ maruko!
if u dont think the mod is long enough to justify your end of the m4m, just let me know so i dont expect a mod

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-22T13:52:51+00:00

YukiZura- wrote:
from mod queue -- bye bye 2016 ^^
another zen zen zen xD

Extra

00:01:342 (1,2) - first thing i saw blanket xD ... fix the blanket ^^ nope. I want to keep this
00:12:394 - to the same slider as this one 00:12:078 - an arrage it like this ^^ .. yeee. not sure if i would fix this. Anyway, those sliders are not strange for me ^^ like kagetsu
example
00:21:552 (1,2) - blanket this? nope
00:38:605 (5,7) - this nope
01:12:078 (1,2) - and this ^^ nope too cause at slide (5) should keep these like monstrata style I guess LOL
01:28:342 - wanna try putting this a little bit higher fixed
example
01:31:657 - why dont make this slider the same as this one 01:31:973 - nice question. oh yeah, I won''t make slider same at last slider cause it's pretty nice like i copy monstrata's map. meh, don't have idea to say :p

Easy

00:22:815 (3,4) - blanket :3 on my eyeballs, already blanket lol
01:04:499 (1,2) - blanket can be better same as above
01:27:868 - do like this intead? i think the flow is better ^^ oh yeah. It's interesting now
example
01:34:105 - wanna try put another spinner here lel, it's make more harder for newbie player and you know, easy diff right?

i think that all .. nice map
btw since ur a msia player and i just see only 2 diff xD can i make a gd on insane diff
im not good with making easy normal and hard for some reason lol

thanks for mod!
will pm you

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-23T03:57:00+00:00

FuruSatori wrote:
hey m4m

Extra
looks like you need some custom combo colours!
00:01:342 (1,2) blanket here? nope
00:06:394 (1,2) same here? nope
00:21:552 (1,2) ^ nope again
00:23:920 (5,6) maybe increase space between these to match 3 and 4? mayb your idea kinda low fun. But will find another pattern to fix
00:24:710 (3,1) pls the small overlap fix fixed
00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) stream looks weird to me idk fix isnt really necessary, also its spacing isnt the same as other streams in this section meh, it's depends on hitsound. So, first should low den make it higher than first
00:46:184 (6,7) feels awkward, ctrl+g 6 and 7 so they are facing down it's could be easier than old since my diff are extra but realistic is insane lel
00:52:815 (5,3) i know they are far apart time wise, but distance wise they are close and look weird, maybe move over one of them a little [/color]
00:55:657 (1,2) increase spacing, this anti jump doesnt work here would be high emphasize here. I think will fix soon for next modder!
01:01:657 (4,5) the spacing here could be slightly bigger since the other types of this pattern are, like 01:03:868 (3,4) fixed
01:14:526 (1,1) why NC spam here? oh my. didn't notice dat. fixed!
01:29:289 (6,7,8) feels awkward, fix not necessary but think about redoing it incase u decide its awkward fixed

srry for short mod! (dont give kudosu if u dont think its long enough to deserve!)
great map, hope to see it ranked soon
good luck mr ~~monstrata~~ maruko! Thanks, ~~sotarks~~ Satori!
if u dont think the mod is long enough to justify your end of the m4m, just let me know so i dont expect a mod

thanks for mod
will mod soon

Juiceys

530 posts

Joined June 2016

Juiceys 2016-12-27T06:40:27+00:00

Easy:
00:07:026 (2,3) - Strange flow break here
01:10:184 (2,3) - ^
01:10:845 - Strong downbeat skipped here
00:20:289 (3,1) - flow break
00:23:447 (4,1,2) - ^
01:01:973 (1,2) - Could blanket to improve visuals and flow
01:19:657 (1,2) - Blanket?

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-27T09:51:36+00:00

Juiceys wrote:
Easy:
00:07:026 (2,3) - Strange flow break here fixed!
01:10:184 (2,3) - ^ it's fine bcs thseese are doesn't making opposite direction
01:10:845 - Strong downbeat skipped here well, i can't see dat timing. Maybe you're wrong
00:20:289 (3,1) - flow break fixed
00:23:447 (4,1,2) - ^ fixed
01:01:973 (1,2) - Could blanket to improve visuals and flow will find another way to fix. I guess th(is would harder
01:19:657 (1,2) - Blanket? nope

thanks for mod

Filius1408

6 posts

Joined April 2016

Filius1408 2016-12-27T10:28:29+00:00

Your mapset should include normal difficulty for better balance. You can make normal difficulty from your easy difficulty.
EASY:
Most important:
1)00:01:973 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
A lot of your sliders end on 1/2 (Red ticks)Like this for example, and it is not very good:

SPOILER

Make it like this:

SPOILER

2)00:04:499 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
3)00:07:026 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
4)00:44:920 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
5)01:10:184 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
6)01:12:710 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
7)01:15:236 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
8)01:17:763 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
9)01:18:552 (3) - Move this slider on 1/1 White ticks
10)01:25:342 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
11)01:27:868 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
12)01:30:394 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
13)01:31:657 (4) - you can delete reverse arrow here, place spinner on 1/1 tick and spinner should end there: 01:32:289
14)01:34:184 - place new slider, it should end on 01:34:815

Less important:
I think that you should correct the form of your sliders(If you want):
Yours

SPOILER

How it will be better(in my own opinion):

SPOILER

HARD:
1)Overall Difficulty should be 6 or Higher (your is 5);
2)00:14:605 (3) - you can make this slider like these

SPOILER

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-27T14:31:09+00:00

1iluxaxa20 wrote:
Your mapset should include normal difficulty for better balance. You can make normal difficulty from your easy difficulty.
EASY:
Most important:
1)00:01:973 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
A lot of your sliders end on 1/2 (Red ticks)Like this for example, and it is not very good:
SPOILER
Make it like this:
SPOILER

2)00:04:499 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
3)00:07:026 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
4)00:44:920 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on 1/1(White tick) note
5)01:10:184 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
6)01:12:710 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
7)01:15:236 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
8)01:17:763 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
9)01:18:552 (3) - Move this slider on 1/1 White ticks
10)01:25:342 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
11)01:27:868 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
12)01:30:394 (2) - Make this slider shorter and place on next 1/1(White tick) note
13)01:31:657 (4) - you can delete reverse arrow here, place spinner on 1/1 tick and spinner should end there: 01:32:289
14)01:34:184 - place new slider, it should end on 01:34:815
sorry m8. Your idea looks very unusual for hitsounds. I m8 my speaker should fix it bcs right speaker are broken. Anyway, i'd remap easy caouse ds are too high lel

Less important:
I think that you should correct the form of your sliders(If you want):
Yours
SPOILER
How it will be better(in my own opinion):
SPOILER

wait, if you wanted to fix dat, where is timing lol?

HARD:
1)Overall Difficulty should be 6 or Higher (your is 5); fixed
2)00:14:605 (3) - you can make this slider like these it would make bad flows

SPOILER

thanks for mod lel

PyroBear

144 posts

Joined October 2015

PyroBear 2016-12-28T03:52:12+00:00

The singers are Soraru×Mafumafu

[Insane]

00:25:815 (3,4,5) - I think mapping like this is better.
00:39:236 (1) - weird flow.
00:44:920 (3) - ctrl-g, ^
00:54:394 (1) - Make it a curved slider instead of a sharp angle.
01:09:236 Why is this unmapped?

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-28T06:06:39+00:00

PyroBear wrote:
The singers are Soraru×Mafumafu oh my. didn't know dat. fix all

[Insane]
00:25:815 (3,4,5) - I think mapping like this is better. i won't do that bcs it's uncomfortable you mapped and need to rest the players to the next level :p
00:39:236 (1) - weird flow. ikr. You think it's weird flow. will find another way to fix
00:44:920 (3) - ctrl-g, ^ nope
00:54:394 (1) - Make it a curved slider instead of a sharp angle. fixed
01:09:236 Why is this unmapped? lol. Before kiai stars, player need to ready for chorus part cause chorus part are harder lel

thanks for mod

[Nemesis]

[Nemesis] 2016-12-28T09:29:04+00:00

Hello, M4M'ing.

Potato

General
imo ar=9,3 is unnecessary, especially in Insane. I suggest putting AR=9 in Insane and ar=9 or ar=9,2 in Extra.

Extra

00:31:657 (1) - feels kinda clumsy after a stream, I'd suggest putting them in a straight line, or making the slider stand out a bit more. Right now it looks like it was put in unintentionally.

01:07:973 (5,5,6,7,8,9) - put them in a straight line, feels unaesthetic atm

01:22:184 (1) - put this one a tiny little bit further, so it makes a perfect line with 01:21:394 (3,5,6,7,8) - .

01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - uhm, feels a bit awkward D:

Insane

00:07:026 (3) - how about just copypasting 00:06:394 (1) - ? Looks better

00:08:289 (3,4,5) - suggestion: how about making them composed a bit more with 00:07:973 (2) - ?

00:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - I'd repeat one of the concepts, either two repeats and one note, or no repeats and three notes.

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - might be confusing, change the DS

00:27:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels uncomfortable, sorry :/

00:41:131 (3,4,5,6) - fix the DS between one of them

I just wanna mention that I love Kiai in this one. Good job!

Hard

01:08:289 (1,2) - I feel like this might be confusing for some players, maybe it's just me lol

No more issues from me

Easy

00:10:184 (3) - these are unnecessary, since it's just one slider, might as well delete them

00:25:342 (3) - doesn't follow the flow quite well, I'd make it guide to 00:26:289 (4) - a bit more.

Overall, a really decent beatmap, keep up the good work!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-29T00:36:36+00:00

[Nemesis] wrote:
Hello, M4M'ing.

Potato
General
imo ar=9,3 is unnecessary, especially in Insane. I suggest putting AR=9 in Insane and ar=9 or ar=9,2 in Extra. lol, the insane was didn't know. fix but extra i won't lel cause it's awesome jumps with ar9.3

Extra

00:31:657 (1) - feels kinda clumsy after a stream, I'd suggest putting them in a straight line, or making the slider stand out a bit more. Right now it looks like it was put in unintentionally. if fix, more like clumsy :p.

01:07:973 (5,5,6,7,8,9) - put them in a straight line, feels unaesthetic atm will find another way to fix

01:22:184 (1) - put this one a tiny little bit further, so it makes a perfect line with 01:21:394 (3,5,6,7,8) - .it's fine tho

01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - uhm, feels a bit awkward D: ikr but it's suitable for hitsounds which means 3,4,5 circles has same hitsounds 1/2

Insane

00:07:026 (3) - how about just copypasting 00:06:394 (1) - ? Looks better lol you see you looks same i thought.

00:08:289 (3,4,5) - suggestion: how about making them composed a bit more with 00:07:973 (2) - ? fixed

00:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - I'd repeat one of the concepts, either two repeats and one note, or no repeats and three notes. lol fixed

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - might be confusing, change the DS fixed

00:27:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feels uncomfortable, sorry :/ it's fine tho

00:41:131 (3,4,5,6) - fix the DS between one of them fixed

I just wanna mention that I love Kiai in this one. Good job! thanks, m8! i hope you enjoy it

Hard

01:08:289 (1,2) - I feel like this might be confusing for some players, maybe it's just me lol lol. hard player are fine about ar. they don't confusing again.

No more issues from me

Easy

00:10:184 (3) - these are unnecessary, since it's just one slider, might as well delete them lol, noe. cause idk what im going to put here. as usual, copy another zen zen zense of already ranked

00:25:342 (3) - doesn't follow the flow quite well, I'd make it guide to 00:26:289 (4) - a bit more. fixed slider

Overall, a really decent beatmap, keep up the good work! thanks m8!

thanks for mod!

WildCry

154 posts

Joined May 2014

WildCry 2016-12-30T03:05:10+00:00

Hello!... NM From my modding queue post.

Hard

00:41:447 (4) - change circle and put a slider like this

01:14:605 (1) - move this a little more to the right be careful with the distance of the next circle.
01:21:552 (2) - if you do the previous thing, change this with ctrl g

Wow! good diff.

Insane

00:57:868 (5) - make this slider, well the slider tail and body more to the right like this...

This for emphasis the next slider and the voice of the singer( and give a strange but fun flow)

That's all. Great beatmap, Take one of my stars

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-30T10:11:44+00:00

WildCry wrote:
Hello!... NM From my modding queue post.

Hard

00:41:447 (4) - change circle and put a slider like this I might should no bcs since this diff follow the ds. But for like this, i won't
01:14:605 (1) - move this a little more to the right be careful with the distance of the next circle. fixed
01:21:552 (2) - if you do the previous thing, change this with ctrl g lol, the previous thing are doesn't same like this lel. no fix

Wow! good diff. thanks, m8!

Insane

00:57:868 (5) - make this slider, well the slider tail and body more to the right like this... it's could make harder for players and bad flows.
This for emphasis the next slider and the voice of the singer( and give a strange but fun flow)

That's all. Great beatmap, Take one of my stars Thanks for star!

Thanks for mod!

Pachiru

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Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2016-12-31T03:01:27+00:00

[Easy]

00:10:184 (3) - Why there is so much timing lines here? You should delete it here.
00:20:289 (3) - This slider touch the HP bar, move it a bit down on the grid.
00:40:499 (3) - Put the red anchor in the middle to give a better curves
00:53:131 (3) - Red anchor in the middle of the slider, on the white tick.
01:10:184 (2,3) - This part sounds really weird... You should try to reduce the size of the slider, and do a 1/1 slider here, and then add a new 1/1 slider here too: 01:10:815 -
01:18:552 (3) - That slider feels a bit wrong here, you should try to move it here: 01:18:710 - but delete the note here 01:19:342 (4) - to replace it by the previous slider and make it reverse, like that: https://puu.sh/t6o9K/c5433235e3.png
01:35:131 - Why you didn't add notes at the end, it feels mappable in my opinion.

[Hard]

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels really hard to read for an hard diff, and I don't know why there is a lot of reverses here.
Same at the end, why there is not mapping at the end of the map after the spinner? Because it could be very useful!
Don't forget to check again hitsounds, because I feel like at the end during the kiai, it feels weird and some beats are missing! So be careful with that! I'm not experienced into this, but I heard some things that don't fit with the song.

Strong diffs, so I have nothing else to say! But be careful with the HP bar too! >w<
Good luck with your map!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2016-12-31T10:13:34+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
[Easy]
00:10:184 (3) - Why there is so much timing lines here? You should delete it here. not involved in flow and rhythm lel. fixed
00:20:289 (3) - This slider touch the HP bar, move it a bit down on the grid. fixed
00:40:499 (3) - Put the red anchor in the middle to give a better curves nope
00:53:131 (3) - Red anchor in the middle of the slider, on the white tick. nope
01:10:184 (2,3) - This part sounds really weird... You should try to reduce the size of the slider, and do a 1/1 slider here, and then add a new 1/1 slider here too: 01:10:815 - i might i won't do it for a some reason. i'd follow the vocals
01:18:552 (3) - That slider feels a bit wrong here, you should try to move it here: 01:18:710 - but delete the note here 01:19:342 (4) - to replace it by the previous slider and make it reverse, like that: https://puu.sh/t6o9K/c5433235e3.png you idea kinda interesting for me, but the reverse slider you wanted me to fix no bcs it would make bad flows
01:35:131 - Why you didn't add notes at the end, it feels mappable in my opinion. lol you said mapable? if me, i can't say no bcs it's harder for newbie players. So, i need to decrese the hard of this diff since this diff are easy but became normal :p
[Hard]
00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part feels really hard to read for an hard diff, and I don't know why there is a lot of reverses here. mayb it's fine. i think you can't hear a sound stream, if me, can hear.
Same at the end, why there is not mapping at the end of the map after the spinner? Because it could be very useful!
Don't forget to check again hitsounds, because I feel like at the end during the kiai, it feels weird and some beats are missing! So be careful with that! I'm not experienced into this, but I heard some things that don't fit with the song. all your idea are fixed now!. Thanks for noticed dat!
Strong diffs, so I have nothing else to say! But be careful with the HP bar too! >w<
Good luck with your map!

thanks for mod!

vrnl

743 posts

Joined August 2014

vrnl 2017-01-01T02:55:24+00:00

hello from q

i can only do insane, extra so heres that

very well made maps, good job!

insane:
00:13:657 (6) - ctrl+g on this
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - kind of confusing, idk how u could fix if you wanted to
00:46:815 (1) - blanket this with 00:46:184 (5) -
01:10:499 (4,1) - stack maybe ?
01:34:815 (1) - this feels better at around x119 y119

extra:
00:13:973 (1,2) - this could be a triple
00:31:657 (1) - this is off from the stream, move it more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946276
00:55:657 (1,2) - think this looks better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946281
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - spaced differently??

sry for short mod. gl on rank /w/

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-01T03:23:37+00:00

will reply tommorrow

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-01T04:02:19+00:00

m4m from queue~
modded an extra diff cuz you modded the whole set

General
at this section, 00:56:920 - you use claps in Extra but not Easy. I think you should make it consistent.

Easy
-change diff name to Normal
00:10:184 (3) - could use a little tweaking so that the red anchor is exactly on this beat 00:10:815
00:23:447 (4,1) - fix DS
00:31:026 (4) - change slider length to 1 beat then add a circle 00:31:657 so you can get a click on soraru's entrance
00:51:552 - missed a pretty loud note here, map it
00:55:342 (2,3) - ctrl+g the rhythm so you can get a click on 00:55:973 for finish sound
01:01:973 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:19:657 (1,2) - blanket?
01:32:289 - could map circle here instead for finish sound

Insane
00:05:447 (2,3,4,5) - why not use the same pattern as this? 00:02:920 (2,3,4)
00:07:973 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:22:815 (1,2) - why is DS so low here? i think it should be consistent with 00:21:236 (5,1) and 00:25:973 (4,5,1)
00:32:920 (1,2) - ^
00:35:763 (2,3,4) - ^ DS too large instead
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - this is really confusing because there is a jump into 3, then 4 is 1/2 spaced, then the next two circles are 1/1 spaced. i think you should space 3 from 4.
01:03:552 - put click for finish?
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - how about using the exact same slider shape for all these to illustrate the repeating "zen"?
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:289 - put click for finish?

Extra
00:03:552 (4,1) - jump feels underwhelming, considering the finish hitsound
00:06:078 (4,1) - ^
00:16:342 (6) - this note isnt that significant, its probably around the same intensity as 00:16:026 (4) so make jump around same distance as 00:15:868 (3,4). if anything, the jump to 00:16:184 (5) should be bigger than the one to 6.
00:16:499 (1) - make jump bigger for finish+guitar
00:25:973 (4,1) - overlap doesnt look neat,separate the objects
00:29:605 (2) - note is pretty soft, decrease jump
00:33:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - overmapped, some sounds dont exist ( 00:33:789 (6) - 00:33:946 (8) ) and these ones ( 00:33:473 (3) - 00:34:105 (10) ) are only continuations of cymbals, they aren't hits
00:35:684 - 00:35:842 - since youve been mapping 1/4, you missed some notes here
00:39:236 (1) - increase jump?
00:41:289 (2) - this note isnt that loud but this note 00:41:605 (4) - has loud guitar entrance, so i would make 4 have a bigger jump than 2
00:45:394 - add finish?
01:03:552 - put click here instead for finish?
01:11:763 (5,6,1) - jump from 6-1 should be smaller than 5-6 because 1 is a very strong vocal
01:15:078 (3,4,5) - hold back on jump DS because the vocals are pretty soft here. 01:16:973 (7,1) - would be more suitable for huge jumps because of the sudden increase in vocal intensity.
01:18:868 (4,7) - overlap doesnt look good, separate objects
01:19:657 (1) - jump could be bigger
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - placement looks weird, how about using a more curvy arc instead? 3-4-5 looks like a straight line right now which makes 2 feel out of place

Good luck!

Mordred

532 posts

Joined October 2015

Mordred 2017-01-01T19:07:35+00:00

from my q

General:

white combo color is unrankable afaik

Easy:

hp5 is too high

Your DS is kinda high, as well as really inconsistent, fix this please

01:13:657 (3,4) - also this blanket can be improved

Hard:

ar8 might be a little high, maybe ar7?

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - this is too hard for new players, try to not overlap it like this

rest of the diff looks ok

Insane:

od6 hp8? Shouldn't it be the other way around?

00:13:342 (4,5,6) - there is no need for such a big jump

00:17:763 (1,2) - this overlap plays weird

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - don't use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/1 like this

01:01:342 (3) - should be 1/2 imo

01:24:078 (5,6,7,1) - this flows really weird

01:32:368 (1) - why silence this spinner when there is a beat at the end of it?

Extra:

od6 hp8 again :thinking:

00:08:920 (1) - why is there no triple?

00:21:552 (1,2) - what even is this blanket

00:33:710 (5,6,7,8) - I don't hear anything 1/4 here

01:00:552 (5,2) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden, move (5) a bit

01:09:552 (1,2,3) - you have those as 1/2 in this diff but longer in insane?

01:17:131 (1) - should be faster imo

Good luck with the map

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-02T09:08:23+00:00

cute boy

cute boy wrote:
hello from q

i can only do insane, extra so heres that dat's fine

very well made maps, good job! thanks, m8!

insane:
00:13:657 (6) - ctrl+g on this mayb it's looks easier. no fix
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - kind of confusing, idk how u could fix if you wanted to lol it's not confusing even insane player can do this
00:46:815 (1) - blanket this with 00:46:184 (5) - looks bad aechieticts. no fix
01:10:499 (4,1) - stack maybe ? nope. I wanna to keep this ds
01:34:815 (1) - this feels better at around x119 y119 looks better now. fixed

extra:
00:13:973 (1,2) - this could be a triple fixed
00:31:657 (1) - this is off from the stream, move it more like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946276 fixed
00:55:657 (1,2) - think this looks better like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6946281 look's more bad flows for me since sound slow is here and i wanted to keep this cause you know, cool right
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - spaced differently?? ikr

sry for short mod. gl on rank /w/

Yahuri

Yahuri wrote:
m4m from queue~
modded an extra diff cuz you modded the whole set

General
at this section, 00:56:920 - you use claps in Extra but not Easy. I think you should make it consistent. ikr bcs i'm feeling lazy. fixed

Easy
-change diff name to Normal lol, why. I'm still waiting for mapper to map normal or i'd reject a request and make it myself xd
00:10:184 (3) - could use a little tweaking so that the red anchor is exactly on this beat 00:10:815 ikr but i have no idea how to add this part like i copy battle's ez or i'd ignore this and remove but it would make hard for newbie players
00:23:447 (4,1) - fix DS fixed
00:31:026 (4) - change slider length to 1 beat then add a circle 00:31:657 so you can get a click on soraru's entrance fixed
00:51:552 - missed a pretty loud note here, map it mapped
00:55:342 (2,3) - ctrl+g the rhythm so you can get a click on 00:55:973 for finish sound will find another way to fix. it would make harder to read for newbie players
01:01:973 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
01:19:657 (1,2) - blanket? fixed
01:32:289 - could map circle here instead for finish sound nope bcs newbie players are hard to reading an ar like this and could be ez since this is ez but move to normal lel.

Insane
00:05:447 (2,3,4,5) - why not use the same pattern as this? 00:02:920 (2,3,4) it would be ez for player. I'd keep this part are different instead of style
00:07:973 (2,3,4,5) - ^ same as above
00:22:815 (1,2) - why is DS so low here? i think it should be consistent with 00:21:236 (5,1) and 00:25:973 (4,5,1) ikr but it should be different as before this answer like first answer of this diff which means insane lel.
00:32:920 (1,2) - ^ same as above
00:35:763 (2,3,4) - ^ DS too large instead ikr but no fix for no reason lol
00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - this is really confusing because there is a jump into 3, then 4 is 1/2 spaced, then the next two circles are 1/1 spaced. i think you should space 3 from 4. fixed at a circle (3) move a little bit bcs player playing this diff by attempt 1 are confusing
01:03:552 - put click for finish? look a reason at extra why i won't fix it
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - how about using the exact same slider shape for all these to illustrate the repeating "zen"? idk how to fix it, but it would make bad flows instead of ds
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above
01:32:289 - put click for finish? fixed since before this has no part like this

Extra
00:03:552 (4,1) - jump feels underwhelming, considering the finish hitsound hitsound looks fine imo bcs at slider (4) looks very slow sound, so, i'd put whistle here and the jump are fine coz i copy from monstarat's style lel
00:06:078 (4,1) - ^ same as above
00:16:342 (6) - this note isnt that significant, its probably around the same intensity as 00:16:026 (4) so make jump around same distance as 00:15:868 (3,4). if anything, the jump to 00:16:184 (5) should be bigger than the one to 6. well, fixed since this is extra but move to insane 5 stars lol. considering this is huge jumps
00:16:499 (1) - make jump bigger for finish+guitar fixed
00:25:973 (4,1) - overlap doesnt look neat,separate the objects fixed
00:29:605 (2) - note is pretty soft, decrease jump fixed
00:33:473 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - overmapped, some sounds dont exist ( 00:33:789 (6) - 00:33:946 (8) ) and these ones ( 00:33:473 (3) - 00:34:105 (10) ) are only continuations of cymbals, they aren't hits ikr this is overmapped you think. But you'd hear properly bcs you said those sounds aren't exist but those sounds are pretty soft. considering these as stream part
00:35:684 - 00:35:842 - since youve been mapping 1/4, you missed some notes here ikr but i want to not mapping stream here bcs sound are different before this
00:39:236 (1) - increase jump? i might move a circle (7)
00:41:289 (2) - this note isnt that loud but this note 00:41:605 (4) - has loud guitar entrance, so i would make 4 have a bigger jump than 2 fixed
00:45:394 - add finish? nope bcs sound hitsound are same like sound clap. so, i should be same
01:03:552 - put click here instead for finish? a finish are already added here but i want to keep this slider bcs a clap starts at red tick and should properly balanced such as 01:00:868 and 00:58:342
01:11:763 (5,6,1) - jump from 6-1 should be smaller than 5-6 because 1 is a very strong vocal i wanted to keep this bcs that part are not bad as you think
01:15:078 (3,4,5) - hold back on jump DS because the vocals are pretty soft here. 01:16:973 (7,1) - would be more suitable for huge jumps because of the sudden increase in vocal intensity. fixed since that part it would be star jump but feel not very complete
01:18:868 (4,7) - overlap doesnt look good, separate objects fixed
01:19:657 (1) - jump could be bigger meh, keep this bcs these are same like first part of kiai you know like zen zen zense soraru's part should be same or could be different
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - placement looks weird, how about using a more curvy arc instead? 3-4-5 looks like a straight line right now which makes 2 feel out of place fixed but a slider (3) should keep this

Good luck!

Yoshino--

Yoshino-- wrote:
from my q

General:

white combo color is unrankable afaik i don't have any colours to add another white lol based on colour of bg

Easy:

hp5 is too high oh, didn't notice dat. fixed

Your DS is kinda high, as well as really inconsistent, fix this please yeah, ikr but i feeling lazy to fix all part now. This map could not rank if not follow the rules of ranking criteria. Okorin said as 180bpm and above dat bpm should less ds such as 1.2 or 1.4 . So, i'd have free time to fix ds but tomorrow school starts lel.

01:13:657 (3,4) - also this blanket can be improved fixed

Hard:

ar8 might be a little high, maybe ar7? change to ar7.5 cause i like high ar :3

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - this is too hard for new players, try to not overlap it like this ikr but i'd follow the hitsounds. Otherwise, it would make more ez for player

rest of the diff looks ok

Insane:

od6 hp8? Shouldn't it be the other way around? fixed the hp to 7

00:13:342 (4,5,6) - there is no need for such a big jump ikr but i would keep this cause need to follow the emphasize

00:17:763 (1,2) - this overlap plays weird fixed a slider (1)

00:25:815 (3,4,5,1) - don't use the same spacing for 1/2 and 1/1 like this mayb already fix as yahuri's mod

01:01:342 (3) - should be 1/2 imo it's fine tho

01:24:078 (5,6,7,1) - this flows really weird fixed

01:32:368 (1) - why silence this spinner when there is a beat at the end of it? lol, don't confusing about this. considering this as end part. the last spinner should be silenced bcs the sound at red tick looks very soft i heard. So, i need to keep this

Extra:

od6 hp8 again :thinking: haha, no need to thinking. But thanks for the insane you noticed dat cause you know, i'm lazy right ;w;

00:08:920 (1) - why is there no triple? lol, this song aren't same like radwimps' song but this song are pretty different such as no triple or idk. so, you need to hear properly lol

00:21:552 (1,2) - what even is this blanket could be awesome flows. if follow the opposite direction, it would make bad flows

00:33:710 (5,6,7,8) - I don't hear anything 1/4 here I think you must have hearing problems i guess. Hear properly lol

01:00:552 (5,2) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden, move (5) a bit fixed

01:09:552 (1,2,3) - you have those as 1/2 in this diff but longer in insane? ikr but you know it's weird you looked extra and insane style are most completely different, right? consider extra as monst and insane as sotks but you know the mappers who they is

01:17:131 (1) - should be faster imo nope

Good luck with the map

thanks for mod, guys!

__Hatsune_Miku

598 posts

Joined July 2014

__Hatsune_Miku 2017-01-02T10:13:22+00:00

M4M

artist -> そらる x まふまふ / Romanised artist -> Soraru x Mafumafu
Trun off widdscreensupport
Check Aimod one More time
Wana new BG? use this https://www.miramarcinemas.com.tw/db/we ... 400105.jpg

[easy]

I think Ar5 is little fast down 4 or 3.5 ?
01:31:657 (4) - > http://puu.sh/t8wKY/4f225e0f77.jpg

[hard]

00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part make people Confused

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-02T10:22:36+00:00

_ Hatsune Miku wrote:
M4M
artist -> そらる x まふまふ / Romanised artist -> Soraru x Mafumafu changed!
Trun off widdscreensupport done!
Check Aimod one More time ikr there's problem about audio. I'd call an expert cuted mp3 to fix it like pishi or sotarks
Wana new BG? use this https://www.miramarcinemas.com.tw/db/we ... 400105.jpg looks great but i don't want to use it
[easy]
I think Ar5 is little fast down 4 or 3.5 ? yeah, i looked it hard to read. changed to ar4!
01:31:657 (4) - > http://puu.sh/t8wKY/4f225e0f77.jpg more easier than old. fixed
[hard]
00:30:868 (2,3,4,5) - This part make people Confused It's fine tho. Hard players should be focus on stream ar now. no fix

thanks for mod!
will mod your map

Venix

Global Moderator

1,927 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-01-03T17:24:01+00:00

metadata from q
Red - Currently incorrect

Source: 君の名は。
Artist: そらる×まふまふ
Romanised Artist: Soraru x mafumafu
Title: 前前前世
Romanised Title: Zen Zen Zense
http://soraruru.jp/
http://uni-mafumafu.jp/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOTR1t ... g/featured
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29703556
https://www.youtube.com/user/soraruYT

EDIT: Artist is correct

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-07T02:27:40+00:00

Venix wrote:
metadata from q
Red - Currently incorrect
Source: 君の名は。
Artist: そらる×まふまふ
Romanised Artist: Soraru x mafumafu done changed!
Title: 前前前世
Romanised Title: Zen Zen Zense
http://soraruru.jp/
http://uni-mafumafu.jp/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCOTR1t ... g/featured
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm29703556
https://www.youtube.com/user/soraruYT
EDIT: Artist is correct

thanks for check!
idk i'd give kudosu or not

Noffy

Nomination Assessment Team

1,656 posts

Joined April 2012

Noffy 2017-01-08T21:48:05+00:00

Yo~ sorry for delay umu From queue o/

[General]

Your audio file is 286kbps, which is above the rankable limit of 192kbps. You will have to either compress the current mp3 or find a new one.

Combo colors: combo color 3 is pure white, which is hard on the eyes, especially during a kiai. Additionally, colors 5 and 6 are pretty similar and I don't see the need to have both.
Maybe some like this would be better instead? I simply removed 3 and 5.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[Easy]
Edit:

Your spacing seems to variate a lot from 1.5-1.7, consider choosing a single ds and sticking with it, since this is an easy. Well, the spacing is pretty dang big for an easy in general too :C I suggest something like 1.0 or 1.2 since those are in the recommended range of distance snap settings for any easy. 1.5 is excessive. It causes too much difference between slider and movement speed, which can be confusing to a beginner.

00:10:184 (3) - Consider placing the red anchor in the center of the slider, on the slidertick.
00:17:131 (2,3) - Try to make these sliders parallel.
00:19:026 (1) - Possibly ctrl+J this to improve the flow for 00:18:710 (4,1,2) -
00:31:657 (1) - It's pretty confusing for an easy that this is stack on the tail of 00:30:394 (3) - . Moving it like this can maintain spacing and improve readability: http://puu.sh/tfEuf/0daea2f670.jpg
01:13:657 (3,4) - Maybe make (4) blanket (3) instead?
01:21:236 (3,4,5) - This nearly straight line feels a bit unnatural. I think a curved pattern like this could play better: http://puu.sh/tfERn/016f078b7d.jpg

[Hard]
00:20:289 (1,2,3) - This is visually weird because (2) is very close to (1)'s slider body but not (3)'s. suggestion.
00:42:394 (3,4,1) - The uneven spacing here doesn't even seem to be a jump. Consider making a bit more consistent >-<

[Insane and Extra]
I'm not very good at mapping harder difficulties in detail, so I'll just say some general things:

Generally, I feel that your extra was mapped more cleanly than the insane, where the jumps felt a bit messy and more difficult to play than the extra's because of that.
Some 1/4s in extra, like 00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , I couldn't figure out what they were following and they didn't make too much sense to play :<

>extra:
00:57:394 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked aa

Ayyffy's Normal

Please be sure to add Ayyri and Noffy to tags when/if you add the diff :3... (they're already added in the code)

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
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Last edited by Noffy 2017-01-11T04:31:44+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

_kotachi_

567 posts

Joined July 2014

_kotachi_ 2017-01-09T11:59:53+00:00

Hi from m4m
I'll mod Insane more maps
※Not good English※

Insane

00:03:552 - I think good put a slider
00:04:499 (3) - ctrl+G
00:21:236 - ^^
00:25:973 (4,5,1) - I think narrow
00:27:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - These aren't good. put at equal intervals
00:36:078 (3,4,1) - ^^
00:55:657 (1,2,3) - I think not nature. How about like this?
img
01:16:973 - I think need a circle here
01:19:342 (4,5) - I think narrow

Extra

I think OD is too low, please think change more 8
00:01:815 (2) - blanket?
00:16:973 (3) - stack 00:15:552 (2) -
00:45:868 (4,5,6,7) - I think good like this
img
01:09:552 (1,2,3) - i think it's waste, how about like this?
01:19:657 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:236 (2,3,4,5) - Adjust distance

Good luck!

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Chibi Maruko 2017-01-10T08:14:11+00:00

Noffy wrote:

Yo~ sorry for delay umu From queue o/

[General]

Your audio file is 286kbps, which is above the rankable limit of 192kbps. You will have to either compress the current mp3 or find a new one. ikr i must to decrease kbps audio but i can't find a way to fix this or mayb call someone to help this :c

Combo colors: combo color 3 is pure white, which is hard on the eyes, especially during a kiai. Additionally, colors 5 and 6 are pretty similar and I don't see the need to have both.
Maybe some like this would be better instead? I simply removed 3 and 5. wow, nice colours since i must add all combo colours and don't have any colours to choice. changed!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 0,128,0
Combo4 : 128,128,255

[Easy]
Edit:

Your spacing seems to variate a lot from 1.5-1.7, consider choosing a single ds and sticking with it, since this is an easy. Well, the spacing is pretty dang big for an easy in general too :C I suggest something like 1.0 or 1.2 since those are in the recommended range of distance snap settings for any easy. 1.5 is excessive. It causes too much difference between slider and movement speed, which can be confusing to a beginner.
yeah, i saw that on forum. Trying to remap and decrease ds to 1.2 if i do decrease ds on old easy, that would be bad flows and patterns. So, don't worry bcs you look worried about my map can't be rank lol.

00:10:184 (3) - Consider placing the red anchor in the center of the slider, on the slidertick.
00:17:131 (2,3) - Try to make these sliders parallel.
00:19:026 (1) - Possibly ctrl+J this to improve the flow for 00:18:710 (4,1,2) -
00:31:657 (1) - It's pretty confusing for an easy that this is stack on the tail of 00:30:394 (3) - . Moving it like this can maintain spacing and improve readability: http://puu.sh/tfEuf/0daea2f670.jpg
01:13:657 (3,4) - Maybe make (4) blanket (3) instead?
01:21:236 (3,4,5) - This nearly straight line feels a bit unnatural. I think a curved pattern like this could play better: http://puu.sh/tfERn/016f078b7d.jpg
will response after you said at bottom

[Hard]
00:20:289 (1,2,3) - This is visually weird because (2) is very close to (1)'s slider body but not (3)'s. suggestion. fixed
00:42:394 (3,4,1) - The uneven spacing here doesn't even seem to be a jump. Consider making a bit more consistent >-< it's fine tho since you wanted me to fix like above cooment.

[Insane and Extra]
I'm not very good at mapping harder difficulties in detail, so I'll just say some general things:

Generally, I feel that your extra was mapped more cleanly than the insane, where the jumps felt a bit messy and more difficult to play than the extra's because of that.
Some 1/4s in extra, like 00:33:710 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , I couldn't figure out what they were following and they didn't make too much sense to play :<

>extra:
00:57:394 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked aa lol, you think this only are not perfect stacked, you can see all others

Ayyffy's Normal

Please be sure to add Ayyri and Noffy to tags when/if you add the diff :3... (they're already added in the code)

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68447
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 1342,46815,94815
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Zen Zen Zense
TitleUnicode:前前前世
Artist:Soraru x mafumafu
ArtistUnicode:Soraru x mafumafu
Creator:Chibi Maruko
Version:Ayyffy's Normal
Source:君の名は。
Tags:kimi no na wa taki mitsuha your name movie soraru mafumafu zen zen zense Noffy Ayyri
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:547946

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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