Okay, here's my M4M part~
General
Those grey CCs still look almost identical. I suggest that you darken the dark grey one to R90|G90|B80
Delis' Hard
00:18:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pink? It's supposed to be red here, right?
00:21:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Where's the orange?
01:08:723 (1,2,3) - Um, I think you don't need to NC this. There's no any difference in each combo (video-wise and mapping-wise) so...
01:09:455 (1,2,3) - The combocolor, imo it's kinda dull to give grey on this part. Maybe also change it to that light blue one?
In ^this case, maybe apply the dark blue again on 01:10:918 (1) - so you can apply the light blue on 01:21:894 (1,2,3) - .
03:05:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Umm, to avoid repetition, maybe use the pink one?
00:15:126 (5) - Move this to x309|y63 to balance the ds before and after the note.
00:17:138 (6) - But you can blanket this to x21|y168. Why with the untidiness? ^ ^'
With ^this, don't forget to also move 00:17:321 (7) - to x66|y98 to balance the ds again.
00:20:248 (5) - Almost correct. x266|y119 seems nicer if your target is to blanket this.
On 00:18:235 (1,2) - you used 1.4x ds while on 00:24:089 (1,2) - you used 1.3x ds. Can you make it consistent, please? Especially because 00:25:187 (2) - isn't associated with anything.
00:29:211 (7) - Almost correct. x396|y248 seems nicer if your target is to blanket this. Don't forget to move 00:29:760 (8) - too then.
00:31:955 (5) - Why with the ds imbalance? I suggest you move this to x453|y198
I really like 00:36:894 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - pattern, but polish them to make them look better. Suggestions: 00:37:077 (2) - x307|y118, 00:37:260 (3) - x227|y143, 00:37:626 (1) - x318|y343, 00:37:809 (2) - x344|y263, 00:37:992 (3) - x262|y280
00:40:918 (7) - Woah, it's just too near with 00:41:650 (1) - . Mind moving 00:40:918 (7) - a bit to x243|y72 and 00:41:650 (1) - to x121|y136? ^ ^'
00:42:748 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - T.T Suggestion: 00:42:931 (2) - x225|y250, 00:43:114 (3) - x305|y226, 00:43:662 (2) - x225|y250
01:51:894 (1,2,3) - Okay, I get what you want to do here. But, 01:51:345 (6,2) - that untidy stack...ouch. Better move 01:51:894 (1) - to x415|y68 and 01:52:260 (2) - to x432|y216 for a win-win solution. XD
Shurelia's Normal
00:53:357 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I guess these CCs are unintentionally switched? ^ ^' (Don't forget to switch 00:59:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too then if you apply this)
02:25:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Orange? But this part's supposed to be pink, right?
03:43:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't these notes' CCs get customized as well? I hope it's just a coincidence. :3
00:09:455 (1) - Well, it's a nice slider if you can execute it more precisely. Suggestion: First white tick x314|y131, red tick x316|y88, second white tick x337|127, tail x381|y137. There, not the most perfect thing in the world but eh, I tried. XD
00:10:918 (3) - Same as ArThasCD's mod. But since I know what you're trying to achieve, maybe just move 00:10:918 (3) - to x512|y168 to minimize the damage. ^ ^'
00:23:723 (4,1) - Blanket issue. But hm, tricky tricky. I suggest you to move 00:22:626 (3) - tail to x96|y162, 00:23:723 (4) - to x29|y213, 00:24:089 (1) - head to x46|y298, first white tick to x83|y279, tail to x109|y246.
00:44:211 (8,1) - I get what you mean here. But, that tight space between 00:44:577 (1,2) - tho (o.o'). Move 00:44:211 (8) - to x247|y217 and 00:44:577 (1) - to x332|y220 to make them look better.
00:49:699 (5,6,1) - Blanket issue again. Suggestion: 00:49:699 (5,6,1) - head x325|y29, first white tick x346|y43, tail x361|y60, 00:50:065 (6) - x379|y106.
Dunno, I feel like 00:55:553 (6) - blanket is still kinda off. Maybe try to move 00:55:553 (6) - first white tick to x260|y184 and tail to x230|y148?
00:59:760 (2) - Minor thing, but x44|y323 please. XD
01:02:138 (1) - The same kinda-off feeling strikes again. Maybe try 01:02:138 (1) - head to x422|y148 and first white tick to x387|y125?
01:10:918 - Imo, you can't leave this beat unmapped. Try either putting another note on it or making 01:10:553 (6) - a 1/2 slider instead.
01:23:357 (3) - Blanket issue again. But eh, let's move 01:22:626 (1) - to x308|y200 and 01:22:992 (2) - to x227|y230 to make things go easier. XD
01:24:821 (6,1) - A g a i n. But, hm, let's just move 01:24:821 (6) - to x92|y246 so we can hinder from all the detail stuffs. ^ ^'
01:26:284 (3,4) - Almost, but not there yet. Move 01:26:284 (3) - tail to x244|y173.
01:27:382 (5,6) - Almost as well. But let's move 01:27:748 (6) - head to x462|y201, first white tick to x459|243, and tail to x438|y240.
01:30:675 (5,1) - Aiyeeehhhh. Let's just move the whole 01:31:406 (1) - to x202|y47 to save time.
01:34:333 (1) - Hmmm, my anal side told me to polish this. I'm sorry. XDD Suggestion: First white tick x318|y324, first red tick x292|y303, second red tick x256|y326, second white tick x226|y314, tail x194|y322
Easy
Honestly, I reeeeally can't find anything wrong here. I'm sorry but, congratulations (?) XDDD
its fine cause the NC