Hi jooliee~
here is a mod , i'll just go through it and point out things in the way
also dunno how much time , i'll just kinda mod until i'm satisfied or something xD
And I think that's about it for me, i've went up to 27 minutes and I can't point out much things that I would suggest a change
can feel somewhat a 'positive' aura from that map ahah , ^^'a idk how to epxlain that but well nvm then xDDD
Good Luck yulie , nice stuff here ! owob
PS : i'm not strong , i'm not smart and I don't ever want to be considered that way .
here is a mod , i'll just go through it and point out things in the way
also dunno how much time , i'll just kinda mod until i'm satisfied or something xD
dadon
key=1/2/3/4
00:45:393 (45393|0) - this could be a 1/2 LN according to previous patterns : 00:40:593 (40593|0,40793|3,40793|1) -
00:42:393 (42393|0) - this one is okay as a LN eventho the sound isn't really significant as here :00:37:593 (37593|3) - imho
00:52:993 (52993|1) - add note to 2 there is a instru sound here : also according to : 00:55:893 (55893|1,56193|1) -
00:54:293 (54293|1) - same as ^ , add a note to : 00:54:593 (54593|1) -
01:18:393 (78393|0) - you could double this one imho
01:19:993 (79993|0) - same ^
01:21:593 (81593|0) - ^ and here aswell
01:22:993 (82993|0,82993|1,83193|3,83193|2,83293|2,83293|3) - move this whole block one line up (the snaps are blue and blue red lines (basically 1/4 later)
02:56:793 (176793|3,176793|1,176893|3,176893|1,176993|1,176993|3,177093|1,177093|3,177193|1,177193|3) - oh girl that jack XD ahah
04:20:593 (260593|1,260593|0) - move to 3 -4 it could make a nice flow imo
04:26:993 (266993|3,266993|2) - move to 1 -2
06:02:993 (362993|1,362993|0) - ^ again same suggest
and this one aswell 06:09:393 (369393|3,369393|2) -
10:59:593 (659593|1,659593|3,659793|2) - you can make notes jacking here for the double kick effect
12:14:393 (734393|2,734493|2,734593|2,734693|2) - jack fest yeouuuuhouuuu xD ahah , fun stuffs
LOOOOL I GOT THE BAD IDEA OF CTR+A , the editor froze :joy: ahahahahha xDDDD omj
14:33:993 (873993|0,873993|3,874093|2,874193|0,874293|2,874393|0,874393|3,874493|1) - nice alternative there
15:25:993 (925993|2) - add one more note , according to : 15:32:393 (932393|2,932393|0) -
15:29:193 (929193|2) - add to 4 ^ same suggestion
15:41:993 (941993|2) - ^
17:00:393 (1020393|2) - dondondon ^
17:06:793 (1026793|2) - ^ in case you ask why on the LN part adding, it's cause of that :17:13:493 (1033493|3,1033493|0) -
18:32:393 (1112393|3,1112393|0,1112493|1,1112593|2,1112693|3,1112793|0,1112793|2) - Hello this is a Z pattern ahah
18:40:393 (1120393|3,1120393|0) - shoulddn't thoose LNs end 1/4 earlier ?
00:45:393 (45393|0) - this could be a 1/2 LN according to previous patterns : 00:40:593 (40593|0,40793|3,40793|1) -
00:42:393 (42393|0) - this one is okay as a LN eventho the sound isn't really significant as here :00:37:593 (37593|3) - imho
00:52:993 (52993|1) - add note to 2 there is a instru sound here : also according to : 00:55:893 (55893|1,56193|1) -
00:54:293 (54293|1) - same as ^ , add a note to : 00:54:593 (54593|1) -
01:18:393 (78393|0) - you could double this one imho
01:19:993 (79993|0) - same ^
01:21:593 (81593|0) - ^ and here aswell
01:22:993 (82993|0,82993|1,83193|3,83193|2,83293|2,83293|3) - move this whole block one line up (the snaps are blue and blue red lines (basically 1/4 later)
02:56:793 (176793|3,176793|1,176893|3,176893|1,176993|1,176993|3,177093|1,177093|3,177193|1,177193|3) - oh girl that jack XD ahah
04:20:593 (260593|1,260593|0) - move to 3 -4 it could make a nice flow imo
04:26:993 (266993|3,266993|2) - move to 1 -2
06:02:993 (362993|1,362993|0) - ^ again same suggest
and this one aswell 06:09:393 (369393|3,369393|2) -
10:59:593 (659593|1,659593|3,659793|2) - you can make notes jacking here for the double kick effect
12:14:393 (734393|2,734493|2,734593|2,734693|2) - jack fest yeouuuuhouuuu xD ahah , fun stuffs
LOOOOL I GOT THE BAD IDEA OF CTR+A , the editor froze :joy: ahahahahha xDDDD omj
14:33:993 (873993|0,873993|3,874093|2,874193|0,874293|2,874393|0,874393|3,874493|1) - nice alternative there
15:25:993 (925993|2) - add one more note , according to : 15:32:393 (932393|2,932393|0) -
15:29:193 (929193|2) - add to 4 ^ same suggestion
15:41:993 (941993|2) - ^
17:00:393 (1020393|2) - dondondon ^
17:06:793 (1026793|2) - ^ in case you ask why on the LN part adding, it's cause of that :17:13:493 (1033493|3,1033493|0) -
18:32:393 (1112393|3,1112393|0,1112493|1,1112593|2,1112693|3,1112793|0,1112793|2) - Hello this is a Z pattern ahah
18:40:393 (1120393|3,1120393|0) - shoulddn't thoose LNs end 1/4 earlier ?
And I think that's about it for me, i've went up to 27 minutes and I can't point out much things that I would suggest a change
can feel somewhat a 'positive' aura from that map ahah , ^^'a idk how to epxlain that but well nvm then xDDD
Good Luck yulie , nice stuff here ! owob
PS : i'm not strong , i'm not smart and I don't ever want to be considered that way .