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B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart

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Topic Starter
Tatsuo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 09, 2011 at 1:09:55 AM

Artist: B0UNC3
Title: Bleeding Heart
Source: Newgrounds
Tags: Trance Nivalis
BPM: 147
Filesize: 3276kb
Play Time: 02:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard Style (4.96 stars, 376 notes)
  2. Soft Core (2.98 stars, 186 notes)
  3. Trance (4.31 stars, 247 notes)
Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first beatmap.
Mod this please.

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After several months in graveyard, I'm back to complete my first submitted beatmap.
Hard Style has been remapped.
Nivalis has made a Trance (normal difficulty). Thank you~
Soft Core has been remapped.
Moved to pending and can now be modded.
I'm aware that my BG is not 4:3, I'll fix this in the coming days. (It makes me sad that I fixing the BG to make it 4:3, makes the BG extremely ugly =( Still trying to figure out) Alright! BG fixed! (Thank you Nekoroll~)
Do not hitsound mod Soft Core and Hard Style, since I like the way I hitsounded it (Unless it's extremely dire and makes it SO MUCH BETTER, then mention it). However, Nivalis is still taking hitsound mods for his Trance difficulty. You can hit sound mod that.
cyanberryio
hihi

Just here to mod it, like you didn't want, asked for, demanded.

Now first of all, stop being lazy (>_>) and hurry and fix those Non-Inherited Timing Sections. Non-Inherited are for Offset/BPM changes only.
Note about Inherited Sections: If you're using them to change the samples or the sample volume, then try to set it BEFORE the note it first affects, usually 1/2 work, if not go 1/4 before it.
I suggest you change each one just by selecting one and check the Inherited Timing Section box since if you do it all at once it messes them up.

Now after that, fix the timing:
BPM: 147.019
Offset: 13,089

You would be asked to set a preview point. I think 00:52:026 might sound good.
I suggest you use the third grid level for mapping this if you're not using linear patterns. View -> Grid Level -> 3.
AIMod is helpful, Ctrl+Shift+A, it tells you the most basic problems from spacing to beat snapping.
Now on to the actual modding.

[Soft Core]
I'll be honest, the beat placement is horrible, I know you don't like making an Easy, but try a bit harder please! ._.
00:37:02 (3) - Too far spacing.
01:13:05 (4) - Too close, move up 1 grid at level 1.
01:13:09 (5) - Now move this around to correctly space it because of the above change.
01:18:04 (4) - Move up one grid level 1.
01:43:03 (1) - A ten second break, this then another break? NO!
02:26:09 (5) - Redo this slider, its slightly broken.
02:44:00 (1) - No overlapping on Easy difficulties. (Just my opinion.)
02:46:01 (4) - Too far.

[Normal Style]
00:15:01 (6) - Spacing. (Fix the ones after it too.)
01:43:03 (1,2,3) - Again with the 10sec break then something small then long break. ._.
02:16:05 (1,2,3,4) - Dark notes, dark background...sadly this is not so visible. Maybe red circles instead.
02:44:09 (6) - Spacing.
02:49:04 (4,5,6) - Approach circles not so visible here too. ._.

NOTE: If you don't know how to easily use this post to check your map, just copy & paste the time xx:xx:xx (x) timing format to the left of each mod, then just paste it by clicking the box in the bottom left with the time on it.

Even though I said I'm one to easily star a map, I'm not right now, make some fixes, add a harder difficulty (psssst, jumps) then I'll come back to check up on it.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
cyanberryio
Following up like I should have long ago.

I suggest you Full Resubmit, the forum page shows only [Normal Style] which doesn't exist anymore...

[Soft Core]
Offset is different than hard. Fix to: 13,089.
REALLY IMPROVED! GREAT JOB!
00:36:03 (4) - Move this right 1 grid(2).
01:43:00 (1) - Start 1/2 later, which don't forgot to shorten by 1/2 too.
01:52:07 (2) - I suggest you stack this under the previous. To do that just set the Distance Snap to 0 and turn off the Grid Snap.
01:53:05 (3) - ^
01:54:02 (4) - ^

[Trance]
01:03:09 - Remove the ridiculous break here and add a spinner from 01:04:01 - 01:04:09. Adjust the volume if you must.
01:44:07 - 01:57:02 - Map this cause you did in Soft Core.
02:23:09 - Ridiculous break. (Add some 1/4 sliders :D) Like this, position how you want?
02:38:078 (4,5,6) - Align with (1,2,3)~ *is so nazi*

And that's all!

I'm still waiting for a harder difficulty! xP
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Alex0686 wrote:

Following up like I should have long ago.

I suggest you Full Resubmit, the forum page shows only [Normal Style] which doesn't exist anymore...

[Soft Core]
Offset is different than hard. Fix to: 13,089.
REALLY IMPROVED! GREAT JOB!
00:36:03 (4) - Move this right 1 grid(2).
01:43:00 (1) - Start 1/2 later, which don't forgot to shorten by 1/2 too.
01:52:07 (2) - I suggest you stack this under the previous. To do that just set the Distance Snap to 0 and turn off the Grid Snap.
01:53:05 (3) - ^
01:54:02 (4) - ^

[Trance]
01:03:09 - Remove the ridiculous break here and add a spinner from 01:04:01 - 01:04:09. Adjust the volume if you must.
01:44:07 - 01:57:02 - Map this cause you did in Soft Core.
02:23:09 - Ridiculous break. (Add some 1/4 sliders :D) Like this, position how you want?
02:38:078 (4,5,6) - Align with (1,2,3)~ *is so nazi*

And that's all!

I'm still waiting for a harder difficulty! xP
Thanks Alex!
cyanberryio
Hard is great, get the star I meant to give a long time ago. Dx
DinoNuggets_old
b(^^)d
Larto
Revived
Niva
(Hopefully) this is done, I don't know what to do with the hitsounds :(
Really, I have no idea how to create a good hitsounds like you did on your diff :(

Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart (I_Tatsuo_I) [Trance].osu
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Thanks Nivalis, it's just fine the way it is.
Teras
HAI

[General]

Just as a sidenote, I was like 3-4 ms late or early quite alot. Maybe it's just me. But you might want to re-check the offset.

Soft Core

Huh? What do I see? 147,02 and then I see 147,00 in the other diffs? :O Change this >.<

Except for that, everything is fine overall in the other diffs.




Star >.<
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Oh you, I didn't quite want a mod yet, and I know the offset is wrong. Which is also why I didn't want a mod yet.
You silly.
]Which is why it's still in WIP
dNextGen
B0UNC3 is the real techno

nightcore is a gay techno
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Ready for modding!
And I agree with you NextGen~
wmfchris
[Hard Style]
0:18:371 (8) up+right 1 grid to make it symmetrical?
1:06:126 (3) up 1 grid
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orz my head bleeding too give up modding sorry orz

no kd. >_<
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard Style]
0:18:371 (8) up+right 1 grid to make it symmetrical? I like how it is now
1:06:126 (3) up 1 grid Kay
...
orz my head bleeding too give up modding sorry orz

no kd. >_<
thanks~
Niva
Just a quick request... Please rename [Nivalis' Trance] to [Trance] only please :D
Anyway here's a kudosu star.

NOTE FOR MODDERS : Hitsound help on my diff is really appreciated

Edit : I_Tatsuo_I, I'll upload my changes tomorrow, I don't have enough time today :D
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
I await your editted diff~
Niva
Done :D
Ready for modding!

Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart (I_Tatsuo_I) [Trance].osu
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Sounds awesome with your hitsounds Nivalis
Gonzvlo
General:
  1. Erm most of the green point were unnecessary, you only need 1 timing point to use custom hitsounds and then another 1 to finish using them in some section. w/e Sounds Great
  2. BG should be 800x600 or 1024x768.
  3. Preview Point must be the same for all the diffs (Soft Core is different)
Soft Core:
  1. 00:37:146 (1) - Remove New Combo
  2. 00:54:289 (1) - ^
  3. 02:41:228 (4) - New Combo
Trance:
  1. Why not using "Normal Core" as name to follow the same pattern?
  2. AR & OD +1
  3. No Kiai for this diff?
  4. 02:17:554 (1) - Remove New Combo
Hard Style:
  1. Why not using "Hard Core" as name?
  2. Drain Rate +1
Great Job, Star~
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Gonzvlo wrote:

General:
  1. Erm most of the green point were unnecessary, you only need 1 timing point to use custom hitsounds and then another 1 to finish using them in some section. w/e Sounds Great The additional inherited timing sections are for volume changes and for using the normal hit.
  2. BG should be 800x600 or 1024x768. Noted, will fix in due time.
  3. Preview Point must be the same for all the diffs (Soft Core is different) Good catch. Thanks
Soft Core:
  1. 00:37:146 (1) - Remove New Combo No thanks
  2. 00:54:289 (1) - ^ Kay
  3. 02:41:228 (4) - New Combo Kay
Trance:
  1. Why not using "Normal Core" as name to follow the same pattern? Trance is used because 1) It follows the way my previous ranked map difficulty naming is for techno trance songs, and 2) In some ways, the techno genre is see like this: Soft-Core is a slow steady song, Trance is a nice beat and keeping its tempo nice and steady, and Hard Style is going all out, such as fast BPM/tempo and really pushing bass into the song. This is why Trance will remain as a "normal" difficulty name.
  2. AR & OD +1
  3. No Kiai for this diff?
  4. 02:17:554 (1) - Remove New Combo
Hard Style:
  1. Why not using "Hard Core" as name? Explained above.
  2. Drain Rate +1 Drain rate is fine where it is for now. If more people say raise it, then I'll raise it.
Great Job, Star~
Thank you~
Niva
All mods accepted.
Ready for more modding!

EDIT: Thanks Tatsuo, I really learn a lot from your diffs :D

Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart (I_Tatsuo_I) [Trance].osu
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Nivalis wrote:

All mods accepted.
Ready for more modding!

EDIT: Thanks Tatsuo, I really learn a lot from your diffs :D
But I'm not even a good mapper xD
What could you learn from me? :o
Updated.
Natteke
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Disoy
[Soft Core]
slider tick rate-1?
00:58:779 (2) - add a hitfinish?

[Trance]
00:48:983 (1) - add a hitfinish?

[Hard Style]
00:58:779 (12) - add a hitfinish?
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

Disoy wrote:

[Soft Core]
slider tick rate-1?
00:58:779 (2) - add a hitfinish?

[Trance]
00:48:983 (1) - add a hitfinish?

[Hard Style]
00:58:779 (12) - add a hitfinish?
No suggestions taken. Thanks for the mod though~
IceBeam
Your BG is square,but it should be 4:3,so cut it off.

Source and Tags aren't the same in all difficulties,fix it.

[Soft Core]
00:58:779 (2) - Finish.
01:11:840 (1) - ^
01:24:901 - ^
02:04:085 (2) - Finish or any other hitsound.
02:17:146 (1) - ^
02:31:840 - Finish.
02:38:371 (1) - ^
02:44:901 - ^

[Trance]
00:37:962 (1) - Finish.
Same finish suggestions.
02:20:003 (5) - Eh,remove these whistles.
02:47:962 (7) - Same,I can't understand what it's for.

Hard Style will do.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
Tatsuo

IceBeam wrote:

Your BG is square,but it should be 4:3,so cut it off. I'm aware of this. I should put in the description that I know of this and should not be mentioned again.

Source and Tags aren't the same in all difficulties,fix it. It's all the same on my side. Resubmitted anyway.

[Soft Core]
00:58:779 (2) - Finish.
01:11:840 (1) - ^
01:24:901 - ^
02:04:085 (2) - Finish or any other hitsound.
02:17:146 (1) - ^
02:31:840 - Finish.
02:38:371 (1) - ^
02:44:901 - ^
No suggestions taken.

[Trance]
00:37:962 (1) - Finish.
Same finish suggestions.
02:20:003 (5) - Eh,remove these whistles.
02:47:962 (7) - Same,I can't understand what it's for.
Let's see what Nivalis says about this.

Hard Style will do.
K~

Good luck.
Thanks~
Niva

IceBeam wrote:

[Trance]
00:37:962 (1) - Finish. Sure
02:20:003 (5) - Eh,remove these whistles.Changed to finish
02:47:962 (7) - Same,I can't understand what it's for. ^

Good luck. Whee, thanks!
Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart (I_Tatsuo_I) [Trance].osu
Hakeru
Just a suggestion ;)

[Soft Core]
02:26:126 - add kiai time , end at 02:51:432

[Trance]
Approach Rate : +1 / +2
00:34:697 - (3,4,5,6) spacing
00:55:922 - (1,2,3) 1 grid down ..err..maybe 2
01:12:248 - (1,2,3,4,5,6) 1 grid down

[Hard Style]
hmm manual placing ?
looks nice ..
Niva

Hakeru Prismriver wrote:

[Trance]
Approach Rate : +1 / +2 I_Tatsuo_I said to me this should be a Normal+ not Hard, I'm afraid it will be too harsh to HardRock if AR+1
00:34:697 - (3,4,5,6) spacing Fixed
00:55:922 - (1,2,3) 1 grid down ..err..maybe 2 Fixed (2) only, I think (1) and (3) is in correct position
01:12:248 - (1,2,3,4,5,6) 1 grid down Fixed (3) and (6) only, same as above
Thanks very much Hakeru!

Download: B0UNC3 - Bleeding Heart (I_Tatsuo_I) [Trance].osu
NaomiMinette
Just finished checking all diffs. My only real complaint is concerning the Trance diff: those normal whistles really don't seem to fit this song at all :o Please consider removing/replacing them.

★~
Topic Starter
Tatsuo
Oh why thank you Blazey~
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