Chromoxx wrote:

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this song is nice

[General]
Metadata, BG files etc. seem good
delete dummy.osb lel

[Kantan]
00:52:335 (4) - change to k, very strong vocal hit that is higher than the ones before and deserves emphasizing imo fixed.
00:59:192 (9) - change to d to emphasize the strong vocal here again fixed.

rest seems good tbh, i would maybe consider changing the end part at 01:15:478 - a bit, since introducing weird spacings here isn't neccesary imo but that's up to you

[Futsuu]
00:10:335 (7) - change to d, since the guitar sound here is noticably deeper than all the other ones k is more beautiful
01:18:023 (23,27,31) - i'd suggest deleting these notes and focusing only on the guitar here, since that flows out into the end better imo fixed.
01:28:207 (35,36) - i'd suggest making these finishers because they are very strong sounds not very strong, normal note should be enough to emphasize the sounds here.

[Muzukashii]
00:40:764 - at least add a note here, since you had it in the futsuu too, you can even start a ddd triplet here to follow the drums fixed.
01:28:207 (30,31,32,33) - i'd suggest finishers here, since these are very strong sounds same

[Oni]
00:11:192 (13) - change to d because this one is deeper than the sounds in the corresponding patterns Yes
01:28:420 (39,40,41) - finishers? No

ok that was it, hope this helps.
No big issues with the set so it won't need a recheck after you apply

Thanks for your mod, Chromoxx c:
I arranged StoryBoard a little, please re-download and look it again.

Ntiger wrote:

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weff

[Kantan, Futsuu, Muzukashii]

01:15:478 (1) - Would be nice if this was a big note. It's still rather powerful (end of kiai) and marks the end nicely as well, in my opinion at least. Technically works for Oni too but please don't do that it wouldn't be good (I doubt you would anyway)　Fixed.


[Kantan]

Honestly think that several spots could have more notes as 2/1 notes are almost 2 second breaks. 00:25:764 - 00:39:478 - come to mind.
00:54:049 - 01:07:764 - these two spots might be nice additions as well, because the Kantan feels very underwhelming compared to Futsuu, which has 1/2 5-plets at its hardest spots, while the kantan has 1/1 triplets at most. Kantan doesn't need to be harder, since between K and F is smaller than F-M and M-O. Muzukashii has many 1/4 patterns including xxy/doublets, and Oni has 1/8 and 1/6 notes. Still safe. Breaks work to avoid long patterns. I'm not going to fill.
Made a 5-plet pattern at 01:05:192 (13,14,15,16,17) -.


[Muzukashii]

00:59:621 (28,29,30,31) - Why not 1/4 doublets to follow vocals? Only pointing this out here as it's more than in the other 1/4 doublet spots. Because it follows both sounds of vocal and drums.

01:08:193 (15,16,17) - 01:14:192 (28,29,30) - sure you wanna keep oox 1/4? Before the kiai Muzukashii already is quite technical compared to Futsuu because of the 1/4 doublets. Especially the second worries me because it's surrounded by 1/2. So either change both to monocolor or remove 01:13:335 (26) - OR 01:15:049 (31) - (deleting first one doesn't sound that bad imo) It should be fine, since this song is only 70 bpm. I'd keep them.


[Oni]

00:11:192 (16) - why isn't this a kat? The other 1/4 triplets here didn't follow the pitch either. (And to be honest the guitar rather goes dkd) Because of melody. dkk still follows the guitar as well, since (18) is higher than (16)

00:27:157 (41) - 00:40:871 (43) - imo it's cooler when the 1/8 only appears in kiai to emphasize that it's the strongest part of the song. Outside it seems rather unfitting. I don't think so :<


call me back hope this can be ranked in November still

Thanks for your mod, Nwo-... Ntiger

IamKwaN wrote:

Can you delete the redundant .osb files? :3