alright. i'm going to be honest here and say that it is going to take a lot of work to get up to a standard that can get ranked. but since new mappers are always appreciated, i'm going to try and offer some advice on the map and how to improve your mapping in general
#1. your mp3 is way too quiet. try compare it to other maps in-game and then adjust the volume in audacity or some similar program
#2. your offset was late. try an offset of 200. in future, listen for the point the first key drumbeat happens on. of course, this doesn't work 100% of the time, but it's effective for most songs
#3. the bpm was wrong. change it to 120bpm. in future, use the slow motion buttons in the bottom right to test whether the metronome and music is getting desynced. if you start hearing the drum before the metronome, increase the bpm and vice versa
#4. your new comboing was odd. if in doubt, do a new combo every big white bar
#5. your map looks like a pre-2010 map in all honesty. watch pro mappers, analyse your favourite maps, etc.
if you need any more help with mapping, send me a message in game and i can advise you further.
(if you're worried about it breaking parts of your map then make a copy of the original insane file)
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Title:Eyecatch! Too Much!
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