1. martyr (6,31 stars, 1888 notes)

-Vanilla wrote:

m4mmm

mumd

00:39:024 (1) - this section along with the ones similar to this I think should have brighter combo colors, not like the reds in the kiai but since you change colors for each section this should be a bit more intense i guess tried making them brighter but then they just didnt really go well with the dark and gloomy background so Ill keep them like this

01:39:939 (9) - why not have a break here? there is actually nothing in the background like the previous breaks so why not if I put a break here the breakarrows will appear and the interfaces fades in and out etc. for this short amount of time which I feel like breaks the silence of this part and the feel of 'the calm before the storm'

03:02:679 (1,2) - maybe unstack because it isnt separated by 1/2 a beat hmm true

03:03:999 (1) - this section is rly quiet increased volume to 60%

03:19:836 (1) - rly sudden change in volume, maybe add some volume increases before it so it is gradual rebalanced the entire section

04:07:349 (1) - maybe have the break start closer to this spinner wanted to have this delay for the break here as a moment of relieve effect after such an intense part and then letting the actual break start at the pitch change

04:48:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is sick

05:11:461 (2,3,4,5,6) - maybe curve this the other way around so it flows into the next slider better (pretty sure this is consistent with ur map so it would probably be better not to change it) yea the flow from 05:11:309 (1) to 05:11:461 (2) will be bad then

05:47:248 (1) - the loop looks a lot dirtier than the other slider loops I intended this to be a bit more unclean as a change opposed to the other loops and Im just kinda bad at coming up with original sliderart, maybe Ill redo this one later


General thing about your sliders :

This is me being really picky but you had the same slider shapes through the green and blue section all the way into the kiais. I like the consistency but I think the kiais could use more sharper sliders to really show the intensity making them too sharp wouldnt really look good imo, the idea sounds nice but Id have to remove / reconsider every blanket I did with the 1/4 sliders so Id prefer to leave it like this. the higher spacing and note densitiy should be enough to emphasize the intense parts well

sorry for short mod, this map is really clean.

[ Drop ] wrote:

martyr
01:39:939 - Break here?nah, see p/5624073
03:22:273 - add a note here? yes
2 spooky 4 a full mod ;w;(this map is 2 good 2 mod)
i'll give this map a star when i've www
GL

Vell wrote:

good day, trying NM

- Frontier - wrote:

Vell wrote:

good day, trying NM

[martyr]

1. 00:48:618 (7) - maybe ctrl+g this? more flow i think see how different agree
2. 04:07:349 (1) - why you don't make like 03:00:344 - this part? since they're same rhythm. the transition into the static noise is much more abrupt here and doing something like the first one again would throw players off after such an intense part, although do I agree that I would like to have something else than the spinner so I will test around and try to find a way to go with

good map. don't give me kd if this useless
good luck

grumd wrote:

i'm passing my crown to you, go forward!

• 
  its not obvious on 100%, but on 25% i'd say within 00:39:024 (1) - to 00:38:720 (8) - you're missing a lot of beats. certain things here should be kick sliders instead or whatnot. i'll try and list as many as i can, but i'd say you'd have to go through this yourself or just ignore it completely since its only really audible at like 50% or 25%. understandably you'd want some rhythmic variation, so you're basically given a lot of free space as to whether you want to change it or not

1. 00:39:938 (7,8) - could be kick
2. 00:42:984 (3) - ^
3. 00:42:984 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:984 (3,4) - ^, more so for 3, 4 is kinda soft
5. 00:44:811 (7,8) - ^, seems like the last 2 notes of sections such as these are sometimes not buzz sliders or kicks and are mapped as hitcircles, which are missing those beats (multiple occurrence)
6. 00:56:385 (2,3) - something very obvious even on 100% here 00:56:613 -
7. 01:02:781 (5,6) - would suggest making 6 2 kicks instead so the distinction between the music is obvious, but keeping the copy paste slider pattern is fine as well (multiple occurrence)
8. 01:35:674 (4,5,6,7) - would suggest making this a buzz slider instead to match the soft volume and weak intensity of the music that leads into the crazy kicks
9. 02:19:608 (6,7) - would say the distance is a little too big considering how its anti-flow as well, but its up to you if you want to change this
10. 02:20:522 (3) - would say this shouldnt be a kick since the kicks in this section are rather obviously on the important noises 02:20:750 (5,6,9) -
11. 03:01:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - my eyes are still really screwed up from having to look at this section multiple times because i personally feel that for such slow SV this jump here 03:02:171 (4,5) - is a little too wide
12. 03:24:786 (1,1) - creepy screams, would prefer some parts of this spinner to actually be mapped, though its entirely up to you
13. 03:47:857 (1,1) - jump might be too huge for that massive slowdown in SV
14. 04:17:340 - really feels like this section should be mapped buuuut if it were me i'd be too lazy as long as it hit 5min drain xd
15. 04:48:770 (1) - the whole section after should play just fine but the rhythm choices feel weird to me. because the kicks are sometimes on certain sounds in the song and sometimes it swaps to something else which i can't quite grasp, so this whole gray area-ish thing i just kinda perceived as messy. the thing you mentioned about kiai is rather iffy because most of these sections can totally start off with kicks only and it would still make sense with respect to the song. makes not much sense for you to kiai after you've mapped especially since the intensity of the music doesnt change at all in this area, at least to me.
16. 05:39:938 - this part onwards sounds just like 05:35:065 (2) - or 05:44:811 - , so why map them differently?
    
    seems like your slider art is to prolong drain time only LOL
    
    would say that your map is really really neat, and i quite like that. just little issues cropping up at times, though it really doesnt affect gameplay that much (other than how messy/unreadable the rhythms are which i can say are mostly really readable anyways)
    
    gl on this

[ Emillia ] wrote:

ok i think this map is like basically rank quality already but i'm going to try and nitpick some things

[martyr]

• 
  its not obvious on 100%, but on 25% i'd say within 00:39:024 (1) - to 00:38:720 (8) - you're missing a lot of beats. certain things here should be kick sliders instead or whatnot. i'll try and list as many as i can, but i'd say you'd have to go through this yourself or just ignore it completely since its only really audible at like 50% or 25%. understandably you'd want some rhythmic variation, so you're basically given a lot of free space as to whether you want to change it or not

1. 00:39:938 (7,8) - could be kick
2. 00:42:984 (3) - ^
3. 00:42:984 (3) - ^
4. 00:42:984 (3,4) - ^, more so for 3, 4 is kinda soft focusing on the more prominent soft drums on each 1/2
5. 00:44:811 (7,8) - ^, seems like the last 2 notes of sections such as these are sometimes not buzz sliders or kicks and are mapped as hitcircles, which are missing those beats (multiple occurrence)
6. 00:56:385 (2,3) - something very obvious even on 100% here 00:56:613 - primarily focusing on the rhythm change and keeping it simple for it
7. 01:02:781 (5,6) - would suggest making 6 2 kicks instead so the distinction between the music is obvious, but keeping the copy paste slider pattern is fine as well (multiple occurrence)
   
   keeping the rest cause of rhythmical variation and to keep the inconsistency consistent because if I change one of the circles into a 1/4 slider id need to do the same for similar parts where I dont think they fit. I didnt want to map the slightest audiable detail in this part because this is basically still a buildup and I wanted to keep things fairly simple and most of all not too hard already
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8. 01:35:674 (4,5,6,7) - would suggest making this a buzz slider instead to match the soft volume and weak intensity of the music that leads into the crazy kicks true
9. 02:19:608 (6,7) - would say the distance is a little too big considering how its anti-flow as well, but its up to you if you want to change this I never had trouble with this spacing but I moved it slightly closer
10. 02:20:522 (3) - would say this shouldnt be a kick since the kicks in this section are rather obviously on the important noises 02:20:750 (5,6,9) - this is a kick to keep following the previous rhythm like on 02:19:151 (3) - cause the player already memorized those and then smoothly transitioning into the alternate drumroll pattern
11. 03:01:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - my eyes are still really screwed up from having to look at this section multiple times because i personally feel that for such slow SV this jump here 03:02:171 (4,5) - is a little too wide tru, I did ctrl+g on 03:02:171 (4) - and sorry about the epilepsy thing xd but I really like it and it fits
12. 03:24:786 (1,1) - creepy screams, would prefer some parts of this spinner to actually be mapped, though its entirely up to you instrumentals are really quite and mapping to the screams would feel kinda out of place when playing
13. 03:47:857 (1,1) - jump might be too huge for that massive slowdown in SV jump should be kinda large to emphasize the powerful drop back into the intense part of the song after such a sudden interruption, though I moved it slightly closer
14. 04:17:340 - really feels like this section should be mapped buuuut if it were me i'd be too lazy as long as it hit 5min drain xd I could have mapped it and skipped the sliderart part at the end but I decided to do it this way because a break fits much more here ( and the player deserve one after such a part ), if I map this it would just be a 1/2 slider copypaste like the other 2 quite sections and it would just be boring to play
15. 04:48:770 (1) - the whole section after should play just fine but the rhythm choices feel weird to me. because the kicks are sometimes on certain sounds in the song and sometimes it swaps to something else which i can't quite grasp, so this whole gray area-ish thing i just kinda perceived as messy. the thing you mentioned about kiai is rather iffy because most of these sections can totally start off with kicks only and it would still make sense with respect to the song. makes not much sense for you to kiai after you've mapped especially since the intensity of the music doesnt change at all in this area, at least to me. making this part messy was kind of my goal since this part itself becomes a mess with elements from all the previous sections mixed together so doing the same with my combo colors and the mapping would emphasize that just right. If it turns out to be a playability problem though I will see what I can do about it though so far I havent gotten any kind of complains like this from testplays on this part. Its true that the kiai in this arent necessarily more intense but thats not what I was going for with them, it is mostly a stylistic choice and if that turns out to be an unrankable issue as well Im willing to change it too.
16. 05:39:938 - this part onwards sounds just like 05:35:065 (2) - or 05:44:811 - , so why map them differently? 05:35:065 (2,3) - I wanted them to feel kind of like 'leftovers' from the previous intense section amidst the slow sliderart part starting now before it fully goes over to sliderart only, its entirely to get a better feel for the transition going
    
    seems like your slider art is to prolong drain time only LOL cant deny that but 06:06:613 - is a very clear point of the song really dropping any instrumentals besides the background 'howl' so mapping until that part seems quite reasonable to me
    
    would say that your map is really really neat, and i quite like that. just little issues cropping up at times, though it really doesnt affect gameplay that much (other than how messy/unreadable the rhythms are which i can say are mostly really readable anyways)
    
    gl on this

Feb wrote:

merry christmas!!! merry christmas!
never modded goreshit before, but i'll try :/

[general]

unrankable error: bg has not the needed size. RC allows up to 1920x1200
resized it for you if you'd like to keep the bg, but i had to cut away a few things *click*

ar 9.4 felt more than enough for me while playing.. ar9.8 felt a bit too much, even tho i can't play ar10 properly as well. Might be that. usually Im a friend of lower ar but I think 9.8 fits well with the intensity of the song and especially for parts like the second kiai where note density and spacing is very strong. patterns like 03:33:237 (1,2,3,4) - would also be hard to read with lower ar, 9.4 is a bit too low imo but Ill see if I can go with 9.7 or 9.6
can you maybe use less whistles? sometimes they are overused a bit imo parts like these 02:31:105 (1) - to 02:32:552 (11) - sound really wanky I use whistles for the streams so they dont sound too empty since I used them to emphasize the stutter sound constantly present in this part of the song. I personally like it
not sure why you don't use claps in generall for things like 04:57:603 (3) - I dont really like the usual clap sound and dont think it fits for a breakcore song, but will see if I can find something else to use for these
combo colour 2 cud be a tad brighter imo. The other colours were ez to see imo. k

[map]
00:40:090 (8) - placement like you did 00:44:811 (7,8) - here would be nicer and more consistent. k
01:55:776 (3) - not sure if the flow is intented here. Slider body of 2 and flow implies a simpler movement here for 3 - somewhere at x289 y349 aswell for 01:56:232 (3) - this note which cud flow similar to 01:55:166 (2,3) - this pattern here hmm.. but it seems like you don't give much on how slider body implies the flow with kicksliders so if you don't change that don't change it at all i guess. moved 01:55:776 (3) - down so it forms a triangle with the sliderends of 01:55:471 (1,2) -
02:01:258 (5) - can you give this 1/4 gap here between 5 and 1 instead of 1/8? It makes you not randomly break here :/ the 1/8 gap emphasize the drop with intensity very well and its really not hard not to break here. I personally never do everytime I play this map so I can assume anyone from the intended audience for this map wouldnt too
03:21:968 (6) - ^same here too. same also to stay consistent then with 02:01:867 -
02:06:664 - 02:16:410 - not sure why you keep skipping these notes here? maybe im missing the point and its obvious just curious. rhythm focuses on the clang sound on 02:06:588 - and 02:06:740 - and I pay attention to using normal circles as opposed to 1/4 slider whenever an opportunity to do so presents itself since I could just spam the entire map with 1/4 slider but it couldnt really be called rhythm anymore then
02:39:329 (1) - huh? this sounds not like 1/8 to me here, to me it sounds like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6900883 blue being very weak in this case. I suppose a simple 5 note burst wud be ok too. there is a static noise sound here same as 02:19:836 - which I emphasize with 1/8 throughout the map
02:53:187 (2) - note currently implies different movement than intended, how about turnig the slider? k

things i said in first kiai should apply in second kiai too

03:02:476 (5) - kinda hard to identify the snapping here imo, to me it sounds like 1/16 snapping, but ya i suppose its fine atm. really difficult to tell, 1/16 seems a bit too extreme though and Im convinced the drop sound is snapped to the 1/3
03:03:694 (1) - remove the nc here since you never nc later in this part like this? I wanted nc here so it shows a bit of color diversity since I used the regular colors for this part to emphasize the slow down of things happening in the song with transitioning into the white colors later at 03:03:999 - . people keep bringing this up lol but I want to stay stubborn with this
03:24:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - dunno I liked how the stream was like at the beginning? Maybe same shape just longer spacing? I think the curve is pretty nice to work as a counteremphasize from the previous one to foreshadow that a much different section is to come after this
03:24:786 - could you make the volume transition on the spinner a bit less instant? like 50 - 40 - 30 and so on? but then the volume emphasize at 03:26:537 - wouldnt work, the spinner starts very quite to express the strong volume jump in the song at 03:26:537 - and also to follow better from the consistently louder getting drums starting at 03:23:491 - which drop completely with 03:24:710 -
04:07:045 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+j on this stream would make a lot of sense since the flow on the stream before was already having this movement where you draw the stream from the largest angle not the smallest. right
04:07:349 (1) - not sure why you map a spinner here instead of what you did earlier also why not map the break? its kinda similar to what you did after first kiai without the rumbling from the guy uhh ya dunno. :s mapped the spinner by adding a bunch of 1/12 which somehow increased the sr to 6.33 lol, I keep the break though since there 2 other parts exactly like this and it would just be a bunch of copypaste 1/2 slider which is boring to play and players would appreciate a break much more here
04:25:014 (5) - you build up the part here with spacings so it makes sense to have this have less spacing than the stream after? right
04:25:623 (1,2) - same spacing like 04:26:232 (4,5) - but way weaker how about just stacking these? Also how about undermapping 04:25:319 (8,9) - these with a reverses instead? Would fit the tone of the music more, since 1/4's r way harder than reverses... To make emphasis a bit better you could just ctrl+g 04:25:623 (1,2,3) - these this way you have the slider on the weaker beats and the stronger on your circles. stacked the circles though I keep the 1/4 slider since I want to emphasize the kick on the 1/2 and I also keep the slider at 04:25:928 - because if I ctrl+g them the emphasize wouldnt be fitting anymore for 04:26:232 (4,5) - and the kick on 04:26:385 -
04:29:583 (2,3,4) - 04:29:735 (3) - is extremly weak therefore ctrl+g 04:29:583 (2,3,4) - makes more sense to me at least, so you have the weaker beats on slidertail not on actual clickable things. In theory you are right but how I have it now feels alot better and more natural to play for me idk, will keep this if I cant come up with anything else
04:45:420 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacings different between this and 04:44:202 (2,3,4,5) - since you try to build up first jumps r higher than the second one even tho it should be the other way around, at least make it clearer between 04:45:725 (4,5) - these notes. :> reduced spacing of first jump and increased spacing slightly for second one
05:11:461 (6,7,8,9,10) - flow is a bit harsh her, I usually like antiflow, but in this case you already used it on 05:10:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - these objects here and most of the time after antiflow should follow casual flow, but ya higher players will still hit it anyways. I like the antiflow slider and I honestly dont know where else to place that burst to make it flow better and not look total ass in the editor so yeah
05:42:375 (1) - beatiful slider :3

Really like the rhythm choices with objects you made in the kiai, so I didn't had to say much there.
I don't think you'll need alot of people here to take a look at it.

Very good map Good Luck!

HighTec wrote:

• [general]

1. I feel like the OD is a bit too low for the note density in the map, which can cause some potential note locking from time to time. Can you maybe increase it to 9,3? sounds good
2. I don't rly get the diff name perhaps an explenation for future complaints as well? xx because it sounds cool
   
   [martyr]
3. 00:21:055 (7) - perhaps placing it like this would make this look a little better? o: I like it closer to 4
4. 00:24:405 (1,2) - when playing this spacing kinda threw me off, since it's double the timing gap but relatively seen the same spacing as the other sections. I get the idea of the blanket but I would still love to see a spacing increase somehow to clarify the timing gap The timing gap is should be already clarified by the fact that I use a 1/1 slider here 00:24:405 (1) - where it would usually be a repeat 1/2 like in the other sections and increasing spacind would kill the blanket and the flow to everything I did after this
5. 00:56:994 (4) - remove two ticks off this buzz? 00:57:298 - is a rather strong drum beat that is clickable at all other occations, so why not here!~ tru
6. 01:01:715 (6) - Ctrl+G? in most other occations you mirror the kicksliders so why not do it here? looks and flows better imo
7. 01:37:501 (5) - Missing NC? tru
8. 01:39:024 (1) - tbh seeing no reason for u to NC this other than useless pressure, the SV or rythm doesn't change so the extra emphasis isn't rly needed tru
9. 02:01:258 (5,1) - wouldn't use 1/8 timing gaps as these are the things that play really awkwardly since the timing is way too strict. perhaps decrease the timing gap to a 1/4 to keep the restriction away for the player and so that they won't ragequit of sliderbreaks aaaaaa ok
10. 02:36:131 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - am personally not a fan of this curve as it seems inconsistent; it goes from sharp to less sharp on 02:36:359 (5,6,7) - which makes it look kind of... unpolished. try making it curve like a single-anchor slider \o/ hm I like the circular flow and the sharp angle is to blanket with 2 also there is no way I can make it flow properly to 02:36:740 (2) - if I make the angle more even
11. 02:37:501 (1,2,3) - pattern is inconsistent kind off, 02:37:654 (2) - and 02:37:806 (3) - would need Ctrl+G to be similar to (1): the tails to the outside then, instead of the tail going inside, which is the current case! if I ctrl+g 02:37:806 (3) - it will break the consistency with all the other 1/4 slider I made to flow visually into the next stream, and if I only ctrl+g 02:37:654 (2) - the spacing wont be consistent between the 3 and it will look kinda quirky
12. 03:02:476 (5) - shouldn't this be ending on the blue tick? :thinking: no, the 'howling' kicks in at 03:02:679 - which is a 1/3
13. 03:23:796 (1) - same as before o: ya
14. 03:47:857 (1,1) - sliderbroke here on all my attempts since the gap is really big here ;w; perhaps cool it down just a little bit?moved it further down
15. 04:24:405 (1,4,5,6) - can this small overlap pls be avoided >.< no, I really like overlaps like these especially if what they overlap with are streams, together it gives the pattern a visual third dimension which looks really cool
16. 04:46:562 (2) - perhaps NC to make clear that this note starts on a blue tick? since the spacing looks really similar to what was happening before, it might be a good idea to help out the reading a bit more mmh then I would have to nc 04:27:070 (2) - too since its the same,change the pattern a bit tho so it should be better to read
17. 05:14:811 (4,2) - rip blanket xd rip
18. 05:35:065 (2,3) - maybe make this one slider? i dont really hear a beat that makes the player have to click on 05:35:369 (3) - tbh changed it up a bit so it follows the dripping better

sorry for the small and perhaps useless mod, map already seems really polished

good luck!