Please remember that some of theese errors are suggestions, not directions, if i point something out is because i believe it will help your map!
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Everything ok here!
[crystalsuicune's Taiko Oni]02:42:176 ~ 02:49:676 - I dont think kdkdkdkdkdkd is any fun at all to play nor sounds good either, plus apparently this is mapped to lyrics while Taiko should not be mapped to the Lyrics, i recommend you try something more catchy here like dddddkddddkdddkkdd or something of the like.
Other than that fine~
[Hard]00:31:772 (X) - Add a note and switch the new combo from the next note here, also add a clap here to keep the rythmical pattern from before.
00:34:192 (1) - The way theese claps and whistles are arranged sound really weird, i recommend you use this pattern X means no hitsound (X,X,X,Clap,X,X)
00:37:579 (X) - Add a note here? the rythm flow feels better. same for at 00:38:547 oh and also add a clap to both of theese.
00:49:434 (2,3) - Remove the finish from (2) and the clap from (3) sounds better.
00:52:579 (3,4) - Combine into a single slider? it makes more sense with the musical pattern
00:59:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Follow a steady clap pattern, otherwise the rythm sounds really awkward (by this i mean, take the way you arrange claps and make them sound at the exact same spots in the next sect--- i guess im not making this any easier to understand so i'll just say use claps on the (2,4) WHITE TICKS on the timeline weather it be a slider start/end or a hit circle.
01:13:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - Align better? i mean some zig zag pattern or something would look good like:
SPOILER
Note this pattern will also take care of the (4) that's flying off
01:15:079 ~ 01:20:401 - This section feels really weird, either map it completely (if possible) or just use a break here
01:35:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section could use more symmetry, here's an example
01:37:337 (4) - Remove hitsound finish, then: 01:38:305 (5) - Remove hitsound clap and add hitsound finish.
01:42:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I dont recommend you make this curve down, it looks really odd, here's a better alignment imo:
01:51:853 (1) - Remove clap from the end.
01:52:216 (2) - Oh dear a slider with many repeats full of claps, please remove them all except the one on the first repeat, you can leave the finish at the end
02:55:724 (1) - Center it and move it a few grids up since theoretically the distance from the last note should be half as much than the distance between the last note and the 2nd to last note.
[Normal]00:22:821 (1) - Add hitsound finish.
00:37:337 (3,4) - Make them symmetrical to (2,1) you can either do this manually or just copy (2,1) horizontal flip, reverse selection and remove new combo, remember to move the stacked note, and arrange spacing accordingly.
00:53:789 (1) - Still could try to make something more circular, but i dont mind if you don't since i don't expect everyone to be pro at slider-art anyways, but you can use
RJ's guide to making delicious sliders if you need any help.
01:02:014 (4,5,6,7,1) - This manual stacking just looks plain weird, unfortunately im not sure of a good fix either, but to begin with, you should be moving the notes left and up not down and right.
01:04:434 (2) - Make it a mirror of (1)? (Remember if you do the copy/paste, flip horizontally, reverse selection technique, remove the new combo too).
01:15:079 ~ 01:20:401 - Saddening how this part is mapped in here, and very empty on [Hard] while this one's supposed to be easier, now i really think you should map something on [Hard] in this section.
01:24:272 (4,5) - Move keeping distance snap on and align (4) below (2), (5) should align automatically after moving both notes and this will form some kind of hexagon, which looks better.
01:53:305 (4) - Align with (2) please?.
02:02:014 (5,6,7) - Align with (4,3,2) respectively please?
02:19:918 (7) - Align with (4) then using distance snap align (8) with (5,6), fix the spacing of the next notes afterwards tho.
02:28:627 (5) - Would look better if placed below (4).
02:56:087 (1) - Start it on the next white tick, also i recommend you either make a decrescendo (gradual volume decrease) or just silence it completely rather than having it awkwardly silence at the end.
[Easy]01:09:272 (1,2,3,4) - Would be better if you made a parallelogram or a square with theese (4 notes, square, see where im getting at? =P)
01:38:305 (1) - Remove hitsound clap and replace with hitsound finish.
02:01:530 (4,5,6,7) - Once again i dont like the way theese notes curve, i recommend you look at the many recommendations i already pointed out in [Normal]
02:03:466 (X) - Add a note? also add hitsound finish to that note.
02:11:692 (1,2,3,4) - As a recommendation you can do this:
02:24:272 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I would prefer if you made some patterns with theese =O
02:34:918 ~ 02:41:692 - You're going to hate me but... remap this section the notes are too randomly positioned and it feels like there should be more combos.
[Overall]
Yeah i can guess it's gonna take a while for me to bubble this... a while~ anyways, Good Luck! u can ask me for a recheck anytime
