[General]
This BG is already on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/265157 and https://osu.ppy.sh/b/907626. Try finding a new one?
I found like 3 that I think are decent, maybe you like one?:
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/DP6oiN59is8/maxresdefault.jpg
http://www.wallpapersxl.com/get/8016881
http://i.discuss.com.hk/d/attachments/d ... lHUuJa.jpg
[Advanced]
00:02:395 (1) - I would make this parallel to 00:00:208 (1) instead of mirrored like how you have it for better interaction with 00:03:333 (3).
00:13:333 (1,3,1) - Even spacing would work well here if you can keep your stack with 00:13:489 (2) .
00:14:895 (3,1,2) - Antijump from 3 to 1 is uncomfortable to play, especially with the massive jump from 1 to 2.
00:18:333 (1,2) - Why aren't these parallel when 00:13:333 (1,2) are?
00:22:864 (2) - I think this would fit more as a slider, since it maps the same sound as 00:22:708 (1).
00:23:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - These don't make sense. You use straight paths and sharp angles for most of the map, and then start using curves here.
00:23:645 (3) - I think there should be a jump here if you're planning to put a jump on all the vocals.
00:27:395 (4,1) - Don't like this incoming angle.
00:27:864 (3) - Same as 00:22:864 (2)
00:31:145 (1,2) - Anti jump here is actually fine, but I think you should make it more obvious. Maybe something like this?: http://puu.sh/seQ0N/f2da53a777.jpg
Mind your other patterns, if you do this.
00:32:083 (1) - I think this should be two sliders. You have a similar intensity sound on 00:32:395 that deserves the same emphasis as this note.
00:32:708 (1,2) - I'm gonna stop pointing these out, but it's the same as 00:22:864 (2).
00:40:676 (1,1) - Try moving the first slider so that it interacts with the bend on the second one: http://puu.sh/seQbJ/21aaecd0f0.jpg (But neater ofc)
00:42:083 (1) - Same as 00:32:083 (1)
00:41:770 (1) - I think this should be parallel to 00:41:145 (1), therefore also perpendicular to 00:41:614 (2).
01:09:114 (2) - I mean, yeah, this works, and yeah, i know it's part of the theme of this map, but I think this rhythm would work better as 3 circles (applies to all the similar ones)
01:12:317 (2,3) - I think this would work better as something like what you did at 01:12:551 (1,2) (mind your other patterns): http://puu.sh/seQBS/0ca1c7f6f2.jpg
01:25:364 (1,2) - Spacing should be farther apart.
This BG is already on https://osu.ppy.sh/b/265157 and https://osu.ppy.sh/b/907626. Try finding a new one?
I found like 3 that I think are decent, maybe you like one?:
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/DP6oiN59is8/maxresdefault.jpg
http://www.wallpapersxl.com/get/8016881
http://i.discuss.com.hk/d/attachments/d ... lHUuJa.jpg
[Advanced]
00:02:395 (1) - I would make this parallel to 00:00:208 (1) instead of mirrored like how you have it for better interaction with 00:03:333 (3).
00:13:333 (1,3,1) - Even spacing would work well here if you can keep your stack with 00:13:489 (2) .
00:14:895 (3,1,2) - Antijump from 3 to 1 is uncomfortable to play, especially with the massive jump from 1 to 2.
00:18:333 (1,2) - Why aren't these parallel when 00:13:333 (1,2) are?
00:22:864 (2) - I think this would fit more as a slider, since it maps the same sound as 00:22:708 (1).
00:23:333 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - These don't make sense. You use straight paths and sharp angles for most of the map, and then start using curves here.
00:23:645 (3) - I think there should be a jump here if you're planning to put a jump on all the vocals.
00:27:395 (4,1) - Don't like this incoming angle.
00:27:864 (3) - Same as 00:22:864 (2)
00:31:145 (1,2) - Anti jump here is actually fine, but I think you should make it more obvious. Maybe something like this?: http://puu.sh/seQ0N/f2da53a777.jpg
Mind your other patterns, if you do this.
00:32:083 (1) - I think this should be two sliders. You have a similar intensity sound on 00:32:395 that deserves the same emphasis as this note.
00:32:708 (1,2) - I'm gonna stop pointing these out, but it's the same as 00:22:864 (2).
00:40:676 (1,1) - Try moving the first slider so that it interacts with the bend on the second one: http://puu.sh/seQbJ/21aaecd0f0.jpg (But neater ofc)
00:42:083 (1) - Same as 00:32:083 (1)
00:41:770 (1) - I think this should be parallel to 00:41:145 (1), therefore also perpendicular to 00:41:614 (2).
01:09:114 (2) - I mean, yeah, this works, and yeah, i know it's part of the theme of this map, but I think this rhythm would work better as 3 circles (applies to all the similar ones)
01:12:317 (2,3) - I think this would work better as something like what you did at 01:12:551 (1,2) (mind your other patterns): http://puu.sh/seQBS/0ca1c7f6f2.jpg
01:25:364 (1,2) - Spacing should be farther apart.