General comments: Notes are in rhythm, which is good, but i found problems such as flow and aesthetics, and these should be improved for better player's experience.
00:15:534 (1) - remove nc
ok00:16:367 (1) - remove nc again
uhm, why?00:18:534 (5,6,7,8,1) - decrease spacing, since its the part where the start of the music enters.
changed00:44:367 (4) - replace 1/2 slider with note.
I'll keep the pattern00:46:700 (4) - remake slider to make the same as 00:49:367 (4) - to improve consistency.
ok00:52:867 (2,3,4) - this pattern doesn't seem right to me in terms of flowing from the 00:52:867 (2) - to the 00:53:034 (3) - , try make something like this:
http://puu.sh/svfvo/46f94e2bfe.jpg yes, changed it00:53:700 (1,2) - distance inbetween notes are too far, which doesn't go flow with the rhythm itself. I suggest changing it into this style:
http://puu.sh/svfCw/c63f9c69e6.jpg lol true, fixed00:55:034 (1) - remake the slider:
http://puu.sh/svfHC/70bd0580ce.jpg I like the way it is00:57:367 (1) - remove nc
ok01:00:367 (1,2,3) - try changing into another pattern, it's a really bad flow inbetween notes and sliders
yeah, changed it01:01:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no offense but these jumps are really bad and unrankable imo, either change it in a pattern, or add with sliders to improve flow.
They're not unrankable, and I like then.01:08:034 (1) - remove nc
changed01:09:034 (4) - copy paste from 01:08:700 (3) - then do ctrl and > 2 times to make it consistent in notes.
fixed 01:12:034 (1) - remove nc again
changed01:12:367 (3) - put nc here
changed01:26:200 (1,2) - I suggest making a small pattern rather than stacking 3 notes at a time.
changed01:28:367 (1) - change to volume to 5%, since the outro becomes quiet and calm.
changedConclusion: I found out that the main problem here is mostly flow and consistency inbetween notes, although the rhythm follows the music quite well, there are much more to be improved such as using the NCs, the sliders and notes, as well as creating jumps < hardest part on making a beatmap. my suggestion is to go here >
https://www.youtube.com/user/Pishifat to learn simple elements in mapping, I hope you can improve that well, and best of luck on your map to be ranked soon!