M4M for this map.
Gonna point stuff out but uh, really needs polishing.
Good luck.~
Gonna point stuff out but uh, really needs polishing.
Insane
Insane
- 00:02:024 (2,3) - Blanket ;-;
- 00:03:524 (3,4) – Blanket this maybe?
- 00:07:024 (2,3,4,5,6) – Could you maybe this into a pattern? Atm it looks like they’re just randomly placed.
- 00:08:357 (6) – Missing hitsound on this head?
- 00:08:690 (1,2,3,1,2,3) – Wow spaced linear jumps in the intro. Not a fan of this considering most of so this intro is easier.
- 00:09:857 (5,2) – Overlap may be hard to read.
- 00:12:190 (1) – Ends on a strong beat, removes possible emphasis.
- 00:16:357 (5) – NC maybe?
- 00:18:190 (3,4) – Ctrl+G both at once for better rhythm?
- 00:20:190 (6) – Not sure what this is mapped to?
- 00:22:190 (3,4) – Blanket. ;-;
Check your blankets, I’ve seen the ones listed that are obvious, but there are some that are slightly off that I won’t mention. I recommend checking through this again for intended blankets and unintended blankets. - 00:25:190 (2) – Could probably make this slider two circles and space them out for emphasis jumps.
- 00:25:690 (3) – NC?
- 00:29:690 (3) - ^ Cuz you follow drums here, not vocals.
- 00:33:690 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) – I really like this part. :3
- 00:54:857 (6,7,8,9) – This looks really ugly in terms of placement, in my opinion. Try to move these around to make a little bit more pleasing aesthetic? Here’s a video, just to give an idea of what MIGHT look nicer: https://puu.sh/saONH/964b35aab6.mp4
- 00:57:716 (3) – NC?
- 01:08:690 (4,1) – Trigger-fuel right here. Fix this or I’ll come find you. I swear on it.
- 01:08:383 (3) – NC this?
- 01:10:550 (6,7) – Ctrl+G both at once for better rhythm?
- 01:13:524 – Note here for smoother playing?
- 01:13:716 (1) – Could space this WAYYY more.
- 01:14:883 (3) – NC?
Hard
Hard
Blanket check this diff too. Already getting triggered. 00:05:190 (1,2,3) – killing me.
- 00:06:357 (4,5,6,7) – Too closeeeee. Space the triple more.
- 00:12:357 (4) – Either NC this or space it more, this WILL be misread.
- 00:19:857 (4,5) – Too big a jump for a hard, especially since 00:19:524 (3,4) – exists.
- 00:20:357 (1,2) – Make these parallel. (copy paste 1 and Ctrl+G)
- 00:25:524 (4) – Ends on vocal downbeat. I suggest making the downbeat clickable.
- 00:30:024 (6,7,8,9) – Random rhythm change? (not the only time this happens cuz most of your rhythm seems inconsistent tbh)
- 00:31:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Again with the inconsistent rhythm. -cries-
- 00:37:690 (2,3,4) – Can NC all of these if you want.
- 00:44:357 - 00:51:024 – No consistency whatsoever. Sometimes you use doubles, sometimes sliders, sometimes circles. Idek.
- 00:56:190 (6) – NC?
- 00:57:690 (2) – NC.
- 01:07:357 (2,3) – Overlap. -triggered-
- 01:08:024 (1,3) – Parallel pls.
- 01:10:024 (3,4) - ^ (actually a lot of the kiai has parallel-ity issues.)
- 01:16:357 (1) – Space more pls.
Good luck.~