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Jebus of /a/ - Alone for Christm/a/s 2013 (With My Waifu)

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Tarrasky
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on segunda-feira, 18 de dezembro de 2017 at 19:46:26

Artist: Jebus of /a/
Title: Alone for Christm/a/s 2013 (With My Waifu)
Tags: 4chan meme all i want for christmas is you
BPM: 60,78
Filesize: 17722kb
Play Time: 05:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alone with my Waifu (2,03 stars, 322 notes)
Download: Jebus of /a/ - Alone for Christm/a/s 2013 (With My Waifu)
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Jebus of /a/ - Alone for Christm/a/s
Jebus of /a/ - Waifu Baby


Weabs that help with waifus for sb: (i love all you guys <3)
Kuron-kun
ghm12
Marianna
Mismagius
-Alibabah
Goku
Pulse
ThanaR
Kyubey
Kiite Kudasai
Pereira006
Tainha Flakes
-blank--
-TheHateD-
- Best
SrSkyPlayer
Lufu
Neopollitan
JoaoGMR
Ntiger
Lixo0
PsyLuna
Endaris
Sickoh
AzureMist
PenEasy
iMega
MatheusHsD
R y u t i s m
Xexxar
My brother (he dont play osu!)
shinxL
Jairocor
yatsamoto
Miyazono
Ren-chon
Reazen
arthurmartinso
Djulus
-Smine-
Net0
Sinnoh
and me >w<
Kuron-kun
Hello!

Checked through the whole timing and fixed some flaws / issues with the timing and now should be fine to follow the vocal.

Timing
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Mekki
que isso jesus
Bastionior
Hello important Log to help in ranking process

IRC
14:08 Kalindraz: lets see.. espere um momento pra citar os pontos
14:08 *Kalindraz is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/855867 Jebus of /a/ - Alone for Christm/a/s (With My Waifu) [Alone with my Waifu]]
14:09 Tarrasky: primeiro ponto letra da musica 10/10?
14:09 Kalindraz: sim
14:09 Kalindraz: vamo la
14:10 Kalindraz: 00:08:899 (2) - não acha melhor prolongar um pouco mais esse slider até o blue tick, pois o vocal vai até aqui 00:09:836 -
14:11 Tarrasky: concordo, fix
14:11 Kalindraz: 00:17:608 (1) - ops, melhor remover esse whistle pois os anteriores nao possui um whistle no slider end
14:12 Tarrasky: 00:12:647 (1) -
14:12 Tarrasky: onde tem vocal = whistle
14:12 Tarrasky: nesse aki n tem no final 00:20:056 (2) - como não tem nesse 00:15:121 (2) -
14:14 Kalindraz: 00:28:024 (2,3) - creio que isso está um pouco confuso, digo o timing não ajudou a deixar o ritmo consistente nessa parte, acho que se substituir por 2 or 3 sliders resolva isso
14:14 Kalindraz: entendi, saquei
14:15 Tarrasky: s tbm acho isso confuso
14:15 Tarrasky: como eu substituo por slider ai?
14:15 Kalindraz: oh, tinha que ter alguma nota aqui, pois o vocal começa nesse ponto 00:34:358 -
14:15 Kalindraz: deixa eu verificar
14:16 Tarrasky: and fix o acima
14:17 Kalindraz: assim deixa da forma atual, acho melhor vc só dar um nc no 00:28:024 (2) - para justificar a mudança do bpm que tal?
14:18 Tarrasky: eu fiz assim
14:18 Tarrasky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6575813
14:18 Tarrasky: acho q ficou bom
14:18 Kalindraz: 00:46:222 - uuh, unecessary red point
14:18 Kalindraz: boa
14:20 Tarrasky: mesmo q n use
14:20 Tarrasky: o timing tem q estar perfeitamente timeado
14:23 Tarrasky: melhor mapa
14:24 Kalindraz: engraçado que depois disso tem mais nada
14:24 Tarrasky: o erro
14:24 Tarrasky: só pode estar nos primeiros 2 min
14:24 Tarrasky: pq depois é só divindade
14:25 Kalindraz: 04:57:785 (1,2) - please nao ignore red beats
14:25 Tarrasky: to ouvindo os sinos ai
14:25 Kalindraz: 05:02:583 (1) - also eu sei que foi uma estrela mas poderia finalizar centralizando ela
14:26 Tarrasky: o centro
14:26 Tarrasky: é muito longe
14:26 Tarrasky: pra 1,2x, vou deixar assim por enquanto
14:26 Kalindraz: entendi
14:26 Kalindraz: é só isso mesmo
14:26 Tarrasky: 5:02 (5:00 drain)
14:26 Tarrasky: quando deus ajuda

Feliz Natal!
Marianna
Minah is my waifu
14:12 *Marianna is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/855867 Jebus of /a/ - Alone for Christm/a/s (With My Waifu) [Alone with my Waifu]]
14:12 Marianna: 00:08:899 - Eu sinto uma inconsistencia nesse timing, não sei pq mas sinto que ele ta errado com o vocal
14:12 Tarrasky: nossa eu to atualizando a cada segundo
14:13 Tarrasky: vc tava moddando?
14:13 Marianna: to :v
14:13 Tarrasky: eh tem bastante timing errado eu acho
14:13 Tarrasky: tenho q pedir pra alguem experiente me ajudar
14:13 Marianna: 00:46:033 (3) - ta erradinho aqui :v
14:14 Marianna: 00:53:096 (3) - Seria melhor se não tivesse esse circle e esse slider 00:53:537 (1) - começasse aqui 00:53:096 - e terminasse aqui 00:54:198 -
14:15 Marianna: 00:59:515 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Eu não vejo necessidade nesse spam de NC
14:15 Tarrasky: xo ver
14:15 Tarrasky: calma q eu to no 2
14:15 Marianna: ok
14:16 Tarrasky: ah eu gostei daquele circle, há um som bem marcante aqui
14:16 Tarrasky: 00:53:537 -
14:16 Marianna: 02:17:860 - Acho que não tem algo realmente forte pra ter um finish
14:16 Marianna: 00:53:537 - eu n ouço nada aqui, nem o vocal tem alteração aqui
14:17 Tarrasky: é que o coral de fundo faz uma intencidade
14:17 Marianna: okay
14:17 Tarrasky: eu ouço, vou ver com os outros mods
14:17 Tarrasky: mas provavelmente vou mudar algo ai depois, vlw por mostrar
14:17 Marianna: 02:55:443 (4,1) - o flow não vai nada bem aqui
14:18 Marianna: Creio que se você mudar esse 02:55:443 (4,1) - vai ter que mudar mt coisa
14:18 Tarrasky: fix
14:18 Tarrasky: eu girei o 02:55:443 (4) -
14:18 Marianna: kk
14:18 Marianna: ok
14:18 Tarrasky: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6576279
14:19 Marianna: ah, mt bom
14:19 Marianna: 04:10:607 (2,3) - o mesmo do outro problema do flow
14:20 Tarrasky: ah, esse pode tar parecendo ruim mas eu vo deixar
14:20 Tarrasky: ai n tem mt o q mecher
14:20 Tarrasky: pera xove o q da pra fazer
14:20 Marianna: 04:58:052 - Tem uns beats aqui muito importantes, vai ignorar mesmo?
14:21 Marianna: 04:59:385 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - E isso é um pouco preguiçoso :v
14:21 Tarrasky: sim, vou seguir o sino
14:21 Marianna: mas eu tenho preguiça até de procurar mods então ta de boa
14:21 Tarrasky: eu fiquei mil anos pra achar esse hitsounds de sino só pra usar no final
14:21 Marianna: k
14:22 Marianna: acho que é isso
14:22 Marianna: você fez um easy
14:22 Marianna: n tem muita coisap falar
14:22 Tarrasky: normal
14:22 Tarrasky: d boas, vlw ^^
14:22 Tarrasky: posta lá
Yaminoma

MkGuh wrote:

que isso jesus
ghm12
I just guessed Tarrasky's waifu.
I'm so proud of myself.
Alonevpk
Nice
Signum
Hellow (M4M) :3
I'm from Christmas Modding Queue but I requested other song to mod so I hope it is ok with you...

- 00:04:327 (2) - This should start at 00:04:209 - .
- 00:10:223 (3) - And this at 00:10:149 - .
- 00:34:358 (2) - This note shouldn't be here imo. I get the thing that it is mapped on a high tone but it doesn't fit in the song imo.
- 00:50:058 (2) - How about a blanket like this? [ Image ]
- 00:53:096 (3,1) - Instead of this, replace it with normal slider.
- 01:37:850 (1,1,1) - Minor: But many players will break their bones on the spinners like these xD Maybe do some christmas sliderart here at this part?
- 02:42:648 (4,1) - Minor: This blanket can be improved a bit by placing slider no.1 to a left a bit.
- 02:54:243 - Also, best waifu. (Or this one 03:12:235 - ) - And the last one.
- 04:56:186 (1,2) - How about this pattern? [ Image ]

Welp, that's pretty much it. Hope it helps somehow. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Tarrasky
A lot of fix, remapped all spinners, thanks Signum, just the blankets that i dont fix because isn't necessary ^^
Syarika
Hi there, From Queue -> https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/493936&start=0

General
  1. The map will better if you added slidertick hitsound, maybe if you put on 02:01:868 (1) - soo no need skip beat on 02:02:267 -
  2. Is it the spinner too close for Normal Maps? 02:33:853 (1,1) - and the other's
  3. I think you need new audio? .-. It's for 2014? :P
Alone with my Waifu
  1. 00:37:028 (1,2) - It would better if you make the distance same like you do on 00:34:715 (2,3) -
  2. 01:16:051 (1) - This slider it's not fit with the timing on 01:16:051 - move a bit to make them fit.
  3. 01:53:871 (5) - New Combo, remove combo on 01:54:271 (1) -
  4. 01:55:071 (3) - This will better if you change this not to slider, because this beat 01:55:271 - it's cleary heared. nor add a not there?
  5. 03:17:032 (3) - add whistle on head maybe? like you do on 04:25:800 (1,2,3,4) -
  6. 04:10:607 (2) - add whistle on head
  7. 04:53:787 (4) - same ^
  8. 04:54:587 (5) - New Combo, remove combo on 04:56:186 (1) -
  9. 04:59:785 (2) - remove whistle maybe? it's following 00:59:515 (1,2,3,4) -
  10. 05:01:384 (2) - same ^
Good Luck, I hope this can be ranked on christmas :roll:
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

[ Arika ] wrote:

Hi there, From Queue -> https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/493936&start=0

General
  1. The map will better if you added slidertick hitsound, maybe if you put on 02:01:868 (1) - soo no need skip beat on 02:02:267 - hm i'm not fan of sliderticks but isn't a bad idea, i'll think about it
  2. Is it the spinner too close for Normal Maps? 02:33:853 (1,1) - and the other's fix
  3. I think you need new audio? .-. It's for 2014? :P this is the only audio i have founded about this song
Alone with my Waifu
  1. 00:37:028 (1,2) - It would better if you make the distance same like you do on 00:34:715 (2,3) - fix
  2. 01:16:051 (1) - This slider it's not fit with the timing on 01:16:051 - move a bit to make them fit. fix
  3. 01:53:871 (5) - New Combo, remove combo on 01:54:271 (1) - fix
  4. 01:55:071 (3) - This will better if you change this not to slider, because this beat 01:55:271 - it's cleary heared. nor add a not there? fix
  5. 03:17:032 (3) - add whistle on head maybe? like you do on 04:25:800 (1,2,3,4) - fix, but is different from the other timing, i'm following the back vocal for whistle
  6. 04:10:607 (2) - add whistle on head
  7. 04:53:787 (4) - same ^
  8. 04:54:587 (5) - New Combo, remove combo on 04:56:186 (1) - fix
  9. 04:59:785 (2) - remove whistle maybe? it's following 00:59:515 (1,2,3,4) - fix
  10. 05:01:384 (2) - same ^ fix
Good Luck, I hope this can be ranked on christmas :roll:
this mod helps a lot, thanks <3
Sotarks
02:37:051 (1) - nice meme
it's a trap
Sidetail
hands down best sb in 2016
Topic Starter
Tarrasky
As Desperate-kun request, I change all pictures with big resolution for lower resolution to decrease the size of the beatmap
23mb to 16,3mb, really better now
Redownload 18/12

Special thanks to Trynna <3
Trynna

Tarrasky wrote:

Special thanks to Trynna <3
8-)
Shmiklak
irc gay
22:12 M a r v o l l o: first of all silence the sliderslide
22:12 M a r v o l l o: even the song tells you "silence nights" lmao
22:12 M a r v o l l o: it's pretty weird to have this "shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" sound
22:12 M a r v o l l o: uwu
22:12 M a r v o l l o: 00:12:647 - wtf lmao
22:13 M a r v o l l o: why real woman pic
22:13 M a r v o l l o: 00:17:608 - and what the hell is this
22:13 M a r v o l l o: while all others pics are anime waifus
22:13 M a r v o l l o: try to keep all images in the same style
22:14 Tarrasky: 03:01:024 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: 02:53:044 - well, what a cancer sb I must say
22:14 Tarrasky: 03:10:523 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: that's weird dude
22:14 M a r v o l l o: you know what I mean
22:14 Tarrasky: 04:22:013 -
22:14 Tarrasky: wny not accept
22:14 M a r v o l l o: LMAO
22:14 M a r v o l l o: is this that guy
22:14 Tarrasky: any kind of waifus?
22:14 M a r v o l l o: 03:21:830 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: I cant remember his name
22:14 M a r v o l l o: xD
22:14 M a r v o l l o: endaris i guess
22:14 Tarrasky: its his husbando
22:14 M a r v o l l o: as i remember he hates me gg
22:15 M a r v o l l o: well nvm
22:15 M a r v o l l o: im here to mod map
22:15 M a r v o l l o: not sb
22:15 M a r v o l l o: just my opinion, it's cancer
22:16 Tarrasky: the original song have a video about waifus like this, and isn't restricted just to anime girls
22:16 M a r v o l l o: seems you mapped it like a hard diff
22:16 M a r v o l l o: didn't you
22:16 Tarrasky: its a soft hard i think
22:16 Tarrasky: but full ds
22:16 M a r v o l l o: not full ds tbh
22:16 M a r v o l l o: but well
22:17 Tarrasky: cant map anything more hard than that with a really slow song
22:17 M a r v o l l o: lets call it advanced and mod it as advanced
22:17 Tarrasky: i can, but i will not, for me isn't necessary
22:17 M a r v o l l o: yep
22:17 Tarrasky: ye
22:17 M a r v o l l o: 00:24:887 (1) - useless nc
22:17 M a r v o l l o: like
22:18 M a r v o l l o: all previous combos included 3 objects
22:18 Tarrasky: k
22:18 M a r v o l l o: with such rythm
22:18 M a r v o l l o: 00:46:755 (3) - 472 88
22:18 M a r v o l l o: for better look
22:19 M a r v o l l o: 00:54:977 (2,3) - the only stack i found in this part
22:19 Tarrasky: k
22:19 M a r v o l l o: might cause some readability problems
22:21 Tarrasky: maybe use 0,8x distance snap?
22:21 Tarrasky: will be a bit overlap but looks consistent with 00:53:096 (1,2) -
22:21 M a r v o l l o: ups to you
22:22 Tarrasky: k done
22:22 M a r v o l l o: 01:06:693 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - what a boring part
22:22 M a r v o l l o: try to emphasis vocals
22:23 M a r v o l l o: at least somehow
22:23 M a r v o l l o: it should become better
22:23 Tarrasky: the vocals dont follow anything here
22:23 Tarrasky: i'll need do multi bpm with the vocal
22:23 Tarrasky: and that's really hard like that
22:24 Tarrasky: that's because is a normal
22:24 M a r v o l l o: well
22:24 M a r v o l l o: i understand
22:24 Tarrasky: i have tried do something with vocals in the slider
22:24 Tarrasky: like 01:19:691 (1) -
22:24 Tarrasky: if you hear will notice the changes with the vocals
22:24 Tarrasky: ok that's not perfect
22:24 Tarrasky: but looks good imo
22:25 M a r v o l l o: try to add more sharps on the moments where vocals could be emphasised
22:25 Tarrasky: k i'll try
22:27 M a r v o l l o: 02:01:868 - do these 2/1 sliders have any meaning on this part
22:27 M a r v o l l o: they feel to be random
22:27 M a r v o l l o: that shit happens in other parts too
22:27 M a r v o l l o: you emphasis every beat 1/1 sometimes
22:28 M a r v o l l o: and sometimes ignore them
22:28 M a r v o l l o: can you explain me what is the use of it?
22:28 Tarrasky: this first i have put because the coral behind the music
22:28 M a r v o l l o: I want to understnad
22:28 Tarrasky: but maybe i can remove in 02:08:265 (1) - for example
22:28 M a r v o l l o: okay I understood
22:28 M a r v o l l o: back vocals?
22:28 Tarrasky: yeah
22:28 Tarrasky: have started
22:28 M a r v o l l o: 02:08:265 (1,1) - remove
22:29 Tarrasky: but like 02:08:265 (1) - i can remove
22:29 Tarrasky: yeah
22:29 M a r v o l l o: 02:38:917 (4,5) - the same shit was stacked before
22:29 M a r v o l l o: stack this one
22:29 M a r v o l l o: or distance the previous on
22:29 M a r v o l l o: one*
22:29 M a r v o l l o: 02:53:044 (1) - you know what to do with this shit
22:30 M a r v o l l o: 03:44:220 (1) -
22:30 M a r v o l l o: 03:45:819 (2) -
22:31 M a r v o l l o: the kiai part doesnt look to be much harder than the usual parts
22:31 Tarrasky: for me 03:44:220 (1,2) - is ok
22:31 M a r v o l l o: well
22:31 M a r v o l l o: im nobody to force you follow my opinion xd
22:31 Tarrasky: the first kiai isn't, but is kinda the rest of the song
22:31 Tarrasky: but the second kiai is more intense
22:32 Tarrasky: example 04:28:999 (1) -
22:32 M a r v o l l o: ye i see
22:32 M a r v o l l o: that's all i guess
22:32 M a r v o l l o: LOL WHAT
22:32 M a r v o l l o: 04:57:785 -
22:32 M a r v o l l o: AHAHHAAH
22:32 M a r v o l l o: okay you made my day xD
22:32 M a r v o l l o: that was weird xd
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

M a r v o l l o wrote:

irc gay
22:12 M a r v o l l o: first of all silence the sliderslide
22:12 M a r v o l l o: even the song tells you "silence nights" lmao
22:12 M a r v o l l o: it's pretty weird to have this "shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" sound
22:12 M a r v o l l o: uwu
22:12 M a r v o l l o: 00:12:647 - wtf lmao
22:13 M a r v o l l o: why real woman pic
22:13 M a r v o l l o: 00:17:608 - and what the hell is this
22:13 M a r v o l l o: while all others pics are anime waifus
22:13 M a r v o l l o: try to keep all images in the same style
22:14 Tarrasky: 03:01:024 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: 02:53:044 - well, what a cancer sb I must say
22:14 Tarrasky: 03:10:523 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: that's weird dude
22:14 M a r v o l l o: you know what I mean
22:14 Tarrasky: 04:22:013 -
22:14 Tarrasky: wny not accept
22:14 M a r v o l l o: LMAO
22:14 M a r v o l l o: is this that guy
22:14 Tarrasky: any kind of waifus?
22:14 M a r v o l l o: 03:21:830 -
22:14 M a r v o l l o: I cant remember his name
22:14 M a r v o l l o: xD
22:14 M a r v o l l o: endaris i guess
22:14 Tarrasky: its his husbando
22:14 M a r v o l l o: as i remember he hates me gg
22:15 M a r v o l l o: well nvm
22:15 M a r v o l l o: im here to mod map
22:15 M a r v o l l o: not sb
22:15 M a r v o l l o: just my opinion, it's cancer
22:16 Tarrasky: the original song have a video about waifus like this, and isn't restricted just to anime girls
22:16 M a r v o l l o: seems you mapped it like a hard diff
22:16 M a r v o l l o: didn't you
22:16 Tarrasky: its a soft hard i think
22:16 Tarrasky: but full ds
22:16 M a r v o l l o: not full ds tbh
22:16 M a r v o l l o: but well
22:17 Tarrasky: cant map anything more hard than that with a really slow song
22:17 M a r v o l l o: lets call it advanced and mod it as advanced
22:17 Tarrasky: i can, but i will not, for me isn't necessary
22:17 M a r v o l l o: yep
22:17 Tarrasky: ye
22:17 M a r v o l l o: 00:24:887 (1) - useless nc
22:17 M a r v o l l o: like
22:18 M a r v o l l o: all previous combos included 3 objects
22:18 Tarrasky: k
22:18 M a r v o l l o: with such rythm
22:18 M a r v o l l o: 00:46:755 (3) - 472 88
22:18 M a r v o l l o: for better look
22:19 M a r v o l l o: 00:54:977 (2,3) - the only stack i found in this part
22:19 Tarrasky: k
22:19 M a r v o l l o: might cause some readability problems
22:21 Tarrasky: maybe use 0,8x distance snap?
22:21 Tarrasky: will be a bit overlap but looks consistent with 00:53:096 (1,2) -
22:21 M a r v o l l o: ups to you
22:22 Tarrasky: k done
22:22 M a r v o l l o: 01:06:693 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - what a boring part
22:22 M a r v o l l o: try to emphasis vocals
22:23 M a r v o l l o: at least somehow
22:23 M a r v o l l o: it should become better
22:23 Tarrasky: the vocals dont follow anything here
22:23 Tarrasky: i'll need do multi bpm with the vocal
22:23 Tarrasky: and that's really hard like that
22:24 Tarrasky: that's because is a normal
22:24 M a r v o l l o: well
22:24 M a r v o l l o: i understand
22:24 Tarrasky: i have tried do something with vocals in the slider
22:24 Tarrasky: like 01:19:691 (1) -
22:24 Tarrasky: if you hear will notice the changes with the vocals
22:24 Tarrasky: ok that's not perfect
22:24 Tarrasky: but looks good imo
22:25 M a r v o l l o: try to add more sharps on the moments where vocals could be emphasised
22:25 Tarrasky: k i'll try
22:27 M a r v o l l o: 02:01:868 - do these 2/1 sliders have any meaning on this part
22:27 M a r v o l l o: they feel to be random
22:27 M a r v o l l o: that shit happens in other parts too
22:27 M a r v o l l o: you emphasis every beat 1/1 sometimes
22:28 M a r v o l l o: and sometimes ignore them
22:28 M a r v o l l o: can you explain me what is the use of it?
22:28 Tarrasky: this first i have put because the coral behind the music
22:28 M a r v o l l o: I want to understnad
22:28 Tarrasky: but maybe i can remove in 02:08:265 (1) - for example
22:28 M a r v o l l o: okay I understood
22:28 M a r v o l l o: back vocals?
22:28 Tarrasky: yeah
22:28 Tarrasky: have started
22:28 M a r v o l l o: 02:08:265 (1,1) - remove
22:29 Tarrasky: but like 02:08:265 (1) - i can remove
22:29 Tarrasky: yeah
22:29 M a r v o l l o: 02:38:917 (4,5) - the same shit was stacked before
22:29 M a r v o l l o: stack this one
22:29 M a r v o l l o: or distance the previous on
22:29 M a r v o l l o: one*
22:29 M a r v o l l o: 02:53:044 (1) - you know what to do with this shit
22:30 M a r v o l l o: 03:44:220 (1) -
22:30 M a r v o l l o: 03:45:819 (2) -
22:31 M a r v o l l o: the kiai part doesnt look to be much harder than the usual parts
22:31 Tarrasky: for me 03:44:220 (1,2) - is ok
22:31 M a r v o l l o: well
22:31 M a r v o l l o: im nobody to force you follow my opinion xd
22:31 Tarrasky: the first kiai isn't, but is kinda the rest of the song
22:31 Tarrasky: but the second kiai is more intense
22:32 Tarrasky: example 04:28:999 (1) -
22:32 M a r v o l l o: ye i see
22:32 M a r v o l l o: that's all i guess
22:32 M a r v o l l o: LOL WHAT
22:32 M a r v o l l o: 04:57:785 -
22:32 M a r v o l l o: AHAHHAAH
22:32 M a r v o l l o: okay you made my day xD
22:32 M a r v o l l o: that was weird xd
thank you for the mod, this year is the year!!!
Hectic
Hello, you've requested in Christmas☆Queue 2017 and I'm here to deliver!

Alone with my Waifu
  1. 00:39:335 (3) - just a minor inconsistency i've noticed - you usually make these sliders not touch their own head, like these 00:32:401 (1) - 00:47:751 (1) -
  2. 00:59:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hm, i'm not sure about playability of the first section at this skill level so i didn't say anything, but for this - how about starting this section with some sliders or even reverse sliders so player can catch the tempo without losing score?
  3. 02:38:917 (4,5) - perhaps stack them? i did so previously
  4. 03:15:433 (1,2) - 04:22:602 (1,2) - 04:32:997 (2,3) - only 3 instances of such flow, it can be a bit too harsh, make bit smoother?
  5. 04:04:210 (2,3) - its a bit odd to see this thing cause usually you make sliders parallel
  6. 05:02:583 (1) - how about placing this note in the centre of field?
Hope this helped somehow. Merry Christmas!
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello, you've requested in Christmas☆Queue 2017 and I'm here to deliver!

Alone with my Waifu
  1. 00:39:335 (3) - just a minor inconsistency i've noticed - you usually make these sliders not touch their own head, like these 00:32:401 (1) - 00:47:751 (1) - fixed
  2. 00:59:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hm, i'm not sure about playability of the first section at this skill level so i didn't say anything, but for this - how about starting this section with some sliders or even reverse sliders so player can catch the tempo without losing score? nah looks ok for me
  3. 02:38:917 (4,5) - perhaps stack them? i did so previously fix
  4. 03:15:433 (1,2) - 04:22:602 (1,2) - 04:32:997 (2,3) - only 3 instances of such flow, it can be a bit too harsh, make bit smoother? i like this pattern, and i think is good to be more versatile
  5. 04:04:210 (2,3) - its a bit odd to see this thing cause usually you make sliders parallel k
  6. 05:02:583 (1) - how about placing this note in the centre of field? k
Hope this helped somehow. Merry Christmas!
Thanks for the mod, Merry Xmas ^^
Djulus
holy, best christmas map and storyboard ofc
Voli
what a shame, my beautiful voice sang this better
Reazen
I am crying. Christmas star for you
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Reazen wrote:

I am crying. Christmas star for you
Thanks <3
Xinnoh
enable widescreen support
Topic Starter
Tarrasky

Sinnoh wrote:

enable widescreen support
I made the sb thinking in do without the widescreen so if i remove some moments will looks strange ^^
Xinnoh
do you have a metadata source lul

you can silence either the slider slide or slider tick on the slow parts

timing
00:08:899 (2) - use ~93 bpm, vocal unsnapped + better for next timing point
00:54:186 (2) - bpm too high
00:38:214 (2) - increase bpm
00:58:807 (5) - why is there a timing point here

00:22:456 (1) - Tail doesn't need whistle
00:24:165 (2) - I don't think snaps are ok, check with someone who times
00:34:715 (2) - reduce volume on tail
01:16:055 (1) - Could add a small curve to the first half for aesthetics, but optional. Could also change slider so the corner is on "play", strong sound to emphasise
01:40:282 (1) - should there be hitsound on tail
01:40:282 (1) - silence end. Imo also sounds better when ended on the 1/3 before
02:20:259 (4) - 03:05:038 (4) - etc missing hitsound if compared to 01:52:272 (1) -
02:57:841 (3) - Could do two circles to emphasise vocal
03:12:235 (1) - https://twitter.com/handsomeosu/status/ ... 1892933633
04:32:997 (2) - Move this down so the visual spacing is a bit more consistent for 04:32:197 (1,2,3) -
04:57:785 (1) - Drums haven't stopped here, could keep some of the normal-hitnormals

gonna have to do a recheck later xd
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