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Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin - Undead Enemy

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[General]
offset +5ms 感觉打的更准一些
用的是default颜色?至少把绿色给改了,现在跟bg没有什么关联性
Normal以上的diff开头都没有转盘,为什么不加上呢?

[Kitty's Easy]
00:05:438 - spinner的尾巴音量要弄小一些

[Normal]
00:18:922 (4,5,6) - 这里摆出个正三角形会好看一些
00:36:450 (1,2) - 没包好
00:53:978 (5) - 这里可以多加个NC突出节奏

[Ag's Hard]
00:17:910 (1,2) - 把圈和滑条反过来,这样00:18:079的vocal会有emphasis
00:26:843 (6,1) - 这里间距最好保持一致

[MiaoFUuU's Insane]
00:17:573 (1,4) - 叠到一起
00:27:011 (1,2,3) - 怎么听怎么不对劲,应该是这样00:43:528 (1) - 去掉NC,可以加在00:43:865 (3)
00:53:978 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这星星能摆的更工整一些

[Insane]
00:15:551 (5,6,7) - 这里试试这种节奏00:44:118 (6) - 这个间距非常的难打,前一个滑条很容易出100,最好缩短一下距离
00:47:236 (1,1) - 这里最好跟vocal00:54:652 - 这里是重音,放个圈然后缩短之前的滑条
00:58:023 (1) - 可以拉长成一个折返滑条,这样正好在00:59:034结束

[Gu's Insane]
00:37:967 (1,2,3) - 这个我老是打不准,间距再拉大一点试试
00:47:742 (3,4) - 这里最好用NC区分开来,怎么看现在都是1/4的节奏
01:00:719 - 加个圈? 这样跟别的难度一起结束

ok改完了叫我
_MiaoFUuU_
@LFJ大大 all fixed
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Topic Starter
Lobelia
Fix mods get Kiity's permission~

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
offset +5ms 感觉打的更准一些fix
用的是default颜色?至少把绿色给改了,现在跟bg没有什么关联性fix
Normal以上的diff开头都没有转盘,为什么不加上呢?因为E,N难度不加转盘很容易出现榜上全是一个分数拉不开差距的问题,所以只有E,N开头加了


[Normal]
00:18:922 (4,5,6) - 这里摆出个正三角形会好看一些
00:36:450 (1,2) - 没包好
00:53:978 (5) - 这里可以多加个NC突出节奏
all fix


[Insane]
00:15:551 (5,6,7) - 这里试试这种节奏00:44:118 (6) - 这个间距非常的难打,前一个滑条很容易出100,最好缩短一下距离这里删掉了蓝线的圈,感觉舒服多了!
00:47:236 (1,1) - 这里最好跟vocal这里想做成对称梗,然后白线也有很强的重音鼓,所以不是很想改00:54:652 - 这里是重音,放个圈然后缩短之前的滑条
00:58:023 (1) - 可以拉长成一个折返滑条,这样正好在00:59:034结束
other problems all fix

[Kitty's Easy]
00:05:438 - spinner的尾巴音量要弄小一些改成soft音效了

ok改完了叫我
谢谢lfj :)

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello!
Sugestion,

Easy
  1. 00:01:394 (1) - Try use soft sampleset http://puu.sh/rqqnl/a9eec30089.jpg to make the hit sound more quite
  2. 00:06:787 (1,2,3) - Umm try move to x:484 y:128? symetrical reason
  3. 00:44:540 (1) - Ctrl+j that one? make the shape more paralel with 00:45:888 (3) - could be great http://puu.sh/rqqsA/f74e963d80.jpg
all fix
__Ag

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Ag's Hard]
00:17:910 (1,2) - 把圈和滑条反过来,这样00:18:079的vocal会有emphasis
00:26:843 (6,1) - 这里间距最好保持一致
All fixed,thank you

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你artist那边&之间好像没空格啊...unicode这边有...不用统一一下吗
Topic Starter
Lobelia
@No_Gu,这个我找neonat审核过了,他们说英文没有没空格的用法,英文的&要带上空格,但是日文原版就是没有空格的。具体前面他有给我post!

neonat wrote:

The song is an utaite original, unfortunately this cover is not in any albums as of yet.

Artist Unicode: ギガ&スズム feat.鏡音リン
Artist: Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin

日文里面根本没用空格,所以看出来好像没有空格。换成英文后那个‘&’就会分那些名字。

That's how I see it, and also discussed this with KwaN too, but I think the concept is still being discussed
jonathanlfj
first two green lines on easy is unsnapped

00:56:679 - green line on insane is unsnapped

fix these and i can bubble
Topic Starter
Lobelia

jonathanlfj wrote:

first two green lines on easy is unsnapped

00:56:679 - green line on insane is unsnapped

fix these and i can bubble
OK!fixed
jonathanlfj
ok
Kyouren

jonathanlfj wrote:

ok
raririn
undead enemy好啊 啥时候q
Topic Starter
Lobelia

raririn wrote:

undead enemy好啊 啥时候q
BN说最近比较忙,还要等几天!
Seijiro
Gu's Insane:
- 00:11:005 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is clearly ignoring the most prominent sound in the song. What is this even mapped to? If I check the previous pattern I clearly see you were following the synth sound, so why are you ignoring it now? Is there such a strong instrument I'm missing?
Idk what exactly you had in mind anyway, but imo the rhythm should be something like this, or in any case, something that uses those breaks into the pattern.
- 00:42:101 (2,3) - that weird stuck bothers me, mostly because it never happens again in the map: how it should look like
- 01:00:050 (4,1) - again, rhythm here is a bit weird. You prioritize 01:00:724 (1) - over the beat at 01:00:387 - which is a bit strange imo. Rhythm reference but it can also work with 2 circles instead of the slider if you don't like it.

Insane:
- 00:06:455 (1) - I'd rather increase SV a little more and make it into something like this. Honestly, that plain slider can't express that "WAO" in the music at all like that imo
- 00:10:837 (5) - this needs more emphasis, it's the strongest beat of the combo. What about stacking it on 00:10:163 (1) - ?
- 00:12:185 (1) - again, don't use SV in such a way, it changes nothing. Basically the difference between 00:12:185 (1,1) - is visually none, or at least not that noticeable. If you want to emphasize the acceleration on 00:12:185 (1) - use a higher SV (x1.50 feels fast enough but higher can be good too) and give a different shape to it. Actually, even just the different shape can improve the pattern by a lot. Lame example
- 00:17:578 (1) - same ^
- 00:14:882 (1) - what about stacking this on 00:15:556 (5) - ? You once again created a weak emphasis on a strong beat (namely 00:14:882 (1) - ) by using a curved flow for that part with constant spacing. Create more sharp angles if you want proper emphasis please
- 00:15:893 (7,2) - just pointing out that you should enable stacking in the editor and check how stacks behave, because you create some weird overlaps: Before --> After. You have to manually stack those
- 00:20:949 (3,6) - what about a ctrl + g on these? you once agasin waste emphasis on 3 which is a shame for the map
- 00:22:297 (9,10) - this is ignoring vocals, the instrument you are probably following here since there isn't anything better to follow. Better?
- 00:28:028 (6) - this beat needs more emphasis imo, so make sure to put more spacing between 00:27:859 (5,6) - than the spacing between 00:27:691 (4,5) - (aka, don't use constant DS there)
- 00:46:904 (1,1,1,1) - what is this? You're not following anything I can recognize in the song, or rather, I do recognize what you are following with the objects but their aim was surely different. What I'm saying is that those SV changes were meant to follow well vocal changes, but your rhythm is following drums, which doesn't make sense here. 00:47:241 (1) - this could easily be made 1/4 longer, while you could also add a beat at 00:47:831 -
- 00:53:983 - ohhh, this is how SV changes should work: along side different slider shapes. Take it as example and try to fix the patterns I mentioned above ^
- 00:59:207 (1) - uh, well, this is just personal, but it doesn't look that great lol. Is there any way to make it more "clean"?
- 01:00:387 (4,1) - these should be in the same combo imo, and moreover 4 should be unstacked from there, because you don't give it enough emphasis. Example

MiaoFUuU's Insane:
- 00:11:258 (4,2) - maybe try to avoid that tiny overlap: with stacking enabled
- 00:25:415 (4,5) - I generally try to avoid un-warranted triplets on slider ends, generally because they play badly. What about this instead?
- 00:38:983 (3) - I'd move this at 00:38:814 - . where the clap in the song is instead
- 00:55:331 (1,2) - distance them a little more, otherwise it feels like there's a 1/4 gap between them. Refer to 00:57:691 (3,1) - for example
- General combo-ing seems a bit unstable and at times too short:
  1. 00:07:466 (1,1) - remove NCs
  2. 00:08:477 (5) - add
  3. 00:08:814 (1) - remove
  4. 00:10:837 (1) - remove
  5. 00:11:005 (3) - add
  6. 00:11:511 (1) - remove
  7. 00:14:207 (1) - remove
  8. 00:15:556 (1) - remove
  9. 00:20:949 (1) - remove
  10. 00:22:297 (1) - remove
  11. 00:26:342 (1) - remove
  12. 00:32:578 (1) - remove
  13. 00:41:174 (1) - remove
  14. you kinda screwed up with rhythm here, since the NC was supposed to be on 00:41:848 -
  15. 00:42:522 (1) - remove
  16. 00:43:196 (1,1) - remove
  17. 00:42:691 (2) - add
  18. 00:46:230 (1) - remove
  19. 00:53:983 (1,1,1,1) - special case. It is fine as it is, but since all of them use the same snap and spacing, making them a giant combo would fit better imo
  20. 01:00:050 (1,1) - remove
  21. 01:00:387 (2) - add
I guess that Combo-ing is something you still need to work on, umh...

Ag's Hard:
- 00:12:185 (1,1) - I'd rather follow vocals with a 1/1 slider like this instead, since the SV change you use there is kinda weak and moreover the shape of 00:12:185 (1) - is just the same as the others (which means no difference, hence no emphasis)
- 00:17:578 (1) - consistency
- 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not use such misleading rhythm for this difficulty, but it's your call here
- NCs should have went on 00:23:309 - and on 00:24:657 -
- other patterns look consistent, although not always clean. I would have used a little bit more basic SV on this map and avoided the 5 beats stream

Normal:
- 00:20:275 (1) - shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider too? It's the same as 00:20:612 (2) - to me
- 00:20:949 (3,4) - I'd turn them into a slider, considering the strong beat on 00:20:949 -
- 00:26:005 (2,3) - this is not the first one, but I just happened to notice it now. What are you following with this stuff? I was pretty sure you wanted to focus on vocals but that doesn't look like it (and neither in the previous spots now that I check again). Can you give a better place for these rhythms?
- 00:23:983 (3) - for example this one. I would rather have it a circle only, since vocals are pretty strong on 00:24:151 - , so with a circle you keep rhythm on drums which is regular
- 00:26:005 (2) - same here, the strong beat on vocals actually falls on 00:25:837 - which is what makes this one misleading again.
- 00:28:702 (2,3) - this one is good for example
- 00:43:196 (4) - I would have rather clicked on the tail here. Maybe remove the repeat and add a circle?

Kitty's Easy:
- 00:33:758 (1) - what is this spinner even following... Spinners are like sliders: they should follow an unique, long sound in the song, not an entire part of the song just because. Please map it instead...
- 00:58:028 (1,2) - the only 1/2 snap in the entire map... uhhh

General:
- I'd lower OD by 0.5 on Insane for better spread difficulty across the highest diffs
- I'd also lower a bit AR on the Hard for the same reason
- Just to confirm this: did Kitty ever ranked something with the old username? If that's not the case there is no reason to put a tag no one knows about, right?


Just returning the M4M~
Topic Starter
Lobelia
Thank you MrSergio,I will fix them tomorrow!

MrSergio wrote:

Insane:
- 00:06:455 (1) - I'd rather increase SV a little more and make it into something like this. Honestly, that plain slider can't express that "WAO" in the music at all like that imo
- 00:10:837 (5) - this needs more emphasis, it's the strongest beat of the combo. What about stacking it on 00:10:163 (1) - ?fixed
- 00:12:185 (1) - again, don't use SV in such a way, it changes nothing. Basically the difference between 00:12:185 (1,1) - is visually none, or at least not that noticeable. If you want to emphasize the acceleration on 00:12:185 (1) - use a higher SV (x1.50 feels fast enough but higher can be good too) and give a different shape to it. Actually, even just the different shape can improve the pattern by a lot. Lame example
- 00:17:578 (1) - same ^
- 00:14:882 (1) - what about stacking this on 00:15:556 (5) - ? You once again created a weak emphasis on a strong beat (namely 00:14:882 (1) - ) by using a curved flow for that part with constant spacing. Create more sharp angles if you want proper emphasis pleasefixed
- 00:15:893 (7,2) - just pointing out that you should enable stacking in the editor and check how stacks behave, because you create some weird overlaps: Before --> After. You have to manually stack thosefixed
- 00:20:949 (3,6) - what about a ctrl + g on these? you once agasin waste emphasis on 3 which is a shame for the mapfixed
- 00:22:297 (9,10) - this is ignoring vocals, the instrument you are probably following here since there isn't anything better to follow. Better?fixed
- 00:28:028 (6) - this beat needs more emphasis imo, so make sure to put more spacing between 00:27:859 (5,6) - than the spacing between 00:27:691 (4,5) - (aka, don't use constant DS there)fixed
- 00:46:904 (1,1,1,1) - what is this? You're not following anything I can recognize in the song, or rather, I do recognize what you are following with the objects but their aim was surely different. What I'm saying is that those SV changes were meant to follow well vocal changes, but your rhythm is following drums, which doesn't make sense here. 00:47:241 (1) - this could easily be made 1/4 longer, while you could also add a beat at 00:47:831 - ok,i changed to follow the vocal
- 00:53:983 - ohhh, this is how SV changes should work: along side different slider shapes. Take it as example and try to fix the patterns I mentioned above ^
- 00:59:207 (1) - uh, well, this is just personal, but it doesn't look that great lol. Is there any way to make it more "clean"?i think its good enough :)
- 01:00:387 (4,1) - these should be in the same combo imo, and moreover 4 should be unstacked from there, because you don't give it enough emphasis. Exampleumm...i don't know how to respond this but i think 3 and 4 is sounded similar so i stack them!

Some opinions for those SV changes:I think you give me a really worthful advice for how to change the SV and make them better,i will pay more attention to these in the future,but i still have some my own viewpoints for this time!I think though i might make a not really nice SV changes but i still make a new colors to make them different from other parts and it's not a unrankable ,right?

Normal:
- 00:20:275 (1) - shouldn't this be a 1/2 slider too? It's the same as 00:20:612 (2) - to me
- 00:20:949 (3,4) - I'd turn them into a slider, considering the strong beat on 00:20:949 -
- 00:26:005 (2,3) - this is not the first one, but I just happened to notice it now. What are you following with this stuff? I was pretty sure you wanted to focus on vocals but that doesn't look like it (and neither in the previous spots now that I check again). Can you give a better place for these rhythms?
- 00:23:983 (3) - for example this one. I would rather have it a circle only, since vocals are pretty strong on 00:24:151 - , so with a circle you keep rhythm on drums which is regular
- 00:26:005 (2) - same here, the strong beat on vocals actually falls on 00:25:837 - which is what makes this one misleading again.
- 00:28:702 (2,3) - this one is good for example
- 00:43:196 (4) - I would have rather clicked on the tail here. Maybe remove the repeat and add a circle?

I will make a better rhythm!

General:
- I'd lower OD by 0.5 on Insane for better spread difficulty across the highest diffsok
- I'd also lower a bit AR on the Hard for the same reason
- Just to confirm this: did Kitty ever ranked something with the old username? If that's not the case there is no reason to put a tag no one knows about, right?

Just returning the M4M~
Thanks for modding!
Kyouren
Yes, i want everyone know my old nickname since it's almost mapper doing that! (Abhor, you can doing it without my permission)
Sonnyc
Easy.
00:58:028 (1) - This 1/2 felt unreasonably difficult in this level. Ending at 00:58:533 would be a more appropriate setting for difficulty, and for emphasizing the vocals. Even normal ends there. Having a harder rhythm than normal despite this being a guest difficulty didn't felt awesome in spreads.

Normal.
00:37:972 (3) - The rhythm was pretty complexed, and the current design felt a little confusing to read. Consider a new combo to indicate its abnormal rhythm.

Hard.
00:26:005 - 00:29:629 - 00:31:398 - You were mostly expressing every vocals. Leaving this empty didn't made much sense.
00:34:432 (2,3,4) - 00:37:129 (3,4,5) - This section of the music is pretty calm than any other sections in this song. Consider expressing these triples as a 1/4 reverse slider so that you can place a better intensity emphasis on other stronger parts.
00:53:983 (1,1,1,1) - Think of another placement please. The way you expressed this part of the song was the same as 00:49:938 (1,1,1,1,1,1) while there is a clear difference. Structure issue.

Miao Insane.
00:25:668 (1,2) - Could this 1/2 spacing be larger? Having such a close spacing on a 1/2 didn't felt consistent.
00:29:629 - Consider adding a note along the vocals.
00:41:258 (2,5) - These triple really feels overmapped. Remove these please.
00:55:331 (1,2) - Spacing is really bad to indicate a 1/2 rhythm. These needs a fix.

Insane.
00:15:893 (7,2,3,4) - Oh, did you changed this?
00:29:629 - Omitting this vocal line felt really awkward.
00:40:331 - The volume is 100% which is way too loud. Fix this.
00:47:241 (1,1) - Let me see the rhythm change here.
00:54:825 (3) - Adding a new combo here will be a consistent setting of a single combo at 00:53:983 (1).

Gu Insane.
00:35:106 (1,2,3) - The placement isn't properly aligned in terms of linear placements. Consider adjusting accordingly to make a more neat placement.
00:41:848 (1,2,3) - Stack in-game is pretty off. Try some manual stack to cure that.
00:42:691 (5,6,1) - (1) has a strong beat. (6) having a stronger jump didn't placed a proper emphasis. That sudden massive jump to a less strong beat felt highly inappropriate.
00:51:286 (1,3) - I believe removing combo at (1), and starting one from (3) will fit the songs and the pattern you are following much more effectively.
Topic Starter
Lobelia
Thank you Sonnyc!i will fix them soon :)
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Sonnyc wrote:

i fixed something before you come ,so there will have some more changes,sorry :?

Normal.
00:37:972 (3) - The rhythm was pretty complexed, and the current design felt a little confusing to read. Consider a new combo to indicate its abnormal rhythm.fixed


Insane.
00:15:893 (7,2,3,4) - Oh, did you changed this?i changed but i still not update before you come :cry:
00:29:629 - Omitting this vocal line felt really awkward.i changed to triplet,is that right?
00:40:331 - The volume is 100% which is way too loud. Fix this.oh,i miss it,fixed!
00:47:241 (1,1) - Let me see the rhythm change here.i changed to follow the vocal
00:54:825 (3) - Adding a new combo here will be a consistent setting of a single combo at 00:53:983 (1). fixed!
_MiaoFUuU_
@MrSergio

MiaoFUuU's Insane:
- 00:11:258 (4,2) - maybe try to avoid that tiny overlap: with stacking enabled a little fixed
- 00:25:415 (4,5) - I generally try to avoid un-warranted triplets on slider ends, generally because they play badly. What about this instead?
- 00:38:983 (3) - I'd move this at 00:38:814 - . where the clap in the song is instead
- 00:55:331 (1,2) - distance them a little more, otherwise it feels like there's a 1/4 gap between them. Refer to 00:57:691 (3,1) - for example
All fixed

I guess that Combo-ing is something you still need to work on, umh... ok

@Sonnyc
Miao Insane.
All fixed

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No_Gu

MrSergio wrote:

Gu's Insane:
- 00:11:005 (2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern is clearly ignoring the most prominent sound in the song. What is this even mapped to? If I check the previous pattern I clearly see you were following the synth sound, so why are you ignoring it now? Is there such a strong instrument I'm missing?
Idk what exactly you had in mind anyway, but imo the rhythm should be something like this, or in any case, something that uses those breaks into the pattern.hmm...you're meaning 00:11:090 - ? in my opinion..this sound is not so strong that must to be mapped,and stressing 00:11:005 - and 00:11:258 - gives a better effect.
- 00:42:101 (2,3) - that weird stuck bothers me, mostly because it never happens again in the map: ahh,yes
- 01:00:050 (4,1) - again, rhythm here is a bit weird. You prioritize 01:00:724 (1) - over the beat at 01:00:387 - which is a bit strange imo. Rhythm reference but it can also work with 2 circles instead of the slider if you don't like it.I personally don't want 01:00:724 (1) - ,can I delete it if you don't mind the inconsistency?
~

Sonnyc wrote:

Gu Insane.
00:35:106 (1,2,3) - The placement isn't properly aligned in terms of linear placements. Consider adjusting accordingly to make a more neat placement.did a little change
00:41:848 (1,2,3) - Stack in-game is pretty off. Try some manual stack to cure that.k
00:42:691 (5,6,1) - (1) has a strong beat. (6) having a stronger jump didn't placed a proper emphasis. That sudden massive jump to a less strong beat felt highly inappropriate.seems so,but I can't get a better way to fix it...and in fact 6 is weaker but in fact not so weak...still ok imo
00:51:286 (1,3) - I believe removing combo at (1), and starting one from (3) will fit the songs and the pattern you are following much more effectively.k
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Thanks
__Ag

MrSergio wrote:

Ag's Hard:
- 00:12:185 (1,1) - I'd rather follow vocals with a 1/1 slider like this instead, since the SV change you use there is kinda weak and moreover the shape of 00:12:185 (1) - is just the same as the others (which means no difference, hence no emphasis)I want to highlight the rhythm in this part
- 00:17:578 (1) - consistencyalso
- 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - I'd rather not use such misleading rhythm for this difficulty, but it's your call hereSo I used a different DS
- NCs should have went on 00:23:309 - and on 00:24:657 - why.this NCs was not bad,I think
- other patterns look consistent, although not always clean. I would have used a little bit more basic SV on this map and avoided the 5 beats streamI think the other map has same with them
__Ag

Sonnyc wrote:

Hard.
00:26:005 - 00:29:629 - 00:31:398 - You were mostly expressing every vocals. Leaving this empty didn't made much sense.Not important also can not add in hard,I think
00:34:432 (2,3,4) - 00:37:129 (3,4,5) - This section of the music is pretty calm than any other sections in this song. Consider expressing these triples as a 1/4 reverse slider so that you can place a better intensity emphasis on other stronger parts.fixed
00:53:983 (1,1,1,1) - Think of another placement please. The way you expressed this part of the song was the same as 00:49:938 (1,1,1,1,1,1) while there is a clear difference. Structure issue.follow the vocal on this parts was no pro ,And the rhythm is a proof of that.
thanks

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265,45,60724,5,0,0:0:0:0:
Kyouren
@Sonnyc & MrSergio: Fix a bit on sliderart and snap! :3

Thank you for mod!
sahuang
[Easy]
  1. 00:37:803 - spinner should end here as gap rule suggests
  2. 00:46:904 (4,1) - blanket pretty off
  3. 00:48:590 (3,4) - same
  4. 00:48:252 (2,1) - should avoid this overlap.

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:140 (3,4) - use a 1/1 slider instead.
  2. 00:41:005 - add a circle?
  3. 00:42:522 (2,3) - very weird rhythm choice,00:43:028 - is ignored. http://puu.sh/sFD9C/efa5f9c897.jpg seems better
  4. 00:43:196 (4,5) - make a symmetrical pattern?
  5. 00:45:724 - circle?

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:230 (2,3) - reduce ds
  2. 00:53:309 - make it clickable?
    A bit messy

[miaofu]
  1. uninherit timing points conflict with other diffs.
  2. 00:08:135 (1,2,3,4,1) - ds
  3. 01:00:382 (2,1) - avoid stack?it's pretty intense at the end/

[Insane]
  1. add a spinner as you did in normal
  2. 00:51:286 (1,2) - vocal is the same as its strange to use bigger spacing than 00:50:612 (1,2) -

[gu]
  1. 00:09:657 (2) - 00:09:825 (3) - 00:09:994 (4) - for each one separately,ctrl+G? cuz you can not only emphasis 00:09:488 (1,2) - but also reduce spacing on 00:09:994 (4,5) - which i feel is too big rn
  2. 00:22:045 (3,4,5) - maybe a reverse slider is better here,the stream seems too long
  3. 00:22:297 (6) - NC

I feel that this map can still be improved,especially for normal and hard.
good luck :)
Topic Starter
Lobelia

sahuang wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:140 (3,4) - use a 1/1 slider instead.00:08:477 (4) - 这里是一个延长音的感觉,然后白线也是我目前跟的音轨的重音,所以我才这样对的
  2. 00:41:005 - add a circle?ORZ我觉得我主要还是对鼓点,所以并没有把人声都对上
  3. 00:42:522 (2,3) - very weird rhythm choice,00:43:028 - is ignored. http://puu.sh/sFD9C/efa5f9c897.jpg seems betterfixed
  4. 00:43:196 (4,5) - make a symmetrical pattern?这个根据上面的改了节奏,所以就不做对称啦
  5. 00:45:724 - circle?对鼓为主。。。人声和鼓音重叠的时候我才会特别强调人声的感觉ORZ所以不啦

[Insane]
  1. add a spinner as you did in normalnormal上转盘是因为低难度没转盘容易一个榜上全是一个成绩,insane就不会有这种情况,所以没加上
  2. 00:51:286 (1,2) - vocal is the same as its strange to use bigger spacing than 00:50:612 (1,2) - 这里是滑条,判定比较松。。。应该还好吧?而且这块也在滑条加速,拉大间距也不会特别违和

I feel that this map can still be improved,especially for normal and hard.我在找2-3个摸,谢谢帮住=W=
good luck :)
Pata-Mon
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:140 (3,4) - 这中间我也觉得不该空,换成一个1/1滑条你不喜欢的话,那把3换成一个1/2,然后4不动也可
  2. 00:34:432 (2,3) - 这种包法整个难度只出现了一次,不合适
  3. 00:36:455 (1,1) - overlap
  4. 00:37:803 - 这加个note会舒服不少
  5. 00:42:859 - 整个kiai都主跟鼓的话这里大概不太能漏
  6. 00:45:219 (2,3,4,5) - 虽然有一组平行不过看着还是有点随手
  7. 00:51:960 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - 也是.可能适当用点弯的也不错.
  8. 我觉得整体还挺好的……
[Hard]
  1. 这个难度我也觉得不低于平均水准其实……要非得说的话,blanket啊视觉ds之类的小细节确实可以提高,不过还没到影响很大的程度吧……
  2. 00:13:786 - 这diff里1/4也没少用,这里清楚的vocal加个note好
  3. 00:16:904 (3,4) - 可以考虑换成一个3/4滑条+1/2滑条,同时跟到鼓和vocal
  4. 00:22:297 (1,2,3) - 这种在hard里就不太能读,还是换折返滑条的好
  5. 00:30:556 (4,1,2) - 这节奏很怪.改法应该蛮多的,我可能会这样:http://b1.loli.io/images/ldlg.jpg
  6. 00:44:545 (1) - 这里是重音,叠下面不太对
  7. 00:51:286 (1) - 现在这样没问题,不过这里可以考虑换一个位置(跟后面依然stack),因为换小节了,并且bass音也高了一度
GL~
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:140 (3,4) - 这中间我也觉得不该空,换成一个1/1滑条你不喜欢的话,那把3换成一个1/2,然后4不动也可
  2. 00:34:432 (2,3) - 这种包法整个难度只出现了一次,不合适QWQ不好改,偷懒
  3. 00:36:455 (1,1) - overlap
  4. 00:37:803 - 这加个note会舒服不少不过我觉得这里不对,节奏也没错的,只是OVERLAP不是很美观
  5. 00:42:859 - 整个kiai都主跟鼓的话这里大概不太能漏。。。我本来是对了这个音的。。。撒谎的摸给改了。。不知道改不改了
  6. 00:45:219 (2,3,4,5) - 虽然有一组平行不过看着还是有点随手
  7. 00:51:960 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - 也是.可能适当用点弯的也不错.
  8. 我觉得整体还挺好的……
我适当改下排版


GL~
No_Gu

sahuang wrote:

[gu]
  1. 00:09:657 (2) - 00:09:825 (3) - 00:09:994 (4) - for each one separately,ctrl+G? cuz you can not only emphasis 00:09:488 (1,2) - but also reduce spacing on 00:09:994 (4,5) - which i feel is too big rn个人觉得这里打法是甩出去的。。所以感觉间距不是很大,ctrl+g那边不太懂有什么区别
  2. 00:22:045 (3,4,5) - maybe a reverse slider is better here,the stream seems too long整个stream是一个渐进过程 只有这里slider会很怪,而且事实上也不差这三个
  3. 00:22:297 (6) - NC不太懂为什么要加
Binguo
小垃圾来摸图了 摸不动啊

[ag]

00:15:893 (5,6) - 感觉停顿不合适啊
00:16:904 (3,1) - 3尾端包好啊 太明显了
00:22:972 (1,2) - 1叠在2上面
00:28:702 (2,3) - 00:32:241 (4,1) - 同第一条

[lnsane]
00:06:455 (1) - 不一定要老实跟节奏的 拉到后面蓝线做个3/4条记得去掉尾部音效
00:07:466 (3,4) - 换成两个1/2 00:07:719 - 4放这里
00:54:994 (3,1) - 看上去像是1/2 还有flow卡手 注意一下
00:59:207 (1) - 丑 拉好点 小白点不忍直视

做的挺帮的 :)

先跑路
Topic Starter
Lobelia

Binguo wrote:

小垃圾来摸图了 摸不动啊

[lnsane]
00:06:455 (1) - 不一定要老实跟节奏的 拉到后面蓝线做个3/4条记得去掉尾部音效QWQ这个还好吧,也没人说过
00:07:466 (3,4) - 换成两个1/2 00:07:719 - 4放这里00:07:719 - 我跟那个音轨是到这里的
00:54:994 (3,1) - 看上去像是1/2 还有flow卡手 注意一下
00:59:207 (1) - 丑 拉好点 小白点不忍直视QWQ可是我越拉越丑了,看了下现在就白点比较丑,形状过得去

做的挺帮的 :)

先跑路
谢谢,你真是一个好人,明天就改!
_MiaoFUuU_
@sahuang all fixed

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Title:Undead Enemy
TitleUnicode:アンデッドエネミー
Artist:Giga & suzumu feat.Kagamine Rin
ArtistUnicode:ギガ&スズム feat.鏡音リン
Creator:[ Abhor ]
Version:MiaoFUuU's Insane
Source:
Tags:vocaloid △○□× cut version miwasiba __Ag No_Gu _MiaoFUuU_ KittyAdventure gokugohan12468
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Hanazawa Kana
加油
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Lobelia

Hanazawa Kana wrote:

加油
谢谢qwq
__Ag
要不你帮我改吧 或者删了我重新找个 我结婚实在没时间弄
Topic Starter
Lobelia

__Ag wrote:

要不你帮我改吧 或者删了我重新找个 我结婚实在没时间弄
好,那我看着改,再不行我就坟图了← ←
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