Cawub wrote:

Noob mod time qwq

Marathon

Since this is so long I will splitting it into 4 sections, each section being 15 minutes of the map.

[Section 1]

~Woosh~ open me

The section staring at 02:21:193 - feels very left hand dependent and repetitive so half way through the section i recommend flipping the pattern. (half way would be 02:27:593 - )

03:04:393 (184393|3,184393|0,184493|1,184593|2,184693|0,184793|3,184793|1,184893|2,184993|0,185093|1) - I enjoy this pattern and if you flip the pattern as well and put it at 03:05:193 - I think it would fit the song better since you added a similar pattern at 03:11:293 -

Probably won't do the exact same pattern, since want it different instead of being repetitive, but woops forgot a note at 03:10:893 - , fixed and adjusted a bit

The rest section at 07:28:393 - should sound like this:

07:28:393 (448393|0,448593|3) - These notes should start at 07:28:593 - and end at 07:31:793 - Oh this 07:28:393 (448393|0) - one is for that kinda cymbal sound, while these 2 07:28:393 (448393|1,448593|3) - is for another instrument
07:31:593 (451593|1) - Should start at 07:31:793 - and end at 07:33:393 - Fix
07:33:193 (453193|2) - Should start at 07:33:393 - and end at 07:34:993 - Fix
07:34:793 (454793|1) - Should be a single note at 07:34:993 - Fix
07:34:993 (454993|3) - Should start at 07:34:993 - and end at 07:38:193 - Fix
07:37:993 (457993|1) - Should start at 07:38:193 - and end at 07:39:793 - Fix



09:12:393 - Noob player like me can't do this section twice :c Since you already used this last pattern I'll mark this down myself, since I'm probably gonna make some alternate here instead of following the pitch, thanks x3

12:21:193 - wssduovdsh please nerf qwq too strong for such a long duration that's the point baka =w=

I didn't fine much wrong with this section just a lot of my opinion on what you could change

Awesome spot, seriously thanks x3

[Section 2]

Oh boy we made it to Section 2

21:01:193 - Cool LN section? ( https://gyazo.com/3fdaa4dda67d7a8065fec13087800a3e ) Pretty cool, but yeah you understanded well that part, that'S why I put 2 notes chord each instead of 1, and didn'T do LNs becaue felt it wasnt some kind of continue sound

23:35:693 (1415693|0,1415693|2,1415793|0,1415793|2,1415893|2,1415893|0,1415993|2,1415993|0) - Maybe nerf this the ones before and after are okay but i think there should be an easier part in this build up Totally marked, you are not the only one to point that to me, we kinda found some way to nerf it, the problem is that, it cause some inconsistent when it come to the 1/8 part. So marked x3

26:03:893 (1563893|1,1563893|2,1563993|2,1563993|1,1564093|2,1564093|1,1564193|2,1564193|1,1564293|1,1564293|2) - :c maybe nerf this one too? Marked, same reason x3

Maybe I just can't hear it but it doesn't sound like there is anything to add a LN here for 29:08:593 (1748593|0) - To me it just sounds like this LN 29:07:593 (1747593|1) - should extend to 29:09:193 - assuming you are going off of the cymbol and not the chords. I kinda do hear the pitch change perfectly ;w;

29:32:293 (1772293|1,1772293|0,1772393|0,1772393|2,1772393|3,1772493|1,1772493|0) - I found there patterns very difficult to hit, I'm not sure if it was because I am not skilled enough to hit them or for another reason, if other people comment on it might want to change it :3 Yeah, was testing it out and make player rage , will see about other opinion too x3.

I think you did a nice job on this section it is very entertaining to play and mod~

And you did some really amazing remark x3

[Section 3]

QwQ modding takes too long

32:38:889 - hehe windows sound Hahahaha

43:00:250 (2580250|0) - Not sure why this note is here, should be a triple and the note should be moved to 43:00:550 - Oh damm, yeah!! Fixed! wow

44:08:350 (2648350|0,2648450|0,2648550|0) - Maybe move this pattern into the 4th column since there are no triplets on it Hmm, 4th column do have the easiest, but right now is consistent hmm, I'm probably going to pass through here again to see.

Nothin really wrong with this section either

[Section 4]

WOO LAST SECTION

52:15:750 - Since this section seems easy there is a spot here where you could add some fun patterns like this ( https://gyazo.com/c0dbf10af2cfb556c18b45fcb0220b89 ) Oh wow, you make realize I could actually make something fun, and that easy part last so long, and I do hear another sound I could totally map!! I'm going to do that on the 2nd part of the music! *Marked*

Nothing wrong with this section really :3 I loved the ending and thought it was fitting for this map

Seriously nice spot again!

:D I hope you found my mod helpful~! Goodluck with rank!!!

Eternalie wrote:

Hi jooliee~

here is a mod , i'll just go through it and point out things in the way
also dunno how much time , i'll just kinda mod until i'm satisfied or something xD

dadon

key=1/2/3/4
00:45:393 (45393|0) - this could be a 1/2 LN according to previous patterns : 00:40:593 (40593|0,40793|3,40793|1) - Made some small change, since there was a new instrument that kick in xD
00:42:393 (42393|0) - this one is okay as a LN eventho the sound isn't really significant as here :00:37:593 (37593|3) - imho Those sound should be consistent no? I do hear the same instrument
00:52:993 (52993|1) - add note to 2 there is a instru sound here : also according to : 00:55:893 (55893|1,56193|1) - There is already a notes, but I might have added after your mods maybe haha, so fixed
00:54:293 (54293|1) - same as ^ , add a note to : 00:54:593 (54593|1) - ^
01:18:393 (78393|0) - you could double this one imho Gixing accent to the bass owo
01:19:993 (79993|0) - same ^ ^
01:21:593 (81593|0) - ^ and here aswell ^
01:22:993 (82993|0,82993|1,83193|3,83193|2,83293|2,83293|3) - move this whole block one line up (the snaps are blue and blue red lines (basically 1/4 later) Fixed from another modder that point it out too owo, nice spot
02:56:793 (176793|3,176793|1,176893|3,176893|1,176993|1,176993|3,177093|1,177093|3,177193|1,177193|3) - oh girl that jack XD ahah o yee I like jack owo
04:20:593 (260593|1,260593|0) - move to 3 -4 it could make a nice flow imo
04:26:993 (266993|3,266993|2) - move to 1 -2
06:02:993 (362993|1,362993|0) - ^ again same suggest
and this one aswell 06:09:393 (369393|3,369393|2) -
Will think about it, kinda like both hmmmm

10:59:593 (659593|1,659593|3,659793|2) - you can make notes jacking here for the double kick effect I kinda hear the song differently from the pitch and the drum itself xD
12:14:393 (734393|2,734493|2,734593|2,734693|2) - jack fest yeouuuuhouuuu xD ahah , fun stuffs Probably one of my favorite part to see owo, but I might be alternating each jack


LOOOOL I GOT THE BAD IDEA OF CTR+A , the editor froze :joy: ahahahahha xDDDD omj HAHAHA
14:33:993 (873993|0,873993|3,874093|2,874193|0,874293|2,874393|0,874393|3,874493|1) - nice alternative there Thanks x3
15:25:993 (925993|2) - add one more note , according to : 15:32:393 (932393|2,932393|0) - But the 2nd part have the drum that kick in
15:29:193 (929193|2) - add to 4 ^ same suggestion
15:41:993 (941993|2) - ^
17:00:393 (1020393|2) - dondondon ^
17:06:793 (1026793|2) - ^ in case you ask why on the LN part adding, it's cause of that :17:13:493 (1033493|3,1033493|0) -
Is mostly due to the double that those aren'T 2 notes chord ;w;

18:32:393 (1112393|3,1112393|0,1112493|1,1112593|2,1112693|3,1112793|0,1112793|2) - Hello this is a Z pattern ahah Ahahahaha always so cheerfull xD, thanks!
18:40:393 (1120393|3,1120393|0) - shoulddn't thoose LNs end 1/4 earlier ?Hmm I do hear it what you mean, but I'm sure is just the sound being too low and that it should be consistent with those LNs 18:38:793 (1118793|3,1118793|0,1119593|3,1119593|0) - .

And I think that's about it for me, i've went up to 27 minutes and I can't point out much things that I would suggest a change
can feel somewhat a 'positive' aura from that map ahah , ^^'a idk how to epxlain that but well nvm then xDDD
Good Luck yulie , nice stuff here ! owob Arigatoo >w<



PS : i'm not strong , i'm not smart and I don't ever want to be considered that way .You are amazing xP

Column : |1|2|3|4|

1. 00:13:193 - Make triples because there are starting special sounds in here.
2. 00:35:793 (35793|3,35993|2) - Swap this? for the playable.
3. 00:44:393 (44393|2,44493|3,44593|2,44693|3) - Ctrl+G also 00:44:793 (44793|2) - Move to [4]. Because 00:44:393 - this part is very big difference with 00:43:993 - this part. And if you rearrange it's really easier to read on players.
4. 01:10:793 - Why there are triples? 01:10:793 (70793|3) - Remove one?
5. 01:27:293 (87293|2,87493|1) - Feels kinda bored can you move both? [1] and [4].
6. 01:27:293 (87293|2,87493|1) - ^
7. 01:34:793 (94793|0,94893|1,94993|2,95093|0,95193|1,95293|2,95393|0,95493|1) - You Left-handed? :p Seems this part is only focused Left.
8. 01:41:193 (101193|2,101293|2) - Why you maked jacks in here? Really hard to catch this 1/4 jacks.
   
   Suggestion

   
9. 01:50:793 - 01:52:393 - 2 notes enough.
10. 02:06:593 (126593|2,126693|3) - Ctrl+G nothing to say more.
11. 02:16:793 (136793|3,136993|3,137193|3,137393|3,137593|3,137793|3,137993|3) - What do you think about this? Are you sure it's kawaii?
12. 02:31:593 (151593|2) - Move to [4] for the balance 02:30:793
13. 02:40:693 (160693|1,160793|2,160893|1,160993|2) - I suggest https://puu.sh/sKGQO/ad0fff4c76.png
14. 03:04:393 (184393|0,184493|1,184593|2,184693|0,184793|1,184893|2,184993|0,185093|1,185193|2) - Same reason as before.
15. 04:11:993 (251993|1) - Move to [3] ? for the playable again.
16. 04:20:793 (260793|2,260793|3) - Ctrl+H same rhythms in here 04:20:393 - 04:20:993
17. 04:27:193 (267193|0,267193|1) - ^

Janko wrote:

Hej Julka o/

I wrote it after 2 am so in some respects something I could do mess up but you know where to find me. I will try to explain xD

tududu modudu

|1|2|3|4|

32:37:193 (1957193|3,1957193|1,1957193|0,1957293|3,1957293|2,1957393|0,1957393|1,1957493|3,1957493|2,1957593|1,1957593|0,1957693|3,1957693|2,1957793|1,1957793|0,1957893|3,1957893|2,1957993|1,1957993|0,1958093|3,1958093|2,1958193|1,1958193|0,1958293|3,1958293|2,1958393|1,1958393|0,1958493|3,1958493|2,1958593|1,1958593|0,1958693|3,1958693|2) - Maybe remove it and add part similar to this 32:28:493 (1948493|1,1948593|2,1948693|3,1948793|2,1948793|0,1948893|1,1948993|2,1949093|3,1949193|0,1949193|2,1949293|1,1949393|2,1949493|3,1949593|0,1949593|2,1949693|1,1949793|2,1949893|3) - Can't, I'm matching the drum stream which start at 32:35:593 - . Making the diff go higher and higher in this part xD

Windows sounds
32:52:137 - 32:52:331 - 32:58:331 - 32:58:524 - maybe LNs instead one note. This is example 34:31:234 (2071234|2,2071234|3,2071427|1) - Fixed the last one, LN -> note, since was the only one and there was much more window sound. And it doesn't feel like a continue sound.

33:06:653 (1986653|1) - to 1 column. I think that it would look better.
33:08:201 (1988201|1,1988395|1) - the same situation that above. To column 1 and 33:08:589 (1988589|0) - move to column 2.
33:09:750 (1989750|1,1990137|1) - ymm the same. Column 1 and 33:10:331 (1990331|2) - to column 2 and 33:10:524 (1990524|0,1990524|1,1990718|2) - ctrl+H
33:11:298 (1991298|1,1991492|1) - hehe column 1 and 33:11:685 (1991685|0) - to column 2
33:12:847 (1992847|1) - ayy column 1
hmm I hope that you know what I mean. Next do the same until that moment 33:22:524 -
I understand, I might think about it, but so far I kinda want to keep those the same, but is probably due to the jack on the note before hmm, I'll think about it, I like how it play thought xD, like the jack for the drum and the other hand you feel the loud main sound.

33:23:105 (2003105|2,2003105|0,2003298|1,2003298|3) - the same think that with widows sounds above. Maybe LN ( for example 34:31:234 (2071234|2,2071234|3,2071427|1) - o )

33:36:266 (2016266|3) - is this needed? I propose remove it ;w;
Yes or else way too empty. That sound still pretty clear, and is really calm with those LNs

34:20:976 (2060976|2,2062524|2,2064072|2) - move to column 4
34:24:847 (2064847|2) - maybe to column 1
34:27:169 (2067169|1,2068718|1,2070266|1) - to column 1
34:33:363 (2073363|2,2074911|2,2076460|2) - to column 4
34:37:234 (2077234|2) - maybe to column 1
soo... Next do the same until that moment 34:37:234 (2077234|0) -
Same reason, jack for those drum, pretty low bpm, those jack are easy, and the other hands is to feel the main sound.

34:48:072 (2088072|2) - move to column 2
34:52:718 (2092718|2) - move to column 1
34:55:814 (2095814|2) - move to column 1
Why? Because it's more comfortable and because I inspired by 34:44:976 (2084976|1,2084976|0) -
Kept it, except last one which you inspire, moved one note to 3rd column, due to these drum 34:52:072 (2092072|1,2092460|1) - , want to keep it. And my colum 1|4 is for other sound.

36:13:350 (2173350|0) - I propose column 2 Was to keep consistent with those clap 1|4, but pitch go up and last one on this section, so might as well change it a bit~ moved to column 2 xD

36:59:550 (2219550|2,2219550|1,2219950|1,2219950|2) - tone sounds are different than sounds below so I propose 36:56:350 (2216350|2,2216750|2) - move to column 2 and 36:57:150 (2217150|1,2217550|1,2217950|1,2218350|1,2218750|1,2219150|1) - move this to col 1
Fixed~ x3

38:18:950 (2298950|0,2299350|0) - hmm I think that will be better if these notes will be moved to column 3
38:20:150 (2300150|1) - move to column 3
38:21:750 (2301750|0) - why column 1?
New stanza
38:24:550 - maybe one note in column 2?
No drum, empty emtpy so keep it really empty xD

39:37:150 (2377150|1) - yyymmm col 4 plz Fix owo
39:38:550 (2378550|3) - move to 2 New stanza, 12-> 34

40:32:750 (2432750|2) - to 4 for pitch and 40:32:950 (2432950|3,2432950|1) - move to left and 40:33:050 (2433050|0) - move this to 2 or 4 or where you want xD Oh cool, fix~ xD

40:34:350 (2434350|1) - move to column 3 Fix~

------------------------------------------------


24:53:393 (1493393|2,1493793|2,1494193|2) - hmmm maybe move to column 1 and 24:53:593 (1493593|0,1493593|1,1493993|0,1493993|1) - move this to right [23] and 24:54:393 (1494393|1) - move this note to col 3
24:56:193 (1496193|2,1496393|1,1496393|0,1496593|2,1496793|1,1496793|0,1496993|2,1497193|1,1497193|0,1497393|2,1497593|1) - http://puu.sh/rFUgv/61f2885ed6.png
More easier to focus on the drum, so it doesn't make some kind of trill in one hand

25:08:393 (1508393|3,1508393|2,1508493|2,1508493|3,1508593|3,1508593|2,1508693|2,1508693|3,1508793|2,1508793|3) - ugh... http://puu.sh/rFUoJ/e078d217da.png I think that these moments are more. I recommended this anywhere. Gameplay is more important.
Fixed, also you made me spot something near that part, removed 25:00:993 (1500993|2) - , 25:04:193 (1504193|2) -

25:55:193 (1555193|1,1555193|2,1555293|2,1555293|1,1555493|2,1555493|1) - ughh? ;_; ^the same thing
25:56:593 (1556593|0,1556593|2,1556793|2,1556793|0,1556893|0,1556893|2,1556993|2,1556993|0,1557093|2,1557093|0) - yeaah ^
*continue watching*
26:02:893 (1562893|2,1562893|0,1562993|0,1562993|2,1563093|2,1563093|0,1563193|0,1563193|2,1563893|1,1563893|2,1563993|1,1563993|2,1564093|1,1564093|2,1564193|1,1564193|2,1564293|1,1564293|2,1564693|3,1564693|1,1564793|3,1564793|1,1564893|3,1564893|1,1564993|1,1564993|3,1565093|3,1565093|1) - Julie plz ;_;
Same drum, and instead of always trills, made something different in this part then other part. For the 5 notes one, might change if is really nearly impossible to play


28:15:793 (1695793|1) - ufff normality. Move to column 3 ^^
Should be same as 28:15:493 (1695493|3,1695493|1,1695493|0,1696093|3,1696093|1,1696093|0) - not this 28:16:393 (1696393|2,1696393|0,1696393|3) - .

Ahh my head. I hope that's enough. Everything in this mod for cosmetic changes aimed at improving the gameplay and look better to the eye.

Very fun song. It's possible that this mod is bad but....

SPOILER

>w<

Adiopulse wrote:

Adiopulse's Loopnig Mod

last 30 minutes

change:
31:51:793 (1911793|3,1912193|2) be doubles
31:54:993 (1914993|2) ^
31:58:193 (1918193|3,1918593|2) ^
32:04:393 (1924393|0,1924393|2,1924593|3,1924793|1,1924793|0,1924993|2) ^ doubles with lns now
32:10:793 (1930793|2,1930793|0,1930993|3,1931193|0,1931193|1,1931393|2) ^
32:07:793 (1927793|2) ^just double
Only making double on those bass, and if I put double on those end of synth, I wont be able to emphasize bass like these part 32:07:993 (1927993|3,1927993|1,1928193|2,1928193|3) - . So really thinking about it xD

32:14:793 hella lazy patterning
39:56:150 ^
Woops owo, changed first section flipped because new stanza = flip, didn't fix the lazyness~

36:55:550 the doubles should just be lns Fixed~ x3

37:01:750 place those lnss in other cols, seem like 1,4 was forgotten Nah, the thing is, the LN isn'T for the drum, the drum doesn'T really go that long, is for the winds sound that go really long xD, and thsoe 1|4 is to emphasize the loud drum.

45:40:150 place some of those jacks in col 1,4 i mean fo real, this aint 2k Hahaha I'm going to think about it, but right now, index jacking would be easier no? And the main reason, si due to same pitch haha xD.

47:29:750 continue these with the doubles ahead
49:17:750 this part should be like this part ^^^^^?????!??
49:43:350 now you do it?
Only putting double on those bass, and this should be really really calm, or else it will be more intense then this 49:56:150 - + which doesn't make sense.

52:04:350 this aint 2k
53:33:950 ^
Moved all the LN so it fit more the pitch and more vary in column.

58:30:129 map these lns to pitch Kinda did already xD

add:
33:55:234 you can add notes for those gallop snare like 33:56:395 and 33:56:492 Nah, want loud drum more notes
35:08:976 ln for vocals Not matching the vocal in the whole song.
43:34:850 ln col 1 3 ticks
43:38:050 ^
43:41:250 ^
Not a continue sound but really 3 same sound

56:58:267 there are sounds here, maybe too quiet to map? They are pretty clear to me O.O

del:
50:46:150 (3046150|3) flat out throw it out the window haha

juankristal wrote:

HI JULIE BE MY LAST KUDOSU PLS

32:35:593 -

All of the mod will likely be suggestions of random stuff because I think modding random timespans of a map is not a really good way to check consistency or pattering xD

32:38:793 - I thiiink this might be better if you add some sort of slowjam on it and change the pattern a little bit. Maybe like this? That's the drum stream, it go faster and faster, not supose to be doing a slowjam!



32:40:718 (1960718|3,1960718|0,1961105|2,1961105|3,1961492|0,1961492|3) - Also you could make those triplets for the crashes! What? There is no crash on those.

32:49:331 - 32:49:524 - those are good 1/4s to make the map less mindblocky. Up to you tho Yeah, but don'T want to make some sort of jumpstream, or else won't feel much the drum on the 1/2 snap.

32:52:331 - SV PLS Make it like super fast into the crash if you want to. Doesn't really fit

32:53:105 - Same thing for the triples Added one more note

32:55:524 - Same thing for 1/4s Oh, nice spot, added.

33:00:653 - Something like this maybe? Not really consistent

33:02:201 - Then this (windows sounds are so good) Yeah, but fitting drum too, hmm will think about it

33:23:685 - Weeew I mostly been matching the drum, so keeping stuff consistent too xD, while player feel the main sound ofc.

Most if not all of this suggestions are to not make your map just jumptrills but I think it can also apply to be your style because the map is quite unique already. Dunno, will just keep suggesting stuff. (Of course the last one should keep that pattern until 33:26:782 - )

33:26:782 - Then here you coooould:

33:57:653 - Missing a note there? Not the same sound as 33:57:460 (2037460|3,2037556|1) - , Also this feel like it should be some kind of short LN for some kind of winds sound, but I find it too low for player to feel it, want to emphasize these 33:57:460 (2037460|3,2037556|1) - more

34:03:653 - Well this is hard to add but there are some 1/4s there as well. Up to you. Added~

34:07:234 - Well, that not being a triple is a sad thing but I guess it makes sense to not make it super ouch Not to make too ouch, but also because it feel like some kind of echo of the cymbal xD. This would have been killer haha

34:07:814 - You could try to do some stuff like this here: Kinda makes it a bit less monotonous maybe I'm just gonna let player focus on following the drum

34:09:556 - For the other windows sound perhaps

34:25:040 (2065040|2,2065427|0) - Shouldnt those be doubles as well? Keeping double to emphasize more the bass and clap sound, just like part before, 1/2/1/2 note chord
34:31:427 (2071427|1) - ^ Already 2 notes
34:37:718 - Same goes here Not matching that sound
34:43:814 (2083814|2,2083911|0) - Ctrl+h or Ctrl+g for pitch! Shouldn't be the same as 34:43:040 (2083040|3,2083137|1) - .
34:45:750 (2085750|2,2085750|3,2085879|1) - Ctrl+h for pitch It go high->low in the pitch.

(cant believe that windows sounds would make me say pitch)
34:48:847 - Also you did it here so Same reason

34:50:782 (2090782|3) - , 34:52:331 (2092331|0) - , 34:53:879 (2093879|0) - ,34:55:427 - Wouldnt be better to be on slot 2? Same sound as before I actually haven'T thought about that, fix xD

Anyways, probably the next 2 minutes is likely the same stuff being pointed out. WINDOWS IS LOVE Fix it x3, pretty cool idea, haven'T thought about~

35:02:976 (2102976|0) - You could use doubles for those notes in this whole pattern I feel I spammed enough trill for those drum jumptrill stream and all, single note trills, player would feel more the repeat main sound of the window xD

35:06:653 - Ayy lmao :D

35:07:040 (2107040|0,2107089|2,2107137|0,2107185|2,2107234|0,2107282|2,2107331|0,2107379|2) - You coooould move that to riight since pitch but whatever Pitch doesn't change, want player to focus keeping speed instead of changing in the middle of the fast trills xD.



Sorry if it was a bit too short, is really hard for me to mod something like this without having the full context of the map but I guess everyone has that problem. Thats also the reason because I mostly used pictures instead of explanations of what I think you might want to change, cant really find the words if I dont have the look of the whole map. Its funny that most of the suggestions can probably work for most of the map, specially those 1/4s mentioned. Anyways YOU WILL DEFINITELY WILL NEED LUCK HERE SO I WISH YOU ALL MY LUCK.

And I feel it is too short, oh well...

unique stuff is good stuff

FastYoshi wrote:

Imma shoot a star.

gl~ :3

don't make it go waste -w- xd

Raveille wrote:

Julie nearly fried my 2nd laptop.

|1|2|3|4|

MY HUMONGO MODDO

00:25:993 - I want to ask, some of the LNs here seem very inconsistent. You have the 00:32:593 (32593|0,32793|2,32993|1) - 2 LN, and you have 00:43:793 (43793|2,43993|3,43993|0) - 1 LN. It doesn't sound much different. So you should keep it consistent with a 2 LN or a 1 LN.
Is not inconsistent, listen closely.
00:26:393 -, 00:27:993 - vs 00:32:793 - , 00:34:393 - (you can hear some like of woooop~ for those 2 LNs)

01:04:393 (64393|2,64493|2) - no plz. jumpstream and then followed by a jack is a no in my storybook. MOVE 01:04:493 (64493|2,64693|2,64893|2) - TO 2 plz. Same sound x3. I'm not planning to make it 100% comfortable xD

01:17:193 (77193|2,77293|2,77493|2,77693|2) - QwQ why ^

01:22:593 (82593|1,82593|0) - this can be an LN to 01:22:793 - as there is still a held synth sound I feel the bass is so loud in this, I would rather match the bass, and make player feel more the bass then the synth sound in this. But I do agree this could be some LNs. but I want to create some stop feeling from those bass.

01:26:793 (86793|2,86893|2,86993|1,87093|1,87193|2,87293|2,87393|1,87493|1,87593|2,87693|2,87793|1,87893|1,87993|2,88093|2,88193|1,88293|1) - JULIE STOP KILLING PEOPLE!!! To be honest, this is just wtf?!?! I suggest mixing it around, like have the jacks at 1 and 4 too. This is just clustered.
This is actually really easy, just double jack alternate each hands, and also I didn't overchord it, I could have just put double jack for each and would have been the same difficulty in play but higher SR, which I didn't do.

01:29:993 (89993|2,90093|2,90293|2,90493|2) - Julie.................. Same reason as the 2nd point. Since same part.

01:36:193 (96193|3,96293|3,96393|2,96493|2) - wow stop being so relentless on column 3... it never did anything bad to you :C Keeping stuff consistente, since I mostly did fit the pitch as well.

ok the rest of the column 3 oppressing is the same from now on.

02:31:593 - I know this signifies a stronger drum, but that triple is also used for the cymbal crash, so I suggest a double. Oh, wait what was that doing there?! Fix, nice catch wow.

02:33:993 (153993|1,154093|1,154293|1,154493|1) - aaaaaaaa WHAT DID 2 DO TO YOU NOW?>?? Pitch, without doing random jack due to 4k.

02:53:193 (173193|2,173193|3,173293|2,173393|3,173493|2) - this is very uncomfortable. Same reason

02:53:993 (173993|2,173993|3,174093|2,174193|3,174293|2) - VERY UNCOMFORTABLE. Same reason, and those minijack are pretty easy

02:56:793 (176793|3,176793|1,176893|1,176893|3,176993|1,176993|3,177093|3,177093|1,177193|3,177193|1,177293|0,177293|2,177393|0,177393|2,177493|3,177493|1,177593|0,177593|2,177693|2,177693|0,177793|3,177793|1,177893|0,177893|3,177993|1) - FLIPS EVERYTHING. Ok uh... My suggestions. Maybe will do like your suggestion, but thats like too way more easier for same SR xD, I do try to want to keep it challenging xD

04:19:993 (259993|1,259993|0,260093|3,260093|1,260193|0,260193|2,260293|2,260293|3) - better patterns can be used. owo Ohh, I actually like that suggestion, even if is the same difficulty of play, this do look way better~ Fixed~

04:23:493 (263493|2,263593|2,263693|2) - ew. 04:23:493 (263493|2) - move to 2 maybe I kinda did some changing here I guess, mostly to fit this 04:23:193 - with the previous pitch. Not sure if is better, probably not, but changed a bit to fit pitch better.

04:26:693 (266693|2,266793|2,266893|2,266993|2) - noooooooooooooo, either 04:26:793 (266793|2,266893|2,266993|2) - move to 2 or 04:26:693 (266693|2) - move to 2 Keeping consistent on bass, 12, 34, 23. And synth, 13, 14.

04:29:893 (269893|2,269993|2,270093|2) - same thing here. Same reason, because of the way I mapped woops =w=

Basically, any triple jack or quad jack is a no.

04:37:193 (277193|1,277193|0,277193|3) - YOU CAN MAKE THIS 134, BUT YOU MADE IT 124 SO THAT 24 IS A JACK. WHY????? Fixed, and fixed the notes after too http://puu.sh/t6Egl/6c710e12fc.png so that it wouldn'T jack with 134 and fit the for the part after.

also, there are too many 13 24 patterns. it makes me cry. at least switch to 14 23 or 12 34. 13 24 just screams "lets make this map hard and uncomfortable" well shit since you are mapping to be uncomfortable then disregard this statement.

06:17:993 (377993|2,377993|0,378093|3,378093|1,378193|0,378193|2,378293|3,378293|1,378393|2,378393|0,378493|3,378493|1,378593|0,378593|2,378693|3,378693|1,378793|0,378793|2,378893|3,378893|1,378993|0,378993|2,379093|3,379093|1,379193|0,379193|2,379293|3,379293|1,379393|0,379393|2,379493|3,379493|1) - lol

OMG AND IT REPEATS.

the jacky portion with the bunch of double and triple jacks is painful to time. at least switch them around somehow (not the jacks, but the single notes that follow)
Fixed here 06:19:593 - .

10:47:193 (647193|2,647393|2,647593|2,647793|2,647993|2) - there are tons of patterns to be used, this isn't one of them. move 10:47:393 (647393|2) - to 1 yeah, but trying to match those sync with sticked notes xD

10:50:393 (650393|2,650593|2,650793|2,650993|2,651193|2) - same here. I know about PR, but this is just excessive ^

11:21:993 - THEY HAUNT ME AGAIN :D

12:08:393 - .....quadjacks. not even once. I KNOW ABOUT PR BUT THIS IDSIOHDFADGYAGSDYUH plz switch them into double jacks. JUST DOUBLE JACKS PLEASE. I actually looove them, and they are playable, but annoying and easy to miss, but yeah. same sound + adding a bit of challenge while I can.

12:17:993 - this is one huge no. NO. Switch the quad jacks around cause with the LN, you are gonna kill people with guns. Same reason as above.

12:21:193 - no again. Later part, made it more challenging.

to sum up. USE. FUCKING. DOUBLE JACKS.

AND IT REPEATS AGAIN NOOOOOOOOO same pattern, same things. Made some more challenging in the later part.

thank god, new song now.

ok, nothing too major in this one.

18:32:393 (1112393|3,1112393|0,1112493|1,1112593|2,1112693|3,1112793|0,1112793|2,1112893|1,1112993|2,1113093|3,1113193|0,1113193|2,1113293|1,1113393|2,1113493|3,1113593|0,1113593|2,1113693|1,1113793|2,1113893|3,1113993|0,1113993|2,1114093|1,1114193|2,1114293|3,1114393|2,1114393|0,1114493|1,1114593|2,1114693|3,1114793|0,1114793|2,1114893|1,1114993|2,1115093|3,1115193|0,1115193|2,1115293|1,1115393|2,1115493|3) - there are soooooooooo many patterns but you STICK WITH ONE AND REPEAT IT. Change it. Use creativity. Synth is the same as previous part, I can't use the same jumpstream. While here there another new sound that kinda go more and more up, which is why I it it this way, so it go left to right everytime for only 2 stanza.

19:29:993 (1169993|3,1169993|2,1170093|1,1170193|2,1170293|1,1170393|2,1170493|1,1170593|2,1170693|1,1170793|2,1170893|1,1170993|2,1171093|1,1171193|2,1171293|1,1171393|2,1171493|1,1171593|2,1171693|0,1171793|2,1171893|0,1171993|2,1172093|0,1172193|2,1172293|0,1172393|2,1172493|0,1172593|2,1172693|0,1172793|2,1172893|0,1172993|2,1173093|0,1173193|1) - Dude, there can be 321232123, not just 3232323232323 trills. yeah they can, that will make SR go up, but won't it be overchord? I mean my bass been 2 notes, and here, there no bass, and sound really should feel more relax because lower, no bass or other drum involve.

20:09:993 (1209993|1,1209993|3,1210093|0,1210093|2,1210193|3,1210193|1,1210293|2,1210293|0,1210393|3,1210393|1,1210493|2,1210493|0,1210593|1,1210593|3,1210693|0,1210693|2,1210793|1,1210793|3,1210893|0,1210893|2,1210993|1,1210993|3,1211093|0,1211093|2,1211193|3,1211193|1,1211293|0,1211293|2,1211393|3,1211393|1,1211493|0,1211493|2,1211593|3,1211593|1,1211693|2,1211693|0,1211793|3,1211793|1,1211893|2,1211893|0,1211993|1,1212093|0,1212093|2,1212193|1,1212293|0,1212293|2,1212393|1,1212493|0,1212493|2,1212593|1,1212693|2,1212693|0,1212793|1,1212893|2,1212893|0,1212993|1,1213093|2,1213093|0,1213193|0,1213193|1) - switch your pattern PLEASEEEE this is at the 20th minute and people's hands are gonna get tired. I can't do like previous pattern to match the synth, will be too repetitive, so for the end, I decided to match the drum owo, and train on trills, only for 2 stanza.

20:39:593 (1239593|0,1239593|1,1239643|2,1239643|3,1239693|0,1239693|1,1239743|2,1239743|3,1239793|0,1239793|1,1239843|2,1239843|3,1239893|0,1239893|1,1239943|3,1239943|2,1239993|1,1239993|0,1240043|2,1240043|3,1240093|0,1240093|1,1240143|2,1240143|3,1240193|1,1240193|0,1240243|2,1240243|3,1240293|0,1240293|1,1240343|2,1240343|3) - don't use doubles. singles will do. Drum, unlike this part 19:29:993 - that you mention.

21:23:593 - end your LN at 2 here and PLEASE DONT MAP TRILLS HERE This is rather, really freaking easy as hell. I should make it even more complicated. Sound still continue, I'm not going to end the LNs

AND IT REPEATS IDSJFASHUDHIFYN87TY87TN GNY7GNYNN

same things.

23:29:593 (1409593|2,1409593|0,1409693|0,1409693|2,1409793|0,1409793|2,1409893|2,1409893|0,1409993|2,1409993|0,1409993|1) - =w= quintuple jacks is a no. That part I still don't know, try to find something else to change, but it feel unfitting, and doesn't mean easier play. Try suggestion from others, but it get unconsistent, and harder to play since harder to read.

more quintuple jacks. stop. THIS NEEDS TO STOP.

why

Yes, you love jacks. But jacks at 23 minutes is NO.

23:53:993 (1433993|3,1434093|3,1434293|3,1434393|3,1434593|3,1434693|3,1434893|3,1434993|3,1435193|3,1435293|3,1435493|3,1435593|3) - NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO MIX THINGS AROUND PLZ Just double jacks, at least they aren't random.

that pattern applies for every time it shows up.

o god the build up. I'm gonna guess that the jacks show up again.

26:01:993 (1561993|1,1562793|3,1562793|0,1562793|2,1562893|2,1562893|0,1562993|0,1562993|2,1563093|0,1563093|2,1563193|0,1563193|2,1563243|1,1563293|0,1563343|2,1563393|1,1563443|0,1563493|2,1563543|1,1563593|0,1563593|2) - lol

i was right.

29:31:593 (1771593|0,1771693|0,1771893|0,1772093|0,1772293|0,1772393|0,1772493|0,1772693|0,1772893|0,1773093|0,1773193|0) - you are killing column 1. switch jacks around, don't stick to the same columnHmm, omg I think you just gave me an idea, maybe should change collumn each time there is a cymbal? HOLY CRAP, YOU GAVE ME A FREAKING GOOD IDEA, I LOVE IT SO MUCH MORE THEN WHAT I DID BEFORE, wow thanks!
http://puu.sh/t6EHD/07abc863a1.png. There is another part like that, I'll do it this way. The problem is, it might be harder because people can't just spam jumptrills.

30:49:593 (1849593|3,1849693|3,1849793|3,1849893|3,1849993|3) - oh look, the return of the quintuple jacks! Fun~

fuck it repeats again.

34:07:040 (2047040|0,2047137|0,2047331|0,2047427|0,2047524|0,2047718|0,2047911|0,2048105|0,2048298|0,2048492|0,2048589|0,2048685|0,2048879|0,2048976|0,2049072|0,2049266|0,2049460|0,2049653|0,2049847|0,2050040|0,2050137|0,2050234|0,2050427|0,2050524|0,2050621|0,2050814|0,2051008|0,2051201|0,2051395|0,2051589|0,2051685|0,2051782|0,2051976|0,2052072|0,2052169|0,2052363|0,2052556|0,2052750|0,2052943|0,2053137|0,2053234|0,2053331|0,2053524|0,2053621|0,2053718|0) - WTF IS THIS?? switch it!!! I'm thinking of changing with the idea you gave me above, which would fiiit soo much better, the problem is...is gonna be harder to play even if is easier to read, hmm. :thinking:

35:06:653 (2106653|0,2106653|1,2106701|2,2106750|0,2106798|2,2106847|0,2106895|2,2106943|0,2106992|2,2107040|0,2107089|2,2107137|0,2107185|2,2107234|0,2107282|2,2107331|0,2107379|2) - these should be 123412341234 instead of 13131313 trills I do feel trills fit better then stairs for this one.

I think I will stop here.

If you don't find this helpful at all because my mod is focused on comfort-ability, don't give it kudosu. I'm serious..
It was helpfull, you deserve that kudo x3.

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Dem 60mins gameplay XD

Well take my star and good luck

Ascension_H wrote:

Wow for ranked map?? When i free mod this map XD

zZ_Natsu_Zz wrote:

Hi '-'

bleh

23:37 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 00:24:593 - add note
23:37 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 00:37:993 - ^
23:38 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 00:51:593 - why double?
23:38 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 02:17:393 - add note
23:45 zZ_Natsu_Zz: I'm not finding many mistakes ;--;
23:47 zZ_Natsu_Zz: Mistakes of note at least, I realized that you use hands in the parts with "cymbal" is some things that have "cymbal" has no hands..
23:47 zZ_Natsu_Zz: hand > 3 notes
23:50 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 04:35:393 - I think it would look good 3 notes
23:50 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 4:35:593 - ^
23:50 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 04:35:593 - ^
23:58 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 04:44:793 - you could put minijacks here
23:59 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 04:51:193 - ^
00:02 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 06:17:793 - you colud put 3 notes here
00:02 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 06:17:993 - ^
00:03 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 06:27:193 - you could put minijacks here
00:03 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 06:33:593 - ^
00:05 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 07:08:993 - add note
00:05 Julie: by the way, I dont liek random minijack, so I hope you have a reason for those minijack xD
00:05 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 07:09:093 - remove this
00:07 zZ_Natsu_Zz: My English is very bad, I can not think how to respond to this.
00:09 zZ_Natsu_Zz: And also the map is full of jack and minijack '-'
00:12 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 10:12:993 - That's evil '-'
00:15 zZ_Natsu_Zz: 12:01:593 - add note

AnatOWJIya wrote:

Col 1|2|3|4

Useless mod by Useless modder/mapper

00:37:993 - Missed double? Fix
01:03:593 - Maybe i don't know theory of sound but why not to add 1 more note? Too draining, too hard for a part that shouldn't be too killfull, tested on another part that was harder due to the cymbal, made a trills with some 3 notes chord...is deadly x.x
01:09:993 - sound pretty similar as 01:13:993 - and i think there's also need doubles Oh is because of a long sort of a calm cymbal joining in, so I added another one to differenciate 2 section.
01:32:593 - Missed note? End of the synth here, the next note is a really clear synth sound, so would like player to focus on the main sound more easily
01:37:393 - ^ ^
01:57:393 - ^ No loud drum.
02:13:993 - Missed doulbe? Good point and good spot, but to not jack with these 02:13:893 (133893|1,134093|0) - , also i'm kinda considering a 2 hitnotes with these 02:13:993 (133993|3,133993|2) - , adding another one would be a 3 hit notes which I use for cymbal
02:18:993 - ^ Was gonna, but the part before all have one notes. But added some few jacks near that part owo.
02:22:593 - Why not 1/8? Ohh, tbh I haven't spotted that sound, nice, but I probably would keep the 1/8 for harder and clearer part like here 02:20:793 (140793|3,140843|2,140893|1,140943|0,140993|3,141043|2,141093|1,141143|0) - .
02:24:193 - ^ ^ But seriously, nice spot
03:48:393 - Should there be double? Done + added a finisher~
04:18:393 - 04:19:693 - 04:19:893 - 04:21:593 - 04:22:193 - 04:22:293 - 04:22:893 - 04:23:093 - Missed notes? I can't start doing stream on the whole map, this part I strickly only follow bass + the synth sound.
04:49:793 - Missed double? Synth isn'T as loud as 04:49:993 (289993|2,289993|0,290193|2,290193|0) -
04:50:993 - ^ I'm only adding double notes in the middle of a 1/4 stream if is a bass for this part xD.
04:52:993 - ^ Same reason as 04:49:793 -
04:57:793 - ^ Same reason as 04:49:793 -
04:59:293 - Missed note? Ohh nice spot! Fix!
05:06:893 - Missed double? Ohh actually NICE SPOT, actually all of the note on that part should be 1 notes chord! All fix!
05:15:693 - Missed note? Nah, is just the end of this sound 05:15:593 - , just like here 05:16:093 -
05:18:893 - ^ ^
05:37:793 - Missed double? Oh wow! Nice spot! fix!
05:39:893 - Missed note? Not really matching that new sound
05:44:593 - ^ Not matching those hithat
06:02:093 - 06:02:293 - 06:05:293 - 06:05:493 - Missed notes? Not really matching those end of sound, rather map the main main synth here.
06:18:793 - Triple? I consider it in the past, but it get really too hard, and flow break.
06:28:893 - missed note? Added, also fix some stuff I spot on some part, thanks owo
06:41:693 - ^ Added
06:49:793 - 06:49:893 - ^ Yes there is sound, but to be honest, these are so low, I feel like player won't really notice those sound, so rather leave it a small break.
07:27:193 - it's more like 1/6 or 1/8 Hmm? All the sound, not only the one I'm matching are all 1/4 snap here.
07:44:393 - Double? Want player to focus on those jack + no drum involve, so keeping them all 1 note.
07:47:593 - ^ ^
07:58:193 (478193|1) - Didn't get why there's double in moments like those No idea myself, hahaha, and I just realize those trills doesn't even fit the song, fixed!
10:32:793 - Could be LN Ohh, cool spot, did that
10:49:393 - pay some attention on the 4th column Mostly was focusing on the pitch xD
10:55:593 - ^ ^
13:07:493 (787493|1) - I hear no sound for note Ohh, nice spot! Here too 13:01:093 (781093|2) - !
13:53:993 - Double? Good spot! The problem here is, those 1/8 stream with an LN is already causing a spike, I don't think I'll want to make it end even harder with a really small 1/8 trill http://puu.sh/tgayE/2ae4b97869.png.
14:31:993 - ^ Another really nice spot, you really did a good jobs modding this xD. The thing is here, there no main sound, unlike the other double previously, is like main sound + drum.
14:35:193 - pay some attention on the 3rd column I think on your version the jack weren't alternated, fixed on the newest version
15:15:793 - pay some attention on the 4th column You probably mean this part 15:18:793 - , but yeah, is due to the pitch, matching the same sound same column xD
15:18:993 - ^ ^ Oh woops, reason above.
15:31:193 - Double? Was supose to be because no main sound, but this one 15:31:593 - is double too, so added owo
15:34:393 - ^ Added
15:37:593 - ^ Added
15:40:793 - ^ Added
15:41:593 - ^ That LN should count as a hit note, or else if I add another one, it would be 3, which would be like those cymbal.
16:54:793 - pay some attention on the 4th column For the pitch
17:59:593 - Missed double? Oh yeah it should be a bit different then the part before, added
18:13:493 - Missed note? Good spot but I find them not really intuitive to play when it come to following the main synth
18:42:793 - Double? Keeping all these 1 note, only 2 notes on new part like the beginning and the cymbal
18:45:193 - ^ ^
18:48:393 - ^ ^
18:51:593 - ^ ^
18:57:993 - ^ ^
19:01:193 - ^ ^
19:48:893 - Like this 19:07:193 - ? Ohh that's a nice spot, the problem is the 3 notes after that, it will either cause a small jack, or I have to remove one of the note after. And also this part is already full of stream/trills, so want to keep that part a bit empty since the stream sound I use to map doesn't appear here
20:13:293 - Missed note? Oh yeah! I am! Fixed!
20:46:393 - ^ You're not wrong, but don'T want it that much impact with 2 notes. Don't want it to feel something like this maybe 21:04:793 (1264793|1,1264793|0,1265193|2,1265193|3) - .
21:26:793 - Is it 1/4? Ohh even this 21:27:593 (1287593|1) - not good! should be here 21:27:693 -!! Nice spot! removed that notes, snapped that LN 21:27:126 (1287126|0) - on the 1/6
21:39:993 - Double? Wow nice! I totally miss that! Fix!
21:52:393 - Is it 1/4? Oh wow nice spot, I gotta mark this down~

Sorry if mod rly useless,tried my best,feel free to reject.Good luck with map