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Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Weriko
hereas mod

Gus
18:47 Weriko: heyyy
18:47 *Weriko is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1103619 xi - Over The Top]
18:47 Weriko: its hereeeee
18:47 Gus: Hey man!
18:47 Gus: Sweet!
18:47 Gus: I'll check it out right now
18:47 Weriko: okay
18:48 Weriko: if you testplay
18:48 Weriko: remember its extreme xD
18:48 Gus: do you want me to look at four dimension
18:48 Gus: or over dimension
18:48 Gus: No I can't testplay right now I dont have my tablet unfortunately
18:48 Gus: holy this is insane
18:48 Gus: LOL
18:48 Weriko: awe rip
18:48 Weriko: LOL
18:48 Gus: over dimension DUDE
18:48 Gus: IS THIS JUST A CONTINUOUS STREAM
18:48 Weriko: kinda
18:48 Gus: THIS IS CRAAZY
18:49 Weriko: yeeeep
18:49 Gus: oh my god LOL
18:49 Gus: your streaams look really smooth
18:49 Gus: and seem to flow well
18:49 Gus: lots of angle changes though
18:49 Weriko: yeah
18:49 Weriko: i tried to make those following song
18:50 Gus: in four dimensions the slider art could use work
18:50 Gus: its a little boxy
18:50 Weriko: yeah
18:50 Weriko: i dont know how to slider art xd
18:50 Gus: this song is like the perfect stream map holy
18:50 Weriko: yeep
18:51 Gus: 01:41:698 (1,2,3,4) - to me this sounds like it should be a stream
18:51 Gus: you mapped similar sounds to streams before
18:51 Gus: in the map
18:52 Weriko: aaa?
18:52 Weriko: ah in four dimensions
18:52 Weriko: yeah ill change it
18:52 Gus: 02:01:599 (13) - this should probably be larger just so it isnt hard to read and emphaasizes the sound well, like turn the SV up here
18:52 Gus: Yes in 4 dimensions
18:53 Gus: your streams are very large lol
18:53 Weriko: yeah
18:54 Gus: 02:49:419 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't think this needs to be spaced as much as it is.. kind of weird to play after a break when its so spaced
18:54 Gus: 03:01:301 (17) - sounds like it should be 2 notes instead of aa slider
18:54 Gus: 03:02:786 (3) - lower SV I'd say, make it really slow
18:55 Weriko: well that was to make transition between stream and jumps but ok
18:55 Weriko: why?
18:55 Gus: 03:31:004 (1,2,3) - sounds like it should be streamy
18:55 Weriko: that part is so intense
18:55 Gus: Where?
18:55 Gus: at 3:02?
18:55 Weriko: yeah
18:56 Weriko: btw
18:56 Gus: The sound is super high pitched and I think a smaller SV and slower slider would help emphasize it better and give more "BOOM" when the strong sounds come out
18:56 Weriko: that was going to be JUMPS
18:56 Gus: it would work either way probably
18:56 Weriko: hhmm maybe
18:56 Weriko: lol no
18:56 Gus: 03:36:647 (13) - mentioned this before
18:56 Weriko: 1/3 jumps are too extreme
18:56 Gus: Its so hard to map piano
18:56 Gus: lol
18:57 Gus: 1/3 jumps are tough.. yes..
18:57 Gus: I like your streams
18:57 Gus: they're very clean
18:57 Weriko: aa ty
18:57 Gus: 04:10:508 (1) - I think this ending could be mapped well
18:58 Gus: instead of like
18:58 Gus: a spinner
18:58 Gus: but this is very subjective
18:59 Weriko: aaa ok ill map it
18:59 Gus: you can do something cool with the hitsounding there too
18:59 Gus: did you plan on hitsounding this?
19:00 Gus: this seems like one of the tougher xi songs
19:00 Gus: like halcyon
19:00 Gus: sounds going all over the place lol
19:03 Weriko: yeah
19:05 Weriko: aa okay
19:05 Weriko: ill go brb
19:05 Weriko: go brb lol
19:05 Gus: Okay
19:05 Weriko: ill go afk for a moment
19:05 Weriko: gonna eat hamburguer
19:05 Weriko: brb
19:06 Gus: Ight
19:43 Weriko: ok back
19:43 Gus: welcome back!
19:44 Weriko: tyty
19:48 Weriko: btw
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
not-so-quality IRC mod
2016-10-12 21:51 Cerulean Veyron: 00:29:221 (9) - k uhmm add nc?
2016-10-12 21:51 Cerulean Veyron: cuz downbeat idk
2016-10-12 21:51 Weriko: wooo
2016-10-12 21:52 Cerulean Veyron: like.. a big boom
2016-10-12 21:52 Weriko: k
2016-10-12 21:53 Cerulean Veyron: 00:43:480 (1,2,1,2) - 
2016-10-12 21:53 Cerulean Veyron: maybe change placements?
2016-10-12 21:53 Cerulean Veyron: because it looks a bit dull tbh
2016-10-12 21:53 Cerulean Veyron: and too linear ;c
2016-10-12 21:54 Weriko: ok i will
2016-10-12 21:55 Cerulean Veyron: 01:13:702 (8,13) - not properly stacked
2016-10-12 21:55 Cerulean Veyron: or is it intentional?
2016-10-12 21:55 Cerulean Veyron: xd
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: wooops
2016-10-12 21:55 Cerulean Veyron: 01:13:257 (2,16) - maybe here too
2016-10-12 21:55 Cerulean Veyron: idk
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: nah thats intentional
2016-10-12 21:56 Cerulean Veyron: lmao k
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: but i might change it
2016-10-12 21:56 Cerulean Veyron: okay, from here 01:14:221 (15,16,1) - 
2016-10-12 21:56 Cerulean Veyron: spacing is gud, but visually...
2016-10-12 21:56 Cerulean Veyron: it's a little confusing because of the sv change
2016-10-12 21:57 Weriko: aaa
2016-10-12 21:58 Weriko: you mean slider?
2016-10-12 21:58 Cerulean Veyron: yeah
2016-10-12 21:58 Weriko: aaa ok changed i
2016-10-12 21:58 Weriko: it
2016-10-12 21:58 Cerulean Veyron: 01:25:658 (8) - y so sudden m8 xd
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: aaaa idk xd
2016-10-12 21:59 Cerulean Veyron: that slider came out of nowhere imo
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 21:59 Cerulean Veyron: after all those deathstreaming
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: tried to emphasize
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: but im nub
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: ill just put sliders
2016-10-12 22:00 Cerulean Veyron: o ya
2016-10-12 22:00 Cerulean Veyron: do sth like http://puu.sh/rGEOI/832fc78934.jpg
2016-10-12 22:00 Weriko: ya
2016-10-12 22:00 Cerulean Veyron: emphasizes better than reverse arrow~
2016-10-12 22:01 Cerulean Veyron: but ehh, don't do some jumpy stuff here xdd
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: or wait
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: fk xD
2016-10-12 22:01 Cerulean Veyron: might not fit tbh
2016-10-12 22:01 Cerulean Veyron: lol
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: did
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: this
2016-10-12 22:02 Weriko: https://puu.sh/rGEVx/c2d6e2579f.png
2016-10-12 22:02 Cerulean Veyron: oh, you wanted to continue the streaming.. okay
2016-10-12 22:02 Cerulean Veyron: that would be acceptable ;p
2016-10-12 22:02 Weriko: :p
2016-10-12 22:03 Weriko: well
2016-10-12 22:03 Cerulean Veyron: dem those spaced streams xdd i hate them
2016-10-12 22:03 Weriko: since its epic deathstreams, why not xd
2016-10-12 22:03 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 22:03 Weriko: yyyyy
2016-10-12 22:03 Cerulean Veyron: cuz i sux
2016-10-12 22:03 Cerulean Veyron: 01:47:638 (1,2,1,2) - omv change sth here
2016-10-12 22:04 Cerulean Veyron: you kept using the same patterning
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: jjssjs
2016-10-12 22:04 Cerulean Veyron: makes it a little boring
2016-10-12 22:04 Cerulean Veyron: ;c
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: aaaa okay
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: i will do something like in
2016-10-12 22:04 Cerulean Veyron: maybe... at least curve the sliders?
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: 03:06:054 (1,2,1,2) -
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: here
2016-10-12 22:04 Weriko: i hope no one says CONSISZTENZY PLZ
2016-10-12 22:04 Cerulean Veyron: oh, that looks okay......... to me xd
2016-10-12 22:05 Weriko: kay xxdxdxdx
2016-10-12 22:05 Cerulean Veyron: 02:06:054 (8,9) - WHOA WHOA
2016-10-12 22:06 Cerulean Veyron: 6x spacing
2016-10-12 22:06 Cerulean Veyron: are you doing this for 9*?!!?!?
2016-10-12 22:06 Cerulean Veyron: no way D;
2016-10-12 22:06 Cerulean Veyron: u nearly broke consistency over 02:05:757 (5,6) - 
2016-10-12 22:06 Weriko: aaayyy lmao
2016-10-12 22:06 Cerulean Veyron: that's... wayyy too evil ;n;
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: >:D
2016-10-12 22:07 Cerulean Veyron: awww yeee 02:09:765 (11,2) -  same for the stacking xdd
2016-10-12 22:07 Cerulean Veyron: idk but yeah
2016-10-12 22:07 Cerulean Veyron: rlly idk
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: aaa rip
2016-10-12 22:07 Cerulean Veyron: nvm xdd
2016-10-12 22:08 Weriko: xddxdd
2016-10-12 22:08 Cerulean Veyron: 02:13:034 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - hoyl
2016-10-12 22:08 Cerulean Veyron: those unreadable overlaps
2016-10-12 22:08 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 22:08 Cerulean Veyron: mmm maybe those stacks too idk lol
2016-10-12 22:08 Weriko: in testplays it didnt look that wtf
2016-10-12 22:09 Weriko: might change it
2016-10-12 22:09 Cerulean Veyron: alrighty
2016-10-12 22:09 Cerulean Veyron: yyy
2016-10-12 22:09 Weriko: a.a.aa.a.aa.a.a
2016-10-12 22:09 Weriko: found another stack police
2016-10-12 22:09 Weriko: 02:13:702 (16) -
2016-10-12 22:09 Cerulean Veyron: oh ya, that xd
2016-10-12 22:09 Weriko: 02:31:227 (12) - and another xdxd
2016-10-12 22:10 Cerulean Veyron: ahahahahahahahahhahahhaha sksjs
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: 02:33:232 (3,2) - and i didnt meant this
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: but it looks decent imo xdxd
2016-10-12 22:10 Cerulean Veyron: ikr
2016-10-12 22:10 Cerulean Veyron: that looks fine k
2016-10-12 22:10 Cerulean Veyron: .....imo
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: k
2016-10-12 22:11 Cerulean Veyron: 02:20:830 (8,1) - hmm increase spacing here?
2016-10-12 22:11 Cerulean Veyron: because the downbeat sounds very intense
2016-10-12 22:11 Cerulean Veyron: rather than only increase stream's spacings ;p
2016-10-12 22:11 Weriko: aaa
2016-10-12 22:12 Cerulean Veyron: just like every part u did k
2016-10-12 22:12 Cerulean Veyron: so there's the consistency ;D
2016-10-12 22:12 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 22:12 Weriko: yeah i never change distancing on white tick
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: it feels weird imo
2016-10-12 22:13 Cerulean Veyron: ofc
2016-10-12 22:14 Cerulean Veyron: 02:54:173 (8) - nc here or sth?
2016-10-12 22:14 Weriko: ya ok
2016-10-12 22:15 Cerulean Veyron: 02:56:549 (1,2,3,4) - T R I G G E R E D
2016-10-12 22:15 Weriko: ASDADSASD
2016-10-12 22:15 Cerulean Veyron: this is more like 2b hoyl sht xdd
2016-10-12 22:15 Weriko: aweeeeeeee
2016-10-12 22:15 Cerulean Veyron: but it's actually slider tail stacks nvm
2016-10-12 22:15 Cerulean Veyron: just stack them nicely, or sth...
2016-10-12 22:16 Cerulean Veyron: better manual stacking tbh
2016-10-12 22:16 Cerulean Veyron: for readability ofc
2016-10-12 22:17 Weriko: aaa kk
2016-10-12 22:17 Cerulean Veyron: annnnndd 03:02:638 (2) - why skipped the best beat?!?!? D:
2016-10-12 22:17 Cerulean Veyron: on 03:02:786 -, it sounds REALLY op
2016-10-12 22:17 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 22:17 Weriko: dont know how to do it
2016-10-12 22:18 Cerulean Veyron: shorten the slider, and move it there on timeline
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: lulz
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: ill do a 1/6 kickslider or sumthing
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: and remove the slider
2016-10-12 22:18 Cerulean Veyron: hmm, how would it look like tho? ;o
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: k just did
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: dont like it at all
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: https://puu.sh/rGFZR/c4e472b860.jpg
2016-10-12 22:19 Cerulean Veyron: ehh it doesn't sound much like 1/6
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: made it 1/8
2016-10-12 22:20 Cerulean Veyron: not even the bassline on the track is snapped to 1/6
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: i dont want ppl to shitsliderbreak
2016-10-12 22:20 Cerulean Veyron: or 1/8
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: aaaa
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: ok
2016-10-12 22:20 Cerulean Veyron: just 1/4 all the way~
2016-10-12 22:20 Cerulean Veyron: OVER DIMENSION!!!
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: but that pitch
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: is so
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: AAAA
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: i like how it sounds on 1/8
2016-10-12 22:21 Weriko: when i update taek a looksz
2016-10-12 22:21 Cerulean Veyron: hmm alright then ;p
2016-10-12 22:21 Weriko: b:
2016-10-12 22:21 Cerulean Veyron: 03:06:846 (2,3) - wth is this overlap!??!?!
2016-10-12 22:22 Cerulean Veyron: awkward af
2016-10-12 22:22 Weriko: aaaaaaa
2016-10-12 22:22 Weriko: itz in teh middleh
2016-10-12 22:22 Weriko: nvm lol
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: okay ctrl h wins
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: i mean ctrl j xdxdjsjsjssj
2016-10-12 22:26 Cerulean Veyron: ok i think this is enough xdd
2016-10-12 22:26 Cerulean Veyron: i died
2016-10-12 22:26 Weriko: rips
2016-10-12 22:28 Cerulean Veyron: this is okay for now so

didn't know how i really managed to mod 8* ._.

Anywaysss, GL!
myAccSuks
30 posts
Joined July 2016
myAccSuks
What is modding??? I have no fricken idea... so... chickens and stuff.

Comments for FOUR DIMENSIONS
Well... I have never played a 6* song before... sooo not sure what works and what doesn't, and what's modding... i only give out crappy opinons

DAMN SON! that slider art though. Not saying I can do any better, but they look "wonky" to me.
00:16:449 - example. The turn right there is... well, quite sharp... more rounded turns are key

00:29:221 - I think having the same curvature would be nice. Some, when looked at carefully, are flatter than others.

00:32:489 (2,1) - Starting at that point, make the 2 sliders straight? I know this sounds weird, pointelss, and minimal, but when i see that, the 2 slider is curved down, so it would feel natural for there to be a note on the bottom. Even though the curve isn't big enough for me to actually screw up, but it's just a feeling I get when i play it. ex: https://puu.sh/rGEt5/4448250cfc.PNG

00:51:202 - The repeating slider is too close to the previous circle. Maybe that's why it looked odd to me. turn of the grid snap and resnap please.

00:54:766 - The only slider that has 3 anchors.

01:36:202 - smooth out this part of the slider. it's too "jittery" and sharp for such a melodious song.

02:31:523 (9,1,2,3) - Even though you change steram direction based on music, this one corner, i don't know why, but it just triggers me. I just feel like it could be more rounded.

02:33:083 (5,6,7,8) - quite the sharp turn. especially since nothing is changing in the music at that time. I personally would have liked something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6307763

More Crappy Comments for OVER DIMENSION
8* maps... i have no idea what they look like... or typical 8* patterns...

00:03:083 - Woo more slider art! Anyways, if you're gonna have sliders so close in a row, I think it will look better if the tails and heads are overlapping, vs the little distance you have.

00:03:083 (1,1) - Like this. I approve of this.

01:04:495 (12,13,14,15,16,1,2) - err... what's going on here? stack em? spread them out? Personally, at it's current state, it looks really clustered and messy to me.

01:17:044 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, clean it up a bit? specifcally this part:
01:17:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I can see where you're going, but in the end, it just looks strange to me.
Obviously... telling you "clean it up" is easy... but I suck with making good looking streams... so (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6308712) if there's nothing else that can fit into the section (since changing places looks like it will result in repositioning a crap ton of notes) well.... :/

01:19:494 (5,6,7) - personally, I find 7 to be too close to 5 for my comfort. Move it down a bit?

02:03:455 (6) - I suggest moving this one down a bit (turn off gridsnap). I'm saying this because to me, it looks like a small corner, but in the music, there's not real change, so no need for this "corner" or angle. Literally, if you do decide to move it down, just copy 6 - 14, and move it down. The ds spacing from 14-15 should not change that much what-so-ever. so no need to reposition anything after change ex: https://puu.sh/rGRji/e29c3ecd69.png

02:09:839 (12,13,14) - again, should not be at that angle imo, since there's not "change" in the piano like there is at 02:09:691 (10,11) -

02:48:529 (2) - I think you should move this down. it'll be more aesthetically pleasing...

03:00:039 (12,1) - I don't thing that corner belongs there. but opinions are opinons (like the while list so far :/)

03:44:370 - funny saying this, but if you wanted to, you could add a little corner here. since the piano jumps an octave or something like that

Anyways... I think it's time for the moment of truth. Four Dimensions is looking pretty good, just a few spots to clean up (according to my opinons generated deep inside my imaginary brain) and for Over Dimensions......... well, for the most part, I was lagging like crazy, so half of the time, i had no idea what was going on. rip. but yeah, clean some things up here and there, and good luck! Cause here we come reddit! first 1000+pp play by Cookiezi...........
hi-mei
784 posts
Joined June 2014
hi-mei
four dimensions:
00:03:083 - to 00:04:271 - should be mapped
theres no way you leave that space empty
00:06:647 - to 00:07:835 - same here
00:17:340 - why sliderend here? it is the same sound as here 00:17:934 -
00:19:716 - 00:28:924 - why is this unmapped?
00:33:974 (3) - nc
00:34:568 (11) - ^
and so on, i dont want to focus on it
just fix them urself, basically how it works: nc emphasizes any structure/flow/rhythm/melody/interval change.
for streams i would stick to putting an nc on every 9th note.
00:45:558 - unmapped beat
00:43:182 - ^
00:43:330 - ^
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont understand this strucutre, it basically doesnt fit to the melody, and i dont really understand which of the soundstracks you were choosing by making that stream
01:00:113 (1) - same here, the piano is moving by waves, meanwhile your stream is stuckked to the dull trumpet
01:02:490 (1) - ^
01:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you divided them by 4?
listen carefuly:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6309059 basically try to do this and listen what happens
i know theres a tiny sound at 01:14:741 - 01:15:038 - 01:15:335 - etc
but idk, i'd change the way of making that stream
it looks decent tho.
01:18:232 (2) - what the hell? 01:18:306 - you are missing the blue tick for some reason.
01:18:529 (3) - dude remap it
01:18:900 - and 01:19:048 - cmon
02:09:024 (1,2,3) - ds seems random
02:18:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shud not be like that, remap.
it simply doesnt fit to the melody.
02:23:282 (1,2) - this shud be remapped as well, just fking listen to the melody, its way different than the rest of the song
02:24:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here you can use your "stairs" pattern
02:35:310 - here you can use 02:01:599 (13) - this
03:02:489 - unmapped, id suggest to use a kickslider
03:02:786 (3,1) - remap
the sound interval starts at 03:03:083 - this sliderend (like wtf, u shud never do something like this)
and
03:03:182 (1) - this can be sliderkick stream or some shit
03:04:865 (1,2,3,4) - is it necessary to use overlaps there? that spacing felt weird
03:09:617 (1,2,3) - spacing dude, same melody, same patterns, wtf.
03:11:994 (1,2,3) - same shit
03:14:370 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:16:746 (1,2,3,4) - same shit
03:19:122 (1,2,1) - same shit
03:31:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels really awkward
03:39:320 (1,2,3,4) - why sliders there? they basically doesnt fit there.
03:53:578 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:58:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you changed your patterns here all of the sudden? same melody as before.
but yea, still.
remap it.

04:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - whyyyyyyyyy
04:09:766 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shud increase the spacing here by following the melody.

Over dimensions:
remap.
00:35:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shudnt be like this, listen to the melody
00:41:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what the point of this object placement?
00:51:647 (7,8,1,2) - i dont like this transition, it fucks reading.
00:54:618 (4,5,6) - ^
i would suggest: http://puu.sh/rGVlZ/22b62eaf2c.jpg
01:04:643 (14,15,16,1,2) - just remap it, its really fked up.
01:18:306 - 01:19:048 - this sound different, please remap to the actual melody.
01:21:648 (3,5) - you should emphasize it somehow.
01:42:885 (14) - nc? its super obvious
01:55:658 (7,1,3,5,7) - structure? wtf
02:06:350 (11,12) - this jumps is way too wide
02:53:282 (1) - this shud be at 39/230
02:55:064 (7) - 20/224
02:55:361 (1) - 26/0
02:57:737 (1,3,5) - ctrl+g it
02:58:628 (7,8,9,10,11) - this spacing is out of place, lower it.
03:09:024 (1,2) - swap them?
04:02:935 (15,1) - dude spacing, move the (15) sliderend to the right lmao

also i didnt mention NC shit, just find it urself.
dont overpass 8 number in ur combos.

ok thats it.
the map is cool, but you shud remap a big part of it to make it consistent and logical in regards to melody.

its m4m so you shud mod my map, you know which one.
Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Weriko
Epic mod answer (if anyone else wants a mod answer, please tell me D:, i really really read mods and apply what i think should be applied, but im a bit lazy sorry)





four dimensions:
00:03:083 - to 00:04:271 - should be mapped - i dont quite understand, that sound is so....... whatever, might map
theres no way you leave that space empty
00:06:647 - to 00:07:835 - same here - same
00:17:340 - why sliderend here? it is the same sound as here 00:17:934 -
00:19:716 - 00:28:924 - why is this unmapped?
00:33:974 (3) - nc
00:34:568 (11) - ^
and so on, i dont want to focus on it
just fix them urself, basically how it works: nc emphasizes any structure/flow/rhythm/melody/interval change.
for streams i would stick to putting an nc on every 9th note.
ill consider doing all this
00:45:558 - unmapped beat ok
00:43:182 - ^ hmm maybe?
00:43:330 - ^
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont understand this strucutre, it basically doesnt fit to the melody, and i dont really understand which of the soundstracks you were choosing by making that stream I wasnt totally following piano here, i was following the other... intense sound, piano is followed by kicksliders after
01:00:113 (1) - same here, the piano is moving by waves, meanwhile your stream is stuckked to the dull trumpet
01:02:490 (1) - ^
01:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you divided them by 4?
listen carefuly:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6309059 basically try to do this and listen what happens
i know theres a tiny sound at 01:14:741 - 01:15:038 - 01:15:335 - etc
but idk, i'd change the way of making that stream
it looks decent tho. aaa,..... i like it as it is now, triplets dont seem to totally fit, and it think it plays better knowing the context of the map
01:18:232 (2) - what the hell? 01:18:306 - you are missing the blue tick for some reason. a.... i tried to followthe other piano rhythm... might change
01:18:529 (3) - dude remap it
01:18:900 - and 01:19:048 - cmon
02:09:024 (1,2,3) - ds seems random - hmmm... i tried to emphasize you know.... but this has been pointed out before... might change
02:18:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shud not be like that, remap.
it simply doesnt fit to the melody.
02:23:282 (1,2) - this shud be remapped as well, just fking listen to the melody, its way different than the rest of the song - i thnk i did something better
02:24:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here you can use your "stairs" pattern - well.... its more intense now, i did it in the other diff i think but..... might do
02:35:310 - here you can use 02:01:599 (13) - this - ok
03:02:489 - unmapped, id suggest to use a kickslider - hmm cant hear it
03:02:786 (3,1) - remap - aaaaa why????
the sound interval starts at 03:03:083 - this sliderend (like wtf, u shud never do something like this)
and - but whyyy... it didnt seem bad on testplays
03:03:182 (1) - this can be sliderkick stream or some shit - ill leave as it is for now
03:04:865 (1,2,3,4) - is it necessary to use overlaps there? that spacing felt weird - not necessary, but also not necessary to change for now
03:09:617 (1,2,3) - spacing dude, same melody, same patterns, wtf. - hmm......its the same spacing....
03:11:994 (1,2,3) - same shit - same shit
03:14:370 (1,2,3,4) - same shit - same shit
03:16:746 (1,2,3,4) - same shit - same shit
03:19:122 (1,2,1) - same shit - aaaa
03:31:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels really awkward
03:39:320 (1,2,3,4) - why sliders there? they basically doesnt fit there. - why not?
03:53:578 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:58:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you changed your patterns here all of the sudden? same melody as before.
but yea, still.
remap it. - nop

04:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - whyyyyyyyyy
04:09:766 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shud increase the spacing here by following the melody.

Over dimensions:
remap.
00:35:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shudnt be like this, listen to the melody - emm wtf???
00:41:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what the point of this object placement? - ....... what is the point of pointing it out?
00:51:647 (7,8,1,2) - i dont like this transition, it fucks reading. the fk
00:54:618 (4,5,6) - ^ - the fk
i would suggest: http://puu.sh/rGVlZ/22b62eaf2c.jpg - the fk
01:04:643 (14,15,16,1,2) - just remap it, its really fked up. - its not... testplays where ok on there...... and how is it fked up
01:18:306 - 01:19:048 - this sound different, please remap to the actual melody. - i did it on the actual melody
01:21:648 (3,5) - you should emphasize it somehow. aaaa emphasize what
01:42:885 (14) - nc? its super obvious - forgot to nc before
01:55:658 (7,1,3,5,7) - structure? wtf - emm.... they are getting closer.....
02:06:350 (11,12) - this jumps is way too wide - maybe
02:53:282 (1) - this shud be at 39/230 - ok
02:55:064 (7) - 20/224 - ok
02:55:361 (1) - 26/0 - ok
02:57:737 (1,3,5) - ctrl+g it - now its fked up
02:58:628 (7,8,9,10,11) - this spacing is out of place, lower it. - its really intense. but ok might change -
03:09:024 (1,2) - swap them?
04:02:935 (15,1) - dude spacing, move the (15) sliderend to the right lmao - aa

also i didnt mention NC shit, just find it urself.
dont overpass 8 number in ur combos.

wat......... but why wtf......... uta has fkin 32 combo and it makes sense aaaaaaaaaaaaa

ok thats it.
the map is cool, but you shud remap a big part of it to make it consistent and logical in regards to melody.

its m4m so you shud mod my map, you know which one.




aaaaaaaaaaaaaa


dont know how the hell to answer a mod but w/e
Est-
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Est-
I shot kds now gibe kds back xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd



.
that was obviously a joke
Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Weriko

Est- wrote:

I shot kds now gibe kds back xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd



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that was obviously a joke


/me gives kds,


KDS DENIED OH NO


/me runs
Est-
368 posts
Joined March 2016
Est-

Weriko wrote:

Est- wrote:

I shot kds now gibe kds back xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd



.
that was obviously a joke


/me gives kds,


KDS DENIED OH NO


/me runs

Gibe kds xddddddddddddddddd https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5539184#p5539184





lmao
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88 
2016-10-12 21:45 HappyRocket88: 00:05:459 (1) - questionable shape
2016-10-12 21:45 Weriko: ahhh ill change all that slider "art"
2016-10-12 21:47 HappyRocket88: 00:19:122 (1) - I know what you tried to do here but don't you think thta beat sounds less tronger than the previous pinao tiles? Like if we compared it with these  00:18:528 (1) - 00:17:934 (1) - 00:17:340 (1) - The emphasis become quite weaker with the circle in matter.
2016-10-12 21:49 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 21:50 HappyRocket88: In the other hand, I think it would be cool if you could introduce the stream in this circle 00:19:320 (2) - as a 1/6 slider
2016-10-12 21:50 Weriko: o okay
2016-10-12 21:52 HappyRocket88: In that way the upcoming stream wouldn't create a dense sudden rhythm if players are aware of the reverse of this beat 00:19:320 - 
2016-10-12 21:53 Weriko: yeah just changed it
2016-10-12 21:54 HappyRocket88: ummm
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ?
2016-10-12 21:55 HappyRocket88: the angle of curve that this pattern 00:36:721 (6,7,8,9,10) - creates is a bit too sudden
2016-10-12 21:55 HappyRocket88: what about if we tried up a pentagon transition instead? :o
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ooo
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ill try to curve it
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: zzz remapping streams
2016-10-12 21:56 HappyRocket88: or hexagonal. xD The only concern is that the current angle might be too difficult to catch since the more spaced the harder to tap xD
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: but nah ill change it
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: i dont like it either xd
2016-10-12 21:57 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 21:57 HappyRocket88: 00:45:856 (3) - NC maybe? :o
2016-10-12 21:58 HappyRocket88: Is this NC intentional 00:47:637 (1) - ?
2016-10-12 21:58 Weriko: sec
2016-10-12 21:58 HappyRocket88: It actually breaks the NC usage you've built up till now
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: yeah it was intentional
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: im not good with ncing tho xd
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: 00:46:450 (9) - i should nc this too
2016-10-12 22:00 HappyRocket88: Right!
2016-10-12 22:00 HappyRocket88: 00:54:915 (6) - This is somewhat awkward
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: I'd suggest to try ctrl +g here to soothe the transition here
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: I love this 00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: and the previous one which is similar. >w<
2016-10-12 22:02 Weriko: tyty
2016-10-12 22:06 HappyRocket88: This is just personal 01:14:073 (13,14,15,16) - But I think making the pattern to go straight creates a very low intuition of what players can expect after clicking the pentagon flow. Therefore, following the curve and the transition that pentagon suggests coult create a smoother movement for players. :3 Like [https://mingi.s-ul.eu/u5X4G3Xw this]
2016-10-12 22:06 Weriko: ooo
2016-10-12 22:06 Weriko: well
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: i tried to follow the song but yeah its a bit weird
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: its like songs makes me want to make that xd , at the begggining it was even weirder
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: ill see with testplays, but ill probly change it
2016-10-12 22:07 HappyRocket88: Cool! >w<
2016-10-12 22:08 Weriko: :p
2016-10-12 22:08 HappyRocket88: 01:14:965 (3) - What about adding some variation regarding the emphasis here? Holding the sliderball kills somewhat the momentum this beat 01:15:261 - offers
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: ooooops
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: i just realize that slider is weird xd
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: did something, not sure about it
2016-10-12 22:12 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 22:12 HappyRocket88: 02:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - I know this is the kiai and everything but...
2016-10-12 22:13 HappyRocket88: wouldn't a kick slider ctach nicer the effect of the piano here? :o
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: tag says
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: rsi so lets give everybody rsi aaaadadasd
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: might change xd
2016-10-12 22:14 Weriko: but it looks cooool but ok
2016-10-12 22:17 HappyRocket88: Hummmm
2016-10-12 22:17 HappyRocket88: You've potential! xD
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: sdsdsadsads rip xD
2016-10-12 22:18 HappyRocket88: I'm not really a modder of these kind of maps but I can assure this might be ranked if you get some more mods and look up for note-placement adviced. :o
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: Ooooo
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: okay
2016-10-12 22:19 HappyRocket88: The current ones aren't bad but they become repetitive. 
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: a.a yeah
2016-10-12 22:19 HappyRocket88: Hence, trying zig zag flows 
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: or square-style ones would give the difficulty a little bit of more epicness. :3
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: no sé si epicness sea una palabra ayñ. x.x
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: Pero en general, wow. >w<
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: ayyy
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: ¡Qué dedicación! :o
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: tal vez xD
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: :p
2016-10-12 22:22 HappyRocket88: Posting for kd (?
2016-10-12 22:22 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 22:23 HappyRocket88: 04:16:152 - green line here plz
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: yeah xD
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: jsss
2016-10-12 22:23 HappyRocket88: with a considereible low volume since the slider-ticks sound way unfitting
2016-10-12 22:24 Weriko: yeah
We had a conversation regarding the mapset and we changed some things regarding:
  1. Questionable flows and transitions of some streams.
  2. NC usage and some inconsistencies that were founded on the map.
  3. Volume sections and chow clear where the slider-path of some of sliders.
Personal Comment
¡Sí se puede! La calidad del mapa, si bien tiene una estrucutura y ritmos prederterminados muy sólidos, necesita más revisión en lo que respecta a los patrones de flujo que maneja. Así, se evitará caer en la monotonía y, a su vez, impactar en la forma como los streams encajan en la dificultad. >w<

(ノ･ω･)ノ
Weriko
182 posts
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Topic Starter
Weriko

HappyRocket88 wrote:

2016-10-12 21:45 HappyRocket88: 00:05:459 (1) - questionable shape
2016-10-12 21:45 Weriko: ahhh ill change all that slider "art"
2016-10-12 21:47 HappyRocket88: 00:19:122 (1) - I know what you tried to do here but don't you think thta beat sounds less tronger than the previous pinao tiles? Like if we compared it with these  00:18:528 (1) - 00:17:934 (1) - 00:17:340 (1) - The emphasis become quite weaker with the circle in matter.
2016-10-12 21:49 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 21:50 HappyRocket88: In the other hand, I think it would be cool if you could introduce the stream in this circle 00:19:320 (2) - as a 1/6 slider
2016-10-12 21:50 Weriko: o okay
2016-10-12 21:52 HappyRocket88: In that way the upcoming stream wouldn't create a dense sudden rhythm if players are aware of the reverse of this beat 00:19:320 - 
2016-10-12 21:53 Weriko: yeah just changed it
2016-10-12 21:54 HappyRocket88: ummm
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ?
2016-10-12 21:55 HappyRocket88: the angle of curve that this pattern 00:36:721 (6,7,8,9,10) - creates is a bit too sudden
2016-10-12 21:55 HappyRocket88: what about if we tried up a pentagon transition instead? :o
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ooo
2016-10-12 21:55 Weriko: ill try to curve it
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: zzz remapping streams
2016-10-12 21:56 HappyRocket88: or hexagonal. xD The only concern is that the current angle might be too difficult to catch since the more spaced the harder to tap xD
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: but nah ill change it
2016-10-12 21:56 Weriko: i dont like it either xd
2016-10-12 21:57 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 21:57 HappyRocket88: 00:45:856 (3) - NC maybe? :o
2016-10-12 21:58 HappyRocket88: Is this NC intentional 00:47:637 (1) - ?
2016-10-12 21:58 Weriko: sec
2016-10-12 21:58 HappyRocket88: It actually breaks the NC usage you've built up till now
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: yeah it was intentional
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: im not good with ncing tho xd
2016-10-12 21:59 Weriko: 00:46:450 (9) - i should nc this too
2016-10-12 22:00 HappyRocket88: Right!
2016-10-12 22:00 HappyRocket88: 00:54:915 (6) - This is somewhat awkward
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: I'd suggest to try ctrl +g here to soothe the transition here
2016-10-12 22:01 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: I love this 00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 
2016-10-12 22:01 HappyRocket88: and the previous one which is similar. >w<
2016-10-12 22:02 Weriko: tyty
2016-10-12 22:06 HappyRocket88: This is just personal 01:14:073 (13,14,15,16) - But I think making the pattern to go straight creates a very low intuition of what players can expect after clicking the pentagon flow. Therefore, following the curve and the transition that pentagon suggests coult create a smoother movement for players. :3 Like [https://mingi.s-ul.eu/u5X4G3Xw this]
2016-10-12 22:06 Weriko: ooo
2016-10-12 22:06 Weriko: well
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: i tried to follow the song but yeah its a bit weird
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: its like songs makes me want to make that xd , at the begggining it was even weirder
2016-10-12 22:07 Weriko: ill see with testplays, but ill probly change it
2016-10-12 22:07 HappyRocket88: Cool! >w<
2016-10-12 22:08 Weriko: :p
2016-10-12 22:08 HappyRocket88: 01:14:965 (3) - What about adding some variation regarding the emphasis here? Holding the sliderball kills somewhat the momentum this beat 01:15:261 - offers
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: ooooops
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: i just realize that slider is weird xd
2016-10-12 22:10 Weriko: did something, not sure about it
2016-10-12 22:12 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 22:12 HappyRocket88: 02:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - I know this is the kiai and everything but...
2016-10-12 22:13 HappyRocket88: wouldn't a kick slider ctach nicer the effect of the piano here? :o
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: tag says
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: rsi so lets give everybody rsi aaaadadasd
2016-10-12 22:13 Weriko: might change xd
2016-10-12 22:14 Weriko: but it looks cooool but ok
2016-10-12 22:17 HappyRocket88: Hummmm
2016-10-12 22:17 HappyRocket88: You've potential! xD
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: sdsdsadsads rip xD
2016-10-12 22:18 HappyRocket88: I'm not really a modder of these kind of maps but I can assure this might be ranked if you get some more mods and look up for note-placement adviced. :o
2016-10-12 22:18 Weriko: Ooooo
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: okay
2016-10-12 22:19 HappyRocket88: The current ones aren't bad but they become repetitive. 
2016-10-12 22:19 Weriko: a.a yeah
2016-10-12 22:19 HappyRocket88: Hence, trying zig zag flows 
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: or square-style ones would give the difficulty a little bit of more epicness. :3
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: no sé si epicness sea una palabra ayñ. x.x
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: Pero en general, wow. >w<
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: ayyy
2016-10-12 22:20 HappyRocket88: ¡Qué dedicación! :o
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: tal vez xD
2016-10-12 22:20 Weriko: :p
2016-10-12 22:22 HappyRocket88: Posting for kd (?
2016-10-12 22:22 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-12 22:23 HappyRocket88: 04:16:152 - green line here plz
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: yeah xD
2016-10-12 22:23 Weriko: jsss
2016-10-12 22:23 HappyRocket88: with a considereible low volume since the slider-ticks sound way unfitting
2016-10-12 22:24 Weriko: yeah
We had a conversation regarding the mapset and we changed some things regarding:
  1. Questionable flows and transitions of some streams.
  2. NC usage and some inconsistencies that were founded on the map.
  3. Volume sections and chow clear where the slider-path of some of sliders.
Personal Comment
¡Sí se puede! La calidad del mapa, si bien tiene una estrucutura y ritmos prederterminados muy sólidos, necesita más revisión en lo que respecta a los patrones de flujo que maneja. Así, se evitará caer en la monotonía y, a su vez, impactar en la forma como los streams encajan en la dificultad. >w<

(ノ･ω･)ノ



tyyy <3!!!!!!


I will do my best at doing it!
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Net0
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Joined October 2014
Net0
Few suggestion on the last diff as requested
20:18 Net0: what's the diff you want mod?
20:27 Weriko: aa
20:27 Weriko: sorry rip
20:27 Weriko: hardest if it isnt too late aa
20:27 Net0: kinda
20:27 Net0: I'll mod don't worry
20:28 Weriko: kk
20:28 Weriko: ty
20:28 Net0: I'm looking for ppl to testplay
20:28 Net0: a GD I've made
20:28 Weriko: :p
20:28 Weriko: i would but craplap
20:59 Net0: are you crazy?
20:59 *Net0 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1103619 xi - over the top [OVER DIMENSION]]
20:59 Net0: 00:36:350 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) -
21:00 Net0: lmao
21:00 Weriko: lel
21:00 Weriko: ????
21:00 Net0: you're doing highly spaced streams
21:00 Net0: on the very start of the map
21:00 Net0: like
21:00 Weriko: yeah, because that part is intense af
21:00 Net0: you're wasting the potencial of increasing the difficulty though the map
21:00 Net0: by doing this
21:01 Weriko: a???
21:01 Net0: just steadly increase the size of the streams
21:01 Net0: and wait to go real crazy
21:01 Net0: on the main chorus
21:01 Weriko: but that part is intense too :c
21:01 Weriko: so i wanted to keep consistency
21:02 Net0: I see
21:02 Net0: well it's up to the mapper choice how to go with this
21:02 Net0: another thing I've noticed
21:02 Net0: you went from full difficulty
21:02 Net0: to this 00:41:103 (1,2,1,2) -
21:02 Net0: this is like a 3* pattern
21:03 Net0: the music allows you do develop this more
21:03 Weriko: aaa ill change it
21:03 Weriko: at first i tought about jumps
21:03 Weriko: but 1/3 jumps its too ..... confusing tbh
21:04 Net0: the spacing here is weird 01:14:371 (1,2,3,4) -
21:04 Net0: the object 4 could keep the distance from the others
21:05 Weriko: aa
21:05 Weriko: well
21:05 Weriko: i wanted to blanket it with the stream and it doesnt repeat
21:05 Weriko: might change tho
21:05 Net0: cool pattern 02:01:524 (16,1,1) -
21:06 Weriko: aaa ty
21:06 Net0: you could make this
21:06 Net0: 02:01:524 (16,1,1) -
21:06 Net0: ops
21:06 Net0: 02:08:579 (11,12,13,14) -
21:06 Net0: this
21:06 Net0: fit more into the "8" pattern
21:07 Net0: this could be shaped as a "8" 02:07:910 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) -
21:07 Weriko: zzz
21:07 Weriko: ok
21:08 Net0: make a 3/4 slider here instead
21:08 Net0: 02:35:163 (1) -
21:08 Net0: 02:40:212 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,3,4,1) -
21:09 Net0: your map works like this: high quality level of stream mapping, then your usual patterns 1/2
21:09 Net0: theyr're not as great
21:10 Weriko: a.a
21:10 Weriko: i suk at 1/2 patterns tbh
21:10 Net0: 02:57:292 (6,7,8,1,2) -
21:10 Net0: overlapping a little bit
21:11 Weriko: sec
21:11 Net0: I don't like this curve here 03:37:910 (14,15,16,1,2,3) -
21:11 Weriko: a.a
21:11 Net0: seems out of place
21:12 Weriko: why :c
21:12 Weriko: zz ill curve a bit
21:12 Net0: this looks like a "S" shape
21:12 Net0: but really wide open
21:12 Net0: problem is
21:12 Weriko: ok i curved it a bi
21:12 Weriko: bit
21:13 Net0: after making this
21:13 Net0: 03:36:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
21:13 Net0: my aim is currently on sharp mod
21:13 Net0: and then suddenlly inside the same combo
21:13 Net0: goes really wide 03:37:836 (13,14,15,16) -
21:13 Net0: In this particular case
21:13 Net0: I got lost
21:14 Weriko: aaa
21:15 Net0: flow here isn't good 04:10:508 (10,1) -
21:15 Net0: considering SV
21:15 Net0: you can fix it
21:16 Net0: by ctrol+g this 04:11:103 (1) -
21:16 Net0: and all of them as well 04:11:994 (1,1,1) -
21:16 Net0: and that's it
21:17 Weriko: zz ok
21:17 Net0: map is pure stream not much to say
21:19 Weriko: okok
21:19 Weriko: tytytyty
21:21 Net0: xD
21:21 Weriko: a.a
21:21 Net0: you want me to post it?
21:21 Weriko: yeah
21:21 Weriko: and fav it coghcoghcogh
21:22 Net0: I can't
21:22 Weriko: ayyy
21:22 Net0: I have the limit already
21:22 Weriko: a rite rip
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
bit ircmod
2016-10-15 10:15 Weriko: free for small mod?
2016-10-15 10:15 Weriko: and hi
2016-10-15 10:15 Weriko: a
2016-10-15 10:16 Garden: sure
2016-10-15 10:16 Weriko: ACTION is away: eting stuffz
2016-10-15 10:17 Weriko: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1103619 xi - over the top]
2016-10-15 10:17 Weriko: ayy ty
2016-10-15 10:23 Garden: inhuman streams www
2016-10-15 10:24 Weriko: :p
2016-10-15 10:24 Garden: despite playability thing for me, the map looks generally quite nice
2016-10-15 10:25 Weriko: yay
2016-10-15 10:25 Garden: will give some suggestions after i finish viewing the whole dif
2016-10-15 10:25 Weriko: okay
2016-10-15 10:29 Garden: btw u can start hitsounding this
2016-10-15 10:29 Garden: like other sexy-hitsounded xi stream maps
2016-10-15 10:30 Weriko: yeah
2016-10-15 10:30 Weriko: dont know which hitsounds to use tho
2016-10-15 10:30 Weriko: or if i should keysound (not sure if it fits at all)
2016-10-15 10:31 Garden: keysounding is a LOT of work
2016-10-15 10:31 Garden: u can try sth like bz or fd
2016-10-15 10:31 Weriko: okay
2016-10-15 10:31 Garden: 00:36:202 (15) - curve this a bit to the next stream would make the flow look nice imo
2016-10-15 10:32 Garden: sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6324667
2016-10-15 10:32 Garden: also applied to similar stuffs in the diff
2016-10-15 10:32 Weriko: okay
2016-10-15 10:34 Garden: 01:09:618 (1,2,3) - if i have to say, music here is not far different from 01:04:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:07:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-10-15 10:35 Garden: try bit smaller ds than 01:11:995 (1,2,3) - 
2016-10-15 10:36 Weriko: well, there is a small but noticeable intensity change
2016-10-15 10:36 Garden: 01:20:311 (5,6,1,2,3) - caused by auto-stack, the spacing 01:20:236 (4,5) - looks weird
2016-10-15 10:36 Garden: yes 
2016-10-15 10:37 Garden: so smaller than 01:11:995 (1,2,3) - and larger than 01:07:242 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
2016-10-15 10:37 Garden: as a transition
2016-10-15 10:38 Weriko: it is o.O
2016-10-15 10:38 Weriko: but ok
2016-10-15 10:38 Weriko: ill fix that stack
2016-10-15 10:39 Garden: 02:24:766 (5,9,13) - nc for the pitch changing? u did similar thing be4
2016-10-15 10:40 Weriko: okok
2016-10-15 10:41 Garden: 02:43:850 - etc. belongs to nothing in music, so maybe try 5% volume
2016-10-15 10:42 Weriko: yeah i was doing that
2016-10-15 10:42 Garden: 02:49:420 (1,1) - ah i personally think u can make the two sliders bit different in shape and direction
2016-10-15 10:43 Weriko: okay might change it
2016-10-15 10:43 Garden: 03:12:192 (9,1) - minor aesthetic thing, make it clearer whether its an overlap or not
2016-10-15 10:44 Weriko: done
2016-10-15 10:46 Garden: 03:39:915 (9) - 03:40:806 (5,9,13) - 03:59:816 (5,9,13) - similarly, nc them if u think fits
2016-10-15 10:46 Garden: well nothing more from me
2016-10-15 10:47 Weriko: okay
2016-10-15 10:47 Weriko: ty!!!! <3
2016-10-15 10:48 Garden: haha fd diff looks more approachable for human beings
2016-10-15 10:48 Weriko: yeah xd
2016-10-15 10:50 Garden: uh can i post to farm a kd
2016-10-15 10:50 Weriko: if you want to post, do it :p
2016-10-15 10:50 Garden: ok xdd
2016-10-15 10:50 Weriko: a.a
2016-10-15 10:50 Weriko: xd
Hollow Delta
793 posts
Joined March 2015
Hollow Delta
Asked for a mod.

FOUR DIMENSIONS
SPOILER
00:17:934 (1,2,3,4) - Turn on DS and turn these into a pattern, I'd try to make a linear pattern that leads towards the middle, you can also put a spinner at the end too.
00:51:203 (1) - This slider is aiming down, while the next stream is to the left of it. It looks and flows better if the slider is at the same degree of the stream.
00:51:797 (2) - Better off that this stream is more round. (Almost like a circle) it looks very plain, and if done right should still flow into 00:52:985 (2) - fine.
00:53:578 (7) - I'm looking at this stream, but the next stream: 00:54:173 (1) - Is on the opposite side of where it's leading to. You can try flipping the first stream and re-arranging it so it flows into 1.
00:56:548 (1) - Sliders with an even number of motions land on the opposite side, always. 00:56:846 (2,4) - You should ctrl + g these two sliders to take advantage of the variety you can add here. Plus ctrl + g on 00:56:846 (2,4) - will aim towards the next stream, thus improving flow as well.
00:59:222 (2,4) - ^
01:01:302 (1,2,3,4) - My mod above won't apply here because the sliders are already in a down-wards motion, and thus applying the mod here will actually ruin this pattern.
01:03:678 (1) - This stream heads towards the left, while the next pattern is to the right. There are a number of different patterns you could do here, but What I suggest is adding a loop at the end of this stream which at the end aims towards 01:04:866 (1) - Creates better flow. Or, even simpler solution, just flip and re-snap.
01:16:153 (1) - Odd-reverse sliders land on their starting points, ctrl + g here so it flows into the next stream better.
01:17:935 (1) - Personal suggestion, but I think a curve on this slider will make it look better.
01:18:529 (3) - Since the next note is upwards, should the slider be curving outwards, not in?
01:18:975 (4,1) - This jump here is very surprising. I understand you're trying to overlap 1, so I'd suggest moving 1 under the head of 2 instead of it's tail. (And this will look especially good if you did the mod before.)
01:20:311 (1,2,3,4) - I think the pattern from 01:06:054 (1,2,3,4) - fits here as well because you're going upwards into the next stream.
01:24:618 (3,4) - Since the next stream is going up, I think it looks better if these sliders aim up as well.
01:58:925 (9) - I think a curve on this slider would look better personally. (Specifically one that makes it point downwards.
02:04:569 (2,3) - ctrl + g these 2 sliders (Separately so they don't switch.) so they flow better.
02:54:320 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Here you create circular flow in a clockwise direction, and then you ditch this at 02:55:360 (1) - Instead of doing circular motion again but counter-clockwise, you broke it. I'd suggest re-mapping the second pattern so it has counter-clockwise circular flow.
03:01:301 (17) - Flip this slider so it aims towards the next note?
03:10:806 (1) - ctrl + g this slider so it aims towards 2.
03:26:251 (1,3) - ctr; + g 1 and 3 separately, and re-snap 1 for better flow.
03:32:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Might need to flip this curve so it flows into the next stream better.
03:33:380 (1) - ^
03:40:211 (4) - ctrl + g this slider so it aims towards the next stream.
04:11:251 (7) - Should move this circle so it's being pointed at by 6. Might need to ctrl + g on the next few circles ahead to keep the structure.
04:14:964 (2) - NC to show SV change.

Good luck on the map.
Ashton
Ashton
timing-chan here

offset: 765

do I get kudosu for timing a map? Yes.


edit: offset is actually 750
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Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Weriko
ty for mods <3
William K
694 posts
Joined January 2013
William K
Hi, from my queue.

I dunno if I can mod a 8-stared map. lol

[Over Dimension? No, there's no Dimension... It's too hard XD]

  1. 00:15:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you could make a more interesting design here. :3
  2. 00:17:383 (1,1,4,10) - If you NC-ed 00:17:383 (1,1) - , how about NC-ing the other two at 00:18:571 (4,10) - since they have the same instrument placed.
  3. 01:28:523 (12) - I think you could make this parallel with 01:28:077 (9) - to make aesthetics better.
  4. 01:32:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - looks good, but the overlaps with 01:32:087 (15) - and the other notes look pretty unmatched.
  5. 01:35:800 (2) - You may NC the one here like you did with the one after this.
  6. 01:40:404 (1,2) - The flow here is breaking, how about making number 1 faced to number 2 to make players press easier? The part from 01:40:551 - to 01:42:779 - is intense, and you got a high spacing there.
  7. 01:43:819 (1) - This is wrong snapped.
  8. 01:46:195 (1) - same ^
  9. 02:31:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - The sound here is still as intense as 02:30:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - you may increase the SV at 02:32:829 - since it's being more intense there.
  10. 02:35:502 - How about making this a single note and start the spinner at 02:35:576 - ? Since you did make 02:35:205 - clickable.
  11. 04:11:146 - The SV change starting here is becoming very steep, how about making it consistent like the one you did before 1.6x>1.5x, so it's a 0.1x gap. The SV at the end, at 04:15:007 - which is 0.09x is so slow for the song imo lol.

I think that's all from me, GL
Akali
639 posts
Joined November 2012
Akali
Random advice with examples, cuz I don't think it's overall good enough for ranked so like not full modding tbh and stuff idk i guess

4 dimensions

00:00:750 (1) - curves in the slider artes aren't very pleasing, you try to use one point only, if you want to have nice arcs inbetween red points you have to do more grey nodes, sometimes it would be better to use more red points as well, like here: http://puu.sh/rPuA3.jpg a bit of a mess. http://puu.sh/rPuEE.jpg if you do arcs like this (still done unclean, just an example) your slider will be prettier. Applies to all fancy sliders everywhere probably.

00:05:502 (3) - just try to make them nicer, or use basic shapes

don't like the break, but even if you want it should probably start mapping again from 00:24:512 -

00:31:344 (2) - you can hear the beat changing, yet the pattern doesn't, good excuse to make it less boring but you keep spamming sliders

00:33:720 (2) - same

00:35:205 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - again missed opportunity to make something more interesting. Piano is obviously separated in two sequences 00:35:205 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:35:502 (5,6,7,8) - yet stream shape implies it's one continous thing (this phrase is repeated before but it gains velocity here and is more selective) so you might want to somehow change stuff around, like making sliders, or triple with 1/4 sliders, or jumpstream out of quads. Also the return slider doesn't fit this at all, all this streaming and build up just to make player sit in one place and hold? Doesn't make much sense, it's rather standing out arpeggio.

00:36:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - meh arc, whole thing seems overspaced, again something with 1/4 sliders/repeats would fit this better, drums have recognizable accents so could work around that

00:41:146 (1,2) - talked about this in chat, map is hard enough that you can make these using 1/3 notes without worrying about the player

00:55:404 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4) - I "like" this, here you seperate one thing from the other using different pattern, this low ds stream fits pretty well and 1/4 slider repeats are good for this piano as well. Could be better but that's something.

01:03:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you definitely want to increase spacing here though

01:13:820 (9) - like before, meeeeh

01:14:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - sooort of fine but I would rather see some notes + 1/4 slider combos with more jumpy flow like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6367356 (not exactly this just general idea)

01:16:196 (1) - just keep mapping with 1/4s or http://puu.sh/rPvww.jpg this rhythm

01:18:571 (3) - 1/4 slider jumps fit this better

01:28:077 (2) - again player should probably tap the notes here for this tyn tyn tyn tyn thing

03:34:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - more interesting rhythm going on, yet big ugly arc through whoel screen :(

03:39:363 (1,2,3,4) - you tried here but didn't really work out

etc etc

overdimension

same things basically, you try to have freedom dive or deathstream practice map and ignore what's going on with the music. You have to use 1/4 sliders better, when there are strong 1/2 piano notes and constant 1/4 in the background you should have slider jumps for variety and better music interpretation, you do that sometimes, but it's not enough. All the patterns could use an overhaul design and flow wise as well.

Try to represent the music better, also work on your stream curves, giant arcs through the screen aren't very interesting and look lazy. Some of them are pretty nice, but it doesn't help much, try to map more and come back to this when you improve, then you can try ranking. At this point it will be a struggle.
Deppyforce
1,961 posts
Joined November 2014
Deppyforce
hi pls dont ignore music and map following/according the song thanks

edit: well akali already said the thing in his mod so ok
EmeliaK
97 posts
Joined May 2011
EmeliaK
the max peak of the new audio is +4.6dB and that's ///not/// good, please fix that somehow (you could drop it into Audacity but you'd be reencoding a 128kbps MP3 and that's not good either)

the audio quality in Zan's mania mapset is audibly more pristine; is the relatively underwhelming mixing something unique to the full album version?
Ashton
Ashton
the map isn't good.

The main problem is flow and aesthetics, if you wish to rank this I would suggest starting with slower maps, to learn how to map basic flow with low bpm, and keep that flow through the WHOLE beatmap. Then come back to this after you rank a few slow paced maps, and remap this, with new knowledge.
Weriko
182 posts
Joined December 2015
Topic Starter
Weriko

CanadianBaka wrote:

the map isn't good.

The main problem is flow and aesthetics, if you wish to rank this I would suggest starting with slower maps, to learn how to map basic flow with low bpm, and keep that flow through the WHOLE beatmap. Then come back to this after you rank a few slow paced maps, and remap this, with new knowledge.
Yeah, you also need to learn how to time before offering help for free kds
Lunicia
328 posts
Joined May 2014
Lunicia
jees christ
u can probably fix up those sliders in teh beginning of "over dimension" diff
and maybe add more reverse sliders.. like at 00:55:414 (1) -
and add increasing distance snap triplets at 01:20:810 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
02:35:215 (5) - and 04:10:567 (10) - make these sliders more readable owo
but this is gud and sexy map,
me like
maybe if i feel like it i can make gd ooooooowwwwwo
Dempsey
13 posts
Joined July 2015
Dempsey
i'd honestly love to see cookiezi or gayzmcgee try this omg plz get this map loved
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri
lmk if you need custom hitsounds or sth
also i legit cant hear anything at the current volume lmao

my diff + custom hitsounds https://puu.sh/wRmOY/3b60ceac3c.osz
bules2
11 posts
Joined October 2013
bules2
rank this :cry:
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
Finished~ :)

https://pastebin.com/ipwF25FS
Lafayla
Beatmap Nominator
348 posts
Joined December 2014
Lafayla
IRC mod
23:46 Lafayla: tbh although I can't play it, its pretty good
23:46 Weriko: ooo ty
23:46 Weriko: i like irc mods :p
23:46 Lafayla: kay I'll mod here then
23:46 Weriko: k
23:47 Lafayla: uh only 2 things that really stood out to me
23:47 Lafayla: everything else I'll catch in the editor
23:47 Weriko: kk
23:48 Lafayla: 01:57:050 (5) - this is the most cancerous slider in the history of sliders... I was THAT guy and went left instead of up
23:48 Weriko: LOL
23:48 Weriko: you were the first one who actually didnt get the right path xd
23:48 Weriko: will probly change it tho
23:49 Lafayla: well it doesn't need a big alter, just a little more distinct since the path it follows perfectly overlaps
23:50 Weriko: ok
23:50 Weriko: ill see
23:51 Lafayla: no wonder.... its 1/3...
23:51 Lafayla: I thought the rhythm was a bit off..
23:51 Weriko: yep
23:52 Lafayla: 01:19:624 (1,1) - this overlap is a bit ugly
23:53 Weriko: i will probly change that pattern too
23:53 Lafayla: 01:49:921 (4) - this is gorgeous
23:54 Weriko: o
23:54 Lafayla: although Idk if it should get a nc or not
23:54 Weriko: it probably should
23:55 Lafayla: if you do nc it 01:51:704 (5) - should be fine because it will be 2 but if you don't nc this
23:56 Weriko: k
23:58 Lafayla: 02:35:070 (1) - i would love if the the tail of this slider was a clickable instead
23:58 Lafayla: especially since the section that follows is sliders on quiet sounds
23:58 Weriko: okay
00:00 Weriko: ill change last one too
00:01 Lafayla: this angle is so painful to look 04:02:997 (5,6,7,8,9) - but its been introduced before so I won't say anything else about it
00:02 Weriko: oh that angle xd
00:02 Lafayla: I can't imagine what you were thinking when making the sliders in the beggining
00:02 Lafayla: I'm going to make the meaniest sliders in the whole worldz!!!!!
00:03 Lafayla: most ugly nodey sliders eva
00:03 Weriko: wutwut
00:03 Weriko: they butterful
00:03 Lafayla: I like the blanketting on them
00:04 Lafayla: just their shapes are kinda wonky but its perfect for what this song is
00:04 Weriko: xd
00:05 Lafayla: I wish the beggining took the blanketting concept further instead of going into overlaps
00:05 Lafayla: like these 00:19:624 (1,2) - 
00:05 Weriko: maybe
00:05 Lafayla: 00:22:595 (2,1) - 
00:06 Lafayla: but you do you
00:06 Lafayla: its a cool map though
00:06 Weriko: :p
00:06 Lafayla: but I can't imagine whats inside of that nine star difficulty...
00:06 Weriko: >:D
00:06 Lafayla: I bet its got rainbows that will send me around the world
00:07 Lafayla: anyways thats it...
00:07 Weriko: nah
00:07 Weriko: kk
00:07 Lafayla: you want me to do another?
00:07 Weriko: if you want to
00:08 Lafayla: I don't really want to right now... but I don't mind a different day
00:08 Lafayla: catch me in modhelp sometime
00:08 Weriko: kk
00:08 Weriko: k
00:08 Weriko: take a look at nonrainbows 9* >:D
00:09 Lafayla: this map
00:09 Lafayla: is
00:09 Lafayla: if freedom dive
00:09 Lafayla: and blue dimension
00:09 Lafayla: had a kid
00:09 Weriko: xd
00:09 Weriko: thats why its over dimension
00:09 Lafayla: seems legit
00:10 Lafayla: inb4 cookiezi fc
00:10 Weriko: kek
00:11 Lafayla: ok gonna savelog

Let the the Rainbows soar! +fav and EAT MY STAR!!!
MeAqua tete
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MeAqua tete
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