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A.SAKA - Nanatsu Issenzakura

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yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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yf_bmp
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月17日 at 0:35:08

Artist: A.SAKA
Title: Nanatsu Issenzakura
Tags: sakura seven rotating revolving rotate revolve cherry blossom 木製みゅーと Mokuse Mute 神楽ノ花 Kagura no Hana imoutosan Fushimi Rio Syameimaru-Aya Gust Moecho Pata-Mon
BPM: 172
Filesize: 10343kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.18 stars, 203 notes)
  2. Ayaya's Expert (4.95 stars, 493 notes)
  3. Expert (5.35 stars, 588 notes)
  4. Gust's Insane (4.59 stars, 487 notes)
  5. Hard (3.54 stars, 350 notes)
  6. imouto's Extra (5.9 stars, 585 notes)
  7. Moecho's Delusional Echo Extra (5.8 stars, 644 notes)
  8. Normal (1.44 stars, 123 notes)
  9. Pata-Mon's Easy (1.4 stars, 95 notes)
  10. Petals (5.97 stars, 585 notes)
Download: A.SAKA - Nanatsu Issenzakura
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Feel the music
Enjoy the map

Banner by handsome
Storyboard by me
Last edited by yf_bmp , edited 102 times in total.
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
四暗刻，几百年前的图怎么又挖出来了
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
yf_bmp

Vert wrote:

四暗刻，几百年前的图怎么又挖出来了
突然来的灵感 都怪z1
Steph De Chine
93 posts
Joined June 2012
Steph De Chine
Generic
BG - For historical reasons, Okumi (front inside panel on the front edge of the left and right) should be placed so that the left piece covers the right piece for living human. Considering mirroring the image to avoid dressing that girl in shroud.

Easy - Please keep Easy easy.
00:11:337 (1,2) and others - Sliders too close. How about merging them together to become one slider, and separate at 1/2 of the time by using a red dot turning?

Normal
01:52:326 (1) - Too far away. Considering to move it to about top 1/4 of the center y-axis? Distance snap did not make it look good.

Hard
01:37:326 (6) - Touching the HP bar.

Insane
01:01:570 (1) - Looks ugly to me...

Expert
00:44:477 (3,1) - Touching the HP bar.

Those HP Bar touching incidents might also be an issue with old osu! skin only, as I did not test on the new osu! skin yet...
Sorry for the lack of skill that I just could not give further suggestions...
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
[General]
  1. 两个低难度这样实在是几乎不可能过关吧……但是有一个简单的处理方法能规避大量问题：把ez提一点星数，然后改名叫normal；把现在的normal直接改名Advanced，不需要任何调整（如果你愿意可以改cs）．这样的话spread和难度名应该就都ok．现在的normal这样的变ds以及172bpm的分开1/2单点，实在是不能叫normal（而且也有点贴太近，升cs正好也解决）
  2. ayaya难度名错了
[Easy]
  1. 我日……怎么ez也这么几把．1/2处用不同ds，以及滑条尾在蓝线，这两件事你肯定已经考虑过了，我就不再多说．不过姑且再扔一个链接提醒一下危险性……
    https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy_(Difficulty)

    Guidelines wrote:

    Consistent spacing is required
    以及一大堆说尽量简化节奏甚至尽量不要用1/2的
  2. 01:07:151 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:314 (1,2,3,4) - 这种排列是我非常非常不建议的，基本上必然会读错．低难度真的别视觉ds误导
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:256 (2,3) - stack
  2. 我的天……我写General吧
[Hard]
  1. 00:58:081 (2,3) - 01:00:872 (2,3) - 这空掉的1/4超级响啊……我打的时候即使知道这里你没跟全我也是下意识一直按住的．直接加次折返吧，hard里这么摆也没问题
  2. 01:21:802 (4) - 很容易读错．建议减少一次折返然后接白线起的滑条，会比较舒服
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:221 (1,2) - 开头轻段里，一下可能有点太远了，稍微放近一点就好，何况还是红线音，而且好像原曲里听不出是重音，你加了音效才重的
  2. 01:51:628 (1) - Insane而已，用50%吧，可以原地绕个圈，也比较好读是慢速滑条
  3. hard和insane也是真的超好玩．虽然其实ez和nm也是但我觉得那两个有点不合适23333
[Ayaya]
  1. Ayaya’s Extra 这是中文标点，改一下
  2. 00:04:361 (1,2,3,4) - 这音效感觉有点难听，找个稍微软一点的音效看看
  3. 00:01:919 (2) - 00:07:500 (1) - 统一nc．如果你决定都加的话，前面这段还可以加不少．我个人还是觉得ds梗都加一下比较好
  4. 00:13:430 (6,7,8) - 看着不好看，会觉得有点随手
  5. 00:20:756 (2,1) - 拉开或者擦边大一点
  6. 00:22:151 (4,5) - 拉开，擦到不好看
  7. 00:27:035 (3,1) - 不好看
  8. 00:33:488 (8) - 这音不太重，跟前面一下太远了有点无理
  9. 00:33:663 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不跟1/4的话，ds大一点
  10. 01:14:302 (9,10) - 拉开．顺便这块少了个nc，具体加在哪你看
  11. 01:14:477 (10,11,12) - 好随手
  12. 01:26:686 (7) - nc
  13. 虽然我喜欢ar8 cs5，也喜欢读图梗，但与此无关，总体来说：
    ①nc要recheck一遍，虽然我只说了三个地方但我觉得狠多地方的nc我并不能看懂，你应该找一个下nc的逻辑，然后整个diff去再重新下一遍．最最基本的首先是，确定一下高潮部分是一小节一nc，还是半小节，或者多少；另外就是大白线前的1/4你的nc是加在大白线上还是加在大白线前的连打上
    ②节奏不是很统一，我并不能理解你是如何选择1/4跟不跟的，比如00:33:663 (1) - 开始为何突然不跟了，00:36:366 (1) - 又为何突然跟了一个
    ③排列方面，随手的排列有点多，我前面说随手的地方只是很小一部分，还有overlap也有点不干净．ds似乎也缺乏逻辑，还有像01:45:698 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这样的乱跳我也没有看到太多排版可言，虽然仔细看能看到你的一些想法，但总体看上去我觉得就是一团
    我觉得提升空间不小 :?
[Expert]
  1. Fine
[妹桑]
  1. 01:07:675 (3) - nc．前面1可能倒可以不加，因为虽然x2但绕了个弯 跟x1差不多．01:09:070 (3) - 等等后面还有．
  2. Fine
[主难度]
  1. 图是真的漂亮．大概确实是我印象中最“Feel the music”的图之一了．没啥可说的，乱摸=毁图
GL~
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
驾驭不了主难度 就不摸了
[General]
建议所有diff中排列成樱花图案的slider或者circle亦或其组合专门使用几个粉色 别的地方不要使用相近的颜色 以示区分

[妹桑]
00:24:768 (2,3,4)、00:25:465 (2,3,4)、00:26:163 (2,3,4) - 类似于这种的梗建议全部都旋转错开
00:57:384 (1,2,3) - 向下移错开
00:58:081 (1,2,3,4) - 注意00:58:169 (2)与00:57:035 (6)的stack；同理 00:58:256 (3)与00:58:518 (2)的stack
00:58:954 (2,3) - 顺一下？http://puu.sh/sETM7/397785893f.jpg
01:07:151 (1,2)、01:08:547 (1,2)、01:12:733 (1,2)、01:18:314 (1,2)、01:19:709 (1,2) - 这个变速嘛……
01:22:675 (2,3) - stack好嘛
01:28:954 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最好别放在01:27:559 (2,3,4)下面

[Expert]
00:50:756 (2) - slider tail没叠好
01:08:372 (6) - 没叠好
01:09:244 (2) - ↑
01:51:628 (1) - 感觉还是别减速吧 跟之前的三个slider一样 最后01:52:326在正中心放一个circle

[Ayaya]
00:02:616、00:08:198 - 没理由空出来
00:04:361 (1,2,3,4) - 音效极不合曲
00:07:151 (1) - 看你前面00:01:570 (1)没NC 统一一下吧
00:14:128 (8) - combo太长了 在这里NC
00:27:297 (1,2)、00:26:948 (2,3) - 别碰到
00:41:948 (5) - NC
01:11:337 (1) - NC移到01:11:250 (4)
01:16:395 (2,3,4) - 三连只有两个叠是为什么呢
01:26:686 (7) - NC

感觉低难度没什么好说的
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 1 time in total.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
to patamon:基本都改了 最高难度小小re了下
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
dio 五旋樱
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
z1sb不要不承认
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
seems time to handle this one
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
!!!
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
at your request :3
[Ultra]
  1. 00:33:663 (1,2) - very small overlap
    holy this is really good, maybe you also want to have higher OD for this diff?

    [Expert]
  2. some unsnapped objects http://puu.sh/uFJYE/e2ae281799.png
  3. 00:16:047 (2,1,2) - maybe you could have same spacing with these?
  4. 01:49:186 (2,3,4,1) - why did you use such large spacing here compared to 01:47:791 (2,3,4) - and others like this?
  5. 01:52:762 (1,2) - maybe these were unintentional? lol

    [Ayaya]
  6. 00:20:407 (1) - not sure why this is 1/3 ~
  7. 00:22:500 2 timing points here remove one pls~
pretty good set :3
good luck~ (sorry short mod ><)
Frey
1,205 posts
Joined February 2011
Frey
From in-game request

  • Normal
  1. 00:38:895 (4) - 这里间距可以修一下
  2. 00:55:988 (1,3,1,3) - 其实我建议还是跟1/2，因为单纯的蓝线没问题，但是对新手来说很不友好...尽管声音不大，但是1/2的地方还是有余音可以给你脑补出来.
  3. 01:28:081 (3) - 修正间隔到0.7
  4. 01:45:871 (4) - 间距可以修一下
  5. 01:46:919 (2) - 修正间距到0.7

    Advanced
  6. 00:13:430 (3) - 手工重叠
  7. 这个..好多间隔都是完全不一样的...我觉得还是限制到几个固定间隔为好..

    Hard
  8. 00:30:872 (1,1,2,1) - 这一堆放到insane及其以上问题不大，放到hard肯定不行，没几个正正经经打hard的玩家可以用几次play玩懂这个...
  9. 01:21:628 (3) - 放这里是不是太难了点，我觉得可以放到01:22:326 (1) -

    Expert
  10. 01:52:762 (1,2) - 嗯，删掉八卦阵吧

    imouto's Extra
  11. 01:51:715 (8) - 完全多余的一个note，个人觉得

呃呃呃，好运吧...我没太认真摸，抱歉 :D
Eric666
3 posts
Joined July 2015
Eric666
[normal]
01:07:151 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的2和4感觉放到01:08:023 (2) - 01:09:419 (4) - 这样更好一点
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是，2和4

[Insane]
太神
00:56:163 (2,3,1) - 00:57:558 (2,3,1) - 00:58:954 (2,3,1) - 01:00:349 (2,3,1) - 沃日，这几个地方把我坑惨了


高难度水平太菜摸不动
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_MiaoFUuU_
314 posts
Joined April 2014
_MiaoFUuU_
yf大师 M4M

imouto's Extra

  • 00:35:058 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里的flow链接的有点难受，00:35:233 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g试试（两个顺时针，两个逆时针）
    00:40:814 (2,3,4) - ↑
    01:07:151 (1) - 01:13:256 (3) - 01:18:314 (1) - 01:19:709 (1) - flow没问题，但是感觉拉得很随便


Expert


  • 00:16:919 (1) - 这滑条可以再扭更好看
    00:21:802 (1,5) - 感觉藏得很奇怪，ds平分，但是前面00:21:454 (2,1,2) - 这里的DS又不遵守
    00:31:483 (2) - 感觉是多余的，没有了节奏更好听，但是排列要这个梗就没办法 后面同
    01:19:709 (1,2) - 建议换另一种，前面已经有相同了
    01:24:070 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - 这两个排列相同但是节奏没有区分度
    01:49:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不适合这样下节奏，包括前面那段，01:50:843 (2) - 这两个出现把原来的节奏破坏掉，而且连打flow差。
    01:52:762 (1,2) -

Ultra

  • 00:22:761 (2) - 这个能不能和 00:23:459 (2) - 一样包着，flow更顺手啊
    00:24:157 (2) - 这里flow接下一个也不顺 要不这两个00:24:244 (1,2) - ctrl+g
    00:25:291 (1,2,1,2) - 这里接前面的顺时针其实挺卡手的
    后边重复的同
    01:04:012 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个W的DS有点大了 01:04:099 (2,4) - 这两个往上移一点会好打很多
    01:05:407 (2,3) - 这两个不要离太近，卡手
    01:26:861 (2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - 这段看上去很好看，但是实际体验很差，DS太大了再加上要对跳的连打 后面同
    01:27:558 (1,1) - 实际上和 01:27:035 (4,5) - 这里一样的节奏，强行塞多了一个圈在这 01:27:820 -
    01:38:547 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的flow不对劲，本来是一条直线，但是3凸出来了，而且凸的很极限
主难度高潮又好看又贼有感觉~~不过有些滑条和圈圈的连接不太顺。
good luck~
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio

Pata-Mon wrote:

[妹桑]
  1. 01:07:675 (3) - nc．前面1可能倒可以不加，因为虽然x2但绕了个弯 跟x1差不多．01:09:070 (3) - 等等后面还有． 不好 我还得再搞一个combo color
  2. Fine
GL~

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[妹桑]
00:24:768 (2,3,4)、00:25:465 (2,3,4)、00:26:163 (2,3,4) - 类似于这种的梗建议全部都旋转错开 我吃屎 这梗我得改一天
00:57:384 (1,2,3) - 向下移错开 ar够高 看着还好
00:58:081 (1,2,3,4) - 注意00:58:169 (2)与00:57:035 (6)的stack；同理 00:58:256 (3)与00:58:518 (2)的stack 我这看着没stack 应该没问题
00:58:954 (2,3) - 顺一下？http://puu.sh/sETM7/397785893f.jpg 不顺比较好
01:07:151 (1,2)、01:08:547 (1,2)、01:12:733 (1,2)、01:18:314 (1,2)、01:19:709 (1,2) - 这个变速嘛…… 也就那样
01:22:675 (2,3) - stack好嘛 嗯
01:28:954 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最好别放在01:27:559 (2,3,4)下面 别处不好打啊

Frey wrote:

From in-game request

imouto's Extra

01:51:715 (8) - 完全多余的一个note，个人觉得 是哦 删了

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

imouto's Extra

  • 00:35:058 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里的flow链接的有点难受，00:35:233 (2,3,4) - ctrl+g试试（两个顺时针，两个逆时针） 三个转144°一个反转嘛 理想很美好 现实……哎算了我再看看
    00:40:814 (2,3,4) - ↑ 哎哟我这段还排错了……
    01:07:151 (1) - 01:13:256 (3) - 01:18:314 (1) - 01:19:709 (1) - flow没问题，但是感觉拉得很随便 flow没问题就行啦 好好拉也拉不出什么东西
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Syameimaru-Aya
173 posts
Joined August 2013
Syameimaru-Aya

Pata-Mon wrote:

[Ayaya]
  1. Ayaya’s Extra 这是中文标点，改一下
  2. 00:04:361 (1,2,3,4) - 这音效感觉有点难听，找个稍微软一点的音效看看你说得对
  3. 00:01:919 (2) - 00:07:500 (1) - 统一nc．如果你决定都加的话，前面这段还可以加不少．我个人还是觉得ds梗都加一下比较好好
  4. 00:13:430 (6,7,8) - 看着不好看，会觉得有点随手
  5. 00:20:756 (2,1) - 拉开或者擦边大一点
  6. 00:22:151 (4,5) - 拉开，擦到不好看
  7. 00:27:035 (3,1) - 不好看
  8. 00:33:488 (8) - 这音不太重，跟前面一下太远了有点无理拉近了
  9. 00:33:663 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不跟1/4的话，ds大一点感觉还好
  10. 01:14:302 (9,10) - 拉开．顺便这块少了个nc，具体加在哪你看好
  11. 01:14:477 (10,11,12) - 好随手
  12. 01:26:686 (7) - nc好
  13. 虽然我喜欢ar8 cs5，也喜欢读图梗，但与此无关，总体来说：
    ①nc要recheck一遍，虽然我只说了三个地方但我觉得狠多地方的nc我并不能看懂，你应该找一个下nc的逻辑，然后整个diff去再重新下一遍．最最基本的首先是，确定一下高潮部分是一小节一nc，还是半小节，或者多少；另外就是大白线前的1/4你的nc是加在大白线上还是加在大白线前的连打上
    ②节奏不是很统一，我并不能理解你是如何选择1/4跟不跟的，比如00:33:663 (1) - 开始为何突然不跟了，00:36:366 (1) - 又为何突然跟了一个四次为1part的感觉
    ③排列方面，随手的排列有点多，我前面说随手的地方只是很小一部分，还有overlap也有点不干净．ds似乎也缺乏逻辑，还有像01:45:698 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这样的乱跳我也没有看到太多排版可言，虽然仔细看能看到你的一些想法，但总体看上去我觉得就是一团
    我觉得提升空间不小 :?

Depths wrote:

at your request :3

[Ayaya]
[*]00:20:407 (1) - not sure why this is 1/3 ~ok
[*]00:22:500 2 timing points here remove one pls~[/list]yep

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Ayaya]
00:02:616、00:08:198 - 没理由空出来
00:04:361 (1,2,3,4) - 音效极不合曲ok
00:07:151 (1) - 看你前面00:01:570 (1)没NC 统一一下吧ok
00:14:128 (8) - combo太长了 在这里NC好
00:27:297 (1,2)、00:26:948 (2,3) - 别碰到
00:41:948 (5) - NC好
01:11:337 (1) - NC移到01:11:250 (4)感觉现在还行
01:16:395 (2,3,4) - 三连只有两个叠是为什么呢
01:26:686 (7) - NCdone
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402,246,76483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,241,76570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,308,76744,1,8,0:0:0:0:
294,308,77093,5,8,0:0:0:0:
210,266,77268,2,0,P|235:215|275:200,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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225,129,77965,2,0,P|280:100|325:106,1,101.999996887207,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,185,78314,6,0,L|-12:179,1,101.999996887207,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,116,78576,2,0,L|173:228,1,101.999996887207
61,123,78837,2,0,P|106:92|155:107,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,42,79186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,90,79273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,138,79361,2,0,P|352:141|388:98,1,101.999996887207
470,41,79709,6,0,L|348:35,1,101.999996887207
304,62,79971,2,0,L|256:157,1,101.999996887207
200,103,80233,2,0,L|200:-28,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,217,80581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,50,80756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,242,80930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
106,66,81105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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53,171,81454,2,0,L|154:160,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,245,81802,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,281,81890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,281,81977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,316,82064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,354,82151,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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37,162,82500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,227,82675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,255,82849,1,8,0:0:0:0:
253,237,83023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,157,83198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,84,83372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,59,83547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
512,91,83721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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501,247,84244,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,293,84419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,310,84593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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118,286,85291,6,0,L|133:172,1,101.999996887207
115,310,85640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
69,153,85815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,60,85989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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398,137,86948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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270,268,87384,2,0,L|341:178,1,101.999996887207
194,250,87646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,250,87733,2,0,L|156:351,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,378,88081,5,0,1:0:0:0:
303,384,88430,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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198,150,89128,1,0,1:0:0:0:
246,278,89302,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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196,228,89738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,89826,2,0,P|211:267|188:332,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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81,201,90436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,183,90523,2,0,P|147:182|195:227,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,348,90872,6,0,P|61:322|53:256,1,110.499994941712
196,228,91133,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,228,91221,2,0,P|211:267|188:332,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,367,91570,2,0,P|59:362|23:322,1,110.499994941712,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,201,91831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,183,91919,2,0,P|176:189|207:144,1,110.499994941712,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,32,92268,6,0,P|274:58|266:124,1,110.499994941712
409,152,92529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,152,92617,2,0,P|424:113|401:48,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,13,92966,2,0,P|272:18|236:58,1,110.499994941712
294,179,93227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,197,93314,2,0,P|360:198|408:153,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,32,93663,6,0,P|274:58|266:124,1,110.499994941712
319,188,93925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,216,94012,2,0,P|366:271|333:322,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,266,94361,2,0,P|212:304|249:360,1,110.499994941712,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,305,94622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,317,94709,2,0,P|355:341|319:385,1,110.499994941712,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,264,95058,6,0,L|231:148,1,110.499994941712,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,132,95320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,91,95407,2,0,P|329:65|386:91,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,174,95756,2,0,L|424:289,1,110.499994941712
408,302,96018,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,337,96105,2,0,P|313:353|261:318,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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247,99,96716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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413,204,97151,2,0,L|361:308,1,110.499994941712,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,314,97414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,334,97501,2,0,P|235:330|199:279,1,110.499994941712,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,270,97849,6,0,L|50:154,1,110.499994941712
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256,180,98547,2,0,L|243:295,1,110.499994941712
227,308,98809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,343,98896,2,0,P|132:359|80:324,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,227,99245,6,0,L|48:115,1,110.499994941712
64,104,99507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,95,99594,2,0,P|134:88|179:132,1,110.499994941712,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,74,99855,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,53,99942,2,0,P|291:74|330:31,1,110.499994941712,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,65,100204,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,32,100291,2,0,P|450:-5|492:32,1,110.499994941712,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,138,100640,5,4,0:0:0:0:
430,248,100814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
yf_bmp

Depths wrote:

at your request :3
[Ultra]
  1. 00:33:663 (1,2) - very small overlap lazy to fix ;w;
    holy this is really good, maybe you also want to have higher OD for this diff? have a try

    [Expert]
  2. some unsnapped objects http://puu.sh/uFJYE/e2ae281799.png fixed
  3. 00:16:047 (2,1,2) - maybe you could have same spacing with these? i did this on purpose so..
  4. 01:49:186 (2,3,4,1) - why did you use such large spacing here compared to 01:47:791 (2,3,4) - and others like this? lol hard to explain but it's my purpose
  5. 01:52:762 (1,2) - maybe these were unintentional? lol

    pretty good set :3
    good luck~ (sorry short mod ><)

Frey wrote:

From in-game request

  • Normal
  1. 00:38:895 (4) - 这里间距可以修一下 nm的都改了
  2. 00:55:988 (1,3,1,3) - 其实我建议还是跟1/2，因为单纯的蓝线没问题，但是对新手来说很不友好...尽管声音不大，但是1/2的地方还是有余音可以给你脑补出来.
  3. 01:28:081 (3) - 修正间隔到0.7
  4. 01:45:871 (4) - 间距可以修一下
  5. 01:46:919 (2) - 修正间距到0.7

    Advanced
  6. 00:13:430 (3) - 手工重叠 ok
  7. 这个..好多间隔都是完全不一样的...我觉得还是限制到几个固定间隔为好.. 这种你也知道我肯定是故意的了 我觉得挺有规律的也不是凭感觉瞎放所以应该ok

    Hard
  8. 00:30:872 (1,1,2,1) - 这一堆放到insane及其以上问题不大，放到hard肯定不行，没几个正正经经打hard的玩家可以用几次play玩懂这个... 可是，低难度我这里都是空掉的 想体现一定亮点，先放着
  9. 01:21:628 (3) - 放这里是不是太难了点，我觉得可以放到01:22:326 (1) - Ok

    Expert
  10. 01:52:762 (1,2) - 嗯，删掉八卦阵吧 忘了

呃呃呃，好运吧...我没太认真摸，抱歉 :D

Eric666 wrote:

[normal]
01:07:151 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的2和4感觉放到01:08:023 (2) - 01:09:419 (4) - 这样更好一点 你说什么我没听懂.jpg
01:18:314 (1,2,3,4) - 这里也是，2和4

[Insane]
太神
00:56:163 (2,3,1) - 00:57:558 (2,3,1) - 00:58:954 (2,3,1) - 01:00:349 (2,3,1) - 沃日，这几个地方把我坑惨了 拿衣服


高难度水平太菜摸不动
yf love love

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Expert


  • 00:16:919 (1) - 这滑条可以再扭更好看 我有点懒
    00:21:802 (1,5) - 感觉藏得很奇怪，ds平分，但是前面00:21:454 (2,1,2) - 这里的DS又不遵守 这个没改
    00:31:483 (2) - 感觉是多余的，没有了节奏更好听，但是排列要这个梗就没办法 后面同
    01:19:709 (1,2) - 建议换另一种，前面已经有相同了
    01:24:070 (2,3,4,6,7,8) - 这两个排列相同但是节奏没有区分度
    01:49:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不适合这样下节奏，包括前面那段，01:50:843 (2) - 这两个出现把原来的节奏破坏掉，而且连打flow差。 就要玩玩梗 不改了
    01:52:762 (1,2) -

Ultra

  • 00:22:761 (2) - 这个能不能和 00:23:459 (2) - 一样包着，flow更顺手啊 这个不了
    00:24:157 (2) - 这里flow接下一个也不顺 要不这两个00:24:244 (1,2) - ctrl+g 有没有发现类似00:22:761 (2,1) - 这种都是突然改变flow方向的梗？ 所以我其实是刻意的
    00:25:291 (1,2,1,2) - 这里接前面的顺时针其实挺卡手的 这里我个人测试还好
    后边重复的同
    01:04:012 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这个W的DS有点大了 01:04:099 (2,4) - 这两个往上移一点会好打很多 这里有空拍给人缓冲 不会很难打
    01:05:407 (2,3) - 这两个不要离太近，卡手 说实话我这里主要是和前面联系了后面的是将就，不过我看好像并不卡手关系的确不大
    01:26:861 (2,3,4,1,1,1,1) - 这段看上去很好看，但是实际体验很差，DS太大了再加上要对跳的连打 后面同 这里调了后面
    01:27:558 (1,1) - 实际上和 01:27:035 (4,5) - 这里一样的节奏，强行塞多了一个圈在这 01:27:820 - 这里排列是有点牵强 主要是之前为了比次难度星数高才放的。现在看改成顺序结构星数也够。后面的不改了 有缓冲时间
    01:38:547 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的flow不对劲，本来是一条直线，但是3凸出来了，而且凸的很极限 这里也是我一直在关注的问题，改了另一种梗
主难度高潮又好看又贼有感觉~~不过有些滑条和圈圈的连接不太顺。
good luck~
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[Ayaya's Extra]
  1. 00:02:616 - 少了個東西 比較空洞
  2. 00:08:198 - ^
  3. 00:27:035 (3,1) - overlap
  4. 00:33:925 - 00:34:622 - 這裡可以加個circle 豐富一下節奏 後面的也一樣
  5. 01:16:395 (5,6,7) - stack
  6. 01:17:093 (1,2,3,4) - 根據音樂 clickable的地方應該在紅線上
  7. 01:51:105 (5,6,7,8) - 這裡可以有更加有趣的擺法吧 感覺把意境破壞了一樣
  8. 有點亂
[Moecho's Delusional Echo Extra]
  1. ar可以低一點 比如9.2 9.3
  2. 00:36:977 (1) - reverse可能被遮住了
  3. 01:13:256 (1) - 可以在01:13:605 - 加個kickslider 讓它可以按一下
  4. 01:39:768 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 個人不太建議完全遮
先搞這兩個
[Crz]Makii
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来了
[Ayaya's Extra]
  1. 00:08:895 (2,3,4) - 。这ds太随意了吧 这三个同间隔不同ds 加上cs5ar8基本就是初见一堆50...建议00:08:895 (2,3,4) - 一个ds然后00:09:244 (4,5,6) - 用另一种不同ds
  2. 00:14:826 (3,4) - 不如直接复制00:14:128 (1,2) - 然后倒过来,现在这么摆真的看起来太随意
  3. 00:17:791 (6) - 弄个1/2滑条吧，要空音也不是空00:17:965 - 而是空00:18:140 -
  4. 00:19:012 (10,11) - 这是和之前不一样的3/2间距，建议不要再采用这么小的ds了，因为前面一路打下来会以为这里仍然是1/1
  5. 00:20:407 (3,4) - 不是很必要的overlap
  6. 00:21:105 (1,2,3,4) - 其实我还是想吐槽一下 直接ctrlshiftd搞出一个四边形然后把第一根滑条不停转90度填好就是了...
  7. 00:22:064 - 应该加一个音,00:22:413 (5) - 这个倒是多余
  8. 00:38:721 (6,7) - 不要有相互的接触
  9. 00:57:384 (6,1) - swap NC
  10. 01:16:395 (5,6,7) - 叠好
  11. 01:17:093 (1,2,3,4,1) - ..把这些全部左移一个1/2节奏 抓的都比现在要好
  12. 01:40:640 - 从这开始的连续单点 ds完全没规律啊...说不好听一些就是随便摆了摆 体现不了音乐特点
    01:41:686 (7,8) - 这种我倒是看出来是想把最后两个note间距变小,但是01:42:558 (4,5) - 01:43:954 (4,5) - 比起来01:46:744 (4,5) - 又是两个不同风格 前者ds相近后者大跳,01:48:140 (4,5) - 01:49:535 (4,5) - 这又缩回去了, 01:46:744 (4,5) - 这里我没听出来音乐有什么变化呢...
    还有就是 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8394283 看一下最后的这段单点 比较乱,其实可以对应这首歌"七旋樱"来对应想点梗的
[Moecho's DEExtra]
  1. 00:16:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议弄大点间距，和00:07:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个差不多就可以
  2. 00:44:826 (1,2,3,4) - 00:47:616 (1,2,3,4) - 这俩ds咋还不一样的...直接复制不就好,想blanket的话也要保持一样啊(
  3. 01:34:186 (5,1,2) - 是不是近了点
  4. 有些地方怎么完全没音啊 比如00:08:198 (6) - 之类的 我不大清楚这样允不允许(
Ultra我遇到点问题 开头的skip我要按两次才能skip成功 第一次会到一半的地方 不知道是我bug还是这图问题...我试了下别的图都正常...
其次01:28:954 (1,1,1,1,1) - 能不能取消NC...这里有一个01:28:779 (3,1) - stack导致后面的顺序根本读不清楚,01:40:116 (1,1,1,1,1) - 像这个因为跳了一下，很容易看清楚，而前面那个就不一样了...
GL~
yf_bmp
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mod for some gder:

Ayaya's Extra
虽说是意识流但我建议还是得注意点细节，改了也不会影响什么，也是随手的事
  1. 00:21:802 (3,4,5) - 个人认为不如跟鼓点
  2. 01:14:302 (1,2) - 求稍微分开点
  3. 01:16:395 (5,6,7) - 这里我注意了很久，不太懂你用意 要突出重音不如更分开点
  4. 01:34:361 (4,5,6) - 这挺牵强的。。不如删掉蓝线节奏改排版
  5. 01:46:047 (7,3) - 分开一点点
  6. 00:20:407 (3,4) - 十分难受
  7. 00:20:756 (4,1) -
  8. 00:27:035 (3,1) -
Moecho's Delusional Echo Extra
  1. 00:36:977 (1) - 这我觉得不怎么好，一是滑条尾问题，二是音效的问题，推荐做成2个
  2. 01:02:268 (1) - 拉这种滑条的原因是？
  3. 01:03:663 (1) - ^，这两个我推荐呼应下
  4. 01:11:861 (1) - 音效问题，怎么改呢？
  5. 01:22:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 变点速，弯弯不同的方向我感觉会好点
  6. 01:23:895 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - 和之前的联系有点牵强
  7. 01:40:640 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段，很水。不好看不舒服也体现不出什么思想
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優し麻婆愛佳 1:20:12
關於AR
優し麻婆愛佳 1:20:29
我覺得我這個難度降下去的話實在會難打許多
揺れるミイラ 1:20:43
我没提ar
優し麻婆愛佳 1:20:51
誒
優し麻婆愛佳 1:21:01
柚子提的
優し麻婆愛佳 1:21:09
不是說看七旋櫻摸嗎
揺れるミイラ 1:21:19
嗯
揺れるミイラ 1:21:24
那你汇总一下说一下吧
優し麻婆愛佳 1:21:37
嗯嗯
優し麻婆愛佳 1:21:41

優し麻婆愛佳 1:22:02
reverse那個我也不知道要怎麼改... 感覺用defualt皮膚的時候好像沒有特別遮擋到
優し麻婆愛佳 1:22:12
這方面我也不清出
優し麻婆愛佳 1:26:01
關於節奏的我感覺都非常難改
優し麻婆愛佳 1:26:15
因為改節奏肯定會需要改排列
優し麻婆愛佳 1:26:31
我這張圖複製粘貼梗太多了 改了就變得很奇怪
優し麻婆愛佳 1:26:48
柚子第四條這個我是跟同一個樂器
優し麻婆愛佳 1:27:10
前面三連跟同一個樂器 後面三連也是同一個樂器
優し麻婆愛佳 1:27:21
這裡特別難打一點也是因為進入一個新的kiai
優し麻婆愛佳 1:34:18
不過我還是改了一下
優し麻婆愛佳 1:36:01

優し麻婆愛佳 1:36:06
第一條
優し麻婆愛佳 1:36:18
00:15:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
優し麻婆愛佳 1:36:37
因為之前這裡的旋律是比後面這個激烈的 所以後面那個不可能跟這個一樣間距
優し麻婆愛佳 1:37:15
00:16:919 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡是迴旋 一種沉迷的感覺？
優し麻婆愛佳 1:37:18
不是很懂怎麼解釋
優し麻婆愛佳 1:37:40
然後後面00:18:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 順旋是因為意思是要開始了的意思
優し麻婆愛佳 1:38:38
第二條為什麼不是複製粘貼是因為前面這個是帶著finish音
優し麻婆愛佳 1:38:41
顯然更激烈
優し麻婆愛佳 1:38:43
後面這個沒有
優し麻婆愛佳 1:39:27
第三條間距我覺得挺舒服的 來回打
優し麻婆愛佳 1:39:37
大了後面就也得更大
優し麻婆愛佳 1:40:01
第四條關於音效的我也不知道了 你來看看這條
優し麻婆愛佳 1:43:44

優し麻婆愛佳 1:43:50
這個滑條我該這樣可行？
優し麻婆愛佳 1:43:59

優し麻婆愛佳 1:44:05
第一條我改了
優し麻婆愛佳 1:46:18

優し麻婆愛佳 1:46:22
後面這個成這樣
優し麻婆愛佳 1:46:39
前面是更大的角度是因為音比後面這個強
優し麻婆愛佳 1:56:09
誒
揺れるミイラ 1:56:24
诶
揺れるミイラ 1:56:30
等你说完
優し麻婆愛佳 1:56:32
最後兩條
優し麻婆愛佳 1:56:40
倒數第一條我不是很懂
優し麻婆愛佳 1:56:43
意思是說
揺れるミイラ 1:56:49
倒数第一条
優し麻婆愛佳 1:56:50
關係不應該？
揺れるミイラ 1:57:10
1 太直
2 太直白
3 太突兀
4 复制粘贴很明显
優し麻婆愛佳 1:57:44
其實我也不知道這裡要怎麼改了
優し麻婆愛佳 1:57:52
最後面那個我也不懂
揺れるミイラ 1:58:05
倒3就是
揺れるミイラ 1:58:27
你可以把滑条弯一弯 变滑条速度是跟音调的
揺れるミイラ 1:58:33
这样是不是就有点花瓣的感觉了呢
優し麻婆愛佳 1:58:37
如果可以的話你可以幫我改？
揺れるミイラ 1:58:41
.
揺れるミイラ 1:58:44

揺れるミイラ 1:58:51
这个太主观 不好改
優し麻婆愛佳 1:58:57
我現在思路不清楚
優し麻婆愛佳 1:59:08
挺久之前做的圖
揺れるミイラ 2:01:12
那就不改啦
優し麻婆愛佳 2:02:34
好吧

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