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ProfessionalBox

iWinnie wrote:

Plays well nice map great shit IRC DISCORD CHAT Kudos PLS
purge these kudos asking idiots from the community thanks
toybot

NeilPerry wrote:

Hi, just friendly nm

toybot's extra:
00:10:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - as i told in probox's diff, guess 1\3 would be better // its 1/4 in most of it, so staying with 1/4 would be more comfortable, even if the violin is a bit muddy
00:32:091 - 00:35:967 - 00:37:484 - you lost beats here. but throw all part you use same beats. it's crush rythm consistence a bit. Guess better to fix it.
01:18:945 (4,1) - not too close? // i think its fine for me to play
01:35:040 (4) - no need. without tripple sounds better, change it to 2 kickslider, should me awesome. // did kickslider + circle
02:25:012 (1,2,3) - intuatively it's feels bad cuz of spacing. previous dobles looks simple like this 1\2 rythm. hope you understand me :D
02:26:698 (1,2,3,4) - 1\6 // definitely sure this is 1/4
02:31:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - wanted to advice you improve rythm here. try smthing like this. tripple sounds bad :( http://puu.sh/rpgWc/160d684cbb.jpg // there's a beat on 02:32:091 - though

Other looks awesome.

sory for poor mod, hope im help you a bit. Good luck. <3

Xilver wrote:

:coffee: fighter

[toybot]

00:05:125 (4) - slider ends on downbeat asdf // downbeat barely even matters in such a slow section tbh
00:15:911 (3) - asdf
01:11:445 (2,1) - pretty sure this is overmapped, should del note on 01:11:445 (2) -
01:40:349 (5,6,7,8,9) - ctrl g maybe to the whole stack? // i want the slider leading into the stream
02:26:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - can't hear a stream here honestly // certain there are 1/4 beats
02:28:046 (1) - ctrl g? // i changed the previous circle's position instead to flow in better

good diff c:

good luck :box:
thx for mods ppl! https://0paste.com/9257.txt
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Thanks for modding! Fixed Easy, Normal and Daydream diffs ~
Mikii

Xilver wrote:

[Hard]

Hello mappers. I have noticed you have a lot of unused Timing Points in your diff. Could they maybe be the result of copying from another diff? If so, please clean then up. Thank you and have a great day!

RIP went ahead and fixed all

personally not a fan of the overlap choices in this diff but that's more of a subjective thing, haha.
Blame aia :p Most of my parts don't use slider overlaps unless there was a sufficient timing gap

01:34:451 (1,2) - these could blanket probably
I can do, but I don't think a blanket would fix anything. I do like the spacing I currently have too.

Mitkoff wrote:

[Hard]

00:06:810 (1,2) - Can You make it less overlapped, it's a bit confuse
00:15:743 (4,1) - same reasons I use this overlap here, there is a sufficient gap to do so
00:15:574 (3,4) - Ctrl-g rythm?
This wouldn't affect too much, I'm following the vocals and ctrl+g would usually to be when the sliderhead has a very strong drum beat
00:19:282 (4,5) - too spaced isn't it?
nerfed
00:39:170 (1,2,3,4) - it's confusing, You use this kind of stack only for 1/2 before... this part don't fits song at all imo

03:16:248 (1) - Why skip electro sounds?

00:57:540 (4) - make as a circle and stack with 3? now it's so unexpected, You did't make sounds like that as big jumps. At least decrease distanse between 3 and 4.

01:21:473 (3,4) - Ctrl-g rythm? fits better

02:35:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - mmm?
02:36:136 (4) - emphasize long sound?^

03:10:181 (2) - Nc kiai?

03:28:215 (3,4) - decrease cpace a bit ,03:26:866 (3,4) - like here

i dont know mb You avoid pure blankets but here some of them
improve?
00:50:377 (2,3) - blanket
00:57:372 (3,1) - if it's supposed to be
01:31:585 (5,6) - -/-
01:34:451 (1,2) - if it's supposed to be
01:38:158 (4,5) - -/-
Excuse my inability to blanket :(, fixed some hopefully

Nice diff.

Hobbes2 wrote:

[MikAia's Hard]

The combos in the opening part of the song seem random. Like for example, 00:01:417 (1,2,3,4) - is like a measure but then 00:04:113 (1,2,3) - is 2 measures, 00:08:495 (1,2) - is only part of a measure, etc
I'm just trying to focus on the vocals

00:20:293 (2) - NC should be here imo, a new background instrument is introduced and it makes more sense anyway since its the start of a new measure

00:29:731 - There should be a circle here. The music justifies and the pause makes more sense as 2/1 than 5/4

00:32:428 (1,2) - Based on the intensity of the sound, wouldn't 3 hit circles make more sense than kick sliders?

00:39:675 - Why skip this vocal?

00:44:563 (6) - Would really fit as its own combo

00:57:540 (4) - weird slider as it ends on the start of the wub sound, maybe make 00:57:540 - a circle and 00:57:709 - the head of a 3/4 slider?
I prefer following the vocals as of right now

01:19:282 (4,1) - wouldn't you want a spacing similar to 01:27:709 (1,2) - to be consistent? This might be fine im just wondering.

01:50:125 (6) - Feels a bit excessive of a jump

01:56:024 (6) - NC for conisistency

02:05:125 (1) - NC should be moved to 02:05:462 (2) - because new measure / makes more sense to the music
02:07:821 (1) - ^same idea
02:10:181 (1) - ^

02:21:642 (2) - NC?

02:35:799 (3) - End of this slider falls on a drum/start of a an extended sound, so maybe remove the reverse and then make 02:36:136 - the head of a slider (7/8 slider would fit well here)

02:41:192 (1) - if this is NC'd, 02:41:866 (2) - should probably be as well

03:10:181 (2) - NC, kiai start

03:14:900 (1) - was this NC intentional?
03:16:248 (1) - ^I feel they should be on the downbeats instead.

Most of the points on Aia's part I would agree with but I would rather have either Aia or Probox deal with it. Fixed a lot of NC issues here too
Thank you all!
http://puu.sh/rGE2h/ecc0d584b5.txt
[ Drop ]
add drumstep in tags maybe?
KappaPraise
eh, hi o/
I am late >_<
here is my chess mod xd

General
  1. While I checking dif Daydream from this stream 00:10:875 - I started hear something unsnapped. I realized something wrong with offset, I tried fix it and imo offset around 85 +/-2 ms sounds much better and after that here another red line 00:47:260 -
  2. dif toybot's Extra have different kiai time


Daydream

  1. 00:03:102 (2) - move a little down for balanced distance between objects 00:02:428 (2,3,1,2,3) - focusing on approach circle
  2. 00:31:601 (2) - move somewhere to x:99 y:111 for straight direction?
  3. 00:51:304 (1,2,3,4) - imo this drums sounds not that strong for such jumps
  4. 01:01:585 - should be clickable imo
  5. 01:35:462 (1,2,1) - balance distance? For example move 01:35:799 (1) - to x:479 y:207
  6. 01:43:889 (1,2) - this huge jumps more fits here 01:43:720 (8,1) - pretty strong beat 01:43:889 -

  7. nazi list
    blankets
    00:07:990 (3,1) - head of slider not blanketed as tail
    00:24:354 (1,2) -
    00:52:653 (1,2) -
    01:38:833 (3,4) -
    01:55:181 (2,5) -
    01:56:698 (4,6) -
    02:05:462 (1,2) -
    03:14:731 (5,7) -
-kevincela-'s Insane

  • 00:56:951 (2,1) - stack
    02:21:642 (1,1) - cool idea, but unstacked end of slider xd

Ah, sorry for such short mod, I am weak in modding that genre and its already looks pretty good ._.
Take at least star from me.
Good luck! ._.
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Fixed all except for that offset thing from the mod (also snapped the things properly in kevin's diff)
Spaghetti
w
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
LETS GO
NightOwl2023
Great song! Hope it gets ranked! :D
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Added a better resolution BG ~
Chaoslitz
gee

[General]
  1. Use .jpg for bg instead (right now the png is 3MB)
[Normal]
  1. 01:29:394 (3,4,5) - I don't really suggest stacking two notes on the same slider in easy diffs, it pretty affects reading, so unstack any of these notes (probably second one)
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:158 (3,1) - Wrongly NCed I guess?
  2. 01:22:653 (2,3) - I know it is fine to have overlap between sliders but better not to do it in sliders with reverse
  3. 02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) - Use smaller distance, from now they have nearly the same distance as 1/2
  4. 02:23:664 (4,5,1) - yea distance like this is good, they are just having big difference with 02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) lo
  5. 03:12:540 (4) - Missing NCl
[-kevincela-'s Insane]
  1. 01:47:934 (1) - D: why ending on blue tick
  2. 02:33:945 (1,1,1) - Difference of ds seems too big
[toybot's Extra]
  1. 00:11:782 (1,2,3) - ye I know the pitch is increasing but I think it is too much for a calm intro
Chaoslitz
gee

[General]
  1. Use .jpg for bg instead (right now the png is 3MB)
[Normal]
  1. 01:29:394 (3,4,5) - I don't really suggest stacking two notes on the same slider in easy diffs, it pretty affects reading, so unstack any of these notes (probably second one)
[MikAia's Hard]
  1. 00:08:158 (3,1) - Wrongly NCed I guess?
  2. 01:22:653 (2,3) - I know it is fine to have overlap between sliders but better not to do it in sliders with reverse
  3. 02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) - Use smaller distance, from now they have nearly the same distance as 1/2
  4. 02:23:664 (4,5,1) - yea distance like this is good, they are just having big difference with 02:18:945 (1,2,3,4) lo
  5. 03:12:540 (4) - Missing NCl
[-kevincela-'s Insane]
  1. 01:47:934 (1) - D: why ending on blue tick
  2. 02:33:945 (1,1,1) - Difference of ds seems too big
[toybot's Extra]
  1. 00:11:782 (1,2,3) - ye I know the pitch is increasing but I think it is too much for a calm intro
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Fixed all suggestions except for 02:33:945 (1,1,1) - Difference of ds seems too big
Chaoslitz
centre yr banner lo

Qualified
-kevincela-

Chaoslitz wrote:

centre yr banner lo

Qualified
:thinking:
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox

-kevincela- wrote:

Chaoslitz wrote:
centre yr banner lo

Qualified

:thinking:
:thinking:
AnatOWJIya
Depending on acting Ranking Criteria,max BG size is 1366x768
Woops,my fault didn't look at criteria for so long ;w;
Janpai
Congrats c: I really love kevincela's diff kyaaaaaaa >_<)/!
Sharu
Congrats :^)
Asphyxia
Onneksi olkoon
Aia

Asphyxia wrote:

Onneksi olkoon
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Kiitoksia :)
Alsty-
wahhh grats , i hope my mania mapset will get ranked too soon :3
Haruto
Congrats probox!!
Spork Lover
Isn't -kevincela- written incorrectly on the banner? :) (You're missing a dash)

Late congratz!!
Sanshie
background link please
frozz
Good map thx
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