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Panda Eyes - On My Own

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Seijiro

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00:28:730 (4,1) - I'm not really a fan of this overlap, you haven't overlapped before this so I don't see why you would want to start overlapping things now lol then when should I start overlapping lol. I did it on purpose and later on it gains more meaning. This was just an introduction and once the players finishes the map he understands why I did that
00:30:799 (1,2) - Could technically just have ds a bit more to make this a bit nicer, it kinda breaks away from your usual ds-ing, but spacing wise and playability-wise it doesn't played too much differently it's kinda the same as above and DS is the default one of the map, actually.
00:45:282 (3,4) - low key triggered that this kind of pause doesn't happen at 00:48:041 (3,4) - (tbh you should probably just change 00:45:282- cuz it's the only one that does the pause like this someone already suggested it and I guess you guys are right. Changed
01:01:144 (1,2,3) - I could see people misreading this as triplets, they don't really have a reason to assume that these are 1/2 since 3-stacked notes usually indicate a triplet, maybe find a way to make this more clear? actually, give me a way to fix it lol, 'cause the player has to assume there are no triplets whatsoever in this map. Star rating should be a hint, although it can be totally wrong sometimes, but whatever. Once they play it once they will know there are no triplets.
01:19:765 (3) - it's asymmetrical aaaaa zzzzzz yes, it is :-)
01:19:765 (3,1) - tbh people might just go straight from 3 -> 1, making this not overlap would help readability I guess I'll have sopmeone testplay this then, since I even put 1 more overlapped to make the number on it harder to read (and therefore make the player go to the isolated 4)
01:31:489 (1,2,3) - These are the only ones that don't overlap zzz, might as well change shapes so they do overlap like all the others it's a sort of introduction to 01:39:765 (1,3) - since I tell the player "hey, the overlap is not the only thing you might expect from this" and also it would feel too cramped to do it there. The fact they are "S" curves also is an equal exchange for the overlap imo, since they are not as "simple" as the other shapes with one angle/curve only

@ Gus
I don't really like the slider there but I fixed the kiai time which was a misclick lol


@ Shurelia
take 00:45:972 (1,2) - and compare it with 00:46:661 (3) - . The difference in sound was the thing that made me place their shapes like that. To enhance the high pitched sound on 00:46:661 - I used opposite slider directions, so when the sound occurs it has more impact on the player


Thanks everyone for the mods :3


UPDATE
Izzywing
Hobbes2's Light Insane

01:08:730 - This is a strong note that deserves a click. Please change the reverse slider into something that reflects that. Well compare it to 01:08:386 (2) - head or to 01:08:902; it's weak in comparison so I wanted it as a slider-tail.
01:24:937 (2) – apply to all the other ones too like this one, in particular this one cuz the note is even stronger here. same justification here; i also wanted diversity in the rhythm so it didnt feel stale as you played

01:12:523 (2) – melody gets a little strong here, consider doing two circles? this I agree with.

01:18:386 (5) – This should be a slider since the note feels held. Personally I would say the same thing about the ant-jumps, but at least the 1/1 breaks are trying to accomplish something that I'm more okay to just disagree with you. But when you have motion at 01:18:386 (5,6) – I don't see the reason to express the rhythm in this way when slider does a better job. reworked the pattern
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plaud pm me when you see this so we can respond to the mod for the collab together
Topic Starter
Plaudible

pinataman wrote:

Hi. Hope this helps!

[Easy]

00:30:799 (1) – move to ~ 200, 116 for smoother flow? shore

00:45:972 (3) – move to ~271, 128 for slightly sharper angle? seems to break DS every time i try D: i sharpened it a bit though

01:03:903 (5) – move to ~148, 14 for better blanket cant believe i miss this, thanks :U

01:48:730 (2,3,4,1) – This looks a little off. (4,1) doesn't blanket as well as the others. This pattern actually isn't that hard to get perfect though. I think the (2,1) blanket is probably the nicest, though moving it slightly to be perfect might help. Then take (2,1) and move it so that (1) is at 256, 192. Then do copy paste of (2) and rotate it by 120 degrees, and use that for (3). Do the same thing for (4), and it should come out a little nicer. Then just move the whole thing back. think i fix'd!

[Normal]

00:11:489 (1) – This section's rhythm felt too intense, especially for the beginning of the song/map. I liked calming it down. Here is how I think each combo's rhythm should go:
http://puu.sh/rNhYF/123ce7bfaa.jpg
http://puu.sh/rNi0M/8bda94ba2f.jpg
http://puu.sh/rNi7o/f43aaec049.jpg
http://puu.sh/rNia3/27a009889e.jpg
i think the first one is overdone on my part so i nerfed it, but i'm going to keep the rest


00:22:523 (1,2) – Change this to two ½ sliders
00:25:282 (1) - ^ did on this one for rhythmic diversity, i think the first is fine though :u some difference works

00:59:765 (5,6) – why not do what you did at 00:57:006 (5,6,7) - ? fits the melody better. ty for catching this, fix'd

[Collab Extra]

00:18:041 (6,7,1) - This angle didn't feel sharp enough, test out an angle like this: http://puu.sh/rMURK/29970ab584.jpg "the contrast from the previous sharp angles emphasizes the downbeat well"

01:06:661 (1,2) – Consider this direction for the flow? http://puu.sh/rNjuS/f735394c06.jpg "move it for me pls"

01:12:695 – The melody gets kind of strong here, so making this be two circles instead of a slider to pick up this note here could be cool. "too many circles"

01:17:006 (1,1) – Consider moving this to the right to have a more natural flow between these sliders? http://puu.sh/rMUCk/08225cdc1e.jpg sure, done

01:33:903 (4,5,1,2) – I didn't like this flow. Seems a bit forced going into the (1) slider and then again into the (2) slider, and I don't see what you're trying to reflect in the music by using this technique. "the downbeat is really intense, so it's fine making the flow uncomfortable to stress that. and going from 3 to 4 to 5 isn't anything weird so overall it fits the music"

01:45:282 (1,2) – Does this look better to you? http://puu.sh/rMUMN/d2b7f0595c.jpg yee, done
Good luck! thank mr pinata <3
Yamicchi

pinataman wrote:

[Yamicchi's Insane]

00:13:644 (6) – red ticks are stronger than blue ticks. This rhythm feels weird. Why not two circles instead of a slider?
00:17:782 (5) -
00:19:161 (6) - was trying to do something cool, fixed

00:44:592 (1) – until 00:55:627 (1) – I would say this is a calm section of the music. While jumps at 00:45:799 (4,1) – and 00:47:179 (4,1) – etc are very much appropriate, the distance of these jumps are a bit too high for a calm section. It'd be nice if you could tone these down a bit.
00:55:627 (1) – until 01:01:144 (1) – I kind of feel the same way here. The bass becomes a little less frequent, and the song still hasn't gotten it's kick yet. The map however has a general DS that's almost the same as the kiai. Try keeping this a bit more relaxed by nerfing parts like 00:55:972 (2,3) - and 00:58:730 (2,3,4) - I show people that this is a calm part by the objects I put in, not the spacing. Low spacing is suitable but very comfortable here

01:23:558 (3) – The melody gets kind of strong here. I think a reverse slider is not giving this strong part of the song enough credit, and I would like to see a few more clicks instead. I mainly focus on the drum and snare instead of the melody, so gonna keep it for now
Thank you~ :3

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Topic Starter
Plaudible
all difficulties updated, time for more modzzz
Mentai
[MrSergio]

it seems to me that this map is very strong in the sense of how aesthetics are implemented per micro level, so i'll look more closely at macro things

00:20:110 (2,3,4) - the 3 circles ds is indicative of the 1/4 spacing i agree, but this entire combo looks very out of place with the other aesthetics you use, it's very suffocating all bunched up in this corner and can be uncomfortable to read as well

00:22:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - i want to think about the linear ideas of flow in this section, it is very clearly a horizontal and then vertical flow idea, but starting here and forward 00:25:282 (1) all of the combo ideas are a circular flow. to me the linear flow may be too sharp of angles for the lack of specific sounds it wants to emphasize. just a thought

00:45:282 (3) - is this beat the one you want to emphasize with linear flow? it looks kind of awkward and feels awkward having it be basically right next to the slider end while a sharp movement feels weird for the sound. i feel like the 1 slider should have the linear flow rest and the 2 and 3 have a natural flow

00:47:351 (1,2,3) - same thing here uin theory, but the strongest sound isn't on 1 anymore so this is probably fine

00:50:455 (2,3,4) - this and 00:52:868 (1,2,3) are basically the exact same, but a much higher ds was used on the extended slider and 2 circles were mapped on the first combo. seems like an odd structural choice

00:56:661 (5) - i think this slider should be emphasized with large ds because of the huge bass hit here rather than 00:57:006 (1)

i think you should remap this part maybe to represent this bass hits accurately. a good idea i think would be to put two stacked circles before each bass hit, increase ds a good amount on a slider for the bass hit, and follow up with smaller ds sliders and repeat. i feel like it would follow the music very well

01:02:523 (1,2,3,4) - were this made to not be blankets purposefully? it looks odd, especially since the ds is not consistent here it is noticeable

i actually think that the flow ideas in the kiai are done extremely well, even for a person specifically looking for them


[Hobbes]

00:17:006 (1) - i would turn this slider around, you are following a very obvious counter clockwise pattern and this seems odd as it actually continues after the slider ends

00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - hm, the flow reset on the 3 circle seem like you want emphasize the 3, maybe have the 3 and 4 swap places to keep this combos flow consistent?

00:50:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - this usage of jumps and circles seems odd structurally. why outr of all the times this verse repeats is this the only unique pattern of almost entirely circles?

00:57:696 (5) - you emphasize this beat 00:56:661 (4) greatly due to the bass, but nnot this one? seems odd

00:59:765 (1,3) - i don't think these should have basically equal spacing, the extended slider deserves more kick to it i believe

01:05:972 (1) - i did not see this coming when i played it, just keep it in mind that people may question this slider in the future

01:06:661 (1,2,3,4) - structurally, this pattern only happens once, maybe make it like this pattern 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) to give it some more purpose

01:12:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - not sure how i feel about this pattern, i think using the same slider circle structure as the combo before bodes well as you use that a good amount of times here

01:17:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe if you make this pattern like the one i just mentioned, then there will be no structural issues really

01:23:041 (6) - is a linear and sharp movement here really a good way to emphasize this circle that has no real strong emphasis?

01:36:834 (4) - seems like an out of place vertical sharp movement, where you have been using horizontal sharp movements in this entire section

01:45:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:47:006 (2,3,4,5,6) do these circles have meaning? i don't hear anything worth putting them there, especially since the majority of this section you have been using 1/1 slider to represent these sounds. i would just use 1/2 sliders

that's all i've got really right now, hope this helps
Yoshimaro
i was asked to mod a thing and then got suuuuuuuuuper fucking lazy lol, but this is a good set so w/e

on top diff, 01:16:661 (3) - ctrl down arrow twice or 01:17:006 (1) - ctrl up arrow twice

have a star
beaw
can you fricking rank this already please thx
Seijiro

Mentai wrote:

[MrSergio]

it seems to me that this map is very strong in the sense of how aesthetics are implemented per micro level, so i'll look more closely at macro things

00:20:110 (2,3,4) - the 3 circles ds is indicative of the 1/4 spacing i agree, but this entire combo looks very out of place with the other aesthetics you use, it's very suffocating all bunched up in this corner and can be uncomfortable to read as well a screen would be helpful here since it feels fine for me...

00:22:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - i want to think about the linear ideas of flow in this section, it is very clearly a horizontal and then vertical flow idea, but starting here and forward 00:25:282 (1) all of the combo ideas are a circular flow. to me the linear flow may be too sharp of angles for the lack of specific sounds it wants to emphasize. just a thought there are specific sounds I'm following tho, and that's the bass/kick sound. I read your point several times now and I still can't understand what is actually the problem here... Maybe add a screen or give me a more practical example?

00:45:282 (3) - is this beat the one you want to emphasize with linear flow? it looks kind of awkward and feels awkward having it be basically right next to the slider end while a sharp movement feels weird for the sound. i feel like the 1 slider should have the linear flow rest and the 2 and 3 have a natural flow there's no specific emphasis in this section: the only emphasis is created through type of object (slider/circle) and breaks and overall the flow is linear everywhere, considering the short length of sliders here

00:47:351 (1,2,3) - same thing here uin theory, but the strongest sound isn't on 1 anymore so this is probably fine it's... the same...

00:50:455 (2,3,4) - this and 00:52:868 (1,2,3) are basically the exact same, but a much higher ds was used on the extended slider and 2 circles were mapped on the first combo. seems like an odd structural choice I'm honestly lost as to what I should consider as correct and wrong. It feels perfectly fine for me. The little difference in rhythm I create here is just to avoid things getting way too boring, but that's it to it I guess...

00:56:661 (5) - i think this slider should be emphasized with large ds because of the huge bass hit here rather than 00:57:006 (1) the stack before that slider makes up for the needed emphasis imo. If I do put more DS here it will end up being inconsistent with the rest, so I'd have to change a lot of stuff

i think you should remap this part maybe to represent this bass hits accurately. a good idea i think would be to put two stacked circles before each bass hit, increase ds a good amount on a slider for the bass hit, and follow up with smaller ds sliders and repeat. i feel like it would follow the music very well if you refer to the kiai time then nope, it was intentional to skip the kick sounds to give priority over the high pitch sound in foreground. Remapping is out of question, moreover with so few reasoning behind it, sorry. The bass is not the star of the show here and it won't be.

01:02:523 (1,2,3,4) - were this made to not be blankets purposefully? it looks odd, especially since the ds is not consistent here it is noticeable why do nowadays modders see a blanket in everything I wonder... No, it was intentional and I wasn't aiming to the blanket, but to how they curve to create a "flower's petal" effect

i actually think that the flow ideas in the kiai are done extremely well, even for a person specifically looking for them thanks, I guess o.O

Thanks a lot for the mod!
Let me give you some tips on how to improve your modding if you allow me to:
- if possible add some screens whenever there is something you want to explain but it becomes a little too complex. Images are easier to understand
- try to get more to the point of the suggestion instead of going around the matter. I found myself re-reading many times the same suggestion because it was tricky :/
- try incorporating the mapper's point of view when you mod. In my case I saw you totally disregarded what I wanted and suggested what you wanted. This is fine, but it would be better to consider what the mapper was looking for in the map, because you have a high chance to get denied this way
- you said you tried to give a look at the big picture of the map, but you ended up doing the opposite. If you check my map as a whole you'll see how it is connected (my almost 3 years of mapping ensure this, trust me ;) )

Thanks again :)


I fixed some timing issues on my own (due to hitsound copier screwing up stuff again)
http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/M5PFpdDb


PS: don't shoot kudosu if no one replied yet to the mod, Pluadible
Topic Starter
Plaudible
updated \:D/ and will keep in mind, srry
Izzywing
00:17:006 (1) - i would turn this slider around, you are following a very obvious counter clockwise pattern and this seems odd as it actually continues after the slider ends Flipped it around.

00:30:799 (1,2,3,4) - hm, the flow reset on the 3 circle seem like you want emphasize the 3, maybe have the 3 and 4 swap places to keep this combos flow consistent? 00:29:075 (5,1,2,3) - all follows clockwise flow; 3 is part of the clockwise flow. This continues onto the triplet, but there's a big jump to 7 to emphasize the clap, and the flow here isn't hard to play because the triplet is a pause and resets the flow.

00:50:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - this usage of jumps and circles seems odd structurally. why outr of all the times this verse repeats is this the only unique pattern of almost entirely circles? Different rhythm for variety and since it's a new measure with slightly different music the change is welcome imo

00:57:696 (5) - you emphasize this beat 00:56:661 (4) greatly due to the bass, but nnot this one? seems odd Changed

00:59:765 (1,3) - i don't think these should have basically equal spacing, the extended slider deserves more kick to it i believe

01:05:972 (1) - i did not see this coming when i played it, just keep it in mind that people may question this slider in the future [b]Well I don't think its super unpredictable, and it does do a good job of mapping the rhythm. I prefer to keep it.


01:06:661 (1,2,3,4) - structurally, this pattern only happens once, maybe make it like this pattern 01:10:799 (1,2,3,4) to give it some more purpose Yeah, I changed the one at 1:10 actually

01:12:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - not sure how i feel about this pattern, i think using the same slider circle structure as the combo before bodes well as you use that a good amount of times here Eh, I think the pattern is fine.

01:17:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe if you make this pattern like the one i just mentioned, then there will be no structural issues really Prefer as it is now.

01:23:041 (6) - is a linear and sharp movement here really a good way to emphasize this circle that has no real strong emphasis? adjusted

01:36:834 (4) - seems like an out of place vertical sharp movement, where you have been using horizontal sharp movements in this entire section True, but I don't think it's a problem.

01:45:799 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:47:006 (2,3,4,5,6) do these circles have meaning? i don't hear anything worth putting them there, especially since the majority of this section you have been using 1/1 slider to represent these sounds. i would just use 1/2 sliders I feel like this is the climax of the song and wanted an intense rhythm / pattern to show that. It's not an overmap so it should be fine.

that's all i've got really right now, hope this helps
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Plaudible please fix the hitsounds before updating!!
Pentori
hi im here
[General]
storyboard stuff:
SB\glow2.png is larger than the allowed maximum for moving images (640x1440 or 1920x480)

unused files:
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SB\shape1.png
SB\shape2.png
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also at 00:22:954 - your SB load peaks over 5.0x for a long period of time and can definitely be optimised so try fix that

the offset of the second red point at sounds way too early imo. try use offset 11506 and shift all timing points forward by 17ms

combo colours 3 and 4 look really similar, i couldn't even tell them apart when playing. i would either alternate the two colours by swapping the combo colour number around like http://puu.sh/rW2PF/d8cbd27849.png. or you could just delete/change combo 4 since the colours are very similar anyways
[Collab Extra]
Plaudible
00:00:498 - red and green timing lines have conflicting settings, make sure they have the same vol and sample
00:11:489 - ^
00:03:256 (1) - curving the first segment of the slider would make it look a lot nicer imo http://puu.sh/rW2js/5bcc5dda30.jpg
00:09:851 (1) - is there a specific need to have the spinner snapped weirdly? putting it on the blue tick is fine imo
00:23:041 (3) - i know this is a collab, but your rhythms/the sounds you follow should still be somewhat consistent throughout the map to provide an equal playing experience. there a 5plets on the red ticks here that hobbes' mapped but you left out, so you should try include them
00:23:558 (6) - there's a snare + kick here so it would make more sense to make this two circles to give equal emphasis to the drums, whereas when there is only 1 drum like at 00:24:937 (6) - it makes sense to only use one slider, which you have done
00:26:317 (6) - ^ same applies to the rest of these
00:32:523 (1) - is the nc really needed?
00:50:109 (1,5) - slider end is quite stacked with 00:50:972 (5,3)
01:06:144 (2,3,4) - pretty confusing to read imo since they're stacked to look like a stream, but i guess you could keep this if you really want
01:39:765 (1) - should silence these slider ends

Hobbes2
00:12:868 (1) - centre the red anchor.. this doesn't look very appealing
00:14:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i honestly feel you should change this up since 00:12:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:14:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:15:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty much all play the same. introducing variety greatly improves gameplay
00:21:144 (1) - could you perhaps avoid overlapping slider head and tail by making the slider a little longer, looks less cluttered that way imo
01:17:006 (1) - there r still very loud drums here that u shouldnt skip 01:17:178 - 01:17:351
01:28:730 (1,2) - i found that these dont play very well.. the slow sv into large spacing leads to lots of choppy flow maybe using less distance for these would work better but thats up to you. also u should silence the slider ends of stuff like 01:28:730 (1) - or at least make it soft sampleset

[Yammichi's Insane]
00:00:498 - 00:11:489 - make sure timing lines dont have conflicting values
00:09:937 (1) - weird snapping, just put it on the blue tick?
00:56:661 (1,3) - honestly it probably better to just swap nc's here for consistency. having the nc at 00:56:661 (1) - makes the combo pretty long..
nice work here

[Hobbes2's Light Insane]
avoid the pure white (255,255,255) combo colour as it can be very blinding to play in kiai times
00:00:498 - 00:11:489 - fix up timing line settings
00:17:523 (2,3) - no triplet at least?
00:20:282 (2,3) - ^ using the blue ticks in 1 combo then completely ignored them in other combo is quite questionable
00:22:523 (1) - and from this section onward you seem to ignore the 5plets :c since the music has increased in intensity it make much sense to decrease your density
00:27:523 - i hear a kick drum here so i wouldn't ignore this
01:10:282 (1) - nc isn't really necessary given that you didnt nc this before 01:08:903 (3)
01:20:282 (1) - remove nc, really isnt needed

[MrSergio's Hard]
00:24:592 (3) - 00:27:351 (4) - 00:29:765 (2) - 00:31:489 (3) - these are pretty weird imo because the 5plet starts and ends on the red ticks like u did for the previous sections. it might be better to rework these or shorten them to triplets since beats like 00:24:851 - don't exist and it probably isn't good to overmap in hard
01:14:248 (3) - u might want to avoid overlapping reverse arrows in hard just so reading becomes more straightforward. missing a reverse is very disorienting cos you skip a whole beat
01:41:834 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:00:498 - 00:11:489 - fix up timing lines
00:15:971 (1) - 00:18:730 (1) - 00:21:489 (1) - you probably dont need these nc's since you didnt nc 00:13:213 (4) - and it doesn't make much sense to have a 2 note combo in normal
00:27:006 (1) - ^ try fix the rest of these up yourself
00:54:247 (3,1) - you still should follow distance snapping here, the close distance will make beginners click way too early
00:58:213 (1) - you dont need this reverse slider imo since the strongest beat is on 00:58:385 - so you want to allow that to be clickable, like u did for 01:01:144 (1)
01:16:316 (1) - you originally didnt set this as nc eg. 01:10:799 (4) - so you should remove the nc here
01:21:833 (1) - ^

easy looks fine

good luck!
Topic Starter
Plaudible

Pentori wrote:

hi im here
[General]
leaving storyboard stuff to hokichi~

the offset of the second red point at sounds way too early imo. try use offset 11506 and shift all timing points forward by 17ms timing stuff scares me, ty mrsergio for helping me fix :u/ sounds a lot better!

combo colours 3 and 4 look really similar, i couldn't even tell them apart when playing. i would either alternate the two colours by swapping the combo colour number around like http://puu.sh/rW2PF/d8cbd27849.png. or you could just delete/change combo 4 since the colours are very similar anyways removed color 4!

[Collab Extra]
Plaudible
00:00:498 - red and green timing lines have conflicting settings, make sure they have the same vol and sample
00:11:489 - ^ fixed these across all difficulties for everyone~
00:03:256 (1) - curving the first segment of the slider would make it look a lot nicer imo http://puu.sh/rW2js/5bcc5dda30.jpg sure, done
00:09:851 (1) - is there a specific need to have the spinner snapped weirdly? putting it on the blue tick is fine imo lol idk wtf that was, fixed
00:23:041 (3) - i know this is a collab, but your rhythms/the sounds you follow should still be somewhat consistent throughout the map to provide an equal playing experience. there a 5plets on the red ticks here that hobbes' mapped but you left out, so you should try include them remapp'd
00:23:558 (6) - there's a snare + kick here so it would make more sense to make this two circles to give equal emphasis to the drums, whereas when there is only 1 drum like at 00:24:937 (6) - it makes sense to only use one slider, which you have done ahh gotcha, adjusted patterns and made those sliders into 2 circles instead
00:26:317 (6) - ^ same applies to the rest of these
00:32:523 (1) - is the nc really needed? removed in remap
00:50:109 (1,5) - slider end is quite stacked with 00:50:972 (5,3) fix'd
01:06:144 (2,3,4) - pretty confusing to read imo since they're stacked to look like a stream, but i guess you could keep this if you really want adjusted pattern
01:39:765 (1) - should silence these slider ends done

[Normal]
00:15:971 (1) - 00:18:730 (1) - 00:21:489 (1) - you probably dont need these nc's since you didnt nc 00:13:213 (4) - and it doesn't make much sense to have a 2 note combo in normal jesus my nc's were a mess, lmfao i should have double checked those, fixed
00:27:006 (1) - ^ try fix the rest of these up yourself done diddly did
00:54:247 (3,1) - you still should follow distance snapping here, the close distance will make beginners click way too early im garbage
00:58:213 (1) - you dont need this reverse slider imo since the strongest beat is on 00:58:385 - so you want to allow that to be clickable, like u did for 01:01:144 (1) done
01:16:316 (1) - you originally didnt set this as nc eg. 01:10:799 (4) - so you should remove the nc here im boosted
01:21:833 (1) - ^ why am i gold 1 i should be bronz

easy looks fine swog

good luck! thanks for mod \:D/
Yamicchi

Pentori wrote:

[Yammichi's Insane]
00:00:498 - 00:11:489 - make sure timing lines dont have conflicting values well Idk if Plau fixed it before I can see or if you're making mistake because atm the volume is consistent and so is the offset, I just use them to change SV, that's all
00:09:937 (1) - weird snapping, just put it on the blue tick? oops
00:56:661 (1,3) - honestly it probably better to just swap nc's here for consistency. having the nc at 00:56:661 (1) - makes the combo pretty long..
nice work here my bad. Fixed
Thank you Pentori :3

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Hokichi

Pentori wrote:

hi im here
[General]
storyboard stuff:
SB\glow2.png is larger than the allowed maximum for moving images (640x1440 or 1920x480)

unused files:
SB\cir.png
SB\shape1.png
SB\shape2.png
SB\shape3.png
SB\shape4.png

also at 00:22:954 - your SB load peaks over 5.0x for a long period of time and can definitely be optimised so try fix that
good luck!
About the unused files, please delete them for me, thanks

And about the optimizing thing, here is the link: Err... Don't click me ok?
Seijiro

Pentori wrote:

[MrSergio's Hard]
00:24:592 (3) - 00:27:351 (4) - 00:29:765 (2) - 00:31:489 (3) - these are pretty weird imo because the 5plet starts and ends on the red ticks like u did for the previous sections. it might be better to rework these or shorten them to triplets since beats like 00:24:851 - don't exist and it probably isn't good to overmap in hard let's say that I agree there is no beat in the music here, but due to the nature of the sounds on the previous 3 1/4 beats it feels almost the same to me. The player doesn't really have to click on it either so it doesn't add any difficulty overall. Moreover, I already use few patterns, it would become way too boring to reduce this to a pattern similar to what I used already lol
01:14:248 (3) - u might want to avoid overlapping reverse arrows in hard just so reading becomes more straightforward. missing a reverse is very disorienting cos you skip a whole beat but look: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6423206 It's not really a big deal in gameplay here, since nothing really covers the arrow once you move on 2
01:41:834 (3) - ^ ok, this one is probably a bit closer in timing to the one above but I already used once this pattern and it really feels natural to me right now. I can easily change my mind with a screen here xD
Thanks Pentori :3~
Izzywing

Pentori wrote:

Hobbes2
00:12:868 (1) - centre the red anchor.. this doesn't look very appealing Okay
00:14:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i honestly feel you should change this up since 00:12:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 00:14:248 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 00:15:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty much all play the same. introducing variety greatly improves gameplay Okay, I added some variety
00:21:144 (1) - could you perhaps avoid overlapping slider head and tail by making the slider a little longer, looks less cluttered that way imo Making it longer is a neat idea but I just added more slider nodes and adjusted the shape instead.
01:17:006 (1) - there r still very loud drums here that u shouldnt skip 01:17:178 - 01:17:351 I agree with you, but I think it's more important for the player to have this downtime. I am open to changing this, but as of right now I value the downtime over the drums.
01:28:730 (1,2) - i found that these dont play very well.. the slow sv into large spacing leads to lots of choppy flow maybe using less distance for these would work better but thats up to you. also u should silence the slider ends of stuff like 01:28:730 (1) - or at least make it soft sampleset The choppy flow thing was something I noticed but I've' found that I actually like it; these don't play super well but I think that emphasizes them better if that makes any sense. It's not too terrible, but it's weird enough that it's a bit noticeable. I don't think it's too bad, which should make it fine. I did do the soft sampleset thing.

[Hobbes2's Light Insane]
avoid the pure white (255,255,255) combo colour as it can be very blinding to play in kiai times Done.
00:00:498 - 00:11:489 - fix up timing line settings ya
00:17:523 (2,3) - no triplet at least?
00:20:282 (2,3) - ^ using the blue ticks in 1 combo then completely ignored them in other combo is quite questionable Well, I had it as uses blue ticks doesnt uses blue ticks doesnt, but I implemented a triplet in th first one, second one I don't want to change the pattern.
00:22:523 (1) - and from this section onward you seem to ignore the 5plets :c since the music has increased in intensity it make much sense to decrease your density Good point lol, remapped some parts
00:27:523 - i hear a kick drum here so i wouldn't ignore this ya
01:10:282 (1) - nc isn't really necessary given that you didnt nc this before 01:08:903 (3) woops
01:20:282 (1) - remove nc, really isnt needed woops
thanks!

light insane - http://pastebin.com/3k6cP7ps

collab extra - http://pastebin.com/kjN6way5
HappyRocket88
Hi! \w/ I was told by Plaudible whoi was told by Hobbes2 to take a little look of the extra difficulty!

Here's the insane discussion we had trough PM (ง ͠° ͟ل͜ ͡°)ง
2016-10-29 14:18 Plaudible: hey happyrocket :u/ hobbes sent me to u
2016-10-29 14:18 Plaudible: wanted to ask if you could check my map for overall quality
2016-10-29 14:18 Plaudible: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074246 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Collab Extra]]
2016-10-29 14:21 HappyRocket88: :o
2016-10-29 14:22 HappyRocket88: ACTION goes to murder Hobbes2*
2016-10-29 14:22 Plaudible: i totally would too xd
2016-10-29 14:22 HappyRocket88: I'm...
2016-10-29 14:23 HappyRocket88: not so good at modding ;w;
2016-10-29 14:23 HappyRocket88: but I'll try to help! >w<
2016-10-29 14:23 Plaudible: ty :d/
2016-10-29 14:23 Plaudible: mainly the extra cause we suck at mapping, pentori seemed fine with the rest of the set xd
2016-10-29 14:31 HappyRocket88: Wao
2016-10-29 14:31 HappyRocket88: I got a B but in general it felt smooth >w<
2016-10-29 14:31 HappyRocket88: Also the storyboard is awesome! :O
2016-10-29 14:31 Plaudible: kk :u
2016-10-29 14:32 Plaudible: yea hokichi's great
2016-10-29 14:32 Plaudible: should i get a few more mods you think before poking sheela? :x
2016-10-29 14:32 HappyRocket88: I
2016-10-29 14:32 HappyRocket88: don't know /w\
2016-10-29 14:32 HappyRocket88: For me it feels polished
2016-10-29 14:32 HappyRocket88: except on some parts
2016-10-29 14:33 Plaudible: any specifics? :>
2016-10-29 14:34 HappyRocket88: Yeah. /u\
2016-10-29 14:34 HappyRocket88: For example here:
2016-10-29 14:34 HappyRocket88: 00:12:023 (3,4,5,6,7) - vs 00:13:403 (3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-10-29 14:34 HappyRocket88: Is there any reason why the first one is so spaced? /u\
2016-10-29 14:35 HappyRocket88: While playing it felt somewhat akward to move the cursor on that part because it felt a little bit overspaced
2016-10-29 14:35 HappyRocket88: I think it would be nicer if you used the same DS over those quintuplets
2016-10-29 14:36 HappyRocket88: in that way the transition wouldn't become so harsh as this pattern does 00:12:023 (3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-10-29 14:36 Plaudible: aa i did consistent, hobbes said he wanted to emphasize melody pitch tho xd idk
2016-10-29 14:36 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-10-29 14:37 Plaudible: sounds like poo to me cause 00:16:161 (2,3,4,5,6) -
2016-10-29 14:37 Plaudible: bbrb let me harass him
2016-10-29 14:37 Plaudible: hold up im gonna eat some lunch real quick, but keep sending stuff and i'll check it when im bak
2016-10-29 14:37 HappyRocket88: 00:32:023 (6,1) - I think this distace can be increased! >w<
2016-10-29 14:38 HappyRocket88: Ohh... actually it's not too much but ok! owo7
2016-10-29 14:43 HappyRocket88: 01:46:506 (6,1) - While I agree the emphasis is relevant to highlight, I don't really suggest to increase the spacing so much as this jump does ;w;
2016-10-29 14:44 HappyRocket88: Don't you think that by doing ctrl + g here the transition would become more readable? :o
2016-10-29 14:48 HappyRocket88: 01:48:058 (1,2) - aesthestically talking, the pattern lloks a bit crampped. /u\ It's not bad but I think it would hurt no one if you place them like [this https://mingi.s-ul.eu/H0TGByFC] instead
2016-10-29 14:56 Plaudible: kk am back now :u sry
2016-10-29 14:57 Plaudible: so far that first one with distance increase, would something like this be ok http://puu.sh/rZQzi/7aaac41fd8.jpg
2016-10-29 14:57 HappyRocket88: Hummm...
2016-10-29 14:57 HappyRocket88: does it really need to overlap it? :o
2016-10-29 14:59 Plaudible: hmm
2016-10-29 14:59 Plaudible: cant think a way to structure it where it doesnt look weird XD
2016-10-29 15:04 Plaudible: fixed 2nd thing with this http://puu.sh/rZQWx/1174ede6de.jpg and did your thing for 3rd :u
2016-10-29 15:05 HappyRocket88: Ohhh! =w=b
2016-10-29 15:05 HappyRocket88: Make sure the slider of the third suggestion
2016-10-29 15:05 HappyRocket88: doesn't create an overlap with (5)
2016-10-29 15:06 Plaudible: oo ur right, whoops
2016-10-29 15:06 Plaudible: hmm
2016-10-29 15:08 Plaudible: kk re did it a bit http://puu.sh/rZRbI/d82e7261a6.jpg
2016-10-29 15:08 HappyRocket88: \w.w/
2016-10-29 15:08 HappyRocket88: Hopefully people won't complain because of the blanket ;w;
2016-10-29 15:10 Plaudible: wait huh? :x
2016-10-29 15:11 HappyRocket88: Because as (2) slider-end is stacked over (1) slider-end
2016-10-29 15:11 HappyRocket88: the blanket of both slider should look pretty
2016-10-29 15:12 Plaudible: o wait like how the end of 1 blankets 2? :o
2016-10-29 15:12 Plaudible: ahh bit confused >_<
2016-10-29 15:15 HappyRocket88: Yeah xDD
2016-10-29 15:15 HappyRocket88: But don't mind me /w\
2016-10-29 15:15 HappyRocket88: Someone will word it better xD
2016-10-29 15:17 Plaudible: kk
2016-10-29 15:18 Plaudible: hey post on the ofurms for kudos :u
2016-10-29 15:18 Plaudible: also hmu if u ever need a mod on anything
2016-10-29 15:19 HappyRocket88: Ayyy /w\
2016-10-29 15:19 HappyRocket88: Was it helpful? :o
2016-10-29 15:20 Plaudible: yee

Best of success with this and have fun! :3
Ayyri
M4M.

Fix the timing and sb stuff. w

[Yamicchi's Insane]
  1. 01:28:057 - Would suggest using a normal whistle for the slider slide here, since I already asked everyone else on the set about it, and they agreed it sounded pretty cool. :p
Plaudible
2016-10-29 14:05 Plaudible: hey ayyri if u arent too busy wud u be down for a m4m :u
2016-10-29 14:05 Ayyri: Depends.
2016-10-29 14:08 Plaudible: ayyri u cant leave me hanging liek this xd
2016-10-29 14:09 Ayyri: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/seOfXXI.png
2016-10-29 14:09 Ayyri: ?
2016-10-29 14:09 Plaudible: ye
2016-10-29 14:09 Plaudible: depends wat :O
2016-10-29 14:09 Ayyri: On your map, as well as my own.
2016-10-29 14:10 Plaudible: o
2016-10-29 14:10 Plaudible: honestly you could send me like 10 to mod cause i have literally nothing to do this weekend and im bored af
2016-10-29 14:10 Plaudible: heres mine tho
2016-10-29 14:10 Plaudible: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074246 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Collab Extra]]
2016-10-29 14:10 Ayyri: Ah.
2016-10-29 14:10 Ayyri: I've mapped this song before.
2016-10-29 14:11 Plaudible: :o
2016-10-29 14:11 Plaudible: pentori looked it over and didnt have much to say with our easy through insane, its just our collab that was pretty garbo
2016-10-29 14:13 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074247 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Easy]]
2016-10-29 14:13 Ayyri: 01:28:057 - Could have a cool normal whistle for the slider slide
2016-10-29 14:14 Ayyri: Just personal preference though.
2016-10-29 14:14 Plaudible: o i never understood hitsounding sliderbodies
2016-10-29 14:14 Plaudible: may just be my skin or someth, how does it work o-
2016-10-29 14:14 Ayyri: Click on the slider body
2016-10-29 14:15 Ayyri: When the border is red, you've selected it.
2016-10-29 14:15 Ayyri: And apply whatever hs you want to use there.
2016-10-29 14:15 Ayyri: Most don't work too well
2016-10-29 14:15 Ayyri: Commonly used ss are normal whistle and soft whistle
2016-10-29 14:15 Plaudible: oo i hear it on default skin
2016-10-29 14:15 Ayyri: Yeah
2016-10-29 14:15 Plaudible: gotcha
2016-10-29 14:15 Plaudible: kk added
2016-10-29 14:16 Ayyri: nice cut ver btw
2016-10-29 14:16 Plaudible: xD
2016-10-29 14:16 Plaudible: idk i just felt it was too repetitive for full length
2016-10-29 14:17 Ayyri: Mhm
2016-10-29 14:18 Ayyri: 00:56:161 -
2016-10-29 14:18 Plaudible: kk added whistles to my difs
2016-10-29 14:18 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074250 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Normal]]
2016-10-29 14:18 Ayyri: Kind of weird that the higher piano note isn't hittable here, but it's just a slider end
2016-10-29 14:18 Ayyri: ):
2016-10-29 14:18 Plaudible: should i map like 00:58:402 (1,2) -
2016-10-29 14:19 Ayyri: I liked that rhythm better, yeah.
2016-10-29 14:19 Plaudible: kk
2016-10-29 14:19 Ayyri: Ignores less of the piano than the current one
2016-10-29 14:21 Plaudible: fix'd
Son
2016-10-29 14:23 Ayyri: my son
2016-10-29 14:23 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074248 Panda Eyes - On My Own [MrSergio's Hard]]
2016-10-29 14:23 Ayyri: 01:06:161 -
2016-10-29 14:23 Ayyri: why isn't this hittable :c
2016-10-29 14:24 MrSergio: I mapped without hitsounds everything, so I never considered that as an interesting beat
2016-10-29 14:25 Ayyri: o
2016-10-29 14:25 Ayyri: it's basically the same as the beats on 01:06:333 - and 01:06:506 -
2016-10-29 14:25 Ayyri: and you made those two, plus 01:05:988 - hittable
2016-10-29 14:25 Ayyri: so 01:06:161 - got skipped :c
2016-10-29 14:25 MrSergio: I honestly don't see a strong reason to really make it clickable tho, seeing the rest of the map. If you take 01:06:161 - 01:06:333 - 01:06:506 - these three alone, I feel like the first one is like the intro for the other two
2016-10-29 14:26 MrSergio: hence you don't click it
2016-10-29 14:26 Ayyri: if that is how you see it, then that's fine
2016-10-29 14:26 MrSergio: it's similar to 01:01:506 (3) - in concept
2016-10-29 14:27 MrSergio: those beats are equally the same in the music I suppose, but I couldn't afford a too dense note density and moreover I barely used many circles
2016-10-29 14:27 MrSergio: if you have a nice suggestion for 01:05:988 (1,2,3) - I can change it tho
2016-10-29 14:27 Ayyri: I suggested this to Plaudible, and he accepted it, but I wanted to know what you think of having a normal whistle for the slider slide at 01:28:057 -
2016-10-29 14:27 MrSergio: I just feel it is right like that because I used that pattern
2016-10-29 14:28 MrSergio: sure
2016-10-29 14:28 Ayyri: What you used is okay, you were able to defend it fine. :3
Hobbes2
2016-10-29 14:29 Ayyri: boo
2016-10-29 14:29 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074249 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Hobbes2's Light Insane]]
2016-10-29 14:29 Ayyri: 00:16:144 - could you make this more evenly stacked
2016-10-29 14:30 Ayyri: it bothers me that it ends up more towards the right as it goes down :c
2016-10-29 14:30 Hobbes2: well that was kinda on purpose
2016-10-29 14:30 Ayyri: or if the intention was to make it more curved towards the next slider
2016-10-29 14:30 Ayyri: ^^
2016-10-29 14:31 Hobbes2: yea :p
2016-10-29 14:31 Ayyri: maybe make it more obvious
2016-10-29 14:31 Ayyri: cuz right now 3 just looks weird zz
2016-10-29 14:31 Hobbes2: ok
2016-10-29 14:31 Ayyri: 00:20:368 - shouldn't there be a note here
2016-10-29 14:31 Ayyri: 00:17:782 - here as well
2016-10-29 14:32 Ayyri: like you did at 00:18:902 -
2016-10-29 14:32 Hobbes2: well i wanted to vary up the rhythm
2016-10-29 14:32 Hobbes2: since its a pretty repetitive part of the song
2016-10-29 14:32 Ayyri: D:
2016-10-29 14:32 Hobbes2: if it was all the same thats no fun
2016-10-29 14:32 Ayyri: imo it's fine to have notes there, since the rhythm changes right after
2016-10-29 14:33 Ayyri: because it sounds empty there, since you just stopped following it in those two places
2016-10-29 14:33 Ayyri: if it was earlier, maybe, but eh
2016-10-29 14:33 Ayyri: like in this pattern, 00:23:902 - i think skipping the triplet sound works out well
2016-10-29 14:34 Hobbes2: hm
2016-10-29 14:34 Ayyri: same the next time that you did it at 00:26:661 -
2016-10-29 14:34 Ayyri: p:
2016-10-29 14:34 Hobbes2: ill add a triplet 00:20:282 (2) - here
2016-10-29 14:34 Ayyri: niceee
2016-10-29 14:36 Hobbes2: 00:17:782 - this one is fine i think
2016-10-29 14:36 Ayyri: ya
2016-10-29 14:36 Ayyri: that one was moreso optional
2016-10-29 14:37 Ayyri: 01:04:075 - and 01:04:420 -
2016-10-29 14:37 Ayyri: hearing these slider ends so loudly kind of distracts from the hits at 01:03:902 - and 01:04:247 -
2016-10-29 14:37 Ayyri: would suggest making them a bit quieter
2016-10-29 14:38 Hobbes2: hmm
2016-10-29 14:38 Hobbes2: in the music 01:03:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - are all the same
2016-10-29 14:38 Hobbes2: i made 1 and 2 sliders so as to not go overboard in difficulty
2016-10-29 14:39 Hobbes2: so making the slider ends quiter would make it kinda inconsistent
2016-10-29 14:39 Ayyri: but the build up fades in :v
2016-10-29 14:39 Ayyri: it's like the build up is already at it's max with that kind of vol
2016-10-29 14:39 Hobbes2: o
2016-10-29 14:39 Hobbes2: yeah you're right
2016-10-29 14:40 Ayyri: 01:28:040 -
2016-10-29 14:40 Hobbes2: done
2016-10-29 14:40 Ayyri: I suggested this to Plaudible and Sergio, and they accepted it, so I'll ask your opinion on it as well. What about having a normal whistle on for the slider slide here?
2016-10-29 14:41 Hobbes2: sec lemme change skins
2016-10-29 14:41 Hobbes2: my preferred skins has no sliderslide
2016-10-29 14:42 Hobbes2: o its nice
2016-10-29 14:42 Ayyri: o
2016-10-29 14:42 Hobbes2: yeah ill do that
2016-10-29 14:42 Ayyri: nicee
2016-10-29 14:42 Ayyri: aaaaaaa
2016-10-29 14:42 Ayyri: 01:28:557 -
2016-10-29 14:42 Ayyri: this stack looks bad for the overall pattern but i doubt you'd wanna change it
2016-10-29 14:43 Ayyri: because it kinda ruins the effect
2016-10-29 14:43 Ayyri: but the stack D:
2016-10-29 14:43 Hobbes2: i like that stack :v
2016-10-29 14:43 Hobbes2: i do agree it looks weird
2016-10-29 14:44 Ayyri: sameeee D:
2016-10-29 14:44 Hobbes2: but its like the stack at 01:44:937 (5,6,1) -
2016-10-29 14:44 Hobbes2: hmm
2016-10-29 14:44 Hobbes2: maybe i can custom stack or something
2016-10-29 14:44 Ayyri: that stack looks okay though
2016-10-29 14:44 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6442833 ?
2016-10-29 14:44 Ayyri: looks better! :D
2016-10-29 14:45 Hobbes2: swell
Collab Extra Plaudible
2016-10-29 14:59 Ayyri: 00:29:954 - 
2016-10-29 14:59 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074246 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Collab Extra]]
2016-10-29 14:59 Plaudible: eyy
2016-10-29 14:59 Ayyri: could you make this a bit more evenly curved?
2016-10-29 14:59 Plaudible: kk
2016-10-29 14:59 Plaudible: btw hobbs is doing stuff irl so he'll be a bit
2016-10-29 14:59 Ayyri: a
2016-10-29 14:59 Ayyri: was already writing with him
2016-10-29 15:00 Ayyri: lo
2016-10-29 15:00 Plaudible: what do u mean evenly? :o
2016-10-29 15:00 Ayyri: did you make the curve manually
2016-10-29 15:00 Plaudible: o he didnt leave then, time to rek him
2016-10-29 15:00 Plaudible: i used the ctrl+shift+f thing
2016-10-29 15:00 Plaudible: grid snap may have screwed it tho idk
2016-10-29 15:00 Plaudible: i can remake
2016-10-29 15:00 Ayyri: ya
2016-10-29 15:01 Ayyri: cuz it looks like
2016-10-29 15:01 Ayyri: 3 and 4 aren't the same as 5, 6, and 7
2016-10-29 15:01 Plaudible: kk fixd
2016-10-29 15:02 Ayyri: told hobbes about this
2016-10-29 15:02 Ayyri: but the hs at 01:03:919 -
2016-10-29 15:02 Ayyri: on the red ticks, sound really loud in comparison to the ones on the whites
2016-10-29 15:02 Ayyri: and really sudden
2016-10-29 15:02 Ayyri: cuz the build up is fading in, but everything is the same vol
2016-10-29 15:03 Plaudible: at 01:03:920 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ?
2016-10-29 15:03 Ayyri: ya
2016-10-29 15:03 Plaudible: o that's my bad, cause i hitsounded it for him xd
2016-10-29 15:03 Ayyri: o
2016-10-29 15:03 Ayyri: rip
2016-10-29 15:03 Plaudible: kk i'll add more points and make it gradual
2016-10-29 15:03 Ayyri: rad
2016-10-29 15:04 Plaudible: sqrt
2016-10-29 15:05 Ayyri: 01:28:057 - did you do the cool nornal whistle here
2016-10-29 15:05 Plaudible: o yea taht sounds a lot better
2016-10-29 15:05 Plaudible: and yee i did
2016-10-29 15:06 Ayyri: nicee
Collab Extra Hobbes
2016-10-29 14:55 Ayyri: 00:14:954 - and 00:15:126 - 
2016-10-29 14:55 Ayyri: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1074246 Panda Eyes - On My Own [Collab Extra]]
2016-10-29 14:55 Ayyri: why have these two so far apart
2016-10-29 14:55 Ayyri: :v
2016-10-29 14:55 Hobbes2: well
2016-10-29 14:55 Hobbes2: 00:14:954 -
2016-10-29 14:55 Hobbes2: the kickslider plays like a circle
2016-10-29 14:55 Hobbes2: so the spacing is misleading
2016-10-29 14:57 Ayyri: yes
2016-10-29 14:57 Ayyri: just seems weird in terms of how beat is emphasized in the song
2016-10-29 14:58 Hobbes2: if you make it a circle
2016-10-29 14:58 Hobbes2: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6442960
2016-10-29 14:58 Hobbes2: youll see the spacing to 6 is smaller than the spacing to 7
2016-10-29 14:58 Hobbes2: which fits cos 7's a clap
2016-10-29 14:58 Hobbes2: if I made 6 spaced any less it would ruin aesthetics :(
2016-10-29 15:08 Ayyri: ye
2016-10-29 15:08 Ayyri: i feel ya
Tycani
Don't know if you're still accepting GD's, but if so, here's mine: (If you have complaints about the sliders, just tell me.)
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Topic Starter
Plaudible
sorry dude, not accepting gd's since set is done >w<

for next time though, use the "code" button when posting this to post the map code, because the brackets and whatnot get lost in formatting.

ty though
Tycani

Plaudible wrote:

sorry dude, not accepting gd's since set is done >w<

for next time though, use the "code" button when posting this to post the map code, because the brackets and whatnot get lost in formatting.

ty though
Ah well. It was fun to map though! Hope this set gets approved regardless!
SnowNiNo_


  • [Easy]
  1. 00:45:989 (3,1) - 00:48:748 (3,1) - spacing is a bit off
  2. 00:54:265 (3,1) - consist the spacing
  3. 01:03:920 (5) - NC
  • [MrSergio's Hard]
  1. 01:19:782 (3) - shape here feel pretty werid lol
  • [Hobbes2's Light Insane]
  1. 00:20:299 (2,3) - sound here is more like a triplet instead of a kick, cuz the kick here isnt emphasizing anything lol
  2. 00:28:574 (1) - unnecessary NC
  3. 00:50:988 - isnt a good idea to skip the sound here xd
  4. 01:06:506 - it can give more impact and playability if you add a note here and reduce a reverse
  • [Yamicchi's Insane]
  1. 01:04:609 (1,2,3,4) - lol the music is getting more intense so the spacing here should be increased instead of decreased
  2. 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - this plays like 1/1 you know lol, ill spaced them out to avoid misread
  3. 01:44:954 (1) - unnecessary NC for emphasis, since you didnt do it in the whole kiai but only here, so it seems unnecessary
  • [Collab Extra]
  1. 00:13:403 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:18:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing with other stream, the music didnt changed so you dont need to change the spacing
  2. 01:19:781 (5) - the flow 4>5 is a bit awkward since the spacing is too small, suggest to stack the place where 7 is and move 7 too 259 358 or swhere else similar
  3. 01:44:954 (1) - unnecessary NC for emphasis, since you didnt do it in the whole kiai but only here, so it seems unnecessary
GL~ :)
Topic Starter
Plaudible

SnowNiNo_ wrote:



  • [Easy]
  1. 00:45:989 (3,1) - 00:48:748 (3,1) - spacing is a bit off fixd
  2. 00:54:265 (3,1) - consist the spacing fixd
  3. 01:03:920 (5) - NC fixd
  • [Collab Extra]
  1. 00:13:403 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:18:920 (2,3,4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing with other stream, the music didnt changed so you dont need to change the spacing im pretty sure hobbes' reasoning for this was that the emphasis and strength of the melody is different for these two parts, so he made the ds for them accordingly.
  2. 01:19:781 (5) - the flow 4>5 is a bit awkward since the spacing is too small, suggest to stack the place where 7 is and move 7 too 259 358 or swhere else similaradjusted
  3. 01:44:954 (1) - unnecessary NC for emphasis, since you didnt do it in the whole kiai but only here, so it seems unnecessary it's the only part of the song with the two isolated drum claps though :(
GL~ :) ty for mod :u/
Izzywing

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Hobbes2's Light Insane]
  1. 00:20:299 (2,3) - sound here is more like a triplet instead of a kick, cuz the kick here isnt emphasizing anything lol Hm, this was mostly for variety / structure as opposed to the kick really emphasizing anything
  2. 00:28:574 (1) - unnecessary NC fixed
  3. 00:50:988 - isnt a good idea to skip the sound here xd I did it to emphasize this sound 00:50:816 (4) -
  4. 01:06:506 - it can give more impact and playability if you add a note here and reduce a reverse [b]no i like this because the drums here are decidedly different from the rest of the song, so using a 1/2 double reverse slider fits that.
ty!

http://pastebin.com/AVGPbpxm
Yamicchi

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

  • [Yamicchi's Insane]
  1. 01:04:609 (1,2,3,4) - lol the music is getting more intense so the spacing here should be increased instead of decreased yes, but actually the echo is going closer instead, so I believe the spacing is fine
  2. 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - this plays like 1/1 you know lol, ill spaced them out to avoid misread Again I think people who can play insane can get through this pattern (at least with a few x100) without a choke, and the pattern looks pretty fine to me now
  3. 01:44:954 (1) - unnecessary NC for emphasis, since you didnt do it in the whole kiai but only here, so it seems unnecessary oops
Thank you

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440,288,62196,1,2,0:1:0:0:
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260,344,69609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,212,79092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
152,336,79265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,79437,2,0,P|108:108|176:84,2,101.999996887207,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,268,79954,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,84,80127,2,0,P|220:36|176:8,1,101.999996887207,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,136,82713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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312,128,83230,5,4,0:2:0:0:
188,216,83403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,308,84092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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200,232,87196,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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32,320,93575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,360,93920,2,0,L|296:368,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,268,94609,2,0,P|264:228|268:176,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,344,95127,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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296,216,95989,2,0,P|312:256|304:304,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,100,96506,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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428,344,97023,6,0,L|292:336,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,332,97368,2,0,P|252:292|268:240,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,164,97713,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,292,97885,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,96,98058,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,232,98230,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,160,98403,6,0,P|268:108|292:32,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,24,98747,2,0,L|408:28,2,85,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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380,184,99437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,184,99609,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,172,99782,6,0,L|172:328,1,127.5,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,344,100127,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,220,100299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,308,100816,2,0,L|352:316,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,224,101161,6,0,L|364:236,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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248,212,102196,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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348,140,103058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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48,112,107023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,196,107196,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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369,315,109265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Ayyri
The extra difficulty is fun to play.
Topic Starter
Plaudible
thanks bae-yyri <3
Weriko
OWAWWWWWWW GZ IM PROUD OF YA
Yamicchi
Yas. Finally, a ranked GD
_DT3
Woaah, gratz for the bubble Plaudible!
Topic Starter
Plaudible
tyty \:D/
Yamicchi
Save the gratz for the heart guys lol gratz!
Topic Starter
Plaudible
yea, most likely this is gonna be the end result xd

Ashton

Yamicchi wrote:

Yas. Finally, a ranked GD

sigh


IT'S NOT RANKED YET NEKO-SAN MAP STILL HAS A CHANCE TO BE YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP YAMICCHIDESU!!!


btw one of the story board files are larger than the allowed maximun:

SB\glow2.png (1100x1100)



current allowed max is (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
sheela

CanadianBaka wrote:

Yamicchi wrote:

Yas. Finally, a ranked GD

sigh


IT'S NOT RANKED YET NEKO-SAN MAP STILL HAS A CHANCE TO BE YOUR FIRST RANKED MAP YAMICCHIDESU!!!


btw one of the story board files are larger than the allowed maximun:

SB\glow2.png (1100x1100)



current allowed max is (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
This rule has been updated. We can now use a dimension of and in-between 1920x1200 pixels, stating this:
Storyboard images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels. The storyboard editor works based on osu! pixels with an internal maximum width of 854 pixels and a height of 480 pixels. If you are using an image bigger than that, you may need to scale accordingly.
So you shouldn't rely on the tool and you should check the Ranking Criteria just in case anything changes.

@Plaudible: I'll be back with a mod hopefully during the weekends.
Topic Starter
Plaudible
:U ty sheela
Ashton
sorry for the misunderstanding, sheela.
sheela
Hi hi!

[SB]
  1. I always optimize my image files to save up space, so if you want, here are the optimized files: https://puu.sh/shchz/b07effc48c.zip. Beware that it is not like compressing an image to JPEG.
  2. 00:09:808 - The sudden fade out here works with difficulties that have a spinner here. It looks weird in the easier difficulties, so I would probably remove that fade here.
[Collab Extra]
Plaudible
  1. 00:31:850 (5,1) - In this part there are a lot of stacks, so you should stack these ones too to stay consistent.
  2. 00:52:885 (1,2) - I'd shorten the distance to around 2.25x. The current felt sudden and not fitting with this part.
  3. 01:01:850 until 01:03:919 - Rather have a smaller spacing that gradually gets bigger (but not too big) in this part to emphasize next part 01:03:919 -. Because the current spacing is similar to the next part, the transition would stay the same, and it's not really fun.
  4. 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - Adding little jumps in a part where the intensity stays constant, and there's only one sound playing here, it doesn't fit. By switching (2) and (3) you would get that pattern with a constant spacing, which I think suits better this part.
  5. 01:44:954 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing at like 1.0x. It would follow this part that omitted a sound and approaches to silence, much better.
Hobbes2
  1. 01:12:540 (2) - Switching the head and tail would make the flow of 01:12:196 (1,2) - much better, since you don't have to repeat the same direction as the current (2) ends. This flow would also fit with the sounds in the music, as one direction follows one sounds, while another direction follows the other sound.
  1. 01:06:678 until 01:28:747 - I thought the intention here is to separate the playfield in two, and each mapper maps their own side, but it's apparently not. So, I highly suggest you spread out your objects more than one side. Especially you, Hobbes2; your sliders and majority of your hircicles are always placed on the left side, only the end of your part is more to the right. It would get less boring to play in my opinion.
[Yamicchi's Insane]
  1. 00:00:498 (1) - If you want THE perfect symmetry, move or edit the last slider node's coordinations to x:376.
Only that nazi point; good job with the difficulty.

[Hobbes2's Light Insane]
  1. 00:17:885 (5) - 00:47:713 (2) - I advise you move them out of their overlap to avoid readability issues, especially when they are shaped as a part of the other slider, and placed under that part.
  2. 00:30:472 (7) - Not for the same reason as above, but maybe you can shape it differently than 00:29:437 (1) -, since both beats are not the same.
  3. 00:20:299 (2) - I don't see the point of adding a random kickslider here, when this is the only kickslider throughout the map. Two hitcircles instead would be more consistent.
[MrSergio's Hard]
  1. 01:10:127 (3) - Nothing unrankable, but maybe move this down to avoid the little touch with the HP bar.
Nothing else. Cool difficulty.

I think that's it. Feel free to call me back!
Topic Starter
Plaudible

sheela wrote:

Hi hi! \:D/

[Collab Extra]
Plaudible
  1. 00:31:850 (5,1) - In this part there are a lot of stacks, so you should stack these ones too to stay consistent. ty for writing this in for me, just wanted to make sure that i'd fix it while fixing other stuff w/ the mod
  2. 00:52:885 (1,2) - I'd shorten the distance to around 2.25x. The current felt sudden and not fitting with this part. gotcha, fixed!
  3. 01:01:850 until 01:03:919 - Rather have a smaller spacing that gradually gets bigger (but not too big) in this part to emphasize next part 01:03:919 -. Because the current spacing is similar to the next part, the transition would stay the same, and it's not really fun. i shrunk the second square, made a few changes to the stacked singles, hope that fixes it!
  4. 01:05:989 (1,2,3,4) - Adding little jumps in a part where the intensity stays constant, and there's only one sound playing here, it doesn't fit. By switching (2) and (3) you would get that pattern with a constant spacing, which I think suits better this part. 2 issues come with this though, it ends up looking like a faster stream, and keeping the general "flow" going in a line like that doesn't really emphasize the change in the song. By adding small snaps like this, it stops the aggressive stream flow that comes from the intense part of the drop, and is appropriately slow to match the calm point in the song here. I know the spacing emphasizes these notes awkwardly since 2 and 4 get special treatment which doesn't represent the song too well, but for sake of indicating change in pace coming up and emphasizing a difference from the part before, I think what I have is more fitting.
  5. 01:44:954 (1,2) - Reduce the spacing at like 1.0x. It would follow this part that omitted a sound and approaches to silence, much better. alright, done! also added an inherited point to lower the volume here a bit so the clap isn't obnoxiously loud.

    regarding the note spread issue on my part, I felt mine was still decently spread so it should be okay, but hobbes agreed to adjust some things so he'll get on that :u
Updated extra for hobbes to work on and the storyboard so hokichi can fix!
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