reply instead of ZZH because he delegated this diff to me.
i will change as less as possible because our style is totally different, i don't want to ruin his structure.
[Speechless]
Insane Collab
00:10:629 (1,2,3) - 三角形摆正
//ok00:43:129 (2,3) - 这里的节奏是怎么回事
//只跟鼓点的话就变成这样了
[Streliteela]
Insane Collab
00:11:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这一坨看着感觉既难看又别手……
//其实还好啦,打起来感觉没什么问题
00:20:629 (1,2,3) - 这种ds是不是弄错了……怎么1/1节奏间距和后面1/2间距一样大?如果是玩ds梗请把2这个地方nc,后面也是,不然现在这样真的容易读错orz
//我也不太懂..一定是有什么深意吧..这段复制粘贴有点明显啊(吐槽……
//(
00:38:129 (4,5) - 节奏改成先1/2滑条后note,和前面00:37:129 (4,5) - 保持一致
//这两个地方的鼓点还是有一点点差别的
00:41:629 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 怎么这里突然就只跟鼓点了?明明前面还顾及着vocal这里突然就违和了……
// 和 - 00:37:629 (1,2,3,4,5) - 对比一下就会发现,其实这里是有结构的
[Pata-Mon]
Insane
00:21:296 (2,3) - 00:22:296 (6,7) - ……这段类似这种的都觉得ds太大了.前面快速段ds很多都没这么大的.这种音其实叠起来感觉都更好
//叠起来可能就跟我的ano太像了?
00:43:963 (2,4) - 这种overlap感觉不太好看……要碰就多碰点
//主观,所以不动
00:52:629 (1,2) - 没道理不跟啊……00:52:629 (1,2) - 这俩可是跟全了的
//你大概是复制错了..
[Plaudible]
Insane Collab
00:02:296 (4,1) - Just a tip with stacks like this, you can make it perfect by ctrl+g (1) and stacking the heads together, then doing ctrl+g again.
http://puu.sh/rXDv5/d76057556e.jpg becomes
http://puu.sh/rXDtq/10ac539963.jpg . I know this is nitpicky, and I'll point out areas where you can do this, but if you don't care feel free to ignore these.
00:04:296 (4,1,3) - ^
00:09:296 (3,3) - ^
//current patterns are good to me.
(i don't have so much time to adjust these small things)00:05:296 (3,4) - Your structure is generally stack based at this part of the song. Later ones are more appropriate with the triangle, but this one really stands out in this section. Could you stack it?
//this is his mistake, imo.00:07:963 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not a nice blanket, try x460 y164
00:15:629 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I guess this is okay, but wouldn't it be nicer to represent the music a bit more? maybe short 1/2 jumps with the distance decreasing in each pattern to represent the pitch of the violin going down. It'd be cooler to see something more music based here
//current pattern is good imo. two circles in one group, they can express drums together with violin's change.
00:16:629 (1) - I think it's more appropriate to put a note, then the spinner 1/4 after to represent the violin being held out, but it's up to you.
//it will be a optional choice, so keep.
00:37:463 (5,1,2,3,4) - God I just really hate this shape :/ Couldn't come up with anything, but could you play around with it a bit? Aesthetically it just looks very weird.
// - 00:41:629 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are similar to - 00:37:463 (5,1,2,3,4) -, so i think he did these on popurse.
00:38:629 (1) - pls do wavies like
http://puu.sh/rXE0G/b7aeb96f17.jpg //maybe it's a preference.
00:41:629 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a fan of the emphasis. 1,2,3,4 are generally the same distance - and the drum is slowly decreasing in the pitchy thing. It'd make sense to increase 5 if you were applying this to the whole jump pattern, but it's not. Why not place emphasis on 00:42:130 (4) instead, since it's when her vocal pitch changes, and then keep the rest of the jump pattern similarly distanced? That way it represents the vocals better.
//reasonable, changed a bit.00:43:963 (2,3,4,5) - Perhaps space 2,4 and 3,5 the same? Just copy and paste or someth idk
//okay00:50:296 - couldn't you put a note here? The vocals start, it's really inappropriate to ignore it, especially with how powerful it is.
//same as another diff.
00:53:629 (4) - Same wavy slider thing, it'd be nice to make it look better, this looks really weird T_T
//hmm... it's ok to me.
[MBmasher]
Insane Collab
00:07:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Change this to something like because the sound at 00:07:963 is weak.
//i can hear drums here.
[_Yiiiii]
Insane
00:15:629 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 每个combo之间的间距是不是太大了点?之前那段只有很强的重音才用了这么大的间距,这里是这一段的收尾部分,间距应适当的减小
//大概ZZH认为收尾部分应该加大距离
00:20:629 (1,2) - 这个间距怎么回事?
//这个嘛...我也不知道00:52:629 (1,2) - 这俩和之前跟的是不同的音,DS不一样,但是滑条形状甚至位置都一样,太容易读错了,不过这么折腾人玩挺爽的XD,你改不改看心情吧
//这个还好啦...