EvianBubble wrote:

Hi again, sorry for the delay! I started yesterday actually, but I wasn't really in the mood ... it's ok~

General
SV is slider velocity, you go to the timing panel to change that. To change distance snap distance, hold ALT and drag the bar at the top right. Left = small distance (easier maps), right = larger distance (harder maps)
You need to clean up your section pass image, it seems you forgot to erase a few pixels. I would do it for you but it'd be easier for you since you have your layers set up and everything haha. Excuse the crude circles D: I didn't make the combo burst... and i have no idea how to fix it x_x

SPOILER

Easy
01:13:143 (4) - New combo this
Everything else seems good!

Normal
To my (limited) knowledge turning stacking down all the way is unrankable :S
00:05:160 (4) - It might just be my computer, but when it plays (at least in editor) this totally unstacks and is moved up and left. Again, it might be just me (because in editing mode it's stacked), so check it for you and fix it accordingly Thats what happened to me to x_x no idea how to fix it
00:44:111 (end of 2, 3) - Spacing here. Maybe flip (1, 2) so that (2) ends on the end closer to (3) instead of the one further away? done
01:36:369 (5) - Too close to (4), move one grid down?done
02:09:030 (3) - Move to 02:09:292 (the white tick)?done

Hard
00:26:450 (1 - 4) - Move one grid rightdone
01:05:160 (6, 7, 8) - Up one grid. (8) is too far away. Move 7 ish grids left so the end aligns with (9)?done
01:08:063 (3) - Spacing. Move 3 down ... actually this bit is pretty hard to read IMO, maybe re - design this? (7) should also be moved one grid right done, but everyone else i know can read it just fine and remember this is a "hard" diff
01:20:885 (1, 5) - Move (1) right one and (5) left onedone
01:25:966 (2, 3) - Move (2) left one then (3) two afterdone
01:31:289 (2, 3) - Left onedone
01:33:950 (2) - Move down one griddone
01:46:772 (6) - Move up onedone
01:48:708 (6) - Samedone
02:16:651-02:20:885 - About this break - I wouldn't suggest it here since it's the chorus and Kiai time :S Ah well, since this is a harder difficulty I suppose that another break isn't needed yay i was right x3 (done)
02:46:047 (1 - 8) - These notes are all one grid too far away from eachother, but I guess you can leave it :S

Much better, but I'm going to wait for that image to be fixed before giving my star :S I await your fixes!

Nekoo[] wrote:

General~
-I see an empty .osb file, delete it unless you intend to use a storyboard. i swear it keeps reviving itself! x_x

Easy~
00:59:230 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? oops
01:19:918 (4) - New combo? done
01:20:885 (1) - Remove new combo? ^
01:39:830 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? oooooops
01:59:290 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? ^
02:41:890 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? ^

Normal~
01:39:830 (T) - Unnecessary timing section?
01:15:079 (1) - Remove new combo? done
01:59:290 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? lol again? >_<
02:41:890 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? sure have a lot of these >_<

Hard~
00:42:170 (T) - You have two inherited sections stacked here, one with normal hs and one with soft, I suppose that one of them isn't supposed to be here? done
00:43:860 (T) - If it was the section with soft sounds that was supposed to be at 00:42:170 delete this section, if it was the one with normal hs, you may ignore this.
00:59:230 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? done
01:22:570 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? done
01:41:692 (4) - I would probably place this under 01:40:724 (2) so it forms a square cause the beats doesn't change but the spacing does.done
02:17:010 (T) - Why don't you just change so that this section has soft sounds? That way you don't need the 02:18:370 (T) section. but i like it that way
02:42:280 (T) - Unnecessary timing section? done

crystalsuicune's taiko oni~
I've become a taiko player lately but I don't feel like I'm ready to mod taiko yet so I won't =P

1. crystalsuicune's taiko oni (4.83 stars, 708 notes)
2. Easy (1.38 stars, 136 notes)
3. Hard (4.39 stars, 343 notes)
4. Normal (2.92 stars, 232 notes)

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~ hi

General;
- Okk...why does do the taiko diff has another quality of audio...?? [color=#4040FF]crystal suicune may have to re-snap stuff if i use the same mp3
- If you're not going to use the file "4317370.jpg" delete it uhh... thats not in my folder >_>
- The allowed size for the BG is less or the same as the default one which will be 388x787, here have the pic resized ~ huh? mind re-wording that
[attachment=0:75599]comboburst_.png[/attachment:75599]
- If you're going to use audio lead in, use it in all diff (except taiko) and it has to be the same in all ~ Open each diff in the notepad to fix that ~ But I suggest not using it ... done
- Check your kiai time, remember it has to start and end on a note ~[/color] why does it have to? >_>

Easy;
- Circle size and HP drain -1 ?? done
- Slider velocity is a bit fast ~ lowered by one >_<
- 00:25:240 >> add clap done
- 00:26:692 >> add clap at the start and finish at the end done
- 00:28:627 >> add whistle done
- 00:30:563 >> ^ done
- 00:32:498 >> ^ done
- 00:33:466 >> remove clap and ^ done
- 00:34:434 >> add clap to all done
- 00:36:369 >> add whistle...ehh try to follow the pattern of whistle, clap, whistle, clap, ... except for some parts ~ done
- 00:39:272 >> add finish done
- 01:06:853 >> this doesn't end on a tick uh, yes it does >_>
- 01:21:369 (2)(3) >> move one tick forward (2) to 01:21:853 and (3) to the next tick wow that sounds good xD. done
- 02:01:530 >> new combo don't wanna
- 02:11:208 >> remove combo and add new combo at 02:11:692 done
- 02:13:627 (5)(6) >> I think this notes don't fit, delete them ?? done


Normal;
- Ehh try to follow the pattern of whistle, clap, whistle, clap, ... except for some parts ~ done
- 00:06:369 >> curve this slider better done
- Lower HP drain by 1 done
- Ehhh...silence the last spinner completely ~ no :3

* I can't really mod hard or taiko, but as far as I can hear/see both are okk ~

animelover1432 wrote:

- The allowed size for the BG is less or the same as the default one which will be 388x787, here have the pic resized ~ huh? mind re-wording that OH SHI~ what I meant to say was comboburst not BG, LOL
[attachment=0:6743c]comboburst_.png[/attachment:6743c]
- Check your kiai time, remember it has to start and end on a note ~[/color] why does it have to? >_>I don't know it just has to xD

This was a recheck I guess since I have already mod your map

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please remember some of theese errors are suggestions and not directions, feel free to take or leave any of them

[osz File Scan!]
Why are there 2 mp3s inside the song folder? second one is for the taiko diff, didn't want to bother crystalsuicune with re-snapping
Empty .osb file detected, please remove and full submit. i swear it keeps reviving itself >_>

[crystalsuicube's Taiko oni]
Well it played pretty well imo this diff doesnt seem to have any errors.

[Hard]
00:03:950 (2) - I really thought this slider would have ended up earlier thanks to the previous one, and is not like i would know the song in advance, i recommend maybe ending it up like the previous one and compensating with a couple stacked (or not) notes or just put stacked notes instead of this slider. thank for pointing this out, i listen to this song a lot, so it ended up like that ^^
00:08:184 (3) - Sounds like it should be 1/4 later considering i hear nothing at the start of it but 2 cymbal sounds 1/4 later. strangley , it fits better, but what do you mean by "2 cymbol sounds"?
00:09:272 (3) - Would sound better with a Finish hitsound considering is an enphasis note, also you should probably make it into a new combo since there's no cymbal there like on the previous 2 notes of the combo so it counts as switching instruments, plus would give it a bit more of an enphasis, in adition you could try moving it below the previous 2 notes and in between them like so: done

SPOILER

00:22:458 (1) - Doesnt sound like a spinner should be here, considering there's a lot of stuff going at a steady rythm, maybe you should consider splitting it into regular notes/sliders, that could also help you make the end of the spinner, the starting combo note for the vocals that you map afterwards. i dont get it *ignore*
00:43:264 (X) - I think there should be a note here since you are following the Lyrics here, if you want it to go with the (4) you have after you can make that note stack before the current (4) which would become a (5). Or maybe that was too confusing basically the note would go there and stack the next one below and it would flow much better. done
00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to simmetrize? i think it would look a lot better imo. simmetrize? heck is that!?
The part mapped after 00:59:595 doesnt seem to be a good idea to mix instrument and lyrics specially coz the Lyrics dont have a steady rythm (or rythm at all) in this section hence people would think you are mapping to the instruments playing in the background. huh? then why did everyone else like it then? >_>
01:12:418 (2) - I think this slider has too many claps, try to reduce to a smaller number of claps like twice a stanza for instance (A stanza has 4 beats in 4/4 time signature btw) isnt it already at twice a stanza?
02:01:047 (4,5,6) - You could make this a new combo and horizontal mirror of the previous 3 notes for symmetry. i don't get it
02:30:563 (1) - I think a finish hitsound sounds better at this spinner the finish sound was probably removed by accident during a previous mod...
02:49:434 (7) - This slider seems somewhat ugly, (your nice >_>)unfortunately i cant give much advise about this one as im not an expert in long slider art. i tried to make is funner looking, but i thik i made it worse x_x
02:59:111 - Probably add a timing section around here with zero volume so that the spinner doesnt even sound since the music already faded out completely. no, the music hasnt faded completly... or maybe my speaker is on too loud, or maybe my speaker is the one thats loud?

[Normal]
00:02:256 (X) - Probably could add a note here, since i saw that further during my regular playtest you used some slider, 1/2 note 1/2 slider, i think it could fit here well too and sounds better. done...
00:03:466 (3,4,1,2,3) - - - A strange misalign here, intentional? looks kind of ugly. although fine while playing, just thought i'd throw that in. uh-huh, >_>
00:05:401 (1) - This slider its not exactly straight vertical, and looks kind of ugly maybe you should consider realigning it with the Y Axys. i'm sorry, i didin't pay attention when my teacher was going over grids >_> (it was only 1 grid off though >_>)
00:06:369 (3) - I think you can split this slider at: 00:06:853, since there's some sound going in mid of it, makes it play awkward. If you do this, make sure you make a new combo the note or slider you put after splitting it. this is a normal difficulty, i though it would make it easier... (i'm not very good at making easy diffs)
00:22:821 (1) - Same comment as on [Hard] If you do change no
00:26:208 (3) - Move 1/2 beat later and make it into a NC rather than 00:26:692 (1), you can also make it stack on top of that slider if you want, if you do this make sure you rearrange 00:25:240 (1,2) too as well so that they are aligned in however you want them to be. no
00:35:885 (2) - You should probably add a note after or before this note to keep up the rythm that you had in the previous section. done
00:43:143 (2) - I think that this slider should have less repeats, feels weird to put 2 sliders in a row, 1 with more repeats with no hints in the music that this one will be longer. i dont get it
00:51:611 (4) - Make this into a new combo since you are switching to instruments again so it looks awkward when playing. done
00:51:853 (5,6,7,8) - If theese are supposed to be following the vocals switch to new combo here instead of the previous note, otherwise keep.
00:53:789 (1) - Try to make it more circular, it looks prettier that way, like so:done

SPOILER

01:47:740 (2,3) - I think theese 2 should be a NC each, considering how (2) feels mapped to the instrument while (3) feels more like the vocal. done
01:49:676 (4,1) - I think you should move the new combo from (1) to (4) looks better that way imo. no
01:55:724 (1) - It's an enphasis note, probably should sound better if you add a finish sound to this. um, thats a spinner? >_>
02:50:885 (2) - Make into a mirror of (1)? Ionno but it would look nicer imo. what IS a mirror anyway >_>
02:54:514 (1) - Make into a mirror of (2) for symmetry sakes, either that or make (2) into a mirror of 1 place them in such a way that it doesnt affect the spacing something like this might be good: it's already like that?

SPOILER

02:59:111 - Same note as [Hard] done

[Easy]
This map looks way better than the other ones however i still have a few things to point out.
00:53:789 (1) - Take in the same note for the same slider in [Normal], since it has the same problem. done
01:06:441 - 01:19:434 : This section looks very empty even for an Easy difficulty, try to add in more stuff? done
01:47:982 (1) - Could be slightly bit more curvy, move the middle waypoint 1 grid up and left [Very nazi] done
01:51:853 (1) - Ehh you should drop the 2nd to last waypoint, dont think it looks pretty with it there imo heck is a waypoint
02:30:805 (1) - I think this spinner should end at: 02:34:434 instead, also dont silence it and use a finish hitsound instead if you do this.
02:54:514 (1,2,3) - Same comment than on [Normal] done
02:56:208 (1) - Use a finish hitsound as it catches the last spot on the music, keep the same volume. thank sounds horrible to me

[Overall]
Nice map and song, i enjoyed modding this, hope i find something more fun when i come back to recheck it when you forum PM me, i'll save my star until then, good luck!~

johnsage92 wrote:

[Easy]

02:30:805 (1) - End the spinner at 02:34:434 then add a note at 02:34:918
02:41:934 - I think you can map through this. i have no ideas for that part, so i left it empty ^^

[Normal]

00:01:531 (1,2,3) - Move these down so they align with the notes after that osu! was stacking weird during play mode, and another modder had the same problem, so that's why it's not aligned >_>
00:05:401 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:10:845 (2) - Move back 1/4 tick then extend by 1/4 tick done

[Hard]

Sorry for this but..
00:09:030 (1,2,3) - Align it with (4,5) previous mod made that hard to understnd T^T *ignore*

Thats all I could find! Hope it was useful and looking forward to seeing it ranked. so am i ^^
PS. I thought it was really catchy and i started to sing the chorus EVERYONE I KNOW LOVES THE COURSE! 8D

Agnes wrote:

Pu-Pu-Pu-Pub and Go~ Fish and chips~

[General]
Nothing to poke at.

[Easy]
00:42:176 (1) - Change this slider into a longer one, and more like this on the timeline:
01:42:176 (1) - ^
02:13:869 (Spinner) - Make this shorter. Make it look like this on the timeline:
02:17:014 (1) - Same change as 00:42:176 (1) and 01:42:176 (1)

[Normal]
00:43:385 (3) - Make the hitsounds the same as 00:42:176 (1), but keep the Finish at the end. It sounds nicer that way. D:
01:21:853 (3,4,5) - Space these out pleaaase Dx

[Hard]
00:03:950 (2,3) - Remove three and make the slider more like this on the timeline:
00:53:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change some of these notes into short sliders, still following the beat.
01:08:063 (3,4,5,6) - Change this. ;x;
01:11:571 (1,2,1,2) - This part doesn't seem to make any sense... o_o;
01:40:240 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps seem harsh for a Hard
02:12:901 (Spinner) - Bring this to the white tick on 02:13:143, like so:

[Crystalsuicune's Taiko Oni]
Please make the "T" in Taiko and the "O" in Oni capital. Things like this bother me for some reason orz
Second MP3 for this difficulty seems to cut off instantly at the end. It bothers me. orz

O.K.!

I'll star this after you make some changes. c:

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Overall]
Yeah i can guess it's gonna take a while for me to bubble this... a while~ anyways, Good Luck! u can ask me for a recheck anytime

CDFA wrote:

Be request of Sakura_Hana >w< HAI then! ^^

Overall:
A video would be nice. there isn't a video, it's from a character cd >_>

Hard:
OD +1
00:34:192 (1) - Move 1 level 3 grid right (so the sliders don't overlap, not a nazi >w<) Dont get it
00:34:192 (1) - Short sliders with lots of repeats suck. Make it more interesting >w< Can't think of anything to replace it with

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ Some of your skin elements had white noise around them, I fixed it + have a lighting too :3
[attachment=0:1195d]Noriaki Sugiyama - Pub and GO!.rar[/attachment:1195d]

vytalibus wrote:

[Normal]
01:02:014 (4,5,6,7,1) - The fact that the last four notes aren't stacked with the first one looks mightily horrible to look at.
01:49:676 (2,1,2,3) - ^

Leorda wrote:

[General]
1) Your comboburst is too big, maximum is 500x500
2) I think lighting.png is too big, IMO

SPOILER

lovhin456 wrote:

no kudosu for this ~ :3[/b]

animelover1432 wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

no kudosu for this ~ :3

oops, didnt read the whole post x3

Leorda wrote:

Yo


[General]
1) Your comboburst is too big, maximum is 500x500
2) I think lighting.png is too big, IMO

[Easy]
00:28:627 (1,2) - Don't stack these, beginner player is confusing with stack
00:37:821 (1,2) - ^
00:38:789 (1,2) - ^
00:49:918 (1,2) - ^
00:50:885 (1,2) - ^
01:21:853 (2,3) - ^
01:24:756 (1,2,3) - ^
01:32:498 (1,2,3) - ^
01:36:369 (1,2,3) - ^
01:40:240 (1) - A little bit too far from spinner
01:49:918 (1,2) - Don't stack these, beginner player is confusing with stack
01:50:885 (1,2) - ^
02:00:079 (1) - This object is too far from spinner
02:01:530 (4,5) - Don't stack these, beginner player is confusing with stack
02:02:498 (6,7) - ^
02:24:756 (1,2) - ^
02:25:724 (1,2) - ^
02:27:176 (2,3) - ^
02:34:918 (1,2,3) - ^
02:37:821 (5,6) - ^
02:38:789 (1,2) - ^
02:41:208 (4,5) - ^

[Normal]
00:05:160 (5,1) - Not stack perfectly with 00:03:466 (4)
00:06:127 (2,3) - Not stack perfectly with 00:06:369 (3)
00:36:369 (1) - Move 1 grid right?
00:46:530 (2) - Move 2 grid up?
01:00:805 (2,3) - Move 1 grid right?
01:02:740 (5,6,7,1) - Not stack perfectlt with 01:02:014 (4)
01:49:918 (1,2,3) - Not stack perfectly with 01:49:676 (2)
02:08:789 (2,3,4) - Not stack perfectly with 02:07:821 (1)

[Hard]
01:32:982 (5) - Move 1 grid down?

Nice song
STAR

ZLOdeuka wrote:

[ Easy ]

Slider Tick Rate +1 done

(✹)00:31:289 (1) - delete new combo no

(✹)00:34:434 - ^ no

[ Normal ]

ok..

[ Hard ]

ok..

~STAR

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hai animelover
I like APH too, I even have Delicious tomato song on my to map list :3 OH OH I SO WANNA GUEST DIFF THAT ♥

[General]
Slider tick rate 2 to all diff is better imo
for a funny song like this the BG doesn't fit at all, the Taiko BG is hilarious though find me one then =w=

[Hard]
01:20:643 (6) - spacing error or mini jump? mini-jump =w=
01:20:885 (1) - ^
01:35:885 (1) - remove NC then NC on 01:36:369 (2) no >w<


very funny song, the ending is epic. AMERICA NO BAKA~
anyway nice map, the hitsounds are quite decent despite it's unconsistency on some place i'll be working on that now...
Good Luck
~star