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REOL - DetaramE KiddinG

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Janpai
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Janpai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, March 29, 2017 at 2:55:49 PM

Artist: REOL
Title: DetaramE KiddinG
Tags: Σ Sigma れをる ギガ Giga お菊 Okiku Hazu-
BPM: 73
Filesize: 2492kb
Play Time: 01:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.33 stars, 82 notes)
  2. Hazu's Hard (2.86 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Insane (3.74 stars, 260 notes)
  4. Normal (1.87 stars, 128 notes)
Download: REOL - DetaramE KiddinG
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MAPSET:
Easy - Janpai
Normal - Janpai
Hazu's Hard - Hazu-
Insane - Janpai
METADATA

http://www.toysfactory.co.jp/artist/reol/official/discography/sigma-n/
Already talked with KwaN about the artist
Last edited by Janpai , edited 34 times in total.
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-
i'm too slow
please copy hitsounds xd
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Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai
So fast~ We're ready for mods! :D
Affirmation
2,543 posts
Joined March 2015
Affirmation
Q NM

[Easy]
01:02:694 (4,1) - blanket

[Normal]
00:01:050 - Should be added a beat
00:04:338 - ^
00:21:187 (2,3) - Just change into this pattern. It's 1/3 beats, So I think now looks wrong beats.
00:46:050 (1,2) - make reverse slider?

[Hard]
00:02:489 (2,3,4) - 1/6 is right rhythm, 00:05:776 (2,3,4) - too. I think you mapped wrong rhythm.

[Insane]
00:02:489 (2) - Check Hard diff.
00:06:187 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is is too random so it could be hard to read.
00:09:064 (2) - why this is 1.5x slider? I think you don't need to emphasize here.
00:12:352 (2) - ^
totally sv changing looks too awkward,

Good luck
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Neoskylove wrote:

Q NM

[Easy]
01:02:694 (4,1) - blanket :arrow: I guess this is the best blanket I could do because of DS xD

[Normal]
00:01:050 - Should be added a beat :arrow: It's just the introduction of song so I think having them in ticks would be easier
00:04:338 - ^ :arrow: ^^
00:21:187 (2,3) - Just change into this pattern. It's 1/3 beats, So I think now looks wrong beats. :arrow: The current rhythm emphasizes the 1/3 vocals. Having just 2 1/1 slider would be boring xD
00:46:050 (1,2) - make reverse slider? :arrow: sure

[Insane]
00:02:489 (2) - Check Hard diff. :arrow: snapped to 1/6
00:06:187 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Is is too random so it could be hard to read. :arrow: It's random but It's a back and forth jump so I guess it's pretty readable
00:09:064 (2) - why this is 1.5x slider? I think you don't need to emphasize here. :arrow: I want to emphasize that "Ahahah" vocal cuz I feel that having just normal SV will be too boring
00:12:352 (2) - ^ :arrow: ^^
totally sv changing looks too awkward, :arrow: The reason for SV changing is to emphasize the vocal and it's like a hiphop song, I want to spice up things by having SV changes

Good luck
Thank you for modding!
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-
All fixed, Thanks =w=/
Poi
osu file format v14

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Juiceys
530 posts
Joined June 2016
Juiceys
Easy:
00:18:311 (2) - Move this a couple notches right or left to keep the map from being too linear

Hazu's Hard
00:27:763 (3) - Ctrl + H
00:28:174 (4) - Ctrl + J & Blanket with 00:28:585 (1) -
01:13:790 (1) - Change to a circle
Chaoslitz
Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder
2,307 posts
Joined November 2013
Chaoslitz
Why short version.... orz
ColdTooth
1,100 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
Hey there, from my lovely queue

[Easy]

00:05:982 (3) - Feels like a bland transition, try this

00:56:530 (1) - Curve this slider like you did for 00:57:352 (2) - for flow

Nice difficulty

[Normal]

00:33:516 (1) - I'd put the third sliderpoint just a little bit higher, looks less curvy, but still a nice S curve. Right now the center of that s curve is a litle bit too down

[Hazu's Hard]

00:19:955 (7) - x424 y136? Just a suggestion

00:40:503 (2) - ctrl+g

[Insane]

Nothing really, it's a very well done difficulty

No kds if this mod did not help.
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-

Juiceys wrote:

Hazu's Hard
00:27:763 (3) - Ctrl + H Point toward the next object.
00:28:174 (4) - Ctrl + J & Blanket with 00:28:585 (1) - ^
01:13:790 (1) - Change to a circle Normal and Insane end in the same way.

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey there, from my lovely queue

[Hazu's Hard]

00:19:955 (7) - x424 y136? Just a suggestion I can't find many changes in music ><

00:40:503 (2) - ctrl+g Something similar to I said in the other mod.

No kds if this mod did not help.
No changes for now, but thanks =w=/
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edit: little changes in my diff ><
Poi
osu file format v14

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Tags:Σ Sigma ギガ Giga Hazu-
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Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai

Chaoslitz wrote:

Why short version.... orz
Because I'm lazy xD cuz wanna speedrank lol jk

Juiceys wrote:

Easy:
00:18:311 (2) - Move this a couple notches right or left to keep the map from being too linear :arrow: I guess it's fine xD

ColdTooth wrote:

Hey there, from my lovely queue

[Easy]

00:05:982 (3) - Feels like a bland transition, try this :arrow: nice, applied

00:56:530 (1) - Curve this slider like you did for 00:57:352 (2) - for flow :arrow: it was intended xD

Nice difficulty Thank you! =w=)7

[Normal]

00:33:516 (1) - I'd put the third sliderpoint just a little bit higher, looks less curvy, but still a nice S curve. Right now the center of that s curve is a litle bit too down :arrow: Okay fixed

[Insane]

Nothing really, it's a very well done difficulty

No kds if this mod did not help.
Thank you for modding guys! Updated!
Mir
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2,151 posts
Joined July 2016
Mir
From my queue.

Blanket mod incoming.~

In general your offset feels too early. Try 616-ish.

Insane

Insane

  1. 01:01:050 (4,1) – Blanket.
  2. 01:09:270 (6,1) - ^
Seems to play pretty well. Not much to say here.

Hazu’s Hard

Hard

  1. 01:04:749 (1,2) – Blanket.
Nothing else to say here

Normal

Normal

  1. 01:01:461 (5) – Blanket.

Probably not worth to kudos this. It’s really well done tbh. I hope you rank this. Good luck.~
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-

Miryle wrote:

From my queue.

Blanket mod incoming.~

In general your offset feels too early. Try 616-ish.

Hazu’s Hard

Hard

  1. 01:04:749 (1,2) – Blanket. Okay.
Nothing else to say here

Probably not worth to kudos this. It’s really well done tbh. I hope you rank this. Good luck.~
Janpai you can fix this for me? thx -w-
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai
The first mention was not fixed because it was intended, the rest are fixed. Thank you so much!
Lilyanna
1,918 posts
Joined March 2016
Lilyanna
Hi from my kyu

Easy :

00:50:752 (2) - maybe try ctrl h and replace there for better flow like u did here 00:59:794 (1,2) -
01:13:766 (2) - the finish hitsound doesnt fit imo since u already did it in previous note maybe try finish+drum sampleset

Normal :

00:01:026 - 00:04:314 - feels wierd ignoring this sound maybe make 2 1/1 sliders so just end 00:03:903 (1) - on white tick
http://puu.sh/rVqss/442381ba9b.jpg
00:09:657 (6,1) - could improve blanket
00:23:629 (1) - ctrl j and replace again would flow better

Hazu's hard :

00:02:259 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern could use a remap for sake of that strong beat on tail of slider and this skipped beat 00:03:492 -
try this http://puu.sh/rWjv8/34d7458564.jpg if u change this apply same for the next

00:44:999 (1,2) - stack maybe

i hope i helped good luck its nice !
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from my kyu

Easy :

00:50:752 (2) - maybe try ctrl h and replace there for better flow like u did here 00:59:794 (1,2) - :arrow: I prefer it to be like this xD
01:13:766 (2) - the finish hitsound doesnt fit imo since u already did it in previous note maybe try finish+drum sampleset :arrow: sure, applied in the other diffs too

Normal :

00:01:026 - 00:04:314 - feels wierd ignoring this sound maybe make 2 1/1 sliders so just end 00:03:903 (1) - on white tick
http://puu.sh/rVqss/442381ba9b.jpg :arrow: just made that red tick clickable
00:09:657 (6,1) - could improve blanket :arrow: fixed
00:23:629 (1) - ctrl j and replace again would flow better :arrow: same in the first mention xD

i hope i helped good luck its nice !
Thank you very much!
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Hazu-

Lilyanna wrote:

Hi from my kyu

Hazu's hard :

00:02:259 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern could use a remap for sake of that strong beat on tail of slider and this skipped beat 00:03:492 -
try this http://puu.sh/rWjv8/34d7458564.jpg if u change this apply same for the next Changed something.

00:44:999 (1,2) - stack maybe I prefer it to be like this.

i hope i helped good luck its nice !
Thanks =w=/
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Tags:Σ Sigma れをる ギガ Giga お菊 Okiku Hazu-
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SolariS
50 posts
Joined June 2014
SolariS
Hello, from my Q

Hazu's Hard

00:02:876 (3,4) - The two sliders starting on red tick, how about replacing it to this? (By replacing the first slider with just a circle on the red tick, followed by the original 2nd slider on the white ticks and adding another circle for the last red tick)
~Just noticed that you had someone else change this spot too but I would like to know what you think. :?

Insane

01:13:766 (2) - Ctrl + G?

Good luck :P
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai
@Hazu- I changed the BPM to 73 because I had some mapset that have same BPM problem with this but don't worry timestamps are still working
@SolariS I think that one is fine :D
Hazu-
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Hazu-

SolariS wrote:

Hello, from my Q

Hazu's Hard

00:02:876 (3,4) - The two sliders starting on red tick, how about replacing it to this? (By replacing the first slider with just a circle on the red tick, followed by the original 2nd slider on the white ticks and adding another circle for the last red tick)
~Just noticed that you had someone else change this spot too but I would like to know what you think. :? I would have skipping the sound in 00:03:287 -

Good luck :P
Thanks =w=/
@Janpai Okay, no problem~
Kondou-Shinichi
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Joined September 2015
Kondou-Shinichi
hihi
lets skip easy and normal cause its boring
Haru's Hard
Wow perfect object placement okay what to talk
Kiai part is too easy, doesn't seems to be any harder than the other part of the song
Insane
00:02:670 (3) - hard to read
00:05:958 (3) - ^^^
00:09:040 (2) - perferred a new combo or the sv change isn't really noticed
00:12:328 (2) - ^^^
00:14:999 (5) - ^^^
00:16:643 (5) - ^^^
00:19:828 (7,8) - hard to read that its 1/8, a well done example could be like on 00:32:979 (7,8) -
00:35:547 (3) - again hard to read
00:38:835 (3) - ^^^
00:44:999 (1) - consider 2X sv
01:12:944 (1) - no need new combo
Nice song here! Good Luck :^)
Hazu-
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Joined July 2014
Hazu-

Kondou-Shinichi wrote:

hihi
lets skip easy and normal cause its boring
Haru's Hard
Wow perfect object placement okay what to talk
Kiai part is too easy, doesn't seems to be any harder than the other part of the song It must be the 1/3.
Nice song here! Good Luck :^)
Haru? o.o
Agatsu
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined January 2015
Agatsu
hi from q

  • General
  1. preview point is not snapped
  • Normal
  1. 00:21:985 (4) - ctrl+h > ctrl+j > ctrl+g for better flow?
  2. 00:52:807 (6) - ctrl+j?
  3. 00:53:629 (2) - add a curve to this slider to match 00:52:807 (6) -
  • Insane
  1. 00:28:150 (4) - ctrl+j so it can flow better to the next note
  2. 00:46:026 (4) - nc this cuz the voice gets louder

my shitmod ends here

good luck janpai! :)
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai
I only fixed the NC problem at last in Kondou-Shinichi's mod because I'll see more opinions about that 1/12 reverse slider and fixed all from Agatsu's mod except that flip on the insane :D thank you guys! LOL HAHA Hazu got mistaken xD
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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SnowNiNo_


wwwat not full ver whyyy ;w;?

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:09:040 (2) - 00:12:328 (2) - if you want to used sv change to emphasis the vocal here then i suggest to NC it either
  2. 00:14:999 (5) - 00:16:643 (5) - imo 2 notes can express much better then a slider here since the vocal sound at sliderhead and sliderend are both similar
  3. 00:40:479 (4) - how about make it parallel with 00:39:657 (7) - lol?
  4. 00:39:657 (7) - NC for emphasis the prominent sound here is a good choice imo
  5. 00:46:026 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be much bigger to express the strong vocal
  • [Hazu's Hard]
  1. 00:04:520 (2) - a note and a slider instead can express better to the music
  2. 00:06:780 (6,1) - 00:10:068 (7,1) - 00:13:561 (5,1) - 00:16:848 (5,1) - 00:19:931 (7,1) - well since is a hard diff so i suggest to stay consist with the spacing here, same as kiai
  3. 00:42:533 (4,5) - ctrl + g fit better to the vocal
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:21:163 (2,3) - 00:24:451 (2,3) - although is normal but ill still say stick with 1/6, like this, idk if it's allowed in normal tho lol
ez seems good
gl xd
reol <3
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai

SnowNiNo_ wrote:



wwwat not full ver whyyy ;w;? I'm lazy haha but I'll try to map full version someday xD

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:09:040 (2) - 00:12:328 (2) - if you want to used sv change to emphasis the vocal here then i suggest to NC it either :arrow: sure
  2. 00:14:999 (5) - 00:16:643 (5) - imo 2 notes can express much better then a slider here since the vocal sound at sliderhead and sliderend are both similar :arrow: I have no idea how to express them because If I converted them to circles, they wouldn't be emphasized that much and will be played as the circles all over the map
  3. 00:40:479 (4) - how about make it parallel with 00:39:657 (7) - lol? :arrow: I think it's fine xD
  4. 00:39:657 (7) - NC for emphasis the prominent sound here is a good choice imo :arrow: okayy
  5. 00:46:026 (1,2,3) - the spacing here should be much bigger to express the strong vocal :arrow: not really sure but I increased
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:21:163 (2,3) - 00:24:451 (2,3) - although is normal but ill still say stick with 1/6, like this, idk if it's allowed in normal tho lol :arrow: Well keeping for now since idk too, I want to avoid some rhythm issues here so I stayed at the red and white ticks (or blue and red)
ez seems good
gl xd
reol <3
Thank you so much c:
Hazu-
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Hazu-

Janpai wrote:

LOL HAHA Hazu got mistaken xD
:c rip me

SnowNiNo_ wrote:



wwwat not full ver whyyy ;w;?

  • [Hazu's Hard]
  1. 00:04:520 (2) - a note and a slider instead can express better to the music Fixed.
  2. 00:06:780 (6,1) - 00:10:068 (7,1) - 00:13:561 (5,1) - 00:16:848 (5,1) - 00:19:931 (7,1) - well since is a hard diff so i suggest to stay consist with the spacing here, same as kiai No problems with jumps on Hard, I did it to emphasize loud sounds.
  3. 00:42:533 (4,5) - ctrl + g fit better to the vocal Fixed.
ez seems good
gl xd
reol <3
Thanks =w=/
Poi
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196,284,58150,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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SnowNiNo_
@Hazu- : lol i know you are emphasizing with larger spacing, but rn the spacing is inconsistent, since is a hard diff so i would say its better to make them consist xd
Janpai
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Janpai
I think Hazu's reasons are fine because objects are sooo easy to aim at this BPM and making it consistent will lower SR haha jk No more PP lol
raririn
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raririn
I saw you won BB's lottery queue and it's already 18 12 SP. I guess it does not need my mod so far :/
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BounceBabe
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raririn wrote:

I saw you won BB's lottery queue and it's already 18 12 SP. I guess it does not need my mod so far :/
Idk how I should feel about this. Btw, the more opinions the better. Everyone has different suggestions to offer that might help improve the mapset in some way.
meii18
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meii18
m4m from my queue.

[general]
nothing for now atm ;w;.

[easy]
00:13:766(1,2)- would ctrl+g both objects to start with the slider instead with the note so the rhythm would fit the song much better see the higlighted objects.
00:17:054(1)- missing finish on head? there's the cymbal so the finish would give emphasis to that cymbal tbh.
00:31:848(3)- you've missed a clap on slider's head.
00:41:711(3)- shouldn't be drum clap instead of drum finish?
00:58:150(3,4)- would suggest to ctrl+g both objects because i found it confident to start with the slider as you did with the rest of this part where you used mostly 2 pairs of 1/2 sliders and an 1/1 slider but you somehow broke the consistency here so it's like you make a comparison with this second measure with the first measure, both measures of 00:53:218(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)- and the second measure looks somehow inconsistent than the first measure. i know that you don't want to do 2 1/2 sliders + 1/1 slider spam but ctrl+g'ing these two objects won't hurt and also would follow the song more better, especially the vocal see these two higlighted objects on timeline.

this diff looks like it was mapped by me o_o

[normal]
00:11:300(3,4,5,6)- perhaps distance snapping issue. just select 00:12:122(4,5,6)- like this and then move them a bit up.
00:13:766(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)- i guess i would nerf this whole pattern because imo, this is the only 'a bit hardish' pattern from this whole part and the rhythm would be like this one. i see that you're following the vocal, but it won't hurt to nerf the whole pattern just because you made the whole pattern a bit hardish imo.
00:54:040(3,4)- mind replacing these 2 notes with a 1/2 slider? the vocal is ongoing on that 1/4 tick too and looks weird to see it ignored imo. i just suggest you to replace these 2 notes with an 1/2 slider because i don't want to make the pattern more harder than before. i just want to keep the pattern nerfed. see the higlighted objects. same goes for 01:06:780(2,3,4)- if i'm not wrong.

i think you can recheck the spacing. just giving you an advice.

[hazu's hard]
00:17:670(3)- the vocal is stronger here and it is clickable but, i don't like how it starts. i would suggest to start with a note better than with a slider to give more effect to the strongest vocal. the rhythm would be like this one so yeah you have to remove that repeat from (3)- =w=).
00:19:520(5,6)- maybe unstack these 2 notes just to give some build-up effect? it is obvious that the vocal is getting intensified gradually as i can see so unstacking them would give more build-up effect and would emphasize the intensifying of the vocal imo.
00:22:396(2)- missing 1/3 repeat because, actually, the vocal stops on 00:22:670- so yeah it is like a 'ghost vocal' let's say. don't forget to adjust the spacing between (2)- and (3)- after!
00:55:273(2,3)- imo, i would change this rhythm just because to make 00:55:684- clickable and tbh, it deserves to be clickable imo so you have to replace the slider (2)- with 2 notes and move (3)- to 00:55:684- which will become (4)- afterwards. the rhythm should be like this one or you can do the same rhythm as the one from 01:08:629(2,3)- for instance.
01:10:889(5,6)- as i said for 00:19:520(5,6)-. would unstack these 2 notes for more build-up effect because the vocal is getting intensified gradually, which is really obvious tbh, and also the instruments are stronger here tho.

[insane]
you can use a custom name for this difficulty like 'KiddinG' or 'Sigma'? i'm not really good at finding custom names ;___;
00:09:040(1,2)- talking about visual stuffs, i'm not a fan of these kind of patterns tbh. if you want to improve the pattern, you can curve (2)- like in this image. it will play more better imo than before.
00:14:383(3,4,5)- the same thing as i said above. you can try this one for instance.
00:19:520(6,7,8)- imo, why don't you space (7)- and (8)- as you did for 00:32:670(6,7,8)-? the vocal is really stronger here and unstacking these notes from (6)-'s tail would give some nice build-up effect if i'm not wrong.
00:29:383(3)- may end this slider on 1/3 instead of end it on 1/4? it is obvious that the vocal is in a kind of extension and ending the slider on 1/3 would follow the vocal until it ends on 1/3 (00:29:657-) and would give more effect to the song itself imo.
00:38:835(3,4)- intentional spacing change? shouldn't the spacing be like from 00:35:547(3,4)-? i think it should be because it looks like an unintentional spacing change imo so it wouldn't hurt to change the spacing from 2.40x to 1.90x here tbh.
00:40:273(2,3,4,5)- is this supposed to be a blanket here? if yes, you may fix it just for the sake of better visual stuff.
00:49:109(4,5,6,7)- talking about build-up stuff, i would like to space them a little more just to give more build-up effect because the vocal is clearly stronger and tbh, some jump would work here rather than some antijumps.
00:55:068(2,3,4)- the current rhythm sounds a bit...strange tbh. starting with the slider feels really weird and it doesn't give enough effect to the song itself imo. to improve the rhythm here, in order to give more effect to the song and follow much better the vocal, i would replace this slider with just a 1/4 note and then i would move 00:55:479(3)- to 00:55:273-. also, i see that you ignore the snare from 00:55:684- after i saw that slider (3)- in extension which quite dissapoints me because there's no any extension tbh so better put a note there after you made the changes to the rhythm just for the sake of emphasizing the snare by making it clickable lol. http://puu.sh/s7LW1/6a8600f39e.jpg
00:58:355(2,3)- i guess i would change (3)-'s slidershape or make it less sharp because it looks like the whole pattern have a bad angle and it doesn't play really great tbh.
01:01:643(2,3)- maybe space them more just for more build-up effect? the vocal is getting gradually stronger and spacing them more would give a nice build-up effect imo.
01:02:259(4,5,6,7)- the same thing as i said on 00:49:109(4,5,6,7)- with build-up stuff.
01:08:424(3,4)- is the same problem as i pointed out on 00:55:068(2,3,4)- but here, i would ctrl+g the both objects and then end (4)- which will become (3)- on 1/4 tick because there's no any extension tbh. having (3)- as circle instead as slider would give more effect to that ignored snare and also it would make it clickable. http://puu.sh/s7MxT/01f417d691.jpg

also, as a last note, can you explain me the reason of the usage of slider changes from 00:09:040- to 00:16:848-? imo, they have no logical, even if the vocal is really stronger. you can emphasize the stronger vocal without using sv changes in the first half of the map tbh *i think 00:29:794(4)- counts tho*. the sv changes from kiai have more logical tbh so they're ok.

that's all for now! not a bad map to say and really fun to play it.
good luck!
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