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Yamicchi

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-08-23T11:02:57+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
01:18:655 (1) - cái này vui đó , mà có thể gập slider lại bắt người chơi phải di chuyển theo slider thì có lẽ thú vị hơn :V https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913945 ý là như vầy. Mặc dù Yami rất thích được gọi là Colorful Yamicchi nhưng thôi, kh cần phải sửa như vậy, slider shape hiện tại cũng ổn r )
01:21:759 (2,3,4) - pattern này khá khó read (kèm với cái 1/2 stack tí giải thích), có khi spacing cũng vừa phải thôi, còn nếu muốn giữ spacing thì: 01:22:276 (5,6) - chỗ này pattern mới so với phần trước nên có thể space ra bình thường cho cái này ko sợ read nhầm double, chỗ sau đó thì stack thoải mái. hmm, kh hiểu ý lmt lắm nhưng mà cả nửa kiai sau Yami dùng i chang pattern đó, nên uh..cũng kh hiểu lắm
01:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - stream spacing hơi to đối với insane :v , cộng thêm cái 01:06:845 (8,1) - góc nhọn này nhiều đứa thọt ở đây lắm, ko biết nó nên nerf ko :V à ) dù gì thì đây cũng là Insane chứ kh phải Light Insane đâu LMT ơi ) còn cái góc nhọn đó tại Yami thấy vui nên để vậy thôi :3 nếu bị phàn nàn sẽ sửa

Hiện tại chưa update gì nha LKH :3 Cảm ơn LMT đã mod

baysman

216 posts

Joined October 2015

baysman 2016-08-30T19:12:08+00:00

Hello

Normal
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - what about somthing like that? >

01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - same thing ^
01:14:177 (6) - maybe change to circle
01:25:212 (6) - same ^

Advanced
01:31:936 (3,1,3,1,3,1) - what about reverse 01:31:936 (3) - at this slider to red tick , and that slider 01:32:453 (1) - replace the 2 sircles like that

Hard
01:33:832 (1,2) - put circle between these sliders
01:39:350 (1,2) - ^

Insane
00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - what if delete 2,4 slider and made 1,3 slider reverse and on empty red ticks put circles

Yamicchi's Insane
00:13:143 (5,1) - maybe circle between those sliders at the beginin that slider 00:13:832 (1) -
00:18:660 (5,1) - same thing ^
00:21:419 (5,1) - ^

I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck with your map!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-08-31T13:04:30+00:00

baysman wrote:
Hello

Normal
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - what about somthing like that? > No thanks, I would rather keep my patterm here since there is no point in doing so
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - same thing ^ ^
01:14:177 (6) - maybe change to circle there is a strong beat at sliderend, and I don't want to use 2 1/2 circles in Normal
01:25:212 (6) - same ^ ^

Advanced
01:31:936 (3,1,3,1,3,1) - what about reverse 01:31:936 (3) - at this slider to red tick , and that slider 01:32:453 (1) - replace the 2 sircles like that quite good suggestion, but I think 01:32:453 (1) get to stay

Hard
01:33:832 (1,2) - put circle between these sliders uhm,not bad, I will consider it
01:39:350 (1,2) - ^ ^

Insane
00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - what if delete 2,4 slider and made 1,3 slider reverse and on empty red ticks put circles sure

I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck with your map!Thanks for your mod!

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-08-31T15:33:45+00:00

last diff

00:04:867 (2,1) - try to avoid that overlap
00:08:315 (1) - make this completly straight
00:14:350 (2) - fix blanket
00:18:660 (1) - ^
00:20:384 (3,5,1) - ^ D:
00:22:108 (1) - symmetric
01:31:074 - dat nc. pls. ;w; dont do that - rework nc's here.

pm me ingame for irc pls

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-01T12:40:26+00:00

CookieKivi wrote:
last diff
00:04:867 (2,1) - try to avoid that overlap why?I think it's cool
00:08:315 (1) - make this completly straight ok
00:14:350 (2) - fix blanket tried
00:18:660 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:384 (3,5,1) - ^ D: tried a lot
00:22:108 (1) - symmetric ...
01:31:074 - dat nc. pls. ;w; dont do that - rework nc's here. why? it looks good

pm me ingame for irc pls .

PS: CookieKivi, pls wait until Sunday if you can. I'm kinda busy.

Last edited by Hoa 2016-09-04T14:59:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jawns

109 posts

Joined October 2013

jawns 2016-09-04T00:55:49+00:00

This prolly took a bit too long, but here is the mod from my queue. It's currently 2:am so bear with me if I say some bs.

Into Hopelessness and Despair:

I don't think there's anything wrong with the map per se, however I feel like it could be made a bit more interesting in some ways. However, I feel like it plays very well already, so just ignore anything you think messes too much with what you've got going.

I think you could differentiate a bit between the main melody and stuff like 00:03:487 (3,4,5) - . Maybe you could space out the most important parts of the melody, or maybe have different slider velocities. This is highly subjective though, and not necessary

Around 00:03:315 (2) - and 00:08:832 (2) - there is a very quiet instrument in the background, it could be interesting to try to maps something to that, though this might be hard to do without messing the rest up.

00:48:315 (1,2) - There's a note in the song on the blue tick right between these sliders. You could map something on that to break up the monotony a bit. Same goes for 00:51:074 (1,2) - 00:53:832 (1,2) - etc.

01:09:350 (2) - This is really the only thing I don't like about this map. There is a sound that is very important for the melody on the slider end. I think you could emphasize that a bit better. What you did at 01:20:384 (2,3,4,5) - makes more sense in my opinion. Same goes for 01:12:108 (2,3,4) - etc.

01:10:729 (2,3,4) - More or less same as above, however this time it's the last note of the stack that is important. I don't feel like there is a lot of emphasis on that note either.

01:24:694 (3,4,5) - This works better than the example above, however I think it could be even better if you made 5 into a slider.

01:32:970 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play, however that might just be because I suck, so don't worry too much about it.

01:31:763 (1,2,1,2) - I think this is a pretty unconventional way to do it, however I think it works well. It varies things up a bit. Not a criticism, just thought I would bring up that I liked that in particular

As I said, this is a really solid diff in my opinion, and a lot of my "criticisms" are just suggestions you can take or leave. It's already a great map, and I was struggling to find things to point out.

Yamicchi's Insane

Another very solid diff, don't have too much to say about this either...

00:48:660 (2,3,4) - It makes a lot of sense for the slider on 1 to end on a blue tick, because so does the sound in the background of the song. However on 2,3 and 4, the sound in the background lands on the red tick, so the way you have mapped it goes a bit against that rhythm.

01:00:040 (1,2) - You should map something on the red tick in between as well on the clap sound.

01:33:143 (5,6) - I would probably wouldn't have used sliders here, because the melody changes notes on both the red and white ticks. This would make it different to 01:33:833 (1) - where the note stays the same. Same goes for 01:39:005 (7) - 01:41:764 (5) - and similar. 01:36:246 (5,6) - and 01:38:315 (3,4,5,6) - works very well, you could do more similar to that.

Again, I haven't got much to say, I'm really digging for things to criticize. Very solid diff as well, great stuff.

All in all, both difficulties were very very solid, they could maybe be made a tiny bit more interesting at times, but it's already looking very very good. Honestly, I wouldn't mind if this was ranked as it is now (though I think a lot of unranked maps should be ranked, so don't just listen to me on that one).

I wish you a lot of luck getting this ranked!

Again, sorry for the late post. I'm off to bed now...

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-04T02:13:31+00:00

baysman wrote:
Hello (ò w ó)/

Yamicchi's Insane
00:13:143 (5,1) - maybe circle between those sliders at the beginin that slider 00:13:832 (1) - I can't tell why do I have to
00:18:660 (5,1) - same thing ^
00:21:419 (5,1) - ^

jawns wrote:
Yamicchi's Insane

Another very solid diff, don't have too much to say about this either...

00:48:660 (2,3,4) - It makes a lot of sense for the slider on 1 to end on a blue tick, because so does the sound in the background of the song. However on 2,3 and 4, the sound in the background lands on the red tick, so the way you have mapped it goes a bit against that rhythm. nah I just simply follow the tik tok sound, and I blame LKH for the hitsound :< will probably re hitsound later

01:00:040 (1,2) - You should map something on the red tick in between as well on the clap sound. yes, quick fix, hope it works

01:33:143 (5,6) - I would probably wouldn't have used sliders here, because the melody changes notes on both the red and white ticks. This would make it different to 01:33:833 (1) - where the note stays the same. Same goes for 01:39:005 (7) - 01:41:764 (5) - and similar. 01:36:246 (5,6) - and 01:38:315 (3,4,5,6) - works very well, you could do more similar to that. fixed some, but will remap this part some day cause it sucks, totally sucks it was made when I didn't know anything about DnB mapping orz

Thanks for the mod guys :3

Open this box for Unicorn~

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CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-09-04T06:18:28+00:00

M4M <3

Into hopelessness and despair

00:03:487 (3,4,5) - 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nicer to distinguish these more. Sound in 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - is much more prominent, and I think the map should reflect that.

00:04:867 (2,1) - This overlap doesn’t look very neat imo. Beside, this would be a good place for small flow break with downbeat and all :3 I like what you’ve done at 00:10:729 (3,1) -

00:05:556 (1,2,3) - Blanket could be better~

00:11:763 (3,4) - 00:16:591 (1,2) - 00:22:625 (2,3) - ^

00:08:315 (1,3) - Overlap doesn’t look very good here either imo.

00:09:350 (4,1,2) - 00:35:212 (2,1) - 01:38:487 (2,3,5) - ^

00:13:832 (1,2,3) - If you are going to do double blanket, I think you should use same circle size for it, i.e. ( http://puu.sh/qZgPJ/6f30134c0f.jpg )

00:26:246 (1,2) - I think it would be more intuitive to do reverse slider like 00:24:867 (1) - at least few more time to ease players into this weird 3/4 rhythm clicking

00:25:556 (2,3,4,5) - 00:26:763 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:28:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:29:522 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think making these jumps smaller would fit the song better. I think music is way more intense 00:36:419 (2,3,4,5,6) - and after. While you used larger DS, I just think it would be better to make the difference more pronounced.

00:39:694 (4,5,1) - There is a straight line of cursor movement here, and i think that feels very different compared to angled movement you used at 00:36:936 (5,6,1) - 00:38:315 (4,5,1) - 00:41:074 (4,5,1) - etc. I don’t think there’s anything special in music at 00:39:694 (4,5,1) -, so I think it shouldn’t play so differently.

00:46:936 (1,4) - stacking error

00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making it more organized like ( http://puu.sh/qZheJ/1f78daa6f2.jpg )

00:53:832 (1,2,3,4) - since you are making this into a group of four, I think it should be made symmetric by rotating 90 degrees, copy pasting, etc. Asymmetry is too noticeable

00:57:970 (1,1,1,1) - Placement of these feels random ;x 00:57:970 (1,1) - are overlapping, while rest of them aren’t. Distance is inconsistent. Angle created y 00:57:970 (1,1) - and 00:58:487 (1,1) - are not the same. I’d like to see an obvious structure <3
01:05:901 (5,6,1) - I think angle is too wide. Something like http://puu.sh/qZhw4/bdacfebb9d.jpg would play better & give better emphasis to 01:06:246 (1) - imo.

01:19:867 (2,2,7) - adjusting 01:20:384 (2) - slightly so the circles are roughly equal distance apart will create neater visual imo

Yamicchi’s Insane

00:12:453 (4,5) - 00:20:729 (4,5) - tiny inconsistency that I noticed which probably doesn’t matter but I’ll still post :^)

00:27:626 (1,2) - looks like a blanket, might as well make it a blanket xD

01:03:488 (1,2) - I heard people dislikes this kind of overlapping where they barely overlap. Consider moving it to (220 162) to make lovely triangle <3

01:17:625 (2,5) - This overlap feels little half assed imo. I think complete stack or less overlapping area would make your intention clearer

01:20:729 (5,1) - 01:23:488 (5,1) - Do you like blankets? Perfect blankets~?

01:22:798 (1,3,4,5,6) - This is very nazi, but I think it could look more organized if 01:22:798 (1,6) - had same distance as 01:22:798 (1,3,4,5) - , i.e. implicit distance snap

01:43:833 (2,7) - This overlap seem to be inconsistent with the overlaps you usually do

Much fun >:D Good luck >xD

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-04T08:22:54+00:00

jawns

jawns wrote:
This prolly took a bit too long, but here is the mod from my queue. It's currently 2:am so bear with me if I say some bs.

Into Hopelessness and Despair:

I don't think there's anything wrong with the map per se, however I feel like it could be made a bit more interesting in some ways. However, I feel like it plays very well already, so just ignore anything you think messes too much with what you've got going.

I think you could differentiate a bit between the main melody and stuff like 00:03:487 (3,4,5) - . Maybe you could space out the most important parts of the melody, or maybe have different slider velocities. This is highly subjective though, and not necessary. fixed

Around 00:03:315 (2) - and 00:08:832 (2) - there is a very quiet instrument in the background, it could be interesting to try to maps something to that, though this might be hard to do without messing the rest up. Sorry, I can't hear it, so ...

00:48:315 (1,2) - There's a note in the song on the blue tick right between these sliders. You could map something on that to break up the monotony a bit. Same goes for 00:51:074 (1,2) - 00:53:832 (1,2) - etc. sure

01:09:350 (2) - This is really the only thing I don't like about this map. There is a sound that is very important for the melody on the slider end. I think you could emphasize that a bit better. What you did at 01:20:384 (2,3,4,5) - makes more sense in my opinion. Same goes for 01:12:108 (2,3,4) - etc. Yeah, maybe I should make it consistent

01:10:729 (2,3,4) - More or less same as above, however this time it's the last note of the stack that is important. I don't feel like there is a lot of emphasis on that note either. Nah, I prefer this pattern. The last note is, in some way, emphasized imo

01:24:694 (3,4,5) - This works better than the example above, however I think it could be even better if you made 5 into a slider. I really like it as of now

01:32:970 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play, however that might just be because I suck, so don't worry too much about it. Changed sth

01:31:763 (1,2,1,2) - I think this is a pretty unconventional way to do it, however I think it works well. It varies things up a bit. Not a criticism, just thought I would bring up that I liked that in particular Glad you like it

As I said, this is a really solid diff in my opinion, and a lot of my "criticisms" are just suggestions you can take or leave. It's already a great map, and I was struggling to find things to point out. Thanks a lot!

CaffeAmericano

CaffeAmericano wrote:
M4M <3

Into hopelessness and despair
00:03:487 (3,4,5) - 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nicer to distinguish these more. Sound in 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - is much more prominent, and I think the map should reflect that. fixed

00:04:867 (2,1) - This overlap doesn’t look very neat imo. Beside, this would be a good place for small flow break with downbeat and all :3 I like what you’ve done at 00:10:729 (3,1) kinda changed it

00:05:556 (1,2,3) - Blanket could be better~ I've already blanket the slider before, so blanket these wouldn't look so beautiful

00:11:763 (3,4) - 00:16:591 (1,2) - 00:22:625 (2,3) - ^ ^

00:08:315 (1,3) - Overlap doesn’t look very good here either imo. fixed

00:09:350 (4,1,2) - 00:35:212 (2,1) - 01:38:487 (2,3,5) - ^ did sth

00:13:832 (1,2,3) - If you are going to do double blanket, I think you should use same circle size for it, i.e. ( http://puu.sh/qZgPJ/6f30134c0f.jpg ) Maybe not double blanket, but fixed

00:26:246 (1,2) - I think it would be more intuitive to do reverse slider like 00:24:867 (1) - at least few more time to ease players into this weird 3/4 rhythm clicking sure

00:25:556 (2,3,4,5) - 00:26:763 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:28:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:29:522 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think making these jumps smaller would fit the song better. I think music is way more intense 00:36:419 (2,3,4,5,6) - and after. While you used larger DS, I just think it would be better to make the difference more pronounced. done

00:39:694 (4,5,1) - There is a straight line of cursor movement here, and i think that feels very different compared to angled movement you used at 00:36:936 (5,6,1) - 00:38:315 (4,5,1) - 00:41:074 (4,5,1) - etc. I don’t think there’s anything special in music at 00:39:694 (4,5,1) -, so I think it shouldn’t play so differently. done

00:46:936 (1,4) - stacking error done

00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making it more organized like ( http://puu.sh/qZheJ/1f78daa6f2.jpg ) changed the entire pattern

00:53:832 (1,2,3,4) - since you are making this into a group of four, I think it should be made symmetric by rotating 90 degrees, copy pasting, etc. Asymmetry is too noticeable change the entire pattern

00:57:970 (1,1,1,1) - Placement of these feels random ;x 00:57:970 (1,1) - are overlapping, while rest of them aren’t. Distance is inconsistent. Angle created y 00:57:970 (1,1) - and 00:58:487 (1,1) - are not the same. I’d like to see an obvious structure <3 the stack is intentional, while the rest will be fixed
01:05:901 (5,6,1) - I think angle is too wide. Something like http://puu.sh/qZhw4/bdacfebb9d.jpg would play better & give better emphasis to 01:06:246 (1) - imo. sure
01:19:867 (2,2,7) - adjusting 01:20:384 (2) - slightly so the circles are roughly equal distance apart will create neater visual imo. Ok

Much fun >:D Good luck >xD Thanks a lot!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-04T13:15:31+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
Yamicchi’s Insane
00:12:453 (4,5) - 00:20:729 (4,5) - tiny inconsistency that I noticed which probably doesn’t matter but I’ll still post :^) geez nice catch~

00:27:626 (1,2) - looks like a blanket, might as well make it a blanket xD would blanket it with the whole slider body but yea fixed

01:03:488 (1,2) - I heard people dislikes this kind of overlapping where they barely overlap. Consider moving it to (220 162) to make lovely triangle <3 must fix this later because following you will break the spacing consistent, but let's keep it like that first

01:17:625 (2,5) - This overlap feels little half assed imo. I think complete stack or less overlapping area would make your intention clearer agree about the visual part but lemme think a way

01:20:729 (5,1) - 01:23:488 (5,1) - Do you like blankets? Perfect blankets~? <3

01:22:798 (1,3,4,5,6) - This is very nazi, but I think it could look more organized if 01:22:798 (1,6) - had same distance as 01:22:798 (1,3,4,5) - , i.e. implicit distance snap I'm trying to solve the problem because the space is not really wide so...

01:43:833 (2,7) - This overlap seem to be inconsistent with the overlaps you usually do 01:36:936 (2,4) - 01:47:281 (6,3) - I think
Much fun >:D Good luck >xD

Thank you ~~

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412,228,104522,2,0,L|508:236,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104867,6,0,L|284:352,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,105212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,260,105384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,168,105557,2,0,P|252:160|296:176,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,105902,2,0,P|430:232|474:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,276,106246,6,0,B|284:320|284:320|292:376,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,106591,2,0,B|188:316|188:316|180:260,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,107109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,172,107281,2,0,P|176:156|116:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,107626,6,0,B|340:196|340:196|404:184,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,84,107971,2,0,B|336:76|336:76|272:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,108315,2,0,P|216:208|252:256,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,108660,2,0,L|436:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,109005,6,0,L|164:356,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,336,109350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109694,2,0,P|100:212|168:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,268,110040,2,0,L|336:248,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,110384,6,0,L|304:96,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,110729,2,0,L|100:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,111074,2,0,L|208:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,111419,2,0,L|412:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,256,111764,6,0,P|504:208|488:160,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112453,2,0,B|400:368|400:368|352:356,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,328,112798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,228,112971,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-09-08T16:17:18+00:00

Thấy dc thì hẳn sửa. Muốn sửa nhưng lười sửa vì cái nào cũng dc thì cũng ko nên. Modder ko phải lúc nào cũng đúng

[Cơ bản]
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
normal-hitnormal.wav

[Bình thường]
00:12:108 (3) - Cố ý hả? ờ cũng dc
00:13:832 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Hơi bị xấu, nhưng ko có lỗi gì. Nhưng mà xấu là cái tội rồi lololol jk
00:27:625 (1,1) - Có làm blanket thì để cho nó đẹp
00:35:901 (1,1) - xd Thôi ko bắt lỗi blanket nữa
01:01:764 (3,1) - Overlap vậy xấu. Tại vì cái circle nó đè lên cái slider head rồi. Stack slider head lên dc đó, nếu rãnh sửa.
01:00:039 (1) - Ko biết có đúng ko nhưng nghĩ là ko phải reverse slider nghe hợp hơn. Biết là có cái tiếng trên red tick rồi

01:22:108 (4,5) - 01:27:625 (4,5) - Chỗ này đúng rồi
01:31:763 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Sao chỗ này để ngược lại. để vậy cũng dc tại ko biết là có unrankable hay ko nhưng thường là nên ctrl+g chỗ này. ừ, cứ bấm vô cái timestamp ctrl+g là dc. Placement sẽ bị lỗi nhưng rhythm sẽ dc sửa. Cái ý chính là để cho cái nốt cuối clickable vì nó mạnh và nó đáng như vậy

[Nâng cao]
00:30:384 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - tốt
00:46:936 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ổn
01:06:246 (1) - Cái này reverse slider chi? Làm nguyên slider art cũng dc đó, đâu có gì thay đổi ở đây đâu.

Có làm vội ko vậy?

[Khó]
01:10:987 (3) - Note này xóa đi. 01:11:074 (3,4) - Làm 2 cái này thành 1 slider là dc rồi. hoặc muốn giữ cái đó thì cũng phải làm 2 cái kia thành 1 slider, rồi stack cái note đó lên. để vậy ko ổn lắm hmmmm. Có áp dụng thì sửa mấy cái tương tự.
Còn cái trình bày xấu thôi, mà lười chỉ ra từng cái.

Thôi thua rồi, sorry. Nhưng khó rank lắm, cơ bản chất lượng khá kém. Rhythm cũng vài chỗ sai, mà song repetitive mà. 1 chỗ sai thì nhiều chỗ sai. Placement hơi bị buồn.
Mod còn lại lên discord nhé

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-09T07:11:21+00:00

Asaiga wrote:
Thấy dc thì hẳn sửa. Muốn sửa nhưng lười sửa vì cái nào cũng dc thì cũng ko nên. Modder ko phải lúc nào cũng đúng

[Cơ bản]
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
normal-hitnormal.wav xóa

[Bình thường]
00:12:108 (3) - Cố ý hả? ờ cũng dc xấu thật
00:13:832 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Hơi bị xấu, nhưng ko có lỗi gì. Nhưng mà xấu là cái tội rồi lololol jk cố gắng sửa
00:27:625 (1,1) - Có làm blanket thì để cho nó đẹp ...
00:35:901 (1,1) - xd Thôi ko bắt lỗi blanket nữa ...
01:01:764 (3,1) - Overlap vậy xấu. Tại vì cái circle nó đè lên cái slider head rồi. Stack slider head lên dc đó, nếu rãnh sửa. rảnh mà
01:00:039 (1) - Ko biết có đúng ko nhưng nghĩ là ko phải reverse slider nghe hợp hơn. Biết là có cái tiếng trên red tick rồi em thấy hợp

01:22:108 (4,5) - 01:27:625 (4,5) - Chỗ này đúng rồi
01:31:763 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Sao chỗ này để ngược lại. để vậy cũng dc tại ko biết là có unrankable hay ko nhưng thường là nên ctrl+g chỗ này. ừ, cứ bấm vô cái timestamp ctrl+g là dc. Placement sẽ bị lỗi nhưng rhythm sẽ dc sửa. Cái ý chính là để cho cái nốt cuối clickable vì nó mạnh và nó đáng như vậy uhm

[Nâng cao]
00:30:384 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - tốt
00:46:936 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ổn
01:06:246 (1) - Cái này reverse slider chi? Làm nguyên slider art cũng dc đó, đâu có gì thay đổi ở đây đâu. thôi em làm spinner luôn

Có làm vội ko vậy?

[Khó]
01:10:987 (3) - Note này xóa đi. 01:11:074 (3,4) - Làm 2 cái này thành 1 slider là dc rồi. hoặc muốn giữ cái đó thì cũng phải làm 2 cái kia thành 1 slider, rồi stack cái note đó lên. để vậy ko ổn lắm hmmmm. Có áp dụng thì sửa mấy cái tương tự. uhm
Còn cái trình bày xấu thôi, mà lười chỉ ra từng cái.

Thôi thua rồi, sorry. Nhưng khó rank lắm, cơ bản chất lượng khá kém. Rhythm cũng vài chỗ sai, mà song repetitive mà. 1 chỗ sai thì nhiều chỗ sai. Placement hơi bị buồn.
Mod còn lại lên discord nhé. Cảm ơn anh!

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2016-09-13T17:41:33+00:00

Not Requested, But I just wanna mod cause the song is so good!

[Insane]

From a visual aspect I suppose, placement of notes isn't very appealing.
The beginning is weird, when it comes to the rhythm, you should choose one instrument to map from rather than what I'll call both foreground and background instruments.
Spacing is another issue with this map, its hard to distinguish between 1/1 spacing and 1/2, for example 00:13:488 (2,1) - 00:02:453 (2,1) -
The distance snapping in 1/2 spacing is also quite short, but I guess it's not that much of an issue.
00:30:385 (1,1) - If it wasn't a reverse slider this would be fine, I would position 00:31:764 (1) - elsewhere, or you can ctrl h
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is really off. Try this
Chorus seems fine when it comes to the rhythm but I would look over note placements.

[Yamicchi's Insane]

01:08:660 - 01:29:694 - I was expecting the map to speed up at this point. Sure there are more notes to click, but there isn't a change in sv, and a decrease at some stages. Maybe if sv is increased by .1? But its still playable, doesn't have to have changing.

This diff is good, definitely ready for rank!

[into hopelessness and despair]

01:31:936 (2,1) - where notes are stacked I think you should distance them slightly, it makes it hard to read especially for hidden players.
[img]01:31:936%20(2,1)%20-[/img]

This diff covers similar issue to Insane but I think it's mostly fine and very playable.

Good Luck!!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-16T07:08:38+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
Not Requested, But I just wanna mod cause the song is so good!

[Insane]
From a visual aspect I suppose, placement of notes isn't very appealing. IDK
The beginning is weird, when it comes to the rhythm, you should choose one instrument to map from rather than what I'll call both foreground and background instruments. I'm sure it's fine
Spacing is another issue with this map, its hard to distinguish between 1/1 spacing and 1/2, for example 00:13:488 (2,1) - 00:02:453 (2,1) - I'm sure it is fine too
The distance snapping in 1/2 spacing is also quite short, but I guess it's not that much of an issue.
00:30:385 (1,1) - If it wasn't a reverse slider this would be fine, I would position 00:31:764 (1) - elsewhere, or you can ctrl h changed
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is really off. Try this

changed
Chorus seems fine when it comes to the rhythm but I would look over note placements. Did some changes

[into hopelessness and despair]
01:31:936 (2,1) - where notes are stacked I think you should distance them slightly, it makes it hard to read especially for hidden players.
[img]01:31:936%20(2,1)%20-[/img]
Changed half of them, other half is purpose

This diff covers similar issue to Insane but I think it's mostly fine and very playable.
Good Luck!! Thanks very much

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-10-10T04:00:14+00:00

From #modreqs doing M4M

Normal

SPOILER

00:02:798 (1,2) - Generally speaking, sliders aim towards the next note. Bring down 2 so you can blanket 1. You'll have to re-snap a couple notes.
00:12:108 (3) - Sliders aim towards their next note. Move 1 x:181 y: 220
01:37:970 (1) - Personal suggestion, but I'd blanket 2 with this slider.
01:43:487 (1) - Flow between this note and the next isn't good. I'd turn this slider into a straight slider like this: http://puu.sh/rDC6y/0c9d391474.jpg

Advanced

SPOILER

00:29:005 (1) - Angle this note upwards so the flow is better. (As high as you can without going off the screen.)
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Please spread these out, they look bad overlapped.
00:45:212 (3) - The spacing is weird here, with DS on can you move this down?
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping these doesn't look good on easier diffs and low AR, maybe squares?
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:33:315 (3,1) - You can fix this overlap by extending the sliderhead of 1. (In the process, you'll shrink the slider.)
01:36:246 (4,1) - Copy and of these sliders and replace the non-copy for perfect parallel sliders.

Hard

SPOILER

00:15:556 (1) - Sliders generally speaking aim towards the next note. I think it would look better if you flip this.
00:21:763 (2,1) - You'll have to move 2 around a bit to fix this overlap.
00:44:694 (1) - Angle this down a bit so it flows into 2 better.
01:36:591 (1) - I'd blanket 2 for better flow.

Yamicchi's Insane

SPOILER

00:36:591 (2,3) - I'd suggest 2 1/2 sliders instead of this. Also, make sure the sliders aim towards the next note.
00:37:971 (2,3,4,5) - There isn't any circular flow here, and it feels weird. I'd ctrl + g 4 and 5.
01:18:143 (5) - Should move this to the right more and ctrl + g for better flow.
01:21:074 (7) - ctrl + g for better flow.
01:23:833 (7) - I'd blanket 5 just so it flows better.

Insane

SPOILER

01:00:040 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if this was a perfect triangle.
01:10:039 (7) - This doesn't flow really well into 1. I'd add an anchor-point to the end and bend it so it aims towards the next slider, while keeping struture.
01:11:419 (6) - ^
01:12:798 (7) - ^

Sorry it took longer than it should have.

Last edited by Hollow Delta 2016-10-10T17:50:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bky-ssiO_DELETED

Bky-ssiO_DELETED 2016-10-10T14:13:50+00:00

- POTENTIAL CHANGES - / Into Hopelessness and Despair

00:00:039 - a potential spinner here until 00:01:763 - can be cool, and fitting to the sound which is introducing the first note from 00:02:108 (1) - ( can add some advantage to players which are fast at spinning, kind of challenge to reach the top1 on this map
after all thats just an idea =) )

00:07:625 (1,2) - theses two taps feel out of place in some way would defintely continue with sliders feeling

00:13:143 (1,2) - same as 00:07:625 (1,2) -

01:12:625 (6) - i feel like this circle will make the flow better here at this part, like this : http://esl.d.pr/bwgo/1j66j5EN it's also suiting the part you've made here 01:15:384 (6) - screenshot = http://esl.d.pr/17oiT/uRXa9X7k

01:16:505 (3,4) - i would make this double tap in a line to add a bit more of spices, i feel like it's way too easy to catch the 01:16:763 (5) - for your current star rating

01:27:539 (3,4) - would do the same here as 01:16:505 (3,4)

01:52:798 (4,5) - i think you can manage here something harder to end the song =) just make them spacy as 01:50:383 (1,2) - ( for exemple you manage it as you wish, i know you've manage the spacing
related to the velocity of the melody but it can make the player more challenge to fc it perfectly. )

- GENERAL OPINION -

Pretty, pretty strong mapping here. really consistent, awesome song choice, background fitting really well. i've enjoyed the jump phases really much, i felt playing a new ranked map to be honest.

the part from 01:31:074 (1) - to the end gave me goosebumps.

Keep going. =)

-cheers Gl & Hf mapping !

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-10T15:19:20+00:00

Bubblun

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs doing M4M

Normal
SPOILER
00:02:798 (1,2) - Generally speaking, sliders aim towards the next note. Bring down 2 so you can blanket 1. You'll have to re-snap a couple notes. Sure
00:12:108 (3) - Sliders aim towards their next note. Move 1 x:181 y: 220 Did some change.
01:37:970 (1) - Personal suggestion, but I'd blanket 2 with this slider. Actually, it's a good idea
01:43:487 (1) - Flow between this note and the next isn't good. I'd turn this slider into a straight slider like this: http://puu.sh/rDC6y/0c9d391474.jpg But I prefer to keep the blanket so...

Advanced
SPOILER
00:29:005 (1) - Angle this note upwards so the flow is better. (As high as you can without going off the screen.) Change sth Did the best I could
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Please spread these out, they look bad overlapped. Okay
00:45:212 (3) - The spacing is weird here, with DS on can you move this down? I think
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping these doesn't look good on easier diffs and low AR, maybe squares? I don't like squares, so I probably use back-and-forth
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:33:315 (3,1) - You can fix this overlap by extending the sliderhead of 1. (In the process, you'll shrink the slider.) Did try sth
01:36:246 (4,1) - Copy and of these sliders and replace the non-copy for perfect parallel sliders.Sure

Hard
SPOILER
00:15:556 (1) - Sliders generally speaking aim towards the next note. I think it would look better if you flip this. Actually, flipping it will make the flow kinda veer off course, so I think I'll keep this
00:21:763 (2,1) - You'll have to move 2 around a bit to fix this overlap. Did some change
00:44:694 (1) - Angle this down a bit so it flows into 2 better. Sure
01:36:591 (1) - I'd blanket 2 for better flow.Sure

Insane
SPOILER
01:00:040 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if this was a perfect triangle. Did the best I could
01:10:039 (7) - This doesn't flow really well into 1. I'd add an anchor-point to the end and bend it so it aims towards the next slider, while keeping struture.
01:11:419 (6) - ^
01:12:798 (7) - ^ Actually though, I believe it's fine and play well

Sorry it took longer than it should have.

Bky-ssiO

Bky-ssiO wrote:
- POTENTIAL CHANGES - / Into Hopelessness and Despair

00:00:039 - a potential spinner here until 00:01:763 - can be cool, and fitting to the sound which is introducing the first note from 00:02:108 (1) - ( can add some advantage to players which are fast at spinning, kind of challenge to reach the top1 on this map
after all thats just an idea =) ) Nah, probably not

00:07:625 (1,2) - theses two taps feel out of place in some way would defintely continue with sliders feeling This one I feel quite normal

00:13:143 (1,2) - same as 00:07:625 (1,2) - Now this one is wrong, so fixed

01:12:625 (6) - i feel like this circle will make the flow better here at this part, like this : http://esl.d.pr/bwgo/1j66j5EN it's also suiting the part you've made here 01:15:384 (6) - screenshot = http://esl.d.pr/17oiT/uRXa9X7k Actually, this part is consistent with 01:23:660 (6,7) , and it's intentional

01:16:505 (3,4) - i would make this double tap in a line to add a bit more of spices, i feel like it's way too easy to catch the 01:16:763 (5) - for your current star rating I make these so player can have a little pause and reverse flow

01:27:539 (3,4) - would do the same here as 01:16:505 (3,4) Explained

01:52:798 (4,5) - i think you can manage here something harder to end the song =) just make them spacy as 01:50:383 (1,2) - ( for exemple you manage it as you wish, i know you've manage the spacing
related to the velocity of the melody but it can make the player more challenge to fc it perfectly. ) Quite an interesting idea

- GENERAL OPINION -

Pretty, pretty strong mapping here. really consistent, awesome song choice, background fitting really well. i've enjoyed the jump phases really much, i felt playing a new ranked map to be honest.
the part from 01:31:074 (1) - to the end gave me goosebumps.

Keep going. =)

-cheers Gl & Hf mapping !

Thank you all for your mod. Much appreciated!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-12T13:49:46+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
01:08:660 - 01:29:694 - I was expecting the map to speed up at this point. Sure there are more notes to click, but there isn't a change in sv, and a decrease at some stages. Maybe if sv is increased by .1? But its still playable, doesn't have to have changing.
This diff is good, definitely ready for rank! I was a bad mapper back then tbh orz gonna remap soon.

Bubblun wrote:
Yamicchi's Insane
SPOILER
00:36:591 (2,3) - I'd suggest 2 1/2 sliders instead of this. Also, make sure the sliders aim towards the next note. sure
00:37:971 (2,3,4,5) - There isn't any circular flow here, and it feels weird. I'd ctrl + g 4 and 5. nothing weird here tbh
01:18:143 (5) - Should move this to the right more and ctrl + g for better flow. nah I'm fine with it
01:21:074 (7) - ctrl + g for better flow. worse flow
01:23:833 (7) - I'd blanket 5 just so it flows better.nope

Erm...Gonna remap this

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508,200,77281,6,0,L|377:218,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,232,77626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,132,77798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,132,77884,2,0,L|516:124,1,40.4999987640381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,240,78143,2,0,L|200:256,2,80.9999975280763,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,78660,6,0,B|144:272|168:304|168:304|192:336|176:376,3,135.000005149842,2|2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,152,79867,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,352,80040,6,0,B|20:360|20:360|64:344,1,101.250003862381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,80384,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,204,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,204,80643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,204,80729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,284,80902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,268,81074,2,0,L|364:260,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,232,81419,6,0,P|144:180|196:120,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,112,81764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,172,81936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,172,82022,2,0,L|48:176,1,40.4999987640381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,164,82281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,164,82453,2,0,L|388:160,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,232,82798,6,0,B|252:276|252:276|268:308|268:308|260:360,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,348,83143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,83315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,256,83402,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,83488,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,324,83660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,83833,2,0,L|436:340,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,172,84177,6,0,P|328:168|264:232,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,84522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,84695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,84781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,88,84867,2,0,L|320:80,1,40.4999987640381
176,188,85040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,188,85212,2,0,L|76:204,1,80.9999975280763,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,252,85557,6,0,B|372:244|372:244|464:272,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,288,85902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,176,86074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,176,86160,2,0,L|320:124,1,40.4999987640381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,328,86419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,86591,2,0,L|396:88,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,86936,6,0,P|248:276|288:324,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,87281,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,348,87453,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,348,87540,2,0,L|124:352,1,40.4999987640381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,252,87798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,252,87971,2,0,L|424:244,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,88315,6,0,P|380:64|288:96,1,121.499996292114,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,108,88660,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,88833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,88919,2,0,L|484:84,1,40.4999987640381,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,176,89177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,20,89350,2,0,L|164:16,1,80.9999975280763,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,192,89694,6,0,B|272:236|272:236|280:288,3,90,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,288,91074,6,0,L|188:304,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,91419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,176,91591,2,0,P|152:196|188:256,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,260,92109,2,0,L|44:360,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,92453,6,0,L|80:92,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,24,92798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,104,92971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,104,93057,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,104,93143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,104,93315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,184,93487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,28,93660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,93833,6,0,P|380:224|440:232,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,316,94177,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,364,94350,2,0,L|308:380,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,94867,2,0,L|220:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,95212,6,0,P|392:212|424:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,168,95557,2,0,P|460:140|416:112,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,95815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,104,95902,2,0,P|340:116|276:96,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,60,96246,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,60,96419,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,192,96591,6,0,P|140:248|148:292,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,96936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,280,97109,2,0,P|344:224|336:180,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,97626,2,0,L|148:348,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,97971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,312,98143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,98315,2,0,P|428:196|416:144,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,128,98574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,128,98660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,144,98833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,16,99005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,99177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,156,99350,6,0,B|148:168|148:168|76:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,132,99695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,220,99867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,220,100040,2,0,P|80:264|64:312,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,100384,2,0,P|157:336|119:369,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,100729,6,0,P|292:244|356:268,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101419,2,0,P|339:353|382:341,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,101764,2,0,L|436:160,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,102109,6,0,L|304:168,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,102453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,324,102626,2,0,P|176:336|128:320,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,103143,2,0,L|64:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,103488,6,0,P|304:148|368:168,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,103833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,104350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,228,104522,2,0,L|508:236,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104867,6,0,L|284:352,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,105212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,260,105384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,168,105557,2,0,P|252:160|296:176,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,105902,2,0,P|430:232|474:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,276,106246,6,0,B|284:320|284:320|292:376,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,106591,2,0,B|188:316|188:316|180:260,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,107109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,172,107281,2,0,P|176:156|116:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,107626,6,0,B|340:196|340:196|404:184,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,84,107971,2,0,B|336:76|336:76|272:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,108315,2,0,P|216:208|252:256,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,108660,2,0,L|436:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,109005,6,0,L|164:356,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,336,109350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109694,2,0,P|100:212|168:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,268,110040,2,0,L|336:248,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,110384,6,0,L|304:96,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,110729,2,0,L|100:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,111074,2,0,L|208:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,111419,2,0,L|412:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,256,111764,6,0,P|504:208|488:160,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112453,2,0,B|400:368|400:368|352:356,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,328,112798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,228,112971,5,8,0:0:0:0:

NanasWongSugih

5 posts

Joined November 2015

NanasWongSugih 2016-10-13T09:27:03+00:00

Let me try to make this taiko...

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-13T11:51:31+00:00

tfcreation_ wrote:
Let me try to make this taiko... You can do your own set. I don't think I'll like hybrid set. Thanks for your intention though (if that's really your intention).

AzureDoctor

196 posts

Joined January 2016

AzureDoctor 2016-10-13T22:32:08+00:00

Sorry, I won't be able to do mods anytime soon because something came up my my life.

Have a star instead. GL

xChorse

765 posts

Joined December 2012

xChorse 2016-10-14T12:33:58+00:00

From offline #modreqs q

Into Hopelessness and Despair

This can be blanketted 00:06:246 (3,4) -

If you blanket that, put 00:07:625 (1) - on 00:06:591 (4) - head because it looks pretty weird atm

00:09:350 (4,5,1) - looks off because 00:09:350 (4,1) - are touching and 00:09:350 (4,5) - aren't so increase the spacing by a bit. I would suggest this

00:10:729 (8,2) - this touch can be avoidable too

00:12:108 (4,1) - ^

00:15:556 (1,2) - ^ I would do something like this

00:16:591 (1,2) - can be blanketted better (00:17:108 (2) - is too curved)

00:21:074 (5,1,2,1,2) - very cluttered, I would move 00:22:625 (2) - somewhere else

Stack 00:27:453 (5) - on 00:25:729 (3) -

Stack 00:28:487 (4) - on 00:27:625 (1) - head

Fix stack 00:46:246 (2,1) -

Move 00:47:970 (3) - to x:316 y:208 to make the same spacing between 00:47:798 (2,3,4) -

This needs some polishing/cleaning to do. It's fun to play and I can see this being ranked if it was more structured/had better placement.

Yamicchi's Insane

00:07:625 - and 00:07:970 - need to be clickable imo since it's a really distinct sound

CTRL+H 00:27:626 (1) - and use it instead of 00:26:246 (1) - as it looks a bit better imo

Do something like 00:53:833 (1,2,3,4) - for 01:18:660 (1) - because it breaks off the "immersion" due to it repeating so much\

01:29:694 (1) - ^

01:36:936 (2,4) - could be stacked but it's probably intentional so whatever

01:47:281 (6,3) - you should stack this one though because those kind of overlaps are good when the object is behind the other one and not in front of it

Insane

If you avoided overlaps like this 00:18:315 (5,2) - it would be an extremely good mapset imo, but there are a lot of these untidy overlaps that don't look very pleasing.

01:06:246 - I would do something like this, but yours is fine too I guess

Stack 01:12:109 (2) - on 01:11:246 (5) -

Stack 01:13:660 (3,4,5) - on 01:12:798 (7) -

Move 01:52:798 (7) - to x:300 y:60

Move 01:52:970 (1) - to x:317 y:217

Hard

00:02:108 (1,2,1) - should have same spacing I think

^ 00:07:625 (1,2,1) -

^ 00:13:143 (1,2,1) - this one has bigger spacing on the (1) where it was smaller on the ones before

^ 00:18:660 (1,2,1) -

Stack 00:54:867 (4) - tail on 00:53:660 (4) -

01:30:039 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NCs

This difficulty's main issue is inconsistent spacing in places that aren't jumps

Advanced

00:04:522 (2,1) - random overlap, you can stack 00:05:556 (1) - on 00:04:522 (2) -

You can blanket this 00:13:229 (2,3) -

Normal

You could put a hitcircle here 01:19:694 -

01:30:729 - ^

The rhythm towards the end gets a bit weird but that's unavoidable I guess

Good luck!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-14T14:51:32+00:00

xChorse

xChorse wrote:
From offline #modreqs q
Into Hopelessness and Despair

This can be blanketted 00:06:246 (3,4) - Try sth

If you blanket that, put 00:07:625 (1) - on 00:06:591 (4) - head because it looks pretty weird atm sure

00:09:350 (4,5,1) - looks off because 00:09:350 (4,1) - are touching and 00:09:350 (4,5) - aren't so increase the spacing by a bit. I would suggest this done

00:10:729 (8,2) - this touch can be avoidable too fixed

00:12:108 (4,1) - ^ fixed

00:15:556 (1,2) - ^ I would do something like this kinda changed

00:16:591 (1,2) - can be blanketted better (00:17:108 (2) - is too curved) fixed

00:21:074 (5,1,2,1,2) - very cluttered, I would move 00:22:625 (2) - somewhere else changed the entire place

Stack 00:27:453 (5) - on 00:25:729 (3) - done

Stack 00:28:487 (4) - on 00:27:625 (1) - head done

Fix stack 00:46:246 (2,1) - done

Move 00:47:970 (3) - to x:316 y:208 to make the same spacing between 00:47:798 (2,3,4) - kinda changed

This needs some polishing/cleaning to do. It's fun to play and I can see this being ranked if it was more structured/had better placement. I wish so too

Insane

If you avoided overlaps like this 00:18:315 (5,2) - it would be an extremely good mapset imo, but there are a lot of these untidy overlaps that don't look very pleasing. Jezz, nice catch, Will try to fix everything soon

01:06:246 - I would do something like this, but yours is fine too I guess so why change?

Stack 01:12:109 (2) - on 01:11:246 (5) - done

Stack 01:13:660 (3,4,5) - on 01:12:798 (7) - done

Move 01:52:798 (7) - to x:300 y:60 done

Move 01:52:970 (1) - to x:317 y:217 done

Hard

00:02:108 (1,2,1) - should have same spacing I think should be now

^ 00:07:625 (1,2,1) - fixed

^ 00:13:143 (1,2,1) - this one has bigger spacing on the (1) where it was smaller on the ones before fixed

^ 00:18:660 (1,2,1) - purposedly

Stack 00:54:867 (4) - tail on 00:53:660 (4) - done

01:30:039 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NCs changed

This difficulty's main issue is inconsistent spacing in places that aren't jumps I kinda want to leave short jumps that aren't too hard to do

Advanced

00:04:522 (2,1) - random overlap, you can stack 00:05:556 (1) - on 00:04:522 (2) - sure

You can blanket this 00:13:229 (2,3) - ???

Normal

You could put a hitcircle here 01:19:694 - sure

01:30:729 - ^ the 4 sounds are similar so no changes

The rhythm towards the end gets a bit weird but that's unavoidable I guess i guess so too

Good luck! Thank you very much!!!

Streliteela

612 posts

Joined January 2012

Streliteela 2016-10-21T11:24:12+00:00

Hi~Mod from my queue :3

[IHaD]

00:07:625 (1,2,1) - I noticed that it's 1/1 rhythm here, so why the ds here is so small? At lease increase the ds to something like 00:13:487 (2,1) -
01:03:832 (2,4,3) - These three notes could be made more neatly. Like this:
SPOILER
01:22:108 (4) - Stack is a bit off :<
01:30:039 (1,1,1) - hmm it's no need to use nc spam here...players can also read this pattern well without these nc. Better removed them.
01:48:314 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow?

Nothing to point out in Yamicchi's Insane, good diff~

[Insane]

00:26:246 (1,2) - Better blanket?
01:17:971 (5,6,7) - make equal ds here? Cuz rhythm here are all 1/2.
SPOILER
01:32:109 (5,6) - A bit hard to read. Maybe ctrl+g? I think that fit the music better.
01:32:971 (3,4,5) - Move these to x209|y209, and 01:32:798 (2) - Move to x176|y96, so as to make a triangle pattern in 01:32:798 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:34:867 (5,6) - Same as 01:32:109 (5,6) -
01:37:626 (5,6) - 01:40:385 (5,6) - 01:43:144 (5,6) - 01:45:902 (5,6) - 01:48:661 (5,6) - 01:51:420 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]

01:00:039 (1,2,3) - Same rhythm with 01:02:798 (1) - , but the former is much harder than the latter. Better changed these two parts to two similar pattern (or at least with similar difficulty) for consistency.
01:13:660 (3,4,5,6,1) - Flow is a bit weird in this part. Try to change the pattern here. For example:
SPOILER
01:37:970 (1,2,3) - Why ds is unequal here?
01:43:487 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:005 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and better not use these kind of unequal ds patterns in hard diff. It may confuse the newbie players.

[Advanced]

00:02:108 (1,2,1) - Better not change ds so frequently in Advanced diff. So please change the ds to 1.0x here
00:07:625 (1,2,3) - Here as well ^
00:37:281 (1,2,3) - Why ds is unequal here?

[Normal]

Better not use 00:29:522 (2) - ← this kind of sliders in normal diffs. Newbie players may feel confused to play. Please avoid to use those self-overlapped sliders. (Like 00:20:384 (3) - 00:40:556 (2) - 00:29:522 (2,2) - )

Okay that's it~ Totally the higher diffs are fine, but lower diffs (especially Normal) need a lot to be fixed.
Good luck~:3

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-21T15:25:59+00:00

Streliteela

Streliteela wrote:
Hi~Mod from my queue :3

[IHaD]
00:07:625 (1,2,1) - I noticed that it's 1/1 rhythm here, so why the ds here is so small? At lease increase the ds to something like 00:13:487 (2,1) - should be now
01:03:832 (2,4,3) - These three notes could be made more neatly. Like this:
SPOILER
tried
01:22:108 (4) - Stack is a bit off :< fixed
01:30:039 (1,1,1) - hmm it's no need to use nc spam here...players can also read this pattern well without these nc. Better removed them. Removed
01:48:314 (2,3) - ctrl+g for better flow? purposedly place it that way to create back-n-forth

Nothing to point out in Yamicchi's Insane, good diff~

[Insane]
00:26:246 (1,2) - Better blanket? looks better now
01:17:971 (5,6,7) - make equal ds here? Cuz rhythm here are all 1/2. should be now
SPOILER
01:32:109 (5,6) - A bit hard to read. Maybe ctrl+g? I think that fit the music better. changed the entire pattern
01:32:971 (3,4,5) - Move these to x209|y209, and 01:32:798 (2) - Move to x176|y96, so as to make a triangle pattern in 01:32:798 (2,3,4,5,6) -
01:34:867 (5,6) - Same as 01:32:109 (5,6) -
01:37:626 (5,6) - 01:40:385 (5,6) - 01:43:144 (5,6) - 01:45:902 (5,6) - 01:48:661 (5,6) - 01:51:420 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
01:00:039 (1,2,3) - Same rhythm with 01:02:798 (1) - , but the former is much harder than the latter. Better changed these two parts to two similar pattern (or at least with similar difficulty) for consistency. changed
01:13:660 (3,4,5,6,1) - Flow is a bit weird in this part. Try to change the pattern here. For example:
SPOILER
fixed
01:37:970 (1,2,3) - Why ds is unequal here? changed it and everything after it
01:43:487 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:49:005 (1,2,3,4) - ^, and better not use these kind of unequal ds patterns in hard diff. It may confuse the newbie players.

[Advanced]
00:02:108 (1,2,1) - Better not change ds so frequently in Advanced diff. So please change the ds to 1.0x here fixed
00:07:625 (1,2,3) - Here as well ^ fixed
00:37:281 (1,2,3) - Why ds is unequal here? my mistake

[Normal]

Better not use 00:29:522 (2) - ← this kind of sliders in normal diffs. Newbie players may feel confused to play. Please avoid to use those self-overlapped sliders. (Like 00:20:384 (3) - 00:40:556 (2) - 00:29:522 (2,2) - ) fixed a lot of them

Okay that's it~ Totally the higher diffs are fine, but lower diffs (especially Normal) need a lot to be fixed.
Good luck~:3 Thanks a lot for your mod!!

[Nii-san]

102 posts

Joined May 2014

[Nii-san] 2016-10-23T12:27:18+00:00

Hi! from Modreqs.

My little mod for you

Into Hopelessness and Despair

00:02:798 (1) - Move to X:156 Y:288
00:05:556 (1) - Move to Y:212
00:12:108 (4) - Move to X:344
00:13:832 (1) - First Point move to y:276
00:16:591 (1,2) - Move to X:2 Y:4
00:27:625 (1) - Move to X:246 Y:154
00:28:143 (2) - Apply to 00:27:625 (1) -
01:05:729 (4) - Apply to 01:06:074 (6) -
01:11:763 (1) - Move to X:241
01:22:453 (6) - Move to X:104 Y:36
01:44:522 (4) - Move to X:209 Y:283
01:46:936 (3) - Move to Y:244

Yamicchi's Insane

00:19:867 (2) - Move to Y:106
00:42:798 (1) - Move to Y:289
01:24:177 (1) - Move to X:378
01:48:315 (3) - Move to Y:163
01:51:764 (1) - Move to Y:257

Insane

00:02:799 (1) - Move to X:120 Y:131
00:09:350 (4) - Move to Y:321
00:11:592 (2) - Move to X:357
00:19:868 (2) - Move to X:358 Y:35
00:38:660 (1) - Move to X:295
01:17:281 (1) - Move to X:267
01:19:350 (3) - Move to X:304 Y:377
01:26:936 (1) - Move to X:154
01:42:453 (2) - Move to X:224

Good luck

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-23T14:51:40+00:00

From NISSSAN001.

SPOILER

NISSAN001 wrote:
Hi! from Modreqs.

My little mod for you

Into Hopelessness and Despair
00:02:798 (1) - Move to X:156 Y:288
00:05:556 (1) - Move to Y:212
00:12:108 (4) - Move to X:344
00:13:832 (1) - First Point move to y:276
00:16:591 (1,2) - Move to X:2 Y:4
00:27:625 (1) - Move to X:246 Y:154
00:28:143 (2) - Apply to 00:27:625 (1) -
01:05:729 (4) - Apply to 01:06:074 (6) -
01:11:763 (1) - Move to X:241
01:22:453 (6) - Move to X:104 Y:36
01:44:522 (4) - Move to X:209 Y:283
01:46:936 (3) - Move to Y:244

Insane
00:02:799 (1) - Move to X:120 Y:131
00:09:350 (4) - Move to Y:321
00:11:592 (2) - Move to X:357
00:19:868 (2) - Move to X:358 Y:35
00:38:660 (1) - Move to X:295
01:17:281 (1) - Move to X:267
01:19:350 (3) - Move to X:304 Y:377
01:26:936 (1) - Move to X:154
01:42:453 (2) - Move to X:224

Good luck

Fixed most of them. Too much for me to reply though. Thanks!!

Last edited by Hoa 2016-10-25T07:32:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-24T12:43:10+00:00

Ba da bum~

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Fall Away
Artist:Feint
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Creator:LeKhanhHoa
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small fish

29 posts

Joined September 2013

small fish 2016-10-27T08:36:26+00:00

quick mod from modreqs

Into Hopelessness and Despair

there is some inconsistency in stacking notes under sliders toward the beginning of the map
example:
00:28:143 (2) -
00:29:694 (2) -

00:27:970 -
00:30:729 -
these two points are the exact same sound but the spacing on the two patterns is totally different, i think all of these should either be stacked under the sliders or none of them should be.

fun map, gl!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-27T10:59:53+00:00

spooky fish wrote:
quick mod from modreqs
Into Hopelessness and Despair
there is some inconsistency in stacking notes under sliders toward the beginning of the map
example:
00:28:143 (2) -
00:29:694 (2) -
The first pattern is a 3/4 slider followed by weird spacing, so I place (2) below slider to allow player to judge the time of the note better

00:27:970 -
00:30:729 -
these two points are the exact same sound but the spacing on the two patterns is totally different, i think all of these should either be stacked under the sliders or none of them should be.
Actually, they're not. I seperate 00:24:867 - 00:30:212 - as 1st part, 00:30:384 - 00:35:729 - as 2nd and map differently but also allow a little difference spacing between to avoid small overlap.

fun map, gl!Thanks for taking a look at my map!!!

Hekireki

132 posts

Joined October 2013

Hekireki 2016-10-30T02:48:02+00:00

Hi, NM from my queue

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]

Testplay feat noob sliderbreak : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6444541

AR felt a bit high when playing honestly this should just be AR9 but if you really want an even spread make it 9.2 tops
HP6.5 to balance it with the rest of the spread even 7 should be fine
00:05:556 (1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here, 00:05:556 (1,4) - these both follow the high pitched sound while 00:06:074 (2,3) - these follow the background of the song, i would just put a 1/1 slider starting from 00:06:074 -
00:10:729 (3,1) - This is a bit weird, you should emphasize the downbeat on 1 more, try putting 3 around x:400 y:120 to respect that
00:27:625 (1) - The rhythm here creates a polarity change that is unnecessary 00:26:246 (1,2) - here the gap between these two is 1/2 while the one i pointed out makes a 3/4 gap between two objects and it's not very intuitive to read, if you want 00:28:143 (2) - this to be clickable, try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/s0bAE/cc6bdf158c.jpg this instead, this would feel better because right now the start and the end of the slider both have the same intensity (this applies to anything similar during the intro)
00:36:763 (4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this pattern because it doesn't emphasizes the downbeat correctly, 00:37:108 (6,1) - the distance between these is about half of the distance between 00:36:936 (5,6) - which doesn't make much sense structure wise, this is just an idea but here's what i would mean https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6444626 it doesn't look very nice like this but it gives a better emphasis to the downbeat because 1 looks more independant
00:37:970 (2) - A bit nitpicky but moving this to x:188 y:220 would make it between 00:38:315 (4,5) - 's followpoint and would look nicer
00:48:315 (1) - I'm not going to point out every single emphasis problem unless i get an idea, for this one try to rotate it by 50 degrees and place it at x:180 y:24. The distance might look a bit large but it's actually not hard to hit
00:53:832 (1) - I'd suggest something in the same spirit ^
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - This is really personal but instead of doing this you could copypaste 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - then ctrl h it and make them symmetric using 01:00:039 (1) - this as the axis
01:07:281 (1) - Remove NC here and 01:08:660 (1) - here and NC 01:06:936 (9,5,13) - those instead just for the aesthetics

The rest of the map makes sense and is consistent, just this emphasis issue. With a bit of tweeking you could emphasize downbeats more and the map would have a better structure, just try to make them look independent from the previous patterns (it's pretty easy for your map because downbeats mostly have sliders starting on them and they're pretty lenient) You have a good understanding of flow so if you manage to do that the map should be better

I think i'll stop here sorry, i'm not a huge fan of DnB since it gets pretty repetitive when modding but i hope i could help on the highest diff

Good luck with ranking

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-30T05:01:03+00:00

LeeSinOrAFK

LeeSinOrAfk wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]

Testplay feat noob sliderbreak : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6444541

AR felt a bit high when playing honestly this should just be AR9 but if you really want an even spread make it 9.2 tops 9.2
HP6.5 to balance it with the rest of the spread even 7 should be fine 6.2
00:05:556 (1,2,3,4) - Not a fan of the rhythm here, 00:05:556 (1,4) - these both follow the high pitched sound while 00:06:074 (2,3) - these follow the background of the song, i would just put a 1/1 slider starting from 00:06:074 - Just my personal preference, and someone did mention 00:06:246 - has a small sound, so ...
00:10:729 (3,1) - This is a bit weird, you should emphasize the downbeat on 1 more, try putting 3 around x:400 y:120 to respect that did some small movement, but not to much as the sound pitch is kinda low and slow down a bit so ...
00:27:625 (1) - The rhythm here creates a polarity change that is unnecessary 00:26:246 (1,2) - here the gap between these two is 1/2 while the one i pointed out makes a 3/4 gap between two objects and it's not very intuitive to read, if you want 00:28:143 (2) - this to be clickable, try a rhythm like http://puu.sh/s0bAE/cc6bdf158c.jpg this instead, this would feel better because right now the start and the end of the slider both have the same intensity (this applies to anything similar during the intro) thanks for the suggestion, but I prefer the current pattern, and it's fine as the sliderend can be one a sound that is weaker or equal to the sliderstart (if it's its right name!)
00:36:763 (4,5,6,1) - Not a fan of this pattern because it doesn't emphasizes the downbeat correctly, 00:37:108 (6,1) - the distance between these is about half of the distance between 00:36:936 (5,6) - which doesn't make much sense structure wise, this is just an idea but here's what i would mean https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6444626 it doesn't look very nice like this but it gives a better emphasis to the downbeat because 1 looks more independant Don't think I should, as short DS also means emphasis sometime.
00:37:970 (2) - A bit nitpicky but moving this to x:188 y:220 would make it between 00:38:315 (4,5) - 's followpoint and would look nicer No, it doesn't actually
00:48:315 (1) - I'm not going to point out every single emphasis problem unless i get an idea, for this one try to rotate it by 50 degrees and place it at x:180 y:24. The distance might look a bit large but it's actually not hard to hit It's not necessary, so no changes
00:53:832 (1) - I'd suggest something in the same spirit ^ ^
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - This is really personal but instead of doing this you could copypaste 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - then ctrl h it and make them symmetric using 01:00:039 (1) - this as the axis Sure
01:07:281 (1) - Remove NC here and 01:08:660 (1) - here and NC 01:06:936 (9,5,13) - those instead just for the aesthetics Sure

The rest of the map makes sense and is consistent, just this emphasis issue. With a bit of tweeking you could emphasize downbeats more and the map would have a better structure, just try to make them look independent from the previous patterns (it's pretty easy for your map because downbeats mostly have sliders starting on them and they're pretty lenient) You have a good understanding of flow so if you manage to do that the map should be better

I think i'll stop here sorry, i'm not a huge fan of DnB since it gets pretty repetitive when modding but i hope i could help on the highest diff

Good luck with ranking Thanks for your mod!!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-11-01T08:14:07+00:00

Hi :3 from my Q
[General]

• If there's no SB in this set, turn off widescreen support for Nor Adv Hard and Ins
• Add some combo colours please :<

[Normal]

• 00:02:798 (1) - Just need to use 2 white anchor for each half of the slider. Its shape is ugly tbh
• Don't NC randomly, for ex, remove these NC: 00:05:556 (1) - 00:07:625 (1) - 00:11:074 (1) - 00:13:143 (1) - 00:15:556 (1) - 00:18:660 (1) - 00:26:246 (1) - 00:29:005 (1) - 01:00:039 (1) - they are not necessary. You know how it works then, apply it to the whole diff
• 01:02:798 (1) - This slider literally killed the emphasis with 01:03:487 (2,1,...) - which make those sliders weaker, and consistency with 01:00:039 (1) - at the same time. A 1/2 reverse slider would work
• 01:09:005 (1,2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/s2Ebg/2d33d2e225.jpg
• 01:11:763 (1,2,3,4) - if you fix that ^, fix the other too, because the current pattern does not support such beats like 01:13:143 - which should be clickable instead. Also with it, you skipped 01:12:281 - beats too
• Seems to me that the kiai should be mapped better follow the music strictly than the current one. So is the next part. 01:31:074 - http://puu.sh/s2EiF/4dff54bf11.jpg take this pattern as an example. Sometimes the music forces you to complicate the map more than usual. It's up to you
Blanket box
• 00:04:522 (2) - Place the 2nd anchor at X352 Y96 to blanket it
• 00:10:039 (2) -
• 00:20:384 (3) - I think you have a small bug with the anchor. Delete the slider then draw again
• 00:27:625 (1) -
• 00:48:315 (3) -

[Advanced]

• 00:05:212 (4) - You got yourself an inconsistent circle. A bit adjust to make an equilateral triangle?
• 01:08:660 (1,2,1) - ^
• 00:29:694 (2) - You know what to do...
• 00:36:936 (3) - But why not a blanket?
• 00:56:074 (2,3,1) - spacing issues
• 01:03:315 (3) - 01:13:660 (2) - No idea about advanced diffs. Ask someone about 1/4 in the diff, to see whether it's acceptable or not
• 01:29:694 (1) - 01:18:660 (1) - inconsistent SV change
• 01:31:419 - 01:32:108 - 01:33:487 - ...at least make these clickable please

Placeholder, gonna mod more later then

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-11-01T11:40:52+00:00

Yamicchi

Yamicchi wrote:
Hi :3 from my Q
[General]
• If there's no SB in this set, turn off widescreen support for Nor Adv Hard and Ins Done
• Add some combo colours please :< Done
[Normal]
• 00:02:798 (1) - Just need to use 2 white anchor for each half of the slider. Its shape is ugly tbh Okay
• Don't NC randomly, for ex, remove these NC: 00:05:556 (1) - 00:07:625 (1) - 00:11:074 (1) - 00:13:143 (1) - 00:15:556 (1) - 00:18:660 (1) - 00:26:246 (1) - 00:29:005 (1) - 01:00:039 (1) - they are not necessary. You know how it works then, apply it to the whole diff
• 01:02:798 (1) - This slider literally killed the emphasis with 01:03:487 (2,1,...) - which make those sliders weaker, and consistency with 01:00:039 (1) - at the same time. A 1/2 reverse slider would work Okay
• 01:09:005 (1,2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/s2Ebg/2d33d2e225.jpg
• 01:11:763 (1,2,3,4) - if you fix that ^, fix the other too, because the current pattern does not support such beats like 01:13:143 - which should be clickable instead. Also with it, you skipped 01:12:281 - beats too
• Seems to me that the kiai should be mapped better follow the music strictly than the current one. So is the next part. 01:31:074 - http://puu.sh/s2EiF/4dff54bf11.jpg take this pattern as an example. Sometimes the music forces you to complicate the map more than usual. It's up to you Remap according to you.
Blanket box
• 00:04:522 (2) - Place the 2nd anchor at X352 Y96 to blanket it
• 00:10:039 (2) -
• 00:20:384 (3) - I think you have a small bug with the anchor. Delete the slider then draw again
• 00:27:625 (1) -
• 00:48:315 (3) - Fixed everything
[Advanced]
• 00:05:212 (4) - You got yourself an inconsistent circle. A bit adjust to make an equilateral triangle? Done
• 01:08:660 (1,2,1) - ^ Done
• 00:29:694 (2) - You know what to do... Create a new slider
• 00:36:936 (3) - But why not a blanket? Fine
• 00:56:074 (2,3,1) - spacing issues Fixed
• 01:03:315 (3) - 01:13:660 (2) - No idea about advanced diffs. Ask someone about 1/4 in the diff, to see whether it's acceptable or not Actually, it's fine and a lot of maps use it as well
• 01:29:694 (1) - 01:18:660 (1) - inconsistent SV change Fixed
• 01:31:419 - 01:32:108 - 01:33:487 - ...at least make these clickable please I prefer the current pattern,and it plays fine, so...
Placeholder, gonna mod more later then. I'm waiting

Last edited by Hoa 2016-11-11T22:58:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

lazygirl

506 posts

Joined February 2016

lazygirl 2016-11-09T17:23:15+00:00

Hey M4M as requested per PM

[General]

I heavily suggest you add some combo colors, try these or use the ones you have in Yamicchi's insane
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,128,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 192,192,192
Combo4 : 0,0,255
```

[Normal]
General Mapping:

00:05:556 (5,6) - is not good for Normal diff, replace with a repeat slider that ends where 7 starts, then make 7 a non repeat. Like that it'll be readable for a Normal diff, same goes for 00:11:074 (5,6,7) - 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
00:08:315 (3) - rotate by 25 degrees on the spot for better looking alignment
00:14:867 (5,1) - aligns sloppily, rotate 1 by 5 degrees anti-clockwise
00:17:625 (4) - weird slider design, try something like this
00:29:522 (3,1) - sloppy alignment again, try rotating 1 by 15 degrees
00:32:281 (3) - move the red anchor to x:364 y:252
00:46:074 (3,1) - again this aligns weird
01:09:005 (1,2) - 2 doesn't blanket nicely to 1, the opposite is good though
01:14:522 (1,2) - 2 is not aligned to the end of 1, rotate by 2 degrees

Hitsounds:

all nice ^^

Combo:

00:02:798 (3) - add NC here
01:18:660 (1) - 01:29:694 (1) - NC is not needed here I feel
01:31:074 - starting here you break your combo patterns, NC twice less on this section to match the rest of the map

[Advanced]
General Mapping:

00:15:556 (1) - same sound as 00:04:522 (2,3,4) - but mapped differently, seems too inconsistent
00:19:867 (2) - having this slider the same shape as 00:19:350 (1) - would be better I feel
00:26:936 (2) - 00:29:694 (2) - 00:32:453 (2) - 00:35:212 (2) - ignoring the rhythm here, I'd suggest mapping it like you map 00:25:556 (2,3) -
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - very hard to read

Hitsounds:

All good

Combo:

Your combo pattern at the beginning is very irregular, follow what you've done so far on the Normal diff: 00:07:625 (1,3) - Swap NC; 00:10:039 (1) - remove NC; 00:13:143 (1) - remove NC; 00:15:556 (1) - remove NC; 00:18:660 (1) - remove NC; 00:21:419 (1) - remove NC; 00:24:177 (1) - remove NC
01:00:039 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]
General Mapping:

The SV changes you do are weird, and shouldn't be there I don't think
00:06:074 (2) - weird slider, this could be done with just 2 white ticks or 2 white and 1 red
01:12:798 (6,1) - not an excellent blanket
01:17:625 (2,3,4) - weird alignment

Hitsounds:

all good

Combo:

Intro combo patterns are weird, but consistent this time
01:00:039 (1) - remove NC

[Insane]
General Mapping:

Not much to say it's quite good, I find that some of the straight sliders could be replaced in the kiai with sliders like 01:11:419 (6) - more often, and speaking of which, that one if too angled imo. But it mostly comes down to sliderdesign

Hitsounds:

all good

Combo:

01:52:970 (1) - remove this one

[Yamicchi's Insane]
General Mapping:

01:32:970 (3,4,5) - make these a 5 note stream, fits better, same as 01:35:729 (3,4,5) - 01:38:487 (3,4,5) - 01:41:246 (3,4,5) - 01:44:005 (3,4,5) - 01:46:763 (3,4,5) - 01:49:522 (3,4,5) - 01:52:281 (3,4,5) -

Hitsounds:

all good too

Combo:

01:52:970 (1) - remove NC

This diff is sick

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]
General Mapping:

00:04:522 (1,2,3) - if you do these as sliders 00:07:625 (1,2) - these should be too same goes for 00:10:039 (1,2,3) - 00:13:143 (1,2) - 00:15:556 (1,2,3) - 00:18:660 (1,2) - 00:21:419 (1,2) - 00:24:177 (1,2) -
00:19:005 (2,1) - blanket is slightly off
00:24:867 (1,2) - should be a repeat imo same for 00:27:625 (1,2) - 00:30:384 (1,2) - 00:33:143 (1,2) - 00:35:901 (1,2) - 00:38:660 (1,2) - 00:41:419 (1,2) - 00:44:177 (1,2) -
01:00:039 (1) - make this a small jump
01:09:867 (6,7) - if you do this, keep it more consistent, do it on these places 01:12:625 (6,7) - 01:18:143 (6,7,8) - 01:23:660 (6,7) - 01:29:177 (6,7,8) -

Hitsounds:

your hitsounds are damn good

Combo:

01:52:970 (1) - remove NC

Greatest of luck ranking this awesome map

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-11-10T08:18:03+00:00

lazyboy007

lazyboy007 wrote:
Hey M4M as requested per PM

[General]
I heavily suggest you add some combo colors, try these or use the ones you have in Yamicchi's insane
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,128,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 192,192,192
Combo4 : 0,0,255
Copy from Yamicchi!

[Normal]
General Mapping:
00:05:556 (5,6) - is not good for Normal diff, replace with a repeat slider that ends where 7 starts, then make 7 a non repeat. Like that it'll be readable for a Normal diff, same goes for 00:11:074 (5,6,7) - 00:57:970 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Sure
00:08:315 (3) - rotate by 25 degrees on the spot for better looking alignment 20 degrees would be more suitable, I believe
00:14:867 (5,1) - aligns sloppily, rotate 1 by 5 degrees anti-clockwise done
00:17:625 (4) - weird slider design, try something like this tried sth
00:29:522 (3,1) - sloppy alignment again, try rotating 1 by 15 degrees done
00:32:281 (3) - move the red anchor to x:364 y:252 done
00:46:074 (3,1) - again this aligns weird should be fixed now
01:09:005 (1,2) - 2 doesn't blanket nicely to 1, the opposite is good though tried my best
01:14:522 (1,2) - 2 is not aligned to the end of 1, rotate by 2 degrees done
Hitsounds:
all nice ^^
Combo:
00:02:798 (3) - add NC here added
01:18:660 (1) - 01:29:694 (1) - NC is not needed here I feel but it's where the music changed, and I like it here
01:31:074 - starting here you break your combo patterns, NC twice less on this section to match the rest of the map changed
[Advanced]
General Mapping:
00:15:556 (1) - same sound as 00:04:522 (2,3,4) - but mapped differently, seems too inconsistent changed
00:19:867 (2) - having this slider the same shape as 00:19:350 (1) - would be better I feel okay
00:26:936 (2) - 00:29:694 (2) - 00:32:453 (2) - 00:35:212 (2) - ignoring the rhythm here, I'd suggest mapping it like you map 00:25:556 (2,3) - I want some changes though
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - very hard to read changed
Hitsounds:
All good
Combo:
Your combo pattern at the beginning is very irregular, follow what you've done so far on the Normal diff: 00:07:625 (1,3) - Swap NC; 00:10:039 (1) - remove NC; 00:13:143 (1) - remove NC; 00:15:556 (1) - remove NC; 00:18:660 (1) - remove NC; 00:21:419 (1) - remove NC; 00:24:177 (1) - remove NC
01:00:039 (1) - remove NC done everything
[Hard]
General Mapping:
The SV changes you do are weird, and shouldn't be there I don't think I think it should be, as I want the start to be slower then other
00:06:074 (2) - weird slider, this could be done with just 2 white ticks or 2 white and 1 red changed
01:12:798 (6,1) - not an excellent blanket should be now
01:17:625 (2,3,4) - weird alignment fixed
Hitsounds:
all good
Combo:
Intro combo patterns are weird, but consistent this time
01:00:039 (1) - remove NC not this time, I want to emphasize it
[Insane]
General Mapping:
Not much to say it's quite good, I find that some of the straight sliders could be replaced in the kiai with sliders like 01:11:419 (6) - more often, and speaking of which, that one if too angled imo. But it mostly comes down to sliderdesign changed some
Hitsounds:
all good
Combo:
01:52:970 (1) - remove this one no, sorry, last note is a small jump, want to leave it that way

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]
General Mapping:
00:04:522 (1,2,3) - if you do these as sliders 00:07:625 (1,2) - these should be too same goes for 00:10:039 (1,2,3) - 00:13:143 (1,2) - 00:15:556 (1,2,3) - 00:18:660 (1,2) - 00:21:419 (1,2) - 00:24:177 (1,2) - Not quite, I want to differentiate 2 sound. 00:18:660 (1,2) - is a place where sound is changed, and it signifies nearing jumps sections, so...
00:19:005 (2,1) - blanket is slightly off fixed
00:24:867 (1,2) - should be a repeat imo same for 00:27:625 (1,2) - 00:30:384 (1,2) - 00:33:143 (1,2) - 00:35:901 (1,2) - 00:38:660 (1,2) - 00:41:419 (1,2) - 00:44:177 (1,2) - 00:24:867 (1) - this one is changed, for players to know that there's 3/4 slider here, but others are kept as I want some diversity
01:00:039 (1) - make this a small jump very small jump
01:09:867 (6,7) - if you do this, keep it more consistent, do it on these places 01:12:625 (6,7) - 01:18:143 (6,7,8) - 01:23:660 (6,7) - 01:29:177 (6,7,8) - 01:09:867 (6,7) - this is consistent with 01:15:384 (6,7), 01:12:625 (6,7) - has different sound (as least that's what I heard), 01:18:143 (6,7,8) - is an emphasis for pattern change, so ...
Hitsounds:
your hitsounds are damn good
Combo:
01:52:970 (1) - remove NC already explained
Greatest of luck ranking this awesome map Thanks for your mod!!

Last edited by Hoa 2016-11-14T22:57:59+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-11-11T12:33:51+00:00

lazyboy007 wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
General Mapping:
01:32:970 (3,4,5) - make these a 5 note stream, fits better, same as 01:35:729 (3,4,5) - 01:38:487 (3,4,5) - 01:41:246 (3,4,5) - 01:44:005 (3,4,5) - 01:46:763 (3,4,5) - 01:49:522 (3,4,5) - 01:52:281 (3,4,5) - Well I just simply emphasize the big drum, no need to be a stream I think
Hitsounds:
all good too
Combo:
01:52:970 (1) - remove NC my type of ending xd pardon me if it bothers you but I find it cool
This diff is sick

Thanks for the mod :3 but no change this time

Edit: Sorry for the inconvenient, remapped the kiai

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68660
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
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TitleUnicode:Fall Away
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:LeKhanhHoa
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Lulu-

398 posts

Joined March 2014

Lulu- 2016-11-20T02:55:23+00:00

Hi, M4M from your queue!

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]
00:02:453 (2) - Nove it like this?
00:10:384 (2,3) - Try something like this
00:19:005 (2,1) - Fix blanket, maybe CTRL+G (2)?
00:27:625 (1) - You could space the sliders like this a bit further away (optional)
00:27:625 (1,4) - Stack properly
00:49:005 (3,4) - Fix blanket

[Yamicchi's Insane]
hi big fan
00:08:315 (1) - pls
00:40:729 (2,3,4,5) - Instead of stacking these, I'd overlap these, but that's just my opinion. Same goes for any other jump like this
01:18:143 (5) - Not gonna stack with 01:17:626 (2) ?
01:50:039 (6,1) - Make these parallel

[Insane]
00:09:695 (5) - Fix blanket
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream should be smoother, it doesn't look very appealing

[Hard]
00:17:625 (3) - Fix one of these blankets
00:39:350 (2) - Blanket?
01:26:936 (1) - ^
01:26:936 (1,1) - Stack these?
01:30:039 (2) - CTRL+G?
01:48:487 (4) - Too curvy for me

[Advanced]
00:35:212 (2) - Make this curve smoother, like this

[Normal]
00:55:212 (1) - Smoother curve pls
01:31:074 (1) - Fix blanket
01:51:763 (4) - Fix blanket

Good luck!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-11-20T12:10:13+00:00

Lulu- wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
hi big fan <3
00:08:315 (1) - pls fixed, not much, laziness orz
00:40:729 (2,3,4,5) - Instead of stacking these, I'd overlap these, but that's just my opinion. Same goes for any other jump like this nah, works fine for the same rhythm like in that part
01:18:143 (5) - Not gonna stack with 01:17:626 (2) ? nope
01:50:039 (6,1) - Make these parallel isn't it?

EDIT: Fixed some

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Hoa

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Hoa 2016-11-20T13:38:00+00:00

Lulu-

Lulu- wrote:
Hi, M4M from your queue!

[Into Hopelessness and Despair]
00:02:453 (2) - Nove it like this? Sure
00:10:384 (2,3) - Try something like this did try sth
00:19:005 (2,1) - Fix blanket, maybe CTRL+G (2)? Fixed
00:27:625 (1) - You could space the sliders like this a bit further away (optional) nah
00:27:625 (1,4) - Stack properly Done
00:49:005 (3,4) - Fix blanket Done

[Insane]
00:09:695 (5) - Fix blanket Okay
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This stream should be smoother, it doesn't look very appealing kinda fixed

[Hard]
00:17:625 (3) - Fix one of these blankets Okay
00:39:350 (2) - Blanket? yes it is
01:26:936 (1) - ^ Okay
01:26:936 (1,1) - Stack these? Sure
01:30:039 (2) - CTRL+G? No, actually.
01:48:487 (4) - Too curvy for me Less curvy now

[Advanced]
00:35:212 (2) - Make this curve smoother, like this changed

[Normal]
00:55:212 (1) - Smoother curve pls Fixed
01:31:074 (1) - Fix blanket Fixed
01:51:763 (4) - Fix blanket tried

Good luck! Thanks for your mod!

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