To follow the sound consistency you've been using since the beginning, those two notes should be doubles 00:05:610 (5610|2,5934|1) - for finger balance I'd probably use 1 and 2 on both
00:12:582 - 00:18:745 - for this whole part, since there's not much going on, I would prioritize pitch relevance, to make it more instinctive to play I would probably order it like so : 0 , 1 , 3 , 2 , 1 , 2 , 3 , 2 , 1 , 0 , 1 , 2 , (1,3) , 1 , 0 , 3 (the note in parentheses is the double at 00:17:447 )
also, at 00:17:447 - why did you use the double, I don't hear any sound you've used earlier that justify the double there?
00:33:015 (33015|0) - why did you use a hold specifically here and no where else in that series of notes?
00:45:988 - here I understand that you're following the drum first hit, but might be really hard to read and hit for an Easy diff, I would just follow the voice and do a bunch of third like:
00:46:204 (46204|3) - move that 00:46:312 (46312|3) -
00:48:150 (48150|0) - move that 00:48:258 (48258|0) -
also if you follow the previous advice I gave, you could do something nice, pitch relevance and finger balance wise with following the voice direction in your mapping for this part by doing:
00:45:988 (45988|0,45988|3) - 0 and 3
00:46:312 (46312|3) - 1
00:46:636 (46636|2) - 3
00:46:960 (46960|0) - 2
00:47:609 (47609|2) - 0
00:47:933 (47933|3) - 1
00:48:258 (48258|0) - 2
00:48:582 (48582|1) - 3
00:49:231 (49231|3) - 1
00:49:555 (49555|1) - I assume this slider is the roll, I would move to 2 and add a note on 0
00:49:879 (49879|0) - move to 1
it would looks something like this, straight forward to play a appropriate imo for an easy:
00:53:608 (53608|0) - what does this slider map?
00:54:906 (54906|3) - The slider feels out of place, as he is justified by many sound, but you never map them ever after in the next section which kinda cause a consistency problem.
01:10:635 - 01:15:824 - I really loved how you mapped that section, you made something really fun to play on a low diff when there isn't a lot happening around just by playing with the pattern and moving it !