uhmm so where do I start from? xD
00:12:898 (2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't make it a 4 notes stream, do 3 or 5
00:13:564 (8,9) - these 2 sliders are 1/4 distanced on the timeline but you placed them way too close that they seem 1/8... this is the spacing you used for 1/4 00:08:898 (4,5,6) - , i'd do something like that
00:15:431 (4,5,6) - i don't know how readable these are, i saw you used them a lot and honestly it's the first time i see it; it looks kinda uncomfortable especially at this bpm, but i don't really know
00:17:031 (2,3,4,5) - same spacing issue, too close
00:27:164 (4,5,6,7) - take off 1 repeat of these sliders, or put the circles closer, these are way too spaced now xD
00:27:964 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above, way too spaced since it's basically a continuous 1/8 stream, it gets kinda impossible
00:26:764 (2) - this slow down is unnecessary
00:30:098 (4,5,6,7) - these should be more spaced too
00:31:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - this IS impossible xD how are you supposed to catch the 5 after the 4?
00:32:498 (2,3,4,5,6) - attach it to the previous stream sequence, don't space streams, it's already hard enough xD
00:32:898 (6,7,8,9) - too close
00:33:564 (10,1,2,3,4,5) - again, this is too hard imo
00:34:231 (6) - think you missed a 1/12 repeat on this slider, it doesn't end on the white tick
00:56:875 (38) - ^ check all of these, i didn't see if they were all missing a repeat
00:41:298 (10,1) - damn that jump
00:44:498 (8,9,10,1,2) - daaaamn the jumps
00:53:564 (17,18) - why so close, again? xD
Diff settings, I'd use AR9.7~8 and especially OD8~8.3
In general, as I told you, the map should be a bit cleaner imo... The fact that the song itself is a total mess might be an excuse for the map to be like it is, but to a certain point xD
I personally would make it all different, so I tried to only point out some technical issues with the map instead of telling you "no, it's not ok, start over" as some mappers might tell you...
Also, did you finish the hitsounding? I didn't pay attention to that, but the general volume needs some adjustments for sure
As the song's rhythm goes, it's pretty fine for a messy song, maybe even a bit too messy (too many mini-streams)
And this is all I could think of right now, I'm curious what others think
~Ah almost forgot, the main issue imo is the spacing which seems kinda unsure and goes weird in some parts which i didn't mention above, but again, I wanna see what the others say first