[quote="JenHideo"]m4m with whirl k
General
just wanted to point out
even though it goes with the artist and song title, I recommend you make the names of the GDer's have capitalization.
also you should probably map the start of the song if you are going to leave out about 30 seconds on the end. it's such a gentle song, mikasa don't change it!
whirl's easy
00:58:565 (1,2) - i suggest you use distance snap with these two sliders since you did it with 00:55:565 (2,3) - and the sounds of 00:58:565 (1,2) - are more upbeat so they should be that close if the "downbeat" type of notes are using 1.6x oh, was a mistake, fixed
01:07:190 (3) - i recommend an NC here. no
01:10:565 (2) - a completely new sound starts here so i recommend an NC here. no thanks
01:15:440 (4) - i recommend you ctrl + j this slider (then place it back to where it used to be) then rotate 01:16:565 (1) - into something like as it would help ease the flow in that part. (also it would make a better transition into 01:18:440 (1) - ) it already flows fine
01:19:565 (1) - i think this would look better if you made it blanket 01:18:440 (1) - nope
01:25:190 (3) - i think an NC here would be better than it starting on 01:25:565 (1) -
01:27:065 (2) - NC this as the beat changes and becomes faster. no, it's good as it is
01:43:551 (1) - maybe take off the NC here and add it to 01:45:051 (2) - I readjusted the whole nc thing
01:52:551 (1) - you should use the same blanketing space as you did with 01:52:176 (4) - because it looks weird to randomly change the distance I disagree
01:58:176 (4) - would look better if it was at x:199 y:300 nope, it's supposed to be a blanket
02:00:051 (3) - i think you should add a note here to emphasize this beat in the song no, because that would be too hard for an easy
General
just wanted to point out
even though it goes with the artist and song title, I recommend you make the names of the GDer's have capitalization.
also you should probably map the start of the song if you are going to leave out about 30 seconds on the end. it's such a gentle song, mikasa don't change it!
whirl's easy
00:58:565 (1,2) - i suggest you use distance snap with these two sliders since you did it with 00:55:565 (2,3) - and the sounds of 00:58:565 (1,2) - are more upbeat so they should be that close if the "downbeat" type of notes are using 1.6x oh, was a mistake, fixed
01:07:190 (3) - i recommend an NC here. no
01:10:565 (2) - a completely new sound starts here so i recommend an NC here. no thanks
01:15:440 (4) - i recommend you ctrl + j this slider (then place it back to where it used to be) then rotate 01:16:565 (1) - into something like as it would help ease the flow in that part. (also it would make a better transition into 01:18:440 (1) - ) it already flows fine
01:19:565 (1) - i think this would look better if you made it blanket 01:18:440 (1) - nope
01:25:190 (3) - i think an NC here would be better than it starting on 01:25:565 (1) -
01:27:065 (2) - NC this as the beat changes and becomes faster. no, it's good as it is
01:43:551 (1) - maybe take off the NC here and add it to 01:45:051 (2) - I readjusted the whole nc thing
01:52:551 (1) - you should use the same blanketing space as you did with 01:52:176 (4) - because it looks weird to randomly change the distance I disagree
01:58:176 (4) - would look better if it was at x:199 y:300 nope, it's supposed to be a blanket
02:00:051 (3) - i think you should add a note here to emphasize this beat in the song no, because that would be too hard for an easy
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