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a_hisa - Tokei no Heya to Seishin Sekai

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Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年3月3日 at 11:14:55

Artist: a_hisa
Title: Tokei no Heya to Seishin Sekai
Tags: After the End SpiritualCore sing toybot wring Fuccho mokori m_o_k_o_r_i
BPM: 180
Filesize: 8151kb
Play Time: 04:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fuccho's Another (5.03 stars, 1008 notes)
  2. Horologe (5.41 stars, 1083 notes)
  3. Sing's Normal (1.77 stars, 262 notes)
  4. toybot's Advanced (3.3 stars, 633 notes)
  5. wring's Hyper (4.5 stars, 774 notes)
Download: a_hisa - Tokei no Heya to Seishin Sekai
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This map has been submitted with the permission from a_hisa, the creator of this song


Normal: Sing
Advanced: toybot
Hyper: wring
Another: Fuccho
Horologe: Me
Last edited by Asahina Momoko , edited 31 times in total.
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
this isnt evn ctb lo l
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Meg
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Meg
ｱｻﾋｨｽｩﾊﾟｧﾄﾞｩﾙｧｧｧｧｲ
hvick225
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hvick225
𝓶𝓸𝓶𝓸𝓴𝓸
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
A_hisa Momoko.
Nathan
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Nathan
language partner
pocket-
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pocket-
Absolutely wonderful map; I would try to find something to improve but I just can't do it

It's too perfect.
Reol
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Reol

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
Sing
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Sing

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
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Kibbleru
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Kibbleru

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
Xilver15
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Xilver15
god mapper moko
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melon boy
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melon boy
Here you go!

http://puu.sh/rmygG/1d4be0e99c.rar

I did my best xd
Kyouren
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Kyouren

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
osu! need more a_hisa!
Rapthorn
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Rapthorn
Fucking amazing
Spaghetti
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Spaghetti

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
Sing
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Sing
https://puu.sh/rxYET/70eade9ca0.osu

Normal done
VINXIS
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VINXIS
blu tik slidrhed.
Arusamour
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Arusamour

StarrStyx wrote:

A_hisa Momoko.
Len
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Len
bubbled.
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko

Len wrote:

bubbled.
Nakano Itsuki
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Nakano Itsuki
bubbled.
Lavender
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Lavender
bubbled.
[Horologe]
  1. 00:22:369 (3) - i feel tilted cuz 00:22:453 - the drum sound here is complete ignored
  2. 01:15:869 (3,4,1) - consider moving up a bit to make it looks better
[Another]
  1. 00:58:703 (2,3,4) - if you wanna follow main rhythm, there would be 4 circles, if you wanna follow drums, you should stress on 00:58:953 -
  2. 01:03:036 (2,3) - 01:03:369 (5,1) - why do you use same distance between 1/4 and 1/2? that would be confusing
[Hyper]
  1. 00:24:703 (3,2) - nazi things
  2. 00:43:869 (8,9) - Ctrl+G?
  3. 01:26:369 (7,8) - ^
Advanced is still incompleted LUL
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:369 (3,1) - zzz
done cya
Curisu
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Curisu

Len wrote:

bubbled.
Error/Major Issue
Major Suggestion
Minor Suggestion

[General]
Maybe need a ~3.7 Hard+ for spread

[General Hitsounds]
gonna need a soft-sliderslide3.wav
04:13:367 - Soft Default @ 5% Vol

[Horologe]
00:22:036 - imo using single circle is better, emphasising 00:22:369 (3)
02:44:034 - +whis, in consistent with 02:49:367
03:44:533 (3,4,5) - should be same sv with 03:33:867 (3,4,5)? also for consistency between 2 kiai sessions

[Fuccho]
00:27:036 (2,3,4,5) - exchange position for flow dunno it's a good idea to break the flow here cuz other notes of this session are not doing so
01:06:036 (5) - a fully covered reverse arrow might be risky in some degree
01:24:994 - a synth on 1/8 could be heard
03:48:033 (1,2,3) - considering the main rhythm (violin-like synth) those are not fitting to it (though I know that you are fitting to the drum kick, while the session itself is somehow fitting both drum and synth)

[wring]
00:39:369 (1,2,3,4,1) - 00:39:869 (4,1) should have a larger sv in this pattern, emphasising 00:40:036 (1)
00:42:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - also finding this a little bit messy for emphasising nothing to me

[Advanced]
Skipped for WIP

[Sing]
01:08:036 (4) - NC
02:58:034 (2,3) - not sure about this kind of reverse slider is allow in lowest diff for some BN's sake
03:03:367 (2,3) - ^

momoko-san <3
-Atri-
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-Atri-
qualified.
Nathan
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Nathan
Asahina Momoko
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Asahina Momoko
get me real american mcdonalds
melon boy
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melon boy
An update from me if you plan on pushing this forward some time ~

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Lecana
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Lecana
a_hisana Momoko
-Atri-
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-Atri-
ツイッターからm4mを致します～

[wring's Hyper]
  1. 　01:10:703 (1) - 重なりすぎるって読まないかも
    悪くないね

[Fuccho's Another]
Sadly it's been a while since i got a alchemy lesson from Sophie
  1. 00:35:703 (1,2,3) - It's nice when it's attempting to contrast 00:35:203 (4,5,6) - ,but it plays quite unnaturally since it's way too similar to 00:35:203 (4,5,6) - , however, in order to emphasize 00:36:036 - , I got no idea other than making a 5-note stream there, so it's up to you
  2. 00:45:369 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite unexpected that you make the spacing very large on a calm part, in fact, it's larger than the intense part like 00:43:369 (1,2,3,4) - also it's quite triggering that you made 00:46:369 (4) - off the symmetrical pattern D:
  3. 00:50:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 03:20:700 (1,2,3) - I think you can swap the order of 1 and 2 since player would be more expected to hit 03:20:950 (2) - judging the flow on 03:20:283 (2,3) -

[Horologe]
  1. 　00:19:703 (2,3) - もっと少し飛ばしませんか？先の部分のビルアップを対比していまより強調するの方がいいと思うよ～
    :::
  2. 　00:26:619 (2,3) - あれれ？どうしてここだけにスタックするんですか？
  3. 　00:44:036 - その部分を作るのほうがいいよ、Fucchoは作ったですからこの難易度よりFucchoのdrain timeが多いですから恐らくDQされるかも。
  4. 　01:03:703 (2,3,1) - えっと。。。ピアノを強調しますからもっと飛ばしてもいいと思いますよ～
  5. 　03:22:700 (1,2,3) - I think it's possible to make their distance different so player can differentiate the rhythm gap, maybe making 03:22:700 (1,2) - having the same distance with 03:24:033 (1,2) - is okay

    いいね

単語や文型に何が間違えたら教えてください～

あああねむい～ここまではいいよね～
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melon boy
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Joined August 2013
melon boy

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Fuccho's Another]
Sadly it's been a while since i got a alchemy lesson from Sophie
  1. 00:35:703 (1,2,3) - It's nice when it's attempting to contrast 00:35:203 (4,5,6) - ,but it plays quite unnaturally since it's way too similar to 00:35:203 (4,5,6) - , however, in order to emphasize 00:36:036 - , I got no idea other than making a 5-note stream there, so it's up to you Moved the two circles to the side to make it more readable.
  2. 00:45:369 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite unexpected that you make the spacing very large on a calm part, in fact, it's larger than the intense part like 00:43:369 (1,2,3,4) - also it's quite triggering that you made 00:46:369 (4) - off the symmetrical pattern D: I kind of like it as it is. The fourth slider is changed to emphasize the change in the piano (I added whistle to further emphasize that).
  3. 00:50:703 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 03:20:700 (1,2,3) - I think you can swap the order of 1 and 2 since player would be more expected to hit 03:20:950 (2) - judging the flow on 03:20:283 (2,3) - I think it works either way but sure, it might feel a bit better that way.
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hehe
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hehe
For mapper opinion request,

[Horologe]
  1. 01:24:869 (4) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
  2. 01:57:451 (1) - Try blanketing for neatness.
  3. 01:05:119 (6) - NC for consistency.
  4. 03:49:367 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Add whistle for ビープ
  5. 02:08:035 - Add new greenline for 60% volume, too loud here.
  6. 04:10:783 (1) - Change combo color here, colorhax does not fit.
Asahina Momoko
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Topic Starter
Asahina Momoko

Lavender wrote:

bubbled. THANK
[Horologe]
  1. 00:22:369 (3) - i feel tilted cuz 00:22:453 - the drum sound here is complete ignored
  2. 01:15:869 (3,4,1) - consider moving up a bit to make it looks better
fixed all dad, thanks

Curisu wrote:

[Horologe]
00:22:036 - imo using single circle is better, emphasising 00:22:369 (3) i put this so as to emphasize the change of the section, let me keep
02:44:034 - +whis, in consistent with 02:49:367 o yea
03:44:533 (3,4,5) - should be same sv with 03:33:867 (3,4,5)? also for consistency between 2 kiai sessions i put different sv lines between the 1st/2nd half in the last kiai since the sound intensifies, so is spacing

thanks for mod!!

Firis Mistlud wrote:

[Horologe]
  1. 　00:19:703 (2,3) - もっと少し飛ばしませんか？先の部分のビルアップを対比していまより強調するの方がいいと思うよ～ イントロの部分全体的に変えたけど、結局スタックのままでもよさそうだからスタックで置きました
    :::
  2. 　00:26:619 (2,3) - あれれ？どうしてここだけにスタックするんですか？　なおした
  3. 　00:44:036 - その部分を作るのほうがいいよ、Fucchoは作ったですからこの難易度よりFucchoのdrain timeが多いですから恐らくDQされるかも。うーん考えとく、ほかのdiffスプレッド調整で作るかもしれないし
  4. 　01:03:703 (2,3,1) - えっと。。。ピアノを強調しますからもっと飛ばしてもいいと思いますよ～　ここ飛ばすのは個人的にナンセンスなのでキープ
  5. 　03:22:700 (1,2,3) - I think it's possible to make their distance different so player can differentiate the rhythm gap, maybe making 03:22:700 (1,2) - having the same distance with 03:24:033 (1,2) - is okay　間違いない、なおしました

    いいね

modありがと！

handsome wrote:

For mapper opinion request,

[Horologe]
  1. 01:24:869 (4) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
  2. 01:57:451 (1) - Try blanketing for neatness.
  3. 01:05:119 (6) - NC for consistency.
  4. 03:49:367 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Add whistle for ビープ
  5. 02:08:035 - Add new greenline for 60% volume, too loud here.
  6. 04:10:783 (1) - Change combo color here, colorhax does not fit.
holy shit this quality mod blew my fucking socks off whooaaaa FIXED EVERITHING
Arusamour
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Arusamour
why this not ranked ?
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