Hello, mod.
[Martyr]
00:56:999 (380,381) - Ctrl + g? You used k d k k everywhere else on guitar sounds, for example: 00:54:236 (355,356,357,358) - these one.
01:27:393 (577) - A finisher does not fit here imo, the guitar is basically the same and the drums are the same as well.
01:34:657 (609,610) - I presume you followed the drums here but i recommend 1/4 kkkk, which will fit the guitar better.
01:45:078 (653) - You skipped this sound everywhere else, so delete this note to keep the flow better.
02:39:393 - I'm sad that you missed this stream
02:46:025 (1057,1058,1059,1060) - Hmm, there are also snare sounds and i recommend changing them to all kats. You followed the drums mostly and it'll keep consistency.
02:50:762 (1078) - I think this finisher is excessive. There is no crash cymbal sound or change in the vocals.
03:17:288 (1209) - How about removing the finisher on this note? It's basically the same sound with 03:17:446 (1210) - this note.
03:23:130 (1232) - You missed a finisher here.
03:58:025 (1436,1439) - How about changing them to finishers? That'll support the crash cymbals.
04:09:393 (1529,1530,1531,1532) - Same suggestion.
04:14:131 (1550) - You can remove this finisher, there is no sound that supporting it.
04:25:183 (1617) - Why this one has finisher and 04:25:341 (1618,1619) - these ones don't? I hear a china cymbal sound in all of them.
04:44:130 (1725) - Don't know if you want to use a doublet here, but there are 2 snare sounds in 1/8.
04:44:446 - You need a red timing point here, measured with 4/4, because the measure is changing. After you do that, remember putting a 3/4 on 06:07:814 - this spot.
05:04:025 (1784) - You used a doublet for kicks but the snares are also in double. Try adding 1/8 kat here.
05:19:814 - Personally, i find these blank spots unneccessary. I know you are following guitar but leaving this blank in 1/1 breaks the map's consistency. Try to fill them with some notes. This applies all of 1/1 breaks here.
06:02:130 (2282,2283,2284) - Since you didn't overmap these section, I think you can delete the middle one.
06:24:867 (2406) - You can use a doublet here too.
06:33:393 (2448) - ^
07:27:393 - You can increase the volume back to 70% here.
08:09:078 (196) - Finisher is unneccessary I think.
08:19:499 - You skipped a sound here. There are 2 snares starting from 08:19:420 (245) - this note.
08:29:762 (304) - This note is excessive, there is no kick sound on it.
09:13:657 - You can decrease the volume step by step on this spinner.
10:36:393 (272,273) - I believe you can snap these two to red and blue ticks. 10:36:393 - Here, i mean.
Good luck on the ranking way, I hope my mod helped~