Late mod
Will mod zhave's rain after he applies to xi-False's mod
Not gonna mod MB's diff due to personal reason.
Here we go!
General
Will mod zhave's rain after he applies to xi-False's mod
Not gonna mod MB's diff due to personal reason.
Here we go!
General
- Due to this song have a long version with MV (Not official but strongly proves that it has a long version: http://www.le.com/ptv/vplay/20559636.html), I think better add tag
tv size
Also change the title of the song to petit milady - Koi wa Milk Tea TV ver.
I think it's time to ask IamKwaN for a metadata check. - Another thing is the color of the combo, I open the bg and use default skin to play your map. The color of the combo seems too dark matching with the background. Let's try some thing lighter
Combo 3: R 190 G 157 B 107
Combo 2: R 005 G 118 B 231
- 00:15:093 (4,4) - One to two grids left and right respectively due to I think such small movements do not fit the music and the patterns you design before. A bit more move can be better although it's salad. I think little emphasize on 00:15:340 (1) is also needed
- 00:19:520 (1) - Overmapped. You can change into 3 notes at 00:19:520 00:19:643 and 00:20:012
- 00:23:700 I really recommand that you should add a note here due to it's a strong lyric same to 00:23:208. Let's say x:464
- 00:43:618 (1,2) - Change the first slide into a single note and put at x:160, ctrl+h the second slider 00:43:864 (2) and move to x:208 or 224. I think the original one is too "tight" with several notes droping together at such short period of time.
- 00:45:831 (1) - I think this spin should be the same to Asc's diff. That way is better because nearly the same period of lyric happens in the spin you design as the notes before.
- Green line at 00:48:782 and 00:48:813 nyan nyan nyan ????
Not any big problems. Good salad.
Play like a Rain minus lol
- 00:10:422 (1,2) - I think it's better to reconsider about this part. I think here 00:10:790 is a beat and maybe add a note or just make the slider to here? It's weird to left this note with nothing.
- 00:11:282 (4) - You can say it's needed for the flow but it's overmapped. Depend on you.Your decision whether remain unchange or not.
- 00:12:389 (1,2) - Same to above.
- 00:13:126 (3) - Same to above. However, why not make constant to the one before (Although I don't like be constant bue pointed out by modders a lot of time so I decide to mention it here lol.)
- 00:13:864 (5,1) - This distance is really huge for platter without HDash. Please reduce the distance here. Move 2 grids left and right respectively.
- 00:35:012 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The same two lyrics start at 00:35:012 and 00:35:503 but with 1/6 and 1/8 discontinuing pattern distribution? I think there should be notes between 00:35:503 (6,7) or just change them all to 1/6. Although I know you want to express some creation here, but the result seems not as good as expected.
- 00:51:733 (1,2) - Increase some distance look like this
- 00:56:651 (7,8) - Better delete 7 and move the slider begin at 00:56:651, a reverse slider or a long slider is both fine. x:256 (long slider can remian the HDash after)
- 00:58:864 (6) - x:112
- 01:14:725 (2,3) - Reduce the distance here. 01:13:126 (5) - x:480 01:13:372 (1,2,3,1,2) - x:120 01:15:094 (3) - x:96
- 01:16:323 (7,8) - Change as I mentioned efore or remian unchange both fine.
- 01:18:536 (6) - x: 448 or 456
- 01:19:274 (1,2) - Same to the image showed above. They are too close here.
By the way, I like the jump in the kiai part. Some of the distance for the jump can be shorten due to it's a platter.
- 00:07:963 (6,1) - Too far 00:07:963 (6) - x:352
- 00:09:602 (5,6,7,8,9) - Can't understand 1/6 and 1/4 mixed here. There is a 1/8 stream music begin at 00:09:930, so you can make a stream at 00:09:930 (7,8,9,10) using 1/4. Add a note at 00:10:053 and move 00:09:766 to x:128 and the streams like: 00:09:930 (7) - atx:288
- 00:22:717 (2) - Need to add some notes after this slider due to it's a rain. Let's try 00:23:454 (3) - x:224 00:23:700 (4) - x:336 and 00:23:946 (5) - x:496. Emphasize the 00:24:192 (1) due to it's a strong lyric.
- 00:36:733 (4,5) - This HDash is unnecessary. x:352
- 00:36:979 (5,1,2) - I think better follow the vocal here but not the lyric. I think this part need remap. Like 00:37:225 and 00:37:717 need to bee emphasized and remove 00:37:840 (2).
- 00:38:946 (7) - ctrl+H and move to 400
- 00:44:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - The sliders and notes here is weird and strange, espicially the slider....I can't even figure out which one you want to follow here, the lyric or the vocal? If vocal, try this: Also, 00:45:340 (5) - at x:224 and 00:45:586 (6) - at x:64 to make a HDash between 00:45:586 (6,1) .
- 00:52:102 (1,2,3) - Same as above, the vocals begin at 00:52:102, 00:52:348 and 00:52:594. You need to rearrange this part.
- 00:53:208 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I STRONGLY recommand you to follow the vocal here and delete some overmapped pattern in this part. I play it for dozens of time and feel really uncomfortable if you remian follow the beat. It feels like why there is no note when she speak out the word and why here is a note with no any sound here. 00:55:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6) you did well here following the vocal, why not change the before one
- Next part is the same to the one before.
- 01:10:913 (3) - x:224
I think in the end part of the song, you do find the balance dealing with the music, from 01:08:946 to the end. So maybe the part I mentioned can be change to something like this one.
- 00:03:536 (5) - Strong beat here instead of 00:03:659 (6) , move 00:03:536 (5) to x:112 and 00:03:659 (6) - x:176
- 00:05:504 (4) - Strong beat here instead of 00:05:626 (5) , move 00:05:504 (4) to x:448 and ctrl+h 00:05:626 (5) to x:368, delete 6 (or 6 at x:368)
- 00:07:225 (3,4) - I think the strong beat should be on 00:07:471 but I don't want to break your style here. So it's your choice to reduce the slider 00:07:225 (3) and make a jump from 00:07:225 (3) to 00:07:471 (4) instead of the origin one or remian unchange.
- 00:09:192 (3) - Same to above
- 00:11:159 (3,4) - Strong beat at 00:11:405 instead of 00:11:528 (4)
- 00:13:372 (4) - x:368 00:13:741 (6) x:448
- 00:22:225 (1,2,3) - hmm, I think 00:22:225 (1) - end at 00:22:594, 00:22:717 (2) - begins at 00:22:717, 00:22:963 (3) begins at 00:22:963 and add a note at 00:23:208 (4) - x:48, move 00:22:963 (3) - to x:256 and 00:23:454 (5) - x:272. The strong beat is on 00:23:208 (4) so I add a HDash here and fix the distance after.
- 00:23:946 (7) - x:464
- 00:26:651 (3,4,5,6) - x:288, need HDash here
- 00:27:143 (7) - x: 96 00:27:020 (6,7) need emphasize this jump. So move 00:27:389 (8) to x:256.
- 00:29:110 (5) - x:432, need HDash here instead of between 6 and 7, move 00:29:233 (6) x:320
- 00:29:971 (10) - x: 392
- 00:30:463 (2) - x:496, the strong vocal is at 00:30:586 (3) instead of 2, also move 00:30:586 (3,4,5,6) a bit left the insure the HDash.
- 00:30:954 (6,7) - Same as above, emphasize here instead of 00:31:077 (7,8)
- 00:36:733 (4,5,6) - Please make them the same distance
- 00:39:807 (9,10) - Jump between 9 and 10 instead of 00:39:930 (10,1)
- 00:41:774 (8,9) - Jump here instead of 00:41:897 (9,1)
especially when 00:42:143 (1,2) , the vocals begin at 00:42:143 and 00:42:266, so I think one note plus a slider is better than one slider plus note.nothing, you follow the beat. - 00:43:495 (8) - I'm confused here...if you follow the vocal, it start at 00:43:618 but not 00:43:495...but if follow the beat, it's fine...a bit weird, I recommand you to follow the vocal and make a 1/8 reverse slider, it's AMAIDOSEEEEEE loool
- 01:01:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here are two same vocal and I also recommand you to follow the vocal here. Something like this, I think you can pm me in game for this part.
- 01:23:946 (3,1) - Please add notes between them....sudden blank in overdose lecel seems really uncomfortable especially in Kiai part.
I think the jump need to be considered about more although it maybe your style.
By the way, this is true overdose level for ctb, ctb need more maps like this one.