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So many spinners.
04:42:441 (8) - Unrankable. Sliderarrow is covered. You cannot see the arrow on the default skin
Time Signatures:
There are a lot NC's that aren't quite necessary overall and I feel you could shave down a few of them.
Snapping Errors:
Please explain the use of the colorhaxing and what each of the colour sets represent. It seems to be based on instruments, but then you get inconsistencies mentioned below.
So many spinners.
04:42:441 (8) - Unrankable. Sliderarrow is covered. You cannot see the arrow on the default skin
Time Signatures:
- 00:02:057 - This is 3/4, change in timing tab
- 00:24:749 - Add red timing point as 3/4
- 00:30:902 - ^
There are a lot NC's that aren't quite necessary overall and I feel you could shave down a few of them.
- 00:12:441 (1,1,1,1) -
- 00:30:710 (1,1) -
- 00:37:057 (1,1,1) - due to the similar SV's, the reading problem shouldn't be an issue. It also doesn't seem to be emphasizing something either.
- 00:43:210 (1,1) - ^
- 00:49:364 (1,1) - ^
- 01:01:672 (1,1) -
- 01:14:941 (1) - and just about every slider in this section
- 02:07:826 (1,1) - similar SV's, no need for a NC
- 02:09:364 (1,1) - ^
- 02:14:941 (1,1,1) -
- 02:20:133 (1,1) - ^
Snapping Errors:
- 00:36:095 (2) - I hear 1/6 here
- 00:36:735 - there's a note on this 1/6 tick too
- 02:32:249 (3) - The note here is actually on a 1/8 yellow snap which ends on the blue tick, adjust your slider to that
- 04:37:057 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think there are any triples here. Object 2 should just be a single 1/1 and object 3 and 4 are doubles instead
- 04:38:595 (1,2,3,4) - same here except object 3 and 4 are 1/1's instead. Object 2 is a triple
- 04:46:095 (4) - this is an 1/8 slider
- 04:49:172 (4) - ^
- 04:52:249 (4) - ^
- 04:55:326 (4) - ^
- 04:58:403 (4) - ^
- 05:01:480 (4) - ^
- 05:04:557 (4) - ^
- 05:07:633 (4) - ^
- 05:13:787 (4) - ^
- 05:16:864 (4) - ^
- 05:19:941 (4) - ^
- 05:23:018 (1) - ^
- 05:26:095 (7) - ^
Please explain the use of the colorhaxing and what each of the colour sets represent. It seems to be based on instruments, but then you get inconsistencies mentioned below.
- 00:12:441 (1,1,1,1) - why are these NC's pink, considering the song and the instruments used, you should still be using grey
- 00:30:710 (1) - ^
- 00:30:710 (1) - similar to the last section, this should also be using pink, but it's the black set?
- 00:30:710 (1) - shouldn't these be grey?
- 01:44:364 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 01:47:057 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:50:518 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 02:01:672 (1,1,1,1) - ^
- 05:30:903 (1,1,1,1) - ^
- 00:12:441 (1) - and 00:18:595 (1) - end on the red tick instead of the white tick. The other two sliders end on the white tick instead and there is no noticable sound on the red tick. It's best to be consistent here and just have all the sliderends end on the white tick.
- 00:24:749 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - considering that the currently section is 3/4, these types of rhythm patterns just simply don't fit and sound just off. Use a different rhyhthm scheme similar to the one at the beginning
- 00:31:480 (1,1) - Combine this into one spinner instead as it's more of one continuous sound. Mute the spinnerends regardless if you combine or not.
- 00:37:441 (1) - I feel the slider shouldn't be slower than the previous one, I can't hear a noticable drop in pitch or volume
- 00:40:133 (2) - this slider is a bit out of place. It doesn't seem to be following much and you're probably better off focusing entirely on the piano instead. Remove this.
- 00:43:595 (1) - same as 00:37:441 (1) -
- 00:49:364 (1,1) - it's a bit strange to see curve sliders here and a bit out of place too. Use straight sliders instead.
- 01:14:749 (1,1) - perhaps you could find an alternative instead of just using a spinner such as using a slider which quickly leads into the buzz sliders instead. Right now, it just seems, really weak. This applies to the rest
- 02:13:403 (3,4,1) - these are awkward to play and also quite bad too. Sliderend to the doubles which then leads to a jump into the slider is quite a disaster. Either remove the jumpstream or use a better angle http://puu.sh/qVIDv.jpg
- 02:14:172 (3,4,5,1) - please don't use a jumpstream here. It just sucks to do it. Atleast use a lower spacing like http://puu.sh/qVIL7.jpg
- 02:15:326 (1) - I feel these should be circles rather then just a slider. Adjust the next object if you change to circles
- 02:24:460 (2,1,2,1) - the jumpstream isn't necessary. There's no emphasis between the two notes here.
- 02:25:710 (3,4) - shouldn't this be a slider instead?
- 02:27:441 (1,2,1,2) - please don't lower the spacing while doing jumpstreams. It screws up a lot of momentum and is very easily prone to misses. Either use the same spacing or increase it instead.
- 02:28:210 (1) - don't think there is a note here
- 03:35:326 - silence the sliderends in parts like these.
- 03:53:980 - Some notes around the hexagon patterns could be moved around rhythm wise to fit the changing pitch more. For instance, you can Ctrl+G
- 03:54:749 (3,6) - and 03:55:134 (4,5) - . Change the other hexagons if you do this.
- 05:30:133 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure why you have squares with jumpstreams. The rest of the map doesn't remotely come close to the amount of control compared to this. Change the shape.
- 05:57:441 (2,2,2,2) - overmapped circles. I also feel they detract from the song too much and screws up with what you had before. Similar parts later on also apply to this
- 06:03:210 (1,1) - shouldn't these be circles instead. I don't hear a lingering sound on these two notes.
- 06:15:518 (1,2) - too big of a jump for such a little whoosh sound. It's also hard to predict when to hit the slider too
- 06:17:345 (2,2) - these notes are also overmapped. Same as 06:03:210 (1,1) -