20:00 miradzin: Hello o/
20:00 MrSergio: hi
20:01 miradzin: You busy now?
20:01 MrSergio: for?
20:02 miradzin: Don't want a mod, maybe a short opinion on my map? xd
20:03 MrSergio: for how much time have you mapped till now?
20:03 miradzin: 5-6 months I suppose
20:04 MrSergio: umh... link it
20:04 *miradzin is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1061336 Kumaki Anri - End of the World [End of the World]]
20:04 MrSergio: I can give you some points, but you should rather ask some other mods before asking me
20:04 miradzin: Oh ok sure
20:05 miradzin: I've been asking for many mods, they just don't come xD
20:05 MrSergio: m4m deals is the way
20:05 MrSergio: no one does something without something in return (unless they are dumb like me)
20:05 MrSergio: so if you want a mod, give a mod
20:06 MrSergio: 00:07:024 - do not ignore the beat on the white tick (strong beat)
20:06 *MrSergio is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1061336 Kumaki Anri - End of the World [End of the World]]
20:06 miradzin: Yeah I've been trying to ask for m4m recently too
20:06 miradzin: Oh, true
20:07 MrSergio: 00:11:524 (7,1) - be careful with spacing: you previously used way smaller spacing for that 1/4 jump after the slider (reference:00:07:524 (3,4) - )
20:07 MrSergio: 00:10:190 (3,1) - same here
20:07 MrSergio: they look like 1/2 snaps to me
20:08 MrSergio: 00:13:190 - imo you can use this beat. There isn't a particularly strong one here, but drum is still there and it can fit well
20:08 miradzin: Yeah, didn't noticed
20:08 MrSergio: 00:12:857 (7) - lik,e add a repeat on this one
20:08 MrSergio: and it should be fine
20:08 miradzin: sure xd
20:08 MrSergio: 00:15:024 (1) - this can be imrpoved aesthetically lol:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649898120:09 miradzin: oh
20:09 miradzin: better
20:09 miradzin: Okay
20:09 MrSergio: 00:19:524 (3) - the clap from the repeat shouold go on 00:20:024 (4) - imo
20:09 MrSergio: umh... actually, let's leave hitsounding out of this
20:10 MrSergio: 00:29:690 (1) - it is fine to follow vocals, but 00:30:190 (2) - ignoring drum totally is not good
20:10 MrSergio: 00:30:190 - circle; 00:30:357 - 1/2 slider; would work better imo
20:11 miradzin: ye :/ true
20:11 MrSergio: you can even stack them like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6499001 this], but you also need to arrange the next circles a bit
20:11 MrSergio: 00:31:690 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is this part THAT intense to require 1/2 jumps one after another? .-.
20:11 MrSergio: it kinda feels overdone
20:12 MrSergio: 00:33:690 - same from here on
20:12 miradzin: ok
20:12 MrSergio: I guess this is Fycho's fault for using giant jumps everywhere, zzz
20:12 miradzin: hahahah xD
20:12 miradzin: Probably
20:12 MrSergio: 00:39:024 - it is fine to follow drums so closely, but see if you can merge those rhythms with vocals too
20:12 miradzin: I'll change it
20:13 MrSergio: like you did for 00:43:690 (2,3,4) -
20:13 miradzin: Sure
20:13 MrSergio: 00:53:524 (5,6) - nazi: blanket can be improved
20:13 MrSergio: 00:54:857 (2) - nice, but shape can be better
20:14 miradzin: Okay
20:15 MrSergio:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/649903520:15 MrSergio: example ^
20:15 MrSergio: 01:00:024 (1) - again, un-even shapes aren't that clean in most cases, so where you can try to make them symmetrical
20:15 MrSergio: or at least, create a set of shapes that go well together
20:16 miradzin: Oh much better
20:16 miradzin: Understood
20:16 MrSergio: 01:00:024 (1,2,3,4) - umh... re-watched this a few times to be sure, and it feels a bit strange, probably because of 01:00:357 - not being clickable
20:17 MrSergio: 01:02:690 (8,9,1) - I would have followed vocals more, so the triplet feels a bit an extra. I would have removed 01:02:774 (9) - and put a jump between 01:02:690 (8,1) -
20:18 MrSergio: 01:04:190 - from here on you totally ignore vocals, and that's kinda bad for rhythm since vocals is the foreground instrument, the one the player will mostly likely try to follow
20:18 miradzin: Yes, sir.
20:18 MrSergio: (chorus voices do not count for this)
20:18 MrSergio: 01:15:024 - rip drum beat
20:19 MrSergio: 01:16:357 (1) - I bet you know what to do here x)
20:19 miradzin: True :c
20:19 miradzin: Yeah xD
20:20 MrSergio: 01:17:690 (1) - heh, you tried but I guess it didn't come out as you expected. I tried something too, but it's a bit hopeless. See if you can improve it otherwise just use something else
20:20 MrSergio: 01:19:024 - again with the 1/2 spam. A spinner would have worked better probably
20:20 miradzin: Yeah, I tried xD
20:20 miradzin: I'll see
20:21 MrSergio: 01:24:357 - I'd reduce a bit more SV here. It looks too similar to the previous section and the difference with this new section is noticeable
20:21 MrSergio: 01:28:357 (3) - nice
20:21 MrSergio: it can be better tho x)
20:21 miradzin: Ok
20:21 miradzin: Seems cute xD
20:21 MrSergio: and the problem with it is that the song ends around 01:29:690 - and the slider keeps goinhg
20:21 miradzin: I'll try to make it better
20:22 MrSergio: ah btw, please use custom combo colors LOL
20:22 miradzin: :c
20:22 miradzin: Ooh
20:23 miradzin: Totally forgot about that xD
20:23 MrSergio: what about [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6499089 these]
20:24 miradzin: pretty good
20:24 MrSergio: in case you want them:
http://mrsergio.s-ul.eu/vzoQk3Rb20:24 miradzin: Ok thanks probably will use them
20:25 *MrSergio is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1065754 Kumaki Anri - End of the World [Insane]]
20:25 miradzin: Probably can't use my heart shape slider in the end them :c
20:25 MrSergio: 00:04:190 (5,6) - in general, avoid starting sliders on red ticks if there isn't a strong beat
20:25 MrSergio: you can make it smaller
20:25 miradzin: okay
20:25 MrSergio: 00:09:857 (1) - wild NC appera
20:25 MrSergio: appears*
20:26 MrSergio: I guess that stuff I mentioned on the last diff can work here too
20:26 miradzin: make what smaller? xd
20:26 MrSergio: the heart shaped slider
20:26 miradzin: wat is that NC
20:26 miradzin: lul
20:26 MrSergio: New Combo
20:26 miradzin: Yeah
20:26 MrSergio: there is a shortcut for this stuff: select the slider and press Ctrl Shift S
20:26 miradzin: Don't know why I made a NC there
20:26 miradzin: xD
20:27 MrSergio: you can then reduce the slider
20:28 MrSergio: I guess... I
20:28 miradzin: Oh, yeah
20:28 MrSergio: I'll go have dinner lol
20:28 MrSergio: the main problem on your diffs is rhythm from what I saw
20:28 MrSergio: try to focus more on "what should be clickable and what not"
20:28 miradzin: I need to go to the bathroom xD
20:28 miradzin: Okay
20:28 MrSergio: since in most cases you make the player click on stuff that shouldn't be, and viceversa
20:28 MrSergio: nice
20:29 MrSergio: good luck with your mapset~