M4M
Great map dude!
Chatlog mod
12:32 Damnjelly: you up for the mod or not right now?
12:33 -Tochi: give me 2 mins
12:33 Damnjelly: aight
12:35 -Tochi: ok now
12:36 Damnjelly: aight
12:36 -Tochi: this map right?
12:36 *-Tochi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/652034 Meramipop - Eiya [Imperishable Challengers] [Eternal Night]]
12:36 Damnjelly: yeeh
12:36 -Tochi: ok
12:37 Damnjelly: 01:27:541 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part
12:37 Damnjelly: ok so i'm going to be nitpicky and explain stuff poorly but i'm going to try not to do both of those :^)
12:37 -Tochi: okay
12:37 Damnjelly: 01:27:541 (3,4,5,6) - this is stream like flow
12:37 Damnjelly: and from that you're going into a triangle
12:38 Damnjelly: 01:28:015 (6,1,2) -
12:38 Damnjelly: but imo you're not finishing the triangle properly
12:38 Damnjelly: 01:28:488 (3) - this not should, imo, be to the left of 01:28:172 (1) -
12:39 -Tochi: u want me to make a whole triangle?
12:40 Damnjelly: nah i mean
12:41 Damnjelly: place 01:28:488 (3) - between 01:28:015 (6,1) - so you properly finish the triangle and set yourself up for the back and forths
12:42 -Tochi: ah
12:42 -Tochi: but the distance here 01:28:488 (3,4) - are too big D:
12:42 Damnjelly: i would suggest, if you're following the advice, 01:28:646 (4) - placing this circle closer to 01:28:330 (2) -
12:43 -Tochi: i like it with this pattern 01:28:172 (1,3,1) -
12:43 -Tochi: well
12:44 -Tochi: idk, i think the jump here is getting "bigger" and so does the vocal
12:44 -Tochi: like, it gets more spaced
12:44 -Tochi: and i think it fits well here tbh
12:44 -Tochi: the pitch of the vocal changes a lot from here 01:28:015 (6,1) -
12:45 -Tochi: so the back and forth jumps are mapped to the next pitch
12:49 Damnjelly: aight i'm back in town
12:49 Damnjelly: sorry for that :\
12:49 -Tochi: oki
12:49 -Tochi: no, it's okay xDF
12:49 Damnjelly:
12:49 -Tochi: well, i wrote something when u crashed
12:49 -Tochi: http://puu.sh/o4or2/8f80de34cf.jpg
12:51 Damnjelly: yeah sure, but i'm not looking at the back and forths, i'm looking more at how you're going from the triangles into the back and forths
12:51 Damnjelly: which is, to me, a bit awkward
12:52 Damnjelly: the back and forths on it's own are fine spaced
12:52 -Tochi: ah
12:53 -Tochi: hmm
12:54 -Tochi: i think i'll keep it, i don't think it's a big problem D:
12:54 Damnjelly: aight
12:55 Damnjelly: 02:33:541 (7) - this circle is pretty spaced compared to the 5 notes before it
12:56 -Tochi: i can reduce it a bit
12:58 Damnjelly: i think that would be for the better, it could be a potential chokepoint for FC :^)
12:58 -Tochi: yeah, i remember that i missed on it D:
13:01 Damnjelly: well umm
13:01 Damnjelly: to be honest
13:02 Damnjelly: thats all i can add to this map :^)
13:02 Damnjelly: it's good enough to be ranked already
13:02 -Tochi: oh, nice xD
13:02 -Tochi: i changed something
13:02 -Tochi: so u can get kds
13:02 Damnjelly: ay
13:03 Damnjelly: could you send me the chatlog, since i don't have it completely anymore?
13:03 -Tochi: sure
12:33 -Tochi: give me 2 mins
12:33 Damnjelly: aight
12:35 -Tochi: ok now
12:36 Damnjelly: aight
12:36 -Tochi: this map right?
12:36 *-Tochi is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/652034 Meramipop - Eiya [Imperishable Challengers] [Eternal Night]]
12:36 Damnjelly: yeeh
12:36 -Tochi: ok
12:37 Damnjelly: 01:27:541 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this part
12:37 Damnjelly: ok so i'm going to be nitpicky and explain stuff poorly but i'm going to try not to do both of those :^)
12:37 -Tochi: okay
12:37 Damnjelly: 01:27:541 (3,4,5,6) - this is stream like flow
12:37 Damnjelly: and from that you're going into a triangle
12:38 Damnjelly: 01:28:015 (6,1,2) -
12:38 Damnjelly: but imo you're not finishing the triangle properly
12:38 Damnjelly: 01:28:488 (3) - this not should, imo, be to the left of 01:28:172 (1) -
12:39 -Tochi: u want me to make a whole triangle?
12:40 Damnjelly: nah i mean
12:41 Damnjelly: place 01:28:488 (3) - between 01:28:015 (6,1) - so you properly finish the triangle and set yourself up for the back and forths
12:42 -Tochi: ah
12:42 -Tochi: but the distance here 01:28:488 (3,4) - are too big D:
12:42 Damnjelly: i would suggest, if you're following the advice, 01:28:646 (4) - placing this circle closer to 01:28:330 (2) -
12:43 -Tochi: i like it with this pattern 01:28:172 (1,3,1) -
12:43 -Tochi: well
12:44 -Tochi: idk, i think the jump here is getting "bigger" and so does the vocal
12:44 -Tochi: like, it gets more spaced
12:44 -Tochi: and i think it fits well here tbh
12:44 -Tochi: the pitch of the vocal changes a lot from here 01:28:015 (6,1) -
12:45 -Tochi: so the back and forth jumps are mapped to the next pitch
12:49 Damnjelly: aight i'm back in town
12:49 Damnjelly: sorry for that :\
12:49 -Tochi: oki
12:49 -Tochi: no, it's okay xDF
12:49 Damnjelly:
12:49 -Tochi: well, i wrote something when u crashed
12:49 -Tochi: http://puu.sh/o4or2/8f80de34cf.jpg
12:51 Damnjelly: yeah sure, but i'm not looking at the back and forths, i'm looking more at how you're going from the triangles into the back and forths
12:51 Damnjelly: which is, to me, a bit awkward
12:52 Damnjelly: the back and forths on it's own are fine spaced
12:52 -Tochi: ah
12:53 -Tochi: hmm
12:54 -Tochi: i think i'll keep it, i don't think it's a big problem D:
12:54 Damnjelly: aight
12:55 Damnjelly: 02:33:541 (7) - this circle is pretty spaced compared to the 5 notes before it
12:56 -Tochi: i can reduce it a bit
12:58 Damnjelly: i think that would be for the better, it could be a potential chokepoint for FC :^)
12:58 -Tochi: yeah, i remember that i missed on it D:
13:01 Damnjelly: well umm
13:01 Damnjelly: to be honest
13:02 Damnjelly: thats all i can add to this map :^)
13:02 Damnjelly: it's good enough to be ranked already
13:02 -Tochi: oh, nice xD
13:02 -Tochi: i changed something
13:02 -Tochi: so u can get kds
13:02 Damnjelly: ay
13:03 Damnjelly: could you send me the chatlog, since i don't have it completely anymore?
13:03 -Tochi: sure
Great map dude!