Hello!
02:02:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 04:14:689 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 05:45:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - While playing I had a difficult time reading that these were 1/3 streams. I think spaced streams would be much clearer and easier to read.
00:17:531 (3,1) - The blanket's kinda off here.
00:29:215 (1) - Remove NC so it's not confused for a full beat gap.
00:31:899 (7) - Putting a kickslider here would emphasize the music better and make it more intense.
00:32:531 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You could use higher spacing here for better emphasis, the stream is much more intense these before it 00:32:531 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:31:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:49:373 (3,1) - 00:49:899 (2,3,4) - The 1/8 double needs to have lower spacing spacing than the 1/4 triple so they don't confuse the player.
02:05:373 (2) - There's no sound here.
02:06:478 (1,2,3) - Increasing the spacing would better indicate the rhythm. With the current spacing they look like 1/2 jumps.
02:09:004 (1,2,3) - same here^
02:06:952 (3) - This slider looks kinda messy, maybe replace it with this one 02:09:478 (3) - ?
02:44:373 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 02:59:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Both of these sections have similar spacing even though the first one is much more intense. I think lowering the spacing on the second section would represent the song better.
03:43:425 (4,5,6,7,1) - This rhythm sounds overmapped, there's only sounds on the white and red ticks.
04:50:689 (1,2) - The gap between these is a little awkward, using this rhythm 04:40:583 (1,2,3) - would be much better to play.
01:38:689 (1,2) - same here^
01:28:583 (1,2) - ^
03:19:741 (1,2) - ^
Good luck with your map!