22:40 BounceBabe: can you FC the expert and fire gun diff with osu normal skin?
22:41 W h i t e: i can expert but fire gun not sure lol
22:41 BounceBabe: can you play fire gun in osu standard skin for me?
22:41 W h i t e: ok
22:44 W h i t e: my bad play
22:44 BounceBabe: you play with tablet right?
22:44 W h i t e: no, i play with mouse
22:45 BounceBabe: ok :p
22:45 BounceBabe: pretty good for mouse
22:45 W h i t e: thanks
22:46 BounceBabe: but some notes that you misses were hard to play. id point those out probably in a mod so they flow better
22:47 W h i t e: ok,
22:47 BounceBabe: and a couple hundreds that you did were apparently not properly readable :p
22:48 W h i t e: :d my bad playing
22:48 BounceBabe: the SB also makes reading the notes hard sometimes tho
22:50 W h i t e: oh, is that hard? we changed the colors
22:53 BounceBabe: you could change the slider colour to white or black
22:53 BounceBabe: here for example the two pinkish colours are nearly the same 00:30:226 (3) - and strain the eyes a lot imo
22:56 BounceBabe: reminds me a lot of this SB
22:56 *BounceBabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/781873 Molly - Beneath The Lights (Darren Styles Remix) [Insane]]
22:56 BounceBabe: really intense ^^
22:58 BounceBabe: thats my skin
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5993367 its better to read with black or white slider colour
22:59 W h i t e: oAo
23:01 W h i t e:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599338723:01 W h i t e: like this?
23:02 BounceBabe: ye thats a lot better
23:02 BounceBabe: create a contrast with the neon background
23:02 BounceBabe: creates*
23:04 BounceBabe: you also should add "white" to your tags. i dont think anyone will type w_h_i_t_e into the search bar lol
23:05 W h i t e: nobody wants to type my nickname lol
23:06 BounceBabe: is the slider border colour intentional btw?
23:06 BounceBabe: looks green, theres no green in the bg
23:08 W h i t e: well little bit intentional
23:09 *BounceBabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1039409 Major Lazer & DJ Snake - Lean On (Feat. MO) [Fire Gun]]
23:09 BounceBabe: 00:49:206 -
23:09 BounceBabe: thats the part thats really hard to read cus of the bg colour also being orange
23:11 BounceBabe: didnt really want to start an irc mod lol
23:11 W h i t e:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599345223:11 W h i t e: lol
23:11 BounceBabe: ye thats a lot better ^^
23:12 BounceBabe: do you have time for an irc mod? will be long ^^
23:12 W h i t e: sure
23:14 BounceBabe: xD
23:14 BounceBabe: okay
23:14 BounceBabe: ill try my best for the harder diffs, im not used to so much spacing change
23:15 W h i t e: okay xD
23:15 *BounceBabe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1039409 Major Lazer & DJ Snake - Lean On (Feat. MO) [Fire Gun]]
23:15 BounceBabe: 00:14:308 (3,4,1) - these should have consistent spacing because the music is pretty much repeating here
23:16 BounceBabe: 00:21:655 (3,1) - this might be hard to read because youve used the same spacing as for your jumps here
23:17 W h i t e:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599349823:17 BounceBabe: ye thats better
23:19 BounceBabe: 00:24:410 (4) - this should be part of that pattern 00:23:492 (1,2,3) - its the same slider length and shape but you excluded it from the pattern
23:19 W h i t e: 00:21:655 (3,1) - i think it is readable
23:19 BounceBabe: yes it is but the spacing is just nearly the same as the one you used for jumps
23:20 BounceBabe: 00:20:737 (3,4,1) -
23:22 W h i t e: humm... ok
23:22 BounceBabe: 00:35:890 (6) - this slider's position looks a bit out of line. try creating a line between those 00:35:737 (5,6) - so it becomes more like these 00:35:431 (3,4) - it also would be between 00:36:349 (7,8) - those and create a better blanket and flow . you'll have to flip it too
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599354323:23 W h i t e: i think that's weird owo
23:25 BounceBabe: it creates a better blanket between 00:35:584 (4,6) - , it will have the same playstyle like 00:35:431 (3,4) - and create an anti jump with 00:35:890 (6,7,8) - . it'll play better trust me
23:26 BounceBabe: just a minimal change up to you
23:26 BounceBabe: 00:37:267 (1) - this pattern belongs to this NC 00:36:961 (1) - so the NC at 00:37:267 (1) - is not necessary and also wrong
23:26 BounceBabe: you did the same here 00:39:410 (1,2) - why break it
23:26 W h i t e: i know, but i don't like diamond patterns ;w;
23:27 BounceBabe: thats personal preference its ok :p
23:27 BounceBabe: and the NC pattern is fine here too 00:44:308 (1,2) -
23:28 W h i t e: so, change NC parts?
23:30 BounceBabe: no just remove the NC at 00:37:267 (1) - to fix it
23:31 W h i t e: oh
23:31 W h i t e: there has a mistake
23:31 BounceBabe: oh wait let me check your combo pattern
23:32 BounceBabe: you used a 4 and 8 beat combo pattern
23:32 BounceBabe: you shouldnt use two kinds
23:32 BounceBabe: most of the map is 4 beats
23:33 W h i t e: o_o
23:33 BounceBabe: every long white tick on the timeline indicates 4 beats
23:34 BounceBabe: ok wait no you used 2 beats xD
23:34 BounceBabe: lol
23:34 W h i t e: yes, some parts were not
23:34 BounceBabe: the bpm is slow
23:35 BounceBabe: combo patterns should be placed to the beats tho, not the vocals or anything
23:35 BounceBabe: well you can, but then it should be either vocal or beats
23:36 BounceBabe: according to your combo pattern here 00:17:369 - and 00:19:818 - for example
23:36 BounceBabe: there should be a NC at 00:11:400 (4) - and 00:12:931 (4) - instead of 00:11:706 (1) - and 00:13:084 (1) -
23:37 W h i t e: i prefer to follow beats and vocal both ways
23:38 BounceBabe: 00:30:992 (5) - this circle shouldnt be there. the drum is at 00:30:839 - and theres also no vocal at 00:30:992 -
23:39 W h i t e: that is syth sound
23:40 BounceBabe: okay
23:40 BounceBabe: well you mapped mostly to drum and vocal ^^
23:40 W h i t e: lol
23:42 BounceBabe: 00:54:257 (3) - that one isnt tho, this one is mapped to nothing
23:43 W h i t e: kind of overmapped
23:43 BounceBabe: this one too 00:56:094 (6) -
23:44 BounceBabe: 00:59:767 (2) - ^
23:44 W h i t e: those need for flow
23:44 BounceBabe: you overmapped that part in general
23:46 W h i t e: i except the syth sounds in drop times
23:49 BounceBabe: even if this is the hardest diff, overmapping empty sounds is not good
23:50 W h i t e: but they need for flow
23:52 BounceBabe: if you insist i cant persuade you ^^
23:53 BounceBabe: 01:08:798 (1,2) - same spacing as the jumps again 01:08:186 (7,8) - 01:07:727 (3,4) -
23:57 W h i t e: ok
23:57 BounceBabe: 01:14:461 (3,4,1) - thats the notes where you missed. they play really harsh. the patterns here 01:11:706 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - are really slow moving and relaxed to play while 01:14:461 (3,4,1,2) - are more stressful to play. additionally, the slider here 01:14:614 (4) - is a bit hidden and with the constant jumping it will be harder to see where to play because of the circle 01:14:308 (2) - that still covers the slider a bit
23:58 BounceBabe: 01:14:920 (1) - this is another overmapped note where nothing is that you can map to. besides, the drop down jump between 01:14:614 (4,1) - is pretty harsh to play considering you have to redirect your cursor from top right to bottom left and then bottom right again
00:00 BounceBabe: 01:24:716 (1) - again, this time the vocal for "around" starts at 01:24:410 - and ends at 01:25:022 - while 01:24:716 - is just an empty spot
00:01 BounceBabe: the rest in that pattern is synth and thats fine
00:02 BounceBabe: the whole slider at 01:29:920 (6) - is mapped to nothing as well. same like above the "kiss" vocal ends at 01:29:767 - next vocal starts at 01:30:227 - synth ends at 01:29:767 -
00:04 BounceBabe: rhythmically it would work better if you'd remove 01:37:114 (6) - and add a note at 01:37:114 - instead as 01:37:267 - is an empty spot again and just a continuation of the vocal from 01:36:808 - the "somebody"
00:05 BounceBabe: the echo of the synth is there yes but that would be mapped with a single circle at 01:37:114 -
00:07 BounceBabe: you also missed this circle 01:42:165 (6) - . probably because you was focusing on playing 01:41:706 (4,5,7) - while this one appears when this one 01:42:318 (7) - is in the field that you focus on when you play this 01:41:859 (5) - . so this circle 01:42:165 (6) - is hard to notice and will be noticeable only just before you play it
00:08 BounceBabe: it also is another harsh redirection of the cursor movement from 01:41:859 (5) - to 01:42:165 (6) - since these 01:41:859 (5,7) - are within playing range at that point
00:10 BounceBabe: i think if you swap the position of 6 and 7 it will be better to play
00:10 BounceBabe: but then you need to fix the spacing between 01:42:318 (7,8) -
00:10 BounceBabe: another empty note 01:43:390 (2) -
00:10 W h i t e: im so confused
00:11 BounceBabe: i can imagine
00:12 BounceBabe: 01:08:798 (1,2) - you didnt map this red tick 01:09:104 - which is exactly the same music for example so remove this empty note 01:43:390 (2) -
00:12 BounceBabe: ok before i go on what dont you understand ^^
00:14 W h i t e: i fixed 01:14:308 (2,3,4) -
00:14 BounceBabe: for the previous suggestion, all im trying to say is that 01:42:165 (6,7) - would play better if they were reversed like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599384100:15 BounceBabe: ok
00:15 W h i t e: ok i will fix that
00:15 BounceBabe: alright
00:15 BounceBabe: anything else unclear?
00:16 W h i t e: i don't want to fix about empty things they were so heavy
00:17 BounceBabe: hm?
00:18 BounceBabe: 01:47:369 (3,1) - same spacing as the jumps again 01:46:604 (1,2,3) -
00:19 BounceBabe: the NC here is not necessary 02:07:573 (1) - since it belongs to the stream 02:07:267 (8,9,10,11,1) -
00:20 W h i t e: ok
00:20 BounceBabe: 02:20:584 (2) - another empty note , this one 02:21:197 (4) - is fine because of the synth
00:21 BounceBabe: you left out this note too 02:37:727 - why did you map the other empty notes that i mentioned?
00:23 BounceBabe: 02:39:410 (1,2) - compared to the jump spacing for 02:38:798 (7,8) - , 02:39:410 (1,2) - this should have bigger spacing
00:23 BounceBabe: this spacing is better 02:41:859 (1,2) -
00:25 BounceBabe: 01:50:124 (8) - the slider slightly touches / overlaps with the accuracy bar at the bottom. overlapping objects with the interface should be avoided
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599392300:27 BounceBabe: you also dont have any kiai time. you should add it
00:28 W h i t e: okay
00:42 BounceBabe: so what about the empty notes?
00:44 W h i t e: not sure about that
00:47 BounceBabe: did you apply the rest and update?
00:47 W h i t e: yes i accepted, except the empty notes
00:49 BounceBabe: there are still those same spacing like jumps suggestion you didnt fix
00:50 W h i t e: no, i fixed
00:50 W h i t e: can you find something i take mistakes
00:51 BounceBabe: the spacing is still way too small at 01:08:798 (1,2) - since you used such spacing for 01:09:716 (4,5) - 01:08:186 (7,8) -
00:52 W h i t e: that's enough, imo
00:54 BounceBabe: this is a 1 beat 1/1 tick gap 01:08:798 (1,2) - . this is a blue to red tick one with the same spacing 01:08:186 (7,8) -
00:55 BounceBabe: move the circle up to make the spacing more reasonable
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599407600:55 W h i t e: okay...
00:57 BounceBabe: same with 01:47:369 (3,1) - the spacing is smaller than 01:47:063 (2,3) - again. sorry ^^ just how it is
00:57 W h i t e: that was so hard to change patterns
00:58 BounceBabe: why, its an easy fix, just move the circle to the bottom left
00:58 BounceBabe: this slider 01:47:369 (3) - is already faded out by then and doesnt need to have a blanket with 01:47:982 (1) -
01:00 BounceBabe: 02:27:165 (1,2) - same spacing like 02:27:471 (2,3) - again :s
01:04 W h i t e: hard, too
01:05 BounceBabe: 00:59:155 (9) - empty note that you havent removed / you removed this empty note tho 02:20:584 - thats good ^^
01:06 BounceBabe: ok if you fix these two things then the diff is fine
01:06 BounceBabe: something like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/599413901:12 W h i t e: i fixed it
01:12 BounceBabe: good
01:15 BounceBabe: ill mod the rest another day via thread post. have a good evening ^^