1. Easy (1.69 stars, 103 notes)
2. Hard (3.54 stars, 236 notes)
3. Insane (4.6 stars, 297 notes)
4. Normal (2.31 stars, 151 notes)
5. thzz's Extra (5.39 stars, 319 notes)

iHatePeople wrote:

[Easy]

Recomendo um Remap em SV 0,80 Vou pensar nisso

[Normal]

00:01:191 (1) - começaria aqui 00:01:357 - E troca isso por um circle ou por nada. Troquei por um circle
00:01:690 (2,4) - BlanketJá não estava com blanket? Anyway, tentei dar uma melhorada nele.
00:03:357 (5,6) - BlanketOK
00:04:357 (7) - Shape quase reto, mas arredondado, pois não da pra encaixar blanket aqui.OK

SPOILER

00:05:690 (9,1,2,3) - Para essa parte, você terá que fazer outro caminho (imagem)OK

SPOILER

00:08:024 (6) - 92,123OK
00:07:690 (5,7) - BlanketOK
00:09:024 (8,1) - BlanketOK
00:10:357 (2) - 468, 220 e remapea dai pra frente pra reposicionaOK
00:14:690 (3,1,2) - Você terá que fazer blanket com 1 dos slides e remapear o resto, 2 blankets em 1 Circle não fica bom.OK
00:19:024 (7,8) - Arruma esse blanket.OK
00:20:357 (1) - Shape feio.OK
00:21:024 (2,3) - BlanketOK
00:23:690 (7) - Shape feio.OK
00:24:690 (1,2) - BlanketOK

No momento só vou moddar isso, por que você mesmo vai notar a falta de blanket que tem no mapa inteiro e vai precisar remapear todas as diffs.
Outra coisa que percecbi no seu mapeamento também, você embola os sliders, pelo seu jeito de mapear você precisa criar flow path. Por exemplo
aqui 01:08:357 (4,5) - você deixa assim, assim fica melhor para você mapear.:Realmente dessa maneira fica mais fácil mapear.

SPOILER

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_Yiiiii wrote:

Hi, no need to mod my map, it's a NM

[General]
The diff name The World's End makes confusion, one can't know whether it was done by a mapper called The World or it is just a name XD Oh xD I'll change that

[The World's End]
00:01:690 - This part should have a SV at least 0.8 Changed

00:15:024 - Slow down sliders plz. By the way, you have to NC the slider if you changed SV and it affect game play, such as 00:15:524 (2) - slowed and fixed

00:25:690 (1,2,3) - No need of a wide angle here because there is no strong beat at 00:25:857 fixed

00:39:024 - Since the song became slow, a NC every 4 beats. So NC at 00:40:357 (4) - 00:41:690 (6) - 00:43:024 (9) - fixed

Most problems are about sliders, you should avoid using sliders at this direction. I recommend you to remap sliders that are longer than 1/4 beat. This direction? Well, I'll see what I can do.

Good luck~

-himei wrote:

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insane:
00:11:607 (2,2) - theres no sound to emphasize, its overmapped Probably correct, fixed.
00:12:690 - why is this not mapepd then? Don't see a reason for an object here, anyway added a circle here 00:12:857
00:14:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this structure can be improved Changed some things.
00:33:690 (1,3,2,4) - arent them supposed to be more structured, like, more linear by Y ? im not suggesting you to make them strongly linear, but 00:33:690 (1,3) - these too shud have the same Y parameter, as well as 00:35:024 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be properly structured, for example 00:35:024 (1,3,5) - you shouldve put an equal distance inbetween them. Well, on the slider I made them with a different spacing than the circles (they are jumps then?) and I kept the same DS as before for those circle so that's why the distance between them are different, so imo there's nothing wrong with them, but I changed most part of it.
00:34:357 - also this sound is mapped on the sliderend, which is bad in my opinion, cuz u got 00:34:524 (4) - on the same sound >_>Sliders were used with the whistle where the piano sound is stronger, I can't see anything wrong here :s
00:47:524 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - square? lolChanged lol
01:01:190 (6,1) - i dont really like this overlapYeah, fixed xD
01:07:857 (1,3) - ^ fixed
01:08:024 (2,3,4,5) - structure can be improved fixed
01:10:024 (3) - 232 248 fixed
01:10:857 (7) - 312 122 fixed
01:11:524 (2,4) - overlaps fixed
just a quick look at your structure here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6501470
;w;
01:25:524 (4,5) - make them parallel at least? Yeah, why not? xD fixed
01:27:690 - map this sound plz? Oh, true, fixed

gl~

1. Try to work more on aesthethics (overlaps, blankets and stacks), for example if you blank on 00:04:024 (4,1,2) - it could look more clean and also redeable like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6511914
2. 00:12:357 (1,2) - use the aproach circle to make good blankets like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6511911
3. evoid this overlaps, this is your lower diff so things like this can confuse new players~
   Im gonna stop with aesthethics, probably you get an idea on what i was trying to explain
   
4. 00:53:690 (3,1) - This plays kinda awkward, put Snap Divisor on 1/2, from 00:54:357 - , try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512036 and add a note in 00:55:690 - ~ this fit better imo
5. 01:02:357 (1) - i feel this slider kinda off~, try this(?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512050 , starting from 01:01:690 -
6. 01:11:024 (1) - make this one 2 sliders, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512056 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512061 either way fit better on vocals imo~
7. 01:28:357 (1) - remove finish and add a green line with 5% volume on 01:30:357 - , a silent end~

missa1912 wrote:

Hi! from my queue

My angel Kagari <3

[Easy]

1. Try to work more on aesthethics (overlaps, blankets and stacks), for example if you blank on 00:04:024 (4,1,2) - it could look more clean and also redeable like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6511914 fixed
2. 00:12:357 (1,2) - use the aproach circle to make good blankets like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6511911 Yeah it become way easier xD, fixed
3. evoid this overlaps, this is your lower diff so things like this can confuse new players~ I tried
   Im gonna stop with aesthethics, probably you get an idea on what i was trying to explain
   
4. 00:53:690 (3,1) - This plays kinda awkward, put Snap Divisor on 1/2, from 00:54:357 - , try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512036 and add a note in 00:55:690 - ~ this fit better imo fixed
5. 01:02:357 (1) - i feel this slider kinda off~, try this(?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512050 , starting from 01:01:690 - fixed
6. 01:11:024 (1) - make this one 2 sliders, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512056 or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6512061 either way fit better on vocals imo~ fixed
7. 01:28:357 (1) - remove finish and add a green line with 5% volume on 01:30:357 - , a silent end~fixed

Miryle wrote:

M4M for this map.

Gonna point stuff out but uh, really needs polishing.

Insane

Insane

1. 00:02:024 (2,3) - Blanket ;-; fixed
   
2. 00:03:524 (3,4) – Blanket this maybe? why not
   
3. 00:07:024 (2,3,4,5,6) – Could you maybe this into a pattern? Atm it looks like they’re just randomly placed. Changed
   
4. 00:08:357 (6) – Missing hitsound on this head? No, just like before the clap and then the whistle and it keeps going
   
5. 00:08:690 (1,2,3,1,2,3) – Wow spaced linear jumps in the intro. Not a fan of this considering most of so this intro is easier. Changed
   
6. 00:09:857 (5,2) – Overlap may be hard to read. True, fixed
   
7. 00:12:190 (1) – Ends on a strong beat, removes possible emphasis. fixed
   
8. 00:16:357 (5) – NC maybe? fixed
   
9. 00:18:190 (3,4) – Ctrl+G both at once for better rhythm? fixed
   
10. 00:20:190 (6) – Not sure what this is mapped to? fixed
    
11. 00:22:190 (3,4) – Blanket. ;-; okey
    
    Check your blankets, I’ve seen the ones listed that are obvious, but there are some that are slightly off that I won’t mention. I recommend checking through this again for intended blankets and unintended blankets.
    
12. 00:25:190 (2) – Could probably make this slider two circles and space them out for emphasis jumps. probably, fixed
    
13. 00:25:690 (3) – NC? fixed
    
14. 00:29:690 (3) - ^ Cuz you follow drums here, not vocals.yea fixed
    
15. 00:33:690 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) – I really like this part. :3 Thanks
    
16. 00:54:857 (6,7,8,9) – This looks really ugly in terms of placement, in my opinion. Try to move these around to make a little bit more pleasing aesthetic? Here’s a video, just to give an idea of what MIGHT look nicer: https://puu.sh/saONH/964b35aab6.mp4 Yeah, better, fixed
    
17. 00:57:716 (3) – NC? fixed
    
18. 01:08:690 (4,1) – Trigger-fuel right here. Fix this or I’ll come find you. I swear on it. NO, fixed, sorry ;-;
    
19. 01:08:383 (3) – NC this?fixed
    
20. 01:10:550 (6,7) – Ctrl+G both at once for better rhythm?fixed
    
21. 01:13:524 – Note here for smoother playing? ok
    
22. 01:13:716 (1) – Could space this WAYYY more.yep
    
23. 01:14:883 (3) – NC?why here?

Hard

Hard

• 
  Blanket check this diff too. Already getting triggered. 00:05:190 (1,2,3) – killing me. hehehe fixed

1. 00:06:357 (4,5,6,7) – Too closeeeee. Space the triple more.Oh why was it so close? xD fixed
   
2. 00:12:357 (4) – Either NC this or space it more, this WILL be misread. NC and spaced more ;-;
   
3. 00:19:857 (4,5) – Too big a jump for a hard, especially since 00:19:524 (3,4) – exists. fixed
   
4. 00:20:357 (1,2) – Make these parallel. (copy paste 1 and Ctrl+G) fixed
   
5. 00:25:524 (4) – Ends on vocal downbeat. I suggest making the downbeat clickable. fixed
   
6. 00:30:024 (6,7,8,9) – Random rhythm change? (not the only time this happens cuz most of your rhythm seems inconsistent tbh)fixed
   
7. 00:31:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) – Again with the inconsistent rhythm. -cries-fixed
   
8. 00:37:690 (2,3,4) – Can NC all of these if you want.NCed
   
9. 00:44:357 - 00:51:024 – No consistency whatsoever. Sometimes you use doubles, sometimes sliders, sometimes circles. Idek. fixed
   
10. 00:56:190 (6) – NC?changed
    
11. 00:57:690 (2) – NC.changed
    
12. 01:07:357 (2,3) – Overlap. -triggered-fixed ;-;
    
13. 01:08:024 (1,3) – Parallel pls.fixed
    
14. 01:10:024 (3,4) - ^ (actually a lot of the kiai has parallel-ity issues.)fixed
    
15. 01:16:357 (1) – Space more pls.fixed

Good luck.~