1. 00:12:563 (3) - abort this rabbit slider
   
2. 00:33:252 (1,2) - , 00:44:287 (1,2) - etc, I think these play nicer with just a repeat on the first slider (it ignores the vocal on the red tick but it captures the beat on the white tick and maintains polarity 1! !1 1 ! ! 1 ). Might be trickier to adjust for though if your slider starts from the side of the screen like 01:39:459 (1,2) - lO L so i guess u can just do it for some of them or none of them at all :gun
   
3. 01:26:701 (3,5) - this could be confusing for newer players since some of them might follow the slider into 5 instead of looking at 4, but I'm not sure because I'm not 8 digits and my name is not Omar kaMAL sooo I would keep this in mind if anyone does point it out in future mods
   
4. 01:31:528 (3) - NC, 01:32:563 (1,3) - swap NC
   
5. 02:02:735 (2) - you can put a 1/2 slider on the white tick before this to capture both sounds + maintain po l ar it y
   
6. 02:22:908 (4) - cud be bettr synergy here between the sliders cuz this one is fat and the others are oppressed so u need 2 make this skinnier like thisss:
   
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1. 00:49:114 (4) - rhythm could be better here since right now it ignores the synths and the vocal is stronger on the red tick; I recommend moving this to the previous red tick 00:48:942 - then adding a circle at 00:49:459 - (ideally a repeat slider on the red tick would capture the rhythm perfectly, but you would have to rearrange everything else after it zz)
   
2. 00:53:770 (2,3,4,5) - try this rhythm instead, it captures the synths + important vocals
   
   gee

   
3. i love naruto !

1. 01:36:356 (4) - w tf
   
2. 01:44:976 (1,2,3) - in this section you unstack the double after the 1/4 sliders while in the section before it was stacked under. I don't think there really is a gameplay issue with this (?) but keep it in mind I guess xd
   
3. 02:11:356 (4,1) - honestly I would just swap the NC here since it's in a new bar anyways + to prevent the gap from being misread as 1/2
   
4. 02:24:976 (4) - try ending this earlier and throw in a triple
   
   ddd

   
   might feel nicer to play + you dont have to place the sliders right next to each other like that !!one1!

1. 00:29:632 (2,3) - compared to other jumps in this section, I think you should reduce the spacing of this by a little (I suggest reducing the spacing to at least ~3.40x)
   
2. 01:40:839 (1,2) - consider spacing these sliders out more so it looks nicer. Same for 02:22:908 (5,1,1) - , having equal spacing between slider bodies typically makes patterns look nicer
   
3. 01:49:459 (2,5) - I think what you did here works better if the sound on the slider is the same; I suggest placing 5 below/to the right of 2 to create a sense of movement/momentum in your pattern since the sound/vocal on the sliders aren't exactly the same
   
   example

   
4. 02:04:287 - to 02:26:356 - can be pretty difficult for an insane diff of this level (particularly the second half), but I would ask for more opinions on this. If you do end up needing to tone down the difficulty, then I would suggest doing it by replacing the second 1/4 slider in patterns like 02:04:632 (3,4) - / 02:05:321 (3,4) - , etc with a circle stacked on the next 1/2 slider
   
5. 02:56:701 (1,2) - 02:57:218 (3,4) - since these are visually grouped in two's, it might look nice to have the spacing between the long and short sliders the same:
   
   e.g.

   

1. 00:30:149 - 00:30:321 - might be fun to map those two staccato notes
   
   idk l ol

   
2. 00:58:597 (4) - soft sampleset on tail might emphasize the head/vocal more
   
3. 02:45:206 (4,7) - I think ctrl+g here makes the motion more circular/natural to play
   
4. 00:40:149 (1,2,3) - might look nicer if you increase the spacing to match the spacing at 00:40:666 (3,4) - by moving 2 up/to the right

PYON

1. 00:30:149 (6) - why not this
   
   more objects pls

   nene

1. 02:23:252 (1) - vertical flip maybe for drop

• General

1. 02:47:045 - reduce hitsound volume or maybe a crescendo here would work nice I think.

• Doormat's Normal

1. 02:52:563 (5,6,7) - the rhythm is a bit awkward here with the red tick sliders, something like this 01:13:252 (5,6,7) - would work better.

• Hard

1. 01:58:080 (3) - slider here for vocal would be better imo.
2. 02:39:976 - circle here for vocal.

• NiNo's Insane

1. 02:03:597 (4,5,6,7) - make it same distance.
   
   
2. 02:16:701 (1) - why not here?
   
   
3. 02:22:390 (2,3,4,5) - i think this plays too awkward as a linear movement, maybe use a higher angle from the 1/3 circles to the slider.

• PYON

1. 01:03:770 (2,3) - there's triple here from vocals/drums that i see no reason to ignore.
2. 01:19:804 (8,9,10,11,1) - decrease spacing a bit, more like this 01:23:942 (6,7,8,9,1) - so it doesn't have the same spacing as triples before who are emphasizing something stronger.