2016-06-26 16:45 estellia-: ok
2016-06-26 16:45 estellia-: i start with EZ
2016-06-26 16:45 estellia-: rn its unrankable, you need to turn on distance snap the whole way through
2016-06-26 16:45 Ireiisu: i thought i had it on
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: btw would appreciate if you could reply fasster cuz i type fast and i can find a lot of problems really fast
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: 00:21:202 (3,4,1) - obviously not on here
2016-06-26 16:46 Ireiisu: ok
2016-06-26 16:46 Ireiisu: ops
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: oh and also
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: SV changes in eassy not permitted
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: remove all remap
2016-06-26 16:46 Ireiisu: ok
2016-06-26 16:46 estellia-: also your easy is very very ugly
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: refer to other easy maps and see what can be changed
2016-06-26 16:47 Ireiisu: ;p i was forced to do easy
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: i suggest stuff like parallel sliders, only straight/curved sliders, blankets, etc.
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: you dont have to keep easy
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: you can just remove it tbh
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: you dont require an easy in your set to rank
2016-06-26 16:47 estellia-: if you think remapping the aesthetics is too annoying just remove it
2016-06-26 16:47 Ireiisu: but i would need to make normal 2 stars or something
2016-06-26 16:48 estellia-: uh
2016-06-26 16:48 estellia-: less than 2 stars
2016-06-26 16:48 estellia-: yea thats tru
2016-06-26 16:48 estellia-: you have to make normal less than 2 stars
2016-06-26 16:48 estellia-: ok uh if it helps i can get more specific
2016-06-26 16:49 Ireiisu: specific..?
2016-06-26 16:49 Ireiisu: oh
2016-06-26 16:49 estellia-: 00:08:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - massive patterns like that, very bad for easy
2016-06-26 16:49 estellia-: suggest you to increase your DS, you can afford to do that
2016-06-26 16:50 Ireiisu: ok noted
2016-06-26 16:50 estellia-: 00:37:790 (2,3,4,5,6) - hitcircle spams, try to limit that as wewlll
2016-06-26 16:50 estellia-: cuz its too difficult for easy players imo
2016-06-26 16:50 estellia-: 00:53:673 (1,2,3) - this couldve easily been blanketed
2016-06-26 16:50 estellia-: 00:57:908 (3) - dont add double reverses out of nowhere as well, very very unreadable
2016-06-26 16:51 estellia-: 01:21:908 (1) - tryy to not have ugly sliders
2016-06-26 16:51 estellia-: basically you have to remap everything, because of the DS and SV issues
2016-06-26 16:51 estellia-: and just refer to other easy maps for an idea of what to do because rn its very very messy
2016-06-26 16:51 Ireiisu: ok
2016-06-26 16:54 estellia-: ok i'll just move on, i believe youo get it
2016-06-26 16:54 Ireiisu: (probablynotwithnormal0
2016-06-26 16:55 estellia-: similar issues
2016-06-26 16:55 estellia-: SV and DS cannot be changed
2016-06-26 16:59 estellia-: 01:16:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - massive patterns, try to limit that as well
2016-06-26 16:59 estellia-: you dont have to emphasise so many beats in normal
2016-06-26 16:59 estellia-: otherwise the aesthetics is pretty OK
2016-06-26 16:59 estellia-: this looks more like an Easy tbh xd
2016-06-26 17:00 Ireiisu: ;p ^i will probably remap most of it again
2016-06-26 17:01 estellia-: ok
2016-06-26 17:01 estellia-: hard now
2016-06-26 17:02 estellia-: ok uhhhh
2016-06-26 17:02 estellia-: your hard
2016-06-26 17:03 estellia-: some parts of the rhythm aren't mapped, and some beats aren't emphasised well
2016-06-26 17:04 estellia-: the overall aesthetics is rather ugly imo, everything seems like its placed for the sake of it
2016-06-26 17:04 estellia-: like "oh i here something here, sure i'll put something there"
2016-06-26 17:04 estellia-: the flow most of the time, because of this, is very haphazard
2016-06-26 17:04 estellia-: everything is all over the place
2016-06-26 17:05 estellia-: its also very boring, the rhythm is the same all the time
2016-06-26 17:12 Ireiisu: btw^you dont need to wait for me to reply to contiune
2016-06-26 17:12 estellia-: o
2016-06-26 17:12 estellia-: so you'd rather i just bomb you
2016-06-26 17:12 estellia-: ok thats fine too
2016-06-26 17:12 Ireiisu: nuke
2016-06-26 17:12 Ireiisu: jk
2016-06-26 17:12 estellia-: LO
2016-06-26 17:12 estellia-: i'll give specifics
2016-06-26 17:13 estellia-: inconsistent rhythm: 00:25:790 (3,4) - compared to 00:22:790 (2) - and 00:19:967 (2) -
2016-06-26 17:14 estellia-: 00:31:084 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - messy lopsided flow
2016-06-26 17:14 estellia-: 00:53:849 (2) - this shouldn't be 4 points, remake this
2016-06-26 17:14 estellia-: 01:12:026 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - messy NC
2016-06-26 17:15 estellia-: 01:23:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - messy flow (esp5 )
2016-06-26 17:15 estellia-: 01:16:084 - strong beat here, should map this imo
2016-06-26 17:16 estellia-: 01:31:437 (5) - imo you should split this into 2 hitcircles for emphasis on piano
2016-06-26 17:16 estellia-: just stuff liek that
2016-06-26 17:16 estellia-: those are only examples, basically there are more instances that appear in your map
2016-06-26 17:16 estellia-: refer to other hard diffs for more help
2016-06-26 17:16 Ireiisu: ok
2016-06-26 17:17 estellia-: i
2016-06-26 17:17 estellia-: ll go oon
2016-06-26 17:18 estellia-: this applepie's insane i'll just spam
2016-06-26 17:18 estellia-: cuz you cant exactly reply anyways xd
2016-06-26 17:19 estellia-: 00:08:496 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - the mapping here is very lopsided because the musical track skipping between instrument and drum is very bad, makes the rhythm very inconsistent and it misses out on a lot of obvious beats
2016-06-26 17:19 estellia-: suggest adding more notes tbh
2016-06-26 17:20 estellia-: 00:18:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - brush up on distancing
2016-06-26 17:20 estellia-: 00:24:732 (3) - pls no double reverses, they never work
2016-06-26 17:21 estellia-: 00:40:967 (1,1) - suggest you just end the spinner on 1, this might be a little hard to hit, even for an insane imoo
2016-06-26 17:21 estellia-: 00:43:614 (1) - you rarely start a slider on a red tick, just so you know, the slider end should be a click note (there are multiple occurences, i'll leave it to you to filter out which works and which doesnt, but this one obviously doesnt wwork for me)
2016-06-26 17:22 estellia-: 00:53:496 (4,1) - remember, kick sliders (4) are always played as a hitcircle, placing them like that breaks the flow and makes it jarring to play
2016-06-26 17:23 estellia-: 01:06:202 (1) - similar issue to before about red tick sliders
2016-06-26 17:23 estellia-: 01:07:437 (4,5,1) - why these kicks suddenly? they dont reallly fit the music imo
2016-06-26 17:23 estellia-: also they dont happen in your map often anyways, makes no sense for you to have them there unless you have a good reason
2016-06-26 17:23 estellia-: 01:14:143 (4) - double reverses
2016-06-26 17:24 estellia-: 01:15:555 (2,3,4) - the music sounds noothing like that, suggest rhythm change to this:
http://puu.sh/pGsvE/8f5963cf34.jpg2016-06-26 17:25 estellia-: 01:21:202 (1,2,3,4) - this part of the music doesnt deserve so much rhythmical emphasis, suggest changing all these too hitcircles
2016-06-26 17:25 estellia-: 01:33:202 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this sudden slow down of speed makes no sense to me, esp when at the END of your map you have further jumps: 01:37:437 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-06-26 17:26 estellia-: this map requires a lot of rhythmical and pattern-wise touch up
2016-06-26 17:26 estellia-: the aesthetics arent ideal for me but theyre definitely rank quality
2016-06-26 17:26 estellia-: thats it for thiss diff
2016-06-26 17:26 Ireiisu: ok
2016-06-26 17:26 estellia-: ok now to your insane
2016-06-26 17:28 estellia-: ok your insane i'll give a general mod
2016-06-26 17:28 estellia-: its very very similar to your hard
2016-06-26 17:28 estellia-: in a sense everything is still very lopsided and mapped wwith bad flow
2016-06-26 17:28 estellia-: that everything is placed foor the ssake of it
2016-06-26 17:28 estellia-: btw ignore my double letterss, my kb chatters a lot xd
2016-06-26 17:29 estellia-: the thing is that if your map hass lopsided aesthetics its very bad to play most ofo the time
2016-06-26 17:29 estellia-: also i can see that you have a lot ofo pointless triplets
2016-06-26 17:29 estellia-: whereas 01:05:496 (4) - could've totally been a triplet
2016-06-26 17:29 estellia-: 01:07:790 (1,2,3) - there is absoluitely nothing on 2 that justifies for this too be a triplet
2016-06-26 17:30 estellia-: 01:09:908 (4,5,6) - here as well, theres absolutely nothing on 5
2016-06-26 17:30 estellia-: 01:14:849 (1,2,3) - similarly
2016-06-26 17:30 estellia-: thats it tbh
2016-06-26 17:34 Ireiisu: ok then
2016-06-26 17:41 estellia-: now to your extra
2016-06-26 17:41 estellia-: 1sst obvious thing
2016-06-26 17:41 estellia-: your comboo coolours arent copied
2016-06-26 17:41 estellia-: similar issue with insane: everything is very very haphaxard
2016-06-26 17:42 estellia-: also here 00:39:732 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2) - you should add a spinner for more consistency with other diffs
2016-06-26 17:42 estellia-: and yea also with the pointless triplets
2016-06-26 17:42 estellia-: 00:52:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - these streams too
2016-06-26 17:43 estellia-: 01:04:261 (4) - this doesn't really work here imo, the sound oof the reverse sslider is rather jarring to me, esp when there is only one long hold note
2016-06-26 17:43 estellia-: 01:13:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - pointless stream
2016-06-26 17:43 estellia-: very subpar extra imo
2016-06-26 17:43 estellia-: your whole mapset is basically a mish mash of notes for the sake of it
2016-06-26 17:43 estellia-: at this rate your easy diff is probably the most interesting diff ouot of all ofo them LOOL
2016-06-26 17:54 estellia-: thats it
2016-06-26 17:54 estellia-: is there anything else you need?
2016-06-26 17:54 Ireiisu: err
2016-06-26 17:54 Ireiisu: i guess thats it..?
2016-06-26 17:55 estellia-: ok then
2016-06-26 17:55 estellia-: i'll post