m4m return mod from my queue~
General
-get some custom combo colors. suggestions: pink, purple, blue, peach (this set matches up with the background picture, if theres something else you like better then thats cool too).
Star
00:04:348 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:12:919 (4) - curve is very slight, define it more
00:12:919 (4,5) - match DS with 00:09:277 (4,5)?
00:14:205 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:14:634 (2,4) - move 4 to the left to increase spacing between the tail of 4 and tail of 2. you could make the flow from 2,3,4 straight as well
00:18:062 (6,1) - fix blanket, use the tail of 6 as your reference point
00:19:777 (1,1) - increase DS to match DS of 00:20:634 (1,2,3)
00:27:705 (1,1) - i dunno about you, but this timing gap seems pretty short.
00:36:949 (2,3,5) - make perfect triangle
00:41:087 (1,2) - not a fan of this overlap
00:51:415 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:58:952 (9,1) - i think you can make the flow angle down more for more emphasis on the slider
01:03:238 (5,1) - fix stack
01:03:829 (1,3) - fix blanket
01:06:489 (1,2,1,2) - its ok as it is now, but i think just using circles might be a more accurate way to represent those notes. you could increase the jump DS as well.
01:11:514 (7,1) - decrease curve of 1 to blanket 7
01:10:923 (5) - could make jump, there are drums, piano, and lyrics here
01:13:287 (5) - ^
01:17:277 (7,8,9,1) - make parallelogram, or square
01:20:528 (2) - no sound here, make a break here
01:21:120 (5,1) - fix stack
01:22:745 (6,7,3) - stack 3,7, then fix blanket ill leave it up to you to get the rest of blankets lol
01:26:144 (4) - put this right in the middle of the hexagon pattern that comes after it
01:29:395 (7,8) - flow looks weird imo, but im not sure how to explain it XD
01:32:203 (1) - i like how you use these sliders throughout the map, good work
01:36:341 (1) - i think you can increase the jump DS here, its the start of the new phrase and has just as much musical intensity as 01:36:489 (2), if not more
01:38:115 (1) - jump for lyrics
01:40:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix star
01:41:218 (6,7,8) - looks kinda messy in relation to the star section, fix spacing?
01:42:253 (3) - definitely want jump
01:45:947 (1,2,1) - personally i would want jumps here, more fitting especially because its leading into the kiai section
01:47:573 (1,2,3,4,5) - star?
01:53:927 (2,1) - stack?
02:03:090 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - if theres a way to fix this pyramid thing without any major problems, please do so
02:07:080 (1,1,1) - you can make these jumps bigger
02:28:952 (1,2,3,4,5) - fix star?
02:35:898 (6,1) - jump for more emphasis
03:07:376 (1,4) - stack
03:09:740 (4,2) - ^?
03:12:105 (5) - jump?
03:36:637 (5) - i think you should split this up, the lyrics in the middle sound pretty important to me (or just ctrl+g this rhythm) 03:36:637 (5,6)
03:49:198 (5) - add clap
03:49:346 (6) - ^
03:50:528 - ^
03:51:711 - ^
03:52:302 - ^
03:52:597 - ^
03:52:893 - ^
03:53:189 - ^
03:53:484 - ^
04:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - clean up hexagon pattern
04:14:765 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - flow looks ok i think, but this kinda looks like stuff randomly strewn about the map tbh
04:20:085 (2,3) - stack?
04:40:627 (5,1) - increase jump
04:44:765 (1,2,1) - spacing awkwardly close imo
04:46:686 (1,2,3) - make blankets the same distance away from 1
04:46:686 (1) - 04:47:868 (3) - stack
05:06:785 (7) - jump
needs some work, but fun map nonetheless. good luck!