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Kibbleru
ill take a look timing wise
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Kibbleru

byfar wrote:

pppp p p lp lpl l lplpll p pllaceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeHOLDER

hi kibb, m4m on this map :D p/4028059/

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  1. 00:27:489 (1) - yo shouldnt this be a long slider lol. the gap is really odd >> how?
  2. 00:33:019 - spinner? same reason as above ^ >> don't want a spinner there
  3. 01:26:598 (2) - white tick skip feels weird, esp since vocals fall on it (theres still guitar sound there as well, if you were trying to follow intrumentals?) >>not really, follows the guitar thing
  4. 01:29:367 (2) - ctrl+ g for jump feels better >>too big for that section imo
  5. 01:42:406 (2) - space out 01:42:290 (2) - ? >> don't see much of a reason why
  6. 02:00:175 (3,4) - stack? gives a better feeling imo, since the vocals have the same pitch and intensity there. >>imo that doesn't flow as well so i don't want to stack them
  7. 02:16:560 (5,6,1) - i dont think this kind of linear flow is good in high diff maps >> not sure how to fix this, also going to a stream on a sharp angle doesn't sound that great either :(
  8. 02:14:944 (3,4) - stack? same as 02:00:175 (3,4) http://puu.sh/iiXFc/191ff7ca27.jpg
  9. 02:15:752 (3) - x:254 y:66? better flow imo http://puu.sh/iiXDM/34f4c11e2a.jpg >> how lmao

  10. 04:14:942 (3,4) - same as before, i'd stack. http://puu.sh/iiYb6/74562dbfc2.jpg
  11. 03:00:866 (3,4,5) - i feel like the rhythm should be swapped around, with the 1/2 slider first and then 1/2 notes after stacked. the guitar here is held 03:00:866 (3,4) - and you used 2 circles , 03:01:097 (5) - there are 2 beats, yet you used a 1/2 slider. the beats that you used the 1/2 slider with aren't emphasized very well and gives me an odd feeling when played >> circle for drums?
    also it would be consistent with 03:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5) -

good luck!

i liked the symmetry parts. but your other overlaps kind of made it harder for me to play the map :(
ty for mod
Epic_old_1
GOD I LOVE THIS SONG


Rosenkreuz
  1. 00:33:183 (1) - i feel like empty here. why don't you put a slider at 00:33:183 - 00:35:155
  2. 00:56:137 (2) - bending opposite side plays better imo
  3. 00:56:714 (1) - it is placed at quite right side. because of 00:56:137 (2,3), the flow is heading to left side. so it's quite hard to hit 00:56:714 (1). (i played it several time at 0.5 speed and this is my conclusion.) I suggest to move 00:56:714 (1) - 206||339. Then 00:56:829 (2) and 00:56:944 (3) should be replaced by changed flow. 00:56:829 (2) - 361||140 00:56:944 (3) - 222||72 or somehow :p
  4. 01:01:098 (3) - nazi, 219||318 for slightly better playing
  5. 01:02:598 (4,6) - pattern suggestion.. (too sudden flow breaking)
  6. 01:09:637 (1) - nazi, 70||112 for slightly better playing
  7. 01:25:214 (4) - 372||335 ^
  8. 01:24:637 (2,3,1) - it seems better to increase distance between 01:24:694 (3) and 01:24:867 (1) to emphasize drum sounds of 01:24:867 (1,2,3,4). you can place at 254||80 or...somewhere you like
  9. 01:53:021 (1) - doesn't reverse slider seems better than this awkward time gap of 01:53:021 (1,2)
  10. 01:59:829 (2,3,4) - this distances doesn't play well.. try this
  11. 02:08:252 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl g at 02:08:367 (2,3) can be more interesting to play (if then maybe you should replace those circles..these distances are hell lol)
  12. 02:20:021 (3) - 436||198 for slightly better playing
  13. 02:20:137 (4) - 242||228
  14. 02:57:406 (4,5) - this 1/1 gap is too awkard because there's clear quitar sound at 02:57:521. try this
  15. 03:07:789 (1,2,3) - decreasing distance of here isn't good. why don't you place 03:08:136 (2) - 201||111
  16. 03:19:789 - put a 1/2 slider here fits very well with the quitar sound. (don't need to follow the placements)
  17. 04:23:596 (2) - 274||291 for slightly better playing
  18. 04:24:289 (7) - 250||364 ^
  19. 04:51:865 (3) - pattern suggestion
  20. 04:54:635 (5) - 411||183 for slightly better playing
  21. 04:55:096 (2) - hmm i think 22||231 plays much better here. i feel like something..dropping note(?) is necsessary.
  22. 05:20:135 (3) - doesn't it plays well to place 05:20:135 (3) upper than 05:20:019 (2)? like 215||33
  23. 05:41:827 (4) - 294||4 for slightly better playing
  24. 05:47:047 (4) - i feel like, i should click something at 05:47:278. how about this??


yay i passed it



(will mod tomorrow)


I hope these helped you ><
Topic Starter
Kibbleru

Epic wrote:

GOD I LOVE THIS SONG


Rosenkreuz
  1. 00:33:183 (1) - i feel like empty here. why don't you put a slider at 00:33:183 - 00:35:155 lol >< I don't really like long sliders
  2. 00:56:137 (2) - bending opposite side plays better imo
  3. 00:56:714 (1) - it is placed at quite right side. because of 00:56:137 (2,3), the flow is heading to left side. so it's quite hard to hit 00:56:714 (1). (i played it several time at 0.5 speed and this is my conclusion.) I suggest to move 00:56:714 (1) - 206||339. Then 00:56:829 (2) and 00:56:944 (3) should be replaced by changed flow. 00:56:829 (2) - 361||140 00:56:944 (3) - 222||72 or somehow :p instead, I curved 3 so the slider kinda 'resets' the flow
  4. 01:01:098 (3) - nazi, 219||318 for slightly better playing im not sure how many of these I fixed, I think I fixed half, the ones I kept is more for stylistic reasons
  5. 01:02:598 (4,6) - pattern suggestion.. (too sudden flow breaking) changed a bit. but I don't think the sliders are that hard to catch imo
  6. 01:09:637 (1) - nazi, 70||112 for slightly better playing
  7. 01:25:214 (4) - 372||335 ^
  8. 01:24:637 (2,3,1) - it seems better to increase distance between 01:24:694 (3) and 01:24:867 (1) to emphasize drum sounds of 01:24:867 (1,2,3,4). you can place at 254||80 or...somewhere you like I tried.
  9. 01:53:021 (1) - doesn't reverse slider seems better than this awkward time gap of 01:53:021 (1,2) imo I need the circle jump for build up :(
  10. 01:59:829 (2,3,4) - this distances doesn't play well.. try this
  11. 02:08:252 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl g at 02:08:367 (2,3) can be more interesting to play (if then maybe you should replace those circles..these distances are hell lol) nice suggestion, was wondering what to do about that :)
  12. 02:20:021 (3) - 436||198 for slightly better playing
  13. 02:20:137 (4) - 242||228
  14. 02:57:406 (4,5) - this 1/1 gap is too awkard because there's clear quitar sound at 02:57:521. try this I feel like its good buildup to guitar rift ><
  15. 03:07:789 (1,2,3) - decreasing distance of here isn't good. why don't you place 03:08:136 (2) - 201||111 nice
  16. 03:19:789 - put a 1/2 slider here fits very well with the quitar sound. (don't need to follow the placements) imo it fits since music pauses a bit.
  17. 04:23:596 (2) - 274||291 for slightly better playing
  18. 04:24:289 (7) - 250||364 ^
  19. 04:51:865 (3) - pattern suggestion
    imo the slider to slider is easier to catch, atm your pattern breaks the flow a bit from the jump to the slider
  20. 04:54:635 (5) - 411||183 for slightly better playing
  21. 04:55:096 (2) - hmm i think 22||231 plays much better here. i feel like something..dropping note(?) is necsessary. mm I prefer to keep mine if possible :( I don't think what I have atm is that bad
  22. 05:20:135 (3) - doesn't it plays well to place 05:20:135 (3) upper than 05:20:019 (2)? like 215||33
  23. 05:41:827 (4) - 294||4 for slightly better playing
  24. 05:47:047 (4) - i feel like, i should click something at 05:47:278. how about this??

no comment = fix

yay i passed it
pro :)



(will mod tomorrow)


I hope these helped you ><
yeah very helpful! ty
Cherry Blossom
I got some issues with my tablet, i need to find a new one...
http://puu.sh/inFKt/cd35df3b57.osr
pkk
o k wait i am mapping an ez version for dis in 2 weeks ezpz before u come back

pls add to your set kibbles ty
pkk
double post GOOOO KIBB KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

play my diff guys thanks
Gaia
dude nice tbh
Squigly
time to mod? ;w;
PoNo
So good mapperino
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
quickscoped
Feb
02:49:098 (2) - just saw randomly that this isn't stacked

no kds.
pkk
Rosenkreuz

Rosenk

Rasenk

Rank

Rank this map pls! ヽ(。ゝω・。)ノヽ(。ゝω・。)ノヽ(。ゝω・。)ノ
Sunkiss
never forget...
Konraduser
WELL,

Just discovered that gem *_* .
Kibbleru - you're nominator, can;t you nominate it? :D
that map's so well done; especially pk's diff

Guest diff's are welcome? :D

it's such a waste to keep it in graveyard ; (
pkk
lets gooooo
yf_bmp
i really want to see this map ranked but it is graveyard for a long time ;w;.. so I have made one recently.. some parts of timing are from yours becoz i can't do well on timing.. (rechecked by myself.)
Rumia-
wake up
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
blame kite.

tweaked some patterns but he convinced me not to remap.
pkk
holy fucking shit it's happening

and I told you not to remap anyways ur diff is sexy
Rumia-

pkk wrote:

holy fucking shit it's happening

and I told you not to remap anyways ur diff is sexy
TRU
PlasticMemor
its back bois better than ever
Topic Starter
Kibbleru
go for loved?
Winnie
This Nigga Desperate for that loved section :)
Loctav
Loved as per mapper's request.
Des9
^-^
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