Feint - Fall Away (Cut Ver.) · forum

Hoa

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-07-31T14:43:33+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, October 17, 2020 at 22:26:02

Artist: Feint
Title: Fall Away (Cut Ver.)
Tags: dnb drum and bass cut short ver yamicchi lmt electronic instrumental
BPM: 174
Filesize: 4023kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

Falling (5.35 stars, 459 notes)
Hard (3.56 stars, 326 notes)
LMT's Insane (4.03 stars, 383 notes)
Normal (2.19 stars, 183 notes)
Yamicchi's Insane (4.86 stars, 353 notes)

Download: Feint - Fall Away (Cut Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Pls enjoy
LMT - Insane
Yamicchi - Insane and Hitsound

Thanks to all the modders and hypers.

Last edited by Hoa 2020-10-17T15:26:25+00:00, edited 151 times in total.

Sakurauchi Riko

1,579 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2016-08-01T14:17:24+00:00

"Little" IRC Mod which was basically an M4M :>

IRC Mod

14:30 LeKhanhHoa: Ola!
14:30 Phyloukz: Hi!
14:30 LeKhanhHoa: About your map
14:31 Phyloukz: oh, i just saw your message
14:31 Phyloukz: yea :D
14:32 LeKhanhHoa: Before everything else, I just think that maybe you can replace the spinner inside the kial with slider?
14:33 Phyloukz: i thought about that but the slider'd be almost a whole measure long
14:33 LeKhanhHoa: Okay, your opinion.
14:33 LeKhanhHoa: 01:07:721 (1) -
14:34 LeKhanhHoa: Can you make this look more balance or sth?
14:34 Phyloukz: what do you mean by more balance?
14:35 LeKhanhHoa: How do I explain this?
14:35 LeKhanhHoa: One side is larger than the other?
14:36 Phyloukz: ah i get what u mean, but i dont think thats actually possible cause i blanket'd circle 5 and 6 with the slider
14:36 Phyloukz: and the slider is too long to make it balance
14:36 LeKhanhHoa: Maybe you're right
14:37 LeKhanhHoa: 00:37:175 (1,2,3,4) -
14:37 LeKhanhHoa: This section touches the HP bar. Maybe move it down a little?
14:38 Phyloukz: hmm.. i guess so
14:38 Phyloukz: i see if i can make it a bit down
14:38 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
14:40 LeKhanhHoa: That's pretty much I can find on Spirit Tree.
14:41 LeKhanhHoa: The Easy diff is very good.
14:41 LeKhanhHoa: 00:56:812 (1) -
14:41 LeKhanhHoa: But this looks kinda weird and unfitting
14:41 Phyloukz: thats true, in general i dont think overlaps fit pretty well in that map
14:42 Phyloukz: ill change that
14:43 LeKhanhHoa: So you are gonna change all of overlap?
14:43 Phyloukz: i guess yea
14:44 Phyloukz: they all dont fit really well
14:44 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
14:44 LeKhanhHoa: About the hitsound, what you're doing is perfect. Why you need me?
14:45 Phyloukz: i thought its kinda uncreative since im just using finish and whistles
14:45 LeKhanhHoa: That's pretty much all of the hitsound
14:47 LeKhanhHoa: Oh, if you try mixing between the whistles of Soft and Drum, it may sound better.
14:47 LeKhanhHoa: I just try it
14:48 Phyloukz: hm
14:51 LeKhanhHoa: What do you think?
14:52 Phyloukz: its sounds kinda confusing to me >.<
14:53 LeKhanhHoa: I kinda like though. Sound more diverse
14:53 LeKhanhHoa: 00:18:630 (3,4) -
14:54 LeKhanhHoa: If 3 was Soft and 4 was Drum, it sounds kinda cool
14:54 Phyloukz: 00:22:994 (4) - so put this to a drum whistle?
14:54 Phyloukz: okay
14:54 Phyloukz: 00:28:448 (1) - drum again?
14:54 Phyloukz: and keep that consistency?
14:55 LeKhanhHoa: Wait, what diff again :D
14:55 Phyloukz: spirit tree 
14:55 Phyloukz: D:
14:56 LeKhanhHoa: I was on the wrong diff :D
14:56 Phyloukz: basically every 2 downbeats the change from soft to drum and reverse?
14:56 Phyloukz: oh wait
14:56 Phyloukz: that makes no sense
14:56 Phyloukz: forget that lmao
14:56 LeKhanhHoa: I was on Easy lol
14:56 Phyloukz: hmm i have problems to create consistency for that hitsounding
14:57 LeKhanhHoa: Actually
14:57 LeKhanhHoa: On Easy, you should go like this
14:57 LeKhanhHoa: 00:19:175 (4) - Drum
14:58 LeKhanhHoa: Repeated until 00:28:448 (4) -
14:58 LeKhanhHoa: 00:36:630 (3) - Drum again
14:58 Phyloukz: so drum at 00:23:539 (3,3) - 
14:59 LeKhanhHoa: Uhm
14:59 LeKhanhHoa: Maybe you should do it and update it, so I can chek
14:59 LeKhanhHoa: check*
14:59 Phyloukz: okay, sec
15:00 Phyloukz: updated
15:01 LeKhanhHoa: Nicely done
15:02 LeKhanhHoa: You can always try any other combinations if you like. That's all
15:03 Phyloukz: okay, i think im gonna change that for spirit tree then too
15:03 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
15:03 LeKhanhHoa: Good luck on rank!
15:03 Phyloukz: Thanks :D
15:04 LeKhanhHoa: Also, when you're free, maybe you can check out my map, too
15:04 Phyloukz: sure just np it :>
15:04 *LeKhanhHoa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1043289 Feint - Fall Away [Insane]]
15:06 Phyloukz: do you want IRC too or should i make forum post?
15:06 LeKhanhHoa: I kinda prefer IRC
15:07 Phyloukz: alright, have any time left i kinda want to do it now :D
15:07 LeKhanhHoa: I have like 2 hrs, if you need
15:07 Phyloukz: thats more than enough :D
15:07 LeKhanhHoa: :D
15:10 Phyloukz:  00:04:520 (1,2,3,5,1) - sounds like that deserve a better emphasis imo, so maybe increase the spacing for these notes especially for 00:04:519 (1,2) - an increase of spacing would fit nicely
15:11 Phyloukz: uhm are you sure about the timing in general?
15:11 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
15:11 Phyloukz: it looks kinda strange at first look
15:11 LeKhanhHoa: I know, but it feels fine to me
15:12 Phyloukz: but 01:09:002 - should be 100% a downbeat im pretty sure
15:12 Phyloukz: same for 01:31:071 - 
15:12 Phyloukz: e.g.
15:13 LeKhanhHoa: At first, it was like this
15:13 LeKhanhHoa: 00:02:795 -
15:14 LeKhanhHoa: This is where the offset originally begin
15:14 Phyloukz: that looks better
15:14 LeKhanhHoa: But I push it down 2 beats
15:14 Phyloukz: push it down 4 beats
15:14 Phyloukz: to keep the downbeats on point
15:15 LeKhanhHoa: I don't know how tbh
15:15 Phyloukz: make the offset at 1.415
15:16 LeKhanhHoa: That was simple
15:16 Phyloukz: :D
15:17 Phyloukz: i see you use simple curved sliders really often, maybe you should try to add some variety in point of slider design
15:18 Phyloukz: 00:08:313 (1) - long sliders are easy to make different from the others, to make it more "exciting"
15:19 LeKhanhHoa: Ohh
15:19 LeKhanhHoa: I don't understand what you mean
15:19 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/qlXa7/bbd5856eb1.jpg sliders like that fit pretty well in almost every situation and they look kinda neat
15:20 Phyloukz: 00:13:830 (1,2,3) - e.g. this, making only simple curved sliders isnt much of variety and excitement
15:21 LeKhanhHoa: Yeah, I kinda notice that too
15:21 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/qlXiB/6619a19798.jpg
15:21 Phyloukz: also a nice slider imo
15:22 LeKhanhHoa: You really need to teach me how to draw this slider thingy
15:23 Phyloukz: basically try to add red anchors with a white beforew and after it, and just try to move them how you feel like
15:24 LeKhanhHoa: I 'll try sth
15:24 Phyloukz: then this http://puu.sh/qlXrj/51510c73f4.jpg for example
15:25 Phyloukz: and you can you the first curve (before the red anchor) as a blanket for another object that comes after
15:25 Phyloukz: so you get structure and pretty need patterns :D
15:25 LeKhanhHoa: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
15:29 LeKhanhHoa: I kinda understand how.
15:29 Phyloukz: 00:16:589 (1,2,3) - for that section i would make 1/2 circles instead of the slider, since at slider 1 and 3 there's a sound which gets emphasized by the slider. doing a slider in between would destroy the emphasis imo
15:30 LeKhanhHoa: Ohhhh
15:30 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
15:30 Phyloukz: like you did with 00:19:348 (1,2,3) - 00:22:106 (1,2,3) - and so on... 
15:31 LeKhanhHoa: 00:13:830 (1) -
15:31 LeKhanhHoa: Should this be changed too?
15:31 Phyloukz: into what?
15:32 LeKhanhHoa: 1/2 circles
15:32 Phyloukz: i think a slider fits here well
15:32 Phyloukz: since its also a downbeat
15:32 Phyloukz: and a slider on a downbeat is in most of the cases not a mistake
15:33 LeKhanhHoa: I think I will change 00:16:589 (1) - and 00:22:106 (1) -
15:34 Phyloukz: slider are fine at thesew spots imo
15:34 Phyloukz: they fit really well
15:35 LeKhanhHoa: So, all sliders?
15:35 Phyloukz: all 1/1 sliders in that section are fine
15:36 Phyloukz: except of that one i already mentioned
15:36 LeKhanhHoa: Okay.
15:37 LeKhanhHoa: Maybe I should make that sliders too so it's the same like all other parts?
15:37 Phyloukz: well its not the same sound in the music
15:37 Phyloukz: 00:16:589 (1,2,3) - is different from the others
15:38 Phyloukz: thats why i suggested to make instead of slider (2) 1/2 circles
15:38 LeKhanhHoa: Oh, you want to change only the slider 2?
15:38 Phyloukz: yea :D
15:38 LeKhanhHoa: I thought you want the entire section
15:39 Phyloukz: since on slider (1) and (3) theres >the< sound which gets emphasized by the sliders
15:39 Phyloukz: but not on (2)
15:40 LeKhanhHoa: Ok, it kinda gets confusing. Note me what sliders need to change
15:40 Phyloukz: every slider's fine on the timeline except of that slider (2) :D
15:41 Phyloukz: for 00:13:830 - to 00:24:864 - 
15:42 Phyloukz: 00:26:072 (6,1) - 00:27:451 (6,1) - 00:28:830 (6,1) - and so on... these objects should be stacked to fit better to the music
15:42 LeKhanhHoa: Uhhh okay
15:42 Phyloukz: also consider repositioning the jumps before those, since they look pretty random to me (try using DS)
15:43 LeKhanhHoa: But I want it too be random :P
15:45 Phyloukz: hmm.. give this a try maybe: 00:24:865 (1,2,3) - make DS 1.3x and 00:25:554 (3,4,5,6) - DS 2.0x
15:46 Phyloukz: i think that fits very very well to the music since at note (3) it gets a bit more intense so the higher spacing would make sense
15:46 Phyloukz: just a suggestion :>
15:46 LeKhanhHoa: Okay, but I like other numbers.
15:46 LeKhanhHoa: :P
15:47 Phyloukz: you mean DS?
15:47 LeKhanhHoa: Yas
15:47 Phyloukz: yeah its just about the spacing increase
15:47 Phyloukz: how much is your thing :D
15:47 LeKhanhHoa: IDK :D
15:48 LeKhanhHoa: Also, the other parts you mention
15:49 LeKhanhHoa: I think slider 2 can be a repeated slider, so it will still keep the beat
15:49 Phyloukz: oh you mean for 00:16:589 (1,2,3) - that part?
15:50 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
15:50 Phyloukz: yeah that fits also pretty good
15:50 LeKhanhHoa: Okay. What else?
15:51 Phyloukz: 00:38:485 (5,1) - 00:41:244 (5,1) - for example they dont flow pretty well, consider adjusting the slider curve so your cursor gets "into the slider" the most pleasant way
15:52 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/qlYRJ/763a453c7e.jpg
15:52 Phyloukz: just rotate a little bit and it flows better
15:52 Phyloukz: same for 00:42:623 (5,1) - 
15:53 Phyloukz: http://puu.sh/qlYWo/b15fc879af.jpg
15:53 Phyloukz: i hope you get what i mean :v
15:53 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
15:54 LeKhanhHoa: I'm really bad at this since I don't have a tablet
15:55 Phyloukz: circular and curved flows are always the most pleasant ones
15:56 Phyloukz: circle -> slider should in most of the cases be a very pleasant flow
15:57 Phyloukz: same for slider -> circle actually
15:57 LeKhanhHoa: Okay.
15:57 Phyloukz: 01:08:830 (2,1) - 
15:57 Phyloukz: i thinkj you see my problem here now! :D
15:57 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
15:59 Phyloukz: 01:32:451 (1) - this reverse slider looks kinda apart from everything
16:00 LeKhanhHoa: What do you mean?
16:00 Phyloukz: make the section before 01:32:106 (1) - less spaced and the section after 01:32:106 (1) - more spaced (add 1/2 circles instead of the reverse slider) since the music gets more intense
16:00 Phyloukz: well at that point the music is really intense and a reverse 1/2 slider doesnt fit at all imo
16:01 LeKhanhHoa: Maybe you're right
16:01 Phyloukz: 1/2 spaced circle spamming is better ithink
16:02 Phyloukz: 01:32:968 (2,3,4,5) - that part is really neat in object placing
16:02 Phyloukz: fits very nice :D
16:02 LeKhanhHoa: I knew, I'm proud of myself too :D
16:03 Phyloukz: hmm 01:37:968 (1) - heres the same thing as above
16:03 Phyloukz: at 01:37:623 (1) - it gets more intense, same part in the music as before
16:04 LeKhanhHoa: Okay
16:04 Phyloukz: well there are more of em, you get what i mean i think :D
16:04 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
16:04 LeKhanhHoa: So wait
16:04 LeKhanhHoa: 01:31:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS increase
16:05 LeKhanhHoa: 01:33:830 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS decrease
16:05 LeKhanhHoa: The same for the rest
16:05 Phyloukz: hold on which offset do you have? did you already fix it?
16:06 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
16:06 LeKhanhHoa: Just not update yet
16:06 Phyloukz: its 1.415 right?
16:06 Phyloukz: so i definetly know which parts you meean :D
16:06 LeKhanhHoa: Yes
16:07 Phyloukz: 01:31:072 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS lower
16:07 Phyloukz: 01:32:106 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - DS higher
16:07 Phyloukz: 01:33:830 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS lower
16:07 Phyloukz: 01:34:865 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - DS a bit higher not as much as above
16:08 Phyloukz: now its repeating:
16:08 Phyloukz: 01:36:589 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS lower
16:08 Phyloukz: 01:37:623 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - DS higher
16:08 Phyloukz: and so on
16:08 LeKhanhHoa: Can I switch places? Like 01:33:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - DS higher and 01:34:863 (1,2,1) - DS lower
16:10 Phyloukz: those two parts are pretty much the same you can make equal DS there. But not for 01:36:589 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 
16:10 Phyloukz: there has to be a DS change imo
16:10 Phyloukz: like
16:10 LeKhanhHoa: Wait me a minute.
16:10 LeKhanhHoa: The offset somehow mess up all the slider and timing point.
16:11 Phyloukz: 01:33:830 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:36:589 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) -  are alternately
16:11 Phyloukz: yep you have to adjust it :/
16:11 Phyloukz: espeically the green timing points for sure
16:11 LeKhanhHoa: This is gonna take a while ^^
16:12 Phyloukz: well I hope i could help you
16:12 Phyloukz: thats everything i have at my first look
16:12 LeKhanhHoa: Yes, thanks very much.
16:12 LeKhanhHoa: Post it on the forum if you want kds
16:13 Phyloukz: gonna do that :>

LMT

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LMT 2016-08-22T12:41:29+00:00

up set to thế này sao không nói aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Hoa

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Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-08-22T12:43:12+00:00

Set này đâu có to!!!

Yamicchi

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Yamicchi 2016-08-22T13:22:19+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
up set to thế này sao không nói aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

ổng có nói tui nè =))

LMT

535 posts

Joined October 2015

LMT 2016-08-23T04:17:01+00:00

[eXtra]

00:24:862 (1,1) - bở vì người chơi đang quen với khoảng cách giữa các nhịp là 1/2 , ở đây đổi 3/4 ngay lập tức gây bất ngờ (và thật ra là đang theo 1 âm thanh khác), nên thử xóa 00:25:379 (2,2) - 2 nốt này sau đó 2 cái slider kia cho thành reverse slider, như thế này https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913805 .
Cái này chỉ là gợi ý thôi: bởi vì ở đây có cái âm thanh này cứ lặp đi lặp lại nên có thể "biến hóa" lên 1 chút. Khi nhạc ồn lên: như ở đây 00:33:138 - chẳng hạn, thì có thể overmap double, cũng để báo hiệu sau này có mấy pattern double khó hơn. Như thế này là 1 dạng: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913852 . 00:38:655 - ở đây mạnh hơn, thì có thể overmap kiểu 2 cái double liên tục https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913855 , tăng độ khó phù hợp với nhạc.
01:07:965 (9,10) - đúng ra phải dừng stream ở tick trắng chứ :d , mà sao không map full stream luôn? Nghe thì có vẻ bé hơn đấy nhưng âm thanh lên cao hơn, có thể map full stream đc.
01:00:724 (1) - spacing ở đây cẩn thận, người ta có thể đọc nhầm là 1/2 hoặc là 3/2, tốt nhất là stack lên 01:00:034 (1) - đây.
01:19:689 (1,2,1) - 3 âm này rất khỏe, có lẽ jump nên to hơn chút :v .
01:10:207 (7,1) - những cái chỗ sang downbeat (tick trắng to) này có thể làm nổi bật hơn, hoặc tăng spacing , hoặc giảm đột ngột (so với spacing khác).
01:22:448 (6,7,1) - như thế này cũng khá tốt, nhưng có lẽ là cần 1 chút nổi bật hơn, thử thế này xem? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913913 .
01:32:620 (2,1) - sao chỗ này lại jump có 1 nửa spacing? nếu muốn giúp người chơi đọc được cái pattern double khó thì giảm spacing ở 01:32:793 (1,2,3) - đây chứ không phải là ở kia. Sợ đột ngột quá thì giảm cũng ko nên quá nhiều.
[Yamicchi's Insane]
01:18:655 (1) - cái này vui đó , mà có thể gập slider lại bắt người chơi phải di chuyển theo slider thì có lẽ thú vị hơn :V https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913945 ý là như vầy.
01:21:759 (2,3,4) - pattern này khá khó read (kèm với cái 1/2 stack tí giải thích), có khi spacing cũng vừa phải thôi, còn nếu muốn giữ spacing thì: 01:22:276 (5,6) - chỗ này pattern mới so với phần trước nên có thể space ra bình thường cho cái này ko sợ read nhầm double, chỗ sau đó thì stack thoải mái.
01:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - stream spacing hơi to đối với insane :v , cộng thêm cái 01:06:845 (8,1) - góc nhọn này nhiều đứa thọt ở đây lắm, ko biết nó nên nerf ko :V .
[Hard]
00:48:138 (4,1) - ở đây có tăng ds để emphasise downbeat thế sao ở đây 00:51:069 (1) - thì lại không?
01:00:724 (1) - có thể stack 1 lên 01:00:379 (3) - đây để trách đọc nhầm 1/2 tại vì trình lên cao tí thì sẽ có thời gian bấm kịp nốt đó, tưởng jump.
01:03:655 (1) - nhấn slider tick đỏ ở đoạn này ko hiểu tại sao lắm, thường thì tick trắng bao giờ cũng mạnh hơn, đặc biệt là ở đây các âm thanh nghe khá giống nhau ở tick đỏ và trắng nên nhấn tick đỏ hơn tick trắng sẽ chơi thấy hơi nghịch.
01:08:827 (2,1) - có lẽ nên tăng spacing vì 1 rất mạnh.
Diff ngon :3 :3
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Hơi bận nên lười mod easy + normal, thông củm ;3

Hoa

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Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-08-23T08:17:04+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:

[eXtra]
00:24:862 (1,1) - bở vì người chơi đang quen với khoảng cách giữa các nhịp là 1/2 , ở đây đổi 3/4 ngay lập tức gây bất ngờ (và thật ra là đang theo 1 âm thanh khác), nên thử xóa 00:25:379 (2,2) - 2 nốt này sau đó 2 cái slider kia cho thành reverse slider, như thế này https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913805 . uhm
Cái này chỉ là gợi ý thôi: bởi vì ở đây có cái âm thanh này cứ lặp đi lặp lại nên có thể "biến hóa" lên 1 chút. Khi nhạc ồn lên: như ở đây 00:33:138 - chẳng hạn, thì có thể overmap double, cũng để báo hiệu sau này có mấy pattern double khó hơn. Như thế này là 1 dạng: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913852 . 00:38:655 - ở đây mạnh hơn, thì có thể overmap kiểu 2 cái double liên tục https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913855 , tăng độ khó phù hợp với nhạc. em nghĩ là ko nên, consistent vẫn hơn
01:07:965 (9,10) - đúng ra phải dừng stream ở tick trắng chứ :d , mà sao không map full stream luôn? Nghe thì có vẻ bé hơn đấy nhưng âm thanh lên cao hơn, có thể map full stream đc. em ko map full stream đâu.
01:00:724 (1) - spacing ở đây cẩn thận, người ta có thể đọc nhầm là 1/2 hoặc là 3/2, tốt nhất là stack lên 01:00:034 (1) - đây. uhm
01:19:689 (1,2,1) - 3 âm này rất khỏe, có lẽ jump nên to hơn chút :v . ok
01:10:207 (7,1) - những cái chỗ sang downbeat (tick trắng to) này có thể làm nổi bật hơn, hoặc tăng spacing , hoặc giảm đột ngột (so với spacing khác). đã sửa
01:22:448 (6,7,1) - như thế này cũng khá tốt, nhưng có lẽ là cần 1 chút nổi bật hơn, thử thế này xem? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913913 . add blanket
01:32:620 (2,1) - sao chỗ này lại jump có 1 nửa spacing? nếu muốn giúp người chơi đọc được cái pattern double khó thì giảm spacing ở 01:32:793 (1,2,3) - đây chứ không phải là ở kia. Sợ đột ngột quá thì giảm cũng ko nên quá nhiều. cái này em thấy ổn mà, khối người đọc đc

[Hard]
00:48:138 (4,1) - ở đây có tăng ds để emphasise downbeat thế sao ở đây 00:51:069 (1) - thì lại không? sửa hết lại rồi
01:00:724 (1) - có thể stack 1 lên 01:00:379 (3) - đây để trách đọc nhầm 1/2 tại vì trình lên cao tí thì sẽ có thời gian bấm kịp nốt đó, tưởng jump. uhm
01:03:655 (1) - nhấn slider tick đỏ ở đoạn này ko hiểu tại sao lắm, thường thì tick trắng bao giờ cũng mạnh hơn, đặc biệt là ở đây các âm thanh nghe khá giống nhau ở tick đỏ và trắng nên nhấn tick đỏ hơn tick trắng sẽ chơi thấy hơi nghịch. uhm
01:08:827 (2,1) - có lẽ nên tăng spacing vì 1 rất mạnh. đáng ra chỗ này em stack, nhưng sợ rối nên thôi để
Diff ngon :3 :3
1miss hi hi
Hơi bận nên lười mod easy + normal, thông củm ;3

Cảm ơn anh

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-08-23T11:02:57+00:00

LMT1996 wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
01:18:655 (1) - cái này vui đó , mà có thể gập slider lại bắt người chơi phải di chuyển theo slider thì có lẽ thú vị hơn :V https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5913945 ý là như vầy. Mặc dù Yami rất thích được gọi là Colorful Yamicchi nhưng thôi, kh cần phải sửa như vậy, slider shape hiện tại cũng ổn r )
01:21:759 (2,3,4) - pattern này khá khó read (kèm với cái 1/2 stack tí giải thích), có khi spacing cũng vừa phải thôi, còn nếu muốn giữ spacing thì: 01:22:276 (5,6) - chỗ này pattern mới so với phần trước nên có thể space ra bình thường cho cái này ko sợ read nhầm double, chỗ sau đó thì stack thoải mái. hmm, kh hiểu ý lmt lắm nhưng mà cả nửa kiai sau Yami dùng i chang pattern đó, nên uh..cũng kh hiểu lắm
01:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - stream spacing hơi to đối với insane :v , cộng thêm cái 01:06:845 (8,1) - góc nhọn này nhiều đứa thọt ở đây lắm, ko biết nó nên nerf ko :V à ) dù gì thì đây cũng là Insane chứ kh phải Light Insane đâu LMT ơi ) còn cái góc nhọn đó tại Yami thấy vui nên để vậy thôi :3 nếu bị phàn nàn sẽ sửa

Hiện tại chưa update gì nha LKH :3 Cảm ơn LMT đã mod

baysman

216 posts

Joined October 2015

baysman 2016-08-30T19:12:08+00:00

Hello

Normal
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - what about somthing like that? >

01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - same thing ^
01:14:177 (6) - maybe change to circle
01:25:212 (6) - same ^

Advanced
01:31:936 (3,1,3,1,3,1) - what about reverse 01:31:936 (3) - at this slider to red tick , and that slider 01:32:453 (1) - replace the 2 sircles like that

Hard
01:33:832 (1,2) - put circle between these sliders
01:39:350 (1,2) - ^

Insane
00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - what if delete 2,4 slider and made 1,3 slider reverse and on empty red ticks put circles

Yamicchi's Insane
00:13:143 (5,1) - maybe circle between those sliders at the beginin that slider 00:13:832 (1) -
00:18:660 (5,1) - same thing ^
00:21:419 (5,1) - ^

I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck with your map!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-08-31T13:04:30+00:00

baysman wrote:
Hello

Normal
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - what about somthing like that? > No thanks, I would rather keep my patterm here since there is no point in doing so
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - same thing ^ ^
01:14:177 (6) - maybe change to circle there is a strong beat at sliderend, and I don't want to use 2 1/2 circles in Normal
01:25:212 (6) - same ^ ^

Advanced
01:31:936 (3,1,3,1,3,1) - what about reverse 01:31:936 (3) - at this slider to red tick , and that slider 01:32:453 (1) - replace the 2 sircles like that quite good suggestion, but I think 01:32:453 (1) get to stay

Hard
01:33:832 (1,2) - put circle between these sliders uhm,not bad, I will consider it
01:39:350 (1,2) - ^ ^

Insane
00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - what if delete 2,4 slider and made 1,3 slider reverse and on empty red ticks put circles sure

I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck with your map!Thanks for your mod!

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-08-31T15:33:45+00:00

last diff

00:04:867 (2,1) - try to avoid that overlap
00:08:315 (1) - make this completly straight
00:14:350 (2) - fix blanket
00:18:660 (1) - ^
00:20:384 (3,5,1) - ^ D:
00:22:108 (1) - symmetric
01:31:074 - dat nc. pls. ;w; dont do that - rework nc's here.

pm me ingame for irc pls

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-01T12:40:26+00:00

CookieKivi wrote:
last diff
00:04:867 (2,1) - try to avoid that overlap why?I think it's cool
00:08:315 (1) - make this completly straight ok
00:14:350 (2) - fix blanket tried
00:18:660 (1) - ^ ^
00:20:384 (3,5,1) - ^ D: tried a lot
00:22:108 (1) - symmetric ...
01:31:074 - dat nc. pls. ;w; dont do that - rework nc's here. why? it looks good

pm me ingame for irc pls .

PS: CookieKivi, pls wait until Sunday if you can. I'm kinda busy.

Last edited by Hoa 2016-09-04T14:59:19+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

jawns

109 posts

Joined October 2013

jawns 2016-09-04T00:55:49+00:00

This prolly took a bit too long, but here is the mod from my queue. It's currently 2:am so bear with me if I say some bs.

Into Hopelessness and Despair:

I don't think there's anything wrong with the map per se, however I feel like it could be made a bit more interesting in some ways. However, I feel like it plays very well already, so just ignore anything you think messes too much with what you've got going.

I think you could differentiate a bit between the main melody and stuff like 00:03:487 (3,4,5) - . Maybe you could space out the most important parts of the melody, or maybe have different slider velocities. This is highly subjective though, and not necessary

Around 00:03:315 (2) - and 00:08:832 (2) - there is a very quiet instrument in the background, it could be interesting to try to maps something to that, though this might be hard to do without messing the rest up.

00:48:315 (1,2) - There's a note in the song on the blue tick right between these sliders. You could map something on that to break up the monotony a bit. Same goes for 00:51:074 (1,2) - 00:53:832 (1,2) - etc.

01:09:350 (2) - This is really the only thing I don't like about this map. There is a sound that is very important for the melody on the slider end. I think you could emphasize that a bit better. What you did at 01:20:384 (2,3,4,5) - makes more sense in my opinion. Same goes for 01:12:108 (2,3,4) - etc.

01:10:729 (2,3,4) - More or less same as above, however this time it's the last note of the stack that is important. I don't feel like there is a lot of emphasis on that note either.

01:24:694 (3,4,5) - This works better than the example above, however I think it could be even better if you made 5 into a slider.

01:32:970 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play, however that might just be because I suck, so don't worry too much about it.

01:31:763 (1,2,1,2) - I think this is a pretty unconventional way to do it, however I think it works well. It varies things up a bit. Not a criticism, just thought I would bring up that I liked that in particular

As I said, this is a really solid diff in my opinion, and a lot of my "criticisms" are just suggestions you can take or leave. It's already a great map, and I was struggling to find things to point out.

Yamicchi's Insane

Another very solid diff, don't have too much to say about this either...

00:48:660 (2,3,4) - It makes a lot of sense for the slider on 1 to end on a blue tick, because so does the sound in the background of the song. However on 2,3 and 4, the sound in the background lands on the red tick, so the way you have mapped it goes a bit against that rhythm.

01:00:040 (1,2) - You should map something on the red tick in between as well on the clap sound.

01:33:143 (5,6) - I would probably wouldn't have used sliders here, because the melody changes notes on both the red and white ticks. This would make it different to 01:33:833 (1) - where the note stays the same. Same goes for 01:39:005 (7) - 01:41:764 (5) - and similar. 01:36:246 (5,6) - and 01:38:315 (3,4,5,6) - works very well, you could do more similar to that.

Again, I haven't got much to say, I'm really digging for things to criticize. Very solid diff as well, great stuff.

All in all, both difficulties were very very solid, they could maybe be made a tiny bit more interesting at times, but it's already looking very very good. Honestly, I wouldn't mind if this was ranked as it is now (though I think a lot of unranked maps should be ranked, so don't just listen to me on that one).

I wish you a lot of luck getting this ranked!

Again, sorry for the late post. I'm off to bed now...

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-04T02:13:31+00:00

baysman wrote:
Hello (ò w ó)/

Yamicchi's Insane
00:13:143 (5,1) - maybe circle between those sliders at the beginin that slider 00:13:832 (1) - I can't tell why do I have to
00:18:660 (5,1) - same thing ^
00:21:419 (5,1) - ^

jawns wrote:
Yamicchi's Insane

Another very solid diff, don't have too much to say about this either...

00:48:660 (2,3,4) - It makes a lot of sense for the slider on 1 to end on a blue tick, because so does the sound in the background of the song. However on 2,3 and 4, the sound in the background lands on the red tick, so the way you have mapped it goes a bit against that rhythm. nah I just simply follow the tik tok sound, and I blame LKH for the hitsound :< will probably re hitsound later

01:00:040 (1,2) - You should map something on the red tick in between as well on the clap sound. yes, quick fix, hope it works

01:33:143 (5,6) - I would probably wouldn't have used sliders here, because the melody changes notes on both the red and white ticks. This would make it different to 01:33:833 (1) - where the note stays the same. Same goes for 01:39:005 (7) - 01:41:764 (5) - and similar. 01:36:246 (5,6) - and 01:38:315 (3,4,5,6) - works very well, you could do more similar to that. fixed some, but will remap this part some day cause it sucks, totally sucks it was made when I didn't know anything about DnB mapping orz

Thanks for the mod guys :3

Open this box for Unicorn~

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CaffeAmericano

615 posts

Joined January 2015

CaffeAmericano 2016-09-04T06:18:28+00:00

M4M <3

Into hopelessness and despair

00:03:487 (3,4,5) - 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nicer to distinguish these more. Sound in 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - is much more prominent, and I think the map should reflect that.

00:04:867 (2,1) - This overlap doesn’t look very neat imo. Beside, this would be a good place for small flow break with downbeat and all :3 I like what you’ve done at 00:10:729 (3,1) -

00:05:556 (1,2,3) - Blanket could be better~

00:11:763 (3,4) - 00:16:591 (1,2) - 00:22:625 (2,3) - ^

00:08:315 (1,3) - Overlap doesn’t look very good here either imo.

00:09:350 (4,1,2) - 00:35:212 (2,1) - 01:38:487 (2,3,5) - ^

00:13:832 (1,2,3) - If you are going to do double blanket, I think you should use same circle size for it, i.e. ( http://puu.sh/qZgPJ/6f30134c0f.jpg )

00:26:246 (1,2) - I think it would be more intuitive to do reverse slider like 00:24:867 (1) - at least few more time to ease players into this weird 3/4 rhythm clicking

00:25:556 (2,3,4,5) - 00:26:763 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:28:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:29:522 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think making these jumps smaller would fit the song better. I think music is way more intense 00:36:419 (2,3,4,5,6) - and after. While you used larger DS, I just think it would be better to make the difference more pronounced.

00:39:694 (4,5,1) - There is a straight line of cursor movement here, and i think that feels very different compared to angled movement you used at 00:36:936 (5,6,1) - 00:38:315 (4,5,1) - 00:41:074 (4,5,1) - etc. I don’t think there’s anything special in music at 00:39:694 (4,5,1) -, so I think it shouldn’t play so differently.

00:46:936 (1,4) - stacking error

00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making it more organized like ( http://puu.sh/qZheJ/1f78daa6f2.jpg )

00:53:832 (1,2,3,4) - since you are making this into a group of four, I think it should be made symmetric by rotating 90 degrees, copy pasting, etc. Asymmetry is too noticeable

00:57:970 (1,1,1,1) - Placement of these feels random ;x 00:57:970 (1,1) - are overlapping, while rest of them aren’t. Distance is inconsistent. Angle created y 00:57:970 (1,1) - and 00:58:487 (1,1) - are not the same. I’d like to see an obvious structure <3
01:05:901 (5,6,1) - I think angle is too wide. Something like http://puu.sh/qZhw4/bdacfebb9d.jpg would play better & give better emphasis to 01:06:246 (1) - imo.

01:19:867 (2,2,7) - adjusting 01:20:384 (2) - slightly so the circles are roughly equal distance apart will create neater visual imo

Yamicchi’s Insane

00:12:453 (4,5) - 00:20:729 (4,5) - tiny inconsistency that I noticed which probably doesn’t matter but I’ll still post :^)

00:27:626 (1,2) - looks like a blanket, might as well make it a blanket xD

01:03:488 (1,2) - I heard people dislikes this kind of overlapping where they barely overlap. Consider moving it to (220 162) to make lovely triangle <3

01:17:625 (2,5) - This overlap feels little half assed imo. I think complete stack or less overlapping area would make your intention clearer

01:20:729 (5,1) - 01:23:488 (5,1) - Do you like blankets? Perfect blankets~?

01:22:798 (1,3,4,5,6) - This is very nazi, but I think it could look more organized if 01:22:798 (1,6) - had same distance as 01:22:798 (1,3,4,5) - , i.e. implicit distance snap

01:43:833 (2,7) - This overlap seem to be inconsistent with the overlaps you usually do

Much fun >:D Good luck >xD

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-04T08:22:54+00:00

jawns

jawns wrote:
This prolly took a bit too long, but here is the mod from my queue. It's currently 2:am so bear with me if I say some bs.

Into Hopelessness and Despair:

I don't think there's anything wrong with the map per se, however I feel like it could be made a bit more interesting in some ways. However, I feel like it plays very well already, so just ignore anything you think messes too much with what you've got going.

I think you could differentiate a bit between the main melody and stuff like 00:03:487 (3,4,5) - . Maybe you could space out the most important parts of the melody, or maybe have different slider velocities. This is highly subjective though, and not necessary. fixed

Around 00:03:315 (2) - and 00:08:832 (2) - there is a very quiet instrument in the background, it could be interesting to try to maps something to that, though this might be hard to do without messing the rest up. Sorry, I can't hear it, so ...

00:48:315 (1,2) - There's a note in the song on the blue tick right between these sliders. You could map something on that to break up the monotony a bit. Same goes for 00:51:074 (1,2) - 00:53:832 (1,2) - etc. sure

01:09:350 (2) - This is really the only thing I don't like about this map. There is a sound that is very important for the melody on the slider end. I think you could emphasize that a bit better. What you did at 01:20:384 (2,3,4,5) - makes more sense in my opinion. Same goes for 01:12:108 (2,3,4) - etc. Yeah, maybe I should make it consistent

01:10:729 (2,3,4) - More or less same as above, however this time it's the last note of the stack that is important. I don't feel like there is a lot of emphasis on that note either. Nah, I prefer this pattern. The last note is, in some way, emphasized imo

01:24:694 (3,4,5) - This works better than the example above, however I think it could be even better if you made 5 into a slider. I really like it as of now

01:32:970 (2,3,4,5) - This is a bit awkward to play, however that might just be because I suck, so don't worry too much about it. Changed sth

01:31:763 (1,2,1,2) - I think this is a pretty unconventional way to do it, however I think it works well. It varies things up a bit. Not a criticism, just thought I would bring up that I liked that in particular Glad you like it

As I said, this is a really solid diff in my opinion, and a lot of my "criticisms" are just suggestions you can take or leave. It's already a great map, and I was struggling to find things to point out. Thanks a lot!

CaffeAmericano

CaffeAmericano wrote:
M4M <3

Into hopelessness and despair
00:03:487 (3,4,5) - 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - I think it would be nicer to distinguish these more. Sound in 00:04:522 (1,2,3) - is much more prominent, and I think the map should reflect that. fixed

00:04:867 (2,1) - This overlap doesn’t look very neat imo. Beside, this would be a good place for small flow break with downbeat and all :3 I like what you’ve done at 00:10:729 (3,1) kinda changed it

00:05:556 (1,2,3) - Blanket could be better~ I've already blanket the slider before, so blanket these wouldn't look so beautiful

00:11:763 (3,4) - 00:16:591 (1,2) - 00:22:625 (2,3) - ^ ^

00:08:315 (1,3) - Overlap doesn’t look very good here either imo. fixed

00:09:350 (4,1,2) - 00:35:212 (2,1) - 01:38:487 (2,3,5) - ^ did sth

00:13:832 (1,2,3) - If you are going to do double blanket, I think you should use same circle size for it, i.e. ( http://puu.sh/qZgPJ/6f30134c0f.jpg ) Maybe not double blanket, but fixed

00:26:246 (1,2) - I think it would be more intuitive to do reverse slider like 00:24:867 (1) - at least few more time to ease players into this weird 3/4 rhythm clicking sure

00:25:556 (2,3,4,5) - 00:26:763 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:28:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:29:522 (2,3,4,5,6) - I think making these jumps smaller would fit the song better. I think music is way more intense 00:36:419 (2,3,4,5,6) - and after. While you used larger DS, I just think it would be better to make the difference more pronounced. done

00:39:694 (4,5,1) - There is a straight line of cursor movement here, and i think that feels very different compared to angled movement you used at 00:36:936 (5,6,1) - 00:38:315 (4,5,1) - 00:41:074 (4,5,1) - etc. I don’t think there’s anything special in music at 00:39:694 (4,5,1) -, so I think it shouldn’t play so differently. done

00:46:936 (1,4) - stacking error done

00:48:315 (1,2,3,4) - Consider making it more organized like ( http://puu.sh/qZheJ/1f78daa6f2.jpg ) changed the entire pattern

00:53:832 (1,2,3,4) - since you are making this into a group of four, I think it should be made symmetric by rotating 90 degrees, copy pasting, etc. Asymmetry is too noticeable change the entire pattern

00:57:970 (1,1,1,1) - Placement of these feels random ;x 00:57:970 (1,1) - are overlapping, while rest of them aren’t. Distance is inconsistent. Angle created y 00:57:970 (1,1) - and 00:58:487 (1,1) - are not the same. I’d like to see an obvious structure <3 the stack is intentional, while the rest will be fixed
01:05:901 (5,6,1) - I think angle is too wide. Something like http://puu.sh/qZhw4/bdacfebb9d.jpg would play better & give better emphasis to 01:06:246 (1) - imo. sure
01:19:867 (2,2,7) - adjusting 01:20:384 (2) - slightly so the circles are roughly equal distance apart will create neater visual imo. Ok

Much fun >:D Good luck >xD Thanks a lot!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-09-04T13:15:31+00:00

CaffeAmericano wrote:
Yamicchi’s Insane
00:12:453 (4,5) - 00:20:729 (4,5) - tiny inconsistency that I noticed which probably doesn’t matter but I’ll still post :^) geez nice catch~

00:27:626 (1,2) - looks like a blanket, might as well make it a blanket xD would blanket it with the whole slider body but yea fixed

01:03:488 (1,2) - I heard people dislikes this kind of overlapping where they barely overlap. Consider moving it to (220 162) to make lovely triangle <3 must fix this later because following you will break the spacing consistent, but let's keep it like that first

01:17:625 (2,5) - This overlap feels little half assed imo. I think complete stack or less overlapping area would make your intention clearer agree about the visual part but lemme think a way

01:20:729 (5,1) - 01:23:488 (5,1) - Do you like blankets? Perfect blankets~? <3

01:22:798 (1,3,4,5,6) - This is very nazi, but I think it could look more organized if 01:22:798 (1,6) - had same distance as 01:22:798 (1,3,4,5) - , i.e. implicit distance snap I'm trying to solve the problem because the space is not really wide so...

01:43:833 (2,7) - This overlap seem to be inconsistent with the overlaps you usually do 01:36:936 (2,4) - 01:47:281 (6,3) - I think
Much fun >:D Good luck >xD

Thank you ~~

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144,192,96591,6,0,P|140:248|148:292,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,328,96936,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,280,97109,2,0,P|344:224|336:180,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,97626,2,0,L|148:348,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,244,97971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
336,312,98143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,244,98315,2,0,P|428:196|416:144,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,128,98574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,128,98660,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,144,98833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,16,99005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,56,99177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,156,99350,6,0,B|148:168|148:168|76:152,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,132,99695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,220,99867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,220,100040,2,0,P|80:264|64:312,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,296,100384,2,0,P|157:336|119:369,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,256,100729,6,0,P|292:244|356:268,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101246,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,344,101419,2,0,P|339:353|382:341,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,101764,2,0,L|436:160,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,102109,6,0,L|304:168,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,102453,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,324,102626,2,0,P|176:336|128:320,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,103143,2,0,L|64:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,160,103488,6,0,P|304:148|368:168,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,103833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104005,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104091,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,104350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,228,104522,2,0,L|508:236,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,104867,6,0,L|284:352,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,105212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,260,105384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,168,105557,2,0,P|252:160|296:176,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,105902,2,0,P|430:232|474:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,276,106246,6,0,B|284:320|284:320|292:376,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,106591,2,0,B|188:316|188:316|180:260,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,240,106936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,107109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,172,107281,2,0,P|176:156|116:176,1,90,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,107626,6,0,B|340:196|340:196|404:184,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,84,107971,2,0,B|336:76|336:76|272:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,108315,2,0,P|216:208|252:256,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,272,108660,2,0,L|436:252,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,109005,6,0,L|164:356,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,336,109350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109522,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109609,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,232,109694,2,0,P|100:212|168:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,268,110040,2,0,L|336:248,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,110384,6,0,L|304:96,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,110729,2,0,L|100:112,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,216,111074,2,0,L|208:232,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,232,111419,2,0,L|412:216,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,256,111764,6,0,P|504:208|488:160,2,90,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112281,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,360,112453,2,0,B|400:368|400:368|352:356,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,328,112798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,228,112971,5,8,0:0:0:0:

Asaiga

848 posts

Joined July 2013

Asaiga 2016-09-08T16:17:18+00:00

Thấy dc thì hẳn sửa. Muốn sửa nhưng lười sửa vì cái nào cũng dc thì cũng ko nên. Modder ko phải lúc nào cũng đúng

[Cơ bản]
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
normal-hitnormal.wav

[Bình thường]
00:12:108 (3) - Cố ý hả? ờ cũng dc
00:13:832 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Hơi bị xấu, nhưng ko có lỗi gì. Nhưng mà xấu là cái tội rồi lololol jk
00:27:625 (1,1) - Có làm blanket thì để cho nó đẹp
00:35:901 (1,1) - xd Thôi ko bắt lỗi blanket nữa
01:01:764 (3,1) - Overlap vậy xấu. Tại vì cái circle nó đè lên cái slider head rồi. Stack slider head lên dc đó, nếu rãnh sửa.
01:00:039 (1) - Ko biết có đúng ko nhưng nghĩ là ko phải reverse slider nghe hợp hơn. Biết là có cái tiếng trên red tick rồi

01:22:108 (4,5) - 01:27:625 (4,5) - Chỗ này đúng rồi
01:31:763 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Sao chỗ này để ngược lại. để vậy cũng dc tại ko biết là có unrankable hay ko nhưng thường là nên ctrl+g chỗ này. ừ, cứ bấm vô cái timestamp ctrl+g là dc. Placement sẽ bị lỗi nhưng rhythm sẽ dc sửa. Cái ý chính là để cho cái nốt cuối clickable vì nó mạnh và nó đáng như vậy

[Nâng cao]
00:30:384 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - tốt
00:46:936 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ổn
01:06:246 (1) - Cái này reverse slider chi? Làm nguyên slider art cũng dc đó, đâu có gì thay đổi ở đây đâu.

Có làm vội ko vậy?

[Khó]
01:10:987 (3) - Note này xóa đi. 01:11:074 (3,4) - Làm 2 cái này thành 1 slider là dc rồi. hoặc muốn giữ cái đó thì cũng phải làm 2 cái kia thành 1 slider, rồi stack cái note đó lên. để vậy ko ổn lắm hmmmm. Có áp dụng thì sửa mấy cái tương tự.
Còn cái trình bày xấu thôi, mà lười chỉ ra từng cái.

Thôi thua rồi, sorry. Nhưng khó rank lắm, cơ bản chất lượng khá kém. Rhythm cũng vài chỗ sai, mà song repetitive mà. 1 chỗ sai thì nhiều chỗ sai. Placement hơi bị buồn.
Mod còn lại lên discord nhé

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-09T07:11:21+00:00

Asaiga wrote:
Thấy dc thì hẳn sửa. Muốn sửa nhưng lười sửa vì cái nào cũng dc thì cũng ko nên. Modder ko phải lúc nào cũng đúng

[Cơ bản]
Unused hitsounds:
drum-hitclap.wav
normal-hitnormal.wav xóa

[Bình thường]
00:12:108 (3) - Cố ý hả? ờ cũng dc xấu thật
00:13:832 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - Hơi bị xấu, nhưng ko có lỗi gì. Nhưng mà xấu là cái tội rồi lololol jk cố gắng sửa
00:27:625 (1,1) - Có làm blanket thì để cho nó đẹp ...
00:35:901 (1,1) - xd Thôi ko bắt lỗi blanket nữa ...
01:01:764 (3,1) - Overlap vậy xấu. Tại vì cái circle nó đè lên cái slider head rồi. Stack slider head lên dc đó, nếu rãnh sửa. rảnh mà
01:00:039 (1) - Ko biết có đúng ko nhưng nghĩ là ko phải reverse slider nghe hợp hơn. Biết là có cái tiếng trên red tick rồi em thấy hợp

01:22:108 (4,5) - 01:27:625 (4,5) - Chỗ này đúng rồi
01:31:763 (2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3,2,3) - Sao chỗ này để ngược lại. để vậy cũng dc tại ko biết là có unrankable hay ko nhưng thường là nên ctrl+g chỗ này. ừ, cứ bấm vô cái timestamp ctrl+g là dc. Placement sẽ bị lỗi nhưng rhythm sẽ dc sửa. Cái ý chính là để cho cái nốt cuối clickable vì nó mạnh và nó đáng như vậy uhm

[Nâng cao]
00:30:384 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - tốt
00:46:936 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ổn
01:06:246 (1) - Cái này reverse slider chi? Làm nguyên slider art cũng dc đó, đâu có gì thay đổi ở đây đâu. thôi em làm spinner luôn

Có làm vội ko vậy?

[Khó]
01:10:987 (3) - Note này xóa đi. 01:11:074 (3,4) - Làm 2 cái này thành 1 slider là dc rồi. hoặc muốn giữ cái đó thì cũng phải làm 2 cái kia thành 1 slider, rồi stack cái note đó lên. để vậy ko ổn lắm hmmmm. Có áp dụng thì sửa mấy cái tương tự. uhm
Còn cái trình bày xấu thôi, mà lười chỉ ra từng cái.

Thôi thua rồi, sorry. Nhưng khó rank lắm, cơ bản chất lượng khá kém. Rhythm cũng vài chỗ sai, mà song repetitive mà. 1 chỗ sai thì nhiều chỗ sai. Placement hơi bị buồn.
Mod còn lại lên discord nhé. Cảm ơn anh!

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2016-09-13T17:41:33+00:00

Not Requested, But I just wanna mod cause the song is so good!

[Insane]

From a visual aspect I suppose, placement of notes isn't very appealing.
The beginning is weird, when it comes to the rhythm, you should choose one instrument to map from rather than what I'll call both foreground and background instruments.
Spacing is another issue with this map, its hard to distinguish between 1/1 spacing and 1/2, for example 00:13:488 (2,1) - 00:02:453 (2,1) -
The distance snapping in 1/2 spacing is also quite short, but I guess it's not that much of an issue.
00:30:385 (1,1) - If it wasn't a reverse slider this would be fine, I would position 00:31:764 (1) - elsewhere, or you can ctrl h
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is really off. Try this
Chorus seems fine when it comes to the rhythm but I would look over note placements.

[Yamicchi's Insane]

01:08:660 - 01:29:694 - I was expecting the map to speed up at this point. Sure there are more notes to click, but there isn't a change in sv, and a decrease at some stages. Maybe if sv is increased by .1? But its still playable, doesn't have to have changing.

This diff is good, definitely ready for rank!

[into hopelessness and despair]

01:31:936 (2,1) - where notes are stacked I think you should distance them slightly, it makes it hard to read especially for hidden players.
[img]01:31:936%20(2,1)%20-[/img]

This diff covers similar issue to Insane but I think it's mostly fine and very playable.

Good Luck!!

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-09-16T07:08:38+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
Not Requested, But I just wanna mod cause the song is so good!

[Insane]
From a visual aspect I suppose, placement of notes isn't very appealing. IDK
The beginning is weird, when it comes to the rhythm, you should choose one instrument to map from rather than what I'll call both foreground and background instruments. I'm sure it's fine
Spacing is another issue with this map, its hard to distinguish between 1/1 spacing and 1/2, for example 00:13:488 (2,1) - 00:02:453 (2,1) - I'm sure it is fine too
The distance snapping in 1/2 spacing is also quite short, but I guess it's not that much of an issue.
00:30:385 (1,1) - If it wasn't a reverse slider this would be fine, I would position 00:31:764 (1) - elsewhere, or you can ctrl h changed
01:06:247 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream is really off. Try this

changed
Chorus seems fine when it comes to the rhythm but I would look over note placements. Did some changes

[into hopelessness and despair]
01:31:936 (2,1) - where notes are stacked I think you should distance them slightly, it makes it hard to read especially for hidden players.
[img]01:31:936%20(2,1)%20-[/img]
Changed half of them, other half is purpose

This diff covers similar issue to Insane but I think it's mostly fine and very playable.
Good Luck!! Thanks very much

Hollow Delta

793 posts

Joined March 2015

Hollow Delta 2016-10-10T04:00:14+00:00

From #modreqs doing M4M

Normal

SPOILER

00:02:798 (1,2) - Generally speaking, sliders aim towards the next note. Bring down 2 so you can blanket 1. You'll have to re-snap a couple notes.
00:12:108 (3) - Sliders aim towards their next note. Move 1 x:181 y: 220
01:37:970 (1) - Personal suggestion, but I'd blanket 2 with this slider.
01:43:487 (1) - Flow between this note and the next isn't good. I'd turn this slider into a straight slider like this: http://puu.sh/rDC6y/0c9d391474.jpg

Advanced

SPOILER

00:29:005 (1) - Angle this note upwards so the flow is better. (As high as you can without going off the screen.)
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Please spread these out, they look bad overlapped.
00:45:212 (3) - The spacing is weird here, with DS on can you move this down?
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping these doesn't look good on easier diffs and low AR, maybe squares?
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:33:315 (3,1) - You can fix this overlap by extending the sliderhead of 1. (In the process, you'll shrink the slider.)
01:36:246 (4,1) - Copy and of these sliders and replace the non-copy for perfect parallel sliders.

Hard

SPOILER

00:15:556 (1) - Sliders generally speaking aim towards the next note. I think it would look better if you flip this.
00:21:763 (2,1) - You'll have to move 2 around a bit to fix this overlap.
00:44:694 (1) - Angle this down a bit so it flows into 2 better.
01:36:591 (1) - I'd blanket 2 for better flow.

Yamicchi's Insane

SPOILER

00:36:591 (2,3) - I'd suggest 2 1/2 sliders instead of this. Also, make sure the sliders aim towards the next note.
00:37:971 (2,3,4,5) - There isn't any circular flow here, and it feels weird. I'd ctrl + g 4 and 5.
01:18:143 (5) - Should move this to the right more and ctrl + g for better flow.
01:21:074 (7) - ctrl + g for better flow.
01:23:833 (7) - I'd blanket 5 just so it flows better.

Insane

SPOILER

01:00:040 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if this was a perfect triangle.
01:10:039 (7) - This doesn't flow really well into 1. I'd add an anchor-point to the end and bend it so it aims towards the next slider, while keeping struture.
01:11:419 (6) - ^
01:12:798 (7) - ^

Sorry it took longer than it should have.

Last edited by Hollow Delta 2016-10-10T17:50:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bky-ssiO_DELETED

Bky-ssiO_DELETED 2016-10-10T14:13:50+00:00

- POTENTIAL CHANGES - / Into Hopelessness and Despair

00:00:039 - a potential spinner here until 00:01:763 - can be cool, and fitting to the sound which is introducing the first note from 00:02:108 (1) - ( can add some advantage to players which are fast at spinning, kind of challenge to reach the top1 on this map
after all thats just an idea =) )

00:07:625 (1,2) - theses two taps feel out of place in some way would defintely continue with sliders feeling

00:13:143 (1,2) - same as 00:07:625 (1,2) -

01:12:625 (6) - i feel like this circle will make the flow better here at this part, like this : http://esl.d.pr/bwgo/1j66j5EN it's also suiting the part you've made here 01:15:384 (6) - screenshot = http://esl.d.pr/17oiT/uRXa9X7k

01:16:505 (3,4) - i would make this double tap in a line to add a bit more of spices, i feel like it's way too easy to catch the 01:16:763 (5) - for your current star rating

01:27:539 (3,4) - would do the same here as 01:16:505 (3,4)

01:52:798 (4,5) - i think you can manage here something harder to end the song =) just make them spacy as 01:50:383 (1,2) - ( for exemple you manage it as you wish, i know you've manage the spacing
related to the velocity of the melody but it can make the player more challenge to fc it perfectly. )

- GENERAL OPINION -

Pretty, pretty strong mapping here. really consistent, awesome song choice, background fitting really well. i've enjoyed the jump phases really much, i felt playing a new ranked map to be honest.

the part from 01:31:074 (1) - to the end gave me goosebumps.

Keep going. =)

-cheers Gl & Hf mapping !

Hoa

275 posts

Joined June 2015

Topic Starter

Hoa 2016-10-10T15:19:20+00:00

Bubblun

Bubblun wrote:
From #modreqs doing M4M

Normal
SPOILER
00:02:798 (1,2) - Generally speaking, sliders aim towards the next note. Bring down 2 so you can blanket 1. You'll have to re-snap a couple notes. Sure
00:12:108 (3) - Sliders aim towards their next note. Move 1 x:181 y: 220 Did some change.
01:37:970 (1) - Personal suggestion, but I'd blanket 2 with this slider. Actually, it's a good idea
01:43:487 (1) - Flow between this note and the next isn't good. I'd turn this slider into a straight slider like this: http://puu.sh/rDC6y/0c9d391474.jpg But I prefer to keep the blanket so...

Advanced
SPOILER
00:29:005 (1) - Angle this note upwards so the flow is better. (As high as you can without going off the screen.) Change sth Did the best I could
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Please spread these out, they look bad overlapped. Okay
00:45:212 (3) - The spacing is weird here, with DS on can you move this down? I think
00:57:970 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping these doesn't look good on easier diffs and low AR, maybe squares? I don't like squares, so I probably use back-and-forth
01:00:729 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:33:315 (3,1) - You can fix this overlap by extending the sliderhead of 1. (In the process, you'll shrink the slider.) Did try sth
01:36:246 (4,1) - Copy and of these sliders and replace the non-copy for perfect parallel sliders.Sure

Hard
SPOILER
00:15:556 (1) - Sliders generally speaking aim towards the next note. I think it would look better if you flip this. Actually, flipping it will make the flow kinda veer off course, so I think I'll keep this
00:21:763 (2,1) - You'll have to move 2 around a bit to fix this overlap. Did some change
00:44:694 (1) - Angle this down a bit so it flows into 2 better. Sure
01:36:591 (1) - I'd blanket 2 for better flow.Sure

Insane
SPOILER
01:00:040 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if this was a perfect triangle. Did the best I could
01:10:039 (7) - This doesn't flow really well into 1. I'd add an anchor-point to the end and bend it so it aims towards the next slider, while keeping struture.
01:11:419 (6) - ^
01:12:798 (7) - ^ Actually though, I believe it's fine and play well

Sorry it took longer than it should have.

Bky-ssiO

Bky-ssiO wrote:
- POTENTIAL CHANGES - / Into Hopelessness and Despair

00:00:039 - a potential spinner here until 00:01:763 - can be cool, and fitting to the sound which is introducing the first note from 00:02:108 (1) - ( can add some advantage to players which are fast at spinning, kind of challenge to reach the top1 on this map
after all thats just an idea =) ) Nah, probably not

00:07:625 (1,2) - theses two taps feel out of place in some way would defintely continue with sliders feeling This one I feel quite normal

00:13:143 (1,2) - same as 00:07:625 (1,2) - Now this one is wrong, so fixed

01:12:625 (6) - i feel like this circle will make the flow better here at this part, like this : http://esl.d.pr/bwgo/1j66j5EN it's also suiting the part you've made here 01:15:384 (6) - screenshot = http://esl.d.pr/17oiT/uRXa9X7k Actually, this part is consistent with 01:23:660 (6,7) , and it's intentional

01:16:505 (3,4) - i would make this double tap in a line to add a bit more of spices, i feel like it's way too easy to catch the 01:16:763 (5) - for your current star rating I make these so player can have a little pause and reverse flow

01:27:539 (3,4) - would do the same here as 01:16:505 (3,4) Explained

01:52:798 (4,5) - i think you can manage here something harder to end the song =) just make them spacy as 01:50:383 (1,2) - ( for exemple you manage it as you wish, i know you've manage the spacing
related to the velocity of the melody but it can make the player more challenge to fc it perfectly. ) Quite an interesting idea

- GENERAL OPINION -

Pretty, pretty strong mapping here. really consistent, awesome song choice, background fitting really well. i've enjoyed the jump phases really much, i felt playing a new ranked map to be honest.
the part from 01:31:074 (1) - to the end gave me goosebumps.

Keep going. =)

-cheers Gl & Hf mapping !

Thank you all for your mod. Much appreciated!

Yamicchi

1,175 posts

Joined May 2015

Yamicchi 2016-10-12T13:49:46+00:00

Kujinn wrote:
[Yamicchi's Insane]
01:08:660 - 01:29:694 - I was expecting the map to speed up at this point. Sure there are more notes to click, but there isn't a change in sv, and a decrease at some stages. Maybe if sv is increased by .1? But its still playable, doesn't have to have changing.
This diff is good, definitely ready for rank! I was a bad mapper back then tbh orz gonna remap soon.

Bubblun wrote:
Yamicchi's Insane
SPOILER
00:36:591 (2,3) - I'd suggest 2 1/2 sliders instead of this. Also, make sure the sliders aim towards the next note. sure
00:37:971 (2,3,4,5) - There isn't any circular flow here, and it feels weird. I'd ctrl + g 4 and 5. nothing weird here tbh
01:18:143 (5) - Should move this to the right more and ctrl + g for better flow. nah I'm fine with it
01:21:074 (7) - ctrl + g for better flow. worse flow
01:23:833 (7) - I'd blanket 5 just so it flows better.nope

Erm...Gonna remap this

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