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[Mahua]

-N a n a k o- wrote:

尖叫的hitsound有夠可怕, 特別是在晚上的時候聽到這htisound, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[BE'']
00:11:888 (1,1) - 挺想知道這裏為何要疊著 因为没空间了
00:43:717 (2,1) - 這裏疊著好像有點怪怪的 不改
00:47:831 (2,2) - 藍2長條頭不疊著紅2長條尾?
00:56:060 (1,1) - 特意不疊著?
02:05:317 (2,2) - ^ fix
01:24:003 (2,3) - 這裏距離突然減少了, 玩得不太舒服 那就不舒服

[IN'']
00:52:803 - 這裏可以多放一個Note, 而且玩的時候也玩得怪怪的, 因為之前都是沒漏拍子 有个东西叫synth
01:27:431 (8) - 這滑條尾沒對好前面的連打 ok


Good Luck!
Zero__wind
骏马
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧 最好把1调一下形状?
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高?撞血条不太好看

猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难 建议换成circle
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) -
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的 最好换一下
log for other diffs
00:10 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1027412 ESTi - HELIX [HD'']]
00:10 Zero__wind: 00:27:431 (1) - 头上需要个finish吧
00:12 Zero__wind: 00:33:431 (2,2) - 为什么不平行
00:13 Zero__wind: 00:45:603 (6) - 和前面00:44:746 (2,3,5) - 对比的话 尾巴上应该加个soft whistle
00:14 Zero__wind: 后面00:48:517 (7) - 类似的都同理
00:18 Zero__wind: 因为01:40:631 (4,5,6) - 这个三连的关系 考虑在01:51:603 - 这里也起三连
00:19 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1029043 ESTi - HELIX [IN'']]
00:19 Zero__wind: 00:08:917 (1,1,1) - 这都没变速为什么要那么多NC
00:20 Zero__wind: 00:12:003 (1) - 和00:12:688 (1,1) - 这些NC我觉得也没必要
00:37 [Mahua]: 大概是适应bediff的梗
00:38 Zero__wind: 感觉不变速加一堆NC不太必要
00:38 Zero__wind: 反而让人觉得是不是要变速了
00:38 [Mahua]: 反正没打算让他们只打一遍(
00:39 Zero__wind: 00:17:660 (6,1) - 这里 1上面有finish的 离这么近 感觉很不舒服
00:39 Zero__wind: 放远点吧
00:39 Zero__wind: 后面有几个类似的
00:39 [Mahua]: 好
00:40 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个梗 感觉突然比前面的难了好多 建议别离那么远
00:40 Zero__wind: 往中间靠拢一点 的意思
00:41 [Mahua]: 那就不用改那个离得近的梗了 感觉重复好多地方应该很多人都能打
00:41 Zero__wind: 哦哦
00:42 Zero__wind: 00:51:431 (1,2) - 不是很明白这个是怎么摆的 反正从各种意义上看着都很歪
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个不黑可以打啊 他鼠标还有一点抽风的问题
00:42 [Mahua]: 00:51:431 (1) - 直接按ds来的(
00:42 Zero__wind: 反正感觉不太好看
00:43 [Mahua]: 别的地方一开ez打就很不清楚啊
00:43 Zero__wind: 00:39:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个我不是说它本身很难 主要是和前面00:34:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:37:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 音乐没什么变化的情况下 突然变得有点难 感觉有点奇怪
00:44 [Mahua]: 那我想想怎么改
00:47 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQ5h/04ee69c0ef.jpg
00:47 [Mahua]: ok?
00:47 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/qcQ6m/4a016dd095.jpg
00:47 Zero__wind: 我想的是这样的
00:48 Zero__wind: 就是1 3 5是个1.0x的等边三角形
00:48 [Mahua]: 有点不太干净的感觉……
00:49 Zero__wind: 只是示意图= =
00:49 Zero__wind: 反正你看着改吧
00:50 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 头上音效美丽
00:51 Zero__wind: 大概加个finish吧
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:36:688 (5) - 这个肯定应该1/4啊
00:52 [Mahua]: 我好像be那个diff这里就没加……
00:52 Zero__wind: 01:05:831 (1) - 我觉得头上可以soft finish
00:52 Zero__wind: normal的也可以 好歹是4个小节一个
00:52 [Mahua]: http://puu.sh/qcQm8/f3cf4772f9.jpg
00:52 [Mahua]: ok?
00:52 Zero__wind: 靠谱
00:53 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里我跟的是synth啊……
00:53 [Mahua]: 明显不想跟鼓……
00:54 Zero__wind: 那不是1/2吗
00:54 Zero__wind: 我怎么都听不出1/3
00:54 Zero__wind: 不过我耳机比较辣鸡
00:54 Zero__wind: 仅供参考
00:55 [Mahua]: 算了还是1/4
00:55 [Mahua]: 我感觉应该是后面是1/3
00:55 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (4) - 这里节奏突然放缓了 考虑NC一个
00:55 Zero__wind: 然后还有看aimod 有两个unsnap
00:56 [Mahua]: 可以
00:59 Zero__wind: 01:28:117 (2,3,4) - 这个地方 感觉flow有点别扭 3的位置比较奇怪
01:00 [Mahua]: 打起来还可以
01:02 Zero__wind: 试试弄成类似这样?http://puu.sh/qcQNT/0f3db82e95.jpg
01:02 Zero__wind: 感觉现在2到3的那个角度还是有点卡
01:02 Zero__wind: 不过我也没想出什么很好的办法
01:02 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) - 这里前面是1/2 后面是1/3
01:03 Zero__wind: 哦
01:04 [Mahua]: 01:28:460 (4,5,6) - 这个位置应该和前面几个小节同时选中算比较干净的一个位置了吧
01:05 Zero__wind: 嗯还可以
01:05 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (5) -
01:05 [Mahua]: 这里想不出办法了
01:07 [Mahua]: 跟synth大概就要拆成两个
01:07 [Mahua]: 断了……
01:08 Zero__wind: 那样的话是要拆
01:08 Zero__wind: 打了一遍BE呗音效炸哭了
01:08 [Mahua]: 算了跟鼓1/4
01:09 [Mahua]: 那个是故意的(
01:12 *Zero__wind is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1009768 ESTi - HELIX [BE'']]
01:12 Zero__wind: 00:36:174 (2,3) - 不是很懂这个二连 感觉很random
01:13 [Mahua]: 强调作用
01:13 [Mahua]: 也是想和前面的那个part有区别
01:14 Zero__wind: 或许可以考虑在别的哪个地方再用一次
01:14 Zero__wind: 因为那边好像就一个 有点奇怪
01:15 [Mahua]: 00:29:146 (2,3) -
01:15 [Mahua]: 嗯(
01:16 Zero__wind: 00:56:060 (1,1) - 这个故意不叠好?
01:16 [Mahua]: 对
01:16 [Mahua]: 这个怕有读图问题
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:58:288 - 不加个circle?
01:17 [Mahua]: 后面有两个这样的节奏啊
01:18 Zero__wind: 嗯 看到了
01:18 Zero__wind: 就是觉得有点怪
01:18 Zero__wind: 也不是什么大问题
01:18 [Mahua]: 感觉那个bass跟起来很有感觉(就是能不能听到就是另一回事了
01:20 [Mahua]: 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这个就让他1/6吧 反正最高难度就当表上弦的声音了(
01:21 Zero__wind: 01:25:374 (2) - 这个就实在是有点不对劲
01:21 Zero__wind: 完全就串了轨
01:21 [Mahua]: (
01:22 [Mahua]: 转下一part了嘛(心虚
01:22 Zero__wind: 并没有到转的时候啊orz
01:23 Zero__wind: 感觉还是像前面几个小节一样继续跟
01:23 Zero__wind: 01:43:888 (7,8) - 这个应该是有问题了 听一下应该是1/3
01:28 [Mahua]: 有点纠结
01:28 Zero__wind: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个梗实在是……好嗨远
01:28 Zero__wind: 刚才打的时候感觉自己他妈飞了起来
01:28 [Mahua]: 这里要是跟1/3就是跟了 但是1/4就有点自创鼓的感觉
01:29 Zero__wind: 嗯反正那一段里 别的地方听过去 都还比较令人信服 就那一个地方怪怪的
01:29 [Mahua]: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这里之前我自己是能打的
01:30 [Mahua]: 萨米打的时候也说可以
01:30 Zero__wind: 尾杀感人
01:30 Zero__wind: 02:12:517 (1,1,1) - 这个NC我比较懵逼
01:30 [Mahua]: (
01:30 Zero__wind: 我觉得02:12:517 (1) - 和02:12:860 (1) - 还是不加
01:30 [Mahua]: 让他们背图去
01:31 [Mahua]: 最后这几个nc是回血用的(
01:31 Zero__wind: 然后也没什么了吧
01:32 Zero__wind: 好了我去po了
01:32 [Mahua]: 好
IamKwaN
Dynamix:
01:54:346 - 这地方感觉漏掉不太好 沒辦法啊 1/2圓圈接滑條對於EZ來說太難了

01:
00:35:317 (3,1) - flow不太舒服吧 最好把1调一下形状? hao
00:57:603 (1) - 尾巴不要那么高?撞血条不太好看 好吧

一圈boom了麻花

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VINXIS

geenral

  1. ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
  2. u sud clean up ur hitsoundz,
  3. hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big,
  4. is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?

EZ

  1. 01:19:546 (1,2) - BRE%TGFLESRGSC this blanket, , , ,

nm

  1. 01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd

hd

  1. 00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr
  2. 00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L
  3. 00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here
  4. 01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -

ins

  1. 00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction
  2. 00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders
  3. 00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : /
  4. 00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280)
  5. 00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0)
  6. 01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing
  7. 02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/
  8. 02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,.

bE

  1. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234
  2. 00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/
  3. 00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_
  4. 00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, ,
  5. 00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L
  6. 01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0
  7. 01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix.
  8. 01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,.
  9. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap..
  10. 01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak..
g
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

VINXIS wrote:

geenral

  1. ez nm hd all hav an unsnappd objec t
  2. u sud clean up ur hitsoundz, ok
  3. hitsounds wit delay, under 100ms length, unused hitsoundz, not .wav hitsoundz etc + ther making ur osz big, ok
  4. is it allowd 2 hav sv variety in ez/nm diffz? / / ?

ins

  1. 00:04:803 (1,2) - the circle is off from slidertail direction ok
  2. 00:11:660 (1,1) - id raise sv for these so they visually look bigger than the 1/4 sliders cuz look well
  3. 00:45:431 (2,3,4) - u sud give much mor space between 2 and 3 cuz of the htisound and snare emphasis : / have same part
  4. 00:51:946 (3,2) - sud do a custom stak (try moving 00:52:460 (2) - to x:213 y:280) 00:49:031 (2) - i stak it
  5. 00:54:860 - ur 1/2 stacks and 1/4 stacks that start on blu tiks r REALLY bad for playing.. u sud change them visually so ppl can tel which r 1/4 and which r 1/2 + possibly changing the rhythm in general (i think if u do 01:00:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - before 00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - , tht wud be better for the player :0) i dont think so
  6. 01:58:974 (4,1) - stacking wud play better cuz of 1/1 spacing slow to go to kiai(
  7. 02:10:631 (3,4,1) - ????????????????? the spacing ebtwen 3 and 4 is huge but 4 and 1 is rlly small,, 1 is also a very emphasized note :/ have same part
  8. 02:11:660 (1) - rip fix slider length plz,. ok

bE

  1. 00:12:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - wud recommend ncing evry 5th note so its lik 1234123412341234 dont want change
  2. 00:31:546 (1) - nc this it plays/reads much better :/ look bad
  3. 00:42:431 (1,2) - WTF BLUE TIK NC switch ncs plz -_ ok
  4. 00:47:831 (2,2) - overlap looks kind of messy, , ez to move
  5. 00:58:288 - sud add a circle here :L synth track
  6. 01:03:774 - here 2.. and in any other place like this :-0 ^
  7. 01:12:603 (1,2) - blue tick nc............. plz fix. ok
  8. 01:26:317 (1) - tbh remove nc,, add circle at 01:26:231 - and nc 01:26:403 (2) - cuz ur missing the sound at the red tick and blue tick ncs r bad,. look bad than now
  9. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - the star/5 note pattern sud start where 01:36:803 (1) - is cuz of the overlap.. no change
  10. 01:48:346 (1,1) - this is the only time u stak.. yes only this time
g
Zweib
"Azure"
[NM'']
  1. 01:43:374 加note slider 往後拉少一拍
    不拉
  2. 02:10:631 確定這個重音就這樣略過嗎? 你前面都有跟的說 看看别人怎么说

"ignorethis"
<NM>
01:43:374 (3) - 这个地方是你故意摆成这个节奏的吗?比较难预料 都是滑条应该还好吧
01:54:346 (3) - ^

"VINXIS"
nm
  1. 01:22:288 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - id use the rhythm at 01:16:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - instead because then the rhythm alternates evry nc Xd seems it doesn't make much difference lol

"Dynamix"
NM
00:03:431 (2) - 前后ds怎么差了0.1 没有啊 0.01
00:06:174 (2) - ↑
00:30:174 (1) - 弯的不好看,建议后面的弯曲和前面的角度一致 是说不对称吗,修了一下
00:57:603 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段的难度太低了,建议稍微填满一点 不改了

"-N a n a k o-"
[NM'']
00:19:031 (6) - 不弄成水平線? 修了
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 不太建議圈圈內的數字超過6 我是觉得没到二位数就不影响美观吧
01:20:403 (3,4) - 特意的? fix
01:59:317 (3) - Normal的Reverse不可以超過1個 (某BN說的) 改了

"Zero__wind"
猪师傅
00:28:974 (6) - 建议把这个删掉然后从00:29:146 - 起个1/2 slider 现在这段节奏太长了有点难 全stack了,再说难打你哦
00:53:146 (3) - 有点难 建议换成circle 滑条更好混吧 感觉区别不大
01:30:003 (6) - 建议删掉这个circle然后unstack 还有01:32:746 (6) - 不太想改
01:59:317 (3) - 连续折返的1/2也是低难度不推荐的 最好换一下 改了

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Hollow Wings
m4m

BE''

  1. 00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈,顺序改2413好了。
  2. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音,估计会被挑。
  3. 01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了,反向吧。
  4. 整个图的1/4连打,三连就不说了,有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的,用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么,类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多,虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

IN''

  1. 00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗,我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何,你看着办吧,后同。
  2. 02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理,感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。
  3. 排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。

HD''

  1. 00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。
  2. 00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了,这个节奏实在是undermap了太多,导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下,不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。

NM''

  1. 00:13:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 如今的社区对N难度出现这种复杂节奏是表示不给过的态度的,建议简化节奏,也就是说不要gap不同的节奏混杂在一起。01:16:803 (1) - 开始同理。01:53:488 (2,3) - 这种也是。
  2. 你这N的break比E还多啊,估计会被挑。

EZ''

  1. 00:18:860 (5) - E难度还是尽量不要搞1/2折返。
全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap,自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

BE''

  1. 00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - 突然小跳感觉好憋屈,顺序改2413好了。 就让他沉稳的移动吧 这里我个人感觉是应该这种排列
  2. 01:36:688 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这段没有明显snap的音,估计会被挑。当后面的chain音(
  3. 01:51:431 (2) - 跳太大了,反向吧。 ok
  4. 整个图的1/4连打,三连就不说了,有些长串也是基本上啥都没跟。有些wub音其实是随机的,用1/4混过去感觉不太好。。。我为什么用lks的remix就是为了避免这个问题。。。其他么,类似于第一条mod的ds憋屈的地方貌似还有挺多,虽然不影响打击感就是了。。。

    我想做出有故事性的效果啊 开始就是吸血鬼第一次出现 第一次惊慌 逃脱 喘息 更小心的逃脱 后面的尖叫代表了被发现的心情 最后的kiai是第二次袭击 大概这种感觉
    这毕竟是sin的续作啊 总要有点故事性的对吧

IN''

  1. 00:57:603 (1,2,3) - 对于这个梗,我个人认为把00:57:946 (2) - stack在00:57:603 (1) - 更能够配合00:56:488 (2,3,4) - 的感觉一点。。。不知道为何,你看着办吧,后同。 ok
  2. 02:12:174 (3) - 这个也是同理,感觉stack在02:12:517 (1) - 上比较有感觉。 ok
  3. 排成这种类型的图感觉就很不错了。。。
全diff set的1/4和最高难度建议一样。。。总之我是不太推荐各种形式的overmap,自己拿捏好了。。。

good luck
ak74
来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有,我觉得这个应该没事吧

[EZ'']
首先点开Aimod
01:57:259 (5) - 物件结尾没对齐

[NM'']


[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单,感觉有点怪,我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致

[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的,这个可以NC
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊,去掉好像也没事
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显,在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题,但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧(也更普通),后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了,我是摸不出啥了



水摸完毕
Good luck!~ :)
VINXIS
anime
Koiyuki
beat burst mahua
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

beat burst mahua
被打死 :o
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

ak74 wrote:

来摸了
[General]
有些没用的绿线好像是得去掉的
EZ难度的00:43:888 - 这里有kiai然而其它没有,我觉得这个应该没事吧


[IN'']
00:24:003 (4) - 按照前面的,这个可以NC 后面就不好看了
02:10:974 (1,2) - 这个离前面是不是太近了
02:13:803 - 这个绿线位置有点诡异啊。。。虽然好像没啥大碍 那就不改

[BE'']
00:33:431 (2) - 这个音效有点突兀的 喘息
01:19:203 - 这条绿线好像也没用。。。 00:43:888 (1) - 这根不知道有没有用啊,去掉好像也没事 可以
00:57:946 (2) - 滑条结尾这里的音并不明显,在这停顿我是觉得没啥问题,但是后面白线再加个circle也许会更爽吧(也更普通),后面还有几个类似的地方也一样
这其实可以直接找狗rank了,我是摸不出啥了



水摸完毕
Good luck!~ :)
IamKwaN
@vinxis, you didn't update?!?!
@hw, 還好 有幾處還用了1/2接滑條 就當是diff spike
@ak, fixed

3Q
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Flower

-N a n a k o- wrote:

[HD'']
00:09:603 (3) - 感覺這條滑條太斜了 改了点
00:24:346 (5,6,1) - 怎不把00:24:346 (5) - 也疊在一起, 個人覺得這樣才比較配合音樂 叠在了5上
00:52:117 (2,1) - 我找不出來要疊的原因OAO 我的理解是音乐这里有个急停
00:53:488 (1) - 既然之前是用1.7x, 怎麼突然要轉DS啊 因为单点比滑条难
01:50:403 (2) - 個人覺得這條用回01:49:717 (1) - 這條長條的pattern比較美觀 ???不是很懂
02:04:803 (3) - 感覺這裏DS跳得太突然了 个人觉得还好

VINXIS wrote:

hd

  1. 00:24:346 (5,6) - ctrlg wud b bettr 2 emphasise the slidr fixed by stacking 5 6
  2. 00:43:546 (1) - th rhythm is weird esp. consdiering the sliderend is ona big whit tik :L this is a sudden brake at the big white tick by my feeling, which is expressed better
  3. 00:52:117 (2) - y isnt the nc here i kno what im doing here. nc is for readability isn;t it?
  4. 01:49:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - rip combo consistncy.. take the nc off of 01:54:346 (1) -
it kills me when trying to recognize my part from the non-wysiwyg editor

Hollow Wings wrote:

[notice]
[notice]

HD''

  1. 00:31:717 (1) - 反向更好些。 这里强调一个减速的概念,所以反对
  2. 00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里可能就需要体现一个节奏对称的概念了,这个节奏实在是undermap了太多,导致之后的部分节奏丰富就显得呼应不足。。。最好再来一组相同节奏的来平衡一下,不然是有点难受的特别是对于这种动次打次曲。 我要是做太鼓谱这里肯定就会放一个小节的空白了。不过要是你这么说的话我就稍微改一点。在00:55:717 - 加了note跟随鼓点

ak74 wrote:

[HD'']
01:05:831 - 和 01:16:803 - 这两根绿线好像没用啊 ok
00:55:203 (1,2,3) - 这里的节奏比后面的类似地方的节奏要简单,感觉有点怪,我推荐和01:08:574 (1,2,3,4) - 或者 01:14:060 (1,2,3) - 啥的保持一致 看了hw的摸略做了修改
thanks to all

update
http://puu.sh/qiBy2/1b87152391.txt
Zweib

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

NM''

  1. 00:13:717 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 如今的社区对N难度出现这种复杂节奏是表示不给过的态度的,建议简化节奏,也就是说不要gap不同的节奏混杂在一起。01:16:803 (1) - 开始同理。01:53:488 (2,3) - 这种也是。
  2. 你这N的break比E还多啊,估计会被挑。
好像不知道怎么改,再等等看别人怎么说吧
Mafumafu
Hi!
[General]
似乎没有用到 drum-hitwhistle7.wav

normal-hitwhistle.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle3.wav 28.46ms
现在规定音效文件必须有100ms长

drum-hitclap7.wav
drum-hitfinish.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav
drum-hitfinish7.wav
drum-hitwhistle3.wav
drum-hitwhistle7.wav
normal-hitfinish12.wav
soft-hitfinish7.wav
这些音效文件的开头可能存在大于5ms的空白,根据rank图规则需要剪掉。
[EZ]
00:44:231 (1) - 有点太靠下了 建议调整一下整体布局
00:49:717 (2) - 这种形状最好不要出现在EZ难度里

[NM]
看起来更像一个Advanced而不是NM
00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 对于NM来说有点太难了,更像是Advanced的节奏和pattern
中间不要放那么多Break
01:19:203 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这么难的节奏现在应该不让用在NM了
01:29:831 (5,6,7) - NM不要叠这么多 01:29:831 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整个节奏应该不适合NM
还有很多就不写出来了现在应该不让用这么复杂的节奏了

建议整体改一下或者改名叫Advanced
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抱歉我不太会摸这种图风。
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Regraz wrote:

Hi!
[General]
似乎没有用到 drum-hitwhistle7.wav 用了的

normal-hitwhistle.wav 28.46ms
soft-hitwhistle3.wav 28.46ms
现在规定音效文件必须有100ms长 改了

drum-hitclap7.wav
drum-hitfinish.wav
drum-hitfinish2.wav
drum-hitfinish7.wav
drum-hitwhistle3.wav 改了
drum-hitwhistle7.wav 改了
normal-hitfinish12.wav 改了
soft-hitfinish7.wav 改了
这些音效文件的开头可能存在大于5ms的空白,根据rank图规则需要剪掉。

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抱歉我不太会摸这种图风。
Koiyuki
  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitwhistle3.wav
    - drum-hitwhistle7.wav
    - drum-hitclap3.wav
NM"
  1. 01:43:374 (3) - 感觉拆成一个note和一个1/1滑条更好
  2. 01:54:346 (3) - ^
IN"
  1. 02:12:860 (2) - 要么nc下?我第一次打的时候直接误读1/2,毕竟这里1/2的音也很清晰
BE"
  1. 00:33:431 (2) - 结尾那个音效……听上去有点怪
  2. 01:43:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段感觉你狂塞1/4,和其他部分差别太大了,没啥必要吧
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

  1. Just some complaints.
  2. My personal suggestions.
  3. Highly recommended.
  4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

General
  1. Found unused .wav files:
    - drum-hitwhistle3.wav
    be难度00:32:746 -
    - drum-hitwhistle7.wav00:32:746 -
    - drum-hitclap3.wavbe难度的00:33:260 -
IN"
  1. 02:12:860 (2) - 要么nc下?我第一次打的时候直接误读1/2,毕竟这里1/2的音也很清晰 ok
BE"
  1. 00:33:431 (2) - 结尾那个音效……听上去有点怪
  2. 01:43:546 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这段感觉你狂塞1/4,和其他部分差别太大了,没啥必要吧 这一段基本都是solo的感觉啊 而且前面有这么一段01:40:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 如果不可以的话我再想想
IamKwaN
瓜子第一條改了 第二條是為了配合這set其他難度的jb 233
謝啦
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Zweib
热瓜子书得对,我也觉得有点难了,几个地方都稍微nerf了一点不知道行不行

yuki: 感觉拆了就更难了,只一根滑条的话感觉新手可能打起来会有点意外但应该不会吃屎

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Koiyuki
不知道为什么把你的绿线往前移了一格就不报unused hitsounds了……
估计有不知道怎么回事的毫秒误差,最好移动一下绿线
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Minakami Yuki wrote:

不知道为什么把你的绿线往前移了一格就不报unused hitsounds了……
估计有不知道怎么回事的毫秒误差,最好移动一下绿线
好 改了
Koiyuki
bubbled
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Koiyuki wrote:

bubbled
thx~
Rizia
be"
00:03:688 - 總覺得這一聲好奇怪 後面如是
00:57:946 (2) - 停在3/4故意的嗎 還是漏了circle
01:03:431 (2) - same

其他可以了
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Rizia wrote:

be"
00:03:688 - 總覺得這一聲好奇怪 後面如是 打起来还好 如果真的要改那我改
00:57:946 (2) - 停在3/4故意的嗎 還是漏了circle 故意的
01:03:431 (2) - same故意的

其他可以了
Rizia
qualified
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Rizia wrote:

qualified
哦哦哦哦谢谢柚子 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Ovoui
hey congratz dude, the map is pretty cool but some stuff bothers while playing the BE" diff

the BG resolution is too low, the background is ugly, you should take the BG of this set https://osu.ppy.sh/b/462700
02:10:631 (1,2,1,2) - maybe those jump are a too much large, especially this one 02:10:974 (1,2) -
00:19:203 (1) - this slider should finish here 00:19:374 - because the sound here 00:19:460 - is insignificant compared to the sound here 00:19:374 -
00:05:317 - i think it's overmapped
000:04:688 - you forgot a sound here!
01:56:917 (2,1) - this overlap looks a bit messy
btw nice hitsounds!
Mint
Congrats!

holy scream 01:38:746 (1) -
wantuol
:roll: 最后难度还没in摆的吊 你行不行
Ascendance
highest diff

00:13:546 (15,16) - 1/6
01:47:660 (3) - should be 1/3, not 1/4.
01:57:603 (3,4) - should be a 1/3 repeat slider
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

wantuol wrote:

:roll: 最后难度还没in摆的吊 你行不行
你先把破烂8挖出来再说我不行
Kaine
Random question; what does BE mean
Hula
[BE]

00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - This was really underwhelming and underspaced, it should be higher spacing, it doesn't make sense to go from jumps to less than jumps.
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Ascendance wrote:

highest diff

00:13:546 (15,16) - 1/6 play hard
01:47:660 (3) - should be 1/3, not 1/4. 1/4 listen more better
01:57:603 (3,4) - should be a 1/3 repeat slider synth
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Ovoui wrote:

hey congratz dude, the map is pretty cool but some stuff bothers while playing the BE" diff

the BG resolution is too low, the background is ugly, you should take the BG of this set https://osu.ppy.sh/b/462700 if you have high resolution bg same is bg i will change
02:10:631 (1,2,1,2) - maybe those jump are a too much large, especially this one 02:10:974 (1,2) -
01:28 Zero__wind: 02:10:288 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个梗实在是……好嗨远
01:28 Zero__wind: 刚才打的时候感觉自己他妈飞了起来
01:31 [Mahua]: 最后这几个nc是回血用的(
i idk is ok

00:19:203 (1) - this slider should finish here 00:19:374 - because the sound here 00:19:460 - is insignificant compared to the sound here 00:19:374 -
i dont think so..
00:05:317 - i think it's overmapped ?
000:04:688 - you forgot a sound here! ?
01:56:917 (2,1) - this overlap looks a bit messy can you give me a better place to take it?
btw nice hitsounds!
Topic Starter
[Mahua]

Hula wrote:

[BE]

00:53:488 (1,2,3,4) - This was really underwhelming and underspaced, it should be higher spacing, it doesn't make sense to go from jumps to less than jumps.
why must jump? its heavy and deep
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